hoLysoup wrote:

hi Breeze~
以下都是建議~ 咦原来你会说中文._.

[General]
確定不要用長一點的kiai section嗎?
再來就是名字: http://puu.sh/5npk
wikipedia拼的應該是對的吧? 就是Vitas无误

[Hard]
00:28:247 - 在這裡加個beat要不要? follow vocal. 雖然他是唱了4歌音 一堆1/2拍里面突然来3个1/4拍的很奇怪吧
01:36:834 (2) - 讓這個slider更黏貼(1)? like this: http://puu.sh/5npB 感觉好像太紧了

[Normal]
star rating 1.49可以改叫Easy吧？ 是因为低BPM所以星数低,其实也就是normal的水平
01:18:355 (5) - 乾脆把整個slider弄直不就好了？或是灣的 这里是fit颤音
01:26:834 (3) - 要不要把這個beat去掉更簡單一點？ normal的话这种应该不算难
01:33:790 (3) - ^這裡也是 ^
..還有接下來的。　不過不去掉也罷
03:02:703 (5) - 這沒有對稱喔. 把這裡拉直就對稱了: http://puu.sh/5nqi fixed

ˊ真是宏亮的歌手。　每一首都感受捯宇宙德震撼

Breeze wrote:

hi Breeze~
以下都是建議~ 咦原来你会说中文._.

[General]
確定不要用長一點的kiai section嗎?
再來就是名字: http://puu.sh/5npk
wikipedia拼的應該是對的吧? 就是Vitas无误

biwako wrote:

modding

all suggestion.
[Normal]
02:14:877 (2) - 1 grid up (Grid Level 3) k
03:02:703 (5) - 1 grid down and 3rd point 2 grid right,5th point 1 grid up I feel this one is fine
[Hard]
00:01:834 (3) - 2 grid down why? first part is 1.0 x spacing
00:05:312 (2) - 1 grid up
00:06:181 (4) - 1 grid up ^
00:13:138 (2,3,4) - symmetry it's not jump here
00:53:899 (5) - 2 grid left nah, it's 1.0 x spacing here
01:02:703 (1) - symmetry to 01:00:964 (6) changed a bit
02:17:051 (8,1) - 1 grid down (Grid Level 4) I feel it's fine here
03:08:464 (5) - 1 grid left (Grid Level 4)

nice map

DragonSparta wrote:

Hello~
Normal
02:20:964 (1) - Why not have this centered? And move this rest of the notes accordingly I feel it's fine here
02:53:573 (1) - Remove new combo? k
03:09:660 (6) - New combo? nah
03:24:225 (1) - Why not start the spinner at 03:23:573 ? changed a bit

Hard
00:30:964 (1,2) - Two grids left for (1) and a grid left for (2) why?
00:39:877 (6) - One grid right idk this one why...
02:10:094 (5) - New combo? nah
02:50:529 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - There is no indication of sounds here for the notes to follow. I suggest increasing the volume a bit. k
_____________________________________________________________-
Nice song~
Better than other Russian songs I have now~


Have my star~

hoLysoup wrote:

Breeze wrote:

hi Breeze~
以下都是建議~ 咦原来你会说中文._.

[General]
確定不要用長一點的kiai section嗎?
再來就是名字: http://puu.sh/5npk
wikipedia拼的應該是對的吧? 就是Vitas无误

哈哈會阿
喔我是指tag裡面的全名. Wikipedia拼得應該才對 tag里是一个俄国人跟我说的应该不会错把

Nymph_ wrote:

呀微风=A= 槽点不多 懒得用格式啦..

General:
OFFSET不一致 一个是85095 一个是85019 都是95啊 85095那么后面的是啥...

Normal什么都没发现 只不过有点像EASY..

