1. Easy (1,27 stars, 219 notes)
2. Extra (4,66 stars, 95 notes)
3. Hard (3,15 stars, 541 notes)
4. Insane test (4,39 stars, 376 notes)
5. Insane (4,45 stars, 694 notes)
6. Normal (2,22 stars, 352 notes)

SawySavvy wrote:

Haai

Mod stuff for Insane

Chatlog:

01:11 SawySavvy: 00:21:521 - 
01:11 SawySavvy: Drum beat
01:11 SawySavvy: missing :o
01:12 SawySavvy: 00:28:456 (5) - 
01:12 SawySavvy: Would this not work rather smooth as 2x sliders ?
01:12 SawySavvy: Or rather, if it's drum
01:12 SawySavvy: Slider -> 2x single
01:12 SawySavvy: https://puu.sh/xPnVS/34cb9e317a.png
01:12 SawySavvy: 00:29:262 - 
01:13 SawySavvy: Missing drum beat ?
01:13 SawySavvy: 00:29:424 (1) - 
01:13 SawySavvy: Vocal mapping -> Intense drum part
01:13 SawySavvy: Repeat slider if you want the click rythm to matc the vocals? While letting the repeat hit sounds represent the drums perhaps :) ?
01:13 SawySavvy: 00:29:908 (2) - 
01:13 SawySavvy: I would cut it one shorter
01:13 SawySavvy: One tick
01:13 SawySavvy: 00:30:230 - 
01:13 SawySavvy: Then single tap there
01:13 SawySavvy: 00:30:391 (3) - 
01:13 SawySavvy: Would convert that into single taps to better represent the drums
01:13 SawySavvy: 00:31:198 - 
01:14 SawySavvy: Missing drum beat
01:14 SawySavvy: 00:33:133 - 
01:14 TmacBoris: ... i try to understand what's on top.
01:14 SawySavvy: Missing drum beat :)
01:14 SawySavvy: Hmm ?
01:14 SawySavvy: From the picture ?
01:14 SawySavvy: 00:28:456 (5) - 
01:14 SawySavvy: That's the ''5'' 
01:14 SawySavvy: From the picture
01:14 TmacBoris: would be better if you write all of this on beatmaps page. so i can step by step fix everything
01:14 SawySavvy: I changed it in the picture to my suggestion
01:14 SawySavvy: Fair enough

New comments :

00:41:037 (1) -
This would work great as a repeat slider, keeping the same length. All to represent the quicker sound.

00:51:037 (1) -
These sort of spinners are rather akward since they're this short.
And they dont really represent some form of long sound either.
I think the song would be stronger overall if you simply mapped these spinners instead.

00:54:746 (2) -
^ No drum beat?

00:54:908 -
^ Missed drum beat

00:57:488 (9) -
^ Reduced it with one tick and add a single tap at 00:57:811 -
Better represents the drums i think

00:58:295 (2) -
^ All of a sudden vocal focus slider? Feels akward since you're focusing mainly on drums without any major mixes before.
Also the strong drum sound is in the middle of said slider.
Aaaand: Both vocal and drum sound here: 00:58:779 -

00:58:940 (3) -
If you wanna go vocal here, i think it would work better as 2x sliders
Since the repeat is missing both the vocal word change and drum beat now
Perhaps something like this, picture: https://puu.sh/xPods/ee2ed01dc7.png


01:00:230 -
^ Missed drum beat

01:01:843 -
Should add a Kiai here.
Kiai end here: 01:32:811 -

01:33:295 (1) -
kinda akward when this short.
Could work if you extended it to: 01:34:746 -

If you wanna use a slider for the ''mini mo''
I think it better represents that sound at 01:36:682 (10) -
^ So perhaps start the slider there instead of 01:36:843 (1) -

01:38:618 (10,1) -
^ Same as above

01:54:908 (1,1) -
Akward once more.
No real long sound that represent these two
I think you either should just map the vocals or make this a paus/break.

01:58:617 (2) -
No drum sound?

01:58:779 -
^ The background sound you wanted to map above?

