Mrs. GREEN APPLE - Speaking [Osu|CatchTheBeat] · forum

XVoIR

Joined June 2013

XVoIR 2017-10-14T18:37:01+00:00

[Extra]
00:06:127 (1) - why so sharp
00:35:433 (3,4,5) - why it is so small
00:43:583 (1) - missing hitsound?
01:00:924 (3,4) - kinda ungly
01:05:780 (1,2,3,4) - make this less spaced? currently I feel like it's overspaced

[Talking]
00:06:040 (7,1) - make all objects spaced the same, currently it looks kinda meh
00:20:520 (3,4) - maybe make it straight?
00:22:427 (5) - slider is a little off
00:33:699 (6,1) - undermapped? i'm sure there's something in the music
00:35:606 (1) - maybe just remove this and put some jumps? 00:35:606 (1,1) - it feels so weird, as it's 1/1 break between these

Mykaterasu

584 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

Mykaterasu 2017-10-14T19:16:03+00:00

XVoIR wrote:
[Extra]
00:06:127 (1) - why so sharp Distorted Guitar sound gets the distorted slider shape.
00:35:433 (3,4,5) - why it is so small There used to be a slider with this size symettrical to this one, but it got swapped out. Good spot
00:43:583 (1) - missing hitsound? Even though it lands on the barline, there isn't actually a sound like the other barlines to hitsound to.
01:00:924 (3,4) - kinda ungly
01:05:780 (1,2,3,4) - make this less spaced? currently I feel like it's overspaced I can tackle both of these points simultaneously

[Talking]
00:06:040 (7,1) - make all objects spaced the same, currently it looks kinda meh I kinda like how this is spaced differently, but I'll think about normalising it.
00:20:520 (3,4) - maybe make it straight? It's matching 00:19:999 (1) - this slider's shape
00:22:427 (5) - slider is a little off so it is.
00:33:699 (6,1) - undermapped? i'm sure there's something in the music It is undermapped, but it's to make this play cleaner. The rework should fix the way this is voiced.
00:35:606 (1) - maybe just remove this and put some jumps? 00:35:606 (1,1) - it feels so weird, as it's 1/1 break between these Not sure about this one, I'll see what I can do.

I'll be thinking about all of these during the Talking rework, as it should be the cleanest map in the set.

Crowley

435 posts

Joined April 2015

Crowley 2017-10-29T14:37:23+00:00

hello HH asked me to mod his gd on ur mapset uwu

HH's Rain

00:11:676 (8,1) - decrease distance of these two please
00:12:716 (3) - would be better if these were notes imo
00:13:410 (5) - considering the distance of 00:12:369 (2) - to 00:12:716 (3) - . the distance of 00:13:063 (4) - to this note is too near. please add more ds.
00:13:930 (6) - ds of this is also too near to 5
00:15:144 (4,1,2) - i think 4 should be 2 notes instead of a slider and 1,2 the slider.
00:21:560 (6) - forgot to add a hyperfruit here
00:22:427 (5,6) - would be better if this was an antiflow i think.
00:24:855 (1) - this is too near the slider end of 6.
00:25:028 (2,3,4,1) - this is too much for a rain. nerf jumps pls
00:30:404 (1,2,3,4) - nerf 3 and 4 pls
00:35:260 - forgot a note here?
00:35:433 (1) - if you didnt add a note on 35:260, mind if you move this further away from 8?
00:49:739 (4) - move this on x:48?
00:57:803 (3) - u forgot a hyperfruit on the end of this slider?
01:01:965 (3,4,5,6,3,4,3,4,5,6,3,4) - add dashes to these notes.
01:26:936 (3,4,5,6) - same as above
01:28:323 (3,4) - same as above but i think its better if you use hdashes here.

thats all, goodluck on the map~

Sakary

867 posts

Joined July 2013

Sakary 2017-10-29T22:10:48+00:00

Crowley wrote:
hello HH asked me to mod his gd on ur mapset uwu

HH's Rain
00:11:676 (8,1) - decrease distance of these two please (that was supposed to be hdash, but i kinda think of making a hard dash instead. this recent one feels better though.)
00:12:716 (3) - would be better if these were notes imo yeah, i agree
00:13:410 (5) - considering the distance of 00:12:369 (2) - to 00:12:716 (3) - . the distance of 00:13:063 (4) - to this note is too near. please add more ds.
00:13:930 (6) - ds of this is also too near to 5 okay, fixed. same as above
00:15:144 (4,1,2) - i think 4 should be 2 notes instead of a slider and 1,2 the slider. i did make 4 as notes, but 1,2 is stiil the same.
00:21:560 (6) - forgot to add a hyperfruit here
00:22:427 (5,6) - would be better if this was an antiflow i think. (not smooth, and i think it's already good. it will be hard if i edit these notes.)
00:24:855 (1) - this is too near the slider end of 6.
00:25:028 (2,3,4,1) - this is too much for a rain. nerf jumps pls hehehez. i agree
00:30:404 (1,2,3,4) - nerf 3 and 4 pls
00:35:260 - forgot a note here? nope. there's no sound here.
00:35:433 (1) - if you didnt add a note on 35:260, mind if you move this further away from 8? i think it's already fine. a note here is expected to fall.
00:49:739 (4) - move this on x:48? sure
00:57:803 (3) - u forgot a hyperfruit on the end of this slider? fixed
01:01:965 (3,4,5,6,3,4,3,4,5,6,3,4) - add dashes to these notes. this part is hard for a rain. editing it will make it harder. not for now.
01:26:936 (3,4,5,6) - same as above i'll keep this.
01:28:323 (3,4) - same as above but i think its better if you use hdashes here. i'll try to think of it. i'm actually wondering the same thing.

