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Topic Starter
Arzenvald
im so sad

ready for bn check
Leonita

Arzenvald wrote:

im so sad

ready for bn check
kode?
Topic Starter
Arzenvald

Leonita wrote:

Arzenvald wrote:

im so sad

ready for bn check
kode?
maw dun
DoNotMess
i will report this map if it gets ranked before deus ex machina does
Topic Starter
Arzenvald
kudosu'd for IRC mod, thank!
riunosk
from mod queue 1 2 3 4
00:30:457 (30457|2,30613|1) - if these were following the vocals, 00:31:707 - there should be notes here and 00:32:957 - and so on
00:42:645 (42645|1,42645|2) - on hearing at 25%, it sounds like a triple note burst
01:31:395 (91395|0,91551|0,91707|0,91863|0,92020|0,92176|0,92332|0) - im assuming this is intended?
01:42:957 (102957|1,103113|1,103270|1,103504|1,103660|1,103816|1) - somewhat broken anchor
01:52:879 (112879|0,112957|0) - any reason for forcing this minijack?
02:55:457 (175457|2,175613|2,175770|2,175926|2) - anchor
04:43:113 (283113|2,283270|2,283426|2,283582|2,283738|2,283895|2,284051|2,284207|2,284363|2) - ^
04:44:207 (284207|1,284363|1,284520|1,284676|1,284832|1) - ^why
04:45:457 (285457|3,285613|3,285770|3,285926|3,286082|3) - ^the
04:46:395 (286395|2,286551|2,286707|2,286863|2,287020|2,287176|2) - ^sudden
04:47:332 (287332|0,287488|0,287645|0,287801|0,287957|0,288113|0,288270|0,288426|0) - ^anchor
04:50:770 (290770|3,290926|3,291082|3,291238|3,291395|3,291551|3,291707|3) - ^spike
04:51:082 (291082|0,291238|0,291395|0,291551|0,291707|0,291863|0,292020|0) - ^??
04:52:020 (292020|3,292176|3,292332|3,292488|3,292645|3,292801|3,292957|3,293113|3,293270|3,293426|3,293582|3,293738|3,293895|3) - big one
04:57:332 (297332|3,297488|3,297645|3,297801|3,297957|3,298113|3,298270|3,298426|3) - ^
04:59:207 (299207|3,299363|3,299520|3,299676|3,299832|3,299988|3,300145|3,300301|3,300457|3) - ^
Interesting chart, but sudden anchor spikes at the end
gud luk for renk

btw what has camellia got to do with anything here? did he make the track?


also i added a new map that you can do a m4m for here


juicy bg
DDMythical
1 / 2 / 3 / 4

ignoring the no marathon rule on my queue because cute loli bg you m4m'd

What a strange place for a preview point!
I would cut the mp3 to save filespace because bns are generally picky about that. You can easily move the preview point so i imagine this wont be a major issue for you.
01:14:363 (74363|1,74520|1,74676|1) - Strange anchors in the stream, Could repattern out
01:15:613 (75613|1,75770|1,75926|1) - ^
01:18:035 (78035|2,78191|2,78348|2,78504|2) - ^
01:20:770 (80770|2,80926|2,81082|2) - ^
01:23:035 (83035|2,83191|2,83348|2,83504|2) - ^
01:23:973 (83973|2,84129|2,84285|2) - ^
01:24:832 (84832|1,84988|1,85145|1) - ^
02:23:738 (143738|2) - This note is a bit weird as it leads into the massively long anchor but with a different sound. You could put this on 4th column and change the previous double to [12]


reeee i literally cant mod this because its really well layered and i cant notice any problems
HXJ_Crafter
XD Congratz for BN check
Topic Starter
Arzenvald

riunosk wrote:

from mod queue 1 2 3 4
00:30:457 (30457|2,30613|1) - if these were following the vocals, 00:31:707 - there should be notes here and 00:32:957 - and so on // i follow some kind of echo, not vocal

00:42:645 (42645|1,42645|2) - on hearing at 25%, it sounds like a triple note burst // ahh, too hard to hear though D:

01:31:395 (91395|0,91551|0,91707|0,91863|0,92020|0,92176|0,92332|0) - im assuming this is intended? // nope, moved some

01:42:957 (102957|1,103113|1,103270|1,103504|1,103660|1,103816|1) - somewhat broken anchor // mm i'll move some stuff

01:52:879 (112879|0,112957|0) - any reason for forcing this minijack? // hoo for transition to the next part, kinda light tho so i think its fine

02:55:457 (175457|2,175613|2,175770|2,175926|2) - anchor // keep, actually to make things a little intense towards the end of the kiai

04:43:113 (283113|2,283270|2,283426|2,283582|2,283738|2,283895|2,284051|2,284207|2,284363|2) - ^
04:44:207 (284207|1,284363|1,284520|1,284676|1,284832|1) - ^why
04:45:457 (285457|3,285613|3,285770|3,285926|3,286082|3) - ^the
04:46:395 (286395|2,286551|2,286707|2,286863|2,287020|2,287176|2) - ^sudden
04:47:332 (287332|0,287488|0,287645|0,287801|0,287957|0,288113|0,288270|0,288426|0) - ^anchor
04:50:770 (290770|3,290926|3,291082|3,291238|3,291395|3,291551|3,291707|3) - ^spike
04:51:082 (291082|0,291238|0,291395|0,291551|0,291707|0,291863|0,292020|0) - ^??
04:52:020 (292020|3,292176|3,292332|3,292488|3,292645|3,292801|3,292957|3,293113|3,293270|3,293426|3,293582|3,293738|3,293895|3) - big one
04:57:332 (297332|3,297488|3,297645|3,297801|3,297957|3,298113|3,298270|3,298426|3) - ^
04:59:207 (299207|3,299363|3,299520|3,299676|3,299832|3,299988|3,300145|3,300301|3,300457|3) - ^
// hehehe, i'll try to move some anchors, but they were intended for the stream direction, left-to-right and right-to-left stream direction, following pitches per each stanzas, i'll see if i can reduce the anchor, i forgot to put bookmarks tho
Interesting chart, but sudden anchor spikes at the end
gud luk for renk

btw what has camellia got to do with anything here? did he make the track?


also i added a new map that you can do a m4m for here


juicy bg

DDMythical wrote:

1 / 2 / 3 / 4

ignoring the no marathon rule on my queue because cute loli bg you m4m'd

What a strange place for a preview point!
I would cut the mp3 to save filespace because bns are generally picky about that. You can easily move the preview point so i imagine this wont be a major issue for you.
01:14:363 (74363|1,74520|1,74676|1) - Strange anchors in the stream, Could repattern out
01:15:613 (75613|1,75770|1,75926|1) - ^
01:18:035 (78035|2,78191|2,78348|2,78504|2) - ^
01:20:770 (80770|2,80926|2,81082|2) - ^
01:23:035 (83035|2,83191|2,83348|2,83504|2) - ^
01:23:973 (83973|2,84129|2,84285|2) - ^
01:24:832 (84832|1,84988|1,85145|1) - ^
02:23:738 (143738|2) - This note is a bit weird as it leads into the massively long anchor but with a different sound. You could put this on 4th column and change the previous double to [12] // only keep this, the small anchor is actually intended, that's how i put kick > snare or kick > cymbol (or big beats)


reeee i literally cant mod this because its really well layered and i cant notice any problems

Tofu1222 wrote:

I was intending to make this but hmmm....

then i will focus on my Bassdrop Freaks...

