1. Epic (7,79 stars, 2297 notes)

N0thing wrote:

Okay, first of all, this was NOT what I expected when you told me to M4M.

general

I'd like you to ask yourself "What does the map feel like. Is the way I map it, deserved, or not?"
You probably did, but this is one of the quirks I use at the beginning of a mod to further lead into several things, e.g.

• Open AI mod

• Hitsounds

• Set good timing points

I won't really go into timing, since I can't really do it, but you might as well delete the second timing point with the same bpm.well without it most of the following notes would be on blue ticks

The only diff

First of all, those are a lot of streams. You don't need to hit every note, you just need to convey the general feeling, or even just the main notes within a song. 03:35:244 (2) - I could imagine this here being a slider, then those gathered sliders, then a slider, then those gathered sliders, kind of like koukou no sousei https://osu.ppy.sh/b/96763 , just a little bit different. Besides, they all are 1/3, and not 1/4 or 1/8
yea i fixed a problem with the velocity that unsnapped these sliders

01:26:312 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - To me it sounds like they are on the red ticks only, not on the blue ticksvery nice didnt notice that
01:34:402 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - Here too. They are distinct from each other. maybe you should map it that way.yep
To be honest, I don't really know what to do with this map. I'm not saying it's shitty or anything similar, but I find it hard to recognize the music within. Try mapping without hitsounds and at a slower speed. The speed really is insanely high, and you are bound to miss a lot.well that is the way i mapped it so i dont think it will help

Just my own opinion. Pls don't give kudosu. (Because if you gave me, I'd feel guilt at not modding every single piece of your map, totaling to a stupefying amount of HL, when it all could resolve itself)dude every help is accepted dont worry

GL for the future, and maybe watch pishifats videos if you haven't already.

Neoskylove wrote:

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00:03:990 (2,2) - try to avoid overlap ok
00:13:281 (1,1) - ^, this llinear overlap looks not so good imook
01:23:615 (1,2,3,4) - why don't you make a stream? has stream soundi prefer to focus on the melody here
02:57:407 - add a spinner here?why not
03:01:368 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - too messy and difficult, make it neat.im trying to find an easier pattern that looks good
05:48:220 (2) - 05:48:557 (4) - 05:48:895 (5) - 05:49:232 (6) - unsnap cheanged the note 2 but i dont think i should change the others

thanks for the mod really appreciate it
GL

[Nemesis] wrote:

Mod from my queue.

Epic

00:00:893 (1) - are you sure this slider was as long as intended? aim for something like this instead: 00:03:990 (2) - was sure i fixed it before
00:11:732 - here's where slider's repeat should be, I'd just map it as a non repeating slider just with lower SV since this is a little calmer than the previous sections ok
00:16:377 (1) - again, this is just wrongok
00:19:382 (1) - what is wrong with this, not only is the SV unstacked but the sound is so much loudermessed up something when editing sv on some parts.fixed it
00:22:479 (1,2,3,4) - gradual increase in sv since the song is building updone
00:31:382 (3) - unsnapped properlyoops, also 00:31:382 (3,1) - bad looking overlapok
00:34:027 (4,1) - don't just stack them, maybe use some more movement, it just feels too stationaryreworked that part
02:15:357 (3,4) - u use drum hs instead of soft hs here, fix thisoops
02:24:289 (9,1) - ugly transition shape, besides NC should start on (9)fixed
02:26:312 (1) - no need for a NCi feel like i should keep this one because the music changes significally
02:51:256 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - unreadable at this AR, also this is too confusing since you do it randomly, without any reasoningctrl+h this one should be ok now
03:01:368 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - holy fuck what's wrong with the spacing here? this is hugely, HUGELY overdoneworking on it
03:08:110 - circle?i think you mean the spinner which i think is ok but im not sure what you mean with this
03:26:649 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - wayyyyyyy too confusingthink i fixed it
03:55:975 (5) - NCsure
03:57:997 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - reduce spacing, no need for it to be so big (03:59:346 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - is nearly the same yet you mapped it with like 2x less ds)done
04:57:323 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) and 05:00:020 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - what the heck is wrong with these ds differences, did you do all these sections separately without looking back at the previous ones?oops
05:45:862 (9) - this SV increase is way overdonefixed

Meh.lol laughed a lot for some reason when i saw the Meh

gl tnx

-Harpuia- wrote:

I'm bad at modding 6+* maps, but I'll do my best.

