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Mercy X - Caught Fire (feat. Ashley Lawless)

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Mooha wrote:

ayo wuss poppin jimbo? :P

[General]
The hitsounds in Koala's hard diff aren't the same as the other two. They should be the same as the "Easy" diff and the "Not Safe Anymore" diff because they have very correct hitsounds with customs ones which follow the different rythmics and so should koala's. hitsounds are pretty much the same in the chorus and the first half is different since he's following vocals too but i'm ignoring them completely. also mine use custom ones too lmao (also its kinda bad if hitsounds r the same in all diffs since difficulties might follow different parts of the song, especially when theres a different mapper involved

[Koala's Hard]
You should change the shape of the second slider 00:42:350 (1,2) - and make it curved around the head of the first one maybe ? don't see why i'd do that since this plays out well and follows the same triangle created with the previous pattern which looks cool lol
00:53:950 (4) - This slider is really close to 00:53:550 (2) - and makes it weird to follow due to the curved mouvement. ? it's not even that close and I don't really see why the curved movement is an issue since the pattern forms a very acute angle (which is good flow)
01:05:950 (1) - This slider is really weird, you should shape it differently because it's not aesthetic at all. the whole point of that slider is not to be aesthetic (compared to everything else in the song) since the song is distorted here it makes sense to use a distorted slider shape to accurately represent this difference in the song.
01:09:150 (1) - It shouldn't overlap. 01:07:950 (1) - It's not aesthetic either. thats very subjective. i don't see how the overlap isn't aesthetic and theres a gap of over a beat between the two sliders meaning it really doesn't affect readability. shouldn't be any problem
01:12:250 (3,1) - Don't make a double here even if there is a strong sound here 01:12:250 (3) - you didn't map anything on a blue tick and you shouldn't do it here too, it makes it really weird to play especially on a hard difficulty. hard difficulties allow for quite some difficult patterns. here i do like how the double represents the song (and tbh its quite easy to single tap it with the low bpm) but I'm willing to change it if a BN or very experienced mapper says so, but for now no change
01:12:350 (1) - This slider as the one before is not aesthetic, I suggest you to change its shape. same as before
01:15:550 (1) - it's quite a good slider but you should curve the first part a bit more before the loop to make it look like the curved one after it. ok


I wish you good luck m8

Fursum wrote:

[Hard]

01:13:750 - You mapped the knocking but not the laughter. knocking is drums, laughter is vocals (didn't follow vocals anywhere else on the map so it makes sense I wouldn't follow them here)

Overall usage of spacing on extended sliders look random. For example this 00:56:350 - high pitched section has all stacks but this 00:53:150 - doesn't have any overlap. fml i was hoping i wouldn't have to explain this since its quite hard to explain. theyre not random, i can explain why i stacked/didn't stack every slider in the chorus. ok so starting from 00:43:550 (4,5) - these are stacked as the sounds here are somewhat continuous, while 00:43:950 (5,1) - are spaced out since it kind of sounds like theres a bigger gap between the sounds these sliders represent. Basically I'm grouping up the more continuous sounds by stacking and separating the groups through spacing and this concept can be applied to all similar patterns representing the same sounds in the chorus (i won't explain each one). for 00:53:150 (1,2,3,4) you can't really compare it to the rest of the patterns you mentioned since the sounds are different so therefore theyre mapped differently. Normally for these sounds i'd use 1/2 sliders (like 00:51:950 (1,2) ) but since the sounds here are comparably more intense i used circles to accurately represent that increase in pitch (00:53:550 (2,3) ). Also normally these 01:02:750 (1,2,3,4,5) - should all be stacked underneath each other according to my logic but since they are the most intense sounds in the chorus I chose to space them out to emphasize that increase in pitch again. hopefully thats clear enough

01:12:250 (3) - This 3/4 stack is hardly readable, needs atleast a NC and possibly separation from 01:11:950 (2) -same as other mod,also a NC on 01:12:250 (3) would make it worse since I used NCs on white ticks everywhere in the song so having a NC on a blue tick here would confuse players and make them think the note was on a white tick. The way I have NCs right helps a lot with readability. also moving it away is an option but i'd rather not as it conflicts with the concept where i have the notes following this kinda drum beat (01:11:950 (2) ) stacked underneath it
basically nothing changed,
thanks a lot for the mods anywayz :)
took a while to explain everything lol

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Saltssaumure
Hi from Salt's mod queue! Sorry for the late reply, I got kinda burnt out but I'm back now ;)


The slider speed and shape variation is really neat. I left a kudos because this deserves to be ranked, good luck!


[Easy]
Small grid level is messing up the distance snap and blanketing, instead use tiny grid size or no grid instead. Also, because a lot of the blankets you're doing are exactly the same, you can just do one and copy-paste the others to make them look more uniform (and also it's faster).
No combo colours?
00:25:550 (3) - Move this circle up a bit.

[Koala's Hard]
00:43:550 (4,5,1,2,3,1) - In places where the slider end is on a blue tick, the hitsound is a bit offputtingingly loud.
01:04:350 (5,1) - The head of 5 is a little bit too close to the body of 1.
01:11:150 (1) - This slider should be 0.75x speed.

[Not Safe Anymore]
00:35:950 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Jump distance could increase for each combo, because the music "ramps up" here.
00:40:350 (1,2,3,1) - Same thing about slider ends on blue ticks as above.


Btw, I'd be able to do a Normal diff gd, to smooth off the difficulty spread.
Sylas

Saltssaumure wrote:

[Koala's Hard]
00:43:550 (4,5,1,2,3,1) - In places where the slider end is on a blue tick, the hitsound is a bit offputtingingly loud. yeah i guess ure right, i'll remove some of the whistles
01:04:350 (5,1) - The head of 5 is a little bit too close to the body of 1. yeah true
01:11:150 (1) - This slider should be 0.75x speed. nah 1.1x is fine bc i only used .75x where the song is distorted, but here its not really distorted, just a lower pitch so i used a slightly lower multiplier than normal
thanks a lot ^^
updated
osu file format v14

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Creator:[ IWeenox ]
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Topic Starter
[ IWeenox ]
Thank you for the mod it is really appreciated !

Saltssaumure wrote:

Hi from Salt's mod queue! Sorry for the late reply, I got kinda burnt out but I'm back now ;)


The slider speed and shape variation is really neat. I left a kudos because this deserves to be ranked, good luck!

Thank you very much it is really kind :)

[Easy]
Small grid level is messing up the distance snap and blanketing, instead use tiny grid size or no grid instead. Also, because a lot of the blankets you're doing are exactly the same, you can just do one and copy-paste the others to make them look more uniform (and also it's faster).
No combo colours?
done some CC
00:25:550 (3) - Move this circle up a bit.
done

[Not Safe Anymore]
00:35:950 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Jump distance could increase for each combo, because the music "ramps up" here.
I want it to be linear firstly because it's only a hard diff and also because if think it's more aesthetic :roll:
00:40:350 (1,2,3,1) - Same thing about slider ends on blue ticks as above.
you advice me to lower the hitsound's % at the blue tick ?


