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Camellia & DJ Genki - Feelin Sky [Taiko]

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XEPCOH
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on воскресенье, 31 мая 2020 г. at 00:50:01

Artist: Camellia & DJ Genki
Title: Feelin Sky
Source: Starry Orange
BPM: 174
Filesize: 8579kb
Play Time: 05:43
Difficulties Available:
  1. Deprivation (6,33 stars, 2465 notes)
Download: Camellia & DJ Genki - Feelin Sky
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E V E R Y B O D Y S U C K A D I C K

hopefully going for ranked (finally!)
forelych
EVERYBODY SUCK A DICK

Держи мод, бро

Deprivation
00:06:379 - кат, т.к высокий звук
00:34:310 - тут должен стоять дон, так как есть удар барабанчика
00:35:344 - тут не должно стоять дона, т.к нет вообще никаких звуков (ну если ты имитируешь часть перед припевом, то имхо будет гораздо приятнее смотреться сначала k d k d k d, а потом уже стрим, без всяких d k ddk d kd dk перед стримом и прочего)
00:36:723 - ^
00:38:103 - ^
00:39:482 - ^
00:44:223 - не должно быть ноты, т.к нет звуков вообще
00:44:396 - ^
00:44:568 - ^
00:44:741 - ^
00:44:827 - мб на дон поменяешь?
00:45:344 - убирай, тут нет звуков
00:46:810 - мб добавишь кат?
00:47:672 - кат
00:50:947 - дон
00:51:637 - дон
00:53:016 - кат
00:53:189 - кат
00:56:120 - мб поменяешь на кат? вроде звук достаточно высокий для этого

дальше сейм причины, просто прислушайся к таким отрезкам повнимательнее

01:06:810 - кацуууу

(!) 01:39:999 - Я тебе про это писал, удаляй эту и последующую хуйню немедленно. Лучше поставь безобидные 1/4 паттерны.

От 02:02:758 до 02:08:275 причина, которую я писал выше, но тут хз даже

02:13:361 - нет звуков, убирай
02:13:620 - ^
02:17:930 - поменяй на kddk, паттерны вроде "kkdk", "kdkk" и прочие обычно используются как отдельные, в стримах они очень легко могут сбить
02:21:120 - убери, нет звуков
02:38:189 - поменяй на кат, чтоб не возникало проблем с прожатием последующего dddkkkd паттерна
02:38:275 (228,229,230,231,232,233,234) - поменяй на "dddkkkd", там сначала низкая хуйня, а потом она как бы на звук выше идёт. Ну и некоторым ddkk/kkdd плеерам будет сложно прожать этот момент, наверное
02:42:930 (280,281,282,283,284,285,286) - мб dddkkkd? Но мы-то оба знаем, зачем ты поставил именно этот паттерн ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡° )
02:48:447 - Мне кажется, такие звуки должны сопровождаться dddkkkd паттернами. ну хз
02:56:637 - мы же вокал фоловим, да?
02:56:810 - ^
02:56:982 - ^
02:57:154 - ^
03:07:154 - кат, ибо там срущий челик на фоне слишком сильно выделяется, имха
02:51:982 (376,377,378,379) - может, заменишь на 1/6?
03:12:930 - убирай, если ты решил сделать некий момент для отдыха, то нужно полностью отдаваться ударным, без отсебятины
03:13:103 - ^
03:13:792 - ^

Камеллию очень сложно моддить, поэтому замоддил только половину, ы. Энивей, удачи в ранкинге, если ты её действительно хочешь ранкнуть.
Topic Starter
XEPCOH

forelych wrote:

EVERYBODY SUCK A DICK

Держи мод, бро

Deprivation
00:06:379 - кат, т.к высокий звук а разве там не кат стоит?
00:34:310 - тут должен стоять дон, так как есть удар барабанчика принято
00:35:344 - тут не должно стоять дона, т.к нет вообще никаких звуков (ну если ты имитируешь часть перед припевом, то имхо будет гораздо приятнее смотреться сначала k d k d k d, а потом уже стрим, без всяких d k ddk d kd dk перед стримом и прочего) нет, потому что вокал (если такие звуки можно назвать вокалом)
00:36:723 - ^ same
00:38:103 - ^ same
00:39:482 - ^ same
00:44:223 - не должно быть ноты, т.к нет звуков вообще не уверен, потому что дон выступает в роли связки паттернов, убрал на всякий случай
00:44:396 - ^ слишком разрежено выйдет
00:44:568 - ^ окей
00:44:741 - ^ ну окей (?)
00:44:827 - мб на дон поменяешь? не в этой жизни
00:45:344 - убирай, тут нет звуков есть там звуки
00:46:810 - мб добавишь кат? надругательство над слухом
00:47:672 - кат ок
00:50:947 - дон нет, потому что там звук еле ощутимый и следующая нота - большой кат
00:51:637 - дон ок, переставил некоторые ноты
00:53:016 - кат согласен
00:53:189 - кат и этот человек мне ранее кастрировал стрим из-за беззвучных нот, найс
00:56:120 - мб поменяешь на кат? вроде звук достаточно высокий для этого первому, кто предложит здесь кат - мы подарим слуховой аппарат!

дальше сейм причины, просто прислушайся к таким отрезкам повнимательнее таки прислушался и кое-что поменял

01:06:810 - кацуууу k

(!) 01:39:999 - Я тебе про это писал, удаляй эту и последующую хуйню немедленно. Лучше поставь безобидные 1/4 паттерны. пока что поменял на самую безобидную связку 1/6 х 4 + 1/4

От 02:02:758 до 02:08:275 причина, которую я писал выше, но тут хз даже но тут хз даже

02:13:361 - нет звуков, убирай ок
02:13:620 - ^ нет
02:17:930 - поменяй на kddk, паттерны вроде "kkdk", "kdkk" и прочие обычно используются как отдельные, в стримах они очень легко могут сбить сменил на кккд
02:21:120 - убери, нет звуков сделано!
02:38:189 - поменяй на кат, чтоб не возникало проблем с прожатием последующего dddkkkd паттерна
02:38:275 (228,229,230,231,232,233,234) - поменяй на "dddkkkd", там сначала низкая хуйня, а потом она как бы на звук выше идёт. Ну и некоторым ddkk/kkdd плеерам будет сложно прожать этот момент, наверное
первую хуйню поменял, остальніе нет
02:42:930 (280,281,282,283,284,285,286) - мб dddkkkd? Но мы-то оба знаем, зачем ты поставил именно этот паттерн ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡° ) кккдддк (насчет причины паттерна ты прав ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡° ) )
02:48:447 - Мне кажется, такие звуки должны сопровождаться dddkkkd паттернами. ну хз сменил на (кккд)дк
02:56:637 - мы же вокал фоловим, да? ну да
02:56:810 - ^
02:56:982 - ^
02:57:154 - ^
03:07:154 - кат, ибо там срущий челик на фоне слишком сильно выделяется, имха вот тут точно куплю слуховой аппарат
02:51:982 (376,377,378,379) - может, заменишь на 1/6? теперь точно знаю, кому
03:12:930 - убирай, если ты решил сделать некий момент для отдыха, то нужно полностью отдаваться ударным, без отсебятины изменил паттерны, не актуально
03:13:103 - ^ нахуй раз
03:13:792 - ^ нахуй два

Камеллию очень сложно моддить, поэтому замоддил только половину, ы. Энивей, удачи в ранкинге, если ты её действительно хочешь ранкнуть.
спс за мод, держи кудосу!
iloveyou4ever
SUCK A DICK
17:47 Don Omar: hi, i've just made a new map, can you test it or mod it (m4m is okay)?
17:47 iloveyou4ever: I can test it :D
17:47 *Don Omar is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1333151 Camellia & DJ Genki - Feelin Sky]
17:48 Don Omar: my first one that is kinda possible to go further than graveyard
17:48 Don Omar: :D
17:48 iloveyou4ever: EVERYBODYSUCKADICK
17:49 iloveyou4ever: I didnt know the lyrics XD
17:49 iloveyou4ever: now I know
17:49 Don Omar: me too
17:49 iloveyou4ever: gogo
17:49 Don Omar: it's my vision xd
17:55 iloveyou4ever: so fun ;w;
17:55 Don Omar: does it suck?
17:55 iloveyou4ever: no
17:56 Don Omar: wow
17:56 Don Omar: some 1/6s are fucked up probably
17:56 iloveyou4ever: 01:42:930 -
17:56 iloveyou4ever: you can follow the bass here
17:57 iloveyou4ever: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8441661
17:57 iloveyou4ever: I will map like this
17:57 iloveyou4ever: 01:43:447 - and also remove the finisher cuz the sound not so strong
17:58 Don Omar: kkk
17:58 Don Omar: trying
17:59 iloveyou4ever: others are fine to me
18:00 iloveyou4ever: 04:10:344 - remove finisher too
18:01 Don Omar: is it ok to put don here? 01:42:758
18:01 Don Omar: k, my fault
18:01 Don Omar: :D
18:02 iloveyou4ever: emm I wouldn't put it
18:02 iloveyou4ever: no either bass or vocal there
18:02 Don Omar: ok
18:02 Don Omar: agree
18:02 iloveyou4ever: 01:47:241 - maybe change this to k
18:02 iloveyou4ever: cuz the bass
18:02 Don Omar: but on 01:42:413?
18:03 Don Omar: done
18:03 iloveyou4ever: emm this is ok,up to you
18:03 iloveyou4ever: no big effect
18:04 Don Omar: flow and stuff
18:04 iloveyou4ever: about the map?
18:04 iloveyou4ever: good for me :D
18:04 Don Omar: m?
18:04 Don Omar: thanks <3
18:04 Don Omar: you can post your mod to receive kudos
18:05 iloveyou4ever: structure is organized and patterns are fun
18:05 iloveyou4ever: not repetitive and have variation
18:05 iloveyou4ever: ok :D
18:05 iloveyou4ever: maybe you can put 1.1x on last kiai too?
18:06 iloveyou4ever: more challenging