[Metadata]

1. Alright, firstly, the song came from the Touhou music, Reach for the Moon, Immortal Smoke. With that, be sure to add "東方 Project" in the source. Also, add "smoke" in the tags for the title of the original music, no need to repeat words already used in both titles.
2. Make sure to also add "fujiwara no mokou" and "touhou" in the tags.i was sure i added those .damn

Most of my points here are just minor stuff, don't worry xd

[Epic]

1. 00:07:861 (1,1) - Flow between these two isn't really bad, but it provides an awkward play of objects, imo.
2. 00:07:861 (1,1) - NCs on these two sliders isn't really needed. 00:08:635 (1) - This is reasonable for me since imo it can create a countermeasure for confusion. reworked that part
3. 00:13:281 (1) - Shouldn't its speed be like in 00:00:893 (1) - , considering the similarity in sound?right
4. 00:17:926 (2) - Try putting this on (296,240) for aesthetic purposes. The way it is right now is a bit jarring for me.why not
5. 00:22:092 (4,1) - Basing from what you did in 00:20:543 (4,1) - , those four should have identical spacings visually.think i fixed it
6. 00:25:576 (3) - NC is needed here for consistency (reference: 00:00:893 (1) - )thought i had it with a NC.fixed
7. 00:58:661 (6,1,2,3) - With the short span of time, 00:59:090 (3) - may be left unseen by some considering the density in the previous part, which is 00:58:304 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - . Try putting (3) elsewhere.ok
8. 01:04:739 (1) - Would be better to play imo if this were to be extended up until 01:05:076 (1) - . Like 01:07:435 (5,1,2) - .sure
9. 01:09:964 - Maybe map this part like 01:04:065 (1,2,3,4) - ?yep
10. 01:26:312 (1,2,3,4) - I wouldn't reccomend this spacing in a stream part D:its not a stream its 1/2 notes and jumps in the middle of the stream section would be a bit confusing so i got it like this
11. 01:35:750 (1,2,3,4) - Usually, in sliders like 01:35:750 (1) - , jumps are common. And it's effective because stuff can feel off. So yeah, consider having more space between 01:35:750 (1,2) - .removed the slider and replaced it with a note .feels better now
12. 01:36:930 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - This may sometimes be perceived incorrectly, or confused, rather. The part is too clumped.again removed the sliders
13. 01:40:806 (3,1) - Best to keep these two apart for emphasis.fixed
14. 01:42:492 (1,2) - Not sure about 01:42:660 (2) - being just under the 01:42:492 (1) - slider-end. :/reworked
15. 01:47:379 (2,3,4) - Consider having a wider angle here (01:47:548 (3) - as vertex) for better flow.i think i fixed it
16. 02:00:694 (9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ??? It would be much safer if you'd make the stream flow in parts other than where 02:00:272 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - was at.im not sure if im going to change this
17. 02:09:458 (1) - Place this at (216,120) for aesthetics. Making 02:09:121 (1,2,3,4,1) - a perfect curve.ok
18. 02:30:946 (8,1) - This stack is pretty sudden, considering the spaced stream just before it.fixed
19. 02:33:053 (5,6) - Maybe switch the points where the stream changes direction? 02:33:053 (5) - has a bit more intensity than 02:33:137 (6) - .yep
20. 03:25:188 (6,1) - 03:25:862 (6,1) - First, you changed direction at 03:25:188 (6) - , for consistency, in the next stream, 03:25:862 (6) - should be the point where the stream direction changes and not 03:25:975 (1) - . Well, actually it could be the other way around, just change 03:25:301 (1) - .i dont want to change this part
21. 03:53:278 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - The shift between waltz meter (1/3) and common meter (1/4) would be confusing to play. To avoid this I'd suggest using repeating sliders for the last or last few 1/3 streams.got some playetests for this part and it was ok
22. 04:31:705 (1,2,3,4) - Is the 04:31:705 (1) - length intentional, imo it should be 1/2.yep idk why i got it to the blue tick
23. 04:35:750 (1) - ^i think ive messed something with the SV im not sure
24. 04:56:564 (8,1,8,1) - Same consistency issue.ok
25. 04:59:346 (1,1) - Like earlier, consider unstacking these two.fixed
26. 05:12:407 (4) - imo NC should be here to signal the increase in distance more.yep
27. 05:12:744 (8,1) - Why is there a drop in DS here? the music gets less intense imo
28. 05:16:368 (1) - Basing on how you put sliders like this on the map, this should start at 05:16:199 (13) - .ok
29. 05:35:750 (1,2,3,4,5) - Stacks with different snappings. As this is an extra difficulty, I'm not sure about this, but, to be sure, try to unstack 1/2s from 1/4s.fixed
30. 05:56:649 (5) - NCsure

tnx for the mod really appreciate it
nice streams

Hope it helped. Good luck!

