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Kimitakari

Beatmap Nominator

Joined August 2014

Topic Starter

Kimitakari 2017-06-23T15:22:03+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 22 декабря 2018 г. at 22:05:09

Artist: Hanatan
Title: If
Tags: Flower ユリカ YURiCa Yurika 無力P MuryokuP Vocaloid Megurine Luka Celektus
BPM: 208
Filesize: 9421kb
Play Time: 04:55
Difficulties Available:

Freedom (5,94 stars, 1033 notes)
Rain (4,59 stars, 939 notes)

Download: Hanatan - If
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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I feel this pain, it hurts me so
But even then, I want to live
On tranquil nights I can't seem to sleep peacefully
An endless count of short-lived "ifs" were cutting through the sound of the
Machine that graphed the beat of my heart

Being born here, waking up now, I sleep again and after that
What could there be waiting at the end, I wonder?
I see these dreams of countless "ifs" fading away to pieces as
The endless night goes on in gentle darkness

No way out, I waited for my last breath
Waiting for the red rays of morning to come
I'm waiting for the red rays of mor-

Rain: Nelly

Freedom: NellyHitsounds: Celektus
Timing: pimp
Music file: Flezlin
Background: ￦ANKE

Thank you for all the people who modded my map and believed me for more than a year ago! Credit goes to -Sh1n1-, Celektus, Kyuare, BoberOfDarkness, FastYoshi, Hareimu, Myle, wonjae, RoseusJaeger, Ponchiwi, Fii, Ascendance, AJamez, WildOne94, Razor Sharp, -Hex-, -Luminate, Minato Yukina, Sinnoh and Daletto for finding a better background.
Special thanks to Minato Yukina, Spectator and Xetopia for their motivation. This wouldn't be ranked without those people and thank you all for playing this map!

Last edited by Kimitakari 2019-05-30T14:01:36+00:00, edited 121 times in total.

Daletto

Beatmap Nominator

162 posts

Joined December 2015

Daletto 2017-06-26T14:59:50+00:00

sweet

-Sh1n1-

3,402 posts

Joined September 2012

-Sh1n1- 2017-06-26T16:35:24+00:00

Placeholder :3

General

Artist: 花たん
Tags: Flower ユリカ YURiCa Yurika 無力P MuryokuP Vocaloid Megurine Luka
why is "enable countdown" checked?

Try with these combo colours:

[Colours]
Combo1 : 198,203,165
Combo2 : 160,160,160
Combo3 : 230,190,155

Adjust the resolution of your BG please, try with this one:
Click me!
Hitsounds when? well... I'm lazy with HS on my map too, so I won't say nothing hahaha

Freedom

00:20:069 (1,2) - doesn't deserve hyperdash, feels forced cause there isn't prominent instruments and using hyperdash only because vocal is not a good option tbh.
00:51:223 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - overmapped 100%
There is a drum sound at 00:55:189 - too, why are u skipping it?
02:13:471 (2) - remove this note, I know what are u trying to follow, but if you didn't follow previously, why here? be constant, this is considerated as inconsistency.
02:14:011 - add a note, feels empty
from 02:32:473 - to 02:32:761 - everything should be snapped on 1/6, listen on 25% of velocity pls
02:52:377 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - I'm starting to feel this overmapped too cause u are overusing it troughout the whole diff, ask for more opinions on it please.
02:53:819 (3,1) - you miss a hyperdash here, consistency with 02:46:896 (3,1) -
02:58:435 (1,2) - I know what are you trying to follow, I can hear the strong sound on 02:58:579 - too, but for readability and for consistency with other patterns, I strongly recommend you to remove such hyperdash and place it between 02:58:362 (9,1) -, sometimes we wanna follow every strong sound of the song with jumps or hyperdashes but transition between sections are important too, I'll sugges you to test play 02:57:858 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2) - and then test play 02:59:589 (3,4,5,6,1) - and you will found wich feels more natural at playing.
02:58:579 (2,3) - are u sure isn't it overdone? try to reduce the distance a little bit pls.
03:17:281 (1) - I know that lot of people are complaining about the missing break after this note, right? That's why I wanna suggest you something that could help on this part, for example, change 03:17:281 (1) - into slider, from 03:17:281 - to 03:20:502 -, but try to lower the volume until 5 okie? add a green line on 03:18:086 - with 40% of volume, 03:18:891 - 20%, 03:19:697 - 10% and finally 5% at 03:20:502 -, as I told you before, this is up to you, if not, make a full set :p
03:22:183 (1,1) - avoid hyperdash on this section to be constant with the rest, it will be more appropiate.
from 03:22:861 - re-snap every note manually, cause some of then like 03:24:693 (1) - are off around -4, try to do it with every note, just to make sure.
03:26:224 (5,1) - this kind of transition deserve a little bit more of distance imo, not a jump, just something noticeable, for example only at 03:22:861 - 03:24:697 - 03:26:534 - etc.
03:29:591 (2,3,1) - this is another example of what I tried to say on the previous point, 03:29:595 - and 03:29:901 - are not enough strong as 03:30:207 - but they have already the same distance, is not fair imo.
03:31:428 (2,1) - another example and I will stop here cause it will be too repetitive, check it by yourself.
03:50:008 (9) - too straight, the current transition is an easy way to miss a dropled, remove the timing point and make it horizontal.
04:01:690 (2,3) - this jump is unnecessary, instead of 04:01:690 (2,3) - I prefer to enphasize the prominent piano sound at between 04:00:680 (1,2) -, so try pressing ctrl+g at 04:01:835 (3,4) - and adding a hyperdash between 04:00:680 (1,2) -
04:03:276 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I'll be very honest, these streams doesn't fit the song propertly and looks overmapped, I will suggest you to make 04:03:276 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - in 1/2 and maybe you could add a stream from 04:03:854 - to 04:04:070 - cause it could work as a prelude of a new section, so it won't be very noticeable as the previous ones are.
04:21:161 (5) - why it isn't 1/4? ;thinking;
04:22:604 (4,5) - am I deaf or such slider sounds like 1/4? I'm talking about it cause here and places like 04:24:263 - were drums are more prominent you are skipping, and when there aren't drums you are overmapping, for example at 04:27:508 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) -
04:28:805 (2,3,4,5) - same as above, I can hear something in 1/4 and I'm not drunk.
the sound of 04:43:085 - is strong enough to deserve a note? you slider ( 04:43:085 (1) - ) should start at 04:42:219 - and finish at 04:52:604 - cause piano start at 04:52:892 - and deserve a little bit of movement at least.
if you followed the sounds of 04:53:181 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - you should continue until the end, sound like 04:54:623 - 04:54:912 - 04:55:200 - 04:55:633 - and 04:55:777 - deserve a note imo, and your spin should start at 04:55:921 - or 04:56:065 - (up to you).

I like the map, pointed out some general things and hope to help you. Best of lucks bro. Star <3

Kimitakari

Beatmap Nominator

1,533 posts

Joined August 2014

Topic Starter

Kimitakari 2017-06-26T17:34:16+00:00

-Sh1n1- wrote:
Hitsounds when? well... I'm lazy with HS on my map too, so I won't say nothing hahaha

Soon (tm)

Celektus

694 posts

Joined April 2014

Celektus 2017-06-29T17:56:10+00:00

From Celektus' Hitsounding Queue

Here is the Code for the top diffs Hitsounds. In case you made some changes or want to add new diffs use this Tool to copy all the Hitsounds to other diffs. In case the Hitsound copier doesn't do it's job correctly and some sections sound not the same pm me so I can send all the diffs fixed by themselves. I'll do a mob below so don't give this post kudos

Code

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 229936
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 2
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 200502,282219,292604
DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 32
TimelineZoom: 2.4

[Metadata]
Title:If
TitleUnicode:If
Artist:Hanatan
ArtistUnicode:花たん
Creator:Nelly
Version:Freedom
Source:
Tags:Flower ユリカ YURiCa Yurika 無力P MuryokuP Vocaloid Megurine Luka
BeatmapID:1331578
BeatmapSetID:630801

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:9.4
ApproachRate:9.4
SliderMultiplier:1.8
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"bg.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Combo2 : 160,160,160
Combo3 : 230,190,155

