Pathfinder - Fifth Element

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Alvieee
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 26. srpna 2017 at 18:22:05

Artist: Pathfinder
Title: Fifth Element
Tags: marathon
BPM: 200
Filesize: 13993kb
Play Time: 08:42
Difficulties Available:
  1. Metal Fantasy (7,32 stars, 3461 notes)


Download: Pathfinder - Fifth Element
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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[A L P H A]
2017-06-26 09:27 Alvin-: hey
2017-06-26 09:27 [A L P H A]: hi
2017-06-26 09:29 Alvin-: i need your opinion on a map
2017-06-26 09:29 [A L P H A]: ok
2017-06-26 09:30 Alvin-: wait ill upload it
2017-06-26 09:32 Alvin-: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1341948 Pathfinder - Fifth Element]
2017-06-26 09:42 Alvin-: u there?
2017-06-26 10:02 [A L P H A]: oh sry
2017-06-26 10:02 Alvin-: -.-
2017-06-26 10:03 [A L P H A]: 00:22:225 (7,8,9,10,11) - this shouldnt be straight
2017-06-26 10:03 [A L P H A]: so it would look better
2017-06-26 10:04 [A L P H A]: (imo)
2017-06-26 10:04 [A L P H A]: 00:22:225 (7,8,9,10,11) - ^
2017-06-26 10:04 [A L P H A]: 00:22:225 (7,8,9,10,11) - ^
2017-06-26 10:05 [A L P H A]: 00:39:850 - here a break pls
2017-06-26 10:05 [A L P H A]: 00:42:950 - and here
2017-06-26 10:05 [A L P H A]: 00:45:250 - ^
2017-06-26 10:06 [A L P H A]: 00:54:250 - ^
2017-06-26 10:06 [A L P H A]: and nothing more to say
2017-06-26 10:07 [A L P H A]: overall very nice map
2017-06-26 10:07 Alvin-: you linked the same pattern 3 times
2017-06-26 10:07 Alvin-: XD
2017-06-26 10:07 [A L P H A]: oh lol ive messed up
2017-06-26 10:08 [A L P H A]: 00:19:825 (6,7,8,9) -
2017-06-26 10:08 Alvin-: why you dont like the straight streams
2017-06-26 10:08 Alvin-: i think it looks good
2017-06-26 10:08 [A L P H A]: 00:20:275 (12,13,14,15,16) -
2017-06-26 10:08 [A L P H A]: well idk
2017-06-26 10:08 [A L P H A]: its just a suggestion
2017-06-26 10:08 [A L P H A]: 00:22:300 (8,9,10,11) -
2017-06-26 10:08 [A L P H A]: thats all
2017-06-26 10:08 Alvin-: k
2017-06-26 10:10 Alvin-: ty
2017-06-26 10:10 [A L P H A]: np
2017-06-26 10:15 [A L P H A]: https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/610710
2017-06-26 10:16 Alvin-: lol
2017-06-26 10:16 [A L P H A]: xdxdxdxdxd
2017-06-26 10:16 Alvin-: what
2017-06-26 10:17 Alvin-: 29.12.2016
Vespirit
mod \=D/
[ Metal Fantasy]
  1. 00:00:850 (2,1) - why do you use 1/4 gaps here when most of the rest are 1/2? imo better to keep it consistent
  2. 00:05:650 (5,1) - ^
  3. 00:16:450 (2,1) - ^
  4. 00:14:350 (4,5,6) - i think you should leave this as a reverse, no reason to make circles since theres no difference in the song from the other 3 sliders
  5. 00:17:200 (2) - i hear this is 1/4, not 1/6, so a triple would work nicer here
  6. 00:31:450 (1,2) - change this to a slider, so that its the same as 00:31:900 (1,2,3,4), also it serves as an indicator that this is different from what came before
  7. 01:06:850 (9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - nothing i can hear in the song warrants a spacing increase like this.. the first four 1/4 notes are pretty much the same as before, but pitch changes at 01:07:150, so there would be a good idea to maybe have a reverse slider or smth
  8. 02:54:850 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - imo you should have 2 reverse sliders instead like at 02:52:450 (1,2)
  9. 04:34:550 - theres nothing here in the music, so i think it would be best to change this part a bit so that the slider doesnt end there
  10. 04:46:450 (9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - no reverse sliders? you had them in the other kiai, i dont see why you wouldnt have them in this one
  11. 04:48:850 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
  12. 04:51:250 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^
  13. 05:23:050 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - ik you made the volume of the slider ends to be 5%, but you can still kinda hear them... one way i would deal with this is to change them all to the default soft sound, so that they are quieter. there are also some instances after this where you didnt lower the volume for similar sliderends, so maybe go through it and fix those also
  14. 06:22:150 (2) - nc this? atm these sliders are a bit misleading because they look the exact same as the first one, which is way longer, so a player would think to hold them for as long... i think a new combo would help with that
  15. 08:00:850 (17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24) - reverse sliders, for the vocals like you did everywhere else

Thats everything i can find, good luck getting more mods and ranking! :D
This song is so awesome btw xd
Topic Starter
Alvieee