thats all, goodluck on the map~

Really thanks for the mod!!!
*no comment means accepted hands down

Rain

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JierYagtama

716 posts

Joined November 2015

JierYagtama 2017-11-01T04:10:27+00:00

As requested by Hello-senpai uwu

Hello's Rain

00:03:699 (2) - I kinda think this is a more prominent sound to NC here so remove NC for 00:03:005 (1) - if you do
00:05:086 - not a fan of that kind of rhythm that lefts the end on the slider get the more stronger sound here
00:06:300 - if you took my suggestion above then remove this circle and move 00:06:473 (1) - to x:363 so it wouldnt be too hard to dash here and also emphasis 1 better with the 1/2 gap
00:07:861 (4) - needs more... "movement" thus i recommend you to move this a little bit more to x:128
00:14:104 (1) - I dont think this should be given an h-dash imo since the vocal sound you're mapping here isnt even that loud tho im gonna suggest here to change the pattern here 00:14:104 (1,2,3) - a bit. Somewhat of a pattern like [url=00:14:104 (1,2,3) -]this[/url] can do
00:16:878 (6) - somewhat feels better to play if you point the end of the slider more on the right
00:25:028 (2,3,4) - would play better if you ctrl h and reposition it to x:336
00:27:456 (2,3) - feels underemphasized imo it would be better if you tilt them a little bit more somewhat like this and if you took my suggestion here move 3 to x:88
00:35:433 (1) - a bit too stacked on movement here imo move to x:112
00:40:115 (3) - a bit too far imo move to x:312 so it can show how you emphasize the vocal's intesity here 00:40:288 (4,5) -
00:47:051 (3,4,5) - this triplet would play and look better if you space them out a little more like this

Hmmm only thing that needs work here is the intro but other than that the 2nd kiai feels nice to play xd

gl~

Sakary

867 posts

Joined July 2013

Sakary 2017-11-03T01:19:37+00:00

JeirYagtama wrote:
As requested by Hello-senpai uwu

Hello's Rain
00:03:699 (2) - I kinda think this is a more prominent sound to NC here so remove NC for 00:03:005 (1) - if you do i think no.
00:05:086 - not a fan of that kind of rhythm that lefts the end on the slider get the more stronger sound here what do you suggest? i kind of think the pattern seems fine now as it matches with the sound.
00:06:300 - if you took my suggestion above then remove this circle and move 00:06:473 (1) - to x:363 so it wouldnt be too hard to dash here and also emphasis 1 better with the 1/2 gap
00:07:861 (4) - needs more... "movement" thus i recommend you to move this a little bit more to x:128 sure
00:14:104 (1) - I dont think this should be given an h-dash imo since the vocal sound you're mapping here isnt even that loud tho im gonna suggest here to change the pattern here 00:14:104 (1,2,3) - a bit. Somewhat of a pattern like [url=00:14:104 (1,2,3) -]this[/url] can do i just simply moved 1 closer to 7 to match with the song. i agree, the vocal isn't that strong.
00:16:878 (6) - somewhat feels better to play if you point the end of the slider more on the right okay
00:25:028 (2,3,4) - would play better if you ctrl h and reposition it to x:336 your suggested pattern seems weak. i'll keep this one.
00:27:456 (2,3) - feels underemphasized imo it would be better if you tilt them a little bit more somewhat like this and if you took my suggestion here move 3 to x:88 nice suggestion
00:35:433 (1) - a bit too stacked on movement here imo move to x:112 okay. but i kinda feel an anti-flow within this part feels better. i'll follow your suggestion anyway
00:40:115 (3) - a bit too far imo move to x:312 so it can show how you emphasize the vocal's intesity here 00:40:288 (4,5) - sure.
00:47:051 (3,4,5) - this triplet would play and look better if you space them out a little more like this sure thing.

Hmmm only thing that needs work here is the intro but other than that the 2nd kiai feels nice to play xd thank you!
gl~

Thanks for the mod!

Rain

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Artist:Mrs. GREEN APPLE
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Creator:Mykaterasu
Version:Hello's Rain
Source:遊☆戯☆王 ARC-V
Tags:[Kergio] Ending ED Four 4 Yu-Gi-Oh! スピーキング ミセスグリーンアップル yugioh Motoki Oomori 大森元貴
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mindmaster107

710 posts

Joined August 2016

mindmaster107 2017-11-10T14:31:39+00:00

Here from your queue btw

I modded a diff from your other mapset, so I think this is enough?

Most of the general issues with your highest diff are repeated in the extreme diff, and the hitsounds were driving me insane.

~~Yes I know I can turn those off, I was not thinking straight XD~~

[Talking]
Spacing felt overdone or unsupported. Some specific ideas were either not strong enough, or conflicting with others.

I would personally reccomend sticking with 3 core ideas at most (the sharp slider for high sv, the movement and your visuals in the kiai are ideas I personally love, but you ca pick which you want.) Please make your ideas clear as daylight, by both using them whenever possible (or changing the rules to allow for such), and by only using those ideas. Sprinkling other ideas willy nilly will make your map feel inconsistent, and at worse random.

00:15:491 (5) - The song is not strong enough imo for something which only appears in the map twice or thrice.

00:03:005 (1,2,3) - 00:03:699 (4,5,6) - These two parts sound practically the same in the context of the song, and you used completely different spacing for both. For the calm section, I would ask to make your intentions clearer by lowering spacing, and mapping simply. The rest of the beginning suffers from this too.

00:36:647 - The kiai had the strangest hitsound I have ever heard. Hitsounding is meant to be in the background of the map, not so prominent I am distracted by the map by them.

00:31:791 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This spacing, feels way way too intense for the context of the rest of the map, as it is nowhere near the most intense part and has the highest stream spacing.
00:31:791 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - This spacing ramps up way too fast for the music.
00:33:872 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This actually feels overmapped. I would use repeating 1/4 sliders if you still wanna cover the significantly quieter drum roll.

00:36:300 (1) - I would just stick with 00:00:578 (1) for consistency. You can increase spacing to pretty far lengths if you make sure you stay consistent with your concept and repeat it enough to drill it into the player.

Something about the kiai feels like a letdown.
00:41:155 (2,3,4,5,6) - The spacing feels weak, as it about closely matches the spacing from the beginning, and is way less than the spacing in the build up.