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104,208,91463,1,2,0:3:0:0:
144,184,91536,1,2,0:3:0:0:
368,64,91608,2,0,L|448:64,1,76.5000014591217,2|0,3:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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464,160,93627,6,0,P|480:208|400:256,1,153.000002918243,6|2,1:2|0:3,0:0:0:0:
288,256,94060,2,2,L|176:144,1,153.000002918243,2|2,1:3|1:3,1:3:0:0:
288,96,94492,2,0,L|368:96,1,76.5000014591217,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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104,176,94925,1,2,0:3:0:0:
144,199,94997,1,2,0:3:0:0:
368,320,95069,2,0,L|448:320,1,76.5000014591217,2|0,3:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,320,95358,6,0,L|80:320,2,76.5000014591217,2|0|0,1:1|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,320,95790,2,0,L|352:320,2,76.5000014591217,2|0|0,3:1|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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352,48,97088,6,0,P|384:80|304:128,1,153.000002918243,2|2,1:2|0:3,0:0:0:0:
208,128,97521,2,2,P|176:160|256:208,1,153.000002918243,2|2,1:3|1:3,1:3:0:0:
352,224,97954,2,0,L|432:224,1,76.5000014591217,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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120,256,98314,1,2,0:3:0:0:
104,208,98386,1,2,0:3:0:0:
144,184,98459,1,2,0:3:0:0:
368,64,98531,2,0,L|448:64,1,76.5000014591217,2|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,48,98819,6,0,P|144:80|208:160,1,153.000002918243,0|2,1:2|0:3,0:0:0:0:
320,144,99252,2,2,P|336:176|272:256,1,153.000002918243,2|2,1:3|1:3,1:3:0:0:
160,272,99685,2,0,L|240:272,1,76.5000014591217,12|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,336,99973,2,0,L|112:256,1,76.5000014591217,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,160,100261,2,0,L|240:160,1,76.5000014591217,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,320,100550,5,6,0:1:0:0:
160,336,101704,2,0,P|128:272|160:192,1,153.000002918243,0|0,3:0|3:0,3:0:0:0:
368,96,102281,5,6,3:1:0:0:
112,96,102425,2,8,P|64:112|112:176,1,153.000002918243,8|8,0:1|0:1,0:1:0:0:
320,176,102858,2,8,L|240:176,1,76.5000014591217,8|8,3:1|0:1,0:1:0:0:
448,128,103146,5,4,3:3:0:0:
464,161,103218,1,8,0:3:0:0:
448,208,103290,1,8,0:3:0:0:
400,224,103362,1,8,0:3:0:0:
168,192,103435,1,4,0:3:0:0:
152,225,103507,1,8,0:3:0:0:
168,272,103579,1,8,0:3:0:0:
216,288,103651,1,8,0:3:0:0:
416,352,103723,2,0,P|464:320|464:256,1,114.750002188683,2|0,3:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,303,104011,6,0,P|129:256|208:224,1,153.000002918243,6|0,3:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,256,104444,2,0,L|208:368,1,153.000002918243,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,240,104877,2,0,L|448:160,1,76.5000014591217,10|0,3:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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448,304,105742,6,0,P|464:256|384:224,1,153.000002918243,6|0,3:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,256,106175,2,0,L|384:368,1,153.000002918243,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,240,106608,2,0,L|160:160,1,76.5000014591217,10|0,3:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,144,106896,2,0,L|288:64,1,76.5000014591217
80,32,107185,2,0,L|0:32,1,76.5000014591217,10|0,3:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,319,107473,6,0,P|352:287|272:240,1,153.000002918243,6|0,3:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,223,107906,2,0,P|144:192|224:144,1,153.000002918243,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,159,108338,2,0,L|424:80,1,76.5000014591217,10|0,3:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,48,108627,2,0,L|232:48,1,76.5000014591217
464,48,108915,2,0,L|480:128,1,76.5000014591217,10|0,3:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,240,109204,6,0,P|152:199|208:160,1,153.000002918243,6|0,3:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,160,109636,2,0,P|376:120|320:80,1,153.000002918243,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,80,110069,2,0,L|192:80,1,76.5000014591217,10|0,3:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,80,110358,2,0,L|64:160,1,76.5000014591217,8|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,240,110646,2,8,L|208:240,1,76.5000014591217,8|8,3:3|0:3,0:3:0:0:
448,335,110935,6,0,P|464:288|368:256,1,153.000002918243,6|0,3:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,240,111367,2,0,L|384:128,1,153.000002918243,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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192,80,112088,2,0,L|272:80,1,76.5000014591217,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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320,319,112665,6,0,P|352:287|272:240,1,153.000002918243,6|0,3:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,223,113098,2,0,P|144:192|224:144,1,153.000002918243,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,48,113531,2,0,L|432:128,1,76.5000014591217,10|0,3:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,128,113819,2,0,L|304:208,1,76.5000014591217
512,272,114108,2,0,L|432:272,1,76.5000014591217,10|0,3:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,224,114396,6,2,L|144:224,2,76.5000014591217,6|2|2,3:2|0:2|0:2,0:2:0:0:
192,223,114829,2,2,L|272:224,2,76.5000014591217,2|2|2,0:2|3:2|0:2,0:2:0:0:
448,304,115261,5,10,3:1:0:0:
464,207,115406,1,2,0:2:0:0:
256,160,115550,2,0,L|336:160,1,76.5000014591217,2|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,96,115838,2,0,L|160:96,1,76.5000014591217,10|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,96,116127,5,12,0:1:0:0:
240,64,116271,2,0,P|192:80|240:144,1,153.000002918243,0|12,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
464,224,116704,2,8,L|384:224,1,76.5000014591217,12|8,0:1|0:1,0:1:0:0:
80,256,116992,5,10,0:1:0:0:
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80,176,117136,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,160,117209,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,192,117281,1,10,0:1:0:0:
360,159,117353,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,112,117425,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,96,117497,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,32,117569,2,0,P|48:64|48:128,1,114.750002188683,8|0,3:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,336,117858,6,0,P|448:288|368:240,1,153.000002918243,6|0,3:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,128,118290,2,0,L|160:240,1,153.000002918243,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,304,118723,2,0,L|448:223,1,76.5000014591217,10|0,3:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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32,96,119588,6,0,L|16:256,1,153.000002918243,6|0,3:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,272,120021,2,0,P|184:232|128:192,1,153.000002918243,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,128,120454,2,0,L|432:128,1,76.5000014591217,10|0,3:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,64,120742,2,0,L|240:64,1,76.5000014591217
480,208,121031,2,0,L|496:288,1,76.5000014591217,10|0,3:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,320,121319,6,0,P|160:288|240:239,1,153.000002918243,6|0,3:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,223,121752,2,0,P|368:192|288:144,1,153.000002918243,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,128,122185,2,0,L|160:128,1,76.5000014591217,10|0,3:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,128,122473,2,0,L|192:128,1,76.5000014591217
432,48,122761,2,0,L|448:128,1,76.5000014591217,8|0,3:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,320,123050,6,0,L|192:208,1,153.000002918243,6|0,3:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,160,123483,2,0,L|193:48,1,153.000002918243,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,32,123915,2,0,L|416:112,1,76.5000014591217,10|0,3:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,112,124204,2,0,L|288:192,1,76.5000014591217
496,239,124492,2,0,L|416:240,1,76.5000014591217,8|0,3:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,320,124781,6,0,L|176:160,1,153.000002918243,6|0,3:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,160,125213,2,0,L|176:48,1,153.000002918243,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,32,125646,2,0,L|320:32,1,76.5000014591217,10|0,3:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
209,32,125935,2,0,L|288:32,1,76.5000014591217
496,96,126223,2,0,L|416:96,1,76.5000014591217,8|0,3:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,320,126511,6,0,P|160:288|240:239,1,153.000002918243,6|0,3:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,223,126944,2,0,P|368:192|288:144,1,153.000002918243,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,64,127377,2,0,L|64:144,1,76.5000014591217,10|0,3:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,176,127665,2,0,L|256:176,1,76.5000014591217,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,176,127954,2,0,L|384:176,1,76.5000014591217,8|0,3:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,176,128242,6,0,L|32:176,2,90,2|0|0,0:2|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,176,129108,2,0,L|352:272,2,135,2|0|2,0:2|0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
384,192,130838,5,2,0:2:0:0:
192,192,131271,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,160,131415,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,128,131560,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,64,131704,6,0,P|436:112|384:160,1,153.000002918243,2|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,160,132136,2,0,P|220:208|272:256,1,153.000002918243
384,256,132569,1,2,0:2:0:0:
240,320,133435,5,2,0:2:0:0:
352,272,133723,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,272,133867,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,272,134011,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,208,134156,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,32,134300,2,0,P|480:128|384:176,1,225,2|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,352,135165,6,6,P|32:256|144:224,1,229.500004377365,6|6,0:1|0:1,0:1:0:0:
256,224,135742,2,6,L|176:224,1,76.5000014591217,6|6,0:1|0:1,0:1:0:0:
384,224,136031,6,0,P|448:208|448:144,1,135,10|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,128,136319,2,0,P|128:112|128:48,1,135,10|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,32,136608,2,0,L|480:32,1,90,10|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,32,136896,6,0,P|44:80|144:124,1,267.750005106926,6|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,128,137473,2,0,L|336:128,1,76.5000014591217,10|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,208,137761,6,0,P|80:256|128:304,1,135,10|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,256,138050,2,0,P|320:304|272:352,1,135,10|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,352,138338,2,0,L|16:352,1,90,10|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,160,138627,6,0,P|420:208|324:251,1,267.750005106926,6|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,256,139204,2,0,L|128:256,1,76.5000014591217,10|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,256,139492,6,0,P|368:224|321:138,1,135,10|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,176,139781,2,0,P|112:144|160:64,1,135,10|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,64,140069,2,0,L|448:64,1,90,10|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,304,140358,6,0,P|132:192|255:181,1,267.750005106926,6|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,64,140935,2,0,L|64:64,1,76.5000014591217,10|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,64,141223,6,8,L|352:112,1,38.2500007295609,12|8,0:3|0:3,0:3:0:0:
304,112,141367,2,8,L|320:160,1,38.2500007295609,8|8,0:3|0:3,0:3:0:0:
272,144,141511,2,8,L|288:192,1,38.2500007295609,12|8,0:3|0:3,0:3:0:0:
240,176,141656,2,8,L|256:224,1,38.2500007295609,8|8,0:3|0:3,0:3:0:0:
416,192,141800,1,10,0:2:0:0:
453,191,141872,1,10,0:2:0:0:
472,222,141944,1,10,0:2:0:0:
456,255,142016,1,10,0:2:0:0:
144,304,142088,6,0,L|64:304,2,76.5000014591217,6|0|0,0:1|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,304,142521,2,0,L|176:304,2,76.5000014591217,2|0|0,0:1|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,112,142954,6,0,L|32:192,1,76.5000014591217,10|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,192,143242,2,0,L|64:192,1,76.5000014591217,10|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,192,143531,2,0,L|448:192,1,76.5000014591217,10|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,64,143819,5,6,0:1:0:0:
80,64,143963,2,0,P|32:80|80:144,1,153.000002918243,4|2,0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
288,144,144396,2,0,L|208:144,1,76.5000014591217,8|2,0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
432,48,144685,5,2,0:1:0:0:
456,80,144757,1,8,0:3:0:0:
432,112,144829,1,8,0:3:0:0:
392,120,144901,1,8,0:3:0:0:
208,144,144973,1,8,0:3:0:0:
184,176,145045,1,8,0:3:0:0:
208,208,145117,1,8,0:3:0:0:
248,216,145189,1,8,0:3:0:0:
416,224,145261,2,0,L|496:224,1,76.5000014591217,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,352,145550,6,0,P|128:336|128:272,1,114.750002188683,6|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,128,145838,2,0,L|400:128,1,76.5000014591217,2|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,146127,2,2,L|64:192,2,51.0000009727478,2|2|2,0:1|0:1|0:1,0:1:0:0:
320,224,146415,2,0,L|400:224,1,76.5000014591217,10|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,64,146704,5,6,3:2:0:0:
96,112,146800,1,0,3:2:0:0:
64,192,146896,1,0,3:2:0:0:
352,64,146992,1,10,3:1:0:0:
416,112,147088,1,0,3:2:0:0:
448,192,147185,1,0,3:2:0:0:
176,288,147281,5,6,3:1:0:0:
128,288,147377,1,0,3:2:0:0:
176,288,147473,1,0,3:2:0:0:
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384,288,147665,1,0,3:2:0:0:
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400,304,155790,1,0,0:2:0:0:
96,304,155935,6,0,P|48:288|96:224,1,153.000002918243,6|2,0:2|0:3,0:0:0:0:
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111,207,158170,1,8,0:3:0:0:
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128,80,158531,6,0,P|96:112|176:176,1,153.000002918243,6|2,3:1|0:3,0:0:0:0:
256,192,158963,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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416,160,159829,1,2,0:1:0:0:
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192,48,161127,5,2,0:1:0:0:
80,48,161271,2,0,P|32:64|80:128,1,153.000002918243,4|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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160,320,162713,1,8,0:2:0:0:
112,320,162786,1,8,0:2:0:0:
448,192,162858,5,14,2:2:0:0:
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224,192,164011,1,0,2:0:0:0:
96,192,164300,1,0,2:0:0:0:
464,32,164588,6,0,P|448:96|316:160,1,220,2|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,112,166319,5,6,0:1:0:0:
320,48,166463,2,12,P|368:64|320:128,1,153.000002918243,12|12,0:1|0:1,0:1:0:0:
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240,80,167329,1,8,0:3:0:0:
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192,48,168194,2,12,P|144:64|192:128,1,153.000002918243,12|12,0:1|0:1,0:1:0:0:
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432,48,169492,2,0,P|448:96|400:128,1,114.750002188683,2|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,64,169781,5,6,0:1:0:0:
80,176,169925,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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320,192,170502,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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429,281,171007,1,8,0:3:0:0:
453,241,171079,1,4,0:3:0:0:
435,199,171151,1,8,0:3:0:0:
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416,80,171511,5,2,0:1:0:0:
192,48,171656,2,0,P|144:64|192:128,1,153.000002918243,4|2,0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
432,192,172088,2,8,L|352:192,1,76.5000014591217,8|8,0:1|0:1,0:1:0:0:
128,192,172377,5,6,0:2:0:0:
240,192,172521,1,8,0:1:0:0:
32,192,172665,1,8,0:1:0:0:
144,192,172810,1,8,0:1:0:0:
384,336,172954,1,8,0:1:0:0:
429,329,173026,1,8,0:3:0:0:
453,289,173098,1,8,0:1:0:0:
435,247,173170,1,8,0:3:0:0:
168,144,173242,5,6,0:1:0:0:
56,144,173386,2,10,P|8:160|56:224,1,153.000002918243,10|10,0:1|0:1,0:1:0:0:
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344,80,174180,1,4,0:3:0:0:
296,80,174252,1,8,0:1:0:0:
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456,192,174468,1,4,0:3:0:0:
408,192,174540,1,8,0:1:0:0:
96,160,174685,2,12,L|176:160,1,76.5000014591217,12|8,0:2|0:2,0:2:0:0:
448,288,174973,5,6,0:1:0:0:
176,304,175117,2,10,P|127:259|183:222,1,153.000002918243,10|10,0:1|0:1,0:1:0:0:
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128,208,176271,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,112,176415,2,0,L|384:240,1,114.750002188683,10|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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429,217,177930,1,8,0:3:0:0:
453,177,178002,1,2,0:1:0:0:
435,135,178074,1,8,0:3:0:0:
144,176,178146,1,2,0:1:0:0:
99,169,178218,1,8,0:3:0:0:
75,129,178290,1,8,0:3:0:0:
93,87,178362,1,8,0:3:0:0:
288,48,178435,5,10,0:1:0:0:
400,48,178579,2,0,P|448:64|400:128,1,153.000002918243,6|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,128,179011,1,6,0:1:0:0:
496,128,179156,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,288,179300,6,0,L|160:240,1,38.2500007295609,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,288,179444,2,0,L|352:240,1,38.2500007295609,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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352,208,179733,2,0,L|384:160,1,38.2500007295609,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
135,212,179877,2,0,L|96:152,1,38.2500007295609,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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128,304,180165,6,0,L|48:304,2,76.5000014591217,6|8|0,0:1|0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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384,224,181319,1,12,0:3:0:0:
429,217,181391,1,8,0:3:0:0:
453,177,181463,1,8,0:3:0:0:
435,135,181536,1,8,0:3:0:0:
208,176,181608,1,12,0:3:0:0:
163,169,181680,1,8,0:3:0:0:
139,129,181752,1,8,0:3:0:0:
157,87,181824,1,8,0:3:0:0:
400,32,181896,6,0,L|416:80,3,38.2500007295609,2|0|0|0,0:1|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
170,256,182185,2,0,L|154:304,3,38.2500007295609
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464,176,182617,2,0,L|480:128,1,38.2500007295609,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,288,182761,6,0,L|160:240,1,38.2500007295609,14|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,288,182906,2,0,L|352:240,1,38.2500007295609,12|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,208,183050,2,0,L|112:176,1,38.2500007295609,12|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,208,183194,2,0,L|400:176,1,38.2500007295609,12|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,176,183338,1,8,0:2:0:0:
80,176,183411,1,8,0:2:0:0:
416,176,183483,1,8,0:2:0:0:
464,176,183555,1,8,0:2:0:0:
48,48,183623,5,4,0:1:0:0:
160,128,184723,1,2,0:2:0:0:
256,256,185942,5,0,0:0:0:0:
288,128,186587,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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288,160,187591,1,2,0:2:0:0:
320,192,187954,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,224,188318,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,240,188616,5,2,0:2:0:0:
352,320,188957,2,0,L|368:128,1,180,2|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,64,189979,2,0,P|208:80|256:312,1,360,2|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,272,191002,1,2,0:2:0:0:
288,272,191172,1,2,0:2:0:0:
192,272,191343,5,2,0:2:0:0:
320,272,191770,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,272,192181,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,272,192695,1,2,0:2:0:0:
384,224,192886,1,2,0:2:0:0:
144,272,193604,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,272,195086,5,2,0:2:0:0:
112,272,197281,6,0,P|68:208|112:144,1,160,6|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,80,202183,6,0,P|464:112|352:256,1,270,2|0,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,256,202861,6,0,L|320:192,1,90,2|0,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,192,203320,2,0,L|368:128,1,90,2|0,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,112,203779,1,2,3:2:0:0:
160,48,204085,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,112,204391,1,2,3:2:0:0:
160,144,204697,6,0,L|176:240,1,90,2|0,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,240,205156,2,0,L|256:336,1,90,2|0,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,336,205616,1,2,3:2:0:0:
256,272,205922,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,336,206228,1,0,3:0:0:0:
256,336,206534,6,0,L|208:256,1,90,2|0,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,256,206993,2,0,L|352:176,1,90,2|0,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,96,207452,2,0,L|160:96,2,90,2|0|2,3:2|0:0|3:2,0:0:0:0:
336,96,208371,6,0,L|432:192,2,135,2|0|2,3:2|3:0|3:2,3:0:0:0:
208,96,209595,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,96,209901,1,2,3:2:0:0:
208,96,210207,6,0,L|112:192,2,135,2|0|2,3:2|3:0|3:2,3:0:0:0:
80,96,211432,2,0,L|176:96,1,90,0|2,3:0|3:2,0:0:0:0:
301,96,212044,6,0,L|397:192,2,135,2|0|2,3:2|3:0|3:2,3:0:0:0:
160,96,213269,2,0,L|256:96,1,90,2|0,3:2|3:0,3:0:0:0:
384,96,213881,6,0,L|400:192,1,90,2|0,3:2|2:0,2:0:0:0:
336,208,214340,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,240,214493,1,0,3:0:0:0:
400,240,214799,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,240,215105,2,0,L|256:144,1,90,2|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,144,215718,5,2,0:2:0:0:
256,144,216024,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,144,216330,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,144,216636,1,2,0:2:0:0:
384,144,216942,2,0,L|288:144,1,90,0|2,0:0|3:2,0:0:0:0:
160,144,217554,6,0,L|224:80,1,90,2|0,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,80,218014,2,0,L|272:16,1,90,2|0,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,16,218473,1,2,3:2:0:0:
256,80,218779,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,16,219391,6,0,L|272:112,1,90,2|0,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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80,96,228566,5,6,0:2:0:0:
368,96,228710,2,0,P|416:112|368:176,1,153.000002918243,8|0,0:1|1:0,0:0:0:0:
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376,166,229575,1,8,0:3:0:0:
347,189,229647,1,8,0:3:0:0:
144,96,229719,1,12,0:3:0:0:
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166,189,229936,1,8,0:3:0:0:
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192,128,240104,2,0,L|208:208,1,76.5000014591217
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320,223,241114,2,0,L|240:224,2,76.5000014591217,2|0|0,0:1|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,304,241546,5,10,0:1:0:0:
32,207,241690,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,160,241835,1,2,0:1:0:0:
256,160,241979,1,0,0:0:0:0:
496,208,242123,1,10,0:1:0:0:
368,208,242267,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,64,242412,5,14,0:1:0:0:
336,64,242556,2,0,P|384:80|336:144,1,153.000002918243,0|4,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
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272,224,243421,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,160,243565,1,14,0:2:0:0:
192,128,243710,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,32,243854,2,0,P|464:64|464:128,1,114.750002188683,0|0,3:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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80,304,245008,2,0,L|64:223,1,76.5000014591217,10|0,3:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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480,96,245873,6,0,L|496:256,1,153.000002918243,6|0,3:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,272,246306,2,0,P|88:232|144:192,1,153.000002918243,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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224,320,247604,6,0,P|192:288|272:239,1,153.000002918243,6|0,3:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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48,320,249767,2,0,L|160:208,1,153.000002918243,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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112,32,251931,2,0,L|192:32,1,76.5000014591217,10|0,3:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
303,32,252219,2,0,L|224:32,1,76.5000014591217
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432,320,252796,6,0,P|464:288|384:239,1,153.000002918243,14|0,3:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,223,253229,2,0,P|144:192|224:144,1,153.000002918243,6|0,3:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,48,253662,6,8,L|480:96,3,49.5000015106202,12|8|8|8,3:3|0:3|0:3|0:3,0:3:0:0:
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144,303,254527,6,0,P|129:256|208:224,1,153.000002918243,6|0,1:2|3:0,0:0:0:0:
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64,304,256258,6,0,P|48:256|128:224,1,153.000002918243,6|0,3:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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312,48,259142,2,2,L|232:48,1,76.5000014591217,2|2,0:2|0:2,0:2:0:0:
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320,224,260152,2,0,P|376:264|320:304,1,153.000002918243,4|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,304,260585,2,8,L|64:304,2,38.2500007295609,12|8|8,0:3|0:3|0:3,0:3:0:0:
400,304,260873,2,8,L|448:304,2,38.2500007295609,12|8|8,0:3|0:3|0:3,0:3:0:0:
96,128,261162,1,8,3:2:0:0:
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96,64,261306,1,8,0:2:0:0:
136,48,261378,1,8,0:2:0:0:
416,336,261450,6,0,P|448:288|368:240,1,153.000002918243,6|0,3:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,128,261883,2,0,L|32:240,1,153.000002918243,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,304,262315,2,0,L|448:223,1,76.5000014591217,12|0,3:3|0:3,0:3:0:0:
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400,88,262892,2,0,L|480:88,1,76.5000014591217,4|0,3:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,96,263181,6,0,L|16:256,1,153.000002918243,6|2,3:1|0:3,0:0:0:0:
368,272,263614,2,0,P|424:232|368:192,1,153.000002918243,2|8,0:3|0:1,0:0:0:0:
160,128,264046,6,0,L|80:128,1,76.5000014591217,8|0,3:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,72,264263,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,48,264335,2,0,L|392:48,1,76.5000014591217,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,208,264623,2,0,L|16:288,1,76.5000014591217,10|0,3:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,320,264912,6,0,P|320:288|240:239,1,153.000002918243,6|2,3:1|0:3,0:0:0:0:
464,176,265344,2,0,P|496:145|416:97,1,153.000002918243,2|0,3:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,128,265777,2,2,L|208:128,1,76.5000014591217,10|2,0:1|0:2,0:2:0:0:
320,128,266065,2,2,L|240:128,1,76.5000014591217,2|2,0:2|0:2,0:2:0:0:
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80,320,266642,6,0,L|192:208,1,153.000002918243,6|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,320,267075,2,0,L|352:208,1,153.000002918243,4|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,112,267508,1,12,0:3:0:0:
64,161,267580,1,8,0:3:0:0:
80,208,267652,1,8,0:3:0:0:
344,192,267796,1,12,0:3:0:0:
360,225,267868,1,8,0:3:0:0:
344,272,267940,1,8,0:3:0:0:
96,352,268085,2,0,P|48:320|48:256,1,114.750002188683,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,48,268373,6,0,P|448:96|368:144,1,153.000002918243,6|0,3:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,256,268806,2,0,L|176:144,1,153.000002918243,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,80,269239,1,8,3:1:0:0:
468,88,269311,1,8,0:3:0:0:
496,114,269383,1,8,0:3:0:0:
240,176,269527,1,4,0:3:0:0:
204,184,269599,1,8,0:3:0:0:
176,210,269671,1,8,0:3:0:0:
416,320,269815,2,8,L|496:320,1,76.5000014591217,10|8,3:1|0:1,0:1:0:0:
32,288,270104,6,0,L|16:128,1,153.000002918243,6|0,3:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,224,270537,2,0,L|400:64,1,153.000002918243,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,256,270969,2,2,L|80:256,1,76.5000014591217,10|2,3:1|0:2,0:2:0:0:
192,320,271258,2,2,L|272:320,1,76.5000014591217,2|2,0:2|0:2,0:2:0:0:
32,176,271546,2,2,L|16:96,1,76.5000014591217,10|10,0:1|0:1,0:2:0:0:
352,48,271835,6,4,L|368:96,3,38.2500007295609,6|4|4|4,0:3|0:3|0:3|0:3,0:3:0:0:
304,96,272123,2,4,L|320:144,3,38.2500007295609,6|4|4|4,0:3|0:3|0:3|0:3,0:3:0:0:
256,144,272412,1,6,0:3:0:0:
221,156,272484,1,4,0:3:0:0:
206,190,272556,1,4,0:3:0:0:
219,225,272628,1,4,0:3:0:0:
384,224,272700,6,4,L|400:272,3,38.2500007295609,6|4|4|4,0:3|0:3|0:3|0:3,0:3:0:0:
448,240,272989,2,4,L|464:288,3,38.2500007295609,6|4|4|4,3:3|0:3|0:3|0:3,0:3:0:0:
144,144,273277,1,6,0:3:0:0:
109,156,273349,1,4,0:3:0:0:
94,190,273421,1,4,0:3:0:0:
107,225,273493,1,4,0:3:0:0:
352,272,273565,5,6,0:3:0:0:
389,266,273638,1,4,0:3:0:0:
408,235,273710,1,4,0:3:0:0:
394,200,273782,1,4,0:3:0:0:
240,192,273854,2,4,L|224:144,3,38.2500007295609,6|4|4|4,0:3|0:3|0:3|0:3,0:3:0:0:
96,304,274142,5,6,0:3:0:0:
60,298,274215,1,4,0:3:0:0:
41,267,274287,1,4,0:3:0:0:
55,232,274359,1,4,0:3:0:0:
272,192,274431,2,4,L|288:144,3,38.2500007295609,6|4|4|4,0:3|0:3|0:3|0:3,0:3:0:0:
416,208,274719,5,8,0:1:0:0:
453,202,274791,1,8,0:1:0:0:
472,171,274864,1,8,0:1:0:0:
458,136,274936,1,8,0:1:0:0:
80,48,275008,2,0,P|64:96|112:160,1,114.750002188683,4|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,304,275296,6,0,P|448:288|400:224,1,153.000002918243,6|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,224,275729,2,0,L|208:224,1,76.5000014591217,0|8,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
320,224,276017,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,304,276162,6,0,P|64:288|112:224,1,153.000002918243,6|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,224,276594,2,0,L|304:224,1,76.5000014591217
192,224,276883,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,80,277027,6,0,L|320:80,2,76.5000014591217,2|12|8,0:1|0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
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Celektus