Mod here XDD ;)

[Flowers]
  1. 01:22:566 (82566|1,82645|2,82723|1,82801|2) - and 01:22:957 (82957|1,83035|2,83113|1,83191|2) - are really similar, i suggest u vary the pattern between them // ok
  2. 01:29:207 - 01:29:832 - 01:30:457 - 01:31:082 - these sounds should definitely be emphasized by the double cuz u use double for these sounds before, and it is strong enough to put double. If u are concerned about marking the difference between 01:29:051 (89051|3,89051|2,89207|3) -, u can make those in different columns so that they will be emphasized and difference will be noted out obviously // i'll keep this, its kind of gimmick where the anchor has emphasized the light snare already hihihi
  3. 01:37:176 (97176|1,97176|3) - this is the same sound as 01:34:676 (94676|1,95301|2,95926|1) - so if u double that, u have to double all of these 01:34:676 (94676|1,95301|2,95926|1) - // another gimmick i try to implement here, you got the idea, the kick sound where it has 1/2 space before the snare has 1 note, the anchor emphasize it, while the double one is where the kick far enough to the next snare.. i'll refine this arrangement either way
  4. 01:37:801 - 01:38:426 - make sure u also double these two if u accept my previous idea
  5. 01:39:676 (99676|2,100301|1,100926|2,102801|2,103504|1) - ^
  6. 01:44:676 (104676|2,105301|1,105926|2,107801|2,109676|1,110301|2,110926|1) - ^
  7. 01:49:520 - 01:50:145 - 01:50:770 - u only put double notes in this part for the vocal sound but not on the previous parts. It seems really inconsistent cuz this part really doesnt make such big difference with the previous one. I suggest not to double these sounds too in this part // hehe you got the idea of this double, and yea it was intended to add some notes to highlight them so it become sightly (but not really) denser to the end of kiai, i want to give some escalating density in there, will consider to remove tho!
  8. 01:52:801 (112801|2,112801|3,112879|0) - they have the same sounds, so better double 01:52:879 (112879|0) - // oo i'll make them single then.. applied
  9. 01:54:676 (114676|0,115301|3,115926|1,117801|3,118426|0) - same as above // i might add doubles here to differ this section and the previous one.. thought?
  10. 01:58:895 - u also need a double here // okay
  11. 01:59:676 (119676|3,120301|0,120926|1,122801|0,123426|2,123738|3) - same for double
  12. 02:04:676 (124676|3,125301|2,125926|0,127801|2,128426|3,128895|2) - ^
  13. wont go forward for the double notes issue. Remember just to double those with W sound // xD i know, if more people point this out i'll consider to fix
  14. 02:13:582 (133582|0,133582|1,133582|2,133660|3,133738|2,133816|1) - 02:08:582 (128582|0,128582|1,128582|3,128660|2,128738|0,128738|3,128816|1) - should all be double? according to this: 01:43:582 (103582|2,103582|3,103660|1,103660|0,103738|2,103738|3,103816|1,103816|0) - // different section, also the denser JS is on kiai
  15. 02:17:488 - 02:17:801 - need double and add W sounds // omg i didn't caught those kick, added
  16. 02:22:332 - 02:22:645 - better add notes here // hmm i have different idea
  17. 02:23:113 (143113|1,143270|1,143738|2,143895|2) - if ok u may avoid such small jacks imo
  18. 02:33:895 - to 02:35:145 - should all be double imo. As u can see this part: 02:23:895 - 1/1 02:31:395 - 1/2 02:33:895 - 1/4 // welp i won't make long JS, but instead its become denser now
  19. 02:47:488 (167488|1) - may wanna move to 4 to at least nerf some left-hand bias here // ok, evil D:
  20. 02:56:551 (176551|0,176551|1,176629|3) - these two same sounds so if double then both double // ok
  21. 03:09:207 (189207|1,189207|0,189233|2,189233|3) - what's this??? // echo XD im sure there's 2 different snare there
  22. 03:12:020 (192020|3,192020|0,192020|2) - only F sound here why triple? better nerf to single note // the chime is somehow contrast to be layered differently, so i put triple
  23. 03:17:020 (197020|2,197020|0,197020|3) - ^ // same
  24. 03:46:551 - piano sound here add notes
  25. 04:07:645 - 04:08:270 - 04:08:895 - 04:10:145 - 04:11:395 - make them all double notes cuz F sound just like what u do at 04:12:645 (252645|3,252645|0) - // different part, those single are intended as a variation :D
  26. 04:19:207 (259207|3,259832|0,260457|1,261082|2) - double them. Reason as 01:29:207 - 01:29:832 - 01:30:457 - 01:31:082 - // ok
  27. 04:42:801 (282801|2,282801|0,282879|3) - so if double both double
  28. 04:46:082 (286082|1,286082|3,286082|0,286160|2,286238|1,286238|0,286316|3,286395|0,286395|2) - why not try double all of them like what u did here 04:48:582 (288582|3,288582|2,288660|0,288660|1,288738|2,288738|3,288816|1,288816|0,288895|3,288895|2) - // different sound


That's all. Good luck and hope my mods can help you! ;) // it really is! thank you for the detailed mods! some idea aren't fully rejected, some are rearranged differently
thank you for the mods! they are really helpful! :D
eyes
good map, but too sad that 2nd and 3rd kiai are the SAME. I suggest you to make 2nd kiai in more LN oriented style, then make 3rd kiai a combination of 1st and 2nd kiai
please consider this
Mage
just some things

00:00:145 - 00:05:145 - make doubles
01:04:051 - sound, add note
01:04:285 - add note, but i'm not sure, maybe you wanted to highlight vocal
02:57:176 - 02:57:410 - should be doubles
03:42:957 - LNs should ends here cuz sound ends here
04:09:520 - 04:10:145 - 04:10:770 - 04:11:395 - would be cool if you put here doubles to highlight vocal
04:23:895 - double?
Topic Starter
Arzenvald
@eyes thank you!
i actually aware that since the beginning, considering how long the song is and how repetitive they are, and so i only differs the stream density instead, getting harder from the 1st chorus to the next one if you compare them.
i would love actually apply your idea tho! thank you btw :D

edit : the SR raised to 4.9 LOL

Mage wrote:

just some things

00:00:145 - 00:05:145 - make doubles // i got the idea, but i'll keep everything single in the intro :3

01:04:051 - sound, add note // added and some thing rearranged
01:04:285 - add note, but i'm not sure, maybe you wanted to highlight vocal // rearranged as above ^

02:57:176 - 02:57:410 - should be doubles // applied differently

03:42:957 - LNs should ends here cuz sound ends here // 1/4 earlier but okay!

04:09:520 - 04:10:145 - 04:10:770 - 04:11:395 - would be cool if you put here doubles to highlight vocal // hmmmmmmmm i want to D: but i want to make a single stream in this section

04:23:895 - double? // dense and evil.. i like it.. ok!
thank you for mod! o,o not sure if next mod will points out another issue
Virtue-


General


- Metadata : OK!
- BPM/Offset : OK!
- BG/Video : OK!
- Hitsound : OK!
- Files : OK!

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  • [Flower]
  1. 00:17:020 (17020|0,17645|1,18738|3,18816|2,18895|1) - http://puu.sh/wHjO1/3b17283177.jpg gpp sih, cmn rada susah gitu ya mencetny. 00:17:020 (17020|0) - mending turunin ujungny 1 bar biar sejajar sama sblhny, biar ena
  2. 00:19:832 (19832|2,19910|3,19988|0) - jadiin gini aja, ena kok http://puu.sh/wHjUl/64c058b487.jpg
  3. 00:21:395 (21395|3) - sama nih, turunin 1 bar
  4. 00:28:895 (28895|3,28895|2,29363|0,29441|1,29520|3,29598|2,29676|1,29754|0,29832|2,29910|3,29988|2,30066|1) - http://puu.sh/wHjXm/87f96a5162.jpg pls ajee, susah amat di pencet astaga.. cobain ini dah http://puu.sh/wHjZb/fb0d2121c6.jpg
  5. 01:46:551 - add note, ada hi hat
  6. 01:53:582 (113582|3,113660|2) - double aja
  7. 02:07:801 (127801|2,128426|3) - sengaja single?
  8. 02:37:254 (157254|2,157293|1,157332|0,157371|3,157410|2,157449|1,157488|0,157527|2,157566|1,157605|3,157645|0,157645|2) - :'VV mungkin gini lebih gud http://puu.sh/wHkkD/65eb337701.png
  9. 03:36:941 - add LN buat vocal?
  10. 03:59:051 - add note, ada piano
  11. 04:01:395 (241395|0) - jadiin LN buat vocal, trs tambahin LN juga di 04:02:645 -
i guess that's it, good luck!
Topic Starter
Arzenvald
sorry lama balesnya lagi farming PP & latihan DT aoawokwkwkwkwkwk
sek sek

Virtue- wrote:



General


- Metadata : OK!
- BPM/Offset : OK!
- BG/Video : OK!
- Hitsound : OK!
- Files : OK!

