1. Metal Fantasy (7,32 stars, 3461 notes)

HydroCannon13 wrote:

mod \=D/

[ Metal Fantasy]

1. 00:00:850 (2,1) - why do you use 1/4 gaps here when most of the rest are 1/2? imo better to keep it consistent
2. 00:05:650 (5,1) - ^
3. 00:16:450 (2,1) - ^
4. 00:14:350 (4,5,6) - i think you should leave this as a reverse, no reason to make circles since theres no difference in the song from the other 3 sliders
5. 00:17:200 (2) - i hear this is 1/4, not 1/6, so a triple would work nicer here
6. 00:31:450 (1,2) - change this to a slider, so that its the same as 00:31:900 (1,2,3,4), also it serves as an indicator that this is different from what came before
7. 01:06:850 (9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - nothing i can hear in the song warrants a spacing increase like this.. the first four 1/4 notes are pretty much the same as before, but pitch changes at 01:07:150, so there would be a good idea to maybe have a reverse slider or smth
8. 02:54:850 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - imo you should have 2 reverse sliders instead like at 02:52:450 (1,2)
9. 04:34:550 - theres nothing here in the music, so i think it would be best to change this part a bit so that the slider doesnt end there
10. 04:46:450 (9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - no reverse sliders? you had them in the other kiai, i dont see why you wouldnt have them in this one
11. 04:48:850 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
12. 04:51:250 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^
13. 05:23:050 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - ik you made the volume of the slider ends to be 5%, but you can still kinda hear them... one way i would deal with this is to change them all to the default soft sound, so that they are quieter. there are also some instances after this where you didnt lower the volume for similar sliderends, so maybe go through it and fix those also
14. 06:22:150 (2) - nc this? atm these sliders are a bit misleading because they look the exact same as the first one, which is way longer, so a player would think to hold them for as long... i think a new combo would help with that
15. 08:00:850 (17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24) - reverse sliders, for the vocals like you did everywhere else

Thats everything i can find, good luck getting more mods and ranking!
This song is so awesome btw xd

Milar001 wrote:

Hello there

Mod

00:18:325 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - This is unreadable nobody had problem with it
Show somehow that the section is going to be 1/3 there are 1/3 reverse sliders before 1/3 streams...
03:05:050 (1) - maybe fill this gaps with a spinners, something like here: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/185927 the section is too long for spinners
03:20:250 (3,4) - Music doesn't change here so why the stream change?
05:56:050 (2,3,4) - Sliders look like normal 1/2 ok, i reduced the distance between them
06:07:000 (11,12,13) - Another time: Why like this? it fits the guitar
06:22:750 (3,4) - Here 4 times slider with circle but from here start only sliders?

Hope it will be helpful

[Nemesis] wrote:

Mod from my queue.

Metal Fantasy

00:04:450 (2) - looks like an ugly slider from 2008, I know u can do better than this fixed
00:20:200 (11) - NC
00:22:300 (7,8,9,10) - ugly, no reason for it to get straight
00:26:650 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - map it as 1/3 instead why? there are 1/4 beats in the song
00:27:850 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - weird shape, I suggest that 00:28:450 (9,10,11,12,13) - should be bent in the same angle as 00:27:850 (1,2,3,4,5) - no reason to make this pattern symmetrical. I like how it looks
00:36:250 - from here you can hear distinctive drums in the music which you seem to be completely ignoring. Rework the stream shapes so that they express the importance of the drum sounds (maybe space them differently? idk) fixed
00:51:250 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - flow is weird, spacing is weird, shapes are simple and ugly ok, changed
01:23:950 (3,4,5,6,1) - only map (3) and (1), I know it may be an undermap but it transitions better from a 1/4 section to a 1/3 section, as it is right now it's unexpected and sudden no
01:33:100 (7) - again, things like these are just weird, you change the stream shape without adding a new combo (I'll stop mentioning these now, but they are all over the map) i'll fix them all
01:51:850 (1,2,3) - feels too stationary, add some more movement ther tru, fixed
02:02:350 (8,9,10,11,1) - again weird transition, besides the stream should start bending from02:02:350 (8) - , not 02:02:275 (7) -fixed
03:52:450 (6) - NC geez calm down man ... fixed
04:57:550 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - stream gets straight at the end without any change in the music fixed
05:49:900 (2,5) - stack fixed
08:00:250 (9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1) - change in spacing without a reason again fixed

Meh, what can I say. You have some interesting stream shapes but overall this map seems really really simple and geometrical, I just feel like even though the song is interesting the map doesn't portray it, instead gives a feeling of boredom and repetitiveness repetitive song = repetitive map (also there are some unexpected changes in spacings without a reason which I don't really support)

gl

Kaplan wrote:

00:17:500 (3) - Misto tohohle bych tam dal 2 circly. ok
00:20:275 (12,13,14,15,16) - a 00:22:300 (7,8,9,10) - Bych dal do oblouku. Přecházet v jednom combu z oblouku na čáru je nepřirozený. mě se to tak líbí. předělám to když to zmíní víc modderů
01:22:300 (3,4,5,6,7) - Posunout tenhle pattern trochu níž, 4:3 hráči by mohli mít problém. ok
01:36:250 (1,1,1) - 1,2,3 místo 1,1,1 proč?
01:48:650 (2) - Smazat n
01:49:250 (5) - ^ (i když tam ten zvuk na to je, je o hodně tišší než ostatní zvuky v tom combu a při hraní ho prakticky nejde slyšet) ten zvuk je stejně hlasitej jako všechny ostatní v tom streamu
03:20:650 (1) - Přesunout na bílou ok
03:22:250 (5) - Taky smazat taky ne (zkus si vymazat celej ten stream a spočítej si kolik tam slyšíš stejně hlasitejch zvuků
03:25:850 (2) - ^ ^
03:26:450 (7) - ^ ^
04:34:650 (5,6,7) - tohle mi tam rytmem nesedí, hlavně ta 7 mě taky xd
08:04:675 (6,7,8,9,10) - Tady bych dal jinej úhel přechodu
08:19:150 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - změnit combo na 1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4 změnil jsem to trochu jinak

Celkově se mi jinak mapa líbí. Hodně věcí, které jsem našel byly hlavně vizuální. Snad nevadí, že jsem to sem hodil česky.