1. Hard (4,77 stars, 269 notes)
2. Lunatic (5 stars, 454 notes)
3. Normal (2,91 stars, 139 notes)

Combo1 : 244,149,166
Combo2 : 102,154,232
Combo3 : 207,61,61
Combo4 : 95,201,172
Combo5 : 186,108,219

1. Название разве не должно быть Touhou Kakusa Shakai ~Usabiizu e youkoso~?
2. Так мало тагов... Добавь Yuma Mizonokuchi yohine Yuri Nashimoto JUNCA Ai Ohsera Koko Nimo (исполнители, арренжеры) + Reach for the Moon Immortal Smoke, Lunatic Eyes Invisible Full Moon, Gensokyo Millennium History of the Moon, Lord Usa's Elemental Flag
3. Качество видео, конечно заставляет мои глаза кровоточить D: есть получше?
4. Мне кажется, или видео чуть-чуть запаздывает?

1. 00:14:639 (4) - финиш на конец
2. 00:21:517 (5) - сюда ткнуть хочется сначала. Да и даунбит все же, может ноту с финишем?
3. 00:22:855 (2,3,4) - такое наложение нот нехорошо для нормала. Может как-то переарранжировать? Хотя бы так:
   
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4. 00:33:746 (1) - финиш?
5. 00:42:919 (5) - нк!
6. 00:44:830 (7) - а здесь на конец можно свисточек добавить
7. 00:45:976 (1) - финиш?
8. 00:49:034 (5) - и сюда нк
9. 00:50:945 (7) - слишком много рипитов, заранилась сначала. Может, оставить один рипит и ноту?
   
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10. 00:52:091 (1) - слишком длинный спиннер. Ну, вообще, это нестрашно, но советую закончить его на 00:55:148 -, а потом:
    
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11. 00:58:206 (1) - финиш же!
12. 01:01:645 (5) - нк
13. 01:03:938 (7) - убери финиш и поставь его на 01:04:320 (1) -
14. 01:10:435 (4) - может сюда нк? даунбит же
15. 01:16:550 (1) - финиш, а еще мне не нравится форма его. постарайся сделать что-нибудь покрасивее :3
16. 01:21:136 (3) - финиш? будет такое выделение "НАНДАТО?!"
17. 01:22:664 (1) - сюда финиш тоже!
18. 01:24:193 (3) - ^
19. 01:25:722 (5) - ^ нарастание же! и нк сюда тоже :3
20. 01:28:779 (1) - финиииш
21. 01:33:365 (4) - ^ на конец, ну!

1. 02:09:419 - это что еще за красная секция? зачем она тебе D:
2. 00:15:212 (5) - финиш на конец
3. 00:19:034 (4,5) - джаст совет: может поставишь триплет на 00:19:415 - ? там под слова больше подходит :о
4. 00:19:989 (6,7) - слишком большой джамп. До этого таких не было, поэтому можно подумать, что там 1/1. Сократи его
5. 00:21:517 - опять же, добавь сюда ноту
6. 00:27:632 (1) - финиш
7. 00:30:690 (1) - ^
8. 00:39:862 (4) - финиш и нк
9. 00:45:594 (4) - свисточек на начало? :3
10. 00:57:919 (3) - финиш на конец
11. 01:04:320 (1) - ^
12. 01:10:243 (8) - ^
13. 01:22:664 (1) - если честно, жать на эти слайдеры все время - скукота и надоедает. Может, с этого момента как-то разнообразить ритм?
14. 01:28:397 (3) - финиш
15. 01:57:823 (1,2,3,4,5) - их немного закрывают хитберсты предыдущего комбо. Может разместить по-другому? Слишком много нот, будто топчешься на месте D:

1. 00:15:403 (1) - финиш!
2. 00:16:455 (6) - анснапнут
3. 00:27:632 (1) - финиш
4. 00:30:690 (1) - ^
5. 00:39:862 (4) - финиш!
6. 00:45:594 (5) - ну, свисточек? :3
7. 00:51:710 (3) - анснапнут
8. 00:51:901 (5) - ^
9. 00:58:205 (7) - финиш
10. 01:28:779 (1) - ^ и свисток на конец? ну и на следующих слайдерах, как в изи
11. 02:01:646 (3) - анснапнуто начало слайдера