00:46:358 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Im not complaining about the spacing due to pp, but due to both overspacing and bad contrast disregarding the song.
The 3rd combo jump is clearly special in it's intensity, but is only barely spaced higher. The other jumps feel about as intense as the rest of the kiai. I understand if you need a buildup to the 3rd combo jump, but your lack of contrast clearly shows that this was not your intention (if it was, pls fix

).

00:47:398 (1,2,1) - Why is the jump to the slider so much smaller for a major vocal downbeat.

00:49:478 (2,3,4,5,6) - I would argue the vocals are losing intensity with each note. Why are jumps increasing in spacing? I don't agree with following intensity of one of the smaller instruments as you are clearly following the vocals.

01:01:965 (1,2,1,2) - 01:03:352 (1,2,1,2) - 01:04:739 (1,2,1,2) - 01:06:127 (1,2) -
Compare the pitches here. They are clearly descending pitches, which would deserve decreasing spacing.
Also the spacing is much larger than anything in the kiai (apart from the major jumps), which feels super out of place for what is supposedly the second calmest part in the song.

01:23:814 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - What happened to the hitsounds here? If you are committing to the hitsound, please do this part too.

-Luminate

358 posts

Joined August 2014

-Luminate 2017-11-13T15:44:35+00:00

Hi there! As you request in my queue

Hello's Rain

00:00:751 - I don't know if this should be mentioned but it's unnecessary green line as the green line on 00:00:924 - is representing a hitsound change
00:13:410 (6) - move left by 2-3 grids -- this antiflow is too far
00:16:878 (6) - this may be unnecessary 3/4 slider as you silenced the sliderend so I suggest a 1/2 slider instead
00:22:774 - unnecessary green line -- the green line before is already taken your hitsound setting here
00:27:109 (1,2,3) - I suggest you bent the slider angle more horizontal and reduce the distance between these sliders would flow better
00:31:098 (1) - reduce the distance to keep the dash strength stable with (2)(around x:112 I guess)
00:35:953 (2) - reduce the distance because the next 1/4 hyperjump is a little harsh and the distance from the previous note seems off
00:42:023 (6) - missing hitclap? I think hitclap suits here
00:46:705 (2,3) - nerf the distance or make the sliderend hyper? almost an edge jump for me
00:55:722 (6) - fix the shape of this slider pls
01:00:924 (1) - clap hitsound here would make the note clearer than a whistle? same as 01:01:271 (5)
01:01:965 (3,4) - these can be more movable -- a little left-right wouldn't hurt? then you move 01:02:485 (5,6) - along to the opposite side
It would look like >>This<< //I suggest you make these pattern along the similar melody as well, It will play better than standing still at one point
01:05:606 - again here //unnecessary green line
01:07:167 (1,2) - reduce the distance between these two notes would be more comfortable to play
01:08:554 (1,2) - ^^
01:12:023 (9) - make this slider more horizontal would make the stream flow better
01:26:589 (1) to 01:28:497 (4) - same as 01:01:965 (3,4) but in opposite side from before

Hope this helps!!

Mykaterasu

584 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

Mykaterasu 2017-11-13T19:50:01+00:00

This map is relatively old, so a lot of it will be remapped in combination with both our opinions.

mindmaster107 wrote:
Here from your queue btw

I modded a diff from your other mapset, so I think this is enough? yeah it is

Most of the general issues with your highest diff are repeated in the extreme diff, and the hitsounds were driving me insane. Don't worry,
I didn't like them either. Having the open hat on the offbeats was good in the extreme cause every slider is 1/2, so there's always an object to put it on,
but with 3/4 and 1/1 sliders, there are some gaps, and it's super weird. I'll just whistle the vocals in the Extras and Talking.

~~Yes I know I can turn those off, I was not thinking straight XD~~

[Talking]
Spacing felt overdone or unsupported. Some specific ideas were either not strong enough, or conflicting with others.

I would personally reccomend sticking with 3 core ideas at most (the sharp slider for high sv, the movement and your visuals in the kiai are ideas I personally love, but you ca pick which you want.) Please make your ideas clear as daylight, by both using them whenever possible (or changing the rules to allow for such), and by only using those ideas. Sprinkling other ideas willy nilly will make your map feel inconsistent, and at worse random.

00:15:491 (5) - The song is not strong enough imo for something which only appears in the map twice or thrice. There are no no 1/1 sliders in the map, so 3/4 sliders have to show some variation. I agree it's out of there tho.

00:03:005 (1,2,3) - 00:03:699 (4,5,6) - These two parts sound practically the same in the context of the song, and you used completely different spacing for both. For the calm section, I would ask to make your intentions clearer by lowering spacing, and mapping simply. The rest of the beginning suffers from this too. This section has been remapped to something much simpler. Flow and slider direction is now much more generic.

00:36:647 - The kiai had the strangest hitsound I have ever heard. Hitsounding is meant to be in the background of the map, not so prominent I am distracted by the map by them. Agreed, this was a placeholder to see if I could match the extreme, but I can't. More details in the general thoughts above.

00:31:791 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This spacing, feels way way too intense for the context of the rest of the map, as it is nowhere near the most intense part and has the highest stream spacing. Well, it is a pretty important build-up, and there is silence after it,
so I think this level of difficulty isn't too far off the intensity. This is more a problem because the kiai is pretty weak, as you'll soon state, but a little nerfing wouldn't hurt
00:31:791 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - This spacing ramps up way too fast for the music. nerfed
00:33:872 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This actually feels overmapped. I would use repeating 1/4 sliders if you still wanna cover the significantly quieter drum roll. I'll give it a go

00:36:300 (1) - I would just stick with 00:00:578 (1) for consistency. You can increase spacing to pretty far lengths if you make sure you stay consistent with your concept and repeat it enough to drill it into the player. eeeh, these sounds are pretty different, and play different roles too. It's even got visual significance in the video, so I don't think I can pass this one up I'm afraid.

Something about the kiai feels like a letdown.
00:41:155 (2,3,4,5,6) - The spacing feels weak, as it about closely matches the spacing from the beginning, and is way less than the spacing in the build up. Commencing buffing of difficulty, now with more loli biceps.

