Nifty wrote:
From that Christmas Queue
Kantan
◾ I don't really enjoy the beginning of the song being mapped, especially in taiko. None of anything feels or sounds like it should be mapped, that's why the standard sets don't map it, and that's why I don't think you should start the map until 00:10:023 - . i prefer it to be mapped though to be consistent with other diffs
◽ 00:12:795 (6) - This is misleading since the drums are on offbeats, there's no noise here (besides the cymbal which you aren't mapping), should delete. considering the spread with futsuu, i'd keep the note here. And i don't think it's misleading since the rhythm is very simple.
◾ 03:11:001 (3) - This would be way easier to read and play if it were on the second beat, since the vocal lands on that beat and also the chorus comes in then. IMO, the guitar is less important when it comes to right here. ok. i really have dilemma here.
Futsuu
◾ From 00:31:708 - to 00:42:143 - you're mapping pretty strict to the voice, ignoring obvious spots like 00:36:273 - and 00:38:556 - , but then all of a sudden you switch to mapping to drums, using k every 1 and 3. Maybe map the first half of this section to the drums as well, or map the second half more to the voice. the first part is relatively calmer than the second part so i mapped it strictly to the vocal to reflect the calmness (and make longer breaks), and then when the 2nd part comes, mapping to the drum would make it more dynamic and intense.
◽ 00:52:251 (27) - I don't see why this note is here, remove it to put more emphasis on the K after it, right now it's needlessly removing emphasis. If you must keep it, put it on the beginning of the drumroll instead of the middle. moved
◾ 01:04:969 - There's a note here in the kantan and oni, but none in the futsuu or muzu. Perhaps move 01:04:643 (7) - this note to that beat, or just make a 2/1 break. i'd like to emphasis the strong bell sound at 01:04:643 - and create breaks before kiai for Futsuu and Muzu. But in Kantan it would create strange rhythm so i moved it 1/1 to the right. In Oni, of course i'd go all out.
◽ I don't know if you care, but the whole map feels about 4ms ahead of where the beat lands. Not unrankable, but it bothers me, especially in spots like 03:05:625 - which is more like 16ms ahead. maybe because the part is very calm, the singer is not too precise, but the timing feels alright to me.
Muzukashii
◾ 00:10:675 - I would remove the note here, as it removes emphasis from the D, and there's no notable sounds in this area besides a tiny little jingle. i don't see what's wrong with mapping the jingle.
◽ 01:04:969 - Don't forget. same as futsuu
◾ 02:49:969 - This here sounds better with a k here and a d before it, dunno why you mapped it all weird-like. because i built the structure to be focused on guitar here
Oni
◾ Grr improv mapping, at least it's consistent.
◽ 00:10:349 (4,5,6,7) - This is like what you did with the muzu but x5, there's no s o u n d, not even implied rhythm here. there is wind and chime sound here and it creates good build-up rhythm imo
◾ 00:20:784 - The run doesn't start until here, not really appreciating the unnecessary length of this pattern. cutted and rearranged
◽ 00:30:485 (115,116) - These are mapped to nothing and remove emphasis from the K. Also the weird male voice in the background here is spooky, this is a halloween map now. spooky, but if you hear closely at 25% actually drum sound as some other noises are still present. And i think this make greater flow to the next K rather than leaving it too empty
◾ 00:52:496 - You can put a d here, if you're evil like me. i'm kind
◽ 01:02:686 (263,264,265) - These should be d, since there is a bass there and there isn't even a snare hit there. considering the vocal pitch is going high, k should be fine there
◾ 01:04:643 (12,13,14) - I would make all of these finisher'd, and D K K D to follow the voice, since every voice hit is the same intensity. hmm i think i prefer to emphasis the strong bell sound at (12) and start of the kiai only
◽ The issues I brought up above repeat within their respected sections of the song.
◾ 02:52:088 - I really wish you could just use ddkkddk sometimes, especially here since the last violin pitch matches that of the next K. considering the snare sound at 02:52:170 (45,46) - i think dkkddkd would fits better here
◽ 03:04:072 (14) - Suggest deleting this note to add emphasis on 03:04:317 (1) - since you didn't finisher it. it fits the swing guitar sound though
◾ 03:25:186 - Found the spike in the retry graph. Just letting you know this is a pain in the ass to play for people at the upper 4* level (like meee). lol. consider it as challenge for improvement :3
it is alright