1. Easy (0.76 stars, 132 notes)
2. Hard (4.44 stars, 279 notes)
3. Normal (2.44 stars, 175 notes)

Selee wrote:

Timing:
BPM: 110.400
Offset: 447

soft-finish doesn't fit this song well imo, replace them with whistles?

btw really love the song style.

winber1 wrote:

i could just be me, but i really wouldn't use finish hitsounds the way i would use claps or whistles (unless it was like some different custom finish hitsound). I would only use it for like beginning or ends of phrases/sections. sometimes i feel it's a little overused :/

Hard

00:13:490 (5) - new combo
00:17:294 (5) - a whistle seems to work better imo here rather than a finish, or you can just use a clap to continue or clap pattern
00:22:186 (3) - new combo
00:23:273 (1) - remove combo?
00:42:294 (2) - clap
00:42:566 (3) - whistle
00:43:110 (5) - ^
00:43:381 (6) - replace the finish with a clap at the beginning, leave the other finish as it is
00:54:251 (5,6) - maybe you could just replace the finishes with whistles. it's a little noisy imo.
01:04:305 (1) - remove combo?
01:18:436 (7) - new combo and remove teh combo from the next note
01:44:794 (5,6,7,1) - perhaps you could try the same thing as the other pattern 00:42:294 (2,3,4,5,6)
01:44:794 (5) - new combo
01:46:425 (1) - remove combo (for consistency purposes)
01:47:783 (2) - new combo
02:00:012 (4) - new combo
02:14:686 (1) - remove combo and add a new combo to the next note
02:15:501 - i don't think finishes work so well ever other white tick >_> lol
02:32:077 (1) - remove combo and add new combo to next note.
02:32:620 - you may consider increasing spacing here or do something to mark the half step increase in the music.

--really, this is actually a really nice map in terms of beat placement. i have no problems with how the beats are placed (location- and timing-wise). i guess some shapes could have been more even and smooth, but it doesn't really affect anything

Easy

--You should finish mapping this to the end. if i recall correctly, there might actually be a rule on this too about mapping all diffs the same length, unless it's a guest diff and that other mapper is adamant about their play time, tho i'm not sure about that.

00:43:382 (1) - move this note to 00:43:924, and then rearrange spacing
01:03:490 (4) - new combo
01:04:305 (1) - remove combo
01:27:403 (1) - end spinner at 01:29:577. you can silence it if you want. it just sounds better to me this way

1. recheck your kiai time really put on right way?

1. remove unnecessary green line in Easy

spboxer3 wrote:

[General]Fixed

1. recheck your kiai time really put on right way?

[Easy]

1. remove unnecessary green line in Easy

[Hard]Fixed
00:15:664 (3,4) - stack
00:44:740 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2) - I don't like this rhythm
01:18:436 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - make it more like square
02:32:620 - to 02:40:773 - why spacing is become low?

I think you will make it more pretty~

thank you for mod

Megurine Luka wrote:

Hello. Mod as requested : )
Miku~Miku~

[General]
I suggest you map a NM diff in order to satisfy the "gradually increase of difficulties" OK

[Easy]
The clap does not sounds fit in this song. Try decrease the volume or use a more soft costume hitsound?
00:03:707 (4) - this slider is too linear, and it does not fit the song style Fixed
00:08:055 (2) - actually this one need to be strengthen._. try lower volume of finish(about 30%) Fixed
00:42:838 (4) - clap Fixed
00:56:968 (2) - this slider is too linear, and it does not fit the song style Fixed
01:05:392 (1) - del Fixed
01:11:642 (1) - del NC Fixed
del the useless green lines and kiai time


[Hard]
HP+1?　Fixed
CS-1? Not Fixed
02:30:446 (1) - make it prettier Fixed
Sounds OK. The only problem for me is that most of the sliders are too straight and do not have much changes :> OK


Nice song
Good Luck

Yukoyuko wrote:

red = fix it
black = just suggestions

I'm poor at English. Please understand it

[1],[2],[3],[4] is Image

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

[General]

*00:43:439 - Remove useless timing
-00:50:289 - I think that hitsound is little big. How about decreasing volume? Fixed


[Easy]

-00:13:490 (1,2) - Make it smoothly Fixed


[Hard]

