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Nanahira - Petals [OsuMania]

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Arzenvald
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sunday, November 21, 2021 at 3:23:51 AM

Artist: Nanahira
Title: Petals
Tags: Featured Artist FA japanese pop electronic drum and bass dnb d'n'b secretale confetto cametek camellia かめりあ artcore Marathon Comiket コミケット Comic Market コミックマーケット 91 リリース C91 Evaine Sjao Alisa Spring 2018 Fanart
BPM: 192
Filesize: 17826kb
Play Time: 05:27
Difficulties Available:
  1. ~ fragments of the night ~ // seven key - 7Key (6.86 stars, 4129 notes)
  2. ~ furrows of tomorrow ~ // four key - 4Key (4.99 stars, 3484 notes)


Download: Nanahira - Petals
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Album : http://confetto.chu.jp/secretale/
Artist : Nanahira
Title : Petals
Music : Camellia
Background Art : Sjao - Spring 2018 Fanart
Shinzo-
01:07:176 - suarany bukannya sama kek 01:06:863 (66863|1,66863|3,67020|3,67020|1) - ?
01:48:582 - entahlah, ini variasi? (01:38:582 - 01:38:582 - )
04:23:895 - msih ad suara sih tpi... gtw wkwk
05:03:113 (303113|1,303191|3) - tuker ? ato serah cm "nyaranin" jack di 05:03:191 - 05:03:270 - buat suara 1/8 nya
Topic Starter
Arzenvald
applied! mashallah pendeknya :'D
Shima Rin
I was intending to make this but hmmm....

then i will focus on my Bassdrop Freaks...

Mod here XDD ;)

[Flowers]
  1. 01:22:566 (82566|1,82645|2,82723|1,82801|2) - and 01:22:957 (82957|1,83035|2,83113|1,83191|2) - are really similar, i suggest u vary the pattern between them
  2. 01:29:207 - 01:29:832 - 01:30:457 - 01:31:082 - these sounds should definitely be emphasized by the double cuz u use double for these sounds before, and it is strong enough to put double. If u are concerned about marking the difference between 01:29:051 (89051|3,89051|2,89207|3) -, u can make those in different columns so that they will be emphasized and difference will be noted out obviously
  3. 01:37:176 (97176|1,97176|3) - this is the same sound as 01:34:676 (94676|1,95301|2,95926|1) - so if u double that, u have to double all of these 01:34:676 (94676|1,95301|2,95926|1) -
  4. 01:37:801 - 01:38:426 - make sure u also double these two if u accept my previous idea
  5. 01:39:676 (99676|2,100301|1,100926|2,102801|2,103504|1) - ^
  6. 01:44:676 (104676|2,105301|1,105926|2,107801|2,109676|1,110301|2,110926|1) - ^
  7. 01:49:520 - 01:50:145 - 01:50:770 - u only put double notes in this part for the vocal sound but not on the previous parts. It seems really inconsistent cuz this part really doesnt make such big difference with the previous one. I suggest not to double these sounds too in this part
  8. 01:52:801 (112801|2,112801|3,112879|0) - they have the same sounds, so better double 01:52:879 (112879|0) -
  9. 01:54:676 (114676|0,115301|3,115926|1,117801|3,118426|0) - same as above
  10. 01:58:895 - u also need a double here
  11. 01:59:676 (119676|3,120301|0,120926|1,122801|0,123426|2,123738|3) - same for double
  12. 02:04:676 (124676|3,125301|2,125926|0,127801|2,128426|3,128895|2) - ^
  13. wont go forward for the double notes issue. Remember just to double those with W sound
  14. 02:13:582 (133582|0,133582|1,133582|2,133660|3,133738|2,133816|1) - 02:08:582 (128582|0,128582|1,128582|3,128660|2,128738|0,128738|3,128816|1) - should all be double? according to this: 01:43:582 (103582|2,103582|3,103660|1,103660|0,103738|2,103738|3,103816|1,103816|0) -
  15. 02:17:488 - 02:17:801 - need double and add W sounds
  16. 02:22:332 - 02:22:645 - better add notes here
  17. 02:23:113 (143113|1,143270|1,143738|2,143895|2) - if ok u may avoid such small jacks imo
  18. 02:33:895 - to 02:35:145 - should all be double imo. As u can see this part: 02:23:895 - 1/1 02:31:395 - 1/2 02:33:895 - 1/4
  19. 02:47:488 (167488|1) - may wanna move to 4 to at least nerf some left-hand bias here
  20. 02:56:551 (176551|0,176551|1,176629|3) - these two same sounds so if double then both double
  21. 03:09:207 (189207|1,189207|0,189233|2,189233|3) - what's this???
  22. 03:12:020 (192020|3,192020|0,192020|2) - only F sound here why triple? better nerf to single note
  23. 03:17:020 (197020|2,197020|0,197020|3) - ^
  24. 03:46:551 - piano sound here add notes
  25. 04:07:645 - 04:08:270 - 04:08:895 - 04:10:145 - 04:11:395 - make them all double notes cuz F sound just like what u do at 04:12:645 (252645|3,252645|0) -
  26. 04:19:207 (259207|3,259832|0,260457|1,261082|2) - double them. Reason as 01:29:207 - 01:29:832 - 01:30:457 - 01:31:082 -
  27. 04:42:801 (282801|2,282801|0,282879|3) - so if double both double
  28. 04:46:082 (286082|1,286082|3,286082|0,286160|2,286238|1,286238|0,286316|3,286395|0,286395|2) - why not try double all of them like what u did here 04:48:582 (288582|3,288582|2,288660|0,288660|1,288738|2,288738|3,288816|1,288816|0,288895|3,288895|2) -


