wcx19911123 wrote:

Subject: Ai Nonaka & Eri Kitamura - and I'm Home

JoJo wrote:

Sorry, but have to pop this.

mod前先拜一下神mapper妮姆芙

[长喜渣mapper早 0.0]

• ●等一下。。178个unsnapped notes是怎么回事。。@@
  ●虽然不是很必要，但是和其他难度统一一下combo color？
  ●00:19:958 (1,2) - 这里突然0.75x DS没关系？
  ●00:46:838 (7) - 这里的break完全没必要呢。

发pm前先膜拜下神mapper妮姆芙
后面两句我ign了，前面个两句你看着办0.0

KayeSara wrote:

OK. everything looks fine
Let's have bubble!

KanaRin wrote:

KayeSara wrote:

OK. everything looks fine
Let's have bubble!

Raging Bull wrote:

Good map! Ranked! Congratulations!

quintitem wrote:

:3 Current Priority: +7
所以說讓不會mod的我來扔第八顆星吧\:D/(被打)

pieguy1372 wrote:

Easy:

02:10:358 (2) - whistle on start? clap is enough for me
02:12:278 (4,6) - ^
02:24:758 - kiai toggle should be here owo where is my kiai line..

wcx's Normal:

-tick rate 1?

01:36:758 (4) - new combo
02:24:758 (4) - ^

KPY:

00:28:118 (1) - too close to (3)
01:36:758 (4) - new combo

Collab:

01:29:558 - add note? not necessary I think
01:42:998 (2) - remove the whistle from the body of this slider? this is on purpose

Taiko: Fine

Nice map~ -w-

SamiPale wrote:

Hello, request from Mei_coN
以下是我的意见，歌词部分是我觉得必须改的

[Easy]
01:15:638(1) - spinner有点别扭，换成别的或者延长到下小节第一拍
高难都有人一起collab了做低难认真点嘛 X，这个还好吧..还是不改了 认真点么..我有苦说不出啊

[KPY]
S:C2大声点

[Collab]
00:16:118 to 00:27:638 - 建议将这里每小节的第三拍取消掉，一般来说一三拍clap都是为了推向高潮而用的，这里是个过渡期所以不建议使用（而且背景音24拍也有的较小声的类似鼓点音）第二次被这么吐槽了 好吧我弄掉
01:00:758(1) - clap? OK
01:07:958(5,6) - 觉得这里default finish效果要比clap舒服，clap换成finish然后在(5)的尾巴加个clap同意
02:00:278(T) - 意义不明的降音量？要降的话还是多几条线渐降比较好忘了怎么出的错啦 我好像是有单独下线减FINISH音的怎么都没了
02:23:558(7) - remove clap? X，这个CLAP感觉挺必要

[Lyric]
由于日本汉字基本没简体字，所以下面涉及到简体转繁体的建议改回去，假名汉字的互换就随意了
11.png 錆付いた心 音も无い世界 --> 錆びついた心 音もない世界
16.png 一人っきりで泣く后ろ姿 --> ひとりきりで泣く後ろ姿
34.png 35.png 冗談みたい / な毎日 <--这样分割比较好，みたい是一个完整的助动词
42.png 梦に落ちるの --> 夢に落ちるの
43.png 44.png 第二句的「すぐに」唱的时候是在第一句显示的时间里的，建议改到43.png中
46.png 二人 --> ふたり
51.png 无邪気な顔 --> 無邪気な顔
74.png 思いを残するの --> 思いを残すの (残す是五段动词没有サ变动词的原型)

参考用booklet http://puu.sh/5iGy

[StoryBoard]
Foreground sb\lyric\712.png 目测没fade效果,move效果也出错了 基本全重制了

总体氛围营造得很不错，star

xykbear wrote:

《论尼姆芙和王长喜》
AoI渣电脑表示SB载入其卡无比啊～
个人意见：osb文件里的数值最好整理一下，小数点后面太多位了 ..不会弄 有区别吗= =

[Collab]
00:16:118 (1) - 感觉用finish效果更好 2个FINISH不太好了
00:26:678 (5) - 折返的锚点上移一格，然后曲线锚点左移一格 哎好吧
00:31:478 (10) - 右移一格嗯
00:38:678 (7,1) - 上移+左移一格嗯
00:52:118 (11) - 最后一个锚点下移两格
02:12:038 (2) - 最后一个锚点下移一格
02:33:398 (3) - 左移一格 这几个没区别啦= =不要了

[easy]
00:22:838 (4) - 最后一个圈加finish
00:38:198 (5) - ^
01:28:118 (5) - ^
01:44:438 (1) - 最开始加finish 没想加那么多的..
02:24:758 (1,2,3,4) - 每个白线上都加finish 已经有FINISH了吧
02:37:238 (3) - 去掉这个点，从02:36:998开始做一个1/2往返滑条 不要把 我在跟鼓点 这里变VOCAL会很笨

·最后膜拜各位神mapper，中秋节快乐(●'◡'●)ﾉ♥

pieguy1372 wrote:

KPY:

00:28:118 (1) - too close to (3) //no
01:36:758 (4) - new combo //k

SamiPale wrote:

[KPY]
S:C2大声点 //現在很ok阿.

xykbear wrote:

[KPY]
将难度名改成“KPY's Hard”，与前面的保持一致 //為甚麼不考慮於後面一致?難道collab可以說成Insane's collab?
00:18:758 (2) - 第三个锚点右移+上移一格 沒開grid
00:21:398 (4) - new combo,为了把来回跳进行区分开来 //可
00:22:598 (1) - 是不是没开GS？直线不水平了 一直沒開
01:17:318 (1) - 将折返上的finish改到开头的红线上，曲子背景音的敲锣是在这个位置的 可
01:29:078 (3) - finish //X
02:01:718 (4) - finish //X

Raging Bull wrote:

:( You skipped mine.

Too short

My message is too short.

kanpakyin wrote:

Raging Bull wrote:

:( You skipped mine.

Too short

My message is too short.

Didn't! I have already told Nymph_ to fix something via tencent QQ

Kawayi Rika wrote:

神MAPPER Nymph_ 也做这个曲子了啊~膜拜一下~

一些小建议~~


[Collab]

00:27:638 (1) - Start point add finish. didn't sound good for me
00:38:918 (8) - Overlap here? 00:39:158 (1) it is on purpose, I am pretty sure
00:54:998 (3,5,1) - add finish.
01:25:238 (1) - Start point add finish.
01:32:918 (3) - ^ I think maybe too loud.


[wcx]

00:27:638 (5) - add finish.
02:00:278 (4,5,6) - ^
02:01:718 (1) - Start point Remove finish.
02:15:638 (6,7,8,1) - With the above.

nice job give star~

JauiPlaY wrote:

hi~
一些建議:

[General]
fine.

[Easy]
控制一下combo,最好3-5...在easy里弄6或者8的combo很奇怪的 = =还好啦

[wcx's Normal]
00:24:278 (x) - add a note with clap.
最好也控制下combo.

[KPY]
01:17:318 (1) - 這之后拉個spinner會比較好
02:29:558 (1,2) - finish怎麼沒有了?建議補上
02:37:958 (7) - 這之后像easy,normal那樣拉個spinner做結尾會比較好

[Collab]
00:25:718 (3) - 這箭頭感覺有點遮啊,換個方向吧 我觉得还行啊 完全没读图障碍
00:56:438 (3,4,5) - 我覺得(4,5)沒有被覆蓋得很好确实呢 弄了
00:58:118 (x) - 加個note?不是很乐意
00:58:358 (T) - 這后面的4根綠線貌似都沒用嗯 以前换音效分不清了
01:02:198 (5,6,7) - 我覺得(6,7)沒有被覆蓋得很好嗯 弄了
01:09:518 (1) - 應該是后面的紅線開始我觉得也是 但是玩起来蓝线舒服
01:29:558 (x) - 加個有clap的note?嗯 我一直这么想 不管COLLAB同意不同意了。。