00:46:358 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Im not complaining about the spacing due to pp, but due to both overspacing and bad contrast disregarding the song.
The 3rd combo jump is clearly special in it's intensity, but is only barely spaced higher. The other jumps feel about as intense as the rest of the kiai. I understand if you need a buildup to the 3rd combo jump, but your lack of contrast clearly shows that this was not your intention (if it was, pls fix ). I don't think that the spacing needs to be so contrasted, the simple act of going through this type of movement makes each successive note feel more important, and manipulating the spacing to make it larger/smaller only amplifies that. I nerfed the 4th one to make it more apparent that the 3rd is the most important, but I don't think I'll change the increase of the 1st and 2nd, since perpendicularly-traversing back-and-forth jumps aren't found anywhere else except for the most important and intense phrases.

00:47:398 (1,2,1) - Why is the jump to the slider so much smaller for a major vocal downbeat. easy fix

00:49:478 (2,3,4,5,6) - I would argue the vocals are losing intensity with each note. Why are jumps increasing in spacing? I don't agree with following intensity of one of the smaller instruments as you are clearly following the vocals. Even if the intensity of the main instrument isn't changing,
the harmonic rhythm is speeding up, which causes the whole thing to gain momentum. I like to focus intensity a lot on harmony, so that's just my thing I guess.

01:01:965 (1,2,1,2) - 01:03:352 (1,2,1,2) - 01:04:739 (1,2,1,2) - 01:06:127 (1,2) -
Compare the pitches here. They are clearly descending pitches, which would deserve decreasing spacing.
Also the spacing is much larger than anything in the kiai (apart from the major jumps), which feels super out of place for what is supposedly the second calmest part in the song. Changed

01:23:814 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - What happened to the hitsounds here? If you are committing to the hitsound, please do this part too. Explained above, fixed

wew, ty.

Divine Cake

114 posts

Joined November 2013

Divine Cake 2017-11-13T21:54:14+00:00

Responding to NM

Extra
Cant rly mod anyting in std but noticed a duped timing here too 00:34:566 - has 2 green lines at the same timing point (thank you modding assistant)

Rain

there is a dubble timing section on 00:00:578 - one red, one green. why not just set red to D instead of S and delete the green?

The start needs some work but everything from the first kiai onward is pretty solid.

00:00:578 (1,1) - this jump is quite large, dont think the music quite has the intensity for such a jump.
00:03:005 (1) - ctrl + g? some anti-flow could work here.
00:04:913 (6) - this one feels a bit out of place, since it seems you follow the vocal. tbh i would delite this one and 00:04:739 (5) - too. then you can
move 00:05:086 (1,2) - 1/1 erlier so the slider is on the held vocal. Its also wierd to have a slider tail on a downbeat like 00:05:780 (2) -
00:06:127 - this needs a remap if you aggree on my last point. personaly i would just add one beat here and nothing on 00:06:300 (3) -
00:10:288 (5) - this slider dosnt rly show the sudden shift in vocals. i added an sv increase to 1 and mapped this: https://puu.sh/yll0I/71776dc436.png
00:19:566 (4,5) - this might be a bit intense for a rain diff, with the sudden direction change. maybe tilt 5 a bit less to the left?
00:21:040 (5,6) - this is a long jump, but no clear strong sound on 6. i get the spacing is for a hyper on (6) to (7) but the spacing before makes it a bit to intense. maybe just make (5) go more to the left than it is now.
00:24:855 (1,2,3,4,1) - the catcher accuracy and timing in this section might be a bit much to ask for a rain diff. especialy 00:25:375 (4,1) -
00:30:404 (1,2,3,4) - same applies to this, tho not as bad.
00:50:520 (1,2) - imo spacing between these two are a bit high.
01:12:023 (9) - would move head a bit more to the right and tail a bit more to the left so it has more flow with the section before and after. think the sudden stop is a bit harsh for rain diff.
01:18:265 (1,2) - imo this spacing dosnt fit with the intensity of the beat on (2), would reduce it a bit.
01:27:109 (4) - move this to something like X:264 for some vertical movement on the extra drum that hits on 01:26:936 (3,4) - (you could also consider doing something similar with 01:27:456 (5,6) - since 01:27:630 (6) - has the same drum, tho cant find a fitting pattern for that)

Good luck with the map

Mykaterasu

584 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

Mykaterasu 2017-11-13T23:49:25+00:00

Divine Cake wrote:
Extra
Cant rly mod anyting in std but noticed a duped timing here too 00:34:566 - has 2 green lines at the same timing point (thank you modding assistant)

oops

Sakary

867 posts

Joined July 2013

Sakary 2017-11-13T23:56:14+00:00

-Luminate wrote:
Hi there! As you request in my queue

Hello's Rain
00:00:751 - I don't know if this should be mentioned but it's unnecessary green line as the green line on 00:00:924 - is representing a hitsound change
00:13:410 (6) - move left by 2-3 grids -- this antiflow is too far
00:16:878 (6) - this may be unnecessary 3/4 slider as you silenced the sliderend so I suggest a 1/2 slider instead good idea. 1/2 slider feels better.
00:22:774 - unnecessary green line -- the green line before is already taken your hitsound setting here thank you for mentioning stuffs like this. i'm really glad you thoroughly checked the difficulty
00:27:109 (1,2,3) - I suggest you bent the slider angle more horizontal and reduce the distance between these sliders would flow better
00:31:098 (1) - reduce the distance to keep the dash strength stable with (2)(around x:112 I guess)
00:35:953 (2) - reduce the distance because the next 1/4 hyperjump is a little harsh and the distance from the previous note seems off
00:42:023 (6) - missing hitclap? I think hitclap suits here i'm thinking of the same thing. but i guess a hitclap here sounds better.
00:46:705 (2,3) - nerf the distance or make the sliderend hyper? almost an edge jump for me
00:55:722 (6) - fix the shape of this slider pls i don't know what you want here. but i did move the slider a bit C
01:00:924 (1) - clap hitsound here would make the note clearer than a whistle? same as 01:01:271 (5)
01:01:965 (3,4) - these can be more movable -- a little left-right wouldn't hurt? then you move 01:02:485 (5,6) - along to the opposite side
It would look like >>This<< //I suggest you make these pattern along the similar melody as well, It will play better than standing still at one point okay, changed. i like it
01:05:606 - again here //unnecessary green line
01:07:167 (1,2) - reduce the distance between these two notes would be more comfortable to play
01:08:554 (1,2) - ^^
01:12:023 (9) - make this slider more horizontal would make the stream flow better i think curve slider here feels better because of the previous 1/4 slider.
01:26:589 (1) to 01:28:497 (4) - same as 01:01:965 (3,4) but in opposite side from before
Hope this helps!!