That's all. Good luck and hope my mods can help you! ;)
Virtue-
marked =w=
Topic Starter
Arzenvald
im so sad

ready for bn check
Leonita

Arzenvald wrote:

im so sad

ready for bn check
kode?
Topic Starter
Arzenvald

Leonita wrote:

Arzenvald wrote:

im so sad

ready for bn check
kode?
maw dun
DoNotMess
i will report this map if it gets ranked before deus ex machina does
Topic Starter
Arzenvald
kudosu'd for IRC mod, thank!
riunosk
from mod queue 1 2 3 4
00:30:457 (30457|2,30613|1) - if these were following the vocals, 00:31:707 - there should be notes here and 00:32:957 - and so on
00:42:645 (42645|1,42645|2) - on hearing at 25%, it sounds like a triple note burst
01:31:395 (91395|0,91551|0,91707|0,91863|0,92020|0,92176|0,92332|0) - im assuming this is intended?
01:42:957 (102957|1,103113|1,103270|1,103504|1,103660|1,103816|1) - somewhat broken anchor
01:52:879 (112879|0,112957|0) - any reason for forcing this minijack?
02:55:457 (175457|2,175613|2,175770|2,175926|2) - anchor
04:43:113 (283113|2,283270|2,283426|2,283582|2,283738|2,283895|2,284051|2,284207|2,284363|2) - ^
04:44:207 (284207|1,284363|1,284520|1,284676|1,284832|1) - ^why
04:45:457 (285457|3,285613|3,285770|3,285926|3,286082|3) - ^the
04:46:395 (286395|2,286551|2,286707|2,286863|2,287020|2,287176|2) - ^sudden
04:47:332 (287332|0,287488|0,287645|0,287801|0,287957|0,288113|0,288270|0,288426|0) - ^anchor
04:50:770 (290770|3,290926|3,291082|3,291238|3,291395|3,291551|3,291707|3) - ^spike
04:51:082 (291082|0,291238|0,291395|0,291551|0,291707|0,291863|0,292020|0) - ^??
04:52:020 (292020|3,292176|3,292332|3,292488|3,292645|3,292801|3,292957|3,293113|3,293270|3,293426|3,293582|3,293738|3,293895|3) - big one
04:57:332 (297332|3,297488|3,297645|3,297801|3,297957|3,298113|3,298270|3,298426|3) - ^
04:59:207 (299207|3,299363|3,299520|3,299676|3,299832|3,299988|3,300145|3,300301|3,300457|3) - ^
Interesting chart, but sudden anchor spikes at the end
gud luk for renk

btw what has camellia got to do with anything here? did he make the track?