02:02:811 (3) -
Same akwardness as: 00:58:940 (3) -

Gonna stop here since most of these ideas/misstakes in your drum oriented style is repeating on the same sort of sounds.

I have to say though, limiting you to one instrument on an Insane level makes it somewhat stiff.
You can keep a drum/vocal oriented rythm without sacrificing the click rythm you want all that much.
A vocal slider can turn into a repeat slider so it covers both vocal and drums.
The click rythm being vocal but the hit rythm drums.

Anyhow, it's a good start and with some polish on how to represent your idea, it can come out nice
I wish you the best of luck.


Cheers
Sawy

Gabe- wrote:

General:
I like the fact that the map has its own style, but it gets repetitive, if u change that, it will be pretty good
Try adding green lines (slider velocity multipliers) to give more emphasis in certains parts of the song
The map has some cool patterns like 02:04:262 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - or 01:35:230 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - , but there are some that need to improve

Mod:
Insane
01:50:714 (7) - Replace with circle
00:58:940 (3) - This slider doesnt fit the song very well
02:02:811 (3) - ^
02:24:101 (3) - This slider feels uncomfortable

Good luck owo

Pilesos wrote:

Privet and Hello! I'm from modrequest..trying to help ^_^

Only Easy/Normal because it's firstly pretty late and secondly I'm more sure about the easier stuff

General

*- For the first mapset this looks promising! Especially for such a long song.

*- You even skinned the circles o.o Love it

*- Eventually you als want to hitsound your map. This of course can wait for now.

*- The timing seems correct (I suck at timing though)

Easy

*- In General the easy seems a bit too hard especially considering the relatively low bpm.
You might want to map it a bit less (use one slider instead of slider combinations, only map the main beat)

*- I would also higher the spacing a bit to 1.0x or 1.2x maybe because lots of elements overlap which is not recommended for an easy

*- 00:02:811 - This slider is hard to play for new players. That's why you don't really want them in an easy diff

*- 00:04:585 - The sliderend is too late imo. You'll want it here 00:04:262 -

*- 00:05:230 - These kind of slider as well are too hard for new players. Just put a normal slider there https://puu.sh/xPoY3/94e8ff7f7b.jpg

*- 00:06:198 (1) - There is not enough time after the spinner to react to the next circles. It is mentioned that you'd need 4 beats recovery time for 180bpm (in this case I'd say it's 3 1/3 beats). One Beat is not enough though. The spinner also is barely long enough so I'd just scratch the spinner there.

*- 00:08:133 (1,2) - Like I said these sliders are too short. Try circles.

*- 00:10:230 - fix the slider end to 00:10:069 -

*- 00:10:553 (5) - too short, too hard to play >_<

*- 00:12:166 - fix slider end to 00:11:521 (7) -

*- 00:13:940 - same spinner problem: not enough time after the spinner

*- 00:18:940 - slider end to 00:18:779 -

*- 00:19:262 - circle

*- 00:23:779 - slider end to 00:23:617 -

*- 00:27:650 - slider end to 00:27:488 -

*- 00:31:037 - slider end to 00:30:875 -

*- 00:31:359 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Love the map and the song here ^_^

*- 00:42:972 - shorten the slider to this time

*- 00:58:617 - slider end to 00:58:456 -

*- 01:00:391 - spinner problem

*- 01:07:811 - slider end to 01:07:650 -

*- 01:12:004 (2) - slider end to 01:12:972 - (white tick)

*- 01:22:650 (3) - slider end to 01:23:133 - (white tick)

*- 01:28:295 - slider end to 01:27:004 (1) -

*- 01:28:456 - new slider (or cirlces)

*- 01:31:037 - slider end to 01:30:875 - (white tick)

*- 01:38:617 - slider end to 01:38:133 - (white tick)

*- 01:38:617 - new cirlce

*- 02:02:488 - slider end to 02:02:327 -

*- 02:04:262 - ^spinner problem

*- 02:11:682 - slider end on white tick

*- 02:17:327 - slider end to 02:16:843 -

*- 02:17:327 - new circle

*- 02:27:166 - slider end on white tick

*- 02:32:327 - slider end on 02:31:843 -

*- 02:34:908 - slider end on white tick

*- 02:37:166 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - cool idea ^_^