Btw, I'd be able to do a Normal diff gd, to smooth off the difficulty spread.
Thank you :) but i have already someone working on a normal diff
Owens
Owens' Master
osu file format v14

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Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
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[Editor]
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Title:Caught Fire (feat. Ashley Lawless)
TitleUnicode:Caught Fire (feat. Ashley Lawless)
Artist:Mercy X
ArtistUnicode:Mercy X
Creator:[ IWeenox ]
Version:Owens' Master
Source:
Tags:Dance EDM Trap Nation
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- titan
hi, nm thing from queue.

hard

SPOILER
why are these combo colors different from the easy and the top diff?
00:13:550 (1,2) - blanket is like a pixel off lol
00:27:150 (3,4) - i wouldn't recommend placing these sliders like this bc earlier you used a very similar arrangement to represent very different sounds / you did it for 1/4 gaps
00:51:550 (5,1) - this is super uncomfortable to play. either make it flow better or like make the spacing less extreme or something
imakuri's normal

SPOILER
default combo colors ?
00:38:350 (2,3) - when playing this (2) leaves behind the glow stuff (idk what it's called lol) and it barely overlaps with (3). move (3) down a bit.
01:04:750 (1) - why is there a white anchor above the red anchor? looks better either without it or with it moved.
01:15:950 (1) - feel like this would be better starting on the red tick
easy

SPOILER
not really modding this diff but i played through it and noticed something
01:01:550 (1,2,3) - make it so the slider bodies aren't so close together (it looks bad while playing)
nice map and nice song. was gonna ask to make an easy diff but you already have one ;w;. good luck
Sylas
you should probably ask or at least tell if you're gonna remove my GD from the set especially when u use my diff as a template and use the exact same rhythm as me, even the same patterns at times. rude. also the notes on empty sounds in the intro of your insane are still unrankable just saying. gl
Topic Starter
[ IWeenox ]
Thank you for your mod :)

- titan wrote:

hi, nm thing from queue.

hard

SPOILER
why are these combo colors different from the easy and the top diff?
done the combo colors
00:13:550 (1,2) - blanket is like a pixel off lol
done
00:27:150 (3,4) - i wouldn't recommend placing these sliders like this bc earlier you used a very similar arrangement to represent very different sounds / you did it for 1/4 gaps
CC helps to understand that 00:25:550 (1,2) - and 00:27:150 (3,4) - aren't the same
00:51:550 (5,1) - this is super uncomfortable to play. either make it flow better or like make the spacing less extreme or something
done something about the pattern
imakuri's normal

SPOILER
default combo colors ?
done CC colors and leave the rest of the mod to imakuri
00:38:350 (2,3) - when playing this (2) leaves behind the glow stuff (idk what it's called lol) and it barely overlaps with (3). move (3) down a bit.
01:04:750 (1) - why is there a white anchor above the red anchor? looks better either without it or with it moved.
01:15:950 (1) - feel like this would be better starting on the red tick
easy

SPOILER
not really modding this diff but i played through it and noticed something
01:01:550 (1,2,3) - make it so the slider bodies aren't so close together (it looks bad while playing)
It doesn't bother me much when i'm playing so if other people complain about it i'll change the pattern
nice map and nice song. was gonna ask to make an easy diff but you already have one ;w;. good luck
Unrestricted
Hai, from my modding queue!

Imakuri's Normal:
Rhythms and Timing
00:17:950 (2) - There are 2 occasions where there is a note mapped like this, where there is no sound it is actually following. You are not following the vocal line so this circle shouldn't really be here.
00:29:350 (6) - The same can be said here, but this time it works and I have seen maps ranked like this, so it really is up to you. You'll probably keep this one.
00:55:150 (1,2) - You have mapped this sound here, but not mapped the exact same sound 1 bar earlier at 00:51:950 (1) . You also don't map this sound again some time later, after mapping it in the bar before that.
New Combos
00:56:350 (1) - To follow the pattern you have already set, this should not be a NC, but 00:58:350 (4) should be instead.
00:59:550 (1) - Remove NC.
01:01:550 (5) - Place NC.
01:02:750 (1) - Remove NC.
Placement, Spacing and Aesthetic
00:37:550 (1) - This repeating slider doesn't look too good at the angle its placed, but this is subjective.
00:40:350 (1,2,3,4) - Do you want your aesthetic to be perpendicular like this here? You don't have this style anywhere else in the map and it doesn't really fit in. You could do something similar to this instead : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8770712 .

Overall it is a nice map, the flow works well and the rhythm choices work well, they just need to be more consistent.

Hard:
Rhythms and Timing
All of the long 3/2 sliders in the beggining, their ends do not land on any sound in the song. You are creating/mapping a rhythm that doesn't exist in this song. This can work, but you should ask yourself if it works here as it is subjective.
00:21:150 (4) - This slider... The hitcircle is not mapped to a sound, as you are not mapping the vocal line, the tick is not mapped to a sound, and the end isn't mapped to a sound. This is less subjective as I believe this isn't rankable as it simply isn't mapped to the song.
00:40:950 - There is a very important sound here that is mid way through a slider. These sliders don't really follow the song here, and you have mapped this same sound differently later on.
Placement, Spacing and Aesthetic
00:30:350 (4,5) - This overlap does not look very pleasing, the other overlaps do work though. With this one what I would do is rotate each slider by around ~5degrees so they'd look like this : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8770866 . This is common in modern mapping.
00:36:150 (2,3) - CTRL+G. This will turn the pattern into an actual star rather than being hard to read as it currently is.
01:00:750 (4,1,2,3) - These 4 notes are all equally spaced in the timeline, yet 3 of them are stacked, this makes it very hard to read. It looks like a triple yet it is not 1/4, it is 1/2. The two ways you can fix this is by having (4,1,2,3) involved in the stack, or by spacing (4,1,2,3) so it is not stacked, you could map these in a triangle pattern, but i'll leave that up to you.
01:13:550 (1,2,3,4,1) - This is hard to read, but is more acceptable than the prior mentioned case.

Overall the rhythm in the map is thought out very well and works well to create the "wubby" feel without being too difficult. The spacing is all fine and easy to play for someone who would actually play Hard's. The NC's are also good. Good luck with getting ranked!
Topic Starter
[ IWeenox ]
Thank you for your mod :)

Unrestricted wrote:

Hai, from my modding queue!

Imakuri's Normal:
Rhythms and Timing
00:17:950 (2) - There are 2 occasions where there is a note mapped like this, where there is no sound it is actually following. You are not following the vocal line so this circle shouldn't really be here.
00:29:350 (6) - The same can be said here, but this time it works and I have seen maps ranked like this, so it really is up to you. You'll probably keep this one.
00:55:150 (1,2) - You have mapped this sound here, but not mapped the exact same sound 1 bar earlier at 00:51:950 (1) . You also don't map this sound again some time later, after mapping it in the bar before that.
New Combos
00:56:350 (1) - To follow the pattern you have already set, this should not be a NC, but 00:58:350 (4) should be instead.
00:59:550 (1) - Remove NC.
01:01:550 (5) - Place NC.
01:02:750 (1) - Remove NC.
Placement, Spacing and Aesthetic
00:37:550 (1) - This repeating slider doesn't look too good at the angle its placed, but this is subjective.
00:40:350 (1,2,3,4) - Do you want your aesthetic to be perpendicular like this here? You don't have this style anywhere else in the map and it doesn't really fit in. You could do something similar to this instead : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8770712 .

Overall it is a nice map, the flow works well and the rhythm choices work well, they just need to be more consistent.

Hard:
Rhythms and Timing
All of the long 3/2 sliders in the beggining, their ends do not land on any sound in the song. You are creating/mapping a rhythm that doesn't exist in this song. This can work, but you should ask yourself if it works here as it is subjective.
00:21:150 (4) - This slider... The hitcircle is not mapped to a sound, as you are not mapping the vocal line, the tick is not mapped to a sound, and the end isn't mapped to a sound. This is less subjective as I believe this isn't rankable as it simply isn't mapped to the song.
actually the slider is mapped to a piano sound and the circle to a little kick so it works well :p

00:40:950 - There is a very important sound here that is mid way through a slider. These sliders don't really follow the song here, and you have mapped this same sound differently later on.
done
Placement, Spacing and Aesthetic
00:30:350 (4,5) - This overlap does not look very pleasing, the other overlaps do work though. With this one what I would do is rotate each slider by around ~5degrees so they'd look like this : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8770866 . This is common in modern mapping.
done
00:36:150 (2,3) - CTRL+G. This will turn the pattern into an actual star rather than being hard to read as it currently is.
i like it how it is because there is a spacing that emphazise the white tick (and i don't really like stars sooo)
01:00:750 (4,1,2,3) - These 4 notes are all equally spaced in the timeline, yet 3 of them are stacked, this makes it very hard to read. It looks like a triple yet it is not 1/4, it is 1/2. The two ways you can fix this is by having (4,1,2,3) involved in the stack, or by spacing (4,1,2,3) so it is not stacked, you could map these in a triangle pattern, but i'll leave that up to you.
done
01:13:550 (1,2,3,4,1) - This is hard to read, but is more acceptable than the prior mentioned case.
done

Overall the rhythm in the map is thought out very well and works well to create the "wubby" feel without being too difficult. The spacing is all fine and easy to play for someone who would actually play Hard's. The NC's are also good. Good luck with getting ranked!
Manu028
Modding by request from my queue!