A big thanks for the mod!

rain rain go away

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Alfarai

311 posts

Joined May 2015

Alfarai 2017-11-14T03:03:50+00:00

Talking

00:00:578 (1) - high sv seems unnecessary here

00:01:618 (3) - overlap under the slider for aesthetics

00:01:965 (5) - looks out of place and sliderend has strong beat, maybe replacing this with circles will make it better

00:02:658 (7) - decrease spacing cuz weak beat

00:04:046 (5) - overlap under the slider for aesthetics

00:05:433 (5) - blanket under (4) and maybe ctrl+g? flow seems weird

00:06:127 (1) - slow sv also seem unnecessary here

00:08:208 (5) - consider making this into a curve slider for flow

00:09:942 (3) - overlap under the slider for aesthetics

00:11:676 (1) - high sv seems unnecessary here especially if this sound is the same as these 00:12:023 (1,2) -

00:14:450 (1) - sv change isnt needed

00:15:838 (1) - ^

00:17:225 (1,2,3,4,5) - its probably just me but the flow here kinda weirds me out

00:22:774 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2) - the whole section here and the rest kinda seem overmapped as well as 00:28:323 (1,2,3,1,2) - , consider mapping just these kinds of sounds 00:22:774 (1,2) - it might be 1-2 or 1-2-3 im not sure

00:27:109 (1,2,1,2,1) - unexpected jumps, maybe if the previous section is fixed, this will fit

00:35:606 (2) - this seems out of place, consider just putting a normal slider or circles for jumps

00:46:358 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - consider making the gradual increase more....gradual. Like the increase of spacing should be visible to really reflect the beat and 00:47:398 (1,2) - should have the highest spacing

00:53:294 (1) - make this more wave-looking by moving the two central points to either sides

00:57:456 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - same as 00:46:358 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2)

01:01:965 (1,2,1,2) - vary the positions of the 1-2 cuz it looks plain as well as 01:03:352 (1,2,1,2) -

01:07:167 (1,2) - decrease spacing because too big of a spacing all of a sudden, players wont expect that lol

01:08:554 (1,2) - ^

01:09:942 (1,2) - ^

01:11:329 (1,2,3,4) - same here

01:22:427 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - same as 00:46:358 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2)

some feedback:
Spacing is overdone and too much sv changes when the song isn't a wub wub map. Consider remapping some parts and making this diff more simple to reflect a simple song

Mykaterasu

584 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

Mykaterasu 2017-11-14T21:37:00+00:00

Alfarai wrote:
Talking

00:00:578 (1) - high sv seems unnecessary here I think it's ok.

00:01:618 (3) - overlap under the slider for aesthetics This way is a viable aesthetic too. Everything is a viable aesthetic.

00:01:965 (5) - looks out of place and sliderend has strong beat, maybe replacing this with circles will make it better. Sliderend doesn't have any stronger a beat than the head does.

00:02:658 (7) - decrease spacing cuz weak beat k

00:04:046 (5) - overlap under the slider for aesthetics

00:05:433 (5) - blanket under (4) and maybe ctrl+g? flow seems weird don't think it's that weird. I changed circular flow rotation to show how the vocals are phrased, I think it works.

00:06:127 (1) - slow sv also seem unnecessary here It represents the song, and it's readable. What more do you want

00:08:208 (5) - consider making this into a curve slider for flow n

00:09:942 (3) - overlap under the slider for aesthetics

00:11:676 (1) - high sv seems unnecessary here especially if this sound is the same as these 00:12:023 (1,2) - they're not the same, so no.

00:14:450 (1) - sv change isnt needed

00:15:838 (1) - ^

00:17:225 (1,2,3,4,5) - its probably just me but the flow here kinda weirds me out

00:22:774 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2) - the whole section here and the rest kinda seem overmapped as well as 00:28:323 (1,2,3,1,2) - , consider mapping just these kinds of sounds 00:22:774 (1,2) - it might be 1-2 or 1-2-3 im not sure this section was remapped focusing on the flow as the difficulty element instead of the spacing.

00:27:109 (1,2,1,2,1) - unexpected jumps, maybe if the previous section is fixed, this will fit as above

00:35:606 (2) - this seems out of place, consider just putting a normal slider or circles for jumps the music has it, so I do to.

00:46:358 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - consider making the gradual increase more....gradual. Like the increase of spacing should be visible to really reflect the beat and 00:47:398 (1,2) - should have the highest spacing 00:47:398 (1,2) - should not have the highest spacing. That's not how the music is phrased. bit I will introduce more contrast between the lowest jump and the highest jump

00:53:294 (1) - make this more wave-looking by moving the two central points to either sides I'm fine with this shape.

00:57:456 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - same as 00:46:358 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2)

01:01:965 (1,2,1,2) - vary the positions of the 1-2 cuz it looks plain as well as 01:03:352 (1,2,1,2) - no. That would go against the visual structure I've made for this bit.

01:07:167 (1,2) - decrease spacing because too big of a spacing all of a sudden, players wont expect that lol they can handle.