Creminite wrote:

[Epic]
00:00:119 (1,2,1) - I suggest to put equal spacing here. It's hard to notice at first, but you will eventually see it (Move the 2 sliders up a little)
00:03:216 (1,2) - Weird transition, fix it or probably do this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8548778. Then, fix the sliders after it.
00:14:829 (1,2,3) - This pattern is also weird. I kinda get what ur doing here, but slider 2 and 3 are in a weird position like that. Make it it's as 1 smooth slider.
00:19:382 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I get they are in different velocities, but keep them in the same pattern. Like this: https://youtu.be/UDJrlVeBE3s
00:30:608 (1,2,3) - Odd spacing, make it equal.
00:31:705 (1,2,3) - Idk anymore, how does it not snap? Maybe change the timing here, it doesnt fit
00:53:447 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Dat spacing, weird. Equalize it.
00:54:803 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - I dont like this, I liked the way you did the 1st triplets. Make it that way or any other good way.
00:56:161 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 00:57:447 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 00:58:804 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 01:00:161 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - smh. Ok, I see that you did it four more times, change all of them.
01:04:065 (1,2,3,4) - This is a weird pattern. Make it so its like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8548925
01:06:087 (1,2,3,4) - Me no like it looks. I dont know how to say it, but make it like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8548944
01:07:857 (1,2,3,4,5) - Equal spacing.
01:08:784 (1,2,3) - Same here
01:10:806 (5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - And here
01:13:334 (4,1,2) - And here
01:22:267 (1,2,3,4,1) - Make this a proper pentagon. Theres an option for taht. Go to "Compose" and click on "Create Polygon Circles". You can make equal spaced shapes with that.
01:26:312 (1,2,3,4) - This is the only one that isnt a stream compared to the rest of them. either make this a stream or make others like it.
01:37:941 (1,2,3,4) - Try this style for it: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8549147
01:42:155 (8) - Overlap this with 01:42:660 (2) -
01:51:256 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make this pattern an angle, it looks better that way
02:04:065 (1,2,3,4) - Like I said, make all the streams the same or change a few to be like this.
02:14:851 (1,2,3,4,5) - Equal spacing
02:17:548 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same here.
02:51:761 (7,8,9) - Make this part of the stream more curvy
03:02:379 (1,2,3,4) - I dont like this jump. Either move 4 so its a square or stack it on 2.
03:47:211 (1,2,3,4) - Equal spacing
04:33:053 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This is hard to read. Change this pattern to something else. Maybe into a square
04:38:952 (4,5,6,7) - Jumps are weird and spacing is odd.
At this point, i'm really lazy to say anything else. There might be more, I'll let other modders point it out.

Creminite wrote:

Creminite wrote:

[Epic]
00:00:119 (1,2,1) - I suggest to put equal spacing here. It's hard to notice at first, but you will eventually see it (Move the 2 sliders up a little)done
00:03:216 (1,2) - Weird transition, fix it or probably do this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8548778. Then, fix the sliders after it.ok
00:14:829 (1,2,3) - This pattern is also weird. I kinda get what ur doing here, but slider 2 and 3 are in a weird position like that. Make it it's as 1 smooth slider.i think its fine
00:19:382 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I get they are in different velocities, but keep them in the same pattern. Like this: https://youtu.be/UDJrlVeBE3smade something like that
00:30:608 (1,2,3) - Odd spacing, make it equal.fixed
00:31:705 (1,2,3) - Idk anymore, how does it not snap? Maybe change the timing here, it doesnt fitthat part is 1/6 so it doesnt seem snapped on 1/4
00:53:447 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Dat spacing, weird. Equalize it.seems fine to me
00:54:803 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - I dont like this, I liked the way you did the 1st triplets. Make it that way or any other good way.mirrored the other sliders so its not that wierd anymore
00:56:161 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 00:57:447 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 00:58:804 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 01:00:161 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - smh. Ok, I see that you did it four more times, change all of them.nope
01:04:065 (1,2,3,4) - This is a weird pattern. Make it so its like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8548925
01:06:087 (1,2,3,4) - Me no like it looks. I dont know how to say it, but make it like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8548944 nah
01:07:857 (1,2,3,4,5) - Equal spacing.ok
01:08:784 (1,2,3) - Same herethe difference is intended
01:10:806 (5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - And herealso intended
01:13:334 (4,1,2) - And hereintended
01:22:267 (1,2,3,4,1) - Make this a proper pentagon. Theres an option for taht. Go to "Compose" and click on "Create Polygon Circles". You can make equal spaced shapes with that.i am going to rework that part
01:26:312 (1,2,3,4) - This is the only one that isnt a stream compared to the rest of them. either make this a stream or make others like it.the sound is not for a stream and the pattern isnt confusing.got some playtests to confirm this
01:37:941 (1,2,3,4) - Try this style for it: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8549147nah
01:42:155 (8) - Overlap this with 01:42:660 (2) - done
01:51:256 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make this pattern an angle, it looks better that wayok
02:04:065 (1,2,3,4) - Like I said, make all the streams the same or change a few to be like this.
02:14:851 (1,2,3,4,5) - Equal spacingfor the note and the triple with the slider i have the same spacing on the whole pattern and for the other one its more spaced to emphasize the sudden music change
02:17:548 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same here.ok
02:51:761 (7,8,9) - Make this part of the stream more curvyfixed
03:02:379 (1,2,3,4) - I dont like this jump. Either move 4 so its a square or stack it on 2.moved
03:47:211 (1,2,3,4) - Equal spacingthe spacing is the same just it is a 1/1 jump
04:33:053 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This is hard to read. Change this pattern to something else. Maybe into a squareits ok
04:38:952 (4,5,6,7) - Jumps are weird and spacing is odd. its ok
At this point, i'm really lazy to say anything else. There might be more, I'll let other modders point it out.
tnx for the mod

