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Dr_Marc
From ma queue :

HD

00:25:974 (25974|2,25974|1) - should be a 1 note sound because its same sound as
00:26:111 (26111|0) -

00:24:735 (24735|3,24735|2,25148|2,25148|3,25974|1,25974|2) - is really like.. not hearable? owo
00:35:609 (35609|1,35747|0) - Hard sounds, why not emphasize, atleast with LN's or a change in pattern
00:42:079 - missing sound

All in all good note placement, but why not fill some irregular gaps with LN's ?
As Example,
00:41:528 (41528|3) - this feels to me like an LN maybe
01:13:326 (73326|0,73326|2,73326|3,73464|2,73464|3,73464|0,73601|3,73601|2,73601|0) - why triplesounding? Its the same sound as
01:12:225 (72225|1,72225|0,72775|0,72775|3) - as example
01:14:565 - Delete 1 note
01:14:427 - add one note

Kiai time is good placed, but it doesnt feel quiet harder to play. So maybe reconsider something there with the noteplacements ?

All in all well done, good luck from me
Amiichii
Hello o/

From O!M 4K Newbie Queue

4K=1~4

  • [HD]
  1. 00:09:451 - 00:08:845 - add note for guitar. and to make jump?
  2. 00:09:754 - Add LN until 00:09:981 - ?
  3. 00:13:860 (13860|0,13998|1,14135|2,14273|3,14411|0,14411|2,14548|1,14686|0) - Ctrl+H for pitch?
  4. 00:26:249 (26249|3) - delete no drum
  5. 00:42:079 - add note for synth
  6. 00:42:354 (42354|3) - delete no synth
  7. 00:50:063 - add for idk what the name of sound. same like this sound 00:48:962 (48962|1,49099|3,49237|0,49375|1,49512|2,49650|3,49787|1) - . for add it for consistency pattern
  8. 00:50:751 - add ^
  9. 00:51:164 - 00:51:715 - add ^
  10. 00:54:743 (54743|2) - move to 2
  11. 00:54:881 (54881|2) - change to LN till 00:55:156 -
  12. 00:59:974 (59974|1,60249|1,60524|1) - this have different picth. pls make it in different column too
  13. 01:13:601 (73601|3,73601|2,73601|0) - 1 note is enough. so snare sound there

Goodluck. Have a nice day :)
Topic Starter
error_exe777

Dr_Marc wrote:

From ma queue :

HD

00:25:974 (25974|2,25974|1) - should be a 1 note sound because its same sound as
00:26:111 (26111|0) -

00:24:735 (24735|3,24735|2,25148|2,25148|3,25974|1,25974|2) - is really like.. not hearable? owo
00:35:609 (35609|1,35747|0) - Hard sounds, why not emphasize, atleast with LN's or a change in pattern
00:42:079 - missing sound

All in all good note placement, but why not fill some irregular gaps with LN's ?
As Example,
00:41:528 (41528|3) - this feels to me like an LN maybe
01:13:326 (73326|0,73326|2,73326|3,73464|2,73464|3,73464|0,73601|3,73601|2,73601|0) - why triplesounding? Its the same sound as
01:12:225 (72225|1,72225|0,72775|0,72775|3) - as example
01:14:565 - Delete 1 note
01:14:427 - add one note

Kiai time is good placed, but it doesnt feel quiet harder to play. So maybe reconsider something there with the noteplacements ?

All in all well done, good luck from me
Thank you!
Topic Starter
error_exe777

Amiichii wrote:

Hello o/

From O!M 4K Newbie Queue

4K=1~4

  • [HD]
  1. 00:09:451 - 00:08:845 - add note for guitar. and to make jump?
  2. 00:09:754 - Add LN until 00:09:981 - ?
  3. 00:13:860 (13860|0,13998|1,14135|2,14273|3,14411|0,14411|2,14548|1,14686|0) - Ctrl+H for pitch?
  4. 00:26:249 (26249|3) - delete no drum
  5. 00:42:079 - add note for synth
  6. 00:42:354 (42354|3) - delete no synth
  7. 00:50:063 - add for idk what the name of sound. same like this sound 00:48:962 (48962|1,49099|3,49237|0,49375|1,49512|2,49650|3,49787|1) - . for add it for consistency pattern
  8. 00:50:751 - add ^
  9. 00:51:164 - 00:51:715 - add ^
  10. 00:54:743 (54743|2) - move to 2
  11. 00:54:881 (54881|2) - change to LN till 00:55:156 -
  12. 00:59:974 (59974|1,60249|1,60524|1) - this have different picth. pls make it in different column too
  13. 01:13:601 (73601|3,73601|2,73601|0) - 1 note is enough. so snare sound there

Goodluck. Have a nice day :)
Thank youu
Shima Rin
Hi, M4M from my modding queue.