694 posts

Joined April 2014

Celektus 2017-06-29T17:56:28+00:00

[Freedom]

your Background should be 1920x1080px as that's the newest standard for Background size.

after you applied my hitsounds re check AImod cause I think your whole map is or was unsnapped so I kinda fixed it on my own behalf. owo

sounds like you mapped this to nothing in the song 00:33:987 (2,3,4,6,7,8) - I'm not a ctb mapper so it might be ok, but it would help if I knew wich Hitsounds to put there if there are sounds I don't really hear
why isn't this a kiai? 00:20:935 - I know there is supposed limit, but that's first off just a guideline and 2nd off it's the same part of the song as the other kiais so you should at least be consistent with it imo
there is a sound here 00:48:266 - maybe do like a jump into the white tick or a slider and add a drum-clap to the added sound on that tick if you add it
I would make this a slider 02:13:867 (3,4) - cause 3 and 4 are different sounds and 4 is weaker
there is a important Snare with a Cymbal here 04:22:027 -
and there is a triple here 04:28:950 - it's a Snare roll so add soft-hitclaps if you map that

Kyuare

228 posts

Joined May 2013

Kyuare 2017-06-29T19:25:38+00:00

m4m

Freedom

00:57:425 (2,3) - I agree that this jump deserve to be a HDash, but you're using too much spacing without justification. I advise you to keep the spacing as 00:57:281 (1,2) - since the sound is similar.
01:03:050 (3,4) - This one deserve to be a HDash
01:09:973 (3,4) - ^
01:13:290 (2,3) - Same thing, but 01:13:723 (3,4,5) - doesn't because we can't hear any strong beat, so I advise you to remove them.
Here is an, example:
Same thing for the next section, 01:16:896 (3,4) - deserve a HDash.
01:18:050 (1,2,3) - Here, 01:18:483 (2,3) - is stronger than 01:18:050 (1,2) - yet you add a HDash for 01:18:483 (2,3) -. I advise you to swap them, put the HDash between (2) and (3).
01:22:377 (1,2,3) - Same thing than 01:13:723 (3,4,5) -
01:36:223 (1,2,3) - You're using too much spacing for the HDash, it overemphasize it because the beat isn't that strong. I advise you to reduce it.
02:16:030 (1,2,3) - Here you're using ~5.80x spacing for each Hypers while you're using ~3.50x for 02:17:761 (1,2,3) - . Try to keep the same spacing for them please, ~3.50x fit better in my opinion.
02:19:491 (1,2,3) - ^
Oh, you can also use different spacing for them since the intensity is increasing. But 02:16:030 (1,2,3) - should have less spacing than 02:17:761 (1,2,3) -.
02:26:704 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,1) - This whole section only have the same simple 1/1 left right movement, I would like to see something more creative and challenging since the timeline is full of 1/3s.
For example you can add antiflows, reverse triangle for 02:27:858 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - and many other patterns.
You can also put a pattern in the middle instead of always using left side and right side.
Here is an example of what you can do:
From 03:22:861 - to 03:47:963 - I advise you to increase the spacing scaling to 3.20x, because we can actually platter walk (catch everything without using dash) the whole section.
For the second kiai, it's very similar to the first one, but we can clearly hear that it's way more intense. I advise you to increase the spacing scaling here too:
03:51:161 (3,4) - You can use 2.0x spacing for 1/2 normal dash
03:52:891 (3,4) - ^
The last kiai is way too repetitive, you already copy paste the 2 first kiai. I advise you to map it without being influenced by the other kiais, it's the ending and it should be different.

click if you want to read my personal opinion

Well, the flow is great, but I don't like the map because you're not really creative: these 3 kiais have been copied, pasted and mirrored. We can't call that consistency because the second kiai is way more intense than the first one, without mentioning the last one.
We see similar pattern everywhere in your map like 01:44:876 (3,4,5) - and 03:54:622 (3,4,5) -
I think symmetry limits you more than anything else, the grid size too.

Kimitakari

Beatmap Nominator

1,533 posts

Joined August 2014

Topic Starter

Kimitakari 2017-06-29T21:27:42+00:00

Celektus wrote:
[Freedom]

your Background should be 1920x1080px as that's the newest standard for Background size. seriously? nice change not gotta lie

after you applied my hitsounds re check AImod cause I think your whole map is or was unsnapped so I kinda fixed it on my own behalf. owo i could make it by myself but thanks (:

sounds like you mapped this to nothing in the song 00:33:987 (2,3,4,6,7,8) - I'm not a ctb mapper so it might be ok, but it would help if I knew wich Hitsounds to put there if there are sounds I don't really hear its okay for ctb especially marathons

why isn't this a kiai? 00:20:935 - I know there is supposed limit, but that's first off just a guideline and 2nd off it's the same part of the song as the other kiais so you should at least be consistent with it imo ok

there is a sound here 00:48:266 - maybe do like a jump into the white tick or a slider and add a drum-clap to the added sound on that tick if you add it ok

I would make this a slider 02:13:867 (3,4) - cause 3 and 4 are different sounds and 4 is weaker i also think it requires so i made a slider

there is a important Snare with a Cymbal here 04:22:027 - ok

and there is a triple here 04:28:950 - it's a Snare roll so add soft-hitclaps if you map that ok

Kyuare wrote:
m4m
Freedom

00:57:425 (2,3) - I agree that this jump deserve to be a HDash, but you're using too much spacing without justification. I advise you to keep the spacing as 00:57:281 (1,2) - since the sound is similar. ok
01:03:050 (3,4) - This one deserve to be a HDash ok
01:09:973 (3,4) - ^ ok
01:13:290 (2,3) - Same thing, but 01:13:723 (3,4,5) - doesn't because we can't hear any strong beat, so I advise you to remove them.
Here is an, example: ok
Same thing for the next section, 01:16:896 (3,4) - deserve a HDash. ok
01:18:050 (1,2,3) - Here, 01:18:483 (2,3) - is stronger than 01:18:050 (1,2) - yet you add a HDash for 01:18:483 (2,3) -. I advise you to swap them, put the HDash between (2) and (3). ok
01:22:377 (1,2,3) - Same thing than 01:13:723 (3,4,5) - ok
01:36:223 (1,2,3) - You're using too much spacing for the HDash, it overemphasize it because the beat isn't that strong. I advise you to reduce it. ok
02:16:030 (1,2,3) - Here you're using ~5.80x spacing for each Hypers while you're using ~3.50x for 02:17:761 (1,2,3) - . Try to keep the same spacing for them please, ~3.50x fit better in my opinion. ok
02:19:491 (1,2,3) - ^ ok
Oh, you can also use different spacing for them since the intensity is increasing. But 02:16:030 (1,2,3) - should have less spacing than 02:17:761 (1,2,3) -. ok
02:26:704 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,1) - This whole section only have the same simple 1/1 left right movement, I would like to see something more creative and challenging since the timeline is full of 1/3s.
For example you can add antiflows, reverse triangle for 02:27:858 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - and many other patterns.
You can also put a pattern in the middle instead of always using left side and right side.
Here is an example of what you can do: i think placing antiflows can ruin the actual flow to this map. when i mapped it i also placed these triangle and i thought that its wrong so i deny making this pattern. this image btw i accepted it
From 03:22:861 - to 03:47:963 - I advise you to increase the spacing scaling to 3.20x, because we can actually platter walk (catch everything without using dash) the whole section. ok
For the second kiai, it's very similar to the first one, but we can clearly hear that it's way more intense. I advise you to increase the spacing scaling here too: its simular to the playability but at least i expressed the ending
03:51:161 (3,4) - You can use 2.0x spacing for 1/2 normal dash
03:52:891 (3,4) - ^
The last kiai is way too repetitive, you already copy paste the 2 first kiai. I advise you to map it without being influenced by the other kiais, it's the ending and it should be different.
click if you want to read my personal opinion
Well, the flow is great, but I don't like the map because you're not really creative: these 3 kiais have been copied, pasted and mirrored. We can't call that consistency because the second kiai is way more intense than the first one, without mentioning the last one.
We see similar pattern everywhere in your map like 01:44:876 (3,4,5) - and 03:54:622 (3,4,5) -
I think symmetry limits you more than anything else, the grid size too. the lack of my own imagination is not that big you know. now i do know my fauls due to the mapping category but lets be honest that its okay to have at least some imagination on expressing the actual song. i tried my best to make a decent map, not the best map. i think ill finish commentating here but i hope you got my point. maybe if ill go on trying to rank this map could effect to my map even more that the actual mapped state