Aika45 wrote:

Hi from my modding queue!!!

Sorry it takes too long for me to mod, I'm kinda busy so...

I'm really not good with extreme maps and I have less experience with this kind of diff but I'll try my very best to help...

Anyways, these are my mods for your map to have a good look, some for me are helpful so please consider...

:)

Design
- Better disable the countdown because the song will start in less than a secondforgot it even existed
AiMods
- Set a preview pointdone
- Some objects aren't snapped so please take care of itchanged sv so many times some things got messed up

Everything I found
00:05:926 (1,2,3) - make this 3 sliders of the same curves...done
00:14:829 (1,2) - same curvedone
00:20:156 (3,4) - have a less angle with 3 and make more angle with 4rotate it a bit
00:20:930 (1,2) - same goes hereok
00:24:801 (1) - make more curve hereok
00:31:705 (1,2,3) - please fix the curve, make the slidertails connect with the sliderheadsok
01:13:166 (3) - slightly adjust this note to the leftok
01:22:435 (2,3,4) - make a connect with 1, shape these notes preciselythink i fixed it
01:22:941 (1,2,3) - same goes herereworked this part
01:23:615 (1,2,3,4) - more probably hereim reworking this pattern anyway
01:33:053 (1,2) - slightly adjust this stream to the end of the slidertail... This wasn't nice to see and make a little confusion with players...think i fixed it
01:36:256 (5) - make this note symmetrical with 1 & 2ok
01:38:447 (4,5,6,7) - make these sliders with the same curvesdone
01:57:238 (6,1) - these 2 notes have too much spacing than other streams and it didn't fit the song well, move this a bit closerfixed
02:04:739 (5) - make this closer to 4fixed
02:08:699 (2,3) - align this curve stream better, make these notes a bit closerdone
03:53:952 (5) - make more curve with the slider, look at the stream you put before this sliderok
04:16:199 (5,6,7,8,9) - I wouldn't do this if I were you, just make it a flower instead for a decent look, like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8554692okay
04:16:958 (4,1) - just adjust the stream closer to 4ok
04:20:244 (2) - make this a slider that ends in red tick... you miss a notenice didnt expect to miss a beat
04:50:582 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - the first stream should have less distance than the next stream, the second stream has a more intense sound so it should be fartherthe second stream's sound has a more static feeling so i prefer this way of spacing
04:57:913 (8) - move this down a bit, it confusing to hit this if this was inside the slider, like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8554704think i fixed it
04:59:346 (1) - align this to the curveok
05:04:823 (6,7) - adjust this to the right, look at the curve of the stream...fixed
05:34:655 (2,1,2,3) - adjust the curvethe first 1 and 2 are not supposed to be in the same stream with the 1 2 3 4 so i dont want them to curve together
05:37:773 (4,5,6,7,8) - have the same curve with these sliders, I mean just copy the first one then rotate it and copy the pattern...

I hope it helps you... it did

You got a nice song there but it really is hard to map, anyways, you have a good hearing with the song, just some fix will make it better...

RainbowChaos wrote:

Heres my mod for you

Epic

1. Check AI mod. Some objects aren't snapped probably due to changing between 1/4 and 1/6 timing. Intro has string sounds which are weird with timing since their sound starts a bit before the beat but objects should start on the white ticks where the sound has the most impact. At 00:31:704(1,2,3,4) you can see this clearly.
2. 00:07:087 (1,2,1,2) SV seems a little too fast for the intensity of these notes
3. 00:19:382 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) Use curve slider shape similar to the rest since there is no change in the song
4. 00:52:590 - 01:02:018 The timing here is off. Use a beast snap divisor of 1/4 instead. There are groups of 6 objects when there are only 5 sounds so try using a playback rate of 25% and count the sounds instead of looking at the timeline and fitting objects into it
5. 01:04:402 (3,4) Join these into a slider
6. 01:26:312 (1,2,3,4) there seems to be some circles missing on the blue ticks
7. 01:57:997 (9) Sounds are only on the white and red ticks so maybe make the slider longer 02:00:694 (9) also here, same thing
8. 02:09:626 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) Replace circles with reverse sliders because the important sounds are on the red ticks followed by two less important sounds
9. 02:29:683 Use sliders instead of these streams since they fit better and won't be the same as the streams before them
10. 03:01:368 Keep the jumps in the same combo a consistent distance from each other and only increase the distance for the start of a NC
11. 03:05:413 These objects can be spaced further apart
12. 03:10:806 3 needs to be closer and 6 further away
13. 03:19:253 (2,3,4,1,2,3) why use triplets here?
14. The rest of the song has the same timing patterns so check them again with these things in mind