[General]
  1. It is noted that mania mode cannot have OD/HP below 6, so for EZ OD HP would better be both 7, NM OD HP would be 7.5 and HD would just be 8
  2. Turn off widescreen support in all diffs cuz no SB in this map
  3. For tags, I cannot think of too many. but at least add tv size opening OP into the tags
  4. Change artist name to 鴇沢直


[EZ]
  1. 00:08:769 (8769|1) - delete cuz no sound here to be emphasized
  2. 00:10:832 - 00:13:034 - 00:15:237 - add notes
  3. 00:17:852 - it is ok for you to add note here for the drum
  4. 00:36:022 - add one here and delete 00:36:160 (36160|0) -
  5. 00:44:970 (44970|3,44970|2) - what is this for? if it is drums u have to put on 00:44:832 - but i suggest u change these double notes to single ones and be sure to add one here 00:44:281 -
  6. 00:51:852 (51852|3) - why change LN here?
  7. 01:04:516 (64516|2,64516|3,64792|2,64792|3) - nerf them to single and put on different columns cuz they have different sound and volume with 01:04:241 (64241|2,64241|3) -
  8. 01:13:051 - 01:13:464 - add notes here


[NM]
  1. NM with a H notion hmm...u need to nerf something
  2. 00:09:981 - to nerf it, this part u dont need to catch all melodic sounds, u can just try to catch sounds on the white line
  3. 00:17:852 - this one should be a double
  4. 00:36:022 (36022|2,36022|3) - ctrl+h would be better
  5. 00:45:107 (45107|1,45107|2) - u can delete these cuz no obvious sounds here
  6. 00:52:953 (52953|0,53045|1,53137|2,53229|3,53321|2,53412|1,53504|0) - this is definitely too hard for NM
  7. 01:00:662 (60662|2,60662|1) - delete these cuz you already got a double there
  8. 01:02:589 (62589|0,63140|3,63140|1,63690|3) - delete them to nerf this part
  9. 01:06:719 (66719|3,66925|2,67132|1) - delete to nerf
  10. 01:07:545 (67545|1,68095|2,68646|1,69196|2,69747|0,70298|3,70848|1,71399|2) - ^
  11. 01:11:950 (71950|0,72500|0,73326|2,73464|2,73601|2) - 01:13:051 (73051|3) - ^
  12. 01:13:877 - from this part NM is even easier than EZ. You may want to fix this


[HD]
  1. 00:17:714 (17714|1,17852|1) - 00:17:852 (17852|3,17990|3) - shield here, delete 00:17:714 (17714|1) - 00:17:852 (17852|3) -
  2. 00:18:265 (18265|0,18403|0) - ^
  3. 00:25:423 (25423|2,25561|2,25561|1,25698|1,25836|3,25974|3) - ^
  4. 00:31:067 - miss a note
  5. 00:55:202 (55202|1,55248|2,55385|0,55500|3,55546|2) - delete them and add on 00:55:569 - (for fun u can use short LNs for the remaining ones)
  6. 00:58:460 - add one, cuz a snare here
  7. 01:00:662 (60662|3) - move to 2 or 3
  8. 01:00:387 - miss a note
  9. 01:01:763 (61763|1,61901|1,62039|1,62176|1,62314|1) - this is really hard stuff, try to separate them as possible


That's all. Good luck and hope my mods can help you owo ;)
Topic Starter
error_exe777

Tofu1222 wrote:

Hi, M4M from my modding queue.

[General]
  1. It is noted that mania mode cannot have OD/HP below 6, so for EZ OD HP would better be both 7, NM OD HP would be 7.5 and HD would just be 8
  2. Turn off widescreen support in all diffs cuz no SB in this map
  3. For tags, I cannot think of too many. but at least add tv size opening OP into the tags
  4. Change artist name to 鴇沢直


[EZ]
  1. 00:08:769 (8769|1) - delete cuz no sound here to be emphasized
  2. 00:10:832 - 00:13:034 - 00:15:237 - add notes
  3. 00:17:852 - it is ok for you to add note here for the drum
  4. 00:36:022 - add one here and delete 00:36:160 (36160|0) -
  5. 00:44:970 (44970|3,44970|2) - what is this for? if it is drums u have to put on 00:44:832 - but i suggest u change these double notes to single ones and be sure to add one here 00:44:281 -
  6. 00:51:852 (51852|3) - why change LN here?
  7. 01:04:516 (64516|2,64516|3,64792|2,64792|3) - nerf them to single and put on different columns cuz they have different sound and volume with 01:04:241 (64241|2,64241|3) -
  8. 01:13:051 - 01:13:464 - add notes here


[NM]
  1. NM with a H notion hmm...u need to nerf something
  2. 00:09:981 - to nerf it, this part u dont need to catch all melodic sounds, u can just try to catch sounds on the white line
  3. 00:17:852 - this one should be a double
  4. 00:36:022 (36022|2,36022|3) - ctrl+h would be better
  5. 00:45:107 (45107|1,45107|2) - u can delete these cuz no obvious sounds here
  6. 00:52:953 (52953|0,53045|1,53137|2,53229|3,53321|2,53412|1,53504|0) - this is definitely too hard for NM
  7. 01:00:662 (60662|2,60662|1) - delete these cuz you already got a double there
  8. 01:02:589 (62589|0,63140|3,63140|1,63690|3) - delete them to nerf this part
  9. 01:06:719 (66719|3,66925|2,67132|1) - delete to nerf
  10. 01:07:545 (67545|1,68095|2,68646|1,69196|2,69747|0,70298|3,70848|1,71399|2) - ^
  11. 01:11:950 (71950|0,72500|0,73326|2,73464|2,73601|2) - 01:13:051 (73051|3) - ^
  12. 01:13:877 - from this part NM is even easier than EZ. You may want to fix this