also i added a new map that you can do a m4m for here


juicy bg
DDMythical
1 / 2 / 3 / 4

ignoring the no marathon rule on my queue because cute loli bg you m4m'd

What a strange place for a preview point!
I would cut the mp3 to save filespace because bns are generally picky about that. You can easily move the preview point so i imagine this wont be a major issue for you.
01:14:363 (74363|1,74520|1,74676|1) - Strange anchors in the stream, Could repattern out
01:15:613 (75613|1,75770|1,75926|1) - ^
01:18:035 (78035|2,78191|2,78348|2,78504|2) - ^
01:20:770 (80770|2,80926|2,81082|2) - ^
01:23:035 (83035|2,83191|2,83348|2,83504|2) - ^
01:23:973 (83973|2,84129|2,84285|2) - ^
01:24:832 (84832|1,84988|1,85145|1) - ^
02:23:738 (143738|2) - This note is a bit weird as it leads into the massively long anchor but with a different sound. You could put this on 4th column and change the previous double to [12]


reeee i literally cant mod this because its really well layered and i cant notice any problems
HXJ_Crafter
XD Congratz for BN check
Topic Starter
Arzenvald

riunosk wrote:

from mod queue 1 2 3 4
00:30:457 (30457|2,30613|1) - if these were following the vocals, 00:31:707 - there should be notes here and 00:32:957 - and so on // i follow some kind of echo, not vocal

00:42:645 (42645|1,42645|2) - on hearing at 25%, it sounds like a triple note burst // ahh, too hard to hear though D:

01:31:395 (91395|0,91551|0,91707|0,91863|0,92020|0,92176|0,92332|0) - im assuming this is intended? // nope, moved some

01:42:957 (102957|1,103113|1,103270|1,103504|1,103660|1,103816|1) - somewhat broken anchor // mm i'll move some stuff

01:52:879 (112879|0,112957|0) - any reason for forcing this minijack? // hoo for transition to the next part, kinda light tho so i think its fine

02:55:457 (175457|2,175613|2,175770|2,175926|2) - anchor // keep, actually to make things a little intense towards the end of the kiai

04:43:113 (283113|2,283270|2,283426|2,283582|2,283738|2,283895|2,284051|2,284207|2,284363|2) - ^
04:44:207 (284207|1,284363|1,284520|1,284676|1,284832|1) - ^why
04:45:457 (285457|3,285613|3,285770|3,285926|3,286082|3) - ^the
04:46:395 (286395|2,286551|2,286707|2,286863|2,287020|2,287176|2) - ^sudden
04:47:332 (287332|0,287488|0,287645|0,287801|0,287957|0,288113|0,288270|0,288426|0) - ^anchor
04:50:770 (290770|3,290926|3,291082|3,291238|3,291395|3,291551|3,291707|3) - ^spike
04:51:082 (291082|0,291238|0,291395|0,291551|0,291707|0,291863|0,292020|0) - ^??
04:52:020 (292020|3,292176|3,292332|3,292488|3,292645|3,292801|3,292957|3,293113|3,293270|3,293426|3,293582|3,293738|3,293895|3) - big one
04:57:332 (297332|3,297488|3,297645|3,297801|3,297957|3,298113|3,298270|3,298426|3) - ^
04:59:207 (299207|3,299363|3,299520|3,299676|3,299832|3,299988|3,300145|3,300301|3,300457|3) - ^
// hehehe, i'll try to move some anchors, but they were intended for the stream direction, left-to-right and right-to-left stream direction, following pitches per each stanzas, i'll see if i can reduce the anchor, i forgot to put bookmarks tho
Interesting chart, but sudden anchor spikes at the end
gud luk for renk

btw what has camellia got to do with anything here? did he make the track?