Hard:
00:10:095 (4) - 结尾这绿线没用吧 确实没用, 去掉了
00:24:008 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,1) - 这一片绿线都没对准..不是故意的吧? 换过BPM后没注意这里:p, 现在对齐了
02:17:703 (1) - 这绿线也没什么用处 去掉了

00:27:921 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 没有好好对称 不过应该不是什么大问题 fixed
02:35:094 (1,2) - 这里如果跳的话 1到2也1.3SPACING我觉得更舒服 fixed

没什么了呢 就这些

1. In the normal, at 01:25:312 add kiai time here http://puu.sh/6Eyo because you used one at 01:39:225 and 02:52:268 with the same vocal/rhythm and you used it in the hard too xD

1. 00:37:486 (2) - Move it 1 grid left, so the circle is centered with a slider for a better blanket: http://puu.sh/6ExA
2. 01:00:529 (1) - Remove new combo ('cause you didn't use new combo here: 01:14:442 (3,4))
3. 01:21:834 (5) - Finish at the end? With this volume is good
4. 02:38:790 (3) - The return is out time.. Can you extend it 1/2 more? http://puu.sh/6Ez9
5. 03:02:703 (5) - Ehm so nazi but.. Red waypoint 1 grid up xD
6. 03:09:660 (6) - New combo
7. Lead-in 2 sec as the hard diff? o:

1. 00:07:051 Add a circle with a finish?
2. 00:10:964 (5) - I would use new combo here
3. 00:20:964 The same of point 1
4. 00:24:877 (5) - New combo
5. 00:26:181 (1) - Remove nc

Chewin wrote:

Hallow breeze *-*

General:

1. In the normal, at 01:25:312 add kiai time here http://puu.sh/6Eyo because you used one at 01:39:225 and 02:52:268 with the same vocal/rhythm and you used it in the hard too xD Ah, yea, I forget this

Normal:

1. 00:37:486 (2) - Move it 1 grid left, so the circle is centered with a slider for a better blanket: http://puu.sh/6ExA I'd like to keep ths spacing first
2. 01:00:529 (1) - Remove new combo ('cause you didn't use new combo here: 01:14:442 (3,4)) k
3. 01:21:834 (5) - Finish at the end? With this volume is good nah
4. 02:38:790 (3) - The return is out time.. Can you extend it 1/2 more? http://puu.sh/6Ez9 I've lowered volume, so I guess it's fine
5. 03:02:703 (5) - Ehm so nazi but.. Red waypoint 1 grid up xD k
6. 03:09:660 (6) - New combo Seems no need
7. Lead-in 2 sec as the hard diff? o: This diff. isn't start at the very beginning, so need no audio lead-in

Hard:

1. 00:07:051 Add a circle with a finish? Sounds good, but here I'm following background music, so no, sorry
2. 00:10:964 (5) - I would use new combo here k
3. 00:20:964 The same of point 1 same reason
4. 00:24:877 (5) - New combo k
5. 00:26:181 (1) - Remove nc k

Soaprman wrote:

Background image is off-center. I can fix that if you'd like... or if it's intentional, you can leave it how it is. Eh...I never noticked it, well, fixed

The hitbursts also look a little messy. Like, the choppiness where the edges are is noticeable. It's not a big deal though and I'm not sure I can really do a better job with them. fixed

Other than that stuff, flawless map here. I really like the volume changes. I have no stars to give right now (literally, zero unused kudosu) but I am giving you one in spirit!

Kei wrote:

Hi!

[Normal]

Nice~ :3

[Hard]

01:48:464 (3) - Unnecesary note. k, removed
01:26:616 (1) - Maybe NC? Hmm, nope
01:53:029 (5) - There's no sound at 01:53:029 so I think it sounds better if you move this note to 01:52:921. Although it's no sound here, but I feel here's a pause before 01:53:138 (6) so I'll keep this for now
03:15:095 (5,6) - Try this http://puu.sh/a3hH ? Hmm, nope

___________


That's all. Nice song and beatmap *-*

1. With the default skin, the ticks blend with the slider tracks. Use a grey one to fix this.
   
   SPOILER

   
   Use this file ? >w<
   

KuraiPettan wrote:

Skin :

1. With the default skin, the ticks blend with the slider tracks. Use a grey one to fix this.
   
   SPOILER

   
   Use this file ? >w<
   

Sure thing, added!

That's all owo, good job

Megurine Luka wrote:

哇rank了!!

Louis Cyphre wrote:

Уж никогда бы в жизни не подумал, что в азиаты любят Витаса

Gratz!

Breeze wrote:

Louis Cyphre wrote:

Уж никогда бы в жизни не подумал, что в азиаты любят Витаса

Gratz!

Google translation o.o
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Yes, I love vitas, his voice sounds nice