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Verniy_Chan
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Sandalphon
Mod why not
[The 4K one]
00:07:645 (7645|0) - smh feels this Ln should start at 00:07:488 -
00:19:520 - add a new LN here? as you can hear the changing pitch on the main sound
00:29:441 - img make it more evil
01:05:926 (65926|2,66082|3) - arent they same pitch?
01:52:801 - hmm... these two are the same pitch 01:52:801 (112801|3,112879|0) - , so jacking these two 01:52:879 (112879|0,112957|0) - plays kinda weird imo
02:56:551 - same here
03:32:332 (212332|0,212332|1,212488|2,212488|3) - same col pls ;w;
Topic Starter
Arzenvald

YaHao wrote:

Mod why not
[The 4K one]
00:07:645 (7645|0) - smh feels this Ln should start at 00:07:488 - // i caught reversed cymbal here, gud addition uwu
00:19:520 - add a new LN here? as you can hear the changing pitch on the main sound // added, in 7K too
00:29:441 - img make it more evil // hhh
01:05:926 (65926|2,66082|3) - arent they same pitch? // ok
01:52:801 - hmm... these two are the same pitch 01:52:801 (112801|3,112879|0) - , so jacking these two 01:52:879 (112879|0,112957|0) - plays kinda weird imo // ooo ok
02:56:551 - same here // done
03:32:332 (212332|0,212332|1,212488|2,212488|3) - same col pls ;w; // intended tho :^) moved anyway
gib me more flower
Akasha-
ewww Nanahira
Actually I'm kinda confuse about the metadata tho, tfw no pages says about the artist name probably, just includes (Arrange: Camellia Lyrics: Camellia) only
Still, only includes singer's name on artist is actually weird imo (?)

At least this song is different, emotional than those "Bassu to-drop boo" genres.
Nice map
Good luck btw!

P.S.: So sorry, I can't help checking your map again, but wish you the best then.

Edit: check back 00:20:613 - on your 7K difficulty about overlapping notes
(Did you put Mahou Shoujo Madoka Magica as BG :thinking:)
Topic Starter
Arzenvald
flower blooms between 2 fine grills, yeah that's why i pick dis bg :^))

im not really good about the metadata, all i know is referring to the album, each song has different composer, but the vocal is all about nanahira, right? http://confetto.chu.jp/secretale/

i'll fix the overlap later, my pc is totally broken at this moment, thank you for the help btw <3
-mint-
map sucks, bg also sucks
Pachiru

qqqant wrote:

map sucks, bg also sucks
No need to be rude like this-
-mint-

Pachiru wrote:

qqqant wrote:

map sucks, bg also sucks
No need to be rude like this-
pls, it's joke
Topic Starter
Arzenvald
its a meme lol
qqqant lemme borrow some keysound for reference pls
Akasha-
Keysound also succs
Topic Starter
Arzenvald
:angery:
_VianK_

Arzenvald wrote:

its a meme lol
qqqant lemme borrow some keysound for reference pls
Alamak... ini map meme LOL
Topic Starter
Arzenvald
updated :
BG edit / improved (1920x1200)
aimod fix and stuff
riunosk
20:52 riunosk: one thing that striked me as odd
20:52 riunosk: 01:28:895 (88895|4,89051|4) - doubles but
20:53 riunosk: 01:29:363 (89363|2,89520|2,89676|2) - thereafter are triples
20:53 riunosk: i dont really hear any difference in the sound ( or maybe i dunno about 7k enough )
20:53 Evening: it's more of the snare breaking the kick pattern
20:53 Arzenvald: oo ok
20:54 Evening: so you end up with a 2 - 1 - 3 - 1 - 3 - ...
to click or not to click
:thenk:
Topic Starter
Arzenvald
fixing the keysound file, avoiding unrankable inaudible keysound and such.. not updated yet
-mint-
can borrow keysound from my map is fine with me, but ask antalf first

and i will mod this soon maybe
Kawawa
Sorry! as an old request. and I did not see 4K.
[7K]
01:28:895 - to 01:33:895 - This part is too weak.
I recommend you to add some notes more. I can actually feel the climax of the song but the note density is reversed.
It was not impressed me at all how it goes feel climax

01:57:645 (117645|6,117801|6,117957|6,118113|6,118270|6,118426|6,118582|6,118738|6) - was annoying.
01:58:426 (118426|6) - move to 5 and 01:58:504 (118504|4) - move to 6. It would be better. (Column 1/2/3/4/5/6/7)

02:07:645 - Same thing with above.