This is a nice song. Hope this mod was helpful in some way and if there are things that don't make sense, it is probably because i'm bad at putting it into words so feel free to ask me about them and i'll try to explain it better. Good luck with your map!
unfortunately something happened to your reply when i try to quote it and its a mess so i could get the mod correctly but i cant answer each one of the changes.i applied each one of your suggestions and some parts helped a lot with the map.tnx for the mod

1. 00:21:705 (3,4,1) - i would use consistant spacing here or do something like this to emphasize the pitch going up
2. 00:31:382 (3,1) - ^
3. 00:39:446 (2,3,4) - ^^
4. 01:09:795 - i would put a triple here instead since you seem to be doing the same for the other parts
5. 03:51:930 (4) - nc?
6. 03:52:829 (5) - nc?
7. 03:51:593 - i feel like something like this would make this part more interesting to play since the player still needs to focus on clicking and moving their cursor
8. 04:39:795 (1,2,3,4,5) - The spacing increase here is a bit too intense.

Est- wrote:

from m4m

1. 00:21:705 (3,4,1) - i would use consistant spacing here or do something like this to emphasize the pitch going upchanged it a bit
2. 00:31:382 (3,1) - ^i dont think i want to change this part
3. 00:39:446 (2,3,4) - ^^sure
4. 01:09:795 - i would put a triple here instead since you seem to be doing the same for the other partsfixed
5. 03:51:930 (4) - nc?sure
6. 03:52:829 (5) - nc? sure
7. 03:51:593 - i feel like something like this would make this part more interesting to play since the player still needs to focus on clicking and moving their cursornice idea made something similar
8. 04:39:795 (1,2,3,4,5) - The spacing increase here is a bit too intense.got 2 and 4 a bit closer
   

sorry, i'm really bad at modding harder songs, but i hope this helped a bit!it did.everything is appreciated

jyu wrote:

will mod ur map once you've replied to mod above



in about 6 hours i will start applying the above mod because i dont have the time for that atm

FiddleBlue wrote:

Hi!
Seriously, your sudden M4M surprised me. Where did you come from?
Also, please note that when I was modding this you updated the map, so some points I say may have been fixed or changed. (I'm too lazy to recheck my points again especially a marathon map) :p

General

1. Hitsounds needs fixing. Sadly, I'm not good at it, so try asking a for a hitsounding mod in the modding queue sub forum.this may be a problem of the map but there are more important mistakes on the map. if i go for ranking i will be sure to check hitsounds
2. The timing in the first part may sound correct. But I suggest you ask a timing expert to check it.i fixed some timing issues on the first part so maybe it was this part that concerned you