also i added a new map that you can do a m4m for here


juicy bg

DDMythical wrote:

1 / 2 / 3 / 4

ignoring the no marathon rule on my queue because cute loli bg you m4m'd

What a strange place for a preview point!
I would cut the mp3 to save filespace because bns are generally picky about that. You can easily move the preview point so i imagine this wont be a major issue for you.
01:14:363 (74363|1,74520|1,74676|1) - Strange anchors in the stream, Could repattern out
01:15:613 (75613|1,75770|1,75926|1) - ^
01:18:035 (78035|2,78191|2,78348|2,78504|2) - ^
01:20:770 (80770|2,80926|2,81082|2) - ^
01:23:035 (83035|2,83191|2,83348|2,83504|2) - ^
01:23:973 (83973|2,84129|2,84285|2) - ^
01:24:832 (84832|1,84988|1,85145|1) - ^
02:23:738 (143738|2) - This note is a bit weird as it leads into the massively long anchor but with a different sound. You could put this on 4th column and change the previous double to [12] // only keep this, the small anchor is actually intended, that's how i put kick > snare or kick > cymbol (or big beats)


reeee i literally cant mod this because its really well layered and i cant notice any problems

Tofu1222 wrote:

I was intending to make this but hmmm....

then i will focus on my Bassdrop Freaks...

Mod here XDD ;)