禮物
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Rukarioman wrote:

KPY:
- Tick Rate 2 fits this song so good, maybe use it here too? (after all it was used in the normal too). It also makes the slow downs readable. Alright.k
00:20:678 (2,1) - Pretty sudden jump, hard to predict. Maybe change that? Change a bit about the combo and it's more easy to read.
02:08:678 (1,1,1,1) - Is this new combo spam really necessary? I'd remove the last three of them. I want to follow the SB colour here.However too many modder mention about this so I decided to fix it.

Rukarioman wrote:

Easy:
01:19:718 - Add in a break here or add some mapping. A little bit too long no mapping. add a break here

KPY:
- Tick Rate 2 fits this song so good, maybe use it here too? (after all it was used in the normal too). It also makes the slow downs readable.
00:20:678 (2,1) - Pretty sudden jump, hard to predict. Maybe change that?
02:08:678 (1,1,1,1) - Is this new combo spam really necessary? I'd remove the last three of them.

Collab:
- Same about Tick Rate as above.
00:37:238 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Those two triples and that stream don't really fit imo. I don't hear anything in the music that calls for this. Meicon changed here to 4 notes and sliders
00:47:078 (1,2,3,4) - These notes placed in a place where no music actually plays seems a bit odd. Maybe remove them? Meicon said it is ok.
00:55:478 (5,1) - Man this anti-jump felt really weird imo. move the notes further then
01:26:198 (3) - Imo this would flow better if it was horizontally flipped. K

Megurine Luka wrote:

:roll: 晚了不好意思，自古红蓝咳咳咳

[General]
应该，大概，没有
除了collab里标注名字的图片略小，字体略不清晰以外，建议字体描边加粗，投影的扩散减小 ..我只是想让名片存在感变低..如果可以的话 我想再小点的..

[Easy]

00:26:678 (2) - http://puu.sh/6g9A 这样？
00:34:358 (2) - 1 gird up 还好啦
01:02:198 (3) - 换成一个circle？嗯
01:26:198 (4) - 好像太flat了一点._. ._.
总体给我的感觉就是一直在顺时针绕圈，可以多一点变化？= =新人不挑剔这些的

[王长喜神mapper]
01:16:598 (2,3) - 向下错开来一点点？
音效很好ww
不过就是最后的fin音感觉很不和谐;_;

[KPY]
00:27:158 (3) - 有点丑;_;
01:22:358 (3) - slider声音轻的有点突然
02:15:158 (1,2,3,4) - 突然没有鼓点了有点奇怪
fin音同wcx

[Collab]
01:29:078 (5) - nazi, 左移 。。。把4右移做对称好了


其他没啥问题的感觉
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Breeze wrote:

General

1. 你文件夹里有2个osb文件,删掉Ai Nonaka & Eri Kitamura - and I'm Home (Nymph_),osb 啊 soga 看见了
   [attachment=1:efed7]0.jpg[/attachment:efed7]
2. Title不是And I'm Home? wiki上查到是大写的 http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Eri_Kitamura, 不过E姐之前rank的这歌是小写的, 谁知道呢...= =为了避免麻烦呗 既然E姐已经RANK了 我就跟着用一样的名字好了
   [attachment=0:efed7]1.jpg[/attachment:efed7]

