[EZ]
From start, I think you can follow better the sounds at this section:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/854574100:17:164 (17164|1,17714|2,18265|3) - You can use Longnotes here to skip the snares:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/854601600:24:322 (24322|2,24322|0,24322|3) - A triple in the EZ? I suggest you remove one note, is too much.
00:24:322 (24322|0,24735|1,25148|2) - Instead of these Longnotes use simple notes, is better since this drums have shorter duration. The Longnotes doesn't fit in my opinion, the drums can be more spread, also snares here... screenshot -extended-:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/854605800:35:885 (35885|0,35885|1,36022|2,36160|3) - I think this is too much difficult, maybe erase one note from the chord, also a bit of rearrange:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/854606800:41:941 (41941|3,42492|0,42492|2,43043|1,43593|2,43593|3) - Can be arranged better in my opinion:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/854607800:44:832 (44832|1,45107|1,45245|0) - I think you can skip the last kick using the longnote, is better than current because the left hand have to do some effort there:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/854609400:45:245 (45245|0,47447|2,49650|0,51852|3) - These Longnotes will be better to follow the vocal instead, i think you follow the piano but is too blended for the vocal. Try this:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/854611600:56:257 (56257|2) - Move to |3| since it gives a better feeling of the crash sound.
00:58:460 (58460|3,58460|0,58735|2,59010|1,59286|0,59561|3,59836|2,60111|1,60387|0) - Is kinda weird to follow this, i think you follow the piano sounds in the background but you could accentuate more the drums and some noises, like this:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/854615101:02:314 (62314|3,62864|1,63415|2,63966|0,64241|2,64516|1) - There some drums in the middle part that will be represented better using Longnotes, also following the vocal much better:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/854616901:06:168 (66168|1,66168|3,66719|1) - I rather move them like this, also adding a note for that noise and kick:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/854619401:12:775 (72775|2,72775|1,73326|1,73326|2) - Skipping some drums here is a bit odd, for less strain you can reduce the notes used. Try this:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/854621401:13:877 - This part is really good for roll patterns:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/854623401:16:905 (76905|1,77180|0,77180|2,77456|1,77731|0,78006|1) - I rather kept some roll pattern here too:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/854624001:19:383 (79383|2,79383|1,79658|3,79933|0) - Again:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/854624401:21:035 (81035|3,81310|1,81585|0,81585|3,81861|1,82136|2,82411|0,82686|1) - Last change here:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546251[NM]
00:02:557 (2557|0,2860|0,3163|0) - I rather change this part to this:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/854625800:06:345 (6345|0,6497|1,6648|0,6800|2,6951|3,7103|2,7254|3,7406|1) - Also here, some alternation:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546267Well, i know that you that following the piano here but, the inconsistency with the EZ difficulty is pretty evident:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546276 <- EZ in the right. When in EZ you mapped that Snare with a chord, in the NM you skip it, and here the kick sounds are a chord... well is up to you, but i still thinking that skipping all the Snare sounds seems ankward. Some general suggestion for this part:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546337 ,
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546348 ,
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546355 , and so on... I think you can improve this part a lot to be honest, so keep it up.
00:27:625 - Using Triples/Hands for NM is also something that i don't recommend. Only for Hard difficulties and above. If you erase the extra note and follow better the piano sounds, you can improve this part too, some suggestions:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546398 ,
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546413 ,
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546441 , and so on...
The rest is pretty much the same unfortunally. Try to follow a lot more the piano sounds (pretty clear to hear in my opinion), use roll patterns and some alternation and more Longnotes. By the way, the difference of Longnotes between NM and HD is a lot... you need to make a mapset that increases his difficulty gradually.
[HD]
From start, is pretty much the NM again. You can add Longnotes for vocals and the noise:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546519 ,
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546523 ,
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546525 ,
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/854652700:12:208 (12208|3,12208|0,12208|2) - For kicks, i rather use two notes. These are three, the Longnotes counts as well.
00:17:714 - Add a note on |1| for snare, is well suited since is the Longnote end... hm Screenshot:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/854655700:21:018 (21018|1,21018|0,21018|2) - Is a Kick use two notes instead, Skipping from now on...
00:25:423 (25423|3,25423|1,25561|2,25561|0) - Snares, you can use three notes since is the Longnote end and not between them.
00:25:836 (25836|0,25836|2,25974|3,25974|2) - ^.
00:27:350 - You can cut the Longnote before it reaches the end to use the triple note for cymbal:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546577For this difficulty, i think it needs more longnotes, is somewhat odd that the start has more longnotes than here when the piano sounds are more clear.
00:35:334 - Suggestion:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/854660500:36:435 (36435|3,36435|0) - I think the cymbals also needs triple notes... Skipping from now on...
00:51:852 - ...Why is so similar to NM? If HD is the hardest, don't refrain:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/854662900:55:156 - Same case as above:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546655 <- The note on |3| in the right side is 1/8: 00:56:085
00:59:010 (59010|0,59010|1,59836|0,59836|2) - Snares... use Triples. Skipping too...
01:13:326 (73326|0,73464|0,73601|0) - More fun in my opinion:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546668 01:17:731 - Suggestion2:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546672I expected a more dense Longnote difficulty here... Well, up to you.