Thanks for modding guys! Big thanks to Celektus for hitsounding my map <3

BoberOfDarkness

1,059 posts

Joined October 2013

BoberOfDarkness 2017-06-30T20:21:55+00:00

your Background should be 1920x1080px as that's the newest standard for Background size

it's maximum size not minimum standards

Modding as requested in my queue and also I am modding as part of the Fruit Modding Union

:!:
Regular suggestion
Unrankable issue

00:00:163 (1) - pointless finish with this set of hitsounds, you could try with customs but standard finish doesn't fit at all (cymbal sound for a piano note?)
00:07:086 (1) - same goes with this one
00:14:012 (1) - actually it should end at 00:14:300 - as guitar ends here and 00:14:444 - calls for hyperdash actually and on there new guitar line starts (patterning like that: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8477772)
00:15:165 (2,3) - I feel that there's should be hyperdash
00:31:031 (5) - it's on screen border you might want to move it to at least x:8
00:33:915 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - feels a bit overmapped
00:34:781 (1,2) - 2nd slider have almost no movement and it makes transition from (1) to (2) flows badly
00:36:944 (2) - strong vocals and drum makes this nice spot for hyperdash
00:48:194 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - ew what is that clap spam?
01:08:531 (1) - while this extended slider might be fine the one at 01:08:819 (2) - is completely wrong mapped. No sound at 01:09:036 -, and strong beat at 01:08:963 -
01:19:925 (2) - I know that's calm part but you could make this hyper'ed
01:35:790 (2,1) - hyperdash since (1) is new stanza and there's very strong sound?
01:43:435 (5,6,7,8) - I guess you could spare those a bit for stronger kiai introduction (like: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8477946)
01:54:108 (5) - again borderline issue
02:21:800 (5,6,7,8) - dive them into 2 doublets
02:24:685 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - spaced them a bit, they should have more movement
02:26:704 - why freezing couldn't use such nice triplets? :>
02:35:646 (3,4,5) - spaced them a bit for stronger
02:38:242 (9,10) - hyperdash would be welcome

02:59:300 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - some small improvement for playability and some aesthetics, instead of writing catch the screenshot and code https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8478006

320,288,179300,6,0,L|352:240,1,38.2500007295609,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,288,179444,2,0,L|160:240,1,38.2500007295609,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,208,179588,2,0,L|384:176,1,38.2500007295609,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,208,179733,2,0,L|128:176,1,38.2500007295609,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,128,179877,2,0,L|424:92,1,38.2500007295609,10|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,128,180021,2,0,L|88:92,1,38.2500007295609,10|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:

03:01:319 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - space more for better flow and more movement
03:02:473 (3,4) - flows awkward
03:02:761 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - whats wrong with that hitsounds?
03:17:281 (1) - another finish from nowhere
03:46:738 (1) - and now whistle from nowhere (soft would be fine but not normal)
04:01:835 (3,4,5,6) - those doesn't sound well
04:28:806 (2,3,4,5) - you exaggerated the spacing here a bit, move 04:29:239 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - to x:144
04:39:623 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - and 04:41:354 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - those triplets are kinda weird to play
04:53:469 (1,2,3,4) - again why such strong hitsounds at calm part?

Generally nice map but chill with hitsounding, mostly they are out of place or it's unpleasant to ears hitsound spam. Standard hitsounds only fits at calm parts only while using soft whistles, other's are clearly overdone (drums on calm part? :thinking).
Good luck!

Kimitakari

Beatmap Nominator

1,533 posts

Joined August 2014

Topic Starter

Kimitakari 2017-06-30T22:13:35+00:00

BoberOfDarkness wrote:
your Background should be 1920x1080px as that's the newest standard for Background size
it's maximum size not minimum standards im on it

Modding as requested in my queue and also I am modding as part of the Fruit Modding Union

:!:
Regular suggestion
Unrankable issue
00:00:163 (1) - pointless finish with this set of hitsounds, you could try with customs but standard finish doesn't fit at all (cymbal sound for a piano note?) ok
00:07:086 (1) - same goes with this one ok
00:14:012 (1) - actually it should end at 00:14:300 - as guitar ends here and 00:14:444 - calls for hyperdash actually and on there new guitar line starts (patterning like that: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8477772) i think it'll be alright if i can just keep this flow
00:15:165 (2,3) - I feel that there's should be hyperdash its already hyperdashed
00:31:031 (5) - it's on screen border you might want to move it to at least x:8 blame me
00:33:915 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - feels a bit overmapped how so?
00:34:781 (1,2) - 2nd slider have almost no movement and it makes transition from (1) to (2) flows badly made a horizontal curve
00:36:944 (2) - strong vocals and drum makes this nice spot for hyperdash ok
00:48:194 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - ew what is that clap spam? denied this
01:08:531 (1) - while this extended slider might be fine the one at 01:08:819 (2) - is completely wrong mapped. No sound at 01:09:036 -, and strong beat at 01:08:963 - ok
01:19:925 (2) - I know that's calm part but you could make this hyper'ed i dont think it'll work out
01:35:790 (2,1) - hyperdash since (1) is new stanza and there's very strong sound? i forgot to make this hyperdashed
01:43:435 (5,6,7,8) - I guess you could spare those a bit for stronger kiai introduction (like: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8477946) i made an edit but not like in the screenshot
01:54:108 (5) - again borderline issue blame me again
02:21:800 (5,6,7,8) - dive them into 2 doublets nah i'll just keep it
02:24:685 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - spaced them a bit, they should have more movement ok
02:26:704 - why freezing couldn't use such nice triplets? :> Kyuare style :^)
02:35:646 (3,4,5) - spaced them a bit for stronger ok
02:38:242 (9,10) - hyperdash would be welcome ok
02:59:300 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - some small improvement for playability and some aesthetics, instead of writing catch the screenshot and code https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8478006 ok
320,288,179300,6,0,L|352:240,1,38.2500007295609,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,288,179444,2,0,L|160:240,1,38.2500007295609,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,208,179588,2,0,L|384:176,1,38.2500007295609,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,208,179733,2,0,L|128:176,1,38.2500007295609,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,128,179877,2,0,L|424:92,1,38.2500007295609,10|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,128,180021,2,0,L|88:92,1,38.2500007295609,10|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
03:01:319 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - space more for better flow and more movement ok
03:02:473 (3,4) - flows awkward not really
03:02:761 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - whats wrong with that hitsounds? fixed by my own
03:17:281 (1) - another finish from nowhere ok
03:46:738 (1) - and now whistle from nowhere (soft would be fine but not normal) ok
04:01:835 (3,4,5,6) - those doesn't sound well for me it is
04:28:806 (2,3,4,5) - you exaggerated the spacing here a bit, move 04:29:239 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - to x:144 firetrucked some spacing
04:39:623 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - and 04:41:354 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - those triplets are kinda weird to play they look alright
04:53:469 (1,2,3,4) - again why such strong hitsounds at calm part? ok
Generally nice map but chill with hitsounding, mostly they are out of place or it's unpleasant to ears hitsound spam. Standard hitsounds only fits at calm parts only while using soft whistles, other's are clearly overdone (drums on calm part? :thinking). these hitsounds werent made by me read the description. of course i fixed them as you said
Good luck!

Thanks for modding!

Unlucky_w

312 posts

Joined August 2014

Unlucky_w 2017-06-30T22:57:08+00:00

Hello hello
From mod.queue

Typical Mod

I checked over and over again, and it's well mapped, no anti-flow lol.

00:00:163 - to 00:13:864 - Imo, 10% volume is more suitable. (Negligible)
00:55:983 (2) - Ctrl+g, to make it similar to this pattern 00:49:060 (4,5,6) - then move it further to make the hdash.
01:13:723 (3) - Needs a hdash here, because of the sound (https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8478839)
01:17:185 (4) - Move to x:256, ^ close to this reason
01:23:819 (3) - Ctrl+G, then move to x:416 to create hdash, ^ only for these sections.
01:34:060 (2) - Move to x:256, because after that dash, it feels like we should be moving a bit more to the left.
01:36:223 (1) - Make Hdash, not enough speed in this part compare to the others. (x:480)
02:38:386 (10) - Too close to (9), move to a bit too the left (one grid off)
03:02:617 (4) - ^
03:55:921 (2) - Move this to x:94, make a HDash, just like the others.(03:53:758 (1,2) - , 03:57:219 (1,2) - ,etc even though it's curved sliders)

Good luck

Kimitakari

Beatmap Nominator

1,533 posts

Joined August 2014

Topic Starter

Kimitakari 2017-06-30T23:07:23+00:00

FastYoshi wrote:
I checked over and over again, and it's well mapped, no anti-flow lol.

00:00:163 - to 00:13:864 - Imo, 10% volume is more suitable. (Negligible) 15% would be alright
00:55:983 (2) - Ctrl+g, to make it similar to this pattern 00:49:060 (4,5,6) - then move it further to make the hdash. ok
01:13:723 (3) - Needs a hdash here, because of the sound (https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8478839) true
01:17:185 (4) - Move to x:256, ^ close to this reason ok
01:23:819 (3) - Ctrl+G, then move to x:416 to create hdash, ^ only for these sections. ok
01:34:060 (2) - Move to x:256, because after that dash, it feels like we should be moving a bit more to the left. ok
01:36:223 (1) - Make Hdash, not enough speed in this part compare to the others. (x:480)
02:38:386 (10) - Too close to (9), move to a bit too the left (one grid off) blame Bober ):
03:02:617 (4) - ^ kinda risky but i moved a slightly left
03:55:921 (2) - Move this to x:94, make a HDash, just like the others.(03:53:758 (1,2) - , 03:57:219 (1,2) - ,etc even though it's curved sliders) ok

Good luck

Thanks in advance!

By the way for those who wonders why I haven't replied to -Sh1n1-'s mod I did replied to it and I fixed most of the stuff what he just said.

Hareimu

611 posts

Joined March 2014

Hareimu 2017-07-02T00:33:43+00:00

wee

[If]

00:00:163 - There are two timing points on this timestamp (a red line and a green line, specifically) that have different volume settings. This is an unrankable issue that you must fix ASAP.