*00:06:968 (3) - Make it prettier Fixed
*00:10:773 (4) - Too far from center[/color] Fixed
-00:17:294 (5) - I think clap is better than whistle Fixed
-00:28:707 (1) - Curve to other side Fixed
-00:33:870 (6) - Move End point to (45,236) [1] Fixed
*00:35:773 (3) - Make it smoothly Fixed
-00:45:827 (5) - Curve to other side Fixed
-01:00:229 (2) - How about this? [2] Fixed,nice idea
*01:06:479 (3) - Move 3 Tiny Grids to up Fixed
*01:11:642 (1,2,3) - Something like this [3] Fixed
*01:16:262 (3,4) - Too far from center Fixed
*01:47:512 - How about adding New circle(1) (288,312)[/color] Not Fixed
-01:53:458 - Hitsound is little big Fixed
*01:57:294 (5) - Delete New combo, and new combo at 01:57:838 (2) Fixed
*01:57:838 (2,3) - Make it prettier[/color] Fixed
-02:22:566 (5) - Move 5 Tiny Grids to up Fixed
-02:28:544 (2) - copy 02:29:088 (3) and use Ctrl + H Fixed
*02:34:794 (1) - Something like this [4] Fixed
*02:40:229 (5,1,2,3) - Make it prettier[/color] Fixed


Image

SPOILER

[attachment=1:24190]a.jpg[/attachment:24190][attachment=0:24190]b.jpg[/attachment:24190]

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

I think that hard difficulty must have more notes, I think it's normal difficulty OK

Apricot wrote:

[!] = You NEED to change.
[.] = If possible, change.
[?] = Suggestion/nazi.

[NC] = Add New Combo.
[RNC] = Remove New Combo.

You can ignore hitsound mod if you don't like it.

[General]
難易度は、Normal/Hardのように連続している必要があるので、Normalが無いとRankしない可能性が高いです
Official Ranking Submission Rules and Guidelines
Difficulties of a mapset must be in a consecutive order. Making three hard/insane difficulties and throwing an easy or normal in is unacceptable and won't get your map ranked. Therefore, difficulties must be in a consecutive order such as Easy-Normal-Hard or Normal-Hard-Insane. A gap in difficulties (e.g. Easy-Normal-Insane) will not be allowed.
初めて知りました・・・ありがとうございます！

[Easy]　　All Fixed
最後まで作った方がいいです ｌ）了解です！
00:17:838 (1) - add clap.
00:18:925 (2) - スライダーの終点にwhistle?
00:27:620 (2) - ^.
00:33:055 (2) - add whistle.
00:34:142 (1) - 終点にfinish
00:37:403 (1) - 終点にwhistle
00:56:968 (2) - スライダーを滑らかに曲げた方が綺麗に見えると思います
01:01:316 (3) - 終点にfinish
01:11:642 (1) - RNC.
01:12:186 (2) - NC
01:25:229 (1) - DSに沿って修正
01:29:577 付近にある微妙にずれた緑線をきちんと合わせた方がいいです

[Hard]　All Fixed
00:06:968 (3) - このスライダーは多分Rankしないので修正した方がいいです
00:35:773 (3) - 滑らかに曲げた方が見栄えがいいと思います
00:55:881 (2) - 折り返し側にwhistleを追加
00:58:055 (2) - ^
01:06:479 (3) - 2 or 3grid up
01:08:653 (3) - 前にあるスライダーの流れに沿って曲げるようにした方がいいと思います
02:34:794 (1) - 滑らかに曲げた方が見栄えがいいと思います
02:47:838 (1) - 始点にwhistleを追加

Miya wrote:

I really like the song, and the beatmap are good.. good job btw..

Route 99 wrote:

Hail the new page!
Ohai there, #modreqs here :3 Hope it'll be useful.

SPOILER

[General]:
I think offset is 425 (-22ms to current), don't forget to resnap all the notes and move all the green sections by the same number.
So much kiai... Try to reduce its usage.
[Easy]:
I don't think the hitclaps you used in the beginning fit the tune in general, so I'd recommend to replace them all with whistles, sounds really more suiting.
00:13:490 (2) - hitfinish on the beginning of the slider　Not Fixed
00:17:838 (2) - hitfinish　Not Fixed
00:22:186 (1) - ^　Not Fixed
00:25:446 (4) - hitfinish on the end Fixed
00:30:881 (1) - HF, the beginning　Not Fixed
00:39:577 (1) - ^　Not Fixed
00:43:925 (1) - ^　Not Fixed
00:45:555 (2) - HF, the end　Not Fixed
00:47:186 (4) - HF　Not Fixed
00:49:360 (2) - ^　Not Fixed
00:54:794 (1) - HF, the beginning Fixed
01:03:490 (6) - HF　Not Fixed
01:04:033 (1) - whistle on the beginning Fixed
01:07:838 (1) - HF　Not Fixed
01:08:925 (2) - whistle　Not Fixed
01:14:360 (2) - HF, the beginning　Not Fixed
01:20:881 (3) - HF　Not Fixed
01:25:229 (1) - ^　Not Fixed
01:26:316 (2) - whistle　Not Fixed
01:33:925 (1) - HF　Not Fixed
01:37:186 (4) - HF, the end Fixed
01:42:620 (1) - HF　Not Fixed
01:45:881 (4) - ^　Not Fixed
01:46:425 (1) - HF, the end　Not Fixed
01:51:316 (1) - HF　Not Fixed
01:57:838 (1) - HF, the beginning Fixed
02:02:186 (1) - ^　Not Fixed
02:07:077 (1) - ^　Not Fixed
02:15:229 (1) - ^ Fixed
02:19:577 (1) - ^　Not Fixed
02:26:099 (2) - ^　Not Fixed
02:36:968 (1) - ^　Not Fixed
02:45:664 (1) - HF　Not Fixed
02:50:012 (1,2) - whistles on the ends　Not Fixed

