15:09 Ellyu: ok my second ctb map done
15:09 *Ellyu is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1344381 Juicy J/Kill The Noise/Ty Dolla $ign/Wiz Khalifa/Madsonik - Shell Shocked]
15:10 Ellyu: testplay available?
15:10 Tenshichan: sure after Im done eating :D
15:11 Ellyu: this time I may try to rank this
15:22 *Tenshichan is playing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1344381 Juicy J/Kill The Noise/Ty Dolla $ign/Wiz Khalifa/Madsonik - Shell Shocked [Rain]] <CatchTheBeat>
15:26 Tenshichan: oh
15:26 Tenshichan: this is already a decent rain I'd say
15:27 Tenshichan: the flow is good in this map
15:27 Ellyu: :D
15:28 Ellyu: hmm could u send me ur replay
15:28 Tenshichan: I can play it again if you want
15:28 *Tenshichan is playing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1344381 Juicy J/Kill The Noise/Ty Dolla $ign/Wiz Khalifa/Madsonik - Shell Shocked [Rain]] <CatchTheBeat>
15:28 Ellyu: ok thanks!
15:32 Tenshichan: sry for the misses
15:32 Tenshichan: lol
15:32 Ellyu: rip full combo
15:32 Tenshichan: first play was 1 miss rip
15:34 Ellyu: any problem in this diff?
15:34 Tenshichan: there is nothing unplayable or weird to play stuff
15:36 Ellyu: XD
15:37 Tenshichan: if anything maybe some hdash placement things
15:38 Tenshichan: stuff like this
15:38 Tenshichan: 00:53:772 (6,1) -  (should have a hdash imo)
15:39 Ellyu: hmm
15:40 Ellyu: I tried to avoid using too much hdash at non-kiai portions
15:40 Tenshichan: 01:09:226 (5,6,7,8) - could make this harder btw, for example space them more
15:40 Tenshichan: cause right now you dont need much movement there
15:42 Tenshichan: 01:20:681 (4,5) - you use hdash before for the clap sound, could also do it here
15:42 Ellyu: https://puu.sh/wxhDy/717906ba2d.png
15:43 Ellyu: like this?
15:43 Tenshichan: 01:26:317 (2) - I'd make (2) face the other direction so the jump to (3) is a hdash
15:43 Tenshichan: yeah something like that just that you need some more movement to play that section :P
15:44 Tenshichan: oh well, to what I said before
15:45 Tenshichan: ignore it because you never used hdash on that clap in the other sections
15:45 Tenshichan: I mean this 01:26:317 (2) - 
15:46 Ellyu: yes i see
15:46 Ellyu: cuz I don't place hdash at clap at this portion
15:46 Ellyu: and I want to keep consistency
15:47 Tenshichan: 01:34:681 (1,2) - This is inconsistent to the sections before
15:47 Tenshichan: here you actually have a hdash onto the clap xD
15:48 Ellyu: oh
15:49 Tenshichan: 01:44:863 (1,1) - ^
15:49 Ellyu: mistake
15:50 Tenshichan: 01:48:499 (3,4,5,1) - The beat on (4) is stronger than one (1) here, shouldnt (3,4) be the hdash instead?
15:51 Ellyu: seems like I used to think place sth special on those 1/1 gap
15:52 Tenshichan: 01:51:136 (2,3,4) - maybe like this? http://puu.sh/wxi0F/b8123a8b19.jpg then it requires some movement here
15:53 Ellyu: oh
15:53 Ellyu: the static things
15:53 Tenshichan: 01:51:408 (3,4,1) - kinda the same thing as before, the strong beat is on (4)
15:54 Ellyu: 01:51:136 (2,3,4) -  I place these intentionally
15:54 Ellyu: static movement feels like emphasize the special sounds here better imo
15:55 Tenshichan: hmm ok
15:55 Ellyu: is it weird to play?
15:55 Tenshichan: 01:53:590 (1,1,1,1) - this is fine but there is no need for NC after every slider
15:56 Tenshichan: its not weird to play, just that stacks in CTB don't have any movement so you are just standing still for a bit and imo it should have movement, but its a thing of taste I guess
15:58 Tenshichan: 01:55:045 (1) - would rather split it into 2 sliders like this https://puu.sh/wxifP/d97bd09735.jpg
16:01 Tenshichan: 02:07:408 (5,6,7,8) - make the gap noticeably bigger here, you can even walk those at the moment and it is a bit boring
16:03 Tenshichan: 02:19:772 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - well this is empty because there is not much going on; can't you place a spinner here somehow? I mean there is this "increasing" sound in the background which would go along with it
16:04 Tenshichan: 02:25:226 (6,1) - hdash maybe?
16:05 Ellyu: spinner idea is good
16:05 Tenshichan: 02:27:681 (8,1) - keep the gap here like the previous ones for consistency (right now there is none)
16:06 Tenshichan: actually nvm I am blind
16:06 Tenshichan: xD
16:06 Tenshichan: 02:26:226 (8,1) -  02:27:681 (8,1) - those should have small gaps too though
16:07 Tenshichan: else it feels a bit off to just skip the sounds there
16:09 Tenshichan: 02:28:408 (8,1,4,1,4,1,4,1,4,1) - just a thought; maybe those gaps could be hdashes since it would fit to the bass here as it gains intensity
16:10 Ellyu: bancho kill me plz
16:10 Tenshichan: oh whats the last message I typed to you?
16:10 Ellyu: did I miss anything
16:11 Ellyu: sth at here 02:19:772 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
16:11 Tenshichan: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8466983
16:12 Tenshichan: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8466991
16:12 Tenshichan: can you work with this?
16:13 Ellyu: yep
16:13 Tenshichan: 02:32:136 (3,4) - missing hdash
16:13 Tenshichan: 02:33:590 (4,5) - ^
16:14 Tenshichan: oh seems you intentionally skipped those beats
16:15 Tenshichan: just feels a bit odd when there are 2 identical sounds and one is a hdash while the other isnt
16:17 Ellyu: maybe a antiflow works better than hdash here
16:17 Ellyu: hdash too intense here
16:18 Tenshichan: 03:06:681 (2,3) - maybe you can make this a curved slider instead of 2 single fruits?
16:18 Tenshichan: 03:09:590 (2,3) - ^
16:19 Tenshichan: 03:08:863 (4,1) - the distance here should be a bit more significant imo
16:19 Ellyu: but there's nothing between those "knock knock"
16:20 Tenshichan: hmm I suggested it so it creates a bit more movement since those 2 fruits are stacked
16:22 Tenshichan: 03:16:499 (1,1,1,1) - what I like to do with those kind of patterns is to do it roughly like this http://puu.sh/wxj9U/27519f3734.jpg
16:23 Tenshichan: 00:12:499 (3,4,3,4) - 1/1 gap here but fruits are almost stacked, maybe move them a bit apart
16:24 Ellyu: oh yes this one works better
16:26 Tenshichan: I noticed you are a bit careful with how you do the streams and some of the gaps during the streams are even walkable. I would consider making some of them bigger so you actually need to use dash
16:27 Tenshichan: 00:18:954 (8,1,4,1,4,1,4,1) -  for example those
16:27 Tenshichan: baka bancho ;w;
16:27 Tenshichan: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8467085
16:29 Tenshichan: I think thats all I can point out for now
16:30 Tenshichan: the map has a good flow imo
16:31 Tenshichan: should I post this to beatmap thread or?