02:21:395 - It is intended for the next kick structure but kinda so weird by sudden empty rhythm.
so I think you can improve this anyway.

02:47:020 (167020|6,167020|0,167098|1,167098|5,167176|4,167176|2,167254|1,167254|5,167332|6,167332|0,167410|1,167410|5,167488|2,167488|4,167566|1,167566|5,167645|0) -
I really don't get it of this meaning. I mean it is not suitable for me as an expression for this place.
I actually became a double stream but It does not have that weight and I don't know how the trill stairs feel as a player.

03:01:395 - to 03:07:645 - To be honest, I don't get it why this part should be harder density.
this part is kinda calm from last climax 02:57:645 -
The LNs and note density with patterns you used in this part are too heavy than the part's mood.

03:11:395 - to 03:12:645 - obviously not good. The pattern did not exactly mean that a kind of expression.

04:18:895 - Same thing with 01:28:895 - too weak.

Last burst LNs are depend on each skills. so I'm fine but some are annoying.
04:59:363 (299363|3,299520|2,299676|1,299754|3,299832|0,299910|3,299988|0) -
05:02:801 (302801|6,302879|5,302957|4,302957|6) -
I considered the rhythm that how feel as a player and the relationship of climax density with surrounding structure.
I think it will be subjective but It's valid a quite. when the map revived I hope it helpful.
Topic Starter
Arzenvald
bwoah thanks for the check!
will reply and update soon :D

so many jobs to do omg ;_;

Kawawa wrote:

Sorry! as an old request. and I did not see 4K. // no problem
[7K]
01:28:895 - to 01:33:895 - This part is too weak.
I recommend you to add some notes more. I can actually feel the climax of the song but the note density is reversed.
It was not impressed me at all how it goes feel climax // i made more anchor without adding more density instead, can add some more density but i want to make some identity about simpler map, with lesser note density, at least for mediocre player like me haha

01:57:645 (117645|6,117801|6,117957|6,118113|6,118270|6,118426|6,118582|6,118738|6) - was annoying.
01:58:426 (118426|6) - move to 5 and 01:58:504 (118504|4) - move to 6. It would be better. (Column 1/2/3/4/5/6/7)

02:07:645 - Same thing with above. // there's a tick sound i try to mimick with that anchored stair, i think its a common pattern that rarely used so i go with that pattern, moved some notes in 01:58:582 - instead to reduce the anchor

02:21:395 - It is intended for the next kick structure but kinda so weird by sudden empty rhythm.
so I think you can improve this anyway.
// yeah, it was intended. i want to 'emphasize' the kick that stands out more, because after 02:18:895 - i can hear that the other instrument slowly fading out into percussion, arranged some notes anyway

02:47:020 (167020|6,167020|0,167098|1,167098|5,167176|4,167176|2,167254|1,167254|5,167332|6,167332|0,167410|1,167410|5,167488|2,167488|4,167566|1,167566|5,167645|0) -
I really don't get it of this meaning. I mean it is not suitable for me as an expression for this place.
I actually became a double stream but It does not have that weight and I don't know how the trill stairs feel as a player. // should i raise the pattern difficulty / spikiness in here?


03:01:395 - to 03:07:645 - To be honest, I don't get it why this part should be harder density.
this part is kinda calm from last climax 02:57:645 -
The LNs and note density with patterns you used in this part are too heavy than the part's mood.

03:11:395 - to 03:12:645 - obviously not good. The pattern did not exactly mean that a kind of expression.

04:18:895 - Same thing with 01:28:895 - too weak.

Last burst LNs are depend on each skills. so I'm fine but some are annoying.
04:59:363 (299363|3,299520|2,299676|1,299754|3,299832|0,299910|3,299988|0) -
05:02:801 (302801|6,302879|5,302957|4,302957|6) -
// fixed, least anchor-y & bracket-y on both part! :D
I considered the rhythm that how feel as a player and the relationship of climax density with surrounding structure.
I think it will be subjective but It's valid a quite. when the map revived I hope it helpful.
okay will update now
Mentholzzz
nominate when
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Arzenvald
need some irc with BNs first, i remapped the whole 7K section, kinda need something more bumpy =3=
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