Extra

1. 00:20:930 (1) - Why is the slider velocity here unchanged where the one around it changes? Perhaps you can make the sv slower since it's an NC and that the next part the sv is gradually decreasing.i thought i should have the same sv on 4 and 1 but it makes sence to get higher sv on 4
2. 00:53:447 (1,2,3) - I think it's better if you make parts like this the same spacing instead as they're the same thing. So a different spacing each time is a bit weird as there's no difference unless it's something like 00:57:447 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - in which the double has a distance of 3/6 beat to the lone circle.the difference is intentional because of the change in the sound volume so im going to keep this part
3. 00:58:151 (3,1,2,3,4,5) - Possible blanket here.fixed
4. 01:04:402 (3,4) - Perhaps make this as a 1/2 slider instead to emphasize the orchestra sound.sure
5. 01:08:531 (1,2) - Remove NC and perhaps the same spacing as 01:07:857 (1,2,3,4,5) - since I think there's nothing different here than the one before.ok
6. 01:10:301 (2,3) - This 3/4 spacing can be hard for players as it is mostly 1/2 spacing before. Perhaps you can make 01:10:301 (2) - as a 1/2 slider instead, making it easier as it's now just 1/4 distance to 01:10:553 (3,4) - .ok
7. 01:12:660 (4,1) - Spacing here is suddenly big whereas 01:11:986 (4,1) - isn't that long. You should probably make the spacing shorter or the one before longer instead, as this one is a more to emphasizing a big difference in sound intensity.got it closer
8. 01:12:829 (1,2,3,4) - The angles here are getting wider every circle while in the last two it isn't. The angles should be consistent in this type.fixed
9. 01:18:222 (5,1) - Same as before, this has a 3/4 spacing, making it having a possibility of players not recognizing it and think it's 1/2 instead. You can extend 01:18:222 (5) - to make the distance to be 1/2 by ending on the blue tick or 1/4 by ending on the white tick. Or, insert a circle at 01:18:559 - . Yes it's overmapped, but you have a reason for it.alright
10. 01:22:267 (1,2,3,4) - This design could be better, perhaps you can make it the same as 01:11:480 (1,2,3,4) - .reworked it a bit
11. 01:23:278 (3,4) - Why is the spacing here suddenly bigger than before? I don't think it fits as there's no difference with the last one.the spacing is consistent between those 2 so i suppose you have a different version of the map
12. 01:24:289 (5) - Instead of a repeating 1/4 slider, perhaps you can make it just a long slider with the same duration to emphasize the string instrument.you are right
13. 01:24:964 - to 01:36:087 - you're not really consistent with your idea. You made it a stream if it starts with a bell sound but 01:31:705 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - and 01:34:402 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - is a stream when there's no bell sound. Also, 01:29:683 (5,6,7,8) - should be repeating 1/4 slider as what you did for 01:26:312 (1,2,3,4,5) - . They sound quite the same, so making it different is a bit odd.fixed
14. 01:46:537 - What's up with the lack of sliders here?added some
15. 01:46:537 (5,1,2,4) - Perhaps overlap these.well i stacked them
16. 01:51:256 (1,2,3,4,5) - How about align this in a straight line instead?sure
17. 01:56:817 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Perhaps you can make the spacing lesser as the change to a new sound is barely recognizable.ok
18. 02:02:211 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I think it's weird for this being a stream where the rest are repeating 1/4 sliders, and that the spacing is bigger than 02:02:716 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - whereas I think it's less intense than 02:02:716 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - .its a 1/2 stream now
19. 02:06:087 (9) - Since you made the last two a repeating 1/2 slider, I think this should be too.ok
20. 02:27:660 (1) - Perhaps you can make some changes here since it's a new sound like bigger spacing.added some spacing
21. 03:01:368 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Perhaps you can make this as equilateral triangle instead of isosceles.nah
22. 03:05:413 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^nah
23. 03:08:110 (1) - Spinner beginning doesn't really give feedback, so it's better to add a circle there and start the spinner on the blue tick after that.k
24. 03:21:593 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I think it's more suitable if the spacing gradually increase instead of decreasing, as 03:22:435 (6) - is stronger than 03:21:593 (1) - sure.
25. 03:35:076 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I don't think it's nice to downgrade the 1/6 stream to just sliders. Making all sliders makes this part lacking whereas it has a unique sound that doesn't show up again. The bpm is quite alright for it, and plus it's a 6*.1/6 sliders sounds like fun.fuck it lets do it.well lets say its not a 6* anymore
26. 03:53:503 (4,1) - Too close in my opinion. Why don't you make it the same spacing as 03:53:390 (3,4) - as it's still a 1/3 gap.got it a bit further
27. 04:19:570 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - For this part, why don’t you emphasize the guitar only instead, as the one right now, it's quite confusing what're trying to emphasize, like 04:22:604 (6,1,2,3,4,5) - doesn't really feel like emphasizing anything. The guitar here is quite strong, so I think you should ignore the faint drum sounds and follow it instead.this part is getting reworked soon anyway
28. A circle on 04:30:020 - and 04:30:188 - perhaps, as it's weird to ignore them.added those notes

Good luck!

1. remove the commas from Tags, simply separating each words with space is enough
2. also remove 'instrumental' from Tags, they'll be added to the Genre once it's ranked

1. 00:00:119 (1,1) - these two's overlap isn't really good to see. it doesn't really affect the gameplay but if i were you i'd move these two 00:00:119 (1,2) - up a bit so 00:00:119 (1) - 's head would stack perfectly with 00:00:893 (1) - 's tail https://puu.sh/wIhwT/e1ebc0207d.jpg
2. 00:03:216 (1) - only a suggestion https://puu.sh/wIhzq/05a9aaffdf.jpg
3. 00:15:603 (3) - tbh i think this slider should've ended at 00:16:184 - , similiar with the previous rhythm 00:03:216 (1,2) - but since you placed this slider at the corner, i also recommend you to move it elsewhere so you can follow the rhythm suggestion, if you follow it.
4. 00:22:092 (4,1) - ok i know youre following ds but i'd prefer if these two dont rly touch each other. it's an approved map so violating the ds a bit wont hurt, as long as it makes your map neat
   personally i dont really like the sv changes?? but i rly like it when the sv is slow lmao this really biased tho so yeah ignore this
   