[HD]
  1. 00:17:714 (17714|1,17852|1) - 00:17:852 (17852|3,17990|3) - shield here, delete 00:17:714 (17714|1) - 00:17:852 (17852|3) -
  2. 00:18:265 (18265|0,18403|0) - ^
  3. 00:25:423 (25423|2,25561|2,25561|1,25698|1,25836|3,25974|3) - ^
  4. 00:31:067 - miss a note
  5. 00:55:202 (55202|1,55248|2,55385|0,55500|3,55546|2) - delete them and add on 00:55:569 - (for fun u can use short LNs for the remaining ones)
  6. 00:58:460 - add one, cuz a snare here
  7. 01:00:662 (60662|3) - move to 2 or 3
  8. 01:00:387 - miss a note
  9. 01:01:763 (61763|1,61901|1,62039|1,62176|1,62314|1) - this is really hard stuff, try to separate them as possible


That's all. Good luck and hope my mods can help you owo ;)
great, thank you!
Incendent
Hi! Here for my M4M. I'll go first!

00:08:694 Add a timing point here to keep everything on the red and white ticks.
00:17:714 move 2 to 1.
00:24:735 What's with the jack here?
00:25:148 It's a ghost named jack.
00:26:524 A lot of people (Myself included) don't like LN's set up like this.
01:05:067 ^ (A example is that the sounds are connected in the song, I feel like these LN's should be connected too.)
00:08:694 If you change HD, change NM as well. (If you want it to get ranked.)

I hope my mod is useful. Sorry if it seems short.
Topic Starter
error_exe777
I feel r e a l l y bad for disagreeing with it all, but i have reasons behind these.

Incendent wrote:

Hi! Here for my M4M. I'll go first!

00:08:694 Add a timing point here to keep everything on the red and white ticks. Seems unnecessary. It doesn't affect anything important other than it being neat in the editor.
00:17:714 move 2 to 1. I did it to avoid the "shielding" of the slider. It's easier to play
00:24:735 What's with the jack here? 00:24:322 (24322|2,24322|3,24735|3,24735|2,25148|3,25148|2) - these 6 notes are represented by the snare drum (ish) sound in the background. I'm assuming that is what you are referring to
00:25:148 It's a ghost named jack. ^^^
00:26:524 A lot of people (Myself included) don't like LN's set up like this. I feel it represents the music best because the first 3 sets are the same sound, and when they change sound, the sets move columns.
01:05:067 ^ (A example is that the sounds are connected in the song, I feel like these LN's should be connected too.) Pretty much the same reason as above, yet the slight variation in pitch for the last two fits well with what i did.
00:08:694 If you change HD, change NM as well. (If you want it to get ranked.)

I hope my mod is useful. Sorry if it seems short.
Again, i'm so sorry, but thank you very much for the mod! Feel free to disagree with anything i said
Incendent

OwenF04 wrote:

I feel r e a l l y bad for disagreeing with it all, but i have reasons behind these.

Incendent wrote:

Hi! Here for my M4M. I'll go first!

00:08:694 Add a timing point here to keep everything on the red and white ticks. Seems unnecessary. It doesn't affect anything important other than it being neat in the editor.
00:17:714 move 2 to 1. I did it to avoid the "shielding" of the slider. It's easier to play
00:24:735 What's with the jack here? 00:24:322 (24322|2,24322|3,24735|3,24735|2,25148|3,25148|2) - these 6 notes are represented by the snare drum (ish) sound in the background. I'm assuming that is what you are referring to
00:25:148 It's a ghost named jack. ^^^
00:26:524 A lot of people (Myself included) don't like LN's set up like this. I feel it represents the music best because the first 3 sets are the same sound, and when they change sound, the sets move columns.
01:05:067 ^ (A example is that the sounds are connected in the song, I feel like these LN's should be connected too.) Pretty much the same reason as above, yet the slight variation in pitch for the last two fits well with what i did.
00:08:694 If you change HD, change NM as well. (If you want it to get ranked.)

I hope my mod is useful. Sorry if it seems short.
Again, i'm so sorry, but thank you very much for the mod! Feel free to disagree with anything i said
At the end of the day, it's your choice, sorry I couldn't help improve your map. But hey, I gave it an honest shot :)
No_sync
hi!

From my NM/M4M queue.

Columns 4K 0|1|2|3



MP3: PASS
BG: PASS
Video: SKIP
  1. Well, up to you.

BPM & Offset: PASS
Diff.Spread: PASS
  1. Well, to be honest i will like a difficulty that is closer to Insane. Anyway, less difficulties to check lol.

Diff.Name: PASS
HP & OD: PASS
Hitsound: SKIP
  1. Add hitsounds. Not now, but is necessary.

Hitsound Volume: MISS
  1. Is intended the volume change in the kiai section: https://puu.sh/wF8S5.png ? Use 45-50%. Also, try to use Soft Sampleset always, you can add custom hitsounds later.

Kiai Time: PASS
Metadata: MISS
  1. Let's recheck some things... Link: http://www.vap.co.jp/gokukoku/release/o-s-t.html
    1. Title and Unicode Title: "BRYNHILDR IN THE DARKNESS -Ver. EJECTED-" (From the ost.)
    2. Artist: "Tokisawa Nao" (You have the name first and the surname last. Just invert them.)
    3. Tags: "brynhildr in the darkness ejected" -> "Gokukoku no brynhildr" (Currently is duplicated, the title says the same thing. Replace with romaji translation of the anime name. That's all.)