Good Luck!
Kith190
Hi M4M as asked here. I'm really sorry for being late bu I had a lot of work to deal with.
[General]
Source: -Starry Orange is the name of the album
In taiko mapping you should deselect "Enable countdown" in "Design" section.
[Deprivation]
00:21:292 (149,150,151,152,153,154,155) - here I think that k d k k k d k would fit better but if you think that this could cange your style or sound weired than ignore his tip
From 00:23:447 to 00:34:482 singletapp seems to me a bit weired to play , for that reason I think that a nice solution would be making control+g here:
00:24:654 (182,183,193,194,204,205,215,216,226,227,237,238,248,249) - and changing to k here 00:25:172 (185,196,207,218,229,240,251,259) -
Maybe my suggestion is not the solution hat fits best but pls even if you don't want to applicate it reconsider that singletapp anyway.
Here I hear a sound 00:46:120 - maybe a d and for a better flow i would suggest to make this 00:46:292 - a k
From here 00:46:896 to here 00:46:896 there is the same sound as from here 00:46:896 to here 00:47:930 but you mapped theme differently, this is a lack in consistency. So I would place d here 00:47:499 and k here 00:47:672 and delete this 2 notes 00:47:844 (82,84) - so that the structure stays coherent.
Same problem with consistency here 00:47:930 (84,85,86,87,88,89,90,91,92,93,94,95,96,97) ... you should map i like the part before since it has the same sound or at least map with this methon even this piece 00:49:310 (97,98,99,100,101,102,103,104,105,106,107,108) .
This problems lasts for all the kiai time so I suggest a rework. You should map in the same way parts that have the same sound so that it comes easier to play for as many player as possible. It doesn't mean a continuous copy and paste but you could start with a strucure like singletap and then fill it always more to make the difficulty grow.
Here 02:11:379 (375,376,377,378,379,380,381,382,383,384,385,386,387) the stream doent fit well with the song so I would suggest something like
here 02:11:637 (378,379) - control+g
02:11:896 (381) - d
02:12:154 (384,385) - control+g
Same consistency problem: 02:14:482 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24) - here there is the same sound as here 02:19:999 (52,53,54,55,56,57,58,59,60,61) - but they are mapped differenly
Same thing from here 02:25:516 - but now we can do something different, you can leave the sream but it would be interesting to start it with the same pattern used before like:
02:26:206 (110) - k
02:26:465 (113,114) - control+g
In this 02:57:930 kiai time there is a better consistency than the previews ones.
03:39:827 - this stream doesn't fit so well to me, I would suggest to put:
03:40:172 (791,792) - d
03:41:637 (9,10) - control+g
03:41:810 - d
05:21:206 (468,469) - here I think that in the second noe there is a lower pitch so conrtol+g
05:32:327 (548,549) - same thing^ different case
05:43:361 (642,643) - same^
Really nice song! Hope that my mod was helpful! ;D
I will shot a kudosu cause of my late, It's not common to me.
Pls do the m4m on this one: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/621794
Topic Starter
XEPCOH
Hi