*- 02:54:585 (1) - ^spinner problem

*- 02:59:908 - slider end to 02:59:424 -

*- 03:02:004 - slider end on white tick

*- 03:02:811 - here it is right ^^

*- 03:07:650 - slider end to 03:07:166 -

*- 03:17:488 - slider end to 03:17:327 -

*- 03:22:650 - slider end to 03:22:166 -

*- 03:25:230 - slider end to 03:25:069 -

*- 03:26:037 - right^^


*- At some places you might have to remap it a bit (where the spinner and slider ends were)

Normal

*- 00:03:295 - streams in normals :O nono xD

*- 00:07:650 - even for a normal this spinner does not have enough recovery time (might be 2 beats)

*- 00:13:940 - again >_<

*- 00:38:779 - slider end to 00:38:617 -

*- 00:43:617 - slider end to 00:43:456 - white tick

*- 00:45:875 - white tick slider end

*- 00:59:908 - ^

*- 01:00:391 - spinner ^

*- 01:04:262 - no reverse slider ; it ends here because there is no beat there

*- 01:07:650 - ^here again

*- 01:12:004 - ^

*- 01:13:940 - ^

*- 01:15:391 - ^

*- 01:19:746 - ^

*- 01:21:682 - ^

*- 01:38:456 - ends here 01:38:133 -

*- 01:47:488 - end on white tick 01:47:327 -

*- 01:49:746 - ^same

*- similiar stuff until 02:44:424 -

*- 02:44:424 - slider end to white tick

*- 02:45:875 -

*- 02:55:875 - spinner problem^

More general stuff:


*- Try improving especially on your slider ends. Try listening carefully to the song and don't get distracted by the vocals which might sound longer than the rythm of the song.


*- Also try not to overmap! There are some parts where there is no beat. Then there has to be a break.



All in all it looks fine though!^_^



Have a good morning!

Pilesos

Pilesos wrote:

ok I just noticed how little I explained in yesterday night ^^'

Thanks for asking again. Just ask again if you need more tips^^

1. For spinners: yes I also don't see a way to integrate spinners in the Easy and Normal diff. For Hard and Insane these spinners are completely fine. But for easier diffs ranking criteria forbids it >_< . Yes, I'd also map it with sliders.

2. Let's take this example 01:23:295 - on the Easy Difficulty listen closely at 25% speed. The main beat is clearly on the white tick.That's why I assumed that you were going for vocals. But this also makes little sense now that I think about it xD. When she sings: "Ha la ke shi kee" The emphasis is on the "Ha" (slider begin) and "kee" (slider end) and a bit on "la" but that's whatever^^. It is not on the "ke" where you mapped the slider end.
You don't want to map minor sounds in an easier difficulty when you can instead of focus on the main beats.

Also 01:27:650 - in the normal diff: There is a clear "oomph" on the white tick. There is no need to map reverse slider there. A normal one is sufficient ^^

Sorry for my lazy mod haha ^^'

Saltssaumure wrote:

Hi from my modqueue.

[Insane]
00:05:069 - Unmapped sound here which is mapped at 00:03:133 (3)
00:03:940 - ^ mapped at 00:03:456 (2)
00:05:714 (4) - Extended sound, could put a 2/3 slider.
00:06:198 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Fix the stacking here. Alternatively, change these into full tornado jumps.
01:00:391 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^
00:10:069 (6) - NC here and make it a 2/3 slider like 00:08:133 (1).
00:13:940 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Move/rotate this so that it doesn't collide with 00:13:779 (7). Also, fix stacking/change to tornado as above.
00:15:875 (1,2,3) - I'd stack 1,2 and make a jump to 3 as 3 is definitely the strongest note.
00:26:843 (1) - Move slightly to the left so that it flows smoother from the previous slider.
00:28:456 (5,6,7) - Make 5 less curved and place 6 so that it flows smoothly from 5.
00:35:230 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This pattern looks pretty rigid, consider rotating each line by 5-10 degrees so that it looks more natural.
00:45:875 (3) - Replace with a 1/3 repeating slider to represent the sound at 00:46:037
01:19:746 (2,3) - Blanket
02:45:391 (2,3,4,5,6) - Place 5,6 so that they are parallel with 2,3,4.
02:46:359 (7) - Special slider shape for special sound?
02:53:617 (4) - The anchor points inside this slider do nothing.