1. Raise volume on all diffs please. 50% is so quiet for this song. can barely hear the hitsounds.

1. Adjust the SliderMultiplier to 1 manually through the file .osu
2. 01:37:569 (4) - new combo

1. OD +1
2. 00:45:021 (2) - 1 grid up
3. 01:27:250 (1,2,3) - Since only the one of times of return is different, it is puzzled. try this.
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1. 02:08:523 (1) - End of spinner at 02:09:861 (Normal and Hard is ok, why this diff only 02:09:909?)

1. Your mapset is NOT complete. Of course it is rankable, but it seems like you're lazy mapper. Try to make full-mapset? (Easy/Normal/Hard/Insane/Lunatic) Lunatic without Insane looks just wrong, imo. Draining time is not so long (1:50), so please stop being lazy and make a full mapset. :<
2. use Slider Tick Rate 2 because it fits with music the way better.
3. I'd place red line at 00:03:173 - where music ACTUALLY starts. Don't worry it will not hurt your patterns.
4. Disable letterbox during breaks, your map has video. so, letterbox are not really needed here.
5. Try to find better video. Current one hurts my eyes a lot. :<
6. Try to use new algorythm of creating circular sliders. It is MUCH easier and will improve your sliders a lot. (current sliders are a bit ugly and don't look good at all, to be honest)
7. 01:41:008 - drag break's start here. and breaks end 01:54:766 - here. So, your breaks will follow rhythmc as well.
8. No kiai? Even no fountains? Why? try to add some!
9. 02:08:523 - music ends here. Move 5% volume section here, so, spinner will be silinced from here. It will help you to follow music closer.

1. AR3 for Normal diff? Really? It doesn't fits with your slider velocity and makes ptterns unreadable. I'd recommend to use AR 4 or 5 instead. So, your playfield will not be flooded with circles and map will become the way better!
2. It seems like your ombos are overused during first 50% of the diff. Try to follow music or place NCs every 2nd "big-white-line". So, your combos will not be too short.
3. 00:03:747 (1) - use reversed 1/2 slider here, instead. So, you'll make consistent 1/1 flow that is better for easiest diff of the mapset, and ,of course, it will fit with music better as well! Your inconsistent rhythm is unacceptable for easiest diff, because it is too hard for beginners. example of consistent rhythm / example 2 (reversed 1/2s)
4. 00:16:167 - actally, there's a PERFECT place for one of those 1/2 sliders. Why do you use hhere one 2/1 slider instead? something like this will fit here THE WAY better
5. 00:18:843 (2) - same as above, perfect place for 1/2 slider at 00:18:843 (2). try to follow rhythm instead of creating perfectly symmetrical pattern.
6. 00:27:632 (1,2,3) - your flow here is totally unacceptable for easy/normal diffs. new pattern. Totally readable and symmetrical.
   
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   There are 4 possible ways to read your flow, and players will be confused A LOT. This problem is caused by LOW AR and kinda weird flow.
   
7. 00:36:995 (4) - try to replace this circle with 1/2 slider. Sounds like there are some drums at 00:37:186 - and you mustn't ignore them!
8. 00:55:912 (1) - overlapped with spinner's hitburst. May confuse players + doesn't looks good here.
9. 01:13:874 (4) - clear example of hat exactly copypasta does. You have an offbeat slider but it's perfectly symmetrical. extend it by one red tick,so it will follow both vocals and music.
10. 01:16:550 (1) - nazi - overlapped with (2)'s hitburst. Not a big problem but looks messy and may confuse some players. (in other words, try to avoid overlaps in easiest diffs)
11. 01:16:550 (1,2,3) - why did you break your distance spacing here? x1.1 instead of regular x1.0 looks a bit weird and doesn't makes your map better.
    Make sure there are NO any random spacing mistakes, please!
12. 01:35:276 (1,2,3) - looks like you're trying to point out these beats. but 01:35:657 - 01:36:422 - 01:37:186 - mustn't be ignored, too! Try to use 1/1 sliders here, it is all about consistent rhythm and flow.example
13. 01:37:569 (4) - nazi - I feel like there's a missed new combo. It should be here according to your pattern and because it FITS here (vocals, etc..)
14. 02:02:218 - you can't just ignore loud kick sound here? At least place here a circle or something :<
    