I feel the timing points should all be moved 22 milliseconds ahead of where they currently are right now, since I've been testing and it seems the metronome sounds a bit too early when compared to the song's drums. Please test accordingly to make sure. I made sure every timing point with this edit was snapped accordingly and didn't overlap with anything, but still, if you want to use it instead of the current one you have, create a new difficulty without deleting the notes and pasting this timing onto the .osu:

[TimingPoints]
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00:07:086 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Uh... not to be the one to break it because of copypasting or anything, but this feels rather boring to play the same patterns but inverted horizontally. Maybe a bit more variation over the slidershapes and placements on the notes could be better to spruce up the beginning?
00:20:646 (2) - Maybe make it a hyperdash from the previous slider to this one to emphasize the first appearance of the vocal line? x:156 seems nice enough to me :>
00:40:838 (3,4,5) - I feel like I've played this pattern before at some other section in this kiai, but that may just be me. Anyway, to emphasize the strong drum sound at 00:41:127 (4) - you could add a hyperdash from the previous slider to this one.
00:52:954 (1,2,3,4,5) - This section has the same pattern (literal copypaste) as 00:46:031 (1,2,3,4,5) - , I suggest rearranging the placements and shapes of 00:52:954 (1,2,3,4,5) - . Also, why do 00:45:165 (1,2) - these have an hyperdash in between but 00:52:088 (1,2) - these ones don't? For consistency, I suggest either removing the hyperdash from the first one or adding one to the second.
01:32:761 (3,4) - Maybe move these to x:64 to emphasize the strong drum sound (and also the raised vocal) at (3)? (I'm not sure whether having 01:33:050 (4) - so close to the border of the playfield is a good thing for flow or not, but eh, you decide :^))
01:41:704 (2) - I'm not really sure if this slider correctly snaps to the vocal line (I think it doesn't, you should check how to make it so that the sounds of the sliderhead/tail don't sound earlier than the voice of Hanatan), but even taking that aside I think you should curve it some more to emphasize the strength of it (if you're not gonna decide and use hyperdashes instead, that is)
01:44:011 (1,2) - The whole second kiai (01:44:011 - to 02:08:242 - ) feels like it's the exact same as the first one. Did you copypaste it or something? Not to be rude, but it seems like you felt lazy to map it any differently (or to map it at all, who knows) and you just went for copypaste and called it a day.
tl;dr: I think you should probably play around with placements and stuff to make it feel unique and not just the same all over again, IMO.
02:11:271 (2,3) - These two notes are badly snapped to the piano sounds. Try snapping them to these 1/8 ticks instead: image
02:12:425 - There is no sound here so to finish 02:12:136 (2) - this slider here, I think you should finish it 02:12:281 - here instead.
02:13:867 (3) - 02:14:300 (4) - I think these sliders have a weird shape when being played, the problem could be caused by using 0,5x SV multiplier instead of just sticking to the one you used until now, IMO. Just a thought.
02:14:300 (4) - Why does this slider finish on a red tick where no sound is heard instead of just finishing it 02:14:877 - here, where an actual piano note can be clearly heard?
02:23:242 (2) - I suggest moving this slider to x:268 and 02:23:531 (3) - to x:120 to emphasize 02:22:954 (1,2,3) - all these equally (they all have the same strong drum sounds on the sliderheads)
02:25:550 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1) - whelp... such a long selection of notes, but it's for a good reason. When playing them, the movement I'm doing with the catcher is the same monotonous left-right-left-right-left-right movement all over and over and over until 02:33:915 - here, when for some reason the movement changes to being a flow-breaking movement that even though considering the piano pitch at 02:33:915 (2) - this slider is higher than all the others until now, it still doesn't justify the boring left-right constant movement of the previous mentioned notes.
tl;dr: Same boring left-right movement for 10 seconds straight, consider sprucing up the shapes so that the movement has some more variety than just that. For example, some left-left-right-right movement on some of the patterns would work great.
02:31:896 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - These notes are snapped to practically nothing, since the 1/3 piano sounds stop 02:31:896 - here and turn into simple 1/2 drum-and-piano sounds. I suggest changing them to either 4 notes snapped to 1/2 ticks, or to 2 sliders that do the same (also some antiflowing movement would work wonders here to emphasize the strength of the drums and the highly-pitched piano.
02:35:718 (4) - This note is placed over nothing (no sound is heard here), it should instead be placed 02:35:862 - here, since a piano sound is audible here instead.
03:11:020 (4,5) - These two notes should be moved one 1/8 tick before to properly snap to the piano sounds.
03:22:202 - from here to 03:47:982 - here, I highly suggest lowering the hitsounds' volume to 15% or so, since the piano notes and Hanatan's voice are waaaay lower than the volume you're using, and I think the hitsounds' volume is overemphasizing everything.
03:50:315 - to 04:01:565 - here aaaa, if you didn't modify anything like you did with 04:01:565 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - these, all kiais would play exactly the same way. That's just plain boring. First time I played this map I didn't think the copypasting thing was this much of a problem since I didn't really pay attention to how it was mapped in all aspects and just went around and played it whole, but now that I'm noticing it it just feels lame.
04:14:546 - to 04:20:604 - here same as before, it's still the same patterns all over again until you added those triplets.

Personal Thoughts: I personally really enjoyed playing through it the first time and thought of it as a nice map of yours and everything, and it still is even after this mod, but I think it really needs some polishing before pushing for approval.
First of all, please remap the second and third/four (if you count the quick fountain trigger at 04:14:546 - here as another kiai) kiais so that they actually have some individuality and don't feel like they're the same thing over and over again. That's the biggest issue I'm having with this map ATM.
Secondly, the timestamp I made with all the large amount of selected objects (new record hu3) needs some polishing as well so that it doesn't feel as repetitive to playthrough and feels more intuitive instead.
Also, I'd highly reccomend to ask either Deif, JBH or somebody who knows to check timing, since even though the current timing you had is accurate enough, I think it'd do wonders with some tuning up (I still am not sure if the one I gave you above will do for the moment being).

After that's settled up, I think the map'll do just fine. Go ask for some more mods as well.

Good luck!

Kimitakari

Beatmap Nominator

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Joined August 2014

Topic Starter

Kimitakari 2017-07-07T10:23:35+00:00

Hareimu wrote:

wee

[If]
02:25:550 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1) - whelp... such a long selection of notes, but it's for a good reason. When playing them, the movement I'm doing with the catcher is the same monotonous left-right-left-right-left-right movement all over and over and over until 02:33:915 - here, when for some reason the movement changes to being a flow-breaking movement that even though considering the piano pitch at 02:33:915 (2) - this slider is higher than all the others until now, it still doesn't justify the boring left-right constant movement of the previous mentioned notes.
tl;dr: Same boring left-right movement for 10 seconds straight, consider sprucing up the shapes so that the movement has some more variety than just that. For example, some left-left-right-right movement on some of the patterns would work great. then how can i map in another way? personally placing antiflows can ruin the actual flow of my map so i ignored it. i accepted your tl;dr because i didnt really thinked about it at all while making it
03:11:020 (4,5) - These two notes should be moved one 1/8 tick before to properly snap to the piano sounds. i don't think they should
Personal Thoughts: I personally really enjoyed playing through it the first time and thought of it as a nice map of yours and everything, and it still is even after this mod, but I think it really needs some polishing before pushing for approval.
First of all, please remap the second and third/four (if you count the quick fountain trigger at 04:14:546 - here as another kiai) kiais so that they actually have some individuality and don't feel like they're the same thing over and over again. That's the biggest issue I'm having with this map ATM. no, i would NOT remap them until i'll get sick of it. yes, it IS true, i copied my kiais over and over again because the sounds and vocals CLEARLY follows the same and so how can i map them differently? i'm not like a poet or an artist who's suffering with a great imagination. i don't have it. and i'm not the best mapper here for sure. all in all, i'm not going to change them
Secondly, the timestamp I made with all the large amount of selected objects (new record hu3) needs some polishing as well so that it doesn't feel as repetitive to playthrough and feels more intuitive instead. what
Also, I'd highly reccomend to ask either Deif, JBH or somebody who knows to check timing, since even though the current timing you had is accurate enough, I think it'd do wonders with some tuning up (I still am not sure if the one I gave you above will do for the moment being). i'll ask some for help

After that's settled up, I think the map'll do just fine. Go ask for some more mods as well.

Good luck!

Everything that is not mentioned in this mod has been fixed. Thanks for modding!

Lacrima

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Joined September 2014

Lacrima 2017-07-07T20:58:02+00:00

🍇 Fruit Modding Union 🍇

I hate modding in russian, so I will mod this in english (and pls, answer in english). ah, I said I won't mod this, but it seems I could point out something now, so I won't ruin your qualify if it will happen xd. but I'm still quite offended

[Freedom]

So, I'll start by discussion the whole diff and it's patterns. The main issue in my opinion is the HUGE lack of normal dashes.
Like urgh, I wonder if you tried to place them at all, and I actually think you didn't. What you did in majority of the time is just using 1.4x DS and putting HDashes, and I really do find this unrankable. Like you know, it's Overdose diff, and when you just play through it and find out you can use dash just to catch HDashes - it's annoying and boring af. Let me mention some places you can put a dash
00:14:012 (1,2) - Well, this one will be considired as dash by players, but from the mapping side it's an amgibuous dash - so I suggest you to increase the distance a little bit. Put (2) around x272 (urgh, now it's where your grid size becomes a problem) and don't forger to move 00:14:877 (1,2) - to somewhere ~x216.
00:15:742 (1,2) - Definetly deserves a bigger distance since (2) is a high pitch sound, just like above, actually. Move (2) to x288.
00:17:473 (1,2) - ^ Same. Move (2) to somewhere to x160.
00:19:204 (1,2) - ^ Move (2) to x112.
00:20:935 (1,2) - This is a high pitch vocal, so it feels like lack of a distance. Move (2) to x224
00:22:665 (1,2) - ^ Same. Move (2) x272 and make in gorizontal to keep a hdash.
00:24:396 (1,2) -; 00:26:127 (1,2) -; 00:27:858 (1,2) -; 00:29:588 (1,2) -; 00:31:319 (1,2) -; 00:34:781 (1,2) - And, same, same, same. Your mapping is quite repetitive, so I think you should understand what I mean for now, just place dashes where you think it deserves to be. If you will find trouble fidning more places to put a dash on - catch me in game and we will have and IRC since it's a lot easier to mention repetitive issues using it.
So, the next thing is 1/4 hdash overspacing. You should always keep in mind - try to be consistent with everything. It's not necessary to keep all distances the same, but at least try to keep them at one level. So, as I said the main issue is going to be overspacing, and here's some points I could mention:
00:14:877 (1,2,3) - Why is the distance here is so big? It makes no sense making it that dense in this part of the song, so I see no reason to have 5,8x(!) DS while putting 1/4 hdashes. Decrease the distance between them like you did here 00:16:608 (1,2,3) -, and then it will fix two issues at one time - overspacing and you will be more consistent.
00:48:050 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Ah, this deserves to be discussed. So, firstly I think you should make a dash to 00:48:194 (3) - since it's high pitch sound, you can fix that by mirroring 00:48:194 (3,4) - (CTRL+G). Then again, 00:48:266 (4,5) - this seems to be overspaced A LOT. 00:48:555 (8,1) - This should have bigger distance then 00:48:266 (4,5) - this, since 00:48:627 (1) - is definetely more strong than 00:48:338 (5) -. My suggestion is to move (5) to x208, and rearranging 00:48:338 (5,6,7,8) - this to emphasize 00:48:555 (8,1) - a little bit more and then moving 00:48:627 (1,2,3) - to x432. Here is how my suggestion looks like.
^ Same, also seems to be copied, so you should have no problems fixing this
00:58:146 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This is overmapping imo. So, firstly there's no beat on slider ends and 00:58:795 (6,8) - on these. Then, there's no vocals or lasting sounds which could explain the usage of 1/4 sliders. Summarizing, the whole pattern is overmapping, which is also not required here. My suggestiong is to have dense 1/2 hdashes, which should looks like this. Also discussed this with MBomb, he agreed with me. Here and here is conversation. This up to decide to remove it or to keep this, it's just my suggestiong to make it hard instead of star boost xd
01:08:531 (1,2) - Try to be consistent with 01:13:723 (3,4,5) -; and 01:22:377 (1,2,3) -, so make 01:08:819 (2) - this slider tail to be put at 1/4 beat
02:11:560 (4,1) - Nono, that's not where you should put a HDash. There's no high pitches at all, so make it a simple walk, or if you really want to emphasize a downbeat when make it a simple dash
02:18:627 (1,2,1,2) - Aaaa, these sounds awful to be honest. Firstly it's a realy undermap which make no sense in overdose diff, secondly I could understand if you made these sliders 1/1, but you made them even bigger, destroying a lot of emphasize possibilities. My suggestiong is making 02:15:165 (1,1,1,1) - These a 1/1 slider and then putting a note after them, this should look somehow like this.
02:21:223 (1,2,3,4) - I love this pattern, but if you will increase the spaing between them - this will become a little bit harder and more enjoyable to play. Maybe somehow like this should work?
02:32:473 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - I see no reasong not to have a 1/6 note between 02:32:665 (5,1) -. 1/6 hdash doesn't feel like something outstanding, so you could add it.
02:59:300 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - So, as I mentioned earlier, this is overmapped. BUT, I find this one quite fitting since it's emphasizing growing vocals quite well
03:02:473 (3,4) - Aaaa just make a simple curved stream, pretty shitmiss pattern
04:01:546 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - OOO a pattern with a dash in it! Just a mention, you should have like these more in your diff
Now, going to mention some unnecessary NCs. Since you changed your HP to 5, some of them feels really awkward to see. Here is some suggestions:
00:14:877 (1) -; 00:16:608 (1) -; 00:18:338 (1) -; 00:20:069 (1) - Remove NCs

