Mage wrote:

just some things

00:00:145 - 00:05:145 - make doubles // i got the idea, but i'll keep everything single in the intro :3

01:04:051 - sound, add note // added and some thing rearranged
01:04:285 - add note, but i'm not sure, maybe you wanted to highlight vocal // rearranged as above ^

02:57:176 - 02:57:410 - should be doubles // applied differently

03:42:957 - LNs should ends here cuz sound ends here // 1/4 earlier but okay!

04:09:520 - 04:10:145 - 04:10:770 - 04:11:395 - would be cool if you put here doubles to highlight vocal // hmmmmmmmm i want to D: but i want to make a single stream in this section

04:23:895 - double? // dense and evil.. i like it.. ok!

Virtue- wrote:

General

- Metadata : OK!
- BPM/Offset : OK!
- BG/Video : OK!
- Hitsound : OK!
- Files : OK!

1|2|3|4

• [Flower]
  

1. 00:17:020 (17020|0,17645|1,18738|3,18816|2,18895|1) - http://puu.sh/wHjO1/3b17283177.jpg gpp sih, cmn rada susah gitu ya mencetny. 00:17:020 (17020|0) - mending turunin ujungny 1 bar biar sejajar sama sblhny, biar ena // a e s t h e t i c s
   
2. 00:19:832 (19832|2,19910|3,19988|0) - jadiin gini aja, ena kok http://puu.sh/wHjUl/64c058b487.jpg // pen nge mirror yg atas :C
   
3. 00:21:395 (21395|3) - sama nih, turunin 1 bar // :S hmm pen konsisten sama yg atas
   
4. 00:28:895 (28895|3,28895|2,29363|0,29441|1,29520|3,29598|2,29676|1,29754|0,29832|2,29910|3,29988|2,30066|1) - http://puu.sh/wHjXm/87f96a5162.jpg pls ajee, susah amat di pencet astaga.. cobain ini dah http://puu.sh/wHjZb/fb0d2121c6.jpg // sek sek, di bikin lebih mudah
   
5. 01:46:551 - add note, ada hi hat // spicy spacing, keep, gimmick tho
   
6. 01:53:582 (113582|3,113660|2) - double aja // sek, baru kiai 1, di bikin gk mashy, (di bedain sama kiai 2)
   
7. 02:07:801 (127801|2,128426|3) - sengaja single? // di semua part yg nge-anchor 1/2 satu satu aja C:
   
8. 02:37:254 (157254|2,157293|1,157332|0,157371|3,157410|2,157449|1,157488|0,157527|2,157566|1,157605|3,157645|0,157645|2) - :'VV mungkin gini lebih gud http://puu.sh/wHkkD/65eb337701.png // yah, 02:37:488 (157488|0,157527|2,157566|1,157605|3,157645|2) - ini nya sengaja biar gk JS banget
   
9. 03:36:941 - add LN buat vocal? // no vocal, biar yg main pencet pencetan improvisasi sendiri awokawokwokwkwk
   
10. 03:59:051 - add note, ada piano // ok, headset gw kurang bagus, add ae lah klo kata org ada piano mah
    
11. 04:01:395 (241395|0) - jadiin LN buat vocal, trs tambahin LN juga di 04:02:645 - // nda mau isi vocal huee..

i guess that's it, good luck!

eyes wrote:

General
Add tags: Comiket コミケット Comic Market コミックマーケット 91 リリース C91 // added
MAybe reduce BG picture's resolution to 1366x996 for decreasing file size // 1920x1080, sure

|1-4|
[Flowers]
Reduce OD to 7.7-7.9 because of complex LNs // the rest of the map is only rice though, the ln part only covers at least 10% of total, would be too easy to mash

by 00:00:145 - till 00:10:145 - too loud hitsounds, please reduce to +-20% // keep, instead added keysounds :^^^)

00:10:145 - make this triple, because this it has bass sound, but 00:27:645 - this double has no bass sound. // keep, the anchor should be enough to emphasize, also too early imo

00:35:281 (35281|2) - I think it should be on 00:35:301 // omg nice catch

00:37:762 (37762|0) - delete? I can't catch the sound // the highest pitch of the glissando is there, keep

00:38:953 (38953|0) - delete (same reason as above) and move it 00:39:012 (39012|3) - to 00:39:025 // ^ same reason

00:40:223 (40223|1) - not sure but I think should be on 00:40:249 // i think so, moved

00:57:671 - missed sound maybe
01:02:684 - ^ // nice idea, added

01:34:676 (94676|1,95301|2,95926|1,97801|1,99676|2,100301|1,100926|2,102801|2,104676|2,105301|1,105926|2,109676|1,110301|2,110926|1) - I think these should be doubles // as i stated in previous mod reply, will keep the kicks on anchor with single note when it has 1/2 distance to the snare, and double if it has 1/1 distance to the snare

Suggestion: 04:43:973 (283973|1) - move to 04:43:895 // nice, moved

upd: 03:09:207 (189207|1) - remove hitsound, these two notes 03:09:207 (189207|0,189233|3) - are very close and sounds almost in one moment so it sounds like 3 snares // yuss sounds better now, removed..