    too many 1/2 notes for easiest diff. Too slow AR makes patterns unreadable and flow here is confusing, too! Try to work on this diff more, I'm sure you can improve it A LOT.

1. OD and HP Drain + 1, please. (mostly OD). Your settings are too low. It's more like Normal+ with some 1/4s.
2. Objects are placed too close to each other. It makes 1/2 notes look weird. Try to use bigger distance spacing, so they will not be overlapped and you will improve your map.
3. 00:02:792 (2,1) - this jump is totally unreadable here, it looks just like regular 1/2s. and following circles (00:04:320 (3,4)) looks really odd after this jump. Try to avoid jumps for first 5-8 seconds of the map!
4. 00:08:142 (2,3) - jump distance is too big for [Hard]! What's more jumps are inconsistent x1.9 > 2.9 > 1.9 > 2.0. sound is exactly the same but jump distance is different. Why? It doesn't make any sense, imo.
5. 00:19:415 (5,6,7) - you had 1/4 slider at 00:19:034 (4) - 00:25:148 (1,2) - but you have triplet at 00:19:415 (5,6,7). It is inconsistend, and dosn't fits with your diff settings at all.
6. 00:29:160 - 00:29:543 - as long as you have circles at 00:29:925 - and at 00:30:307 - it is reasonable to put circles here as well. Or remove 00:29:925 (1,2) - to ge consistent.
7. 00:39:097 (1,2) - plese, keep spacing here consistent, otherwise it could be understood in a wrong way and confuse players.
8. 00:45:594 (4) - this slider is longet than your usual 1/4 sliders. It will confuse players because it breaks consistency and doesn't fit with your regular pattern at all! I suggest you, to use 1/1 slider here instead. it is more common for [Hard] diffs example
9. 00:49:798 (3,4,5) - same as 00:19:415 (5,6,7). Fix them all or ignore them all.
10. 00:50:753 (1,2) - practically the same as above, but here, you should use a 1/4 slider instead of those two circles. so, you will have easier-playable 1/4 pattern.
    hint: try to avoid streams fir hard diffs. And since your Hard is pretty easy, try to avoid triplets as well.
11. 00:54:384 (1) - make slider 1/4 longer (for consistent rhythm) or put circle at 00:54:766, this beat shouldn't be ignored, anyway.
12. 00:57:919 (3) - almost the same as 00:45:594 (4). and my suggestion is the same, too. example
13. 01:09:671 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - i've already told you to replace triplets with sliders. Do the same thing here, please!
14. 01:11:581 (3,1) - doesn't feels like antijump at all and breaks your spacing :< consider circles at 01:11:963 - and 01:13:492 - to fix this problem.
    note: 01:15:020 - try to fix, too!
15. 01:16:549 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - I guess that's ok to have THAT many sliders with 2x reverse. It's still hard-tto-read and sounds off to me, but it's your choice. At least try to keep comboing consistent here, please!
16. 01:40:244 (5) - replace this slider with two sliders? so, you will keep your sliders more consistent and easier to understand.
17. 02:03:938 (1) - I'd say that this jump doesn't fits here so good and feels off. Try to avoid THAT big jumps for [Hard] diff, if it's possible.
18. 02:05:467 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - geometry-jumps. They're readable but don't follow music at all, avoid random jumps, please. :/