   
5. 01:01:775 (3,1) - the short distance between them is rly weird compared to previous pattern like 00:53:685 (3,1) - 00:55:033 (3,1) - so i suggest you to increase the jump between them more
6. 01:04:065 - after this part, the soft-hitnormal sound is kinda inaudible compared to the loud drum sound you used to accent the strong drums you're following. not really fun to play bcs everytime i hit the notes with soft-hitnormal sound, i cant hear it really clearly so it kinda makes it a bit hard to figure out what rhythm youre actually following so yeah. just giving a thought. and it gets even worse when these soft-hitnormal sound hits important part like 02:14:851 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - . so yeah idk its probably just me. if you see nothing's wrong then no need to change. i'd personally recommend to louder the volume for soft-hitsounds around 60-70%
7. 01:05:160 (1) - no need to nc this, like 01:10:132 (1,2,3) -
8. 01:06:761 (3,5) - these two's heads could be stacked better
9. 01:15:525 (4) - add nc if you want it to be consistent like 01:04:739 (1) - . and if you follow some suggestions above, remove nc 01:15:862 (1) -
10. 01:25:638 (9,9) - these two kick sliders follow similiar rhythm and yet one of them ends at the blue tick and the other's at red tick. consider making them consistent. also 01:26:312 (1,2,3,4) - these tricked me in hidden mod and im srsly mad jhdfhjsdhg i actually like it when you make it like 01:29:008 (1,2,3,4) - adding space between the kick slider and the circles really makes it easier to sight read the map at first try
11. 01:31:705 (1,2,3,4) - same like above, but yeah its up to you. anyway please make it all consistent bcs this one pattern 01:28:334 (9,1,2,3,4) - is different and idk which one you'd like to keep
12. 01:38:447 (4,6) - how about adding finish hitsounds at each slider's head? it fits the song
13. 02:00:694 (9,1,2) - 02:03:390 (9,1,2) - i highly suggest you to avoid these kind of overlap. not rly neat tbh but changing this kinda requires lots of changes in your pattern lmao
14. 02:28:165 (7,8,1) - umm its kinda weird when the spacing between (7) (8) is different with (8) (1). should be better like this https://puu.sh/wIiRt/150e4c995a.jpg
15. 02:41:648 (7,4) - would be better if you stack these two lmao
16. 03:02:716 (1) - add finish
17. 03:19:907 (1,2,3,4,5) - personally i wouldnt make them crumpled like this, but yea its up to u
18. 03:35:076 - 1/8 STREAMS YUORE KIDDING ME DSJGJSFGJSAGADJGJAGJHF feels like auto-kill but i guess its because i sucks at this game
19. 03:45:862 (9,1) - distance between them should be kinda big, same like 03:47:379 (2,3) -
20. 04:03:053 (5,6) - stacks could be improved
21. 04:08:447 (3,1) - this kind of spacing could really trick the player. i suggest to add jump between them to improve reading https://puu.sh/wIjjU/b2cb0a947f.jpg
22. 04:22:773 (1,2) - switch nc
23. 04:52:435 (7,8,1) - make their spacing consistent. same suggestion like 02:28:165 (7,8,1) -
24. 04:57:913 (8,1) - what the heck dkghsjdhgjksd well idk never seen this one, i cant say i dont like it but its really uncommon so yeah no need to change if you still like this
25. 05:02:042 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - music-wise, this part is still similiar with 05:01:368 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - so im kinda confused with the sudden change with the distance snap. well it's kinda good the change the ds to make it not boring but if i were you, i wouldnt make the gap so big like this. maybe 1.0x or 1.1x should be enough
26. 05:27:660 (6,8) - fix the stack
27. 05:47:211 (1) - umm why is this snapped at 1/6. i think it shouldve ended at 05:47:379 - instead
    i cant believe i just realized you didnt add any kiai after ive modded 3/4 of your map lmao please add kiai

jyu wrote:

hi, from queue you have a good luck in gacha

[General]

1. remove the commas from Tags, simply separating each words with space is enoughdone
2. also remove 'instrumental' from Tags, they'll be added to the Genre once it's rankeddont think i can rank it tho

[Epic]

1. 00:00:119 (1,1) - these two's overlap isn't really good to see. it doesn't really affect the gameplay but if i were you i'd move these two 00:00:119 (1,2) - up a bit so 00:00:119 (1) - 's head would stack perfectly with 00:00:893 (1) - 's tail https://puu.sh/wIhwT/e1ebc0207d.jpgjust rotated them on the left
2. 00:03:216 (1) - only a suggestion https://puu.sh/wIhzq/05a9aaffdf.jpgmade something similar
3. 00:15:603 (3) - tbh i think this slider should've ended at 00:16:184 - , similiar with the previous rhythm 00:03:216 (1,2) - but since you placed this slider at the corner, i also recommend you to move it elsewhere so you can follow the rhythm suggestion, if you follow it.ok
4. 00:22:092 (4,1) - ok i know youre following ds but i'd prefer if these two dont rly touch each other. it's an approved map so violating the ds a bit wont hurt, as long as it makes your map neatbarely not touching now
   personally i dont really like the sv changes?? but i rly like it when the sv is slow lmao this really biased tho so yeah ignore this
   