Kith190 wrote:

Hi M4M as asked here. I'm really sorry for being late bu I had a lot of work to deal with.
Colors:
green- agree
red- disagree
blue - i'm stupid
[General]
Source: -Starry Orange is the name of the album k done
In taiko mapping you should deselect "Enable countdown" in "Design" section. done
[Deprivation]
00:21:292 (149,150,151,152,153,154,155) - here I think that k d k k k d k would fit better but if you think that this could cange your style or sound weired than ignore his tip changed a bit, but other way
From 00:23:447 to 00:34:482 singletapp seems to me a bit weired to play , for that reason I think that a nice solution would be making control+g here:
00:24:654 (182,183,193,194,204,205,215,216,226,227,237,238,248,249) - and changing to k here 00:25:172 (185,196,207,218,229,240,251,259) -
Maybe my suggestion is not the solution hat fits best but pls even if you don't want to applicate it reconsider that singletapp anyway. kats should be on main ticks, also that singletap is not that strange
Here I hear a sound 00:46:120 - maybe a d and for a better flow i would suggest to make this 00:46:292 - a k accepted
From here 00:46:896 to here 00:46:896 there is the same sound as from here 00:46:896 to here 00:47:930 but you mapped theme differently, this is a lack in consistency. So I would place d here 00:47:499 and k here 00:47:672 and delete this 2 notes 00:47:844 (82,84) - so that the structure stays coherent.
accepted except for deleting one of the notes
Same problem with consistency here 00:47:930 (84,85,86,87,88,89,90,91,92,93,94,95,96,97) ... you should map i like the part before since it has the same sound or at least map with this methon even this piece 00:49:310 (97,98,99,100,101,102,103,104,105,106,107,108) .
This problems lasts for all the kiai time so I suggest a rework. You should map in the same way parts that have the same sound so that it comes easier to play for as many player as possible. It doesn't mean a continuous copy and paste but you could start with a strucure like singletap and then fill it always more to make the difficulty grow. trying to fix some inconsistency
Here 02:11:379 (375,376,377,378,379,380,381,382,383,384,385,386,387) the stream doent fit well with the song so I would suggest something like
here 02:11:637 (378,379) - control+g
02:11:896 (381) - d
02:12:154 (384,385) - control+g looks pretty stupid, changed in other way
Same consistency problem: 02:14:482 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24) - here there is the same sound as here 02:19:999 (52,53,54,55,56,57,58,59,60,61) - but they are mapped differenly fixed
Same thing from here 02:25:516 - but now we can do something different, you can leave the sream but it would be interesting to start it with the same pattern used before like:
02:26:206 (110) - k
02:26:465 (113,114) - control+g this pattern is okay
In this 02:57:930 kiai time there is a better consistency than the previews ones.
03:39:827 - this stream doesn't fit so well to me, I would suggest to put:
03:40:172 (791,792) - d done but removed one note
03:41:637 (9,10) - control+g
03:41:810 - d why tho
05:21:206 (468,469) - here I think that in the second noe there is a lower pitch so conrtol+g k, changed d to D
05:32:327 (548,549) - same thing^ different case nope because of 1/6 note
05:43:361 (642,643) - same^ same^
Really nice song! Hope that my mod was helpful! ;D
I will shot a kudosu cause of my late, It's not common to me.
Pls do the m4m on this one: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/621794

Thank you for modding, you really helped alot!
Hope to check your mapset as fast as possible.
<3
Shinsekai-
yee

[Filing eskai]

- You should play with the volume :^) can be nice
- Change to K? 00:23:447 (172) - follows the CLASH sound
- same here 00:34:482 (1) -
- change to d 00:46:896 (77) - is better and sounds better
- 00:49:654 (100) - same here... In this point doesn't have one sound but if you change this to a d can be nice to the song and to the beat
- 00:51:810 (117) - add note here and delete they both 00:52:154 (121,123) - cuz they doesn't have sounds too
- 00:53:189 (128) - same here add one
- change this to k 00:54:568 (141) - and add one d here 00:54:741 (143) - will sound GOOD
- do the same thing here 00:55:689 (150,151,152,153,154,155,156) -
- add one k 01:02:844 (209) - the streams starts right there
- 01:04:223 (222) - same here
- ctrl + g here 01:41:896 (225,226) -
- 03:08:103 (500,501,502,503,504) - hmmmm try with ddkkd sounds good and can be more accurate with the rhythm
- same 03:13:620 (543,544,545,546,547) - ^
- 03:16:379 (565,566,567,568,569) - kdkkd ^
- delete they both 03:25:603 (655,657) - are a little over mapped
- make this a d 03:25:689 (655) -