Unpredictable wrote:

not all too big on Nanahira but i like camellia tho >:]

1|2|3|4

Flowers

- 01:23:895 I was thinking about adding another note here..? My reasoning for it is I think that it's way more significant than 01:24:207 (84207|0,84207|3) - and with a hand, I think it shows difference and emphasize. Up to you tho // mmmm naw, still not as intense as the other downbeat, considerable tho
- 02:30:691 (150691|2,150848|2) - eh not a fan of the stack here, maybe moving 02:30:691 (150691|2) - this to column 4? // a follow up from 02:30:613 (150613|0,150770|0) - but sure, moved
Not else to say

Honestly, this map is really good. I seriously like it a lot. It follows the song pretty well and I couldn't find much wrong with it. You might have made me like Nanahira a little bit more. Take a star as well! Wasn't much but hope you enjoy.

P.S. This BG tho is uh... wow is uh like "definitely" about flowers ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

MrDorian wrote:

Hi owo/
I'm from RRM queue and here's your mod!

sniped Kaito :^) // wow

4k

01:29:207 (89207|3) - I do not really understand why it is one note only. There is that "tick" and 01:29:051 (89051|2) - "bass" or how to call this sound. It is rather inconsistent because there's strong sound combined with another sound. I'd suggest adding another note in 2 to make 4 notes stack. // intended for unorthodox gimmick, also i rely the anchor for emphasize

01:37:801 (97801|1) - missing note, the sound has the same intensitivity as 01:36:395 (96395|2) -
01:42:801 (102801|2) - 01:47:801 (107801|2) - ^ // another gimmick i want to implement, all these kicks in the 3/4 part of the 1st kiai / chorus (and the 2nd verse) are intended to be one note, every kicks that are having 1/2 distance to the next snare is mini-anchored to catch the "lite" feeling of this track.

01:50:145 (110145|3,110145|0) - this should have one note, is different with 01:49:520 (109520|3,109520|2) - // i break the gimmick in this part for transition before the next verse.. so its intended

02:17:723 (137723|1) - are you sure there's a sound? // nope >.> removed

02:55:926 (175926|2) - could you move it to 4? 4 notes anchor looks terrible here // oke, didn't notice that anchor lel

03:51:707 (231707|1) - you could move this to 4, because 03:51:863 (231863|2) - here sounds start to repeat // i like my current trill-y 2323 to emphasis the repeats tho, will consider to move

04:19:207 (259207|3) - same suggestion as before in similiar part // huehuehue

04:25:613 (265613|1) - move to 4 to avoid anchor on 2 perhaps / ok

04:43:113 (283113|2,283152|3,283191|0,283230|1,283270|2,283270|3,283348|0,283426|2,283426|1,283504|0,283504|3,283582|2,283660|0,283660|1,283738|2,283738|3) - you could ctrl+h this, right hand is used a bit in this kiai // ok

that bookmark spam later wew // the structure behind the stream are marked with the bookmark :3

nice one, couldn't find much :'v
good luck owo/

call me when u'll finish 7k, gonna mod it as well

OscarRickyH02 wrote:

yo
M4M from weird queue, idk which one lel

seven key

diffname plz xD // imma hippies uwu
00:26:707 - skipped sound? // i'll add this one
00:27:176 - chord changed?
00:28:582 - skipped :<
00:29:285 - here is skiped sound as well :<<
00:35:145 - this is just, weird, maybe - 00:35:262 - skipped sound here and 00:35:359 (35359|6) - not sure this is 1/16 or 1/4 // i can only hear 4 high pianos, and i won't simplify the 1/16 because ye

00:38:953 (38953|0) - not sure this is ghost bcz i think it start from blue line // weh ok

00:40:223 - why no more stairs? :< // yuss :^)

lets skip these piano stair thisngy shall we, im succ :<

00:50:145 - just a simple suggestion, im not hearing these 1/4 piano sound, maybe because its not clear but at some point there are clear, probably increase the emphasize of the clearer sound would good (like 2 note for clear sound) and increase the one with multi tuts 00:50:145 - as well (triple maybe), probably this will fix monotonic part which almost all note were single and bit undermapped :< // the undermapping in this part are intended to make a big variation through the next part, but the trill pattern itself is quiet rapid more than stairs so i think its okay, and about the ghosts, you could re-check things using 50% playback rate

