Mod from my
queue.
RedemptionFinally a non-weaboo non-camellia map, thank God. \m/
First of all, your map is pretty good, but your rhythm choices are pretty weird. Taking a look at this moment for instance: 01:02:890 (1,2,3,4) - 1 should end at 01:03:067 - , 2 should be a 1/2 slider starting from 01:03:244 - , then a circle should be there: 01:03:773 - and you can leave 4 as it is. The live version ignores a lot and I mean A LOT of important sounds that should definitely be clickable (the ones I pointed out are just an example. this occurs multiple times throughout the map making it really awkward to listen to).
Now onto the mod as the map currently is (which I suggest you fix right away).
There isn't really much to fix since it's really all about your rhythm choices that fundamentally destroy the map.
00:30:420 (5) - This is kinda flowbreaking, I suggest you ctrl+g it
01:14:185 (4) - meh, I would prefer that it bent more towards the stream following it, right now it feels awkward
01:17:008 (2) - this should start right here 01:17:185 - , see what I mean here?
01:48:596 (2,3) - 2 sliders instead pls
02:18:596 (5) - there is definitely a triple and you cannot just ignore it, put three circles there instead (or a 1/4 repeating slider if you really want to)
02:24:243 (5) - ^
02:29:185 (1) - lol I didn't see such a slider for ages
02:31:832 (1) - this should end here: 02:32:008 -
02:33:420 - lol I really like it, if you fix your annoying rhythm choices and get a full spread I'm giving it a star or two
Good luck!