[Flowers]
  1. 01:22:566 (82566|1,82645|2,82723|1,82801|2) - and 01:22:957 (82957|1,83035|2,83113|1,83191|2) - are really similar, i suggest u vary the pattern between them // ok
  2. 01:29:207 - 01:29:832 - 01:30:457 - 01:31:082 - these sounds should definitely be emphasized by the double cuz u use double for these sounds before, and it is strong enough to put double. If u are concerned about marking the difference between 01:29:051 (89051|3,89051|2,89207|3) -, u can make those in different columns so that they will be emphasized and difference will be noted out obviously // i'll keep this, its kind of gimmick where the anchor has emphasized the light snare already hihihi
  3. 01:37:176 (97176|1,97176|3) - this is the same sound as 01:34:676 (94676|1,95301|2,95926|1) - so if u double that, u have to double all of these 01:34:676 (94676|1,95301|2,95926|1) - // another gimmick i try to implement here, you got the idea, the kick sound where it has 1/2 space before the snare has 1 note, the anchor emphasize it, while the double one is where the kick far enough to the next snare.. i'll refine this arrangement either way
  4. 01:37:801 - 01:38:426 - make sure u also double these two if u accept my previous idea
  5. 01:39:676 (99676|2,100301|1,100926|2,102801|2,103504|1) - ^
  6. 01:44:676 (104676|2,105301|1,105926|2,107801|2,109676|1,110301|2,110926|1) - ^
  7. 01:49:520 - 01:50:145 - 01:50:770 - u only put double notes in this part for the vocal sound but not on the previous parts. It seems really inconsistent cuz this part really doesnt make such big difference with the previous one. I suggest not to double these sounds too in this part // hehe you got the idea of this double, and yea it was intended to add some notes to highlight them so it become sightly (but not really) denser to the end of kiai, i want to give some escalating density in there, will consider to remove tho!
  8. 01:52:801 (112801|2,112801|3,112879|0) - they have the same sounds, so better double 01:52:879 (112879|0) - // oo i'll make them single then.. applied
  9. 01:54:676 (114676|0,115301|3,115926|1,117801|3,118426|0) - same as above // i might add doubles here to differ this section and the previous one.. thought?
  10. 01:58:895 - u also need a double here // okay
  11. 01:59:676 (119676|3,120301|0,120926|1,122801|0,123426|2,123738|3) - same for double
  12. 02:04:676 (124676|3,125301|2,125926|0,127801|2,128426|3,128895|2) - ^
  13. wont go forward for the double notes issue. Remember just to double those with W sound // xD i know, if more people point this out i'll consider to fix
  14. 02:13:582 (133582|0,133582|1,133582|2,133660|3,133738|2,133816|1) - 02:08:582 (128582|0,128582|1,128582|3,128660|2,128738|0,128738|3,128816|1) - should all be double? according to this: 01:43:582 (103582|2,103582|3,103660|1,103660|0,103738|2,103738|3,103816|1,103816|0) - // different section, also the denser JS is on kiai
  15. 02:17:488 - 02:17:801 - need double and add W sounds // omg i didn't caught those kick, added
  16. 02:22:332 - 02:22:645 - better add notes here // hmm i have different idea
  17. 02:23:113 (143113|1,143270|1,143738|2,143895|2) - if ok u may avoid such small jacks imo
  18. 02:33:895 - to 02:35:145 - should all be double imo. As u can see this part: 02:23:895 - 1/1 02:31:395 - 1/2 02:33:895 - 1/4 // welp i won't make long JS, but instead its become denser now
  19. 02:47:488 (167488|1) - may wanna move to 4 to at least nerf some left-hand bias here // ok, evil D:
  20. 02:56:551 (176551|0,176551|1,176629|3) - these two same sounds so if double then both double // ok
  21. 03:09:207 (189207|1,189207|0,189233|2,189233|3) - what's this??? // echo XD im sure there's 2 different snare there
  22. 03:12:020 (192020|3,192020|0,192020|2) - only F sound here why triple? better nerf to single note // the chime is somehow contrast to be layered differently, so i put triple
  23. 03:17:020 (197020|2,197020|0,197020|3) - ^ // same
  24. 03:46:551 - piano sound here add notes
  25. 04:07:645 - 04:08:270 - 04:08:895 - 04:10:145 - 04:11:395 - make them all double notes cuz F sound just like what u do at 04:12:645 (252645|3,252645|0) - // different part, those single are intended as a variation :D
  26. 04:19:207 (259207|3,259832|0,260457|1,261082|2) - double them. Reason as 01:29:207 - 01:29:832 - 01:30:457 - 01:31:082 - // ok
  27. 04:42:801 (282801|2,282801|0,282879|3) - so if double both double
  28. 04:46:082 (286082|1,286082|3,286082|0,286160|2,286238|1,286238|0,286316|3,286395|0,286395|2) - why not try double all of them like what u did here 04:48:582 (288582|3,288582|2,288660|0,288660|1,288738|2,288738|3,288816|1,288816|0,288895|3,288895|2) - // different sound


That's all. Good luck and hope my mods can help you! ;) // it really is! thank you for the detailed mods! some idea aren't fully rejected, some are rearranged differently
thank you for the mods! they are really helpful! :D
eyes
good map, but too sad that 2nd and 3rd kiai are the SAME. I suggest you to make 2nd kiai in more LN oriented style, then make 3rd kiai a combination of 1st and 2nd kiai
please consider this
Mage
just some things

00:00:145 - 00:05:145 - make doubles
01:04:051 - sound, add note
01:04:285 - add note, but i'm not sure, maybe you wanted to highlight vocal
02:57:176 - 02:57:410 - should be doubles
03:42:957 - LNs should ends here cuz sound ends here
04:09:520 - 04:10:145 - 04:10:770 - 04:11:395 - would be cool if you put here doubles to highlight vocal
04:23:895 - double?
Topic Starter
Arzenvald
@eyes thank you!
i actually aware that since the beginning, considering how long the song is and how repetitive they are, and so i only differs the stream density instead, getting harder from the 1st chorus to the next one if you compare them.
i would love actually apply your idea tho! thank you btw :D

edit : the SR raised to 4.9 LOL

Mage wrote:

just some things

00:00:145 - 00:05:145 - make doubles // i got the idea, but i'll keep everything single in the intro :3

01:04:051 - sound, add note // added and some thing rearranged
01:04:285 - add note, but i'm not sure, maybe you wanted to highlight vocal // rearranged as above ^

02:57:176 - 02:57:410 - should be doubles // applied differently

03:42:957 - LNs should ends here cuz sound ends here // 1/4 earlier but okay!