Well, that's it. Good luck on ranking!

Kimitakari

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Kimitakari 2017-07-11T07:09:55+00:00

Myle wrote:
🍇 Fruit Modding Union 🍇

I hate modding in russian, so I will mod this in english (and pls, answer in english). ah, I said I won't mod this, but it seems I could point out something now, so I won't ruin your qualify if it will happen xd. but I'm still quite offended

[Freedom]
So, I'll start by discussion the whole diff and it's patterns. The main issue in my opinion is the HUGE lack of normal dashes.
Like urgh, I wonder if you tried to place them at all, and I actually think you didn't. What you did in majority of the time is just using 1.4x DS and putting HDashes, and I really do find this unrankable. Like you know, it's Overdose diff, and when you just play through it and find out you can use dash just to catch HDashes - it's annoying and boring af. Let me mention some places you can put a dash
00:14:012 (1,2) - Well, this one will be considired as dash by players, but from the mapping side it's an amgibuous dash - so I suggest you to increase the distance a little bit. Put (2) around x272 (urgh, now it's where your grid size becomes a problem) and don't forger to move 00:14:877 (1,2) - to somewhere ~x216.
00:15:742 (1,2) - Definetly deserves a bigger distance since (2) is a high pitch sound, just like above, actually. Move (2) to x288.
00:17:473 (1,2) - ^ Same. Move (2) to somewhere to x160.
00:19:204 (1,2) - ^ Move (2) to x112.
00:20:935 (1,2) - This is a high pitch vocal, so it feels like lack of a distance. Move (2) to x224
00:22:665 (1,2) - ^ Same. Move (2) x272 and make in gorizontal to keep a hdash.
00:24:396 (1,2) -; 00:26:127 (1,2) -; 00:27:858 (1,2) -; 00:29:588 (1,2) -; 00:31:319 (1,2) -; 00:34:781 (1,2) - And, same, same, same. Your mapping is quite repetitive, so I think you should understand what I mean for now, just place dashes where you think it deserves to be. If you will find trouble fidning more places to put a dash on - catch me in game and we will have and IRC since it's a lot easier to mention repetitive issues using it.
So, the next thing is 1/4 hdash overspacing. You should always keep in mind - try to be consistent with everything. It's not necessary to keep all distances the same, but at least try to keep them at one level. So, as I said the main issue is going to be overspacing, and here's some points I could mention:
00:14:877 (1,2,3) - Why is the distance here is so big? It makes no sense making it that dense in this part of the song, so I see no reason to have 5,8x(!) DS while putting 1/4 hdashes. Decrease the distance between them like you did here 00:16:608 (1,2,3) -, and then it will fix two issues at one time - overspacing and you will be more consistent.
00:48:050 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Ah, this deserves to be discussed. So, firstly I think you should make a dash to 00:48:194 (3) - since it's high pitch sound, you can fix that by mirroring 00:48:194 (3,4) - (CTRL+G). Then again, 00:48:266 (4,5) - this seems to be overspaced A LOT. 00:48:555 (8,1) - This should have bigger distance then 00:48:266 (4,5) - this, since 00:48:627 (1) - is definetely more strong than 00:48:338 (5) -. My suggestion is to move (5) to x208, and rearranging 00:48:338 (5,6,7,8) - this to emphasize 00:48:555 (8,1) - a little bit more and then moving 00:48:627 (1,2,3) - to x432. Here is how my suggestion looks like.
^ Same, also seems to be copied, so you should have no problems fixing this
00:58:146 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This is overmapping imo. So, firstly there's no beat on slider ends and 00:58:795 (6,8) - on these. Then, there's no vocals or lasting sounds which could explain the usage of 1/4 sliders. Summarizing, the whole pattern is overmapping, which is also not required here. My suggestiong is to have dense 1/2 hdashes, which should looks like this. Also discussed this with MBomb, he agreed with me. Here and here is conversation. This up to decide to remove it or to keep this, it's just my suggestiong to make it hard instead of star boost xd
01:08:531 (1,2) - Try to be consistent with 01:13:723 (3,4,5) -; and 01:22:377 (1,2,3) -, so make 01:08:819 (2) - this slider tail to be put at 1/4 beat
02:11:560 (4,1) - Nono, that's not where you should put a HDash. There's no high pitches at all, so make it a simple walk, or if you really want to emphasize a downbeat when make it a simple dash
02:18:627 (1,2,1,2) - Aaaa, these sounds awful to be honest. Firstly it's a realy undermap which make no sense in overdose diff, secondly I could understand if you made these sliders 1/1, but you made them even bigger, destroying a lot of emphasize possibilities. My suggestiong is making 02:15:165 (1,1,1,1) - These a 1/1 slider and then putting a note after them, this should look somehow like this.
02:21:223 (1,2,3,4) - I love this pattern, but if you will increase the spaing between them - this will become a little bit harder and more enjoyable to play. Maybe somehow like this should work?
02:32:473 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - I see no reasong not to have a 1/6 note between 02:32:665 (5,1) -. 1/6 hdash doesn't feel like something outstanding, so you could add it.
02:59:300 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - So, as I mentioned earlier, this is overmapped. BUT, I find this one quite fitting since it's emphasizing growing vocals quite well
03:02:473 (3,4) - Aaaa just make a simple curved stream, pretty shitmiss pattern
04:01:546 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - OOO a pattern with a dash in it! Just a mention, you should have like these more in your diff
Now, going to mention some unnecessary NCs. Since you changed your HP to 5, some of them feels really awkward to see. Here is some suggestions:
00:14:877 (1) -; 00:16:608 (1) -; 00:18:338 (1) -; 00:20:069 (1) - Remove NCs
Well, that's it. Good luck on ranking!

Unfortunately I cant remember the points that I kept but I know theres 2 denies here. Apologise for it. Thanks for modding!

wonjae

762 posts

Joined October 2014

wonjae 2017-07-15T22:58:43+00:00

surprise

00:14:427 (3) - yo this shouldnt be a hyper to match all of the other 1/2 slider patterns like at 00:39:108 (3,4). You can just make the slider flow right instead of left to get rid of the hyper.

00:45:165 (1,2) - i would put a hyper here because of the loud drum noise. it would also match consistency with 00:46:896 (1,2).

02:08:242 (1) - i really dont like how slow this slider starts to go as i think it fucks with the flow. a tiny SV buff would be fine on the green tick, something like 0.6x would be a bit better imo.

02:29:011 (1,2,3) - this is probably intentional, but i would get more opinions on this pattern as it does break the hyper pattern.

03:11:172 (5) - i would also get some opinions on this as i find that it is a bit off in terms of timing. I would personally use the offset at 03:11:155 as i think that sounds better.

alright thats it. last kiai and slow part is good.

Kimitakari

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Kimitakari 2017-07-16T07:57:25+00:00

Paranoid Grapes wrote:
surprise

00:14:427 (3) - yo this shouldnt be a hyper to match all of the other 1/2 slider patterns like at 00:39:108 (3,4). You can just make the slider flow right instead of left to get rid of the hyper.

00:45:165 (1,2) - i would put a hyper here because of the loud drum noise. it would also match consistency with 00:46:896 (1,2).

02:08:242 (1) - i really dont like how slow this slider starts to go as i think it fucks with the flow. a tiny SV buff would be fine on the green tick, something like 0.6x would be a bit better imo.

02:29:011 (1,2,3) - this is probably intentional, but i would get more opinions on this pattern as it does break the hyper pattern.

03:11:172 (5) - i would also get some opinions on this as i find that it is a bit off in terms of timing. I would personally use the offset at 03:11:155 as i think that sounds better. ill keep it because i think it sounds preety bad

alright thats it. last kiai and slow part is good.

Everything else I accepted. Thanks for that kind of surprise!

DeletedUser_6709840

DeletedUser_6709840 2017-07-22T21:01:15+00:00

M4M, I'm garbage at modding higher diffs but I'll try.

General

If you're using a consistenant dashing distance for 1/1 dashes, try 2.3x spacing so the distance is clear that it's a dash. If the dash isn't clear, it may be confused as a walk. Example: 00:00:739 (3,1) -

I can't really say anything for a overall flow of the map but some of your long sliders felt a little slow in the beginning of the map, but I think it won't affect the map's overall quality much unless another modder comments on it.

Specific

00:21:367 (2,3,4) – This flow is a bit weak when the 'te' vocal/strong piano. Put a dash between (2,3) like you did at 00:23:098 (2,3) - for consistency.

01:24:685 (6,1) – Overmap on hypers. There's no strong sound on (2) for there to be a hyper and the vocal is very gentle here. Remove the hyper on (1,2) but keep on (6,1) for the vocal emphasis.

01:43:435 (5,6,7,8) – Make this more into a C-curve. Your hyperdash distance for 01:43:651 (8,9) – should not be larger than the entrance to the kiai at 01:43:723 (9,1) – because it doesn't give the kiai the proper emphasis it deserves.