01:23:895 - i usually emphasized kick around 3 or 4 notes for diversion with piano, especially for this kind of song, but idk with you, every mapper have different style // double is enough for this map? usually i use 1 note for 1 percussion even its so loud

01:29:207 - and add 1 extra note for the one have snare sound like this // huehuehuehuehuehuehue gimmick

01:34:676 - kicks, just telling you .-. // yus, i left the 1st kiai with no kicks consistently through those 5 1/4 notes for some lite dnb feeling

03:09:207 - mapping snare's echo is kinda unusual for me // audible and reasonable enough so why not

ok lets say the map is good already so i dont have much word to this map and suggesting an o2jam map with bms style is nonsense so good luck
shooting stars

Verniy_Chan wrote:

Hi Arzen-san and nanahira // my moe is deadly w

Mod Via [osu!mania] Queue

7K = |1|2|3|4|5|6|7|
| W (Whistle) | C (Clap) | F (Finish) |

(Focus : Pattern , Pitch, Hitsounds)

General

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   Background images must not exceed a width of 1920 pixels and a height of 1200 pixels.

   https://osu.ppy.sh/community/forums/topics/516427
   rencananya mau saya fixkan, tapi malas buka image editor
2. Add in tag your old nick name lel : ExUsagi, Ajemaniz, etc...

seven key

OD : 7,7 or 7,8
HP : 8,3

1. 00:28:582 - sebenarnya disini masih terdengar jelas suara piano, apakah ini di sengaja? // ok deh karena banyak yg bilang add :'D
2. 00:29:051 (29051|3) - kalau seandainya ini ikut suara piano, bukannya letaknya di blue line 00:29:129 - // ok
3. 01:02:671 - kenapa gak ngemap piano 1/12?
4. 01:08:895 - rasanya disini gak perlu di beri penekanan chord 2 note karena gak masih low, mungkin referensi di 01:03:895 -
5. 01:23:270 - konsistensi? 01:22:332 -
6. 01:34:676 - akan lebih baik suara kick di beri penekanan 2 note biar nyata XD, 01:35:301 - 01:35:926 - 01:37:176 - wait.. 01:37:332 - disini kok ada 2 note? // removed yg 2 wkwkwk
7. 01:39:207 - 01:49:207 - bukannya 3 note untuk konsistensi snare seperti layaknya di 4K? kecuali 01:54:207 - karena seluruh ke depannya udah konsisten // oiyak, sorry ini lupa
8. 01:39:676 (99676|6,99832|6,99988|6) - mungkin bisa hindarin achor seperti walapun ada sedikit nyambung dengan pitchnya, imo 01:39:988 (99988|6,100066|5,100145|4,100223|3,100301|2) - geser ke kiri 2x // actually hand balance dari part sebelumnya, anchornya ya... fixed deh
9. 01:42:801 (102801|0,102957|2) - harusnya 1 kolom untuk konsistensi style mappingmu, sama halnya di
   01:50:301 (110301|2,110457|6) - // ok
10. 02:21:395 - sampai 02:23:270 - terlihat empty, mungkin bisa tambah variasi LN untuk suara vocal mungkin untuk mengisisi kekosongan hati ? atau ngemap SN di white/red line yang tersedia // sengaja huehue, ngikut gain volume perkusi nya biar jadi monorhythm
    
11. 02:23:895 (143895|6) - berhenti di red line 02:24:676 - ? // buat backing vocal berhentinya pas kali ya? owo?
    