01:08:554 (1,2) - ^

01:09:942 (1,2) - ^

01:11:329 (1,2,3,4) - same here

01:22:427 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - same as 00:46:358 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2)

some feedback:
Spacing is overdone and too much sv changes when the song isn't a wub wub map. Consider remapping some parts and making this diff more simple to reflect a simple song

tyfm

Sakary

867 posts

Joined July 2013

Sakary 2017-11-14T23:11:53+00:00

Divine Cake wrote:
Responding to NM
Rain

there is a dubble timing section on 00:00:578 - one red, one green. why not just set red to D instead of S and delete the green? yes, this was fixed from the previous mod

The start needs some work but everything from the first kiai onward is pretty solid. huhuhu
00:00:578 (1,1) - this jump is quite large, dont think the music quite has the intensity for such a jump.
00:03:005 (1) - ctrl + g? some anti-flow could work here.
00:04:913 (6) - this one feels a bit out of place, since it seems you follow the vocal. tbh i would delite this one and 00:04:739 (5) - too. then you can move 00:05:086 (1,2) - 1/1 erlier so the slider is on the held vocal. Its also wierd to have a slider tail on a downbeat like 00:05:780 (2) -
00:06:127 - this needs a remap if you aggree on my last point. personaly i would just add one beat here and nothing on 00:06:300 (3) - not going to add a note on the time line. reworked from your previous suggestion.
00:10:288 (5) - this slider dosnt rly show the sudden shift in vocals. i added an sv increase to 1 and mapped this: https://puu.sh/yll0I/71776dc436.png i increased SV here.
00:19:566 (4,5) - this might be a bit intense for a rain diff, with the sudden direction change. maybe tilt 5 a bit less to the left?
00:21:040 (5,6) - this is a long jump, but no clear strong sound on 6. i get the spacing is for a hyper on (6) to (7) but the spacing before makes it a bit to intense. maybe just make (5) go more to the left than it is now.
00:24:855 (1,2,3,4,1) - the catcher accuracy and timing in this section might be a bit much to ask for a rain diff. especialy 00:25:375 (4,1) -
00:30:404 (1,2,3,4) - same applies to this, tho not as bad. fixed
00:50:520 (1,2) - imo spacing between these two are a bit high.
01:12:023 (9) - would move head a bit more to the right and tail a bit more to the left so it has more flow with the section before and after. think the sudden stop is a bit harsh for rain diff. okay
01:18:265 (1,2) - imo this spacing dosnt fit with the intensity of the beat on (2), would reduce it a bit.
01:27:109 (4) - move this to something like X:264 for some vertical movement on the extra drum that hits on 01:26:936 (3,4) - (you could also consider doing something similar with 01:27:456 (5,6) - since 01:27:630 (6) - has the same drum, tho cant find a fitting pattern for that) yes yes. modified

Good luck with the map

Thank you for the very helpful mod!