03:17:281 (1) – This would be better as a single note on 03:17:281 – because the long sound doesnt give enough feedback on 03:20:502 – for it to sound natural. Like, there's no sound there so there's no point to the slider unless you're just trying to avoid a break checkpoint. If anything, the checkpoint works more than the long slider.

04:54:479 – set the spinner volume at 5% at the beginning so it's less distracting.

Good luck.

Ponchiwi

229 posts

Joined September 2011

Ponchiwi 2017-07-23T04:18:39+00:00

Freedom

00:20:935 (1) - Why this slider don't have hdash? I think it would make the start of kiai better with hdash. Move to x=224
And if you don't want to add hdash, you can move 00:20:935 (1) - to x=256 To give you a need to press dash after the hdash of the previous note
00:32:761 (4) - Ctrl + G And move it a little to the right to x=208. So that the impact of the hash isn't so strong in the next note
00:35:646 (3,4,5) - Three consecutive moves to the right? D: Maybe you should do this
00:59:011 (1) - You could make a more comfortable entry by putting the slider in a way that cushion the previous hdash.
01:24:973 (1) - Move to x=128
01:25:117 (2) - umm maybe you should delete this hdash and move it to x=256
And if you accept the previous suggestion 01:25:550 (3) - Ctrl + G and move it x=128
01:26:704 (1,2) - Same patterns here 01:30:165 (1,2) - D: .So you could make this slider 01:30:165 (1) - more inclined , to make it more comfortable, not to counterflow Example
01:32:329 (2) - Try do this slider more curved and move to x=176 Click Here
01:32:761 (3,4,5) - A suggestion for this patterns Click Here
01:45:742 (1) - You could cushion very well this hdash doing in the form of C. So that the player does not stand still, since it is kiai time, it should be more intense.
02:47:473 (4,5,6) - Do it triple? Click Here
04:05:296 (4,5) - Well... I personally have never liked these patterns, you could change them and if you do 04:05:873 (1) - Tilt this slider o.o Example
04:05:873 (1,2) - And if you accepted my previous suggestion. Do this Because in this slider 04:06:306 (2) - and i guess shouldn't have hdash.

Suerte con tu map! / Good luck!

Kimitakari

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Kimitakari 2017-07-23T08:47:57+00:00

RoseusJaeger wrote:
M4M, I'm garbage at modding higher diffs but I'll try.

General

If you're using a consistenant dashing distance for 1/1 dashes, try 2.3x spacing so the distance is clear that it's a dash. If the dash isn't clear, it may be confused as a walk. Example: 00:00:739 (3,1) -

I can't really say anything for a overall flow of the map but some of your long sliders felt a little slow in the beginning of the map, but I think it won't affect the map's overall quality much unless another modder comments on it.

Specific

00:21:367 (2,3,4) – This flow is a bit weak when the 'te' vocal/strong piano. Put a dash between (2,3) like you did at 00:23:098 (2,3) - for consistency.

01:24:685 (6,1) – Overmap on hypers. There's no strong sound on (2) for there to be a hyper and the vocal is very gentle here. Remove the hyper on (1,2) but keep on (6,1) for the vocal emphasis.

01:43:435 (5,6,7,8) – Make this more into a C-curve. Your hyperdash distance for 01:43:651 (8,9) – should not be larger than the entrance to the kiai at 01:43:723 (9,1) – because it doesn't give the kiai the proper emphasis it deserves. kept this stream but i changed something at the 1st kiai

03:17:281 (1) – This would be better as a single note on 03:17:281 – because the long sound doesnt give enough feedback on 03:20:502 – for it to sound natural. Like, there's no sound there so there's no point to the slider unless you're just trying to avoid a break checkpoint. If anything, the checkpoint works more than the long slider. to make a full mapset? no thanks. i added slidertick.wav

04:54:479 – set the spinner volume at 5% at the beginning so it's less distracting. dont think so

Good luck.

Ponchiwi wrote:
00:20:935 (1) - Why this slider don't have hdash? I think it would make the start of kiai better with hdash. Move to x=224
And if you don't want to add hdash, you can move 00:20:935 (1) - to x=256 To give you a need to press dash after the hdash of the previous note
00:32:761 (4) - Ctrl + G And move it a little to the right to x=208. So that the impact of the hash isn't so strong in the next note dont think it should but i reduced the distance
00:35:646 (3,4,5) - Three consecutive moves to the right? D: Maybe you should do this dont think it should be like this as you showed me
00:59:011 (1) - You could make a more comfortable entry by putting the slider in a way that cushion the previous hdash. ill keep it as it was
01:24:973 (1) - Move to x=128 ill deny it because it would basically destroy this type of flow in this section
01:25:117 (2) - umm maybe you should delete this hdash and move it to x=256 ^
And if you accept the previous suggestion 01:25:550 (3) - Ctrl + G and move it x=128 ^
01:26:704 (1,2) - Same patterns here 01:30:165 (1,2) - D: .So you could make this slider 01:30:165 (1) - more inclined , to make it more comfortable, not to counterflow Example again, itll destroy this flow after these 1/4 sliders
01:32:329 (2) - Try do this slider more curved and move to x=176 Click Here
01:32:761 (3,4,5) - A suggestion for this patterns Click Here i made it by my own, i guess
01:45:742 (1) - You could cushion very well this hdash doing in the form of C. So that the player does not stand still, since it is kiai time, it should be more intense. understood that but no more space for the left :<
02:47:473 (4,5,6) - Do it triple? Click Here ill keep
04:05:296 (4,5) - Well... I personally have never liked these patterns, you could change them and if you do 04:05:873 (1) - Tilt this slider o.o Example
04:05:873 (1,2) - And if you accepted my previous suggestion. Do this Because in this slider 04:06:306 (2) - and i guess shouldn't have hdash.
Suerte con tu map! / Good luck!

Thanks everyone for modding!

Kimitakari

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Kimitakari 2017-07-28T16:03:10+00:00

Some changes I noticed:

1) I actually agree with Myle and so I made spacing preety intence until 02:46:319
2) Short changes to this stair 02:21:223 (1,2,3,4)
3) 04:21:883 (2,3) and 04:28:806 (2,3,4) has a drum sound so I made these patterns

That's all for me.

BoberOfDarkness

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Joined October 2013

BoberOfDarkness 2017-07-31T18:14:03+00:00

Nelly wrote:
Some changes I noticed:

1) I actually agree with Myle and so I made spacing preety intence until 02:46:319
2) Short changes to this stair 02:21:223 (1,2,3,4)
3) 04:21:883 (2,3) and 04:28:806 (2,3,4) has a drum sound so I made these patterns

That's all for me.

kd pls :^)

Kimitakari

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Kimitakari 2017-07-31T18:43:56+00:00

BoberOfDarkness wrote:
Nelly wrote:
Some changes I noticed:

1) I actually agree with Myle and so I made spacing preety intence until 02:46:319
2) Short changes to this stair 02:21:223 (1,2,3,4)
3) 04:21:883 (2,3) and 04:28:806 (2,3,4) has a drum sound so I made these patterns

That's all for me.
kd pls :^)

Can't add myself Kiddo :^)

Dea ex machina

530 posts

Joined January 2014

Dea ex machina 2017-08-08T04:49:34+00:00

freedom

00:23:531 (3,4) - too far apart (being 1.87x), considering you map the same sound with lower spacing (roughly 1.45x, slightly varying) at 00:25:261 - , 00:26:992 - , 00:28:723 - , etc.
00:40:838 (3,4) - the same problem as above is present here, with the addition of higher spacing (2.07x).
00:46:463 (4,5) - why is there a hyperdash here? (5) isn't any stronger of a note than (1-4), so it's unwarranted.
00:48:050 (2,3) - the distance here is different than 00:54:973 (2,3) - . Being strong notes mapped to the same sound they should be spaced similarly.
00:53:386 (4,5) - same problem as 00:46:463 (4,5) - , unwarranted hyperdash.
01:19:781 (1,2) - the antiflow leading into this pattern is more difficult than it should be for this section of the song. reduce the distance between (1) and (2).
01:24:973 (1,2) - same problem as above, antiflow too difficult for this section.
02:01:319 (1,2) - these sliders are far too spaced out in comparison to the other patterns mapped to this sound in the kiai.
03:22:183 (1) - the volume for this sliderend is far too loud. soften it please.

final kiai:
why do you use so many movement killing sliders such as 03:53:758 (1) - , 03:55:489 (1,2) - , and 04:11:065 (1,2) - ? it might have been more acceptable in the first kiai (even though this chorus isn't really that much more powerful), but you went out of your way to make this kiai seem more important with sections such as 04:03:277 (1,2,3,4) - and further usage of higher-distance hyperdashes, only to negate the effects of these with the first-mentioned movement killing sliders. they stop the flow and kill the speed (but to be fair, the speed kill on the curved sliders works exceptionally well) as well as the intensity of the chorus because they aren't used appropriately, and very much ruin the feel of an "important ending" you seem to have tried to create. try using more sliders appropriate for this section such as your curved ones (04:07:604 (1) - ) or more horizontal ones.

that's all for me. good luck!

Kimitakari

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Kimitakari 2017-08-09T18:04:23+00:00

-wwwww wrote:
freedom

00:23:531 (3,4) - too far apart (being 1.87x), considering you map the same sound with lower spacing (roughly 1.45x, slightly varying) at 00:25:261 - , 00:26:992 - , 00:28:723 - , etc.
00:40:838 (3,4) - the same problem as above is present here, with the addition of higher spacing (2.07x).
00:46:463 (4,5) - why is there a hyperdash here? (5) isn't any stronger of a note than (1-4), so it's unwarranted.
00:48:050 (2,3) - the distance here is different than 00:54:973 (2,3) - . Being strong notes mapped to the same sound they should be spaced similarly.
00:53:386 (4,5) - same problem as 00:46:463 (4,5) - , unwarranted hyperdash.
01:19:781 (1,2) - the antiflow leading into this pattern is more difficult than it should be for this section of the song. reduce the distance between (1) and (2).
01:24:973 (1,2) - same problem as above, antiflow too difficult for this section.
02:01:319 (1,2) - these sliders are far too spaced out in comparison to the other patterns mapped to this sound in the kiai.
03:22:183 (1) - the volume for this sliderend is far too loud. soften it please.

final kiai:
why do you use so many movement killing sliders such as 03:53:758 (1) - , 03:55:489 (1,2) - , and 04:11:065 (1,2) - ? it might have been more acceptable in the first kiai (even though this chorus isn't really that much more powerful), but you went out of your way to make this kiai seem more important with sections such as 04:03:277 (1,2,3,4) - and further usage of higher-distance hyperdashes, only to negate the effects of these with the first-mentioned movement killing sliders. they stop the flow and kill the speed (but to be fair, the speed kill on the curved sliders works exceptionally well) as well as the intensity of the chorus because they aren't used appropriately, and very much ruin the feel of an "important ending" you seem to have tried to create. try using more sliders appropriate for this section such as your curved ones (04:07:604 (1) - ) or more horizontal ones.

that's all for me. good luck!

I accepted everything except the final suggestion because 03:50:296 - 04:31:835 expresses the higher vocal sound so it's resulted to even more intence section and this is why I think this part is the important. Nevertheless thanks for modding!

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