12. 02:43:426 (163426|5,163582|6) - buat jack/kolom bersamaan please untuk konsistensi, sama halnya dengan
    02:44:676 (164676|4,164832|5) -
    02:45:926 (165926|5,166238|2) -
    02:46:551 (166551|2,166707|3) -
    02:47:176 (167176|1,167332|0) -
    // di bikin unjack semua biar lebih konsisten ke non-jack huehue
13. 02:43:348 (163348|2,163504|2,163660|2) - mungkin bisa hindarin double strike shield LN ini XD. mungkin 02:43:504 (163504|2,163582|3) - geser ke kanan biar dapat feelnya // ok
14. 02:47:957 (167957|4) - pindah ke |1| atau |2| biar balance // rearranged
15. 02:51:395 (171395|6,171551|5) - Ctrl + G? sama dengan penjelasan sebelumnya, sebenanya gpp jg demi variasi ok stop saya fokus ke itu // mm keep deh
16. 02:55:457 - seharusnya 3 note untuk konsistensi snare dan 02:55:926 - seharusnya 2 note, kok kebalik? // ohhh added
17. 03:01:863 (181863|4,182020|5,182098|4,182254|4,182332|5) - oh no, but interesting >w< // huehue
18. 03:09:051 - coba cek konsistensi di bagian 03:14:051 - // sengaja 1 biar bikin kontras ke echo snare di depannya, terkadang ngorbanin konsistensi untuk emphasize juga butuh
19. 03:17:957 (197957|2,198270|1,198582|0,198895|0,199207|1,199520|5) - kenapa gak buat layering LN untuk suara vocal, padahal menarik, sama halnya di section ini 03:22:957 - // HMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM boleh, ntar di pikirin lagi
20. 04:15:770 (255770|1) - pindah ke |5| lebih friendly patternya
21. 04:49:832 (289832|4) - pindah ke |2| ^ // keep yg ini
22. 04:50:301 (290301|6) - remove please untuk konsistensi kick selain itu note amount udah di cover dengan LN, sama halnya di 04:50:926 - // sengaja buat klimaks di overemphasize
23. 05:03:191 - missing W disini

Notes : Great LN pattern, saya suka saya suka XD

Verniy_Chan wrote:

Score

84,75

(1-100)

just for fun only, don’t take it seriously // kebiasaan :'v

Хорошо~ Good Luck..

[Shana Lesus] wrote:

Hello Arzen, sorry for delay ;w;

seven

1 2 3 4 5 6 7

00:14:832 (14832|4) - move to 4
00:17:801 (17801|2,17957|5,18113|4) - ctrl + g
00:19:051 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8862318
00:24:988 (24988|0) - move to 3
00:27:488 (27488|5,27645|4) - ctrl + g
01:22:332 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8862342
01:29:676 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8862350
01:38:582 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8862360 // i'll keep this
01:43:582 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8862367 // and this one too, both to follow the violin and hi-hat
01:48:582 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8862373 // changed in different pattern
01:50:770 (110770|1) - move to 4 // i'll keep the trill in more comfortable pattern
03:08:113 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8862398
03:15:848 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8862403
03:43:895 - add note to 6
04:01:395 - add note to 7
04:01:395 (241395|3) - end here 04:03:895 - will be better // gonna keep because i still can hear something at 04:03:816 (243816|3) -
04:13:504 (253504|3) - move to 2

sorry for the short mod, i have very little time recently

Good map // yay

Blocko wrote:

hi there uhh i kinda forgot about your black and white map you asked me to mod so uhh heres a mod

you should probably change the diff names to something better and something that at least relates to the song though

[four key]
00:38:895 - Snap kinda conflicts with the 7K diff, might wanna check that out. // fixed

01:11:707 (71707|1,72020|0,72332|2) - You could extend these to 1/1 LNs to highlight those synths. // tasty, ok

01:37:176 (97176|2,97176|3) - Following the way you patterned out this section, shouldn't this be a single note? // the kicks that has 1/1 distance from snare has doubles, and the 1/2 distance only 1 note, but emphasized by anchor, dunno whether the odd is a good idea

02:28:895 - to 02:31:395 - Feels a bit left hand biased. You could balance this out by moving 02:29:363 (149363|0) - and 02:30:613 (150613|0) - to 4. // done

03:16:395 (196395|3) - Move to 3 to avoid that long 5-note anchor. // the anchor was intended tho, but either way fixed

04:07:332 (247332|1) - Move to 3 again to avoid anchoring. // ok

04:25:848 (265848|2,265926|0,266004|2,266082|1,266160|2,266238|3) - Rearrange to 1|3|2|3|2|3 to avoid that somewhat long trill at the right side.

04:33:113 (273113|2) - Move to 4 for anchor avoidance.

[seven key]
00:30:457 (30457|5,30613|2) - Are you following the reverse cymbal here? I initially thought you were going for the vocal, so this was a bit confusing. // yea, its somehow contrast enough to be layered

00:40:242 (40242|2,40301|0) - Sounds more like a 1/12 triplet grace if I'm hearing that correctly.

00:45:340 (45340|2) - Can't really seem to hear a sound that supports this. Also, move 00:45:379 (45379|4) - down to 00:45:359 - to follow the piano.

01:53:270 - This part could use more notes for that drum.

02:17:723 (137723|4) - I'm not really hearing a sound there.

02:53:895 - to 02:56:238 - Part seems to be a bit heavy on the left hand. You could move 02:54:363 (174363|2,174441|1) - to 4,5 and move 02:55:301 (175301|1) - to 5 to alleviate that and to make a slightly broken stair pattern.