HydroCannon13 wrote:

mod \=D/
[ Metal Fantasy]
  1. 00:00:850 (2,1) - why do you use 1/4 gaps here when most of the rest are 1/2? imo better to keep it consistent
  2. 00:05:650 (5,1) - ^
  3. 00:16:450 (2,1) - ^
  4. 00:14:350 (4,5,6) - i think you should leave this as a reverse, no reason to make circles since theres no difference in the song from the other 3 sliders
  5. 00:17:200 (2) - i hear this is 1/4, not 1/6, so a triple would work nicer here
  6. 00:31:450 (1,2) - change this to a slider, so that its the same as 00:31:900 (1,2,3,4), also it serves as an indicator that this is different from what came before
  7. 01:06:850 (9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - nothing i can hear in the song warrants a spacing increase like this.. the first four 1/4 notes are pretty much the same as before, but pitch changes at 01:07:150, so there would be a good idea to maybe have a reverse slider or smth
  8. 02:54:850 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - imo you should have 2 reverse sliders instead like at 02:52:450 (1,2)
  9. 04:34:550 - theres nothing here in the music, so i think it would be best to change this part a bit so that the slider doesnt end there
  10. 04:46:450 (9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - no reverse sliders? you had them in the other kiai, i dont see why you wouldnt have them in this one
  11. 04:48:850 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
  12. 04:51:250 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^
  13. 05:23:050 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - ik you made the volume of the slider ends to be 5%, but you can still kinda hear them... one way i would deal with this is to change them all to the default soft sound, so that they are quieter. there are also some instances after this where you didnt lower the volume for similar sliderends, so maybe go through it and fix those also
  14. 06:22:150 (2) - nc this? atm these sliders are a bit misleading because they look the exact same as the first one, which is way longer, so a player would think to hold them for as long... i think a new combo would help with that
  15. 08:00:850 (17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24) - reverse sliders, for the vocals like you did everywhere else

Thats everything i can find, good luck getting more mods and ranking! :D
This song is so awesome btw xd
Fixed most of these things. Thanks for your mod. :oops:
Hollow Delta
Placeholder for mod.

Respond to the first guy's mod Alvin

read it too fast nvm. I'm fucking retarded
Milar001
Hello there
00:18:325 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - This is unreadable
Show somehow that the section is going to be 1/3
03:05:050 (1) - maybe fill this gaps with a spinners, something like here: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/185927
03:20:250 (3,4) - Music doesn't change here so why the stream change?
05:56:050 (2,3,4) - Sliders look like normal 1/2
06:07:000 (11,12,13) - Another time: Why like this?
06:22:750 (3,4) - Here 4 times slider with circle but from here start only sliders?
Hope it will be helpful
Topic Starter
Alvieee

Milar001 wrote:

Hello there
00:18:325 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - This is unreadable nobody had problem with it
Show somehow that the section is going to be 1/3 there are 1/3 reverse sliders before 1/3 streams...
03:05:050 (1) - maybe fill this gaps with a spinners, something like here: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/185927 the section is too long for spinners
03:20:250 (3,4) - Music doesn't change here so why the stream change?
05:56:050 (2,3,4) - Sliders look like normal 1/2 ok, i reduced the distance between them
06:07:000 (11,12,13) - Another time: Why like this? it fits the guitar
06:22:750 (3,4) - Here 4 times slider with circle but from here start only sliders?
Hope it will be helpful
Sorry, but it's not helpful enough for giving you a Kudosu. Anyways, thanks for your time.
[Nemesis]
Mod from my queue.

Metal Fantasy

00:04:450 (2) - looks like an ugly slider from 2008, I know u can do better than this
00:20:200 (11) - NC
00:22:300 (7,8,9,10) - ugly, no reason for it to get straight
00:26:650 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - map it as 1/3 instead
00:27:850 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - weird shape, I suggest that 00:28:450 (9,10,11,12,13) - should be bent in the same angle as 00:27:850 (1,2,3,4,5) -
00:36:250 - from here you can hear distinctive drums in the music which you seem to be completely ignoring. Rework the stream shapes so that they express the importance of the drum sounds (maybe space them differently? idk)
00:51:250 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - flow is weird, spacing is weird, shapes are simple and ugly
01:23:950 (3,4,5,6,1) - only map (3) and (1), I know it may be an undermap but it transitions better from a 1/4 section to a 1/3 section, as it is right now it's unexpected and sudden
01:33:100 (7) - again, things like these are just weird, you change the stream shape without adding a new combo (I'll stop mentioning these now, but they are all over the map)
01:51:850 (1,2,3) - feels too stationary, add some more movement ther
02:02:350 (8,9,10,11,1) - again weird transition, besides the stream should start bending from02:02:350 (8) - , not 02:02:275 (7) -
03:52:450 (6) - NC geez
04:57:550 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - stream gets straight at the end without any change in the music
05:49:900 (2,5) - stack
08:00:250 (9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1) - change in spacing without a reason again

Meh, what can I say. You have some interesting stream shapes but overall this map seems really really simple and geometrical, I just feel like even though the song is interesting the map doesn't portray it, instead gives a feeling of boredom and repetitiveness (also there are some unexpected changes in spacings without a reason which I don't really support)

gl
Topic Starter
Alvieee

[Nemesis] wrote:

Mod from my queue.