04:09:520 - 04:10:145 - 04:10:770 - 04:11:395 - would be cool if you put here doubles to highlight vocal // hmmmmmmmm i want to D: but i want to make a single stream in this section

04:23:895 - double? // dense and evil.. i like it.. ok!
thank you for mod! o,o not sure if next mod will points out another issue
Virtue-


General


- Metadata : OK!
- BPM/Offset : OK!
- BG/Video : OK!
- Hitsound : OK!
- Files : OK!

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  • [Flower]
  1. 00:17:020 (17020|0,17645|1,18738|3,18816|2,18895|1) - http://puu.sh/wHjO1/3b17283177.jpg gpp sih, cmn rada susah gitu ya mencetny. 00:17:020 (17020|0) - mending turunin ujungny 1 bar biar sejajar sama sblhny, biar ena
  2. 00:19:832 (19832|2,19910|3,19988|0) - jadiin gini aja, ena kok http://puu.sh/wHjUl/64c058b487.jpg
  3. 00:21:395 (21395|3) - sama nih, turunin 1 bar
  4. 00:28:895 (28895|3,28895|2,29363|0,29441|1,29520|3,29598|2,29676|1,29754|0,29832|2,29910|3,29988|2,30066|1) - http://puu.sh/wHjXm/87f96a5162.jpg pls ajee, susah amat di pencet astaga.. cobain ini dah http://puu.sh/wHjZb/fb0d2121c6.jpg
  5. 01:46:551 - add note, ada hi hat
  6. 01:53:582 (113582|3,113660|2) - double aja
  7. 02:07:801 (127801|2,128426|3) - sengaja single?
  8. 02:37:254 (157254|2,157293|1,157332|0,157371|3,157410|2,157449|1,157488|0,157527|2,157566|1,157605|3,157645|0,157645|2) - :'VV mungkin gini lebih gud http://puu.sh/wHkkD/65eb337701.png
  9. 03:36:941 - add LN buat vocal?
  10. 03:59:051 - add note, ada piano
  11. 04:01:395 (241395|0) - jadiin LN buat vocal, trs tambahin LN juga di 04:02:645 -
i guess that's it, good luck!
Topic Starter
Arzenvald
sorry lama balesnya lagi farming PP & latihan DT aoawokwkwkwkwkwk
sek sek

Virtue- wrote:



General


- Metadata : OK!
- BPM/Offset : OK!
- BG/Video : OK!
- Hitsound : OK!
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  • [Flower]
  1. 00:17:020 (17020|0,17645|1,18738|3,18816|2,18895|1) - http://puu.sh/wHjO1/3b17283177.jpg gpp sih, cmn rada susah gitu ya mencetny. 00:17:020 (17020|0) - mending turunin ujungny 1 bar biar sejajar sama sblhny, biar ena // a e s t h e t i c s
  2. 00:19:832 (19832|2,19910|3,19988|0) - jadiin gini aja, ena kok http://puu.sh/wHjUl/64c058b487.jpg // pen nge mirror yg atas :C
  3. 00:21:395 (21395|3) - sama nih, turunin 1 bar // :S hmm pen konsisten sama yg atas
  4. 00:28:895 (28895|3,28895|2,29363|0,29441|1,29520|3,29598|2,29676|1,29754|0,29832|2,29910|3,29988|2,30066|1) - http://puu.sh/wHjXm/87f96a5162.jpg pls ajee, susah amat di pencet astaga.. cobain ini dah http://puu.sh/wHjZb/fb0d2121c6.jpg // sek sek, di bikin lebih mudah
  5. 01:46:551 - add note, ada hi hat // spicy spacing, keep, gimmick tho
  6. 01:53:582 (113582|3,113660|2) - double aja // sek, baru kiai 1, di bikin gk mashy, (di bedain sama kiai 2)
  7. 02:07:801 (127801|2,128426|3) - sengaja single? // di semua part yg nge-anchor 1/2 satu satu aja C:
  8. 02:37:254 (157254|2,157293|1,157332|0,157371|3,157410|2,157449|1,157488|0,157527|2,157566|1,157605|3,157645|0,157645|2) - :'VV mungkin gini lebih gud http://puu.sh/wHkkD/65eb337701.png // yah, 02:37:488 (157488|0,157527|2,157566|1,157605|3,157645|2) - ini nya sengaja biar gk JS banget
  9. 03:36:941 - add LN buat vocal? // no vocal, biar yg main pencet pencetan improvisasi sendiri awokawokwokwkwk
  10. 03:59:051 - add note, ada piano // ok, headset gw kurang bagus, add ae lah klo kata org ada piano mah
  11. 04:01:395 (241395|0) - jadiin LN buat vocal, trs tambahin LN juga di 04:02:645 - // nda mau isi vocal huee..
i guess that's it, good luck!
yah di apply 1 doangan D: btw thanks dah nge cek beb <3
Unpredictable
not all too big on Nanahira but i like camellia tho >:]

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- 01:23:895 I was thinking about adding another note here..? My reasoning for it is I think that it's way more significant than 01:24:207 (84207|0,84207|3) - and with a hand, I think it shows difference and emphasize. Up to you tho
- 02:30:691 (150691|2,150848|2) - eh not a fan of the stack here, maybe moving 02:30:691 (150691|2) - this to column 4?
Not else to say :D

Honestly, this map is really good. I seriously like it a lot. It follows the song pretty well and I couldn't find much wrong with it. You might have made me like Nanahira a little bit more. ;) Take a star as well! Wasn't much but hope you enjoy. :)

P.S. This BG tho is uh... wow is uh like "definitely" about flowers ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
eyes
General
Add tags: Comiket コミケット Comic Market コミックマーケット 91 リリース C91
MAybe reduce BG picture's resolution to 1366x996 for decreasing file size

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[Flowers]
Reduce OD to 7.7-7.9 because of complex LNs

by 00:00:145 - till 00:10:145 - too loud hitsounds, please reduce to +-20%

00:10:145 - make this triple, because this it has bass sound, but 00:27:645 - this double has no bass sound.

00:35:281 (35281|2) - I think it should be on 00:35:301

00:37:762 (37762|0) - delete? I can't catch the sound

00:38:953 (38953|0) - delete (same reason as above) and move it 00:39:012 (39012|3) - to 00:39:025

00:40:223 (40223|1) - not sure but I think should be on 00:40:249

00:57:671 - missed sound maybe
01:02:684 - ^

01:34:676 (94676|1,95301|2,95926|1,97801|1,99676|2,100301|1,100926|2,102801|2,104676|2,105301|1,105926|2,109676|1,110301|2,110926|1) - I think these should be doubles

Suggestion: 04:43:973 (283973|1) - move to 04:43:895

upd: 03:09:207 (189207|1) - remove hitsound, these two notes 03:09:207 (189207|0,189233|3) - are very close and sounds almost in one moment so it sounds like 3 snares
Topic Starter
Arzenvald

eyes wrote:

General
Add tags: Comiket コミケット Comic Market コミックマーケット 91 リリース C91 // added
MAybe reduce BG picture's resolution to 1366x996 for decreasing file size // 1920x1080, sure

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[Flowers]
Reduce OD to 7.7-7.9 because of complex LNs // the rest of the map is only rice though, the ln part only covers at least 10% of total, would be too easy to mash

by 00:00:145 - till 00:10:145 - too loud hitsounds, please reduce to +-20% // keep, instead added keysounds :^^^)