[Imakuri's Normal]

  1. 00:14:750 (2) - move his head in the trajectory of the curve of this 00:13:550 (1) - for a better look
  2. 00:48:750 (1,2,3) - why did you ignore the main sound here? you followed it for all of the kiai
  3. 00:51:950 (1,2,3) - same^
[Hard]

  1. 00:22:750 (2,1) - spacing should be the same of 00:22:350 (1,2) -
  2. 01:05:950 (1) - not recommended in an hard diff, beacuse it's 1/8
[Not Safe Anymore]

  1. 00:55:950 (1,2) - overlap :c

Couldn't find much, this is just ready for ranking imo, just try to fix this.

keep up the good work ^^
Topic Starter
[ IWeenox ]
Thank you for your mod :roll:

Manu028 wrote:

Modding by request from my queue!

[Imakuri's Normal]

  1. 00:14:750 (2) - move his head in the trajectory of the curve of this 00:13:550 (1) - for a better look
  2. 00:48:750 (1,2,3) - why did you ignore the main sound here? you followed it for all of the kiai
  3. 00:51:950 (1,2,3) - same^
[Hard]

  1. 00:22:750 (2,1) - spacing should be the same of 00:22:350 (1,2) -
    no need as it is not the same sound
  2. 01:05:950 (1) - not recommended in an hard diff, beacuse it's 1/8
    done
[Not Safe Anymore]

  1. 00:55:950 (1,2) - overlap :c
    done ahaha

Couldn't find much, this is just ready for ranking imo, just try to fix [url=https://i.gyazo.com/e4434886b4a7297248c4b290859a82cc.png]this
I can't really fix it (and it is not an unrankable thing anyway) [/url].

keep up the good work ^^
Senery
hi! from my queue

[Easy]
  1. 00:46:750 (2) - maybe rotate this a bit and move it down so it aligns with the slider better
  2. 00:55:150 (2) - ctrl+j this so it can blanket 00:56:350 (3) -
  3. 01:00:750 (1) - this NC is not really necessary
  4. 01:04:350 (4) - blanket is off
  5. 01:04:750 (1) - this starts a bit too early, the other diffs have this aswell
[Imakuri's Normal]
  1. 00:24:350 (2) - this can be better aligned
[Hard]
  1. 00:17:950 (3) - blanket the head of (3) better with 00:16:750 (1) - 's body (like you did with 00:17:550 (2) - )
  2. 00:37:950 (2) - make this a straight slider aswell
I see nothing wrong on the last diff, hope it help :)
Imakuri
all fixed ty

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Topic Starter
[ IWeenox ]
Hello thank you for your mod :)

Senery wrote:

hi! from my queue

[Easy]
  1. 00:46:750 (2) - maybe rotate this a bit and move it down so it aligns with the slider better
    done
  2. 00:55:150 (2) - ctrl+j this so it can blanket 00:56:350 (3) -
    done
  3. 01:00:750 (1) - this NC is not really necessary
  4. 01:04:350 (4) - blanket is off
    done
  5. 01:04:750 (1) - this starts a bit too early, the other diffs have this aswell
    can't really change it as it would be weird to play
[Imakuri's Normal]
  1. 00:24:350 (2) - this can be better aligned
[Hard]
  1. 00:17:950 (3) - blanket the head of (3) better with 00:16:750 (1) - 's body (like you did with 00:17:550 (2) - )
    done
  2. 00:37:950 (2) - make this a straight slider aswell
    done
I see nothing wrong on the last diff, hope it help :)
Sharkie
[Easy]
Looks good.
  1. Only 1 thing I don't like, and I'm sure people have said this but 00:47:550 (3,4,1) - I would definitely not use this spacing here. It's really confusing for Easy.
[Normal]
  1. 01:11:150 (1) - The slider end is a red point, I'd delete that.
  2. Looks good as well.
[Hard]
  1. 00:41:950 (1,2) - This jump is way too big, emphasis is cool, but for a Hard, it's way too big.
  2. 00:53:150 (1,2) - This spacing here as well, its really awkward. I know this bpm is kinda low but its still kinda ~weird~.
  3. 01:05:950 (1,2) - Incorrect snapings. The first slider should be snapped to 1/6, the second slider should be snapped to 1/3. 16th note triplets then 8th note triplets.
  4. 01:09:150 (1,2) - You're killing me here
[Not Safe Anymore]
  1. 01:06:416 (1,2) - Like I said about the hard diff; this should be snapped to 1/3.
  2. 01:12:250 - I'd map this!
  3. Pretty good!
Affirmation
Q

[Nor safe]
00:21:550 (1,2,3) - Looks hard to read.
00:21:550 (1,3) - stack
00:35:150 (5) - ctrl g for flow
00:42:750 (3,1) - avoid overlap for emphsis,
01:01:550 (1) - make same slider with 01:01:750 (2,3) - ?
01:04:750 (1,2) - too big DS comparing with others.

GL
Topic Starter
[ IWeenox ]
thank you for your mod :)

Sharkie wrote:

[Easy]
Looks good.
  1. Only 1 thing I don't like, and I'm sure people have said this but 00:47:550 (3,4,1) - I would definitely not use this spacing here. It's really confusing for Easy.
    done
[Normal]
  1. 01:11:150 (1) - The slider end is a red point, I'd delete that.
  2. Looks good as well.
[Hard]
  1. 00:41:950 (1,2) - This jump is way too big, emphasis is cool, but for a Hard, it's way too big.
    done
  2. 00:53:150 (1,2) - This spacing here as well, its really awkward. I know this bpm is kinda low but its still kinda ~weird~.
    done
  3. 01:05:950 (1,2) - Incorrect snapings. The first slider should be snapped to 1/6, the second slider should be snapped to 1/3. 16th note triplets then 8th note triplets.
    done
  4. 01:09:150 (1,2) - You're killing me here
    done
[Not Safe Anymore]
  1. 01:06:416 (1,2) - Like I said about the hard diff; this should be snapped to 1/3.
    done
  2. 01:12:250 - I'd map this!
  3. Pretty good!
Topic Starter
[ IWeenox ]
thank you for your mod :)

Neoskylove wrote:

Q

[Nor safe]
00:21:550 (1,2,3) - Looks hard to read.
like it like that
00:21:550 (1,3) - stack
^^
00:35:150 (5) - ctrl g for flow
done
00:42:750 (3,1) - avoid overlap for emphsis,
wanted to make it like that to emphazise a "stop" from the wub wub sounds
01:01:550 (1) - make same slider with 01:01:750 (2,3) - ?
done
01:04:750 (1,2) - too big DS comparing with others.
i emphazised the end of the kiai