Widescreen Support: PASS
Preview Point: MISS
  1. Currently is bad snapped at 00:54:025 . Instead snap it at 00:53:917 - when the crash sounds or 00:56:119 - too.

AiMod Things: PASS
[EZ]
From start, I think you can follow better the sounds at this section: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8545741

00:17:164 (17164|1,17714|2,18265|3) - You can use Longnotes here to skip the snares: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546016

00:24:322 (24322|2,24322|0,24322|3) - A triple in the EZ? I suggest you remove one note, is too much.

00:24:322 (24322|0,24735|1,25148|2) - Instead of these Longnotes use simple notes, is better since this drums have shorter duration. The Longnotes doesn't fit in my opinion, the drums can be more spread, also snares here... screenshot -extended-: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546058

00:35:885 (35885|0,35885|1,36022|2,36160|3) - I think this is too much difficult, maybe erase one note from the chord, also a bit of rearrange: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546068

00:41:941 (41941|3,42492|0,42492|2,43043|1,43593|2,43593|3) - Can be arranged better in my opinion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546078

00:44:832 (44832|1,45107|1,45245|0) - I think you can skip the last kick using the longnote, is better than current because the left hand have to do some effort there: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546094

00:45:245 (45245|0,47447|2,49650|0,51852|3) - These Longnotes will be better to follow the vocal instead, i think you follow the piano but is too blended for the vocal. Try this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546116

00:56:257 (56257|2) - Move to |3| since it gives a better feeling of the crash sound.

00:58:460 (58460|3,58460|0,58735|2,59010|1,59286|0,59561|3,59836|2,60111|1,60387|0) - Is kinda weird to follow this, i think you follow the piano sounds in the background but you could accentuate more the drums and some noises, like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546151

01:02:314 (62314|3,62864|1,63415|2,63966|0,64241|2,64516|1) - There some drums in the middle part that will be represented better using Longnotes, also following the vocal much better: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546169

01:06:168 (66168|1,66168|3,66719|1) - I rather move them like this, also adding a note for that noise and kick: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546194

01:12:775 (72775|2,72775|1,73326|1,73326|2) - Skipping some drums here is a bit odd, for less strain you can reduce the notes used. Try this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546214

01:13:877 - This part is really good for roll patterns: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546234

01:16:905 (76905|1,77180|0,77180|2,77456|1,77731|0,78006|1) - I rather kept some roll pattern here too: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546240

01:19:383 (79383|2,79383|1,79658|3,79933|0) - Again: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546244

01:21:035 (81035|3,81310|1,81585|0,81585|3,81861|1,82136|2,82411|0,82686|1) - Last change here: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546251

[NM]
00:02:557 (2557|0,2860|0,3163|0) - I rather change this part to this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546258

00:06:345 (6345|0,6497|1,6648|0,6800|2,6951|3,7103|2,7254|3,7406|1) - Also here, some alternation: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546267

Well, i know that you that following the piano here but, the inconsistency with the EZ difficulty is pretty evident: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546276 <- EZ in the right. When in EZ you mapped that Snare with a chord, in the NM you skip it, and here the kick sounds are a chord... well is up to you, but i still thinking that skipping all the Snare sounds seems ankward. Some general suggestion for this part: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546337 , https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546348 , https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546355 , and so on... I think you can improve this part a lot to be honest, so keep it up.

00:27:625 - Using Triples/Hands for NM is also something that i don't recommend. Only for Hard difficulties and above. If you erase the extra note and follow better the piano sounds, you can improve this part too, some suggestions: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546398 , https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546413 , https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546441 , and so on...

The rest is pretty much the same unfortunally. Try to follow a lot more the piano sounds (pretty clear to hear in my opinion), use roll patterns and some alternation and more Longnotes. By the way, the difference of Longnotes between NM and HD is a lot... you need to make a mapset that increases his difficulty gradually.

[HD]
From start, is pretty much the NM again. You can add Longnotes for vocals and the noise: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546519 , https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546523 , https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546525 , https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546527

00:12:208 (12208|3,12208|0,12208|2) - For kicks, i rather use two notes. These are three, the Longnotes counts as well.

00:17:714 - Add a note on |1| for snare, is well suited since is the Longnote end... hm Screenshot: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546557

00:21:018 (21018|1,21018|0,21018|2) - Is a Kick use two notes instead, Skipping from now on...

00:25:423 (25423|3,25423|1,25561|2,25561|0) - Snares, you can use three notes since is the Longnote end and not between them.

00:25:836 (25836|0,25836|2,25974|3,25974|2) - ^.

00:27:350 - You can cut the Longnote before it reaches the end to use the triple note for cymbal: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546577

For this difficulty, i think it needs more longnotes, is somewhat odd that the start has more longnotes than here when the piano sounds are more clear.

00:35:334 - Suggestion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546605

00:36:435 (36435|3,36435|0) - I think the cymbals also needs triple notes... Skipping from now on...

00:51:852 - ...Why is so similar to NM? If HD is the hardest, don't refrain: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546629

00:55:156 - Same case as above: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546655 <- The note on |3| in the right side is 1/8: 00:56:085

00:59:010 (59010|0,59010|1,59836|0,59836|2) - Snares... use Triples. Skipping too...

