hello, mod as requested
1/2/3/4
[Normal]
[Hard]
good luck~ <3
1/2/3/4
[Normal]
00:02:096 (2096|2) - 00:02:096 (2096|2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10043195 // the others are in 1/6 but this one seems to be in 1/12 snap... maybe fix to snap to 1/6?
00:04:371 (4371|0,4471|1) - these notes are rather near to each other, well compared to 00:01:971 (1971|3,2121|2) - that is. I recommend to snap both parts to 1/6 to secure consistency.
00:29:521 (29521|3,29671|3) - I recommend putting these notes to the third column because that column feels empty at that part. Also, pressing a keycap repeatedly is subjectively more comfortable to do with your pointing finger than your middle finger lolz.
00:29:971 - 00:39:421 - for this part, maybe you can do repetitive or mirroring patterns to fit the song more. Repetitive/mirrored patterns can be bland, but I think in this one's case a randomly-arranged 1/2 pattern doesn't really fit with this part of the song as this part is repetitive.
00:49:171 - 00:58:471 - this dubstep-y part is probably the chance you can make it technical rather than making it comfortable. You can put 1/6s here instead of following the kicks/snares. In this way, the part will be more fun without having a drastic increase in star rating.
01:11:221 (71221|1) - move to 3 for comfortability?
01:25:771 - cymbal sound here, it's rather important. How about putting another double here with a new LN? If that's the case, you might want to cut 01:25:171 (85171|1) - to that timestamp. (you can use 01:44:971 - as your reference.)
00:04:371 (4371|0,4471|1) - these notes are rather near to each other, well compared to 00:01:971 (1971|3,2121|2) - that is. I recommend to snap both parts to 1/6 to secure consistency.
00:29:521 (29521|3,29671|3) - I recommend putting these notes to the third column because that column feels empty at that part. Also, pressing a keycap repeatedly is subjectively more comfortable to do with your pointing finger than your middle finger lolz.
00:29:971 - 00:39:421 - for this part, maybe you can do repetitive or mirroring patterns to fit the song more. Repetitive/mirrored patterns can be bland, but I think in this one's case a randomly-arranged 1/2 pattern doesn't really fit with this part of the song as this part is repetitive.
00:49:171 - 00:58:471 - this dubstep-y part is probably the chance you can make it technical rather than making it comfortable. You can put 1/6s here instead of following the kicks/snares. In this way, the part will be more fun without having a drastic increase in star rating.
01:11:221 (71221|1) - move to 3 for comfortability?
01:25:771 - cymbal sound here, it's rather important. How about putting another double here with a new LN? If that's the case, you might want to cut 01:25:171 (85171|1) - to that timestamp. (you can use 01:44:971 - as your reference.)
[Hard]
00:02:096 (2096|3,2096|0) - this feels quite weird, when you can snap it at 00:02:121 - (1/6) instead.
other than that, the patterns seem fine. the SV's in the middle might need some tweaking though.
other than that, the patterns seem fine. the SV's in the middle might need some tweaking though.
good luck~ <3