GL
Owens
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240,272,18550,5,0,0:0:0:0:
240,272,18750,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,240,19150,5,8,0:0:0:0:
256,256,19350,1,2,0:0:0:0:
272,240,19750,1,2,0:0:0:0:
272,240,19950,6,0,P|304:192|304:144,1,85.0000016212464,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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258,77,20750,2,0,P|217:21|115:10,1,170.000003242493,8|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,80,21350,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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112,240,21850,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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432,224,22750,2,0,P|412:152|320:128,1,150,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,160,23150,1,14,0:0:0:0:
64,160,23550,5,0,0:0:0:0:
128,224,23750,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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216,201,24350,1,2,0:0:0:0:
216,201,24550,6,0,P|267:188|330:216,1,89.9999972534181
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207,170,25950,2,0,P|127:174|213:119,1,225.000008583069,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,252,26350,5,12,0:0:0:0:
400,224,26750,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,272,27150,5,8,0:0:0:0:
411,204,27550,2,0,P|394:148|344:120,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,196,27950,5,8,0:0:0:0:
242,198,28350,2,0,P|298:211|348:181,1,100,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
286,137,28750,5,8,0:0:0:0:
330,54,29150,2,0,P|290:96|290:154,1,100,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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192,64,29950,1,8,0:0:0:0:
384,112,30350,5,10,0:0:0:0:
173,78,30750,1,10,0:0:0:0:
192,272,31150,5,8,0:0:0:0:
360,214,31550,1,10,0:0:0:0:
168,262,31950,5,8,0:0:0:0:
379,228,32350,1,10,0:0:0:0:
144,256,32750,6,0,P|127:209|141:162,1,100,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
198,112,33150,2,0,P|214:158|200:205,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
141,162,33550,1,10,0:0:0:0:
141,162,33950,1,10,0:0:0:0:
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314,272,34750,2,0,P|297:225|311:178,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
371,222,35150,1,10,0:0:0:0:
370,221,35550,1,8,0:0:0:0:
149,261,35950,5,10,0:0:0:0:
175,153,36150,1,0,0:0:0:0:
229,247,36350,5,10,0:0:0:0:
238,114,36550,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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292,74,36950,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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336,35,37350,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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300,158,37850,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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304,160,41150,2,0,L|224:144,1,75.0000028610231,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,112,41550,1,10,0:0:0:0:
192,32,41950,5,8,0:0:0:0:
192,32,42150,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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384,298,42750,2,0,P|360:256|308:230,1,75.0000028610231,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
297,316,42950,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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176,112,43950,2,0,P|264:124|296:208,1,157.499995193482,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,256,44350,2,0,B|304:288|320:336|320:336|336:288|368:256,1,187.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,176,44750,2,0,P|416:144|416:240,1,217.500006637573,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,178,45150,2,0,P|344:92|472:68,1,232.500001773834,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,66,45550,6,0,P|432:48|400:0,1,75.0000028610231,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,64,45750,2,0,P|292:45|324:-2,1,75.0000028610231,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,64,45950,2,0,P|123:45|91:-2,1,75.0000028610231,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,144,46150,2,0,P|245:163|256:192,1,40,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,144,46350,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,224,46750,6,0,P|144:272|208:224,1,187.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,240,47150,2,0,P|150:296|161:213,1,220.000006713867,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
139,219,47550,2,0,P|163:318|224:212,1,262.500002503395,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
185,259,47950,5,2,0:0:0:0:
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288,320,48950,2,0,L|272:224,1,75.0000028610231,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,256,49150,2,0,L|375:173,1,75.0000028610231,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,320,49350,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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368,48,49950,6,0,P|304:64|224:48,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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262,61,52350,2,0,P|198:29|134:29,1,75.0000028610231,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,93,52550,2,0,L|128:144,1,40,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,208,52750,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,320,53150,6,0,P|336:288|352:240,1,75.0000028610231,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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180,52,54750,5,8,0:0:0:0:
223,153,54950,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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336,240,55350,2,0,L|415:230,1,75.0000028610231,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,256,55550,2,0,P|240:304|304:352,1,75.0000028610231,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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180,72,55950,6,0,P|158:102|148:143,1,80,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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224,256,56750,2,0,P|272:240|240:288,1,134.999995880127,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
243,168,57150,2,0,P|335:215|333:310,1,165.000005035401,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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331,44,57950,2,0,L|347:280,1,225.000008583069,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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208,176,59150,5,8,0:0:0:0:
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218,287,60950,5,8,0:0:0:0:
145,115,61150,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,176,61350,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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160,192,65550,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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32,112,67150,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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80,68,68750,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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204,260,71150,6,0,B|156:244|156:244|124:172|124:172|144:116,1,175,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
139,129,71950,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,16,72250,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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236,255,73950,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,224,74150,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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248,128,75150,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,75650,12,0,77550,0:0:0:0:
Rakuen
(◕ᴗ◕✿) Rakuen Diva Trap Modding Queue [osu!standard]

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Default = Normal mods
Blue = Strongly recommended
Red = Unrankable issue

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Easy

  1. 00:46:750 (2) - Try moving this a little bit up? It's touching the edge
  2. 00:47:950 (4) - Maybe put this on the left side, matches the flow with 00:48:750 (1) - better
  3. 01:09:950 (3) - Spacing error, make it as close as to 1.0x DS
  4. 01:12:350 (2) - Not so perfect blanket compared to the others you did, refer to the slider ball circle at the end of 01:11:150 (1) -

Imakuri's Normal

  1. 00:34:350 (1) - Remove NC?
  2. 00:51:950 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Hmm i dont get sometimes you have 8 downbeats in 1 combo sometimes 4 like this > 01:02:750 (1,2,3,4) - , and even longer which is like 12 01:04:750 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - , please do double check this c:

Hard

  1. 00:22:350 (1) - Make this stick to 00:22:750 (2) - for easy reading? cant recognise the spacing from few seconds ago like 00:21:150 (4,5) -
  2. 00:26:350 (1) - If you notice this one's a very big jump for Hard, makes spike in the difficulty
  3. 01:05:950 (1,2,3,4) - 01:12:350 (1,2,3) - Avoid these too if you can, because there are similar patterns @ Insanes

Good luck!
~(=^・ω・^)/。・:*:・゚★,。・:*:・゚☆
Monstrata

TheKoala wrote:

you should probably ask or at least tell if you're gonna remove my GD from the set especially when u use my diff as a template and use the exact same rhythm as me, even the same patterns at times. rude. also the notes on empty sounds in the intro of your insane are still unrankable just saying. gl
what happened here o.o
Electoz
[Easy]

  1. 00:19:150 (3,4) - Mapping these in this way devalues 00:22:350 (3,4) - 00:25:550 (3,4) - cuz rhythms from the latter two is more prominent, I would either remove 00:19:550 (4) or just make 00:17:950 (2) a repeat slider but up to you I guess
  2. 00:36:750 (3,4) - Don't do overlap that leads to a slidertail in Easy lol, actually 2 circles instead of 00:36:750 (3) would compliment the intensity better since it's hyping up.
  3. 00:26:350 (1) - 00:32:750 (1) - Also would be nice if you can keep the consistency of your comboing considering the rhythms on both parts are the same. (aka the first part you did every measure and you didn't on the latter)
  4. 00:46:750 (2) - 00:58:350 (1) - Offscreeeeeen
  5. 00:48:750 (1) - Actually I wouldn't recommend doing slidershapes that are overlapping themselves in Easy but whatever
  6. 00:59:550 (2,3,4) - The flow here is super awkward because you're forcing aesthetics 00:59:550 (2,4) which is understandable but not worth doing, I would go for something like https://puu.sh/x8Lg9/50f49e81f0.jpg which you can still keep the aesthetics while maintaining a more comfortable flow, you will have to move some stuff around tho if you apply on what I did.
[Imakuri's Normal]