so i set fire to the rain

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200,160,36300,2,0,L|352:96,1,157.500006008148,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,120,36647,5,6,0:0:0:0:
192,264,36820,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,216,36907,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,192,36994,2,0,L|32:176,1,125.999996154785,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,296,37341,2,0,P|416:240|400:176,1,125.999996154785,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,176,37601,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,168,37687,2,0,P|200:120|240:56,1,125.999996154785,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,104,38034,6,0,L|336:88,1,125.999996154785,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,192,38381,2,0,L|384:176,1,125.999996154785,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,296,38728,2,0,L|80:160,1,125.999996154785,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,288,39075,2,0,P|280:192|224:104,1,188.999994232178,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,136,39421,6,0,L|160:64,1,125.999996154785,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,200,39768,2,0,L|472:56,1,125.999996154785,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,160,40115,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,144,40288,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,64,40462,1,8,0:0:0:0:
456,56,40635,2,0,L|480:128,1,62.9999980773926
264,248,40809,6,0,P|208:192|192:120,1,125.999996154785,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,192,41156,2,0,P|384:144|408:80,1,125.999996154785,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,48,41416,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,216,41502,2,0,P|40:136|64:96,1,125.999996154785,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,160,41849,1,8,0:0:0:0:
72,144,42023,1,8,0:0:0:0:
400,304,42196,6,0,P|448:216|416:176,1,125.999996154785,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,168,42456,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,128,42543,2,0,L|432:96,1,125.999996154785,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,304,42890,2,0,P|104:224|136:168,1,125.999996154785,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,160,43150,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,120,43236,2,0,L|112:104,1,125.999996154785,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,272,43583,5,2,0:0:0:0:
424,144,43757,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,272,43930,2,0,L|224:240,1,125.999996154785,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,168,44277,1,2,0:0:0:0:
216,304,44450,2,0,L|304:280,1,62.9999980773926
208,240,44624,2,0,L|72:224,1,125.999996154785,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,352,44971,6,0,P|472:304|464:216,1,125.999996154785,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,248,45317,2,0,L|192:144,1,125.999996154785,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,128,45578,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,80,45664,2,0,L|32:64,1,125.999996154785,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,152,46011,2,0,L|408:144,1,125.999996154785,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,336,46358,6,0,P|48:240|96:184,1,125.999996154785,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,216,46705,2,0,P|448:152|464:72,1,125.999996154785,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,152,47051,1,2,0:0:0:0:
120,128,47138,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,104,47225,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,64,47398,1,8,0:0:0:0:
72,184,47572,1,8,0:0:0:0:
432,344,47745,6,0,P|472:272|456:208,1,125.999996154785,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,200,48005,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,168,48092,1,8,0:0:0:0:
472,120,48265,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,288,48439,2,0,P|152:248|152:160,1,125.999996154785,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,176,48699,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,176,48786,2,0,P|392:128|408:64,1,125.999996154785,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,168,49132,6,0,L|88:32,1,125.999996154785,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,136,49479,1,8,0:0:0:0:
104,136,49653,1,0,0:0:0:0:
48,88,49739,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,40,49826,1,2,0:0:0:0:
312,304,49999,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,328,50173,2,0,P|80:280|168:224,1,188.999994232178,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,192,50520,6,0,L|400:88,1,125.999996154785,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,200,50867,2,0,L|72:120,1,125.999996154785,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,296,51213,2,0,L|472:208,1,125.999996154785,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,192,51473,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,152,51560,2,0,L|480:96,1,125.999996154785,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,296,51907,6,0,L|16:216,1,125.999996154785,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,232,52254,2,0,L|304:136,1,125.999996154785,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,120,52514,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,96,52601,2,0,L|160:176,1,125.999996154785,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,208,52947,2,0,L|464:120,1,125.999996154785,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,312,53294,6,0,L|32:272,1,125.999996154785,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,232,53554,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,208,53641,2,0,L|24:184,1,125.999996154785,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,336,53988,2,0,P|480:264|424:200,1,125.999996154785,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,200,54248,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,176,54335,1,8,0:0:0:0:
472,144,54508,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,304,54682,6,0,P|104:232|104:168,1,125.999996154785,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,248,55028,2,0,P|336:184|352:128,1,125.999996154785,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,104,55288,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,80,55375,1,2,0:0:0:0:
384,40,55549,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,320,55722,2,0,P|56:280|128:200,1,188.999994232178,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,200,56069,6,0,L|448:120,1,125.999996154785,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,152,56416,2,0,L|168:72,1,125.999996154785,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,312,56762,1,2,0:0:0:0:
456,256,56936,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,224,57109,1,8,0:0:0:0:
456,160,57283,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,336,57456,6,0,L|208:200,1,125.999996154785,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,232,57716,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,256,57803,2,0,P|472:176|416:128,1,125.999996154785,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,136,58150,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,96,58323,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,56,58497,1,8,0:0:0:0:
328,16,58670,1,8,0:0:0:0:
72,216,58843,6,0,L|16:88,2,125.999996154785,6|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,288,59364,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,240,59450,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,208,59537,2,0,L|88:176,1,125.999996154785,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,168,59884,2,0,L|432:144,1,125.999996154785,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,352,60231,6,0,P|80:272|112:224,1,125.999996154785,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,216,60491,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,200,60578,2,0,P|312:152|304:96,1,125.999996154785,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,120,60838,1,0,0:0:0:0:
408,56,60924,5,10,0:0:0:0:
464,80,61011,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,120,61098,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,160,61184,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,176,61271,1,10,0:0:0:0:
176,200,61358,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,240,61445,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,280,61531,1,0,0:0:0:0:
456,360,61618,5,2,0:0:0:0:
480,248,61791,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,224,61965,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,192,62138,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,160,62485,1,2,0:0:0:0:
344,128,62658,1,8,0:0:0:0:
48,320,63005,5,2,0:0:0:0:
32,216,63179,1,2,0:0:0:0:
280,216,63352,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,208,63525,1,8,0:0:0:0:
360,152,63872,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,120,64045,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,80,64219,1,0,0:0:0:0:
56,360,64393,5,2,0:0:0:0:
32,248,64566,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,224,64740,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,192,64913,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,160,65260,1,2,0:0:0:0:
168,128,65433,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,320,65780,5,0,0:0:0:0:
448,200,65953,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,184,66127,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,152,66300,1,8,0:0:0:0:
56,224,66473,5,2,0:0:0:0:
184,168,66647,1,8,0:0:0:0:
40,112,66820,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,64,66994,1,8,0:0:0:0:
456,264,67167,6,4,L|472:120,1,125.999996154785
296,344,67514,2,0,P|184:296|104:176,2,251.999992309571,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,320,68381,1,0,0:0:0:0:
48,224,68554,6,4,L|32:80,1,125.999996154785
168,40,68901,2,0,P|280:88|360:208,2,251.999992309571,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,80,69768,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,128,69942,6,4,L|424:264,1,125.999996154785
216,336,70288,2,0,P|272:264|432:184,2,251.999992309571,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,336,71156,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,312,71329,5,8,0:0:0:0:
48,280,71416,1,8,0:0:0:0:
48,216,71502,1,8,0:0:0:0:
104,184,71589,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,200,71676,1,4,0:0:0:0:
328,168,71762,1,4,0:0:0:0:
328,96,71849,1,4,0:0:0:0:
272,64,71936,1,4,0:0:0:0:
96,48,72023,2,0,L|16:48,1,62.9999980773926,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,328,72196,2,0,P|384:272|304:96,1,314.999990386963,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,96,72716,5,6,0:0:0:0:
224,184,72890,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,152,72976,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,136,73063,2,0,L|88:120,1,125.999996154785,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,256,73410,2,0,P|360:208|392:144,1,125.999996154785,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,136,73670,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,112,73757,2,0,P|184:160|152:216,1,125.999996154785,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,240,74104,6,0,L|472:104,1,125.999996154785,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,152,74450,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,168,74624,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,200,74797,2,0,L|160:208,1,125.999996154785,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,328,75144,2,0,P|408:264|360:152,1,188.999994232178,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,192,75491,6,0,L|192:104,1,125.999996154785,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,112,75838,2,0,L|208:32,1,125.999996154785,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,216,76184,2,0,L|328:192,1,125.999996154785,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,216,76445,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,248,76531,2,0,L|472:280,1,125.999996154785,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,336,76878,6,0,P|144:256|160:192,1,125.999996154785,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,208,77225,2,0,P|368:128|360:80,1,125.999996154785,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,64,77485,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,48,77572,1,2,0:0:0:0:
360,16,77745,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,176,77919,2,0,L|136:40,1,125.999996154785,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,96,78265,5,6,0:0:0:0:
264,224,78439,2,0,L|176:176,1,62.9999980773926
280,176,78612,2,0,L|440:160,1,125.999996154785,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,344,78959,2,0,P|168:280|152:192,1,125.999996154785,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,208,79219,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,176,79306,2,0,L|8:152,1,125.999996154785,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,296,79653,5,2,0:0:0:0:
304,208,79826,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,312,79999,2,0,P|96:248|128:168,1,125.999996154785,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,184,80260,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,176,80346,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,112,80520,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,312,80693,2,0,P|352:224|304:120,1,188.999994232178,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,192,81040,6,0,L|64:64,1,125.999996154785,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,128,81387,2,0,L|304:0,1,125.999996154785,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,304,81734,2,0,L|88:168,1,125.999996154785,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,232,82080,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,216,82254,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,344,82427,6,0,P|456:280|400:192,1,125.999996154785,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,216,82687,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,200,82774,2,0,P|272:144|272:64,1,125.999996154785,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,72,83121,1,2,0:0:0:0:
288,72,83294,1,0,0:0:0:0:
440,136,83468,1,10,0:0:0:0:
288,136,83641,1,0,0:0:0:0:
48,288,83814,6,0,P|64:200|80:152,1,125.999996154785,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,248,84161,2,0,P|280:160|288:104,1,125.999996154785,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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112,72,84768,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,328,84855,2,0,L|480:240,1,125.999996154785,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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240,168,85462,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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112,48,85895,5,10,0:0:0:0:
64,96,85982,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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312,216,86242,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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336,176,87109,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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72,304,87976,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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Mykaterasu

