Hello it's mod from my
queue[Blessing Software]
00:00:260 - 00:09:475 - Soooo... Basic. Try to make variant sliders. Not to make them so circular.
00:12:613 - Put this inherited point in 00:12:809 . You don't have to give it earlier.
00:12:809 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Try to make bigger spacing. The sound is linear, you don't need to part them. And again, try to make it more variant.
00:13:201 (3,6) - This sounds clearly has longer sounds. I recommend you to listen it in 25% speed.
00:13:985 (7) - This slider is non-sense. The Sound is on red tick (00:14:181) On White tick(00:13:985) there is no sound or I can't hear that.
00:14:377 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - On that stream I would do something like
that. Actually the notes 3 and 4, 7 and 8 are one sound. Fit it to your preferences to make this playable and readable pattern.
00:15:946 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Here we clearly hear changing sound. Why you did it before when sound was linear.
00:18:495 (6,1) - This isn't give a hearable sound at all.
Try this.00:19:868 (4) - Next slider. This is
how sound goes here.
00:20:652 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Same situation as previous (00:14:377 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9))
00:21:632 (2,3,4,5,7,8,10,12) - Sounds on these circles are much longer then rest. So 00:21:632 (2,3,7,8) - 2 and 3, 7 and 8 as one slider. Rest 1/4 sliders.
00:29:279 (5,6,7) - Angle is less comfortable then rest jumps.
00:30:652 (3) - NC
00:31:534 (1,2) - This pattern is non-sense and unreadable at first try. Especially Impossible to read that's 1/4 slider (00:31:534 (1)) Before sliders similar in length were 1/2 sliders. Too high SV change at once.
00:35:358 (3,4) - Clearly one vocal sound.
00:37:319 - 00:37:515 - Hearable long sound.
00:37:711 - 00:37:809 - ^
00:39:868 (2,3,5) - Maybe stack them?
00:41:632 (2,3,4,5) - These antijumps are so uncomfortable. Too Wide Angles or Make smaller spacing.
00:43:201 (3,6) - Stack?
00:45:162 (4) - ??? This slider shape. If you want to Keep this slider, at least Flip it Vertically and put it on place where it is.
00:46:338 (3,4) - Bigger spacing between sliders.
00:50:456 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - I would put First Triple in stack. And for the rest I would put a NC on every 1st circle in these triples. Or you can just make the repeat slider like 00:52:025 (1,2) <- here.
00:54:182 (5,9) - Stack?
00:55:946 (8,1) - Uncomfortable flow. Make bigger angle on first slider or just put second slider a bit higher and flip it vertically.
00:56:338 (1,4) - Stack?
00:58:299 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Where are longer sound? Every 2 circles (I mean 1 and 2, 3 and 4 etc.) and 9,10,11 have longer sounds too.
00:59:868 (2) - Geez, This Shape is horrible plz.
01:00:260 (3,5,7) - Hearable longer sound.
01:01:829 (1,2,3) - Plz Bigger Spacing, It's out of flow. You can put it like it is, just put it a bit farther from slider.
01:02:809 (1,2,3,6) - Stack?
01:04:182 (7) - Flow? You make a bit higher SV to emphasize this sound.
01:04:966 (3,4,5,6) - Not so comfortable, too linear.
01:06:142 (1,2) - So basic. More variety.
01:07:319 (3) - Error 404, Flow Not Found.
01:09:084 (11,1) - Why you made jump like that? No reason to make jump like that.
01:10:456 (6) - Flow?
01:10:456 (6,1) - 1/4 jump? Interesting.
01:13:005 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - To remap.
01:17:907 (3,4,5) - Bigger spacing.
01:19:868 (1,2,3,4) - More variety plz.
01:21:829 (5,6,7) - This so weird pattern. It's so weird to play.
01:23:397 (1) - Unreadable. Especially on Hidden.
01:23:790 (2) - NC
01:25:946 (3,4,5,6,7) - Again. Instinctively players will miss due of missread.
01:26:535 (8) - NC
01:27:319 (10,11,12) - Bigger Spacing.
01:28:888 (2,3,4) - This pattern actually is very nice.
01:30:750 (4) - Ctrl+G
01:31:045 (5) - Place it where the flow goes.
01:32:809 (4,7) - Repair this sliders plz, It so destructive for flow.
01:35:947 (1,2) - ^
01:36:731 (3) - Hard to read. Almost Impossible to read on Hidden.
01:39:084 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Remap plz.
01:42:025 (2,3) - Make them similar.
01:42:613 (3) - Ctrl+G
01:43:888 - 01:45:260 - Insert Spinner to not make so empty here.
01:49:574 (1,2,3,4) - Distance Snap?