  1. 00:13:550 (1,2) - Probably an only overlap with 1/1 rhythm which is unnecessarily stand out cuz you didn't do this kind of aesthetics anywhere else zz
  2. 00:34:350 (1) - NC is not really needed? Since you NC'd every 2 measures previously anyways.
  3. 00:40:350 (1) - Hello your flow went anti-clockwise for the entire kiai which I found it very repetitive, but it's easier just saying than fixing it so yea you should fix it if you're bothered enough
  4. 01:01:550 (5) - 01:07:950 (3) - Could NC here I think? According to the way you NC'd the rhythms with downbeats.
  5. 00:58:350 (4) - ^ For consistency with 00:55:150 (1) .
  6. Like I'm kinda lost on how you combo'd things in kiai cuz it's not entirely consistent based on the rhythms so I'm not sure what you're going for, if you fixed my combo suggestions above then you should take a look at 00:51:950 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 00:56:350 (1,2,3,4,5,6) too cuz now they're unnecessarily longer than other combo sets in kiai lol
[Hard]

  1. 00:22:350 (1,2,1) - 00:25:550 (1,2,1) - Same rhythms but too much spacing difference zz
  2. 00:31:150 (6) - This is supposed to be patterned with 00:31:550 (1,2,3) . 3-object-pattern like 00:31:550 (1,2,3) doesn't really represent the music properly when the rhythm is going consistently with 4/4 metronome.
  3. 00:32:750 (1,2,3,4) - 00:34:350 (1,2,3,4) - I can't seem to find any conceptual ideas behind these sliders, 00:26:350 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - looks way much better:
    1. 00:32:750 (1,2,3,4) - The shape usage is already inconsistent, 00:33:550 (3) - is an only straight slider within the combo for some reason I don't know, and suddenly an overlap 00:32:750 (1,2) which you didn't do anywhere else.
    2. 00:34:750 (2) - Same shape thing. Like, the way you used shapes on 00:26:350 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) was noticeably more conceptual so I don't know what you're trying to do here.
  4. 01:06:350 (2) - Should have an NC or something to indicate different snaps from 01:05:950 (1) .
  5. 01:07:950 (1) - The slider shape looks like a burai slider lol, try to redo the shape a bit so that the tail doesn't actually overlap over the sliderbody.
  6. 01:12:750 (2) - Sounds like 1/2 rather than 1/3.
[Owens's Another]

  1. 00:26:750 (2) - Any reason for not making this a 1/2 slider like 00:27:550 (2,2,2) ?
  2. 00:42:750 (3,4,5) - Don't do a wide angle when you're doing something that requires a fast movement or it will be very uncomfortable to play lol, something like https://puu.sh/x8MY8/3e286206a8.jpg would play much better
  3. 00:41:150 (4) - General thumb rule: Don't do different things and put them in the same pattern or it'll be misleading, 00:41:150 (4) - looks the same as 00:40:750 (2,3) but the rhythm+SV is different so the whole thing plays really gross
  4. 00:49:550 (5) - As mentioned earlier about the patterning, you need to have an indicator or something that intuitively tells the player that "hey, this object is different than the others" which there are many ways to do it like NC, slider shape, or degrouping it from the pattern, etc.
Sorry to say this but I kinda lost the will to mod last diff cuz I saw what this guy said while I was modding halfway lol so that's gonna be it
good luck tho
Akitoshi

Monstrata wrote:

TheKoala wrote:

you should probably ask or at least tell if you're gonna remove my GD from the set especially when u use my diff as a template and use the exact same rhythm as me, even the same patterns at times. rude. also the notes on empty sounds in the intro of your insane are still unrankable just saying. gl
what happened here o.o
OwO
Topic Starter
[ IWeenox ]

Monstrata wrote:

what happened here o.o
Ok so i think it needs a little explanation here...
As you can see i'm not a well-known mapper so at the beginning of the mapset i tried to ask random people to make a GD for me if they were willing to and one day i asked Koala. When he gave me the finished GD i didn't really liked the way he mapped but i needed diff into my mapset and he was the only one to accept a hard GD. Then i started to think about the fact that i wanted a mapset that i'm proud of since it was my first serious one so i decided to map the hard diff myself.
So yeah i might admit that at some point i wasn't sure about the rythme so i checked into the koala's diff but it is a simple rythme that repeat itselfs the entire songs so it is not complicated to have quite the same between two same diff. Also when he says "even the same patterns at times" it is totally untrue as i used distance snap for the entire diff except at some jump part so the pattern are designed to fill with the distance snap, i didn't copied some of his pattern i can swear.
JiruPiru
Hi there! I'm going to assume the difficulty "Not Safe Anymore" if your Light Insane diff lol.

Here's the mod
It feels like this song should have either soft hitsounds or custom hitsounds, I don't know if hitsounding is in progress though so don't bully me
01:13:950 (3) - nc maybe?

I'm sorry I couldn't find any problems, it's a great map and I wish you luck in getting it ranked :)
Topic Starter
[ IWeenox ]
Thank you for your mod :)

Rakuen wrote:

(◕ᴗ◕✿) Rakuen Diva Trap Modding Queue [osu!standard]

Legend
Default = Normal mods
Blue = Strongly recommended
Red = Unrankable issue

Tags

  • Make sure you tag GD creators' name too
    Done

Easy

  1. 00:46:750 (2) - Try moving this a little bit up? It's touching the edge
    done
  2. 00:47:950 (4) - Maybe put this on the left side, matches the flow with 00:48:750 (1) - better
    for now i'm good with the way i mapped here i'll may be change it later
  3. 01:09:950 (3) - Spacing error, make it as close as to 1.0x DS
    the spacing is already good no ?
  4. 01:12:350 (2) - Not so perfect blanket compared to the others you did, refer to the slider ball circle at the end of 01:11:150 (1) -
    done

Imakuri's Normal

  1. 00:34:350 (1) - Remove NC?
  2. 00:51:950 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Hmm i dont get sometimes you have 8 downbeats in 1 combo sometimes 4 like this > 01:02:750 (1,2,3,4) - , and even longer which is like 12 01:04:750 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - , please do double check this c:

Hard

  1. 00:22:350 (1) - Make this stick to 00:22:750 (2) - for easy reading? cant recognise the spacing from few seconds ago like 00:21:150 (4,5) -
    done but not sure about the pattern
  2. 00:26:350 (1) - If you notice this one's a very big jump for Hard, makes spike in the difficulty
    done
  3. 01:05:950 (1,2,3,4) - 01:12:350 (1,2,3) - Avoid these too if you can, because there are similar patterns @ Insanes
    i prefer keeping them like that

Good luck!
~(=^・ω・^)/。・:*:・゚★,。・:*:・゚☆
Topic Starter
[ IWeenox ]
Thank you for your complete mod it is really appreciated :)

Electoz wrote:

[Easy]

  1. 00:19:150 (3,4) - Mapping these in this way devalues 00:22:350 (3,4) - 00:25:550 (3,4) - cuz rhythms from the latter two is more prominent, I would either remove 00:19:550 (4) or just make 00:17:950 (2) a repeat slider but up to you I guess
    Done i removed the circle
  2. 00:36:750 (3,4) - Don't do overlap that leads to a slidertail in Easy lol, actually 2 circles instead of 00:36:750 (3) would compliment the intensity better since it's hyping up.
    done
  3. 00:26:350 (1) - 00:32:750 (1) - Also would be nice if you can keep the consistency of your comboing considering the rhythms on both parts are the same. (aka the first part you did every measure and you didn't on the latter)
    Done
  4. 00:46:750 (2) - 00:58:350 (1) - Offscreeeeeen
    done
  5. 00:48:750 (1) - Actually I wouldn't recommend doing slidershapes that are overlapping themselves in Easy but whatever
    i think it is pretty readable but i might change it later
  6. 00:59:550 (2,3,4) - The flow here is super awkward because you're forcing aesthetics 00:59:550 (2,4) which is understandable but not worth doing, I would go for something like https://puu.sh/x8Lg9/50f49e81f0.jpg which you can still keep the aesthetics while maintaining a more comfortable flow, you will have to move some stuff around tho if you apply on what I did.
    done
[Imakuri's Normal]