01:13:326 (73326|0,73464|0,73601|0) - More fun in my opinion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546668

01:17:731 - Suggestion2: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546672

I expected a more dense Longnote difficulty here... Well, up to you.

I think you can improve more this mapset. Keep it up! Also as you requested, the reminder Any help will be appreciated!

Good Luck! :)
[Ashley]
M4M req from your queue.

[EZ]Nothing to say.
[NM]00:06:800 - My suggestion
00:08:769 - In NM diff, you could try to add a note on this line.
00:13:310 - missing note, please add 2 notes here.
00:15:512 - ^
00:19:917 - ^
...after 2202ms everytime before 00:24:322
00:16:200 - 00:16:476 (optional)- ^, add 1 note is ok.
00:26:662 - try this
00:44:694 (44694|0,44694|3,44832|1,44832|2) - ctrl+j, because these should same as 00:44:144 (44144|2,44144|1,44281|0,44281|3) -
00:58:735 - add a note here.
[HD]00:26:731 (26731|2,26731|3) - I don't know why but i think these 1/4 LN should in different columns.
00:55:385 (55385|0,55431|1,55477|3,55523|2) - these note should move below 1/6.
And 00:55:523 - add a note here.
01:00:111 - ^

good luck.
Topic Starter
error_exe777

No_sync wrote:

hi!

From my NM/M4M queue.

Columns 4K 0|1|2|3



MP3: PASS
BG: PASS
Video: SKIP
  1. Well, up to you.

BPM & Offset: PASS
Diff.Spread: PASS
  1. Well, to be honest i will like a difficulty that is closer to Insane. Anyway, less difficulties to check lol.

Diff.Name: PASS
HP & OD: PASS
Hitsound: SKIP
  1. Add hitsounds. Not now, but is necessary.

Hitsound Volume: MISS
  1. Is intended the volume change in the kiai section: https://puu.sh/wF8S5.png ? Use 45-50%. Also, try to use Soft Sampleset always, you can add custom hitsounds later.

Kiai Time: PASS
Metadata: MISS
  1. Let's recheck some things... Link: http://www.vap.co.jp/gokukoku/release/o-s-t.html
    1. Title and Unicode Title: "BRYNHILDR IN THE DARKNESS -Ver. EJECTED-" (From the ost.)
    2. Artist: "Tokisawa Nao" (You have the name first and the surname last. Just invert them.)
    3. Tags: "brynhildr in the darkness ejected" -> "Gokukoku no brynhildr" (Currently is duplicated, the title says the same thing. Replace with romaji translation of the anime name. That's all.)

Widescreen Support: PASS
Preview Point: MISS
  1. Currently is bad snapped at 00:54:025 . Instead snap it at 00:53:917 - when the crash sounds or 00:56:119 - too.

AiMod Things: PASS
[EZ]
From start, I think you can follow better the sounds at this section: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8545741

00:17:164 (17164|1,17714|2,18265|3) - You can use Longnotes here to skip the snares: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546016

00:24:322 (24322|2,24322|0,24322|3) - A triple in the EZ? I suggest you remove one note, is too much.

00:24:322 (24322|0,24735|1,25148|2) - Instead of these Longnotes use simple notes, is better since this drums have shorter duration. The Longnotes doesn't fit in my opinion, the drums can be more spread, also snares here... screenshot -extended-: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546058

00:35:885 (35885|0,35885|1,36022|2,36160|3) - I think this is too much difficult, maybe erase one note from the chord, also a bit of rearrange: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546068

00:41:941 (41941|3,42492|0,42492|2,43043|1,43593|2,43593|3) - Can be arranged better in my opinion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546078

00:44:832 (44832|1,45107|1,45245|0) - I think you can skip the last kick using the longnote, is better than current because the left hand have to do some effort there: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546094

00:45:245 (45245|0,47447|2,49650|0,51852|3) - These Longnotes will be better to follow the vocal instead, i think you follow the piano but is too blended for the vocal. Try this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546116

00:56:257 (56257|2) - Move to |3| since it gives a better feeling of the crash sound.

00:58:460 (58460|3,58460|0,58735|2,59010|1,59286|0,59561|3,59836|2,60111|1,60387|0) - Is kinda weird to follow this, i think you follow the piano sounds in the background but you could accentuate more the drums and some noises, like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546151

01:02:314 (62314|3,62864|1,63415|2,63966|0,64241|2,64516|1) - There some drums in the middle part that will be represented better using Longnotes, also following the vocal much better: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546169

01:06:168 (66168|1,66168|3,66719|1) - I rather move them like this, also adding a note for that noise and kick: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546194

01:12:775 (72775|2,72775|1,73326|1,73326|2) - Skipping some drums here is a bit odd, for less strain you can reduce the notes used. Try this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546214

01:13:877 - This part is really good for roll patterns: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546234

01:16:905 (76905|1,77180|0,77180|2,77456|1,77731|0,78006|1) - I rather kept some roll pattern here too: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546240

01:19:383 (79383|2,79383|1,79658|3,79933|0) - Again: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546244

01:21:035 (81035|3,81310|1,81585|0,81585|3,81861|1,82136|2,82411|0,82686|1) - Last change here: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546251

[NM]
00:02:557 (2557|0,2860|0,3163|0) - I rather change this part to this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546258

00:06:345 (6345|0,6497|1,6648|0,6800|2,6951|3,7103|2,7254|3,7406|1) - Also here, some alternation: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546267

Well, i know that you that following the piano here but, the inconsistency with the EZ difficulty is pretty evident: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546276 <- EZ in the right. When in EZ you mapped that Snare with a chord, in the NM you skip it, and here the kick sounds are a chord... well is up to you, but i still thinking that skipping all the Snare sounds seems ankward. Some general suggestion for this part: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546337 , https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546348 , https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546355 , and so on... I think you can improve this part a lot to be honest, so keep it up.

