1. Basic (0.97 stars, 84 notes)
2. Standard (1.49 stars, 140 notes)

Amamiya Kanade wrote:

66bpm 刺激
顺便combo颜色可以用006666（0，102，102）
怎么哪个都是你男朋友

• General

1. YAY IKEMEN
   
   
2. There's nothing much to mod at this mapset since it is already so neat and polished. I assume that this mapset is already ready to be ranked, so, forgive me if I can't give you any useful suggestions senpai You're the best
   
   
3. Probably set some combo colours? xd
   
   

   [Colours]
   Combo1 : 207,207,231
   Combo2 : 0,43,85
   Combo3 : 128,128,192

4. Just a suggestion, but looking at the song's rhythm, I guess the background used at both difficulties is somehow a little bit too 'energetic' considering this is such a slow, and kind of calm song, so maybe change it?? xd Or probably it is just me ;w;
   
   
5. Also, I wonder why did you start mapping this song from 00:16:807 (1)? Indeed the vocal started at that point, but still, starting to map this song from that point would cause a long gap that could make the rhythm at the start of this song somehow feels a little bit empty, considering the drum’s rhythm from the main music stays the same even after the vocal started 15 seconds later (or to put it simply, there are no change in rhythm until 01:11:353 (1) ), which is why starting the map from 00:02:262 would be much better Just my opinion though xd. And another thing that bothers me is, why did you ended the map at 02:47:716 (1) ? Since the music completely ended at 03:03:170, and there won't be that many beats to be mapped after 02:47:716 (1), so why not mapping it to the very end? It would be very nice >w</
   
   
6. Oh, and also, probably add one more difficulty (Hard Difficulty)? I know that this suggestion comes very late considering this map is only one step away from being ranked (Sowwyyyyy ;w;), but somehow I still want to suggest it since there are so many parts of this song that is worth of being mapped as Hard diff, like : 02:14:307 ~ 02:14:988 (streams or repeated sliders) , 02:35:898 ~ 02:36:807 (streams or repeated sliders as well), etc
   
   
7. Another silly suggestion from me, but how about set another kiai time at 02:36:807 considering there is an obvious rhythm change there, and set another one again at 02:40:443 ? I tried it and somehow, the flash effect from the kai time really fits at these two parts xd
   
   
8. That's all~

• Basic

1. Disable Widescreen Support please~ xd
   
   
2. There are two distance snap errors at this difficulty
   
   
   
   Please fix it by moving this slider -> 02:11:352 (4) to x:128 y:32
   
   
   
3. 00:25:898 (2) When I test-played it, somehow, this ½ curvy slider makes the flow from 00:24:080 (1) becomes a little bit too sharp. Maybe consider changing it into a ½ straight slider instead?
   
   
   
4. 01:09:535 (2) Would be nice to add whistle at the tail of this slider to emhpasize the voice xd
   
   
5. 01:17:717 (5) How about adding clap in drum additions at this note to emphasize the drum from the main music? It fits the music very well and sounds pretty nice owo
   
   
6. 01:18:625 (1) Add finish in drum additions at the tail of this slider please >w<
   
   
7. 01:22:262 (3) ^
   
   
8. 01:31:808 (4) Add finish + clap in drum additions at this note please~
   
   
9. 01:34:989 (2) Add finish in drum additions at the head of this slider please
   
   
10. 01:36:807 (3) ^ at the tail of this slider
    
    
11. 01:39:080 (4) Add finish + clap at the tail of this slider
    
    
12. 01:42:262 (2) ^
    
    
13. 02:09:988 (3) ^
    
    
14. 02:14:079 (6) Instead of using whistle in drum additions at the tail of this slider, how about using clap in drum additions instead? It fits better than the whistle
    
    
15. 02:16:807 (2) Add finish in drum additions at the reversed part of this slider please~
    
    
16. 02:35:898 (3) Add clap in drum additions at the reversed part of this slider please~
    
    
17. 02:36:807 (4) Add NC at this slider please, 'cuz downbeats and the change at rhythm
    
    
18. 02:39:079 (5) Just a mere suggestion, but how about make this slider longer so that it would end at 02:39:761 (blue tick) instead of 02:39:534 (5) ? So that it would emphasize the strong bass instead of the drum from the main music
    
    
19. 02:42:716 (2) Add finish + clap at the tail of this slider
    
    
20. 02:45:898 (4) Fix the placement of this slider like this please :
    
    
    
21. Neat diff owob

• Standard

1. Um, maybe the CS change in this diff is a bit too rapid? Considering the CS at the previous diff is 3, so perhaps using the 3.5 CS size in this diff would be better Oh, and it wouldn't destroy the aesthetic of this diff either. So everything is good owo
   
   
2. Same hitsounds suggestions as the previous diff >w<
   
   
3. 00:21:353 (1,2) Um, maybe fix this overlap?
   