[Hard]
It's easier and neater to copy-paste slider shapes instead of hand-placing every slider. If you made slider shapes more consistent, this map would be much improved.
00:08:133 (1,2) - This spacing looks too similar to 2/3 spacing here 00:04:101 (7,8). Change one of them so that it doesn't confuse the player.
00:11:521 (2,3,4,5,1) - These jumps feel random, make the angles between them more organised.
00:17:327 - Unmapped sound here.
00:21:198 (1,2,3,4,5) - Copy paste the slider shape for these, and use ctrl+shift+r to rotate them to the correct angle.
00:29:424 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This combo should be mapped differently from the one before as it's in a buildup in the music.
00:34:746 (3,4) - Make these symmetrical.
01:19:746 - Strong sound here should be represented by a clickable note.
02:46:359 (1,2,3) - Replace this with a repeating slider as it's impossible to tell that it's 1/2 rhythm while playing.

Good luck with your map!

Rus_Brony_osu wrote:

Привет! ~ From my queue

Вообще хочу сначала сказать, что этот скин настолько ужасный, что даже кажется, что моя жизнь наполнена цветными понями и радугой. / Извини, я напишу мод только на инсейн, ибо у меня нет сейчас сил моддить две диффы на 4-ёх минутной карте.

Insane

00:03:133 (3) - Эта нота не нужна здесь, для неё здесь нет такого звука, как для других нот.
00:06:198 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Придумай что-нибудь по разнообразнее +фикс спейсинг
00:13:940 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - ^
00:19:746 (3,1,2,3,4) - Может, лучше поставишь сюда слайдеры вместо нот?
00:22:166 (3,5) - Скопируй третий слайдер и поставь его на место пятого (опусти)
00:24:101 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Флоу выглядит стрёмно. Рекомендую посмотреть видео Пишифата про флоу.
00:28:456 (5,6,7,1,1) - Лучше сделай вот так: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9399883
00:31:198 (7,1) - Извини за мат, но нахуя делать ТАКОЙ спейсинг в спокойном моменте?
00:31:359 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Весь вот этот момент может привести игрока в неловкое положение, ибо это выглядит реально странно: одна нота > передвижение > стак из двух нот > передвижение > одна нота. / Рекомендую сделать стак из трёх нот и потом уже в другом месте ставить ноты.
00:40:875 (7,2) - Наложи семёрку на слайдер под номером 2.
01:00:391 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Вообще не понимаю, зачем нужна такая однообразная параша, если здесь реально можно сделать что-нибудь красивое.
01:01:843 - Перемести этот поинт на первый слайдер, ибо тут ещё киай не начинается. Киай начинается там, где начинается жёсткая часть в музыке.

Что ж, мод написал неполный, ибо дальше карта повторяет те же ошибки, что я написал выше.
Желаю удачи с картой, надеюсь, получишь ранк!

Luel Roseline wrote:

Hi
from my queue.

[General]

Metadata

Official site
Melon

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[Easy]
Play count : 0
DS 0.9? or 1.1?

[Normal]
Play count : 0
* 1/3 short sliders are too many...I think these are probably unrankable.

※ Remap piz. Problems are too many to write here.

bluti wrote:

id love to see this beatmap continued and maybe ranked!

bluti wrote:

make map shorter maybe? the patterns are smooth to play but boring after while all else really nice map, big up

TmacBoris wrote:

bluti wrote:

make map shorter maybe? the patterns are smooth to play but boring after while all else really nice map, big up

Special for you added short version. Insane test

bluti wrote:

i love what youre doing with this