00:10:145 - make this triple, because this it has bass sound, but 00:27:645 - this double has no bass sound. // keep, the anchor should be enough to emphasize, also too early imo

00:35:281 (35281|2) - I think it should be on 00:35:301 // omg nice catch

00:37:762 (37762|0) - delete? I can't catch the sound // the highest pitch of the glissando is there, keep

00:38:953 (38953|0) - delete (same reason as above) and move it 00:39:012 (39012|3) - to 00:39:025 // ^ same reason

00:40:223 (40223|1) - not sure but I think should be on 00:40:249 // i think so, moved

00:57:671 - missed sound maybe
01:02:684 - ^ // nice idea, added :D

01:34:676 (94676|1,95301|2,95926|1,97801|1,99676|2,100301|1,100926|2,102801|2,104676|2,105301|1,105926|2,109676|1,110301|2,110926|1) - I think these should be doubles // as i stated in previous mod reply, will keep the kicks on anchor with single note when it has 1/2 distance to the snare, and double if it has 1/1 distance to the snare

Suggestion: 04:43:973 (283973|1) - move to 04:43:895 // nice, moved

upd: 03:09:207 (189207|1) - remove hitsound, these two notes 03:09:207 (189207|0,189233|3) - are very close and sounds almost in one moment so it sounds like 3 snares // yuss sounds better now, removed..

Unpredictable wrote:

not all too big on Nanahira but i like camellia tho >:]

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- 01:23:895 I was thinking about adding another note here..? My reasoning for it is I think that it's way more significant than 01:24:207 (84207|0,84207|3) - and with a hand, I think it shows difference and emphasize. Up to you tho // mmmm naw, still not as intense as the other downbeat, considerable tho
- 02:30:691 (150691|2,150848|2) - eh not a fan of the stack here, maybe moving 02:30:691 (150691|2) - this to column 4? // a follow up from 02:30:613 (150613|0,150770|0) - but sure, moved
Not else to say :D

Honestly, this map is really good. I seriously like it a lot. It follows the song pretty well and I couldn't find much wrong with it. You might have made me like Nanahira a little bit more. ;) Take a star as well! Wasn't much but hope you enjoy. :)

P.S. This BG tho is uh... wow is uh like "definitely" about flowers ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
thank you guys, very helpful mod is very helpful <3 <3 <3
MrDorian
Hi owo/
I'm from RRM queue and here's your mod!
sniped Kaito :^)
01:29:207 (89207|3) - I do not really understand why it is one note only. There is that "tick" and 01:29:051 (89051|2) - "bass" or how to call this sound. It is rather inconsistent because there's strong sound combined with another sound. I'd suggest adding another note in 2 to make 4 notes stack.
01:37:801 (97801|1) - missing note, the sound has the same intensitivity as 01:36:395 (96395|2) -
01:42:801 (102801|2) - 01:47:801 (107801|2) - ^
01:50:145 (110145|3,110145|0) - this should have one note, is different with 01:49:520 (109520|3,109520|2) -
02:17:723 (137723|1) - are you sure there's a sound?
02:55:926 (175926|2) - could you move it to 4? 4 notes anchor looks terrible here
03:51:707 (231707|1) - you could move this to 4, because 03:51:863 (231863|2) - here sounds start to repeat
04:19:207 (259207|3) - same suggestion as before in similiar part
04:25:613 (265613|1) - move to 4 to avoid anchor on 2 perhaps
04:43:113 (283113|2,283152|3,283191|0,283230|1,283270|2,283270|3,283348|0,283426|2,283426|1,283504|0,283504|3,283582|2,283660|0,283660|1,283738|2,283738|3) - you could ctrl+h this, right hand is used a bit in this kiai

that bookmark spam later wew
nice one, couldn't find much :'v
good luck owo/
call me when u'll finish 7k, gonna mod it as well
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