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  • [Flower]
  1. 00:17:020 (17020|0,17645|1,18738|3,18816|2,18895|1) - http://puu.sh/wHjO1/3b17283177.jpg gpp sih, cmn rada susah gitu ya mencetny. 00:17:020 (17020|0) - mending turunin ujungny 1 bar biar sejajar sama sblhny, biar ena // a e s t h e t i c s
  2. 00:19:832 (19832|2,19910|3,19988|0) - jadiin gini aja, ena kok http://puu.sh/wHjUl/64c058b487.jpg // pen nge mirror yg atas :C
  3. 00:21:395 (21395|3) - sama nih, turunin 1 bar // :S hmm pen konsisten sama yg atas
  4. 00:28:895 (28895|3,28895|2,29363|0,29441|1,29520|3,29598|2,29676|1,29754|0,29832|2,29910|3,29988|2,30066|1) - http://puu.sh/wHjXm/87f96a5162.jpg pls ajee, susah amat di pencet astaga.. cobain ini dah http://puu.sh/wHjZb/fb0d2121c6.jpg // sek sek, di bikin lebih mudah
  5. 01:46:551 - add note, ada hi hat // spicy spacing, keep, gimmick tho
  6. 01:53:582 (113582|3,113660|2) - double aja // sek, baru kiai 1, di bikin gk mashy, (di bedain sama kiai 2)
  7. 02:07:801 (127801|2,128426|3) - sengaja single? // di semua part yg nge-anchor 1/2 satu satu aja C:
  8. 02:37:254 (157254|2,157293|1,157332|0,157371|3,157410|2,157449|1,157488|0,157527|2,157566|1,157605|3,157645|0,157645|2) - :'VV mungkin gini lebih gud http://puu.sh/wHkkD/65eb337701.png // yah, 02:37:488 (157488|0,157527|2,157566|1,157605|3,157645|2) - ini nya sengaja biar gk JS banget
  9. 03:36:941 - add LN buat vocal? // no vocal, biar yg main pencet pencetan improvisasi sendiri awokawokwokwkwk
  10. 03:59:051 - add note, ada piano // ok, headset gw kurang bagus, add ae lah klo kata org ada piano mah
  11. 04:01:395 (241395|0) - jadiin LN buat vocal, trs tambahin LN juga di 04:02:645 - // nda mau isi vocal huee..
i guess that's it, good luck!
yah di apply 1 doangan D: btw thanks dah nge cek beb <3
Unpredictable
not all too big on Nanahira but i like camellia tho >:]

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- 01:23:895 I was thinking about adding another note here..? My reasoning for it is I think that it's way more significant than 01:24:207 (84207|0,84207|3) - and with a hand, I think it shows difference and emphasize. Up to you tho
- 02:30:691 (150691|2,150848|2) - eh not a fan of the stack here, maybe moving 02:30:691 (150691|2) - this to column 4?
Not else to say :D

Honestly, this map is really good. I seriously like it a lot. It follows the song pretty well and I couldn't find much wrong with it. You might have made me like Nanahira a little bit more. ;) Take a star as well! Wasn't much but hope you enjoy. :)

P.S. This BG tho is uh... wow is uh like "definitely" about flowers ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
eyes
General
Add tags: Comiket コミケット Comic Market コミックマーケット 91 リリース C91
MAybe reduce BG picture's resolution to 1366x996 for decreasing file size

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[Flowers]
Reduce OD to 7.7-7.9 because of complex LNs

by 00:00:145 - till 00:10:145 - too loud hitsounds, please reduce to +-20%

00:10:145 - make this triple, because this it has bass sound, but 00:27:645 - this double has no bass sound.

00:35:281 (35281|2) - I think it should be on 00:35:301

00:37:762 (37762|0) - delete? I can't catch the sound

00:38:953 (38953|0) - delete (same reason as above) and move it 00:39:012 (39012|3) - to 00:39:025

00:40:223 (40223|1) - not sure but I think should be on 00:40:249

00:57:671 - missed sound maybe
01:02:684 - ^

01:34:676 (94676|1,95301|2,95926|1,97801|1,99676|2,100301|1,100926|2,102801|2,104676|2,105301|1,105926|2,109676|1,110301|2,110926|1) - I think these should be doubles

Suggestion: 04:43:973 (283973|1) - move to 04:43:895

upd: 03:09:207 (189207|1) - remove hitsound, these two notes 03:09:207 (189207|0,189233|3) - are very close and sounds almost in one moment so it sounds like 3 snares
Topic Starter
Arzenvald

eyes wrote:

General
Add tags: Comiket コミケット Comic Market コミックマーケット 91 リリース C91 // added
MAybe reduce BG picture's resolution to 1366x996 for decreasing file size // 1920x1080, sure

|1-4|
[Flowers]
Reduce OD to 7.7-7.9 because of complex LNs // the rest of the map is only rice though, the ln part only covers at least 10% of total, would be too easy to mash

by 00:00:145 - till 00:10:145 - too loud hitsounds, please reduce to +-20% // keep, instead added keysounds :^^^)

00:10:145 - make this triple, because this it has bass sound, but 00:27:645 - this double has no bass sound. // keep, the anchor should be enough to emphasize, also too early imo

00:35:281 (35281|2) - I think it should be on 00:35:301 // omg nice catch

00:37:762 (37762|0) - delete? I can't catch the sound // the highest pitch of the glissando is there, keep

00:38:953 (38953|0) - delete (same reason as above) and move it 00:39:012 (39012|3) - to 00:39:025 // ^ same reason

00:40:223 (40223|1) - not sure but I think should be on 00:40:249 // i think so, moved

00:57:671 - missed sound maybe
01:02:684 - ^ // nice idea, added :D

01:34:676 (94676|1,95301|2,95926|1,97801|1,99676|2,100301|1,100926|2,102801|2,104676|2,105301|1,105926|2,109676|1,110301|2,110926|1) - I think these should be doubles // as i stated in previous mod reply, will keep the kicks on anchor with single note when it has 1/2 distance to the snare, and double if it has 1/1 distance to the snare

Suggestion: 04:43:973 (283973|1) - move to 04:43:895 // nice, moved

upd: 03:09:207 (189207|1) - remove hitsound, these two notes 03:09:207 (189207|0,189233|3) - are very close and sounds almost in one moment so it sounds like 3 snares // yuss sounds better now, removed..

