General: - OD9? ew dude i don't really thinks that it fits wiith all the songs, at least 8,8 or 8,6 fit better imo
- Set Combo Colors
- Uncheck widescreen support, there isn't a SB
- I don't know if this was in purpose, if it wasn't, uncheck countdown too
According to MA: Unused hitsounds:
soft-hitclap.wav
- 03:14:569 - If you add this as preview point i'd be so HUUUUUUUUM GRATEFUL
Objects:• 00:04:069 (3) - Why did you put this one higher than the second one? I think that it would fit if you do some kind of a stair with this 00:03:319 (1,2,3) - pattern like you did here 00:09:319 (1,2,3) - , since the sound actually gets lower by each slider, and, it would be also cool.
00:07:069 (3) -
• 00:10:444 (1,2,3,4) - This stream feels too straight imo, i feel like it should be more curvy to emphasize with the song in a better way
• 00:17:475 - Why do you ignore this?
• 00:19:537 - x2
• 00:20:194 (6) - This would fit better if it was an 1/4 slider imo (ending on the blue tic), because there isn't really a sound to follow here 00:20:381 - , so the ending there is pretty unnecessary, and only a circle would be not enough to represent it, so an 1/4 slider is the best option imo. To avoid overlaps you can just make the slider a bit slower (that would fit kinda good with the sound :p)
• 00:22:256 (1,2,3) - The three sounds of this pattern sounds all different as far as I can hear, maybe you should do some kind of jump pattern like a triangle, I think that a triangle would fit perfectly, then after doing it you could breaak the flow with 00:22:819 (1) - OR end with a triple with 00:22:631 (3) - since here 00:22:725 - is a pretty noticeable sound
• 00:29:569 (4) - I feel like this slider should be different from the other ones on the pattern (00:28:819 (2,3) - ) since the piano gets into another beat so it's not really fitting there, so i think thaat you could do a pattern with this 00:29:569 (4,1,2,3) - (the loudest piano sounds) instead of continuing with that hexagon.
Something like this. (I did CTRL+H then CTRL+J to do that slider). If you do this, the pattern would get a really good emphaasis and also it wont be hard to make 00:30:506 (5,6,7) - fit with this. By the way, don't way about my NC'ing pattern there, you dont really have to put NC on that 4 slider
• 00:30:506 (5) - I'd seriouslly recommend you to add an NC here since it's not part of the piano already (of the loud piano sounds*)
• 00:33:319 (3) - For this, instead of being that spaced, we could move it a bit like to x:283 y:297 (and it would also become a good aesthetic there)
• 00:34:819 (3,4) - We could move this a bit up to the right so it would be exactly between 00:33:881 (5,1) - ... basically what i say is that you should "give a placement sense" to that sliders
• 00:42:319 (3,1) - I'd make the overlap a bit more... overlap? i mean i think the sliderend should be a bit more into the curvy slider
• 00:56:006 (4) - NC for emphasis with the vocals?
• 01:03:694 - Adding a circle for emphasis here wouldn't be bad too, it feels so empty right now
• 01:23:100 (2,3) - I'd rather make the slider point to the next circle instead of pointing the air lol
• 01:27:694 (1) - I think that you should make the slider velocity lower here in order to make the slider be shorter (in size terms), i think that it would fit a lot here
• 01:34:819 (1,2,3) - The rhythm here feels more
like this01:40:819 - You could
do this here.
• 02:02:006 (4) - Same NC thing here
• 02:09:694 - x2 too
• 02:12:319 (2) - I'd suggest you to move this a bit to the right to avoid an overlap with 02:11:194 (1) - 's sliderhead
• 02:21:319 (1,2,3,4) - It happens here too! i mean, the piano thing actually starts 02:21:506 - (yes, there are 3 sounds of piano in a pattern of 4 sliders) so you might do a change there too imo
• 02:38:569 (3) - What about adding a slight curve to this slider?
• 03:27:507 (3,4) - this feels more like a kickslider honestly
GOD, I'M IN LOVE WITH THIS KIAI, BOTH SONG AND MAP
• 03:48:881 (1,2,3) - Finshie, i dont know where did you hear that here are 1/6 sounds, because there isn't, also it's an already pretty weird change of rhythm since the part from before is 1/2, i think that you should change this into an 1/2 circle on 03:48:881 - , or in any case where you actually hear an 1/6 there, an 1/2 triple would fit better the rhythm
• 04:02:569 (1) - Change this into a triple to keep consistency with 04:01:069 (1,2,3) -
• 04:09:319 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - I feel like the volume is pretty damn high here xD, its a mistery but i dont know why only that part felt high
• 04:19:819 (6) - Add NC for emphasis?
• 04:22:631 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think that the straigh line should end 04:23:194 - here (since there's the last sound), then you could move 5 to x:171 y:212 (so it would be exactly between 04:23:006 (3,4) - and would also be differenceable from the straigh line's sounds)
• 05:28:069 (1) - This feels more like
this (Explaining what I did: I removed that long slider and added an 1/2 slider in the same position without losing the blanket with 05:27:694 (1) - , afterwards I added a circle next to it with 1,4x spacing)
With this, you will keep a good spacing with 05:28:631 (1) - and won't lose any aesthetic
• 05:31:444 - I suggest you to start the break here (just in case, you can move breaks by clicking on their start) since here's where the song actually changes totally
• 06:05:569 (1) - It feels like it's not fitting the followpoint between this and 06:05:381 (4) - , I suggest you to rotate it just a bit to the left (so Ctrl Shift R +10°)