   
   
   It doesn't look too nice in my opinion, since it covers almost a half portion of the next slider's head, which automatically also hides the next slider's default number for a little bit while
   
   
4. 00:49:535 (1) How about ctrl + H this slider to fix the sharp-turn flow in this section?
   
   
5. 01:07:717 (1,2,3) Um, blanket xd
   
   
   
   
   
6. 01:10:898 (4) Add whistle in drum additions at this note please~
   
   
7. 01:31:353 (3) How about change this 1/2 slider into a 1/6 slider with a note instead?
   
   
   
   'Cuz it is a bit pity to let such a strong beat like 01:31:656 left unmapped in this Standard diff
   
   
8. 01:42:262 (3) Maybe make this slider the same as 01:40:444 (1) ?
   
   
   
   'Cuz its placement right now somehow destroys the aesthetics of this part for a little bit >.<
   
   
9. 02:09:534 (3) Fixing this slider's placement like this?
   
   
   
10. 02:11:352 (1) How about changing this note into a 1/6 slider instead?
    
    
    
    So that a strong beat at 02:11:655 won't be left unmapped
    
    
11. Really nice diff owo/

1. Combo color 1 is too dark and it's kind of annoying to play with it, can you make it ligther (atleast a bit)
2. Add a silent slider-slide please, some sliders sounds really annoying atm

1. 00:18:626 (3,4) - super nazi, but the blanket is a bit off.
2. 00:53:626 (2,3) - this one is more off
3. 01:00:217 (3,1) - in the previous part you stacked them 00:31:126 (3,1) - , make them consistent :l
4. 01:22:262 (1,2) - a little spacing error
5. 01:37:262 (2,3) - ^
6. 01:40:444 (1,2) - aren't they too close of each other

1. 00:42:262 (4,5,6) - the stack leniency make your spacing off
2. 02:11:352 (4,5,6) - ^
3. 02:34:988 (1) - remove NC?`having a single NC at easy doesn't seems fine.

Natsu wrote:

General

1. Combo color 1 is too dark and it's kind of annoying to play with it, can you make it ligther (atleast a bit)
2. Add a silent slider-slide please, some sliders sounds really annoying atm

Standard

1. 00:18:626 (3,4) - super nazi, but the blanket is a bit off.
2. 00:53:626 (2,3) - this one is more off
3. 01:00:217 (3,1) - in the previous part you stacked them 00:31:126 (3,1) - , make them consistent :l
4. 01:22:262 (1,2) - a little spacing error ???
5. 01:37:262 (2,3) - ^ color=#0000FF]???[/color]
6. 01:40:444 (1,2) - aren't they too close of each other

Basic

1. 00:42:262 (4,5,6) - the stack leniency make your spacing off
2. 02:11:352 (4,5,6) - ^
3. 02:34:988 (1) - remove NC?`having a single NC at easy doesn't seems fine.

Natsu wrote:

basic is using a custom sampleset at the beginning while standard doesn't. After fixing the standard diff to sc1 you also should add a silent slider-slider with custom 30.

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Karen wrote:

artist不应该大写吗

Doyak wrote:

Still most of the vocals are better on 1/6, and there's no reason for the vocal to sing a song with 1/4s when all the drums (in other words, the base rhythm structure) are in 1/6s. Since vocals are not always correct, we'd better choose a snap that makes more sense with the music. And the vocal also fits better with 1/6s mostly too.

Doyak wrote:

There's a huge difference between simplifying complicated rhythms and changing the base rhythm structure. Changing this will ruin the map structure, yes, because the map is made with wrong snaps from the start. 1/6 maps are in whole different category from 1/4 maps, it's not about playbility. Playbility is important when it still can follow the song according to how the music is constructed. 1/6 rhythm is one of the unique characteristics that only specific genre of songs have. If you ignore this characteristics, it ruins the whole genre.

And I'm aware that there are many maps that are using 'wrong' snaps that shouldn't be ranked from the start. This doesn't mean we can keep letting wrongly-snapped maps to be ranked.

As I said, 1/6 snaps are the song's base rhythm structure and that's the main reason we should follow it. It's much more important than just improving a little bit of playbility.

Doyak wrote:

That's not it. "sounds better on 1/4s" doesn't mean it's intended to be on 1/4s. The song's rhythm structure is in 1/6, then why would anyone even try to sing it with 1/4s? So the only reason you want this to be in 1/4s is the playbility, because you wouldn't snap notes on 1/16 beats just because some sounds are better on those snaps. And playbility is a second thing to consider, we need a correct rhythm structure first.

Modem wrote:

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