The rest if Fine for me :D

[commmentariosoxcikajszz]

- is a good map, I BELIEVE this can be EZ RANK xD
Topic Starter
XEPCOH

Shinsekai- wrote:

yee

green - agree
red - disagree
blue - other

[Filing eskai]

- You should play with the volume :^) can be nice i suck
- Change to K? 00:23:447 (172) - follows the CLASH sound done
- same here 00:34:482 (1) - no cuz further patterns contain big don and next note contrasts with them
- change to d 00:46:896 (77) - is better and sounds better accepted
- 00:49:654 (100) - same here... In this point doesn't have one sound but if you change this to a d can be nice to the song and to the beat kkk
- 00:51:810 (117) - add note here and delete they both 00:52:154 (121,123) - cuz they doesn't have sounds too nop
- 00:53:189 (128) - same here add one nop too
- change this to k 00:54:568 (141) - and add one d here 00:54:741 (143) - will sound GOOD SO GOOD
- do the same thing here 00:55:689 (150,151,152,153,154,155,156) - ok probably
- add one k 01:02:844 (209) - the streams starts right there ok but not sure
- 01:04:223 (222) - same here nop
- ctrl + g here 01:41:896 (225,226) - okay
- 03:08:103 (500,501,502,503,504) - hmmmm try with ddkkd sounds good and can be more accurate with the rhythm kkk
- same 03:13:620 (543,544,545,546,547) - ^ ok
- 03:16:379 (565,566,567,568,569) - kdkkd ^ oki
- delete they both 03:25:603 (655,657) - are a little over mapped removed first, changed the pattern
- make this a d 03:25:689 (655) - yee xd


The rest if Fine for me :D

[commmentariosoxcikajszz]

- is a good map, I BELIEVE this can be EZ RANK xD
Thank you!
Axer
From my Q, very good music too :^)
Mod
00:44:223 (54,55,56,57,58,59,60) - there's no beat in the background to support the vocals, this pattern doesn't work. I suggest deleting all of the notes and ending the stream with kdkdk

01:37:758 - if you're following vocals there should be a note here (I suggest a d)

01:39:999 (214,215,216,217,218,219,220,221,222,223,224) - switch the kddk with kkkd and the kkkd with the kddk.

01:42:068 (228) - if you place a note here you must also place one here 01:42:930 -

02:27:585 (122,123,124,125,126,127) - you can easily make these 2 kkkd so they won't sound so cut-off

02:33:103 (170,171,172,173,174,175,176,177,178,179,180,181,182,183,184,185,186,187,188,189,190,191,192,193,194,195,196,197,198,199,200,201,202,203) - this stream plays kind of weird
I have a suggestion for a stream that's more fun to play and follows the rhythm, make the entire stream (including 1/6) all don and turn
02:33:275 (172,174,175,180,182,183,186,187,190,191,194,196,198,201,202) - all of these into k

02:36:206 (205,206,207,208) - turn into kkkd and add a don 02:36:465 - here

02:41:723 (263,264,265,266,267) - ^ (kkkd)dk

02:42:154 - add d here to stay consistent with previous pattern at 02:36:206 -

02:42:672 - add k to follow beat

02:47:241 (324,325,326,327) - turn into kkkd, add d here 02:47:499 - and turn 02:47:585 - into k

02:57:930 (425) - from here onwards you could give the patterns more variety.
try doing this, turn some kdkdd to kdkkd and some ddkdd to dkdkd

03:52:413 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - same as before, switch kkkd with kddk and viceversa

03:55:746 (17) - there's nothing here, delete and move the don to a blue tick

04:08:965 (64,65,66,67,68,69,70,71,72,73,74) - as always, switch them.

04:10:689 (77) - there's nothing to map here, delete.

04:17:758 (8) - change to k

04:25:516 (18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28) - you know :^)

05:42:499 (633) - turn to k so it follows the pattern

05:42:758 (636,637,638,639,640,641,642,643,644,645,646) - switch :^)

as far as I've seen, applying all of these would make the map 6.53*, I might be wrong though.

well, that's about it!

Good luck ranking! Very good map!
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