01:50:947 (9) - NC
01:51:535 (12) - I would do instead of slider like it. I prefer to make
This01:54:280 (1,2,3,4,1) - Hard to read.
01:55:849 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Distance Snap?
01:57:515 (2) - 2 1/4 sliders here.
01:58:986 (1,2) - Flow?
02:00:260 (7,8) - Weird Flow.
02:02:123 (1,2,3,4,5) - Distance Snap?
02:04:574 (2) - I would put NC here, but it's just my preference.
02:07:319 (1) - Flow-Destructor Slider.
02:08:398 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - No reason to make bigger distance between circles.
02:08:888 (6) - NC
02:09:868 (11,12,1) - So drastic SV changes.
02:14:182 (4,7) - Stack?
02:15:751 (1) - ??? This shape ???
02:17:319 (3,4,1) - Hard to read.
02:18:692 (4,5,6) - ^
02:20:849 (5,1,2,3,4) - Why are you making jumps in a line, I can't understand it.
02:26:731 (2) - Move to X:158 Y:108
02:28:496 (9) - Turn last anchor to the circle.
02:29:869 (3) - Move it to X:130 Y:166
02:35:555 (1,2,3,4) - And instantly making an alternate map. Congratz.
02:39:378 (6) - Move it to X:238 Y:278
02:43:594 (1,2,3,4,5) - Ctrl+Shift+D is very useful to make jumps like this.
02:47:320 (3,4) - Make bigger spacing to not look it like copy, paste.
02:49:084 (5,6) - Out of any Flow.
02:49:673 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - This looks awful. Remap this stream plz. Slider like any other like that.
02:52:418 (5) - These sliders are so ugly and they are flow-destructive.
02:53:986 (7) - ^
02:56:339 (1,2,3) - Weird flow.
02:59:281 (4,5,6) - Uncomfortable angle of these jump.
03:00:653 (9,1) - Stack it.
03:03:006 (3,4,5) - Make bigger spacing between these sliders, hard to read.
03:06:437 (1) - Why NC?
03:06:732 (3) - Here should be NC
03:09:281 (9,10) - Next 1/4 jumps <3
03:10:653 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Rethink that jumps.
03:17:418 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - ^
03:20:555 (7) - Make it in a straight line between these sliders.
03:23:202 (8) - Put anchor that end of slider and first circle in antijumps were in a straight line.
03:23:594 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Actually two things: 1. Remap first jumps, so uncomfortable. 2. Why these triangles are making bigger where the music isn't changing?
03:28:300 (5) - Stack it to 03:27:908 (4,1)
03:28:889 (1) - Again... Drastic SV Changes...
03:30:457 (2) - Stack?
03:49:281 (2) - Flow-Destructor.
04:02:810 (1,2,3,4) - Distance Snap?
04:04:183 (5) - Stack it to 04:03:399 (4)
04:08:693 (2) - NC, and drastic SV changes. SO easy to sliderbreak.
04:15:164 (3,4,5,6,7) - Polygonal Circle Creation (Ctrl+Shift+D) To patterns like that.
04:17:320 (1,2,3) - Stack it to 04:16:928 (4)
04:18:693 (7) - Shape is so ugly.
04:20:654 (1,3) - Copy 1 slider and put it a bit farther.
04:22:615 (8) - So Destructive for flow.
04:23:595 (2) - Stack it to the end of 04:23:007 (9) slider.
04:31:438 (9) - Stack it to 04:31:046 (7)
04:31:830 (1) - Stack it to 04:31:046 (7)
04:31:830 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - Why you are making these linear uncomfortable jumps?
04:34:870 - 04:36:242 - Put a spinner.
04:38:497 (6) - NC
04:38:987 (11,12,13) - This direction change is very weird.
04:40:556 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Why spacing like that?
04:41:830 (8,9,10,1) - Unreadable on hidden.
04:45:262 (4,5,6,7,1) - Distance Snap?
04:48:497 (2) - Previously you were doing to 1/4 sliders. Why you decided to make 1/2 slider here? It's exactly the same sound.
04:50:948 (3,4) - Really, Really Bad Idea.
04:51:634 (8) - Stack it to 04:51:144 (5)
04:51:830 (9) - Stack it to 04:50:850 (2)
04:52:811 (3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Distance Snap?
04:55:948 (4) - Very Unexpectful.
04:57:811 (4,5,6,7,8) - Distance Snap?
04:58:203 (8,1) - Again the 1/4 jumps.
04:59:380 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make this stream linear. And with Distance Snap.
05:01:046 (1,2) - Make a slider instead of 2 circles.
Final Thoughts:
Well, Turn on Distance Snap, and make better slider shapes. It was Everything what i found in this.
Good Luck!