  1. 00:13:550 (1,2) - Probably an only overlap with 1/1 rhythm which is unnecessarily stand out cuz you didn't do this kind of aesthetics anywhere else zz
  2. 00:34:350 (1) - NC is not really needed? Since you NC'd every 2 measures previously anyways.
  3. 00:40:350 (1) - Hello your flow went anti-clockwise for the entire kiai which I found it very repetitive, but it's easier just saying than fixing it so yea you should fix it if you're bothered enough
  4. 01:01:550 (5) - 01:07:950 (3) - Could NC here I think? According to the way you NC'd the rhythms with downbeats.
  5. 00:58:350 (4) - ^ For consistency with 00:55:150 (1) .
  6. Like I'm kinda lost on how you combo'd things in kiai cuz it's not entirely consistent based on the rhythms so I'm not sure what you're going for, if you fixed my combo suggestions above then you should take a look at 00:51:950 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 00:56:350 (1,2,3,4,5,6) too cuz now they're unnecessarily longer than other combo sets in kiai lol
[Hard]

  1. 00:22:350 (1,2,1) - 00:25:550 (1,2,1) - Same rhythms but too much spacing difference zz
    done
  2. 00:31:150 (6) - This is supposed to be patterned with 00:31:550 (1,2,3) . 3-object-pattern like 00:31:550 (1,2,3) doesn't really represent the music properly when the rhythm is going consistently with 4/4 metronome.
  3. 00:32:750 (1,2,3,4) - 00:34:350 (1,2,3,4) - I can't seem to find any conceptual ideas behind these sliders, 00:26:350 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - looks way much better:
    1. 00:32:750 (1,2,3,4) - The shape usage is already inconsistent, 00:33:550 (3) - is an only straight slider within the combo for some reason I don't know, and suddenly an overlap 00:32:750 (1,2) which you didn't do anywhere else.
    2. 00:34:750 (2) - Same shape thing. Like, the way you used shapes on 00:26:350 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) was noticeably more conceptual so I don't know what you're trying to do here.
    all done
  4. 01:06:350 (2) - Should have an NC or something to indicate different snaps from 01:05:950 (1) .
    done
  5. 01:07:950 (1) - The slider shape looks like a burai slider lol, try to redo the shape a bit so that the tail doesn't actually overlap over the sliderbody.
    done
  6. 01:12:750 (2) - Sounds like 1/2 rather than 1/3.
    for me it sounds like a 1/3 so i'll leave it like there for now
[Owens's Another]

  1. 00:26:750 (2) - Any reason for not making this a 1/2 slider like 00:27:550 (2,2,2) ?
  2. 00:42:750 (3,4,5) - Don't do a wide angle when you're doing something that requires a fast movement or it will be very uncomfortable to play lol, something like https://puu.sh/x8MY8/3e286206a8.jpg would play much better
  3. 00:41:150 (4) - General thumb rule: Don't do different things and put them in the same pattern or it'll be misleading, 00:41:150 (4) - looks the same as 00:40:750 (2,3) but the rhythm+SV is different so the whole thing plays really gross
  4. 00:49:550 (5) - As mentioned earlier about the patterning, you need to have an indicator or something that intuitively tells the player that "hey, this object is different than the others" which there are many ways to do it like NC, slider shape, or degrouping it from the pattern, etc.
Sorry to say this but I kinda lost the will to mod last diff cuz I saw what this guy said while I was modding halfway lol so that's gonna be it
good luck tho
Topic Starter
[ IWeenox ]
Thank you for your mod :p

DilPil111 wrote:

Hi there! I'm going to assume the difficulty "Not Safe Anymore" if your Light Insane diff lol.
I'm sorry because Owens asked me to change the diff name but the light diff is actually the Another one D:

Here's the mod
It feels like this song should have either soft hitsounds or custom hitsounds, I don't know if hitsounding is in progress though so don't bully me
actually there is customs hitsounds :(
01:13:950 (3) - nc maybe?
Nop because i mapped the girl's laughing so don't need to NC

I'm sorry I couldn't find any problems, it's a great map and I wish you luck in getting it ranked :)
You'll maybe understand that i can't give a kudosu for this mod but anyway thank you :)
Crypthesis
so many mods

tbh you should find a bn

global
if you're not using these hitsounds delete them.
Unused hitsounds:
drum-hitclap.wav
drum-hitnormal.wav
drum-hitwhistle.wav
normal-hitclap.wav
normal-hitfinish.wav
normal-hitfinish4.wav
normal-hitwhistle.wav
normal-hitwhistle3.wav

normal
you should make the stacking thing at always since it's a normal.

00:19:750 (5,1) - stack?

00:29:350 (6) - I'd take this out since it's kinda dense

00:32:550 (5) - ^ and so on. maybe not at kiai

00:59:950 (1,2) - blanket
another
another is typically used as a name for "another" insane.

00:26:350 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4) - this part feels undermapped compared to the rest

00:53:150 (1) - there's no clue that this is different from the rest. even though it's a tech map, you should still leave some clues
not safe anymore
00:29:950 (1,2,3) - I don't really like this since it doesn't change flow on a strong beat. you can leave it like this if you want
00:56:350 (1,2,3,4,5) - put together for more emphasis

TEACH ME HOW TO MAKE NICE SLIDERS PLS
Mir
whats with the koala dude can he like confirm that's he's okay with whatever you took "inspiration" from cuz atm it's kinda in the air rn

[Easy]
- 00:26:350 - From here you start NCing every downbeat but that makes new combos appear really often, would recommend NCing every 2 downbeats.
- 00:48:750 - The way you made this slider makes the slider tick invisible lol, you shouldn't use these types of shapes in Easy diffs anyways, so maybe do something else for this slider.
- 00:54:750 (1,2) - Swap NC?
- 00:56:350 (2,3) - DS?
- 01:12:350 (2) - Making this a 1/1 slider would represent the wub better than the reverse that lands on essentially nothing of importance.
[Imakuri's Normal]
- 00:25:950 (4,1) - Stack leniency must be set so that 1/1 objects stack.
- 00:36:150 - Skipping this? The vocal is on here too.
- 00:48:950 - Also skipped why tho. Could use a 1/2 slider? 00:55:150 (1,2,3) - Like you did here.
- 01:00:750 (3,4) - Sad that you skipped the unique drum thing here. :/
[Hard]
- 01:09:150 (1) - Kinda questionable slider, would recommend something like this.

[Not Safe Anymore]
uhh topdiff shenanigans, don't really like the high density used in the beginning + filler rhythm and the sliders look very exotic for a calm part where they could be used instead in the kiai to make it stand out more

- 00:42:950 (1) - Weird this isn't a slider like the other 3?
- 01:11:150 (5) - NC?

Good luck!
MoonKat_old
Hi, I'm here.

Imakuri's Normal
01:13:700 - Maybe put another hit circle here?
00:54:750 (6) - This hit circle is off-time. I suggest changing it.
00:53:310 - I think you should put a hit circle here.
01:00:750 (3,4) - Personally think it would be fine if 3 was longer and 4 was removed, but it's okay either way.
Sorry if I wasn't that helpful, I tried my best.

Again, I'm not an expert, so I might be completely wrong.
Topic Starter
[ IWeenox ]
Thank you for your mod :)

Crypthesis wrote:

so many mods

tbh you should find a bn
i'm currently searching for some

global
if you're not using these hitsounds delete them.
Unused hitsounds:
drum-hitclap.wav
drum-hitnormal.wav
drum-hitwhistle.wav
normal-hitclap.wav
normal-hitfinish.wav
normal-hitfinish4.wav
normal-hitwhistle.wav
normal-hitwhistle3.wav

normal
you should make the stacking thing at always since it's a normal.

00:19:750 (5,1) - stack?

