This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Saturday, April 6, 2019 at 7:03:36 PM

Artist: Scenarioart
Title: Shusshu Pop
Tags: Tokyomelancholy japanese pop
BPM: 172
Filesize: 2657kb
Play Time: 01:20
Difficulties Available:

1. Expert (4.85 stars, 299 notes)
2. Hard (3.03 stars, 184 notes)
3. Insane (4.26 stars, 249 notes)
4. Normal (1.95 stars, 127 notes)

Download: Scenarioart - Shusshu Pop
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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mods: https://osu.ppy.sh/community/forums/topics/612413

Hi~
General
Insane
Hard
Normal

Biggest problem will remove SD balance of hard diff and insane diff. Good luck!

M4M (I'll attempt to mod lower diffs, don't expect too much though.)

General

I believe your spread is a bit unbalanced, there's a 2 star difference between Hard and Insane. I think you should consider buffing Hard a little bit, or adding a 4* Insane and renaming Insane to Extra

Insane

00:09:977 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - how come you're suddenly changing the pattern here? I mean nothing too important changes in the song so why did you use different rhythm than in the previous two instances?
00:16:256 (4,5,6) - again, absolutely nothing changes there, I'm pretty sure of that.
00:21:837 (4) - move to x=378 y=130
00:41:023 (2) - move to x=68 y=156 for a more appealing overlap with 00:41:198 (3) -
00:57:244 (1) - move to x=271 y=35

Hard

00:17:477 - add a circle, move 00:17:651 (2,3,1) - closer to 00:16:954 (1) - for consequency with your previous rhythm choices
00:21:489 (3,1) - isn't this gap a little too much? I mean 1/1 gaps have never before been so big in this diff so I think it may be a bit offthrowing
00:21:489 (3) - on a sidenote, stack it under 00:23:582 (3) - cause as it is rn it looks kinda awkward imo https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8619987
00:24:628 (5,6) - the first angle looks a little too small, I suggest you just copypaste (6) there
00:26:721 (5) - I feel like a straight slider would flow better, also it would transition a little better into 00:27:419 (6) -
00:33:000 (7,8) - stack is off
00:57:070 (3,1) - ugh, I don't feel like this is appropriate. Not only is this the first time that you've ever used such a pattern in this diff, the 1/2 distance there is a bit too high and I feel like many people would combobreak on this (applies to all)

Normal

00:10:675 (2,3) - a straight line out of these would be way more appealing
00:24:628 (4,1) - switch NCs maybe? I feel like it will be more appropriate
00:35:093 (3,4) - why didn't you reverse the flow there, like you did previously?
00:54:628 (3,4) - I feel like the clickable object should've been on 00:55:326 - , how about you reverse the kickslider 4 times and then add a circle instead?
01:07:884 (2) - I don't feel like this flows that well, maybe copypaste 01:07:186 (1) - once more?

Rest is good. Gl

kunka wrote:

1. OD is numerical value same as hard diff. 6 is common. dont think it's a problem at all
2. 00:07:361 - 00:07:448 - 00:07:710 - This 3points hears the sound that is stronger than other sounds clearly. Would you change it as follows? https://puu.sh/wHCTZ.jpg not sure how those are different, but prefer them more streamline

Hard

1. Balance of star difficulty with the insane diff is big and thinks that it's not good. I think that the cause is as follows. (1)Much stack exists overall. (2)There're many blanks of 1/1. Because I suggest some, please you will examine it.
   - About add notes -
2. 00:17:477 - 00:11:896 - and 00:14:686 - of the same phrase are slider-end. Therefore I think that I can add a circle.
3. 00:24:454 - Would you add a circle? I think that I become the good vocal follow. like this 00:25:849 (2) -
4. 00:35:616 - ^
5. 00:46:082 - 00:51:663 - ^
6. 00:54:454 - ^
7. 01:07:710 - 01:09:105 - ^
8. 01:13:291 - 01:13:989 - ^
   
   - About stack -
9. 00:16:518 (3,4) - I feel that a good flow stopped by stack.
10. 00:22:099 (2,3) - ^
11. 00:27:768 (7,1,2,3,4) - Stack of the 00:28:465 (2) - is unnatural among a series of vocal.
12. 00:58:814 (1) - Because it's in kiai time, I think that it's not necessary to stop a flow by stack.
13. 01:04:308 (5,1) - ^
14. 01:14:773 (3,4) - I think that 1/4 rhythm becomes easy to look by removing stack.

instead i just added another diff

Normal

1. I recommend that I change AR to 5. AR balance of all diff is improved it. diff isnt worth of AR 5
2. 00:24:454 - Would you add a circl? good vocal followwww 00:35:616 - same
3. 01:07:710 - 01:09:105 - ^
4. 01:13:291 - ^ dont think to be too dense in this section

Biggest problem will remove SD balance of hard diff and insane diff. Good luck!

[Nemesis] wrote:

M4M (I'll attempt to mod lower diffs, don't expect too much though.)

General

I believe your spread is a bit unbalanced, there's a 2 star difference between Hard and Insane. I think you should consider buffing Hard a little bit, or adding a 4* Insane and renaming Insane to Extra added a diff

Insane

00:09:977 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - how come you're suddenly changing the pattern here? I mean nothing too important changes in the song so why did you use different rhythm than in the previous two instances?
00:16:256 (4,5,6) - again, absolutely nothing changes there, I'm pretty sure of that. variaty for the most part, there's a slight difference tho
00:21:837 (4) - move to x=378 y=130
00:41:023 (2) - move to x=68 y=156 for a more appealing overlap with 00:41:198 (3) -
00:57:244 (1) - move to x=271 y=35 there's little difference between mine and urs

Hard

00:17:477 - add a circle, move 00:17:651 (2,3,1) - closer to 00:16:954 (1) - for consequency with your previous rhythm choices other rhythms have the gap too
00:21:489 (3,1) - isn't this gap a little too much? I mean 1/1 gaps have never before been so big in this diff so I think it may be a bit offthrowing i dont think it's a big gap for a 1/1 tbh
00:21:489 (3) - on a sidenote, stack it under 00:23:582 (3) - cause as it is rn it looks kinda awkward imo https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8619987 too much of a gap to be noticeable
00:26:721 (5) - I feel like a straight slider would flow better, also it would transition a little better into 00:27:419 (6) - i like curved
00:57:070 (3,1) - ugh, I don't feel like this is appropriate. Not only is this the first time that you've ever used such a pattern in this diff, the 1/2 distance there is a bit too high and I feel like many people would combobreak on this (applies to all)
dont think those are that hard to play, i like them
Normal

00:24:628 (4,1) - switch NCs maybe? I feel like it will be more appropriate it's normal stanza thing
00:35:093 (3,4) - why didn't you reverse the flow there, like you did previously? bit of variaty
00:54:628 (3,4) - I feel like the clickable object should've been on 00:55:326 - , how about you reverse the kickslider 4 times and then add a circle instead? that's too muhc
01:07:884 (2) - I don't feel like this flows that well, maybe copypaste 01:07:186 (1) - once more? seems ok to me uh

Rest is good. Gl

changed all the others

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