yanaginagi - Vidro Moyou

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Linada
holy moly

MrSergio wrote:

Linada:
  1. 00:02:342 (3) - can't hear the triplet in the song tbh. High-hats and kicks alternate every 1/2, so there are no audible 1/4s there is a kick on white tick and two 1/4 snaps on that weird instrument idk it's called
  2. 00:02:686 (5,6,7,8) - having these on piano and then 00:03:602 (1,2) - on drums sounds so bad, zzz. It's like forcing two magnets to interact both with the same pole. Not to mention that forcing such a rhythm creates an awkward passage on piano again on 00:04:289 - , most likely due to the flow which is not expressing the song.
    Possible fixes: 00:03:373 (8,1) - x208 y304 (by using a stretched movement we sort of fix the missing emphasis on the previous slider tail and also fix the problem with 00:04:518 (3,4,5,6,1) - being un-expressive) Fixed with your way but changed slider direction slightly
  3. there is a lot I would like to say, but I feel like it would be ignored, so here's the raw suggestion without any reasoning (because I would really go deep otherwise): 00:05:205 (6) - to x396 y244 ; 00:08:869 (6) - x356 y224 hey that's cool
    I suggest this due to a peculiarity in the piano rhythm you ignored. You can ask me if you want the full explanation, but listening to 00:02:686 (5,6,7,8) - and 00:04:518 (3,4,5,6) - in the music should be enough to make you understand, hopefully
  4. 00:22:609 (2) - 00:26:273 (2) - I know they have a guitar beat on them, but they look like filler notes when all the patterns are either on drums or vocals they're filler rhythm but with the hitsounding hokichi did, i really like the rhythm created with filler rhythm here on that section
  5. 00:37:495 (3,4,5) - imo it would work better with a bigger jump between 3-4 and a smaller one between 4-5 i think it emphasize the clap better as it
  6. 00:45:510 (4,1) - what an awful emphasis on that slider. Also, the slider should be two clicks, if you listen to the drum. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8784945 ? ok
  7. it would also be cool if you kept a pattern for all: 00:45:510 (4,1) - 00:49:403 (1,2,3) - 00:53:067 (1,2,3) - . It just seems you went with whatever was fine atm instead of noticing the similarities in the song <.<just kept same spacing for all, also changed 00:50:090 (1,2,3,4) - to make more contrast
  8. 00:56:273 (3) - your hitsounds do not match your pattern here. A better option would be to remove 3 repeats from the slider and using a circle at 00:56:502 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8784963 // 01:13:449 (1) - cousin i'd rather remove clap tbh, feel buzz+circle would be too much for what the intensity here imo
  9. 01:05:205 (5,6,7) - this feels overmapped compared to 01:07:495 (5,6,1) - . The reason for that is that the second one is on drums, the same as all the other patterns, while the first is simply that sort of... keyboard sound which plays as a background instrument i dunno, because even if it's different than other triples, it's still snapped and add some rhythm rather than just 1/2 spams, if you really want to i'll remove tho not that much of a big deal
  10. 01:10:014 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - soft piano notes would make more sense with smaller spacing than the drum parts tbh i kinda agree but here the piano is really dominant on that part, way more than drums
  11. 01:21:464 (1,2,1,2) - wut. How come these are grouped by 2 and extra large when they are the same intensity as the rest of the vocal parts? yeah that part was topkek i never found something to my liking. now it's better
  12. 01:29:021 (1,2,1) - look at Yamicchi's for a better rhythm. 01:29:021 - 01:29:250 - 01:29:479 - are the same beat, but you decided to mix things up (as in the rest of the map). That makes the map unclear to me and just a mean to entertain the player while discarding the song well, i just went to 1 rhythm then
    the new ending may look a bit harder but considering it's bpm it's pretty easy to play, really play easily