584 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

Mykaterasu 2017-11-14T23:18:16+00:00

updated

hi-mei

784 posts

Joined June 2014

hi-mei 2017-11-20T17:30:56+00:00

hey from my queue:

Talking

the diff plays nice but there are some inconsistency in DS so i was getting 100s in some unexpected places:
00:03:352 (3,4) - 00:04:393 (1,2,3) - compare these two, basically it feels like the first one is 1/2 and the second is 1/4s but its opposite
00:04:393 (1,2,3) - 00:06:473 (1,2) - same
etc
consider that its an intro and the spacing shud be more calm and consistent

Extreme:
plays even better, tho there were some distance issues as well:
00:37:341 (4,5) - this basically reads as 1/4 but in reality its 1/2 O_O

Extra:
00:47:745 (1) - not sure about this slider shape, it breaks the map aesthetics and the blanket as well

gl!

Mykaterasu

584 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

Mykaterasu 2017-11-22T08:52:49+00:00

hi-mei wrote:
hey from my queue:

Talking

the diff plays nice but there are some inconsistency in DS so i was getting 100s in some unexpected places:
00:03:352 (3,4) - 00:04:393 (1,2,3) - compare these two, basically it feels like the first one is 1/2 and the second is 1/4s but its opposite reduced ds
00:04:393 (1,2,3) - 00:06:473 (1,2) - same
etc
consider that its an intro and the spacing shud be more calm and consistent

Extreme:
plays even better, tho there were some distance issues as well:
00:37:341 (4,5) - this basically reads as 1/4 but in reality its 1/2 O_O 00:36:647 (1,2) - is 1/4 spacing 00:37:341 (4,5) - is 1/2

Extra:
00:47:745 (1) - not sure about this slider shape, it breaks the map aesthetics and the blanket as well jaggy-ness nerfed

gl!

Cheers!

LiousPL

231 posts

Joined February 2015

LiousPL 2017-11-25T15:00:16+00:00

Ehh, sorry for late mod! My bad

~ General ~

In CtB mode, combo colour number 3 is hard to reading while playing, so im suggest change it to the brighter one

~ Hello's Rain ~
00:04:393 (3,4) - There's no movement, take that 4 a bit from the 3, this operation do some changes to this boring part, im suggest to change it becouse the next object (in this situation 1 slider) have a better flow jump instead, the vocal here is hearable for white and red tick, so this is the next reason why u get might to change it.
00:06:127 (4,1) - Little closer, hard to catch after a jump from 3 to 4
00:12:890 (4) - Why take it between 3 and 5? (in this situation is x:196), Im think that add some more flow here
00:24:161 (5,6) - Any reason for do that here? 5 is from antiflow, but is the same beat like 00:22:947 (2,3)

Short mod, but im think it is helpful

Sakary

867 posts

Joined July 2013

Sakary 2017-12-14T11:38:51+00:00

Thank you for the mod. Will check your mod @LiousPL in Christmas break

Beepu

139 posts

Joined September 2014

Beepu 2017-12-26T20:01:34+00:00

Hello's Rain

00:05:953 (3) - Hdash is better i feel
00:06:473 (1) - nerf some distance?
00:13:930 (7) - and 00:14:624 - remove Hdash
00:16:184 (4) - i will give it some curve
00:26:762 - Hdash
00:33:872 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - why don't keep the Hdash on 4 and 8 or only 4
00:45:317 (2,3,4) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9857737
01:06:473 (1,2,3,4) - they can move to right slowly like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9857794
01:25:202 (1,2,3) - they need more difficulty

00:46:705 (2) - 00:47:398 (6) - 00:57:803 (3) - 00:58:497 (6) - 01:22:774 (3) - add whistle?

Sakary

867 posts

Joined July 2013

Sakary 2018-02-02T15:35:00+00:00

Hello,
Will look for CTB BNs after I check {-naniwa-} and liousPL's mod.

Why on graveyard

Mykaterasu

584 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

Mykaterasu 2018-02-02T16:10:20+00:00

you didn't respond to a mod for over a month ;_;

I'll rez when you gimme diff update.

Sakary

867 posts

Joined July 2013

Sakary 2018-02-03T11:59:01+00:00

LiousPL wrote:
Ehh, sorry for late mod! My bad

~ General ~
In CtB mode, combo colour number 3 is hard to reading while playing, so im suggest change it to the brighter one

~ Hello's Rain ~
00:04:393 (3,4) - There's no movement, take that 4 a bit from the 3, this operation do some changes to this boring part, im suggest to change it becouse the next object (in this situation 1 slider) have a better flow jump instead, the vocal here is hearable for white and red tick, so this is the next reason why u get might to change it. sure
00:06:127 (4,1) - Little closer, hard to catch after a jump from 3 to 4 sure
00:12:890 (4) - Why take it between 3 and 5? (in this situation is x:196), Im think that add some more flow here
00:24:161 (5,6) - Any reason for do that here? 5 is from antiflow, but is the same beat like 00:22:947 (2,3) i dont get what you mean here.
Short mod, but im think it is helpful it is

Thanks for the mod!
Will check {-naniwa-}'s later
also will update this post after checking naniwa's

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