Unpredictable wrote:

not all too big on Nanahira but i like camellia tho >:]

1|2|3|4

- 01:23:895 I was thinking about adding another note here..? My reasoning for it is I think that it's way more significant than 01:24:207 (84207|0,84207|3) - and with a hand, I think it shows difference and emphasize. Up to you tho // mmmm naw, still not as intense as the other downbeat, considerable tho
- 02:30:691 (150691|2,150848|2) - eh not a fan of the stack here, maybe moving 02:30:691 (150691|2) - this to column 4? // a follow up from 02:30:613 (150613|0,150770|0) - but sure, moved
Not else to say :D

Honestly, this map is really good. I seriously like it a lot. It follows the song pretty well and I couldn't find much wrong with it. You might have made me like Nanahira a little bit more. ;) Take a star as well! Wasn't much but hope you enjoy. :)

P.S. This BG tho is uh... wow is uh like "definitely" about flowers ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
thank you guys, very helpful mod is very helpful <3 <3 <3
MrDorian
Hi owo/
I'm from RRM queue and here's your mod!
sniped Kaito :^)
01:29:207 (89207|3) - I do not really understand why it is one note only. There is that "tick" and 01:29:051 (89051|2) - "bass" or how to call this sound. It is rather inconsistent because there's strong sound combined with another sound. I'd suggest adding another note in 2 to make 4 notes stack.
01:37:801 (97801|1) - missing note, the sound has the same intensitivity as 01:36:395 (96395|2) -
01:42:801 (102801|2) - 01:47:801 (107801|2) - ^
01:50:145 (110145|3,110145|0) - this should have one note, is different with 01:49:520 (109520|3,109520|2) -
02:17:723 (137723|1) - are you sure there's a sound?
02:55:926 (175926|2) - could you move it to 4? 4 notes anchor looks terrible here
03:51:707 (231707|1) - you could move this to 4, because 03:51:863 (231863|2) - here sounds start to repeat
04:19:207 (259207|3) - same suggestion as before in similiar part
04:25:613 (265613|1) - move to 4 to avoid anchor on 2 perhaps
04:43:113 (283113|2,283152|3,283191|0,283230|1,283270|2,283270|3,283348|0,283426|2,283426|1,283504|0,283504|3,283582|2,283660|0,283660|1,283738|2,283738|3) - you could ctrl+h this, right hand is used a bit in this kiai

that bookmark spam later wew
nice one, couldn't find much :'v
good luck owo/
call me when u'll finish 7k, gonna mod it as well
Topic Starter
Arzenvald

MrDorian wrote:

Hi owo/
I'm from RRM queue and here's your mod!

sniped Kaito :^) // wow

01:29:207 (89207|3) - I do not really understand why it is one note only. There is that "tick" and 01:29:051 (89051|2) - "bass" or how to call this sound. It is rather inconsistent because there's strong sound combined with another sound. I'd suggest adding another note in 2 to make 4 notes stack. // intended for unorthodox gimmick, also i rely the anchor for emphasize

01:37:801 (97801|1) - missing note, the sound has the same intensitivity as 01:36:395 (96395|2) -
01:42:801 (102801|2) - 01:47:801 (107801|2) - ^ // another gimmick i want to implement, all these kicks in the 3/4 part of the 1st kiai / chorus (and the 2nd verse) are intended to be one note, every kicks that are having 1/2 distance to the next snare is mini-anchored to catch the "lite" feeling of this track.

01:50:145 (110145|3,110145|0) - this should have one note, is different with 01:49:520 (109520|3,109520|2) - // i break the gimmick in this part for transition before the next verse.. so its intended

02:17:723 (137723|1) - are you sure there's a sound? // nope >.> removed

02:55:926 (175926|2) - could you move it to 4? 4 notes anchor looks terrible here // oke, didn't notice that anchor lel

03:51:707 (231707|1) - you could move this to 4, because 03:51:863 (231863|2) - here sounds start to repeat // i like my current trill-y 2323 to emphasis the repeats tho, will consider to move

04:19:207 (259207|3) - same suggestion as before in similiar part // huehuehue

04:25:613 (265613|1) - move to 4 to avoid anchor on 2 perhaps / ok

04:43:113 (283113|2,283152|3,283191|0,283230|1,283270|2,283270|3,283348|0,283426|2,283426|1,283504|0,283504|3,283582|2,283660|0,283660|1,283738|2,283738|3) - you could ctrl+h this, right hand is used a bit in this kiai // ok

that bookmark spam later wew // the structure behind the stream are marked with the bookmark :3
nice one, couldn't find much :'v
good luck owo/

call me when u'll finish 7k, gonna mod it as well
omg thank you, i thought to finish the 7K later but glad there's some other people who interested into it :D thank you thank you thank you thank you
_VianK_
irc siang siang varokah