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thanks for the wall :D

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Topic Starter
Hokichi

MrSergio wrote:

you have no bubble, why did you ask me // It was bubbled, and Plaudible said he can't re-rebub, so I was thinking about requesting a t2 BN to check it and make sure everything is ready, then I can ask him to rebub

add disclaimer in desc about the spoilers your SB contains (yes, it's about the pic at 01:15:052 - , taken from the anime) not a big spoiler, but still a spoiler Okay

the song ends at 01:29:479 - , unless you find a way to merge that last guitar stroke with the rest of the map {all diffs}
Check some past versions like jonathanlfj's or Fumika's for confirmation // All diffs have that spot mapped, so I guess it's not a problem

Hard:
  1. 00:06:121 (2,3,4) - Apart from the slight DS difference between 1-2-3. I would suggest a more natural flow like this // Agree, fixed
  2. 00:07:953 (1,2,3,1) - this is a surprisingly clean pattern considered the previous ones. While being this a praise, it is also a way to tell you that generally you could make the map look cleaner // Sure
  3. 00:13:678 (3) - wild soft whistle on slider body // Fixed
  4. 00:19:403 (2,1) - forced movement I would rather avoid, but apart from that I would like it if you kept vocals over drums.
    The passage at 00:18:258 (1,2,1) - is really awkward because you have been following vocals quite well so far, but decided to skip the one at 00:18:945 - . Skipping that is not a big deal by itself, but the choice to use vocals for 00:19:403 (2) - IS a problem, since you mix things up in an uncomfortable way imo.
    00:18:258 (1) - remove repeat; 00:18:945 - 1/1 slider; 00:19:632 - 1/2 slider // I did this instead, hopefully it's fixed
  5. 00:43:449 (5,6) - clap goes on 6 // Fixed
  6. I assume hitsounds were took by your diff on Yamicchi, which explains why 00:52:609 (3) - is the same. That grave drum sample doesn't fit with the song: either remove the beat or remove the drum sample // Removing the drum beat sounds like a better idea
  7. 00:56:273 (3) - go with circles if you want the double clap. Having the first clap clickable while not the second one feels strange // Removed the second clap
  8. 00:59:479 (3) - what do you think of a slider till 00:59:479 (3) - ? // Till where?
  9. 01:05:434 (4,5,1) - tiny detail, but this stuff happens a bit everywhere: when there is no reason to break it, why not keeping a constant DS... // Changed
  10. 01:14:136 (3) - the bigger jump should go on this, and not on 01:13:907 (2) - . See how 01:14:136 (3,4,5) - are a triplet of strong beats // I extended the triangle
  11. 01:22:380 (1) - finish on head? // Sure


Normal:
  1. 00:02:457 (2) - if you remove this beat you can make 00:03:602 (1) - start from 00:03:373 - where the piano note is instead (which would make more sense)
  2. 00:06:121 (2) - same // 00:09:785 (2) - cousin // I followed Akitoshi's beat, so I think I'll keep it
  3. 00:11:846 - why is this skipped tho // Mapped
  4. 00:30:166 (3) - this would work better extended till 00:30:853 - instead // Fixed
  5. 00:43:449 (3,1) - clap goes on 1's head // Fixed
  6. 01:10:014 (2) - whistle is enough on head // Whistle followed the piano sounds, and I'm pretty sure I did it throughout the whole map, so I'll keep it that way
  7. 01:22:380 (1) - finish on head // Fixed
  8. 01:26:044 (1,1) - when for no reason things start changing... Not sure why the second one has to be curved, but I guess that's anime mapping for you.. // This is where I'm going to add a spinner instead
  9. pretty sure you can make a spinner fit somewhere in the map


z // zz
Thanks for the check!
Natsu
hey call me once u get a bubble, is that fine?

edit: I also dislike the top diff name lol, maybe try to change it?
Natsu
ask to delis if he is fine with the map now, since he popped it

general

  1. can u make the colors a bit more different


Linada's Glass Pattern

  1. 00:42:991 (3,1,2,3,1,2) - eh I really don't understand the structure of this pattern, can you make it more geometrical? atleast make 00:43:220 (1,3) - 00:43:449 (2,1) - have similar spacing visually
  2. 00:44:136 (2) - I don't agree with this, ending the slider on such important beat doesn't fit the song at all
  3. 01:28:219 (8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1) - also this is too much, and also a bit inconsistent, for example you don't have a 1/4 jump at 01:26:387 (4,5) - and the sound is basically the same as 01:28:219 (8,1) - just don't use the stream jump and also 01:29:021 (1,2,3,4) - the pressure points are 1 and 3, 2 and 4 are regular beats, so either make a 1/4 jumps or a normal stream