00:27:625 - Using Triples/Hands for NM is also something that i don't recommend. Only for Hard difficulties and above. If you erase the extra note and follow better the piano sounds, you can improve this part too, some suggestions: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546398 , https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546413 , https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546441 , and so on...

The rest is pretty much the same unfortunally. Try to follow a lot more the piano sounds (pretty clear to hear in my opinion), use roll patterns and some alternation and more Longnotes. By the way, the difference of Longnotes between NM and HD is a lot... you need to make a mapset that increases his difficulty gradually.

[HD]
From start, is pretty much the NM again. You can add Longnotes for vocals and the noise: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546519 , https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546523 , https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546525 , https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546527

00:12:208 (12208|3,12208|0,12208|2) - For kicks, i rather use two notes. These are three, the Longnotes counts as well.

00:17:714 - Add a note on |1| for snare, is well suited since is the Longnote end... hm Screenshot: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546557

00:21:018 (21018|1,21018|0,21018|2) - Is a Kick use two notes instead, Skipping from now on...

00:25:423 (25423|3,25423|1,25561|2,25561|0) - Snares, you can use three notes since is the Longnote end and not between them.

00:25:836 (25836|0,25836|2,25974|3,25974|2) - ^.

00:27:350 - You can cut the Longnote before it reaches the end to use the triple note for cymbal: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546577

For this difficulty, i think it needs more longnotes, is somewhat odd that the start has more longnotes than here when the piano sounds are more clear.

00:35:334 - Suggestion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546605

00:36:435 (36435|3,36435|0) - I think the cymbals also needs triple notes... Skipping from now on...

00:51:852 - ...Why is so similar to NM? If HD is the hardest, don't refrain: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546629

00:55:156 - Same case as above: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546655 <- The note on |3| in the right side is 1/8: 00:56:085

00:59:010 (59010|0,59010|1,59836|0,59836|2) - Snares... use Triples. Skipping too...

01:13:326 (73326|0,73464|0,73601|0) - More fun in my opinion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546668

01:17:731 - Suggestion2: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546672

I expected a more dense Longnote difficulty here... Well, up to you.

I think you can improve more this mapset. Keep it up! Also as you requested, the reminder Any help will be appreciated!

Good Luck! :)
my lord this was useful thank youuuuu
Topic Starter
error_exe777

acacac wrote:

M4M req from your queue.

[EZ]Nothing to say.
[NM]00:06:800 - My suggestion
00:08:769 - In NM diff, you could try to add a note on this line.
00:13:310 - missing note, please add 2 notes here.
00:15:512 - ^
00:19:917 - ^
...after 2202ms everytime before 00:24:322
00:16:200 - 00:16:476 (optional)- ^, add 1 note is ok.
00:26:662 - try this
00:44:694 (44694|0,44694|3,44832|1,44832|2) - ctrl+j, because these should same as 00:44:144 (44144|2,44144|1,44281|0,44281|3) -
00:58:735 - add a note here.
[HD]00:26:731 (26731|2,26731|3) - I don't know why but i think these 1/4 LN should in different columns.
00:55:385 (55385|0,55431|1,55477|3,55523|2) - these note should move below 1/6.
And 00:55:523 - add a note here.
01:00:111 - ^

good luck.
thank you!
Umo-
NM req from imtdb1's modding queue
1|2|3|4
You should respond to the mods with that you fixed/rejected and why. At least you didn't do it in the last mod owo https://osu.ppy.sh/help/wiki/Ranking_Cr ... of_Conduct
00:45:107 (45107|2) - this note sounds diffrend from 00:44:832 (44832|2) - so I would suggest that you move it to another column
01:03:966 (63966|0) - end at 01:04:241 - and add a note there
00:11:107 - missing LN's here?
00:11:107 - forgot a double here, you used double at 00:15:512 -
00:22:119 - ^
00:36:435 (36435|2,36435|3) - move to 1 and 2
01:01:213 - you forgot doubles here, you used doubles at the same place at 01:05:618 -
00:26:731 (26731|3,26731|2) - those LNs soud a lot diffrend from 00:26:524 (26524|3,26524|2) - so move them to 1 and 2
00:52:541 (52541|1) - diff sound from 00:52:403 (52403|1) -
00:52:678 - same here ^
00:55:385 (55385|0,55431|1) - please ctrl+H the notes
01:01:763 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8554440 I still used your jackhammer pattern but I reeranged the notes because mashing keys in 2nd column for a second is very weird imo
Some patterns are not consistant in the map so selfmod those please.
Good Luck!
Topic Starter
error_exe777

imtdb1 wrote:

NM req from imtdb1's modding queue
1|2|3|4
You should respond to the mods with that you fixed/rejected and why. At least you didn't do it in the last mod owo https://osu.ppy.sh/help/wiki/Ranking_Cr ... of_Conduct
00:45:107 (45107|2) - this note sounds diffrend from 00:44:832 (44832|2) - so I would suggest that you move it to another column i agree
01:03:966 (63966|0) - end at 01:04:241 - and add a note there yep
00:11:107 - missing LN's here? fixed
00:11:107 - forgot a double here, you used double at 00:15:512 - yep
00:22:119 - ^ yep
00:36:435 (36435|2,36435|3) - move to 1 and 2 okay
01:01:213 - you forgot doubles here, you used doubles at the same place at 01:05:618 - applied
00:26:731 (26731|3,26731|2) - those LNs soud a lot diffrend from 00:26:524 (26524|3,26524|2) - so move them to 1 and 2 the first two LN's have the same sound, but the third doesn't so i ctrl+h them
00:52:541 (52541|1) - diff sound from 00:52:403 (52403|1) - i don't see how they are a different sound. i charted them to pitch anyway
00:52:678 - same here ^ ^^00:55:385 (55385|0,55431|1) - please ctrl+H the notes
01:01:763 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8554440 I still used your jackhammer pattern but I reeranged the notes because mashing keys in 2nd column for a second is very weird imo i see where you are coming from, but i want to keep the jacks in sets of 2, so i arranged it by pitch.
Some patterns are not consistant in the map so selfmod those please.
Good Luck!
thank you!
Virtue-


General


- Metadata : OK!
- BPM/Offset : OK!
- BG/Video : OK!
- Hitsound : NO!
- Files : OK!

1|2|3|4

  • [HD]
  1. 00:09:981 (9981|3) - move to 1
  2. 00:09:981 (9981|2,10125|3,10269|0,12208|2,12346|3,12484|0) - for this kind of sound, i think its better to make it jack. since the sound is repeating 3x and in the same pitch
  3. 00:13:860 (13860|3,13998|2,14135|1,14273|0,14411|3,14411|1,14548|2,14686|3) - they're kinda hard to push, maybe this will work http://puu.sh/wHm1r/b0bda1518e.jpg
  4. 00:16:613 (16613|1) - move to 4
  5. 00:17:990 (17990|0,18265|3,18265|2,18265|1,18540|3,18678|2) - srsly, it makes me confuse... how about shorten 00:17:990 (17990|0) - to white line, 00:18:265 (18265|1) - extend it to white line, and 00:18:540 (18540|3) - shorten it to red line
  6. 00:18:816 (18816|0,18816|1) - triple here
  7. 00:22:670 (22670|3,22808|2,22945|1,23083|0,23221|3,23221|1,23358|2,23496|3) - same as before
  8. 00:26:524 (26524|3,26524|2,26731|2,26731|3) - wtf is this??!?!?!? 00:26:731 (26731|3,26731|2) - delete this, make another LNs in 00:26:662 - stop at white line, and 00:26:868 (26868|0,26868|1,27075|3,27075|2,27350|0,27350|1) - flip this (ctrl h)
  9. 00:55:156 (55156|0,55202|1,55248|0,55294|1,55385|3,55431|2,55477|3,55523|0) - another wtf, try this http://puu.sh/wHmku/04729c3e21.jpg
    [NM]
  10. 00:26:524 (26524|0) - make it LN
  11. 00:26:662 (26662|0) - delete this
  12. 00:26:731 (26731|2) - extend to blue pls
  13. 01:06:719 (66719|2,66925|1,67132|0) - you can make it LN
i guess that's it, good luck!
CrumpetFiddler
As requested in Crumpey's Mod Queue!


HD(Mod)

00:07:557 - after here col 2 is ignored for some time

00:15:374 (15374|2) - move to col 4

00:24:735 (24735|0) - move to col 4 and move the other notes around so none overlap

00:27:625 - im confused you mapped the whole first portion as lns, but the same part comes around and your not using lns anymore?

00:50:889 (50889|0,51026|1) - control+G

00:59:698 (59698|3,59974|3,60249|3,60524|3) - none of these have the same beat, make them desend, IE cols 4, 3, 2, 1

01:13:877 - i dont understand your usage of kiai time, this section is fine, and highlights the ending but what about the chorus? ( 00:27:625 - ) or even ( 00:54:055 - )

Normal (Mod)

00:13:860 (13860|0,13998|1,14135|2,14273|3) - control+H and fix the other notes so theres not a jack

00:16:751 (16751|3,16889|2,17026|1,17164|0,17164|3,17301|1,17439|2,17577|3) - this doesnt follow the pitch very well

00:27:625 - you use lns before now its just super simple patterning?

00:57:909 (57909|2) - move to col 4

Really dislike the song, the map itself is pretty solid, good job man
Topic Starter
error_exe777

Virtue- wrote:



General


- Metadata : OK!
- BPM/Offset : OK!
- BG/Video : OK!
- Hitsound : NO!
- Files : OK!