11:01 Arzenvald: allo
11:02 Arzenvald: jadi inget klo dulu usagi san xD
11:02 Ridho 2307: emangnya pas dulu namanya usagi panggilannya itu yah? ;v
11:03 *Ridho 2307 is playing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/992512 Kurokotei - Galaxy Collapse [Cataclysmic Hypernova]] <osu!mania> -HalfTime |4K|
11:03 Ridho 2307: rip stamina
11:09 Ridho 2307: kamu punya map yang bisa w mod gak? gw lagi bosen banget nih
11:09 Ridho 2307: nm aja
11:19 Arzenvald: weh
11:19 Arzenvald: 7K tapinya
11:19 *Arzenvald is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1368838 Nanahira - Petals [7K Fine Grills]]
11:19 Ridho 2307: irc aja yah
11:19 Arzenvald: sbb baru masak
11:19 Arzenvald: yeh baru mau makan ini
11:19 Arzenvald: ; ;
11:19 Ridho 2307: kamu ngekos yah?
11:20 Arzenvald: ngga, tinggal di rumah sodara
11:20 Arzenvald: sendiri tapinya
11:20 Ridho 2307: senasib dong
11:20 Arzenvald: lha
11:20 Arzenvald: kuliah?
11:20 Ridho 2307: lagi nunggu univ nih
11:20 Ridho 2307: kapan uktnya keluar
11:21 Ridho 2307: univ vangke
11:21 Ridho 2307: :v
11:21 Arzenvald: ukt?
11:21 Arzenvald: gw kerja freelance sih, entah berantah soal kuliah dsb. o,o
11:22 Ridho 2307: saudara kerja, anaknya sekolah, dan kini tinggal lah dirumah seorang diri
11:23 Arzenvald: hoo
11:23 Ridho 2307: ukt = Uang kuliah tunggal
11:23 Arzenvald: hoo
11:24 Arzenvald: ongkos bensin? :v
11:24 Ridho 2307: ewntah :v
11:24 Ridho 2307: btw itu lagunya berapa min?
11:28 Arzenvald: marathon
11:28 Arzenvald: mending post tbh
11:28 Ridho 2307: gpp
11:29 Ridho 2307: irc aja
11:29 Ridho 2307: rada lemot soalnya kalo osu +browser
11:36 Arzenvald: wes
11:36 Arzenvald: '3' sbb lagi, baru posting di mq
11:37 Arzenvald: huehue
11:37 Ridho 2307: btw sbb itu apaan sih?
11:37 Arzenvald: sorry baru bales
11:38 Ridho 2307: oh
11:39 Ridho 2307: lah...kirain
11:39 *Arzenvald is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1368838 Nanahira - Petals [7K Fine Grills]]
11:39 Ridho 2307: btw mutualan kuy
11:39 Arzenvald: penuh ; ;
11:39 Arzenvald: eh
11:39 Arzenvald: EH BISA
11:39 Arzenvald: oiya kemarin dah remove beberapa
11:40 Ridho 2307: btw lu yuricon yah?
11:40 Ridho 2307: tuh ada 4 k kok
11:40 Arzenvald: apaan
11:40 Arzenvald: awokawokawokwk
11:40 Ridho 2307: _-
11:40 Arzenvald: gw nyari gambar yg relevan
11:40 Arzenvald: 4K udah di mod banyak
11:41 Arzenvald: 7K baru selesai pagi ini 'w'
11:42 Ridho 2307: berarti 7k nya baru ane dong yang sentuh?
11:42 Arzenvald: yap
11:42 Ridho 2307: XD
11:42 *Ridho 2307 is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1368838 Nanahira - Petals [7K Fine Grills]]
11:42 Ridho 2307: gw mulai sekarang yah
11:42 Arzenvald: ok
11:43 Arzenvald: gw kuat kuatin online stengah jam sebelum tidur
11:43 Ridho 2307: 1|2|3|4|5|6|7
11:43 Arzenvald: btw ini style o2jam lama, so harap maklum klo kolum nya banyak yg kosong
11:43 Ridho 2307: 00:03:113 - gak dijadiin 2 note aja disini?
11:44 Arzenvald: a
11:44 Arzenvald: baru bilang
11:44 Ridho 2307: kasih impact buat suara beningnya
11:44 Arzenvald: xD
11:44 Ridho 2307: gak ngerti waelah soal kayak gituan
11:45 Arzenvald: iya, klo o2jam jadul gk kyk mapnya kawawa, tiap intensity tambah 1 tambah 2
11:45 Arzenvald: lebih ke permainan visual sama less note
11:45 Ridho 2307: kawawa mah mapnya keren keren
11:45 Ridho 2307: garem 7k
11:46 Arzenvald: garem indeed
11:46 Arzenvald: PP kabeh
11:46 Ridho 2307: 00:07:645 (7645|0) - ln yang ini startnya bukan disin yah?
11:46 Ridho 2307: 00:08:113 -
11:47 Arzenvald: itu reverse cymbal
11:47 Arzenvald: weh
11:47 Ridho 2307: oh
11:48 Ridho 2307: nggak mau dikasih kick kah?
11:48 Arzenvald: naw
11:48 Ridho 2307: maksudnya note
11:48 Arzenvald: nda
11:48 Arzenvald: pengen bikin note nya lebih banyak single dan double
11:49 Arzenvald: nge capture lagu nya yg ringan
11:49 Ridho 2307: 00:35:145 (35145|5,35223|6,35301|1,35359|3) -
11:50 Arzenvald: 1 3 5 7?
11:50 Ridho 2307: yup
11:50 Arzenvald: udah
11:50 Ridho 2307: biar lebih seimbang
11:50 Ridho 2307: lu peramal yak?
11:51 Arzenvald: kagak
11:51 Arzenvald: cuma obvious xD
11:51 Ridho 2307: wtf
11:51 Arzenvald: habit 7K stairs, klo 1234 7654 1357
11:54 Ridho 2307: 01:43:895 - disini ada suara nih.. enak nih kalo dibuatin ln satu
11:55 Ridho 2307: 01:48:895 - sama kayak ini juga
11:55 Ridho 2307: 01:58:897 - nggak add satu note lagi?
11:57 Arzenvald: oke
11:57 Ridho 2307: 02:35:145 (155145|2) - bukan 1/8 yah?
11:57 Ridho 2307: kayak snare gitu
11:58 Ridho 2307: 02:35:145 (155145|2) - suaranya mirip disini 02:36:082 -
12:00 Ridho 2307: 02:56:863 - bagian 02:56:863 - ampe 02:57:654 - nggak mau di rearrange kah? bikin puyeng disitu kalo menurut ane
12:00 Arzenvald: jgn dulu 1/8 nya
12:01 Ridho 2307: oke
12:01 Ridho 2307: wadoo ln nya
12:01 Ridho 2307: sugeh
12:01 Ridho 2307: 03:08:660 - ada suara disini
12:01 Ridho 2307: 03:09:129 - sini juga
12:02 Arzenvald: rearranged
12:02 Arzenvald: yg 2 itu
12:02 Arzenvald: gk ikut hat
12:02 Arzenvald: jadi kosong '3'
12:02 Arzenvald: eh yg kedua ada
12:02 Ridho 2307: oh
12:03 Arzenvald: ada gk si
12:03 Arzenvald: XD
12:03 Arzenvald: bingung
12:03 Arzenvald: headsetnya
12:03 Ridho 2307: 03:10:457 - add note satu lagi buat impact kick drum apalah itu
12:03 Arzenvald: okee
12:03 Ridho 2307: suara nya sama kayak 03:11:238 -
12:03 Arzenvald: gk merhatiin, sorry
12:04 Arzenvald: added
12:04 Ridho 2307: 03:11:941 - add note di 7
12:05 Arzenvald: oh sengaja di kosongin buat next trill
12:05 Ridho 2307: oh souka
12:05 Arzenvald: lumayan handstrainnya, dan suaranya sama kecil kyk yg 2 tadi
12:05 Ridho 2307: 03:14:129 - ada suara kyk bukan hat
12:05 Arzenvald: yea, jadinya kosong
12:06 Ridho 2307: kayak disini 03:14:441 - tapi volumenya kecil
12:06 Arzenvald: yus
12:06 Arzenvald: also karena ada kick-snare, spacingnya sengaja di adain
12:06 Ridho 2307: gitu toh
12:07 Arzenvald: jadi gk perlu layer semua suara buat bikin emphasize nya lebih kontras
12:07 Arzenvald: yuss
12:07 Ridho 2307: ilmu lagi itu :v
12:07 Ridho 2307: 03:20:613 - ada suara
12:07 Arzenvald: added
12:07 Ridho 2307: kayak03:20:771 -
12:08 Ridho 2307: 03:20:926 - ini juga
12:08 Arzenvald: oke
12:08 Ridho 2307: 03:22:020 - idk
12:08 Arzenvald: sengaja satu ae
12:08 Ridho 2307: mau dikasih note apa kagak
12:08 Ridho 2307: oh
12:08 Arzenvald: nda
12:09 Ridho 2307: 03:22:840 - gak mau dicover nih?
12:10 Ridho 2307: btw lu orang mana sih?
12:10 Arzenvald: nda usah, bikin simple aja
12:10 Arzenvald: bogor, tinggal depok
12:10 Ridho 2307: jauh berarti
12:10 Arzenvald: u?
12:10 Ridho 2307: bone, tinggal di kendari
12:11 Arzenvald: wah
12:11 Ridho 2307: 03:25:457 - nggak mau dicover juga?
12:11 Ridho 2307: biar konsisten ama 03:27:020 -
12:11 Arzenvald: di pikir pikir add aja deh
12:12 Arzenvald: sama yg lain juga
12:12 Arzenvald: ok
12:13 Ridho 2307: add note di 7 04:22:645 -
12:13 Ridho 2307: jadiin double maksudnya
12:14 Ridho 2307: suaranya mirip ama yang dibawah
12:14 Arzenvald: o
12:14 Arzenvald: yg ini
12:14 Arzenvald: keep ah, pengen emphasize space bar
12:14 Ridho 2307: oke
12:14 Arzenvald: soalnya stylenya kadang 123 S 567
12:14 Arzenvald: bukan 123 4 567
12:15 Ridho 2307: souka
12:15 Ridho 2307: oke
12:15 Ridho 2307: 04:43:348 (283348|3,283426|4,283504|2,283504|3,283504|5,283582|4,283660|5,283738|4,283738|3,283738|6) - susah + gak enak menurutr ane
12:16 Ridho 2307: gak mau di rearrange?
12:16 Arzenvald: huehue
12:16 Arzenvald: keep ah
12:16 Arzenvald: broken stair nya ala jadul
12:16 Ridho 2307: 04:43:816 - ada suara juga, nggak mau dicover?
12:16 Ridho 2307: wkwkwk\
12:17 Arzenvald: keep aja
12:17 Arzenvald: pen kyk 4K
12:18 Ridho 2307: kalo gaian dari style mah
12:18 Ridho 2307: harus dikeep
12:18 Ridho 2307: 04:46:395 - remove note nya
12:18 Ridho 2307: kebanyakan itu
12:18 Arzenvald: remove 1
12:18 Arzenvald: oke
12:18 Ridho 2307: 04:47:488 - sedangkan disini cuman 2
12:19 Arzenvald: 3 plus ln
12:19 Ridho 2307: 04:52:566 (292566|0,292645|0) - apa ini?
12:19 Ridho 2307: wkwkwk
12:19 Arzenvald: error
12:19 Arzenvald: dah di fix
12:19 Ridho 2307: 3+ ln mah gitu aja
12:19 Ridho 2307: 04:52:566 (292566|0,292645|0) - sama kyk ini
12:20 Ridho 2307: eh salah
12:20 Ridho 2307: 04:56:395 -
12:20 Arzenvald: 04:47:176 (287176|0,287332|1,287488|2) - gpp klo ini 3 3 walaupun suaranya beda
12:20 Arzenvald: removed lagi
12:20 Ridho 2307: idk
12:21 Ridho 2307: 04:56:395 - yang ini 3+ln juga
12:21 Ridho 2307: kyk tadi
12:21 Arzenvald: udah
12:23 Ridho 2307: ini suara yang pas patternya selese nggak mau diisikah? mantap ini kalo diisi
12:23 Arzenvald: males _(:3
12:23 Ridho 2307: udffah...itu aja
12:23 Ridho 2307: wkwkwk
12:23 Arzenvald: also endingnya kan udah klimaks
12:23 Arzenvald: so klo di tambah lagi
12:23 Arzenvald: males
12:23 Arzenvald: _(:3
12:24 Ridho 2307: gw kirim nih?>
12:24 Arzenvald: yuss
12:24 Ridho 2307: hampir aja jiwa kefudanan gw terluka liat bg nya
12:25 *Ridho 2307 is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1368838 Nanahira - Petals]
12:25 Arzenvald: wat
12:25 Arzenvald: LOL
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good luck archi :v
Leonita
hadhe maraton. mager ea.
nice hitson btw
Oscyy
yo
M4M from weird queue, idk which one lel