[Hard]:
00:00:990 (2) - whistle Fixed
00:03:164 (2) - ^　Fixed
00:06:968 (1) - ^　Not Fixed
00:13:490 (x) - add a note, + HF　Not Fixed,
00:17:294 (x) - ^　Not Fixed
00:17:838 (x) - note　Not Fixed
00:21:099 (8) - I'd make it reverse and add HF on the end　Not Fixed
00:24:088 (5) - whistle　Not Fixed
00:29:794 (7) - same as with 00:21:099 (8)　Not Fixed
00:34:686 (1) - HF, the end　　Not Fixed
00:38:490 (10) - see 00:21:099 (8)　Not Fixed
00:42:838 (4) - HF　　Not Fixed,but add whithle
00:48:816 (3) - whistle, the beginning　Not Fixed
00:49:360 (4) - HF　Not Fixed
01:03:490 (2) - HF, the beginning　Fixed
01:05:120 (4) - whistle　Fixed
01:08:653 (2) - ^, the end　Not Fixed
01:11:099 (3) - ^　Not Fixed
01:11:642 (1) - HF　Fixed
01:16:533 (4) - HF, the beginning　Not Fixed
01:20:881 (6) - HF　Not Fixed
01:22:512 (2) - whistle　Not Fixed
01:25:229 (1) - HF　Not Fixed
01:26:044 (3) - whistle, the end　Not Fixed
01:27:403 (1) - whistle, the beginning　Fixed
01:28:490 (3) - ^　Not Fixed
01:33:925 (1) - HF　Not Fixed
01:37:729 (8) - whistle　Not Fixed
01:38:273 (1) - HF　Fixed
01:42:620 (2) - ^　Not Fixed
01:46:425 (6) - HF, end　Not Fixed
01:52:403 (4) - ^　Not Fixed
02:00:012 (1) - HF, beginning　Not Fixed
02:06:533 (1) - HF　Not Fixed
02:09:794 (6) - ^, end　Not Fixed
02:11:968 (4) - whistle　Not Fixed
02:19:577 (1) - HF, beginning　Not Fixed
02:23:381 (1) - HF, end　Not Fixed
02:28:273 (1) - HF　Not Fixed
02:29:088 (3) - whistle, end　Not Fixed
02:31:262 (2) - ^　Not Fixed
02:32:620 (1) - HF, beginning　Not Fixed
02:36:968 (7) - ^　Not Fixed
02:45:664 (1) - HF　Not Fixed
02:48:653 (2) - whistle, end　Fixed
Good job, I enjoyed both the song and the map :3

thank you for mod!!

NotShinta wrote:

General:
- It would be nice if you made/got difficulties in between Easy and Hard, to appeal to more people. OK

Hard:
- 00:12:403 (7) - Reversing (Ctrl+R) this makes the player tap/click/whatever in a straight line from the previous two hitobjects, which could subtly feel better. It works as it is though, so this is just a suggestion. (same for 00:15:664 (6)) Not fixed
- 00:32:783 (3) - There doesn't seem to actually be anything, including vocals, on the 1/4 repeat here, musically. I recommend just making this a 1/2 long slider for maximum flow. Fixed
- 00:50:446 - It would sound nicer if you moved the previous inherited section to here, as there is an awkward sounding 1/4 of slide-normal on 00:49:903 (5), with how it's currently placed. Fixed
- 01:00:229 (2) - This spacing could easily be read as 1/2 from the previous slider; anti jumps like this are usually not recommended, and I suggest you rearrange this pattern, keeping spacing. Fixed

Easy:
- I don't think the claps fit the song, here, as they're quite 'hard' compared to the 'softness' of the song. I recommend just not using any, personally. Change
- 01:06:751 (3) - It's weird to have just one 1/2 hitcircle in a map, excluding the one other repeat. You could just extend 01:05:664 (2) by 1/2. Fixed

This was a very quick mod, highlighting only the problems that stuck out at me. If you decide to make more difficulties, I will remod. Maybe I will anyway. Hitsounding could be improved, I'll leave that to other modders for the time being. Good luck!