1|2|3|4

  • [HD]
  1. 00:09:981 (9981|3) - move to 1 kay
  2. 00:09:981 (9981|2,10125|3,10269|0,12208|2,12346|3,12484|0) - for this kind of sound, i think its better to make it jack. since the sound is repeating 3x and in the same pitch how? they are LN's, and the third one is a different pitch anyway
  3. 00:13:860 (13860|3,13998|2,14135|1,14273|0,14411|3,14411|1,14548|2,14686|3) - they're kinda hard to push, maybe this will work http://puu.sh/wHm1r/b0bda1518e.jpg i agree, but pitch relevancy works better imo. i did change something to make it easier however
  4. 00:16:613 (16613|1) - move to 4 yep
  5. 00:17:990 (17990|0,18265|3,18265|2,18265|1,18540|3,18678|2) - srsly, it makes me confuse... how about shorten 00:17:990 (17990|0) - to white line, 00:18:265 (18265|1) - extend it to white line, and 00:18:540 (18540|3) - shorten it to red line nope, i applied it from a previous mod and realised it was terrible anyway. Thanks for the reminder
  6. 00:18:816 (18816|0,18816|1) - triple here the sound is too soft
  7. 00:22:670 (22670|3,22808|2,22945|1,23083|0,23221|3,23221|1,23358|2,23496|3) - same as before also same as before
  8. 00:26:524 (26524|3,26524|2,26731|2,26731|3) - wtf is this??!?!?!? 00:26:731 (26731|3,26731|2) - delete this, make another LNs in 00:26:662 - stop at white line, and 00:26:868 (26868|0,26868|1,27075|3,27075|2,27350|0,27350|1) - flip this (ctrl h) keep. if you listen closely and listen to the pitch it works fine
  9. 00:55:156 (55156|0,55202|1,55248|0,55294|1,55385|3,55431|2,55477|3,55523|0) - another wtf, try this http://puu.sh/wHmku/04729c3e21.jpg yeah, the old pattern was pretty stupid. i adapted it slightly from yours though, same principle [NM]
  10. 00:26:524 (26524|0) - make it LN kay
  11. 00:26:662 (26662|0) - delete this yep[
  12. 00:26:731 (26731|2) - extend to blue pls nope. it is correct as it is, listen closely
  13. 01:06:719 (66719|2,66925|1,67132|0) - you can make it LN okay
i guess that's it, good luck!
thank you!
Topic Starter
error_exe777

CrumpetFiddler wrote:

As requested in Crumpey's Mod Queue!


HD(Mod)

00:07:557 - after here col 2 is ignored for some time agreed but moving any only opens another column

00:15:374 (15374|2) - move to col 4 sure

00:24:735 (24735|0) - move to col 4 and move the other notes around so none overlap can't because the doubles are representing the fading snare thing. i did change a couple before to give the same effect

00:27:625 - im confused you mapped the whole first portion as lns, but the same part comes around and your not using lns anymore? uhh,
variation? its quite drastic. but it's all mapped correctly. if it's such a massive problem i will map with long notes, but it fits better with single, with the drums in the bg


00:50:889 (50889|0,51026|1) - control+G hai

00:59:698 (59698|3,59974|3,60249|3,60524|3) - none of these have the same beat, make them desend, IE cols 4, 3, 2, 1 kay

01:13:877 - i dont understand your usage of kiai time, this section is fine, and highlights the ending but what about the chorus? ( 00:27:625 - ) or even ( 00:54:055 - ) it is the most intense part of the song. yes it isn't the main "chorus" but is the climax of the song. and for me, the most memorable

Normal (Mod)

00:13:860 (13860|0,13998|1,14135|2,14273|3) - control+H and fix the other notes so theres not a jack okay

00:16:751 (16751|3,16889|2,17026|1,17164|0,17164|3,17301|1,17439|2,17577|3) - this doesnt follow the pitch very well changed

00:27:625 - you use lns before now its just super simple patterning? this i am a bit iffy on as well, but mapping the synth may prove difficult. and its a NM, i think its fine. like before, if its a major problem, ill change it later on

00:57:909 (57909|2) - move to col 4 okay

Really dislike the song, the map itself is pretty solid, good job man
sorry you didn't like the song, thanks for the mod :)
[-Star_Lenz-]
Hi Owen ^^

Req mod M4M from your queue

COL : 1|2|3|4

00:24:735 (24735|3,25148|0) - Delete, your focus drum sound
previous and feel play EZ diff
00:31:480 (31480|1) - move col 1 avoid jack note 1/1 00:32:030

(32030|1) - balanced left hand
00:35:885 (35885|0,36022|1,36160|2) - hmm stairs 1/2 I think it's

very difficult if in EZ, stairs change to LN

https://puu.sh/wJMCL/46ecce480a.png
00:44:694 (44694|1) - move col 1 balanced from hand 00:44:144

(44144|2,44281|1) -
01:01:763 (61763|0) - make to LN follow violin/guitar ? :'v and

01:02:314 - add note
01:05:067 (65067|0) - extend LN 01:05:618 -
00:09:981 (9981|1) - delete LN make to normal note, i'am Testing for

diff is not felt LN
00:14:411 (14411|2) - move col 4 balanced for hand 00:14:686

(14686|2) -
00:18:127 (18127|1) - delete
00:24:184 (24184|2) - move col 4
00:44:144 - recomended https://puu.sh/wJNnZ/fd91a6442e.png your

double note its same boring
00:58:460 (58460|2) - move col 4 balanced
01:01:901 (61901|1) - move col 1 make to mini jack note ?
00:36:022 (36022|2) - move col 4 balanced triple note
00:59:561 - add note plz
01:00:111 - Did you forget to add note here ? make to double note
01:00:662 - add note cymbal
01:19:933 (79933|2) - move col 1 balanced
gud HD

Good Luck bro (y)
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