diffname plz xD
00:26:707 - skipped sound?
00:27:176 - chord changed?
00:28:582 - skipped :<
00:29:285 - here is skiped sound as well :<<
00:35:145 - this is just, weird, maybe - 00:35:262 - skipped sound here and 00:35:359 (35359|6) - not sure this is 1/16 or 1/4
00:38:953 (38953|0) - not sure this is ghost bcz i think it start from blue line
00:40:223 - why no more stairs? :<
lets skip these piano stair thisngy shall we, im succ :<
00:50:145 - just a simple suggestion, im not hearing these 1/4 piano sound, maybe because its not clear but at some point there are clear, probably increase the emphasize of the clearer sound would good (like 2 note for clear sound) and increase the one with multi tuts 00:50:145 - as well (triple maybe), probably this will fix monotonic part which almost all note were single and bit undermapped :<
01:23:895 - i usually emphasized kick around 3 or 4 notes for diversion with piano, especially for this kind of song, but idk with you, every mapper have different style
01:29:207 - and add 1 extra note for the one have snare sound like this
01:34:676 - kicks, just telling you .-.
03:09:207 - mapping snare's echo is kinda unusual for me
ok lets say the map is good already so i dont have much word to this map and suggesting an o2jam map with bms style is nonsense so good luck
shooting stars
Topic Starter
Arzenvald

OscarRickyH02 wrote:

yo
M4M from weird queue, idk which one lel

diffname plz xD // imma hippies uwu
00:26:707 - skipped sound? // i'll add this one
00:27:176 - chord changed?
00:28:582 - skipped :<
00:29:285 - here is skiped sound as well :<<
00:35:145 - this is just, weird, maybe - 00:35:262 - skipped sound here and 00:35:359 (35359|6) - not sure this is 1/16 or 1/4 // i can only hear 4 high pianos, and i won't simplify the 1/16 because ye

00:38:953 (38953|0) - not sure this is ghost bcz i think it start from blue line // weh ok

00:40:223 - why no more stairs? :< // yuss :^)

lets skip these piano stair thisngy shall we, im succ :<

00:50:145 - just a simple suggestion, im not hearing these 1/4 piano sound, maybe because its not clear but at some point there are clear, probably increase the emphasize of the clearer sound would good (like 2 note for clear sound) and increase the one with multi tuts 00:50:145 - as well (triple maybe), probably this will fix monotonic part which almost all note were single and bit undermapped :< // the undermapping in this part are intended to make a big variation through the next part, but the trill pattern itself is quiet rapid more than stairs so i think its okay, and about the ghosts, you could re-check things using 50% playback rate

01:23:895 - i usually emphasized kick around 3 or 4 notes for diversion with piano, especially for this kind of song, but idk with you, every mapper have different style // double is enough for this map? usually i use 1 note for 1 percussion even its so loud

01:29:207 - and add 1 extra note for the one have snare sound like this // huehuehuehuehuehuehue gimmick

01:34:676 - kicks, just telling you .-. // yus, i left the 1st kiai with no kicks consistently through those 5 1/4 notes for some lite dnb feeling

03:09:207 - mapping snare's echo is kinda unusual for me // audible and reasonable enough so why not
ok lets say the map is good already so i dont have much word to this map and suggesting an o2jam map with bms style is nonsense so good luck
shooting stars
some parts are actually using bms-alike (hyper diff?) like at 01:53:895 (113895|1) -

otherwise thank you for the mod! i appreciate that <3
Verniy_Chan

Marked for 7K mod
seem interesting XD
Verniy_Chan

Hi Arzen-san and nanahira

Mod Via [osu!mania] Queue

7K = |1|2|3|4|5|6|7|
| W (Whistle) | C (Clap) | F (Finish) |

(Focus : Pattern , Pitch, Hitsounds)
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  1. 00:28:582 - sebenarnya disini masih terdengar jelas suara piano, apakah ini di sengaja?
  2. 00:29:051 (29051|3) - kalau seandainya ini ikut suara piano, bukannya letaknya di blue line 00:29:129 -
  3. 01:02:671 - kenapa gak ngemap piano 1/12?
  4. 01:08:895 - rasanya disini gak perlu di beri penekanan chord 2 note karena gak masih low, mungkin referensi di 01:03:895 -
  5. 01:23:270 - konsistensi? 01:22:332 -
  6. 01:34:676 - akan lebih baik suara kick di beri penekanan 2 note biar nyata XD, 01:35:301 - 01:35:926 - 01:37:176 - wait.. 01:37:332 - disini kok ada 2 note?
  7. 01:39:207 - 01:49:207 - bukannya 3 note untuk konsistensi snare seperti layaknya di 4K? kecuali 01:54:207 - karena seluruh ke depannya udah konsisten
  8. 01:39:676 (99676|6,99832|6,99988|6) - mungkin bisa hindarin achor seperti walapun ada sedikit nyambung dengan pitchnya, imo 01:39:988 (99988|6,100066|5,100145|4,100223|3,100301|2) - geser ke kiri 2x
  9. 01:42:801 (102801|0,102957|2) - harusnya 1 kolom untuk konsistensi style mappingmu, sama halnya di
    01:50:301 (110301|2,110457|6) -
  10. 02:21:395 - sampai 02:23:270 - terlihat empty, mungkin bisa tambah variasi LN untuk suara vocal mungkin untuk mengisisi kekosongan hati ? atau ngemap SN di white/red line yang tersedia
  11. 02:23:895 (143895|6) - berhenti di red line 02:24:676 - ?
  12. 02:43:426 (163426|5,163582|6) - buat jack/kolom bersamaan please untuk konsistensi, sama halnya dengan
    02:44:676 (164676|4,164832|5) -
    02:45:926 (165926|5,166238|2) -
    02:46:551 (166551|2,166707|3) -
    02:47:176 (167176|1,167332|0) -
  13. 02:43:348 (163348|2,163504|2,163660|2) - mungkin bisa hindarin double strike shield LN ini XD. mungkin 02:43:504 (163504|2,163582|3) - geser ke kanan biar dapat feelnya
  14. 02:47:957 (167957|4) - pindah ke |1| atau |2| biar balance
  15. 02:51:395 (171395|6,171551|5) - Ctrl + G? sama dengan penjelasan sebelumnya, sebenanya gpp jg demi variasi ok stop saya fokus ke itu
  16. 02:55:457 - seharusnya 3 note untuk konsistensi snare dan 02:55:926 - seharusnya 2 note, kok kebalik?
  17. 03:01:863 (181863|4,182020|5,182098|4,182254|4,182332|5) - oh no, but interesting >w<
  18. 03:09:051 - coba cek konsistensi di bagian 03:14:051 -
  19. 03:17:957 (197957|2,198270|1,198582|0,198895|0,199207|1,199520|5) - kenapa gak buat layering LN untuk suara vocal, padahal menarik, sama halnya di section ini 03:22:957 -
  20. 04:15:770 (255770|1) - pindah ke |5| lebih friendly patternya
  21. 04:49:832 (289832|4) - pindah ke |2| ^
  22. 04:50:301 (290301|6) - remove please untuk konsistensi kick selain itu note amount udah di cover dengan LN, sama halnya di 04:50:926 -
  23. 05:03:191 - missing W disini

Notes : Great LN pattern, saya suka saya suka XD

Verniy_Chan wrote:

84,75

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just for fun only, don’t take it seriously
Хорошо~ Good Luck..
Topic Starter
Arzenvald
Ihhh gituu >:O
sek sek pindah pc dulu sekalian reply fly away (´・ω・`)
Topic Starter
Arzenvald

Verniy_Chan wrote:


Hi Arzen-san and nanahira // my moe is deadly w

Mod Via [osu!mania] Queue

7K = |1|2|3|4|5|6|7|
| W (Whistle) | C (Clap) | F (Finish) |

(Focus : Pattern , Pitch, Hitsounds)
General
  1. Background file dimensions are more than allowed maximum : bg.png (2000x1458)

    Ranking Criteria wrote:

    Background images must not exceed a width of 1920 pixels and a height of 1200 pixels.
    https://osu.ppy.sh/community/forums/topics/516427
    rencananya mau saya fixkan, tapi malas buka image editor
  2. Add in tag your old nick name lel : ExUsagi, Ajemaniz, etc...
seven key

OD : 7,7 or 7,8
HP : 8,3
  1. 00:28:582 - sebenarnya disini masih terdengar jelas suara piano, apakah ini di sengaja? // ok deh karena banyak yg bilang add :'D
  2. 00:29:051 (29051|3) - kalau seandainya ini ikut suara piano, bukannya letaknya di blue line 00:29:129 - // ok
  3. 01:02:671 - kenapa gak ngemap piano 1/12?
  4. 01:08:895 - rasanya disini gak perlu di beri penekanan chord 2 note karena gak masih low, mungkin referensi di 01:03:895 -
  5. 01:23:270 - konsistensi? 01:22:332 -
  6. 01:34:676 - akan lebih baik suara kick di beri penekanan 2 note biar nyata XD, 01:35:301 - 01:35:926 - 01:37:176 - wait.. 01:37:332 - disini kok ada 2 note? // removed yg 2 wkwkwk
  7. 01:39:207 - 01:49:207 - bukannya 3 note untuk konsistensi snare seperti layaknya di 4K? kecuali 01:54:207 - karena seluruh ke depannya udah konsisten // oiyak, sorry ini lupa
  8. 01:39:676 (99676|6,99832|6,99988|6) - mungkin bisa hindarin achor seperti walapun ada sedikit nyambung dengan pitchnya, imo 01:39:988 (99988|6,100066|5,100145|4,100223|3,100301|2) - geser ke kiri 2x // actually hand balance dari part sebelumnya, anchornya ya... fixed deh
  9. 01:42:801 (102801|0,102957|2) - harusnya 1 kolom untuk konsistensi style mappingmu, sama halnya di
    01:50:301 (110301|2,110457|6) - // ok
  10. 02:21:395 - sampai 02:23:270 - terlihat empty, mungkin bisa tambah variasi LN untuk suara vocal mungkin untuk mengisisi kekosongan hati ? atau ngemap SN di white/red line yang tersedia // sengaja huehue, ngikut gain volume perkusi nya biar jadi monorhythm
  11. 02:23:895 (143895|6) - berhenti di red line 02:24:676 - ? // buat backing vocal berhentinya pas kali ya? owo?
  12. 02:43:426 (163426|5,163582|6) - buat jack/kolom bersamaan please untuk konsistensi, sama halnya dengan
    02:44:676 (164676|4,164832|5) -
    02:45:926 (165926|5,166238|2) -
    02:46:551 (166551|2,166707|3) -
    02:47:176 (167176|1,167332|0) -
    // di bikin unjack semua biar lebih konsisten ke non-jack huehue
  13. 02:43:348 (163348|2,163504|2,163660|2) - mungkin bisa hindarin double strike shield LN ini XD. mungkin 02:43:504 (163504|2,163582|3) - geser ke kanan biar dapat feelnya // ok
  14. 02:47:957 (167957|4) - pindah ke |1| atau |2| biar balance // rearranged
  15. 02:51:395 (171395|6,171551|5) - Ctrl + G? sama dengan penjelasan sebelumnya, sebenanya gpp jg demi variasi ok stop saya fokus ke itu // mm keep deh
  16. 02:55:457 - seharusnya 3 note untuk konsistensi snare dan 02:55:926 - seharusnya 2 note, kok kebalik? // ohhh added
  17. 03:01:863 (181863|4,182020|5,182098|4,182254|4,182332|5) - oh no, but interesting >w< // huehue
  18. 03:09:051 - coba cek konsistensi di bagian 03:14:051 - // sengaja 1 biar bikin kontras ke echo snare di depannya, terkadang ngorbanin konsistensi untuk emphasize juga butuh
  19. 03:17:957 (197957|2,198270|1,198582|0,198895|0,199207|1,199520|5) - kenapa gak buat layering LN untuk suara vocal, padahal menarik, sama halnya di section ini 03:22:957 - // HMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM boleh, ntar di pikirin lagi
  20. 04:15:770 (255770|1) - pindah ke |5| lebih friendly patternya
  21. 04:49:832 (289832|4) - pindah ke |2| ^ // keep yg ini
  22. 04:50:301 (290301|6) - remove please untuk konsistensi kick selain itu note amount udah di cover dengan LN, sama halnya di 04:50:926 - // sengaja buat klimaks di overemphasize
  23. 05:03:191 - missing W disini

Notes : Great LN pattern, saya suka saya suka XD

Verniy_Chan wrote:

84,75

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just for fun only, don’t take it seriously // kebiasaan :'v
Хорошо~ Good Luck..
very helpful mod tbh, like a lot! thanks v_chan <3
Deep Sea
Hello Arzen, sorry for delay ;w;

1 2 3 4 5 6 7

00:14:832 (14832|4) - move to 4
00:17:801 (17801|2,17957|5,18113|4) - ctrl + g
00:19:051 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8862318
00:24:988 (24988|0) - move to 3
00:27:488 (27488|5,27645|4) - ctrl + g
01:22:332 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8862342
01:29:676 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8862350
01:38:582 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8862360
01:43:582 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8862367
01:48:582 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8862373
01:50:770 (110770|1) - move to 4
03:08:113 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8862398
03:15:848 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8862403
03:43:895 - add note to 6
04:01:395 - add note to 7
04:01:395 (241395|3) - end here 04:03:895 - will be better
04:13:504 (253504|3) - move to 2

sorry for the short mod, i have very little time recently

Good map ;)
Topic Starter
Arzenvald
will reply later until i got moni ;A;

thank you shana <3

[Shana Lesus] wrote:

Hello Arzen, sorry for delay ;w;

1 2 3 4 5 6 7

00:14:832 (14832|4) - move to 4
00:17:801 (17801|2,17957|5,18113|4) - ctrl + g
00:19:051 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8862318
00:24:988 (24988|0) - move to 3
00:27:488 (27488|5,27645|4) - ctrl + g
01:22:332 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8862342
01:29:676 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8862350
01:38:582 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8862360 // i'll keep this
01:43:582 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8862367 // and this one too, both to follow the violin and hi-hat
01:48:582 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8862373 // changed in different pattern
01:50:770 (110770|1) - move to 4 // i'll keep the trill in more comfortable pattern
03:08:113 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8862398
03:15:848 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8862403
03:43:895 - add note to 6
04:01:395 - add note to 7
04:01:395 (241395|3) - end here 04:03:895 - will be better // gonna keep because i still can hear something at 04:03:816 (243816|3) -
04:13:504 (253504|3) - move to 2

sorry for the short mod, i have very little time recently

Good map ;) // yay :D
the rest is applied, thank you very much for mod <3
Topic Starter
Arzenvald



thanks for the testplay & feedback, da mighty blocko & starry- <3
Kyousuke-
Blocko
hi there uhh i kinda forgot about your black and white map you asked me to mod so uhh heres a mod

you should probably change the diff names to something better and something that at least relates to the song though

[four key]
00:38:895 - Snap kinda conflicts with the 7K diff, might wanna check that out.

01:11:707 (71707|1,72020|0,72332|2) - You could extend these to 1/1 LNs to highlight those synths.