   
5. 01:01:775 (3,1) - the short distance between them is rly weird compared to previous pattern like 00:53:685 (3,1) - 00:55:033 (3,1) - so i suggest you to increase the jump between them moreok
6. 01:04:065 - after this part, the soft-hitnormal sound is kinda inaudible compared to the loud drum sound you used to accent the strong drums you're following. not really fun to play bcs everytime i hit the notes with soft-hitnormal sound, i cant hear it really clearly so it kinda makes it a bit hard to figure out what rhythm youre actually following so yeah. just giving a thought. and it gets even worse when these soft-hitnormal sound hits important part like 02:14:851 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - . so yeah idk its probably just me. if you see nothing's wrong then no need to change. i'd personally recommend to louder the volume for soft-hitsounds around 60-70%got some hitsounds but i dont want some sliders to make any sounds tho
7. 01:05:160 (1) - no need to nc this, like 01:10:132 (1,2,3) - ok
8. 01:06:761 (3,5) - these two's heads could be stacked betteroops meant to stack them
9. 01:15:525 (4) - add nc if you want it to be consistent like 01:04:739 (1) - . and if you follow some suggestions above, remove nc 01:15:862 (1) -
10. 01:25:638 (9,9) - these two kick sliders follow similiar rhythm and yet one of them ends at the blue tick and the other's at red tick. consider making them consistent. also 01:26:312 (1,2,3,4) - these tricked me in hidden mod and im srsly mad jhdfhjsdhg i actually like it when you make it like 01:29:008 (1,2,3,4) - adding space between the kick slider and the circles really makes it easier to sight read the map at first tryfixed
11. 01:31:705 (1,2,3,4) - same like above, but yeah its up to you. anyway please make it all consistent bcs this one pattern 01:28:334 (9,1,2,3,4) - is different and idk which one you'd like to keepwill make all of those sliders end on blue ticks
12. 01:38:447 (4,6) - how about adding finish hitsounds at each slider's head? it fits the songadded some
13. 02:00:694 (9,1,2) - 02:03:390 (9,1,2) - i highly suggest you to avoid these kind of overlap. not rly neat tbh but changing this kinda requires lots of changes in your pattern lmaoworking on it
14. 02:28:165 (7,8,1) - umm its kinda weird when the spacing between (7) (8) is different with (8) (1). should be better like this https://puu.sh/wIiRt/150e4c995a.jpgfixed it a bit
15. 02:41:648 (7,4) - would be better if you stack these two lmaosure
16. 03:02:716 (1) - add finishsure
17. 03:19:907 (1,2,3,4,5) - personally i wouldnt make them crumpled like this, but yea its up to ui dont think i will change this pattern
18. 03:35:076 - 1/8 STREAMS YUORE KIDDING ME DSJGJSFGJSAGADJGJAGJHF feels like auto-kill but i guess its because i sucks at this gamenah just 1/6
19. 03:45:862 (9,1) - distance between them should be kinda big, same like 03:47:379 (2,3) - fixed
20. 04:03:053 (5,6) - stacks could be improvednot sure what this means
21. 04:08:447 (3,1) - this kind of spacing could really trick the player. i suggest to add jump between them to improve reading [/color]https://puu.sh/wIjjU/b2cb0a947f.jpg
22. 04:22:773 (1,2) - switch ncsure
23. 04:52:435 (7,8,1) - make their spacing consistent. same suggestion like 02:28:165 (7,8,1) -think i fixed it
24. 04:57:913 (8,1) - what the heck dkghsjdhgjksd well idk never seen this one, i cant say i dont like it but its really uncommon so yeah no need to change if you still like this
25. 05:02:042 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - music-wise, this part is still similiar with 05:01:368 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - so im kinda confused with the sudden change with the distance snap. well it's kinda good the change the ds to make it not boring but if i were you, i wouldnt make the gap so big like this. maybe 1.0x or 1.1x should be enoughthe music changes drasticly later so i thought i might give this stream section like a finale but i will think about changing it
26. 05:27:660 (6,8) - fix the stackoops
27. 05:47:211 (1) - umm why is this snapped at 1/6. i think it shouldve ended at 05:47:379 - insteadoops
    i cant believe i just realized you didnt add any kiai after ive modded 3/4 of your map lmao please add kiaithe map repeats a lot so im not sure where i will put kiai but im thinking about it

well, your streams are kinda neat and thats a good start thanks
anyway, good luck!