Metal Fantasy

00:04:450 (2) - looks like an ugly slider from 2008, I know u can do better than this fixed
00:20:200 (11) - NC
00:22:300 (7,8,9,10) - ugly, no reason for it to get straight
00:26:650 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - map it as 1/3 instead why? there are 1/4 beats in the song
00:27:850 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - weird shape, I suggest that 00:28:450 (9,10,11,12,13) - should be bent in the same angle as 00:27:850 (1,2,3,4,5) - no reason to make this pattern symmetrical. I like how it looks
00:36:250 - from here you can hear distinctive drums in the music which you seem to be completely ignoring. Rework the stream shapes so that they express the importance of the drum sounds (maybe space them differently? idk) fixed
00:51:250 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - flow is weird, spacing is weird, shapes are simple and ugly ok, changed
01:23:950 (3,4,5,6,1) - only map (3) and (1), I know it may be an undermap but it transitions better from a 1/4 section to a 1/3 section, as it is right now it's unexpected and sudden no
01:33:100 (7) - again, things like these are just weird, you change the stream shape without adding a new combo (I'll stop mentioning these now, but they are all over the map) i'll fix them all
01:51:850 (1,2,3) - feels too stationary, add some more movement ther tru, fixed
02:02:350 (8,9,10,11,1) - again weird transition, besides the stream should start bending from02:02:350 (8) - , not 02:02:275 (7) -fixed
03:52:450 (6) - NC geez calm down man :cry:... fixed
04:57:550 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - stream gets straight at the end without any change in the music fixed
05:49:900 (2,5) - stack fixed
08:00:250 (9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1) - change in spacing without a reason again fixed

Meh, what can I say. You have some interesting stream shapes but overall this map seems really really simple and geometrical, I just feel like even though the song is interesting the map doesn't portray it, instead gives a feeling of boredom and repetitiveness repetitive song = repetitive map (also there are some unexpected changes in spacings without a reason which I don't really support)

gl
Thanks for your mod. BTW You should PM me or something that you accepted my mod request because i though you ignored my request.
Kaplan
00:17:500 (3) - Misto tohohle bych tam dal 2 circly.
00:20:275 (12,13,14,15,16) - a 00:22:300 (7,8,9,10) - Bych dal do oblouku. Přecházet v jednom combu z oblouku na čáru je nepřirozený.
01:22:300 (3,4,5,6,7) - Posunout tenhle pattern trochu níž, 4:3 hráči by mohli mít problém.
01:36:250 (1,1,1) - 1,2,3 místo 1,1,1
01:48:650 (2) - Smazat
01:49:250 (5) - ^ (i když tam ten zvuk na to je, je o hodně tišší než ostatní zvuky v tom combu a při hraní ho prakticky nejde slyšet)
03:20:650 (1) - Přesunout na bílou
03:22:250 (5) - Taky smazat
03:25:850 (2) - ^
03:26:450 (7) - ^
04:34:650 (5,6,7) - tohle mi tam rytmem nesedí, hlavně ta 7
08:04:675 (6,7,8,9,10) - Tady bych dal jinej úhel přechodu
08:19:150 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - změnit combo na 1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4

Celkově se mi jinak mapa líbí. Hodně věcí, které jsem našel byly hlavně vizuální. Snad nevadí, že jsem to sem hodil česky.
Topic Starter
Alvieee

Kaplan wrote:

00:17:500 (3) - Misto tohohle bych tam dal 2 circly. ok
00:20:275 (12,13,14,15,16) - a 00:22:300 (7,8,9,10) - Bych dal do oblouku. Přecházet v jednom combu z oblouku na čáru je nepřirozený. mě se to tak líbí. předělám to když to zmíní víc modderů
01:22:300 (3,4,5,6,7) - Posunout tenhle pattern trochu níž, 4:3 hráči by mohli mít problém. ok
01:36:250 (1,1,1) - 1,2,3 místo 1,1,1 proč?
01:48:650 (2) - Smazat n
01:49:250 (5) - ^ (i když tam ten zvuk na to je, je o hodně tišší než ostatní zvuky v tom combu a při hraní ho prakticky nejde slyšet) ten zvuk je stejně hlasitej jako všechny ostatní v tom streamu
03:20:650 (1) - Přesunout na bílou ok
03:22:250 (5) - Taky smazat taky ne (zkus si vymazat celej ten stream a spočítej si kolik tam slyšíš stejně hlasitejch zvuků
03:25:850 (2) - ^ ^
03:26:450 (7) - ^ ^
04:34:650 (5,6,7) - tohle mi tam rytmem nesedí, hlavně ta 7 mě taky xd
08:04:675 (6,7,8,9,10) - Tady bych dal jinej úhel přechodu
08:19:150 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - změnit combo na 1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4 změnil jsem to trochu jinak

Celkově se mi jinak mapa líbí. Hodně věcí, které jsem našel byly hlavně vizuální. Snad nevadí, že jsem to sem hodil česky.
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