Yamicchi's Light Insane

  1. the OD makes no sense tbh, just use 7


Hard

  1. 00:19:632 (3,1) - blanket is super off
  2. 00:20:090 (1,2,3) - spacing
  3. 00:34:289 (4,5) - the stack leniency ruins your spacing
  4. 00:41:388 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - eh you can rebuild this pattern better, like the overlaps and the objects being at the same place doesn't really fit the rest of the map
  5. 01:28:334 (2,5) - try to avoid the overlap
    maybe try to make some clean up at this diff and also I'd nerf those star jumps, since the spread with the normal diff isn't that nice atm


Normal

  1. OD 4
  2. Just try to improve your blankets


if you fix the bolded things you can call me back once this gets rebubbled
Linada

Natsu wrote:

Linada's Glass Pattern

  1. 00:42:991 (3,1,2,3,1,2) - eh I really don't understand the structure of this pattern, can you make it more geometrical? atleast make 00:43:220 (1,3) - 00:43:449 (2,1) - have similar spacing visually fixed
  2. 00:44:136 (2) - I don't agree with this, ending the slider on such important beat doesn't fit the song at all Fixed but had to remove the buzz because it'll kill the playability pretty hard
  3. 01:28:219 (8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1) - also this is too much, and also a bit inconsistent, for example you don't have a 1/4 jump at 01:26:387 (4,5) - and the sound is basically the same as 01:28:219 (8,1) - just don't use the stream jump and also 01:29:021 (1,2,3,4) - the pressure points are 1 and 3, 2 and 4 are regular beats, so either make a 1/4 jumps or a normal stream fixed
all fixed ! also did some self-modding

@hokichi: i did put combo colors in my diff if you want to use them
also i think offset need -5 (1770) but i'm not entirely sure

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149,188,88563,1,0,3:0:0:0:
115,141,88677,1,0,3:0:0:0:
113,83,88792,1,0,3:0:0:0:
145,35,88906,1,0,3:0:0:0:
198,13,89021,6,0,L|247:18,1,47.9999985351563,8|0,3:2|3:0,0:0:0:0:
430,112,89250,2,0,L|380:117,1,47.9999985351563,8|0,3:2|3:0,0:0:0:0:
260,280,89479,6,0,P|256:296|253:311,3,31.9999990234375,8|0|0|4,3:2|0:0|0:0|2:2,0:0:0:0:
Topic Starter
Hokichi

Natsu wrote:

ask to delis if he is fine with the map now, since he popped it

general

  1. can u make the colors a bit more different // Sure, I'll use Linada's


Hard

  1. 00:19:632 (3,1) - blanket is super off // Fixed
  2. 00:20:090 (1,2,3) - spacing // Oops, sorry
  3. 00:34:289 (4,5) - the stack leniency ruins your spacing // Adjusted
  4. 00:41:388 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - eh you can rebuild this pattern better, like the overlaps and the objects being at the same place doesn't really fit the rest of the map // Hmm this can be hard
  5. 01:28:334 (2,5) - try to avoid the overlap // Okie
    maybe try to make some clean up at this diff and also I'd nerf those star jumps, since the spread with the normal diff isn't that nice atm // I will remove some of the overlaps, but will keep some


Normal

  1. OD 4
  2. Just try to improve your blankets


if you fix the bolded things you can call me back once this gets rebubbled
Thanks for the mods
ShirohaMyMommy
p/6156115
I already mentioned that my pop reason was solved there (the SB), then I just found additional unrankable elements but apparently these also have been fixed now, you can get a rebubble.
Yamicchi
@Hoki change my Light Insane to OD7 please thanks
Plaudible
Everything addressed, looks like we're set for rebub :)
Natsu
ok
0109-
gratz :x
_DT3
HOKIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII
Pachiru
Finally!!
Congratz on your first ranked map (:
Topic Starter
Hokichi
Thanks guys
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