eyes wrote:
General
Add tags: Comiket コミケット Comic Market コミックマーケット 91 リリース C91 // added
MAybe reduce BG picture's resolution to 1366x996 for decreasing file size // 1920x1080, sure
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[Flowers]
Reduce OD to 7.7-7.9 because of complex LNs // the rest of the map is only rice though, the ln part only covers at least 10% of total, would be too easy to mash
by 00:00:145 - till 00:10:145 - too loud hitsounds, please reduce to +-20% // keep, instead added keysounds :^^^)
00:10:145 - make this triple, because this it has bass sound, but 00:27:645 - this double has no bass sound. // keep, the anchor should be enough to emphasize, also too early imo
00:35:281 (35281|2) - I think it should be on 00:35:301 // omg nice catch
00:37:762 (37762|0) - delete? I can't catch the sound // the highest pitch of the glissando is there, keep
00:38:953 (38953|0) - delete (same reason as above) and move it 00:39:012 (39012|3) - to 00:39:025 // ^ same reason
00:40:223 (40223|1) - not sure but I think should be on 00:40:249 // i think so, moved
00:57:671 - missed sound maybe
01:02:684 - ^ // nice idea, added
01:34:676 (94676|1,95301|2,95926|1,97801|1,99676|2,100301|1,100926|2,102801|2,104676|2,105301|1,105926|2,109676|1,110301|2,110926|1) - I think these should be doubles // as i stated in previous mod reply, will keep the kicks on anchor with single note when it has 1/2 distance to the snare, and double if it has 1/1 distance to the snare
Suggestion: 04:43:973 (283973|1) - move to 04:43:895 // nice, moved
upd: 03:09:207 (189207|1) - remove hitsound, these two notes 03:09:207 (189207|0,189233|3) - are very close and sounds almost in one moment so it sounds like 3 snares // yuss sounds better now, removed..
Unpredictable wrote:
not all too big on Nanahira but i like camellia tho >:]
1|2|3|4Flowers- 01:23:895 I was thinking about adding another note here..? My reasoning for it is I think that it's way more significant than 01:24:207 (84207|0,84207|3) - and with a hand, I think it shows difference and emphasize. Up to you tho // mmmm naw, still not as intense as the other downbeat, considerable tho
- 02:30:691 (150691|2,150848|2) - eh not a fan of the stack here, maybe moving 02:30:691 (150691|2) - this to column 4? // a follow up from 02:30:613 (150613|0,150770|0) - but sure, moved
Not else to say
Honestly, this map is really good. I seriously like it a lot. It follows the song pretty well and I couldn't find much wrong with it. You might have made me like Nanahira a little bit more. Take a star as well! Wasn't much but hope you enjoy.
P.S. This BG tho is uh... wow is uh like "definitely" about flowers ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
thank you guys, very helpful mod is very helpful <3 <3 <3