02:56:629 (176629|6,176707|6) - Idk, I'm not really feeling this mini-jack. This feels like an unexpected pattern that completely contradicts the flow this map has, and it's uncomfortable to transition after on the right hand. It'd be better if you could rearrange it to something like 04:42:801 - so it highlights the kick and also makes the overall pattern much better to play.

03:11:395 - Feels alright for right hand but really biased on the left. It's really tricky to do trills using the ring/index finger and thumb.
I'd suggest using this pattern to create some hand balance with the patterns. It's not as concrete as it previously was, but at least it makes it easier for the left hand to play through. // rearranged with my own pattern, symmetrical but somehow with more aesthetic C:

03:52:645 - I think it'd be neat if this pattern can be the exact mirror pattern of 03:51:395 - just for asymmetry and also to accentuate the piano chords.

04:44:363 (284363|4) - Turn this into two 1/4 LNs for that piano.

Pretty fun map. Good luck!

YaHao wrote:

Mod why not
[The 4K one]
00:07:645 (7645|0) - smh feels this Ln should start at 00:07:488 - // i caught reversed cymbal here, gud addition uwu
00:19:520 - add a new LN here? as you can hear the changing pitch on the main sound // added, in 7K too
00:29:441 - img make it more evil // hhh
01:05:926 (65926|2,66082|3) - arent they same pitch? // ok
01:52:801 - hmm... these two are the same pitch 01:52:801 (112801|3,112879|0) - , so jacking these two 01:52:879 (112879|0,112957|0) - plays kinda weird imo // ooo ok
02:56:551 - same here // done
03:32:332 (212332|0,212332|1,212488|2,212488|3) - same col pls ;w; // intended tho :^) moved anyway

qqqant wrote:

map sucks, bg also sucks

Pachiru wrote:

qqqant wrote:

map sucks, bg also sucks

No need to be rude like this-

Arzenvald wrote:

its a meme lol
qqqant lemme borrow some keysound for reference pls

Kawawa wrote:

Sorry! as an old request. and I did not see 4K. // no problem

[7K]
01:28:895 - to 01:33:895 - This part is too weak.
I recommend you to add some notes more. I can actually feel the climax of the song but the note density is reversed.
It was not impressed me at all how it goes feel climax // i made more anchor without adding more density instead, can add some more density but i want to make some identity about simpler map, with lesser note density, at least for mediocre player like me haha

01:57:645 (117645|6,117801|6,117957|6,118113|6,118270|6,118426|6,118582|6,118738|6) - was annoying.
01:58:426 (118426|6) - move to 5 and 01:58:504 (118504|4) - move to 6. It would be better. (Column 1/2/3/4/5/6/7)

02:07:645 - Same thing with above. // there's a tick sound i try to mimick with that anchored stair, i think its a common pattern that rarely used so i go with that pattern, moved some notes in 01:58:582 - instead to reduce the anchor

02:21:395 - It is intended for the next kick structure but kinda so weird by sudden empty rhythm.
so I think you can improve this anyway.
// yeah, it was intended. i want to 'emphasize' the kick that stands out more, because after 02:18:895 - i can hear that the other instrument slowly fading out into percussion, arranged some notes anyway

02:47:020 (167020|6,167020|0,167098|1,167098|5,167176|4,167176|2,167254|1,167254|5,167332|6,167332|0,167410|1,167410|5,167488|2,167488|4,167566|1,167566|5,167645|0) -
I really don't get it of this meaning. I mean it is not suitable for me as an expression for this place.
I actually became a double stream but It does not have that weight and I don't know how the trill stairs feel as a player. // should i raise the pattern difficulty / spikiness in here?


03:01:395 - to 03:07:645 - To be honest, I don't get it why this part should be harder density.
this part is kinda calm from last climax 02:57:645 -
The LNs and note density with patterns you used in this part are too heavy than the part's mood.

03:11:395 - to 03:12:645 - obviously not good. The pattern did not exactly mean that a kind of expression.

04:18:895 - Same thing with 01:28:895 - too weak.

Last burst LNs are depend on each skills. so I'm fine but some are annoying.
04:59:363 (299363|3,299520|2,299676|1,299754|3,299832|0,299910|3,299988|0) -
05:02:801 (302801|6,302879|5,302957|4,302957|6) -
// fixed, least anchor-y & bracket-y on both part!

I considered the rhythm that how feel as a player and the relationship of climax density with surrounding structure.
I think it will be subjective but It's valid a quite. when the map revived I hope it helpful.