01:37:176 (97176|2,97176|3) - Following the way you patterned out this section, shouldn't this be a single note?

02:28:895 - to 02:31:395 - Feels a bit left hand biased. You could balance this out by moving 02:29:363 (149363|0) - and 02:30:613 (150613|0) - to 4.

03:16:395 (196395|3) - Move to 3 to avoid that long 5-note anchor.

04:07:332 (247332|1) - Move to 3 again to avoid anchoring.

04:25:848 (265848|2,265926|0,266004|2,266082|1,266160|2,266238|3) - Rearrange to 1|3|2|3|2|3 to avoid that somewhat long trill at the right side.

04:33:113 (273113|2) - Move to 4 for anchor avoidance.

[seven key]
00:30:457 (30457|5,30613|2) - Are you following the reverse cymbal here? I initially thought you were going for the vocal, so this was a bit confusing.

00:40:242 (40242|2,40301|0) - Sounds more like a 1/12 triplet grace if I'm hearing that correctly.

00:45:340 (45340|2) - Can't really seem to hear a sound that supports this. Also, move 00:45:379 (45379|4) - down to 00:45:359 - to follow the piano.

01:53:270 - This part could use more notes for that drum.

02:17:723 (137723|4) - I'm not really hearing a sound there.

02:53:895 - to 02:56:238 - Part seems to be a bit heavy on the left hand. You could move 02:54:363 (174363|2,174441|1) - to 4,5 and move 02:55:301 (175301|1) - to 5 to alleviate that and to make a slightly broken stair pattern.

02:56:629 (176629|6,176707|6) - Idk, I'm not really feeling this mini-jack. This feels like an unexpected pattern that completely contradicts the flow this map has, and it's uncomfortable to transition after on the right hand. It'd be better if you could rearrange it to something like 04:42:801 - so it highlights the kick and also makes the overall pattern much better to play.

03:11:395 - Feels alright for right hand but really biased on the left. It's really tricky to do trills using the ring/index finger and thumb.
I'd suggest using this pattern to create some hand balance with the patterns. It's not as concrete as it previously was, but at least it makes it easier for the left hand to play through.

03:52:645 - I think it'd be neat if this pattern can be the exact mirror pattern of 03:51:395 - just for asymmetry and also to accentuate the piano chords.

04:44:363 (284363|4) - Turn this into two 1/4 LNs for that piano.

Pretty fun map. Good luck!
Topic Starter
Arzenvald

Blocko wrote:

hi there uhh i kinda forgot about your black and white map you asked me to mod so uhh heres a mod

you should probably change the diff names to something better and something that at least relates to the song though

[four key]
00:38:895 - Snap kinda conflicts with the 7K diff, might wanna check that out. // fixed

01:11:707 (71707|1,72020|0,72332|2) - You could extend these to 1/1 LNs to highlight those synths. // tasty, ok

01:37:176 (97176|2,97176|3) - Following the way you patterned out this section, shouldn't this be a single note? // the kicks that has 1/1 distance from snare has doubles, and the 1/2 distance only 1 note, but emphasized by anchor, dunno whether the odd is a good idea

02:28:895 - to 02:31:395 - Feels a bit left hand biased. You could balance this out by moving 02:29:363 (149363|0) - and 02:30:613 (150613|0) - to 4. // done

03:16:395 (196395|3) - Move to 3 to avoid that long 5-note anchor. // the anchor was intended tho, but either way fixed

04:07:332 (247332|1) - Move to 3 again to avoid anchoring. // ok

04:25:848 (265848|2,265926|0,266004|2,266082|1,266160|2,266238|3) - Rearrange to 1|3|2|3|2|3 to avoid that somewhat long trill at the right side.

04:33:113 (273113|2) - Move to 4 for anchor avoidance.

[seven key]
00:30:457 (30457|5,30613|2) - Are you following the reverse cymbal here? I initially thought you were going for the vocal, so this was a bit confusing. // yea, its somehow contrast enough to be layered

00:40:242 (40242|2,40301|0) - Sounds more like a 1/12 triplet grace if I'm hearing that correctly.

00:45:340 (45340|2) - Can't really seem to hear a sound that supports this. Also, move 00:45:379 (45379|4) - down to 00:45:359 - to follow the piano.

01:53:270 - This part could use more notes for that drum.

02:17:723 (137723|4) - I'm not really hearing a sound there.

02:53:895 - to 02:56:238 - Part seems to be a bit heavy on the left hand. You could move 02:54:363 (174363|2,174441|1) - to 4,5 and move 02:55:301 (175301|1) - to 5 to alleviate that and to make a slightly broken stair pattern.

02:56:629 (176629|6,176707|6) - Idk, I'm not really feeling this mini-jack. This feels like an unexpected pattern that completely contradicts the flow this map has, and it's uncomfortable to transition after on the right hand. It'd be better if you could rearrange it to something like 04:42:801 - so it highlights the kick and also makes the overall pattern much better to play.

03:11:395 - Feels alright for right hand but really biased on the left. It's really tricky to do trills using the ring/index finger and thumb.
I'd suggest using this pattern to create some hand balance with the patterns. It's not as concrete as it previously was, but at least it makes it easier for the left hand to play through. // rearranged with my own pattern, symmetrical but somehow with more aesthetic C:

03:52:645 - I think it'd be neat if this pattern can be the exact mirror pattern of 03:51:395 - just for asymmetry and also to accentuate the piano chords.

04:44:363 (284363|4) - Turn this into two 1/4 LNs for that piano.

Pretty fun map. Good luck!
all unreplied means done, wow thank you for the mod <3
refixed the hs before bn check, hope its ready now
Verniy_Chan
ET map
Sandalphon
Mod why not
[The 4K one]
00:07:645 (7645|0) - smh feels this Ln should start at 00:07:488 -
00:19:520 - add a new LN here? as you can hear the changing pitch on the main sound
00:29:441 - img make it more evil
01:05:926 (65926|2,66082|3) - arent they same pitch?
01:52:801 - hmm... these two are the same pitch 01:52:801 (112801|3,112879|0) - , so jacking these two 01:52:879 (112879|0,112957|0) - plays kinda weird imo
02:56:551 - same here
03:32:332 (212332|0,212332|1,212488|2,212488|3) - same col pls ;w;
Topic Starter
Arzenvald

YaHao wrote:

Mod why not
[The 4K one]
00:07:645 (7645|0) - smh feels this Ln should start at 00:07:488 - // i caught reversed cymbal here, gud addition uwu
00:19:520 - add a new LN here? as you can hear the changing pitch on the main sound // added, in 7K too
00:29:441 - img make it more evil // hhh
01:05:926 (65926|2,66082|3) - arent they same pitch? // ok
01:52:801 - hmm... these two are the same pitch 01:52:801 (112801|3,112879|0) - , so jacking these two 01:52:879 (112879|0,112957|0) - plays kinda weird imo // ooo ok
02:56:551 - same here // done
03:32:332 (212332|0,212332|1,212488|2,212488|3) - same col pls ;w; // intended tho :^) moved anyway
gib me more flower
Akasha-
ewww Nanahira
Actually I'm kinda confuse about the metadata tho, tfw no pages says about the artist name probably, just includes (Arrange: Camellia Lyrics: Camellia) only
Still, only includes singer's name on artist is actually weird imo (?)

At least this song is different, emotional than those "Bassu to-drop boo" genres.
Nice map
Good luck btw!

P.S.: So sorry, I can't help checking your map again, but wish you the best then.

Edit: check back 00:20:613 - on your 7K difficulty about overlapping notes
(Did you put Mahou Shoujo Madoka Magica as BG :thinking:)
Topic Starter
Arzenvald
flower blooms between 2 fine grills, yeah that's why i pick dis bg :^))

im not really good about the metadata, all i know is referring to the album, each song has different composer, but the vocal is all about nanahira, right? http://confetto.chu.jp/secretale/

i'll fix the overlap later, my pc is totally broken at this moment, thank you for the help btw <3
-mint-
map sucks, bg also sucks
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