00:29:350 (6) - I'd take this out since it's kinda dense

00:32:550 (5) - ^ and so on. maybe not at kiai

00:59:950 (1,2) - blanket
another
another is typically used as a name for "another" insane.

00:26:350 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4) - this part feels undermapped compared to the rest

00:53:150 (1) - there's no clue that this is different from the rest. even though it's a tech map, you should still leave some clues
not safe anymore
00:29:950 (1,2,3) - I don't really like this since it doesn't change flow on a strong beat. you can leave it like this if you want
I will maybe change it later but for now i'm good with it
00:56:350 (1,2,3,4,5) - put together for more emphasis
I don't know what you mean by "put them together D:"

TEACH ME HOW TO MAKE NICE SLIDERS PLS
Ahaha :p
Topic Starter
[ IWeenox ]

Mir wrote:

whats with the koala dude can he like confirm that's he's okay with whatever you took "inspiration" from cuz atm it's kinda in the air rn

[Easy]
- 00:26:350 - From here you start NCing every downbeat but that makes new combos appear really often, would recommend NCing every 2 downbeats.
done
- 00:48:750 - The way you made this slider makes the slider tick invisible lol, you shouldn't use these types of shapes in Easy diffs anyways, so maybe do something else for this slider.
too many people told me that so i'm gonna go with a basic curved slider :(
- 00:54:750 (1,2) - Swap NC?
done
- 00:56:350 (2,3) - DS?
done
- 01:12:350 (2) - Making this a 1/1 slider would represent the wub better than the reverse that lands on essentially nothing of importance.
i did a reverse here 01:05:950 (2) - and i prefer leave it as a reverse for this sound
[Imakuri's Normal]
- 00:25:950 (4,1) - Stack leniency must be set so that 1/1 objects stack.
- 00:36:150 - Skipping this? The vocal is on here too.
- 00:48:950 - Also skipped why tho. Could use a 1/2 slider? 00:55:150 (1,2,3) - Like you did here.
- 01:00:750 (3,4) - Sad that you skipped the unique drum thing here. :/
[Hard]
- 01:09:150 (1) - Kinda questionable slider, would recommend something like this.
done

[Not Safe Anymore]
uhh topdiff shenanigans, don't really like the high density used in the beginning + filler rhythm and the sliders look very exotic for a calm part where they could be used instead in the kiai to make it stand out more

- 00:42:950 (1) - Weird this isn't a slider like the other 3?
no because of this sounds 00:43:150 (2) - that should be mapped with a slider so if i make a slider with it 00:42:950 (1) - it will land on the white tick
- 01:11:150 (5) - NC?
i think it doesn't need an NC here

Good luck!
Arphimigon
Lab Aesthetics Mod!
Results given in [x, y] formats

[Easy]
Nothing Detected!
[Hard]
Object at 00:30:350 - should be placed at: [407, 211] currently at: [408, 216] to blanket slider body at time 00:31:150 -
Object at 00:46:750 - should be placed at: [320, 244] currently at: [320, 248] to blanket slider body at time 00:47:150 -
Object at 00:52:750 - should be placed at: [247, 85] currently at: [252, 85] to blanket slider body at time 00:52:350 -
Object at 00:55:150 - should be placed at: [354, 269] currently at: [352, 272] to blanket slider body at time 00:55:550 -
Object at 01:00:750 - should be placed at: [426, 262] currently at: [429, 262] to blanket slider body at time 00:59:950 -
Object at 01:09:150 - should be placed at: [372, 182] currently at: [375, 181] to blanket slider body at time 01:09:950 -

[Imakuri's Normal]
Nothing Detected!
[Not Safe Anymore]
Object at 00:19:550 - should be placed at: [358, 144] currently at: [358, 141] to blanket slider body at time 00:19:950 -
Object at 00:22:350 - should be placed at: [341, 208] currently at: [344, 208] to blanket slider body at time 00:21:950 -
Object at 00:29:150 - should be placed at: [437, 118] currently at: [432, 122] to blanket slider body at time 00:29:550 -
Object at 00:41:950 - should be placed at: [140, 156] currently at: [137, 155] to blanket slider body at time 00:42:350 -
Object at 00:43:950 - should be placed at: [285, 230] currently at: [287, 224] to blanket slider body at time 00:44:350 -
Object at 00:50:750 - should be placed at: [419, 280] currently at: [421, 278] to blanket slider body at time 00:51:150 -
Object at 00:56:750 - should be placed at: [429, 174] currently at: [432, 171] to blanket slider body at time 00:57:150 -
Object at 01:02:150 - should be placed at: [143, 49] currently at: [144, 48] to move in line with slider at time 01:01:950 -

[Owens's Another]
Object at 00:17:550 - should be placed at: [207, 95] currently at: [208, 96] to move in line with slider at time 00:17:750 -
Object at 00:27:950 - should be placed at: [332, 195] currently at: [335, 194] to blanket slider body at time 00:27:550 -
Object at 00:28:750 - should be placed at: [286, 134] currently at: [286, 137] to blanket slider body at time 00:28:350 -
Object at 00:42:950 - should be placed at: [295, 321] currently at: [297, 316] to blanket slider body at time 00:42:750 -
Object at 01:10:750 - should be placed at: [414, 189] currently at: [414, 184] to blanket slider body at time 01:10:350 -

Results for STACKED OBJECTS may be wrong, ya can ignore those
I hope I didn't malfunction!
Chisa-
normal : 00:37:550 (1,2,3) - It would be necessary to follow the flow Sometimes it has sliders that are a bit too far 00:28:350 (4,5) - The 5 is a bit far from the 4 for the flow 01:13:950 (3,4,1,2) - Not very well placed The 2 is a little too far

another : 01:09:150 (1,2,3) - You have to modify it is slider To give something more professional ^^
Topic Starter
[ IWeenox ]
thank you it is really helpful as i like when everything is where it should be :D

Arphimigon wrote:

Lab Aesthetics Mod!
Results given in [x, y] formats

[Easy]
Nothing Detected!
[Hard]
Object at 00:30:350 - should be placed at: [407, 211] currently at: [408, 216] to blanket slider body at time 00:31:150 -
Object at 00:46:750 - should be placed at: [320, 244] currently at: [320, 248] to blanket slider body at time 00:47:150 -
Object at 00:52:750 - should be placed at: [247, 85] currently at: [252, 85] to blanket slider body at time 00:52:350 -
Object at 00:55:150 - should be placed at: [354, 269] currently at: [352, 272] to blanket slider body at time 00:55:550 -
Object at 01:00:750 - should be placed at: [426, 262] currently at: [429, 262] to blanket slider body at time 00:59:950 -
Object at 01:09:150 - should be placed at: [372, 182] currently at: [375, 181] to blanket slider body at time 01:09:950 -

all done

[Imakuri's Normal]
Nothing Detected!
[Not Safe Anymore]
Object at 00:19:550 - should be placed at: [358, 144] currently at: [358, 141] to blanket slider body at time 00:19:950 -
Object at 00:22:350 - should be placed at: [341, 208] currently at: [344, 208] to blanket slider body at time 00:21:950 -
Object at 00:29:150 - should be placed at: [437, 118] currently at: [432, 122] to blanket slider body at time 00:29:550 -
Object at 00:41:950 - should be placed at: [140, 156] currently at: [137, 155] to blanket slider body at time 00:42:350 -
Object at 00:43:950 - should be placed at: [285, 230] currently at: [287, 224] to blanket slider body at time 00:44:350 -
Object at 00:50:750 - should be placed at: [419, 280] currently at: [421, 278] to blanket slider body at time 00:51:150 -
Object at 00:56:750 - should be placed at: [429, 174] currently at: [432, 171] to blanket slider body at time 00:57:150 -
Object at 01:02:150 - should be placed at: [143, 49] currently at: [144, 48] to move in line with slider at time 01:01:950 -

all done

[Owens's Another]
Object at 00:17:550 - should be placed at: [207, 95] currently at: [208, 96] to move in line with slider at time 00:17:750 -
Object at 00:27:950 - should be placed at: [332, 195] currently at: [335, 194] to blanket slider body at time 00:27:550 -
Object at 00:28:750 - should be placed at: [286, 134] currently at: [286, 137] to blanket slider body at time 00:28:350 -
Object at 00:42:950 - should be placed at: [295, 321] currently at: [297, 316] to blanket slider body at time 00:42:750 -
Object at 01:10:750 - should be placed at: [414, 189] currently at: [414, 184] to blanket slider body at time 01:10:350 -

Results for STACKED OBJECTS may be wrong, ya can ignore those
I hope I didn't malfunction!
Owens
i didn't find things that enough to makes me want to change.
i changed some patterns in myself
thank you for modding all.