1. 00:04:702 (1,2) - obviously wrong spacing. (x0.1) different. It's clearly visible spacing mistake, fix it asap, please!
2. 00:07:759 (2) - ctrl+g (reverse) this one to make it follow that-weird-sound. Lunatic diff is the craziest!
3. 00:32:218 - ah, c'mon! this break is TOO short. It will not kill anybody! + It may confuse some players. (if you disagree, place that break for Normal and Hard as well)
4. 00:33:746 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - please, do not overuse new combos. Make sure you place them ONLY for rhythm or to make patterns readable. Do not use NC spam. Never. It ruins your ma[p and makes it boring. (02:02:409 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - same = random spacing and unfitting jumps)
5. 01:00:498 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - x1.0 spacing for stream. previous steams had lower spacing. use kiai for this part, so players will feel those strams better.
6. 01:33:364 (1,2,3,4,5) - consistent 1/3 drumming, diifferent spacing. THIS IS NOT JUMPS. Do you know what jump is? Jump is something that FITS with music and makes map more enjoyable. You have random spacing here. Random spacing confuse players and makes unplayable. What's more you have inconsistent spacing here, it makes things even worse because it's just unplayable.

1. Title: Touhou Kakusa Shakai ~Usabiizu e Youkoso~

1. 00:02:791 (2) - Not a big deal but sounds better if you reduce one repeat from this slider - there's no drum sound at 00:02:982 - .
2. 00:03:173 ~ 00:15:402 - Why don't you use claps for snare-drum such as 00:03:746 - ?
3. 00:15:211 (7,1) - Looks better if you swap these newcombos.
4. 00:19:797 (6) - Personally think this note ruins your flow. I'd move this note to x:296 y:136 for a better flow.
5. 00:33:746 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - I don't like this pattern, it doesn't flow at all and plays badly to be honest.
6. 00:38:332 (1) - Add a drum-clap here?
7. 00:45:976 (9) - Add a finish here.
8. 00:57:441 (2) - ^
9. 00:59:352 (6) - The current agnle of this slider doesn't look good imo. How about making it like this?
   
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10. 01:08:906 (2) - Move this slider downward to avoid overlapping?
11. 01:10:434 (6) - Add a finish here.
12. 01:59:352 (1,2,3,4) - Somehow I prefer doing like this - the current pattern isn't somewhat looking so good to me.
    
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13. 02:02:027 (4,1) - 4.59x jump for what?

1. HD+1
2. 00:03:173 ~ 00:15:402 - Same as Lunatic
3. 00:04:320 (3,4) - A bit nazi but spacing can be more equal imo.
4. 00:42:919 (1,2,3) - I had trouble reading this, it will be more readable if you space (1) and (2) at higher DS.
5. 00:45:976 - Add a finish here.
6. 00:57:441 - ^
7. 01:15:402 (1,2,3) - Awkward rhythm considering the vocal. This one fits better with music imo.
   
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8. 01:32:601 (3,4) - The flow between 01:32:218 (2,3) - is a bit uncomfortable to me, this one works better imo
   
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9. 01:37:441 (1,2) - This rhythm doesn't fit well with the song and doesn't sound good to me.
10. 02:06:995 (1) - Better to end this slider at 02:08:523 - instead, or at least the 5% section should be there.

1. HD, AR and OD should +2. Star rating goes over 3.00 but it's still okay imo.
2. 00:02:410 (1,1,2,3) - Honestly I don't like this rhythm cause (1,1) has a 1.5 rhythm so it's probably too hard for beginners imo. Also some emphasises such as 00:03:173 - are followed with slider end and I think it's not a good idea. Anyway just mentioning here, if I ask you to fix these up it basically means remapping the whole part and I don't want to.
3. 00:31:263 (1) - This slider appears too soon after a spinner. please leave at least 2 beats blank so that beginners can recover enough.
4. 00:44:830 (3) - Considering the shape of (1), looks better if this slider is more curved.
   
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5. 01:22:664 (1,2,3,4,1) - well even though I cannot give you an alternative pattern, I think this pattern can be improved. Currently it looks so bad to be honest.
6. 02:06:995 (1) - Same as Hard.