SB

1. 实际上Ring01和Ring02只要一个灰度的图片就够了 (同理bule和red其实也只要一个灰度图片就可以的), 脚本可以改颜色的
   

   _C,easing, starttime, endtime,r1,g1,b1,r2,g2,b2

   
   easing:【缓冲】
   0 - none【没有缓冲】
   1 - start fast and slow down【开始快结束慢】
   2 - start slow and speed up【开始慢结束快】
   starttime, endtime: 【开始,结束时间】
   r1, g1, b1: 启动时动画元件的颜色
   r2, g2, b2: 结束时动画元件的颜色
   下次可以试试, 这次不想改我倒是无所谓, 只是怕后面会有喷的这个前几天膜姐说了我才知道。。不过还是试用过 下次再用好了

Easy

1. 00:39:158 (5) - 这里不加finish?
2. 01:07:958 (3) - ^, 如果要加的话去掉whistle更好这样感觉有些乱啦 我更喜欢135W
3. 01:09:878 (4) - ^
4. 01:11:798 (1) - finish?
5. 01:44:438 (1) - 去whistle加finish?嗯

Collab

1. 作为最难难度, 不AR+1么? AR8我测试ACC会高很多lol, 当然可能只是我个人感觉确实。。AR8好打点
2. 00:39:158 (1) - 不加finish? 感觉音量大的话减一些音量如何?嗯 减音量加一个好了
3. 00:44:678 (2) - ^
4. 01:01:958 (4) - ^
5. 01:11:798 (1) - ^
6. 01:49:958 (4) - ^加了1个..妹控的部分他不想加 就保持这样吧
7. 01:54:038 (1) - 这里取消New combo吧, 前面那单独一个combo看着挺奇怪的嗯 弄掉了
8. 02:16:118 (3) - 这里忘加clap了么忘了。。

nice map, star

Breeze wrote:

SB漏写了点东西: 凡是Fcode后面有像0.001562476这种的最好都改成0
并未完全消失但是肉眼不可见的淡出会增加SB load, 小问题, 最好还是改改
no kudos

Breeze wrote:

wcx's Normal

1. 00:34:598 (1) - 这个slider真心听着奇怪, 00:34:358开始, 同样地方结束感觉好得多
   this slider is following vocal , I think it is fine
2. 00:39:878 (1) - 这里听着也不怎么顺, 不如降低点音量, 比如降到30%左右?
   don't know witch object you pointed out... if you mean the claps , they sound well to me 0.0
3. 00:57:158 (1), 00:59:078 (2) - ^ ^
4. 01:07:958 (1) - 去掉clap感觉更好, 单独的clap和finish混合听着也感觉很不顺
   seems kinda odd , but I tried remove the clap , it sound empty here , so I keep it for now
5. 01:45:158 (1), 01:47:078 (2) - 降低音量?
6. 02:02:438 (1), 02:04:358 (2) - ^
7. 02:17:798 (1), 02:19:718 (2) - ^
   uh.. I think this claps are fine.. they are just a bit louder than the music and not noisy..
8. 02:31:238 (8) - 这里不加finish?
   too noisy if add finish here , so I add a volume down finish here

Breeze wrote:

KPY

1. HDR-1, 这个比后面那个星数更高的collab还高,真心略高了, 中间有些地方稍微掉1,2个或者slider掉尾很容易挂掉 //Fixed sth.
2. 00:29:558 (3) - 咦为什么这里finish, 听着挺奇怪的 //晤操作
3. 00:31:478 (4) - 不如这里加finish, 音量40%左右 //可
4. 01:22:838 (3) - 这里你忘加clap了吧 //恩..
5. 01:48:998 (5) - 这个重叠略难读, 不知道是不是只有我这么觉得 //還好啊...
6. 02:30:038 (2), 02:30:998 (2) - spacing略远了 //現在1/4 跳很正常..
7. 没break么?(・∀・) //大丈夫!

Taiko

1. 01:19:358 - 这里加个d如何
2. 01:38:678 (359) - 改d, 这个D感觉有点突然 //在遊戲裏面還好..
3. 01:55:958 (424) - 改k, 也是感觉有点突然了//大kat是會比較好聽的..這個diff也不算難,所以是acceptable的!