Crypthesis wrote:

so many mods

[another]another is typically used as a name for "another" insane. oh really ? let's call it insane then


TEACH ME HOW TO MAKE NICE SLIDERS PLS im bad
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 38350
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.3
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 13555,26355,35955,39955,47955,48755,64755,75549
DistanceSpacing: 2.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 16
TimelineZoom: 1.6

[Metadata]
Title:Caught Fire (feat. Ashley Lawless)
TitleUnicode:Caught Fire (feat. Ashley Lawless)
Artist:Mercy X
ArtistUnicode:Mercy X
Creator:[ IWeenox ]
Version:Owens's Another
Source:
Tags:Dance EDM Trap Nation Imakuri Owens
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CircleSize:5
OverallDifficulty:7.5
ApproachRate:9.2
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SliderTickRate:1

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262,61,52350,2,0,P|198:29|134:29,1,75.0000028610231,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,93,52550,2,0,L|128:144,1,40,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,208,52750,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,320,53150,6,0,P|336:288|352:240,1,75.0000028610231,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,152,53550,2,0,P|243:209|277:247,1,75.0000028610231,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
409,194,53750,2,0,P|357:168|307:178,1,75.0000028610231,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
294,326,53950,2,0,P|342:294|358:246,1,80
400,80,54350,2,0,L|272:64,1,110.000003356934,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,52,54750,5,8,0:0:0:0:
223,153,54950,1,0,0:0:0:0:
223,153,55150,6,0,L|144:144,1,75.0000028610231,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,240,55350,2,0,L|415:230,1,75.0000028610231,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,256,55550,2,0,P|240:304|304:352,1,75.0000028610231,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
335,137,55750,2,0,P|319:89|255:41,1,75.0000028610231,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,72,55950,6,0,P|158:102|148:143,1,80,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,256,56350,2,0,B|128:304|112:336|112:336|192:304|192:320,1,134.999995880127,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,256,56750,2,0,P|272:240|240:288,1,134.999995880127,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
243,168,57150,2,0,P|335:215|333:310,1,165.000005035401,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,352,57550,2,0,L|424:144,1,194.999991073609,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
331,44,57950,2,0,L|347:280,1,225.000008583069,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,352,58350,6,0,P|240:368|192:336,1,85.0000016212464,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,320,58550,2,0,P|96:336|144:304,1,85.0000016212464,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,256,58750,2,0,P|192:272|144:240,1,85.0000016212464,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,192,58950,2,0,P|144:176|176:176,1,37.5000014305115,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,176,59150,5,8,0:0:0:0:
352,144,59550,2,0,B|384:128|400:112|400:112|384:208|416:208,1,134.999995880127,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,224,59950,2,0,P|396:264|320:200,1,165.000005035401,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,188,60350,2,0,P|357:256|252:232,1,194.999991073609,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,176,60750,1,8,0:0:0:0:
218,287,60950,5,0,0:0:0:0:
145,115,61150,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,176,61350,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,176,61550,6,0,L|304:160,1,75.0000028610231,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,256,61750,2,0,L|245:333,1,75.0000028610231,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
178,257,61950,2,0,L|124:195,1,75.0000028610231,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
223,168,62150,2,0,L|303:152,1,75.0000028610231,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,176,62350,2,0,P|443:187|411:132,1,120,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,64,62750,6,0,L|96:112,1,255.000004863739,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,176,63150,2,0,L|376:128,1,225.000008583069,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
345,203,63550,2,0,L|117:247,1,194.999991073609,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,304,63950,2,0,L|364:268,1,165.000005035401,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,344,64350,2,0,L|198:370,1,112.500004291535,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,384,64750,6,0,P|64:320|96:224,1,175,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,192,65550,1,8,0:0:0:0:
395,137,65950,6,0,L|432:128,6,37.5000014305115,0|0|0|0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,208,66350,2,0,L|272:192,2,64.9999970245363
208,128,66650,2,0,L|128:144,1,75
32,112,67150,1,2,0:0:0:0:
32,112,67950,6,0,P|16:80|128:112,1,269.999991760254,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,68,68750,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,192,69150,6,0,B|96:224|80:304|80:304|224:304|336:224|336:144,1,419.999987182618,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,144,69950,2,0,P|352:112|416:192,1,225.000008583069,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
321,193,70350,2,0,P|387:100|483:125,1,179.999994506836,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
414,184,70750,2,0,P|388:256|285:280,1,179.999994506836,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,260,71150,6,0,B|156:244|156:244|124:172|124:172|144:116,1,175,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
139,129,71950,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,16,72250,5,0,0:0:0:0:
304,48,72350,2,0,L|288:96,6,37.5000014305115,8|0|0|0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,176,72750,2,0,L|224:112,2,64.9999970245363
307,215,73050,2,0,L|288:288,1,75
304,384,73550,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,224,73750,5,0,0:0:0:0:
236,255,73950,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,224,74150,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,160,74350,6,0,P|192:96|304:160,1,244.999992523194,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,128,75150,1,8,0:0:0:0:
248,128,75550,1,12,0:0:0:0:
256,192,75650,12,0,77550,0:0:0:0:
josh1024
From the queue:

Couldn't come up with rly helpful stuff so yeah make as well do all diffs.

Easy
  1. 00:23:150 (1,2) blanket is a bit off
  2. 00:42:350 (2) nc here?
Normal
  1. 00:13:550 (1,2) slider overlap is only used once, which I think is not worth kepping.
  2. 00:39:150 (3) nc here?
  3. 00:39:150 (3) to 01:12:350 (2) only rotates ccw. It's up to you tho
Hard
Looks good.

Insane
  1. 00:39:950 (2) volume?
Koiyuki
Easy
*it may look better if you keep the same ds in the whole diff
for example, 00:14:750 (2,3) - around 1.0x, but 00:13:550 (1,2) - is around 1.2x, and 00:19:150 (3,1) - 0.9x, redesign them into the similar ds like 1.0x, please check the whole diff.
*00:41:950 (1,2) - swap nc?

Imakuri's Normal
*as a normal diff, you change the nc too often, try to set every 2 long white line with one NC

Hard
*00:37:550 (1,2,1) - this 1/4 spacing is not recommended to be used in a hard diff.

Owen's light insane
*light insane → "L"ight "I"nsane?
*00:21:550 (1,2) - this 1/4 is quite sudden and confusing because it's the same ds with 1/2
*00:25:950 (4) - nc for speed change
*00:47:150 (2,3) - 00:53:550 (2) - 01:06:750 (3) - 01:13:150 (4) - ^, these NCs are which i think is necessary.

NSA
*00:21:550 (1,3) - seems not stacked well
*00:42:750 (3,1) - need a jump imo, try stack 00:42:950 (1) - on the head of 00:43:150 (2) - ? or remove nc 00:42:950 (1) - as the following
*00:53:150 (1) - extend to a 3/4 slider?
*01:11:150 (5) - nc
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