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Ai Nonaka & Eri Kitamura - and I'm home

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[DNA]HMSDevonshire
20 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
[DNA]HMSDevonshire
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年11月2日 at 20:00:21

Artist: Ai Nonaka & Eri Kitamura
Title: and I'm home
Source: Puella Magi Madoka Magica
Tags: Sakura Kyoko Miki Sayaka maho shojo Akiyuki Shinbo Gen Urobuchi wowaka [DNA]HMSDevonshire Sun Rainbow
BPM: 125.01
Filesize: 5724kb
Play Time: 02:37
Difficulties Available:
  1. Insane (4.8 stars, 414 notes)
  2. Rainbow (4.64 stars, 304 notes)
Download: Ai Nonaka & Eri Kitamura - and I'm home
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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plz re-dl after 2011.11.2

1st map
Sayaka and Kyouko's character song

note editing is over
now working on sound effects and others
[Rainbow] made by Sun Rainbow,thanks for your Guest Diff

advices please
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9.15.11
Delete the difficultie[Normal+],it make nonsense
still learning storyboard
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Sound effects and colors test
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9.18.11
Anshi's mod
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9.25.11
add Sun Rainbow's diff [Rainbow]
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10.6.11
[CSGA]Ar3sgice's mod
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10.7.11
add three combobursts
add a hitsound
preview time change
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10.18.11
Rainbow's update
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10.27.11
Rainbow's update
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10.28.11
[Insane] update based on Strawberry’s mod
Tags fix
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10.30.11
[Insane] update based on Sun Rainbow’s mod
Tags fix
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11.2.11
[Rainbow] update
sound effects add
Last edited by [DNA]HMSDevonshire , edited 32 times in total.
SoulPrism
33 posts
Joined April 2011
SoulPrism
:) 挺好的，加油……
话说现在不能给星，难道说是按照回帖数量来吗= =

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[DNA]HMSDevonshire
20 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
[DNA]HMSDevonshire

Takayama Maria wrote:

:) 挺好的，加油……
话说现在不能给星，难道说是按照回帖数量来吗= =

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星那个无所谓啦，按照现在的进度离Pending还早
Anshi_old
103 posts
Joined July 2011
Anshi_old
第一幅图嘛。。。 比我的明显好多了。。。TAT
Anshi_old
103 posts
Joined July 2011
Anshi_old
hard
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00:26:280 后面note2 3 4 5一起后移一格...？
00:38:759 删除note4？
00:38:879 删除slider 添加note4？
00:38:999 添加 note5 ？
00:39:119 加slider？
00:39:479 slider止？
00:41:399 slider3改在这里止？
00:41:759 删除了原来的slider 添加了和00:39:839同样的slider。。。?



（上面这段改成这样效果好像好些？... 但是00:38:759-00:39:479 真心觉得怪怪的...? ）
00:59:516 添加note？
00:59:636 note3 4 5 6 一起后移一格？
01:02:516 slider改为这里停止？
01:05:516 slider改为这里停止？
01:05:636 添加note3?
01:05:756 添加note4?
01:05:876 删除原note?
01:27:833 觉得有点突然的一串连击？貌似是前面出现过的问题？。。也不能说是问题？
01:54:110 note1 2移后一格？
02:06:828 依次添加note?
02:08:868 note应该更密一些？后面有个大串...
02:12:708 whistle好像有点突然。。。？
02:23:026 slider延长2格？
02:27:106 whistle还是要调整一下吗？
02:29:506 这里试着弄一串大连到slider?


第一次给mod。。。请见谅。。
Rumia_S
12 posts
Joined July 2010
Rumia_S
做得很好yooooooooooooooooo~~~
继续支持`````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````
[DNA]HMSDevonshire
20 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
[DNA]HMSDevonshire

Anshi wrote:

00:26:280 后面note2 3 4 5一起后移一格...？
已改

Anshi wrote:

00:38:759 删除note4？
00:38:879 删除slider 添加note4？
00:38:999 添加 note5 ？
00:39:119 加slider？
00:39:479 slider止？
00:41:399 slider3改在这里止？
因为BGM到了这里有一个突入的转换，这个方案在作图之初也考虑过，但后期考虑到节奏的平衡问题就改了（两个Slider都是红线出发）

Anshi wrote:

00:41:399 slider3改在这里止？
如果slider3提早在蓝线结束的话那么白线处(00:41:519)会出现一个空拍（其实算是空音效吧）

Anshi wrote:

00:41:759 删除了原来的slider 添加了和00:39:839同样的slider。。。?
？？？线上咨询了一下本人，改了

Anshi wrote:

00:59:516 添加note？
我觉得进入连打前有个准备比较好..毕竟前面都是1/2的..

Anshi wrote:

01:05:516 slider改为这里停止？
01:05:636 添加note3?
01:05:756 添加note4?
01:05:876 删除原note?
这个地方Test了几次都觉得不太顺手，先保留看看吧^ ^

Anshi wrote:

01:27:833 觉得有点突然的一串连击？貌似是前面出现过的问题？。。也不能说是问题？
BGM是有段电吉他（？）音，这段是对着off vocal做的，没梗苦手.-.
之前给过一些朋友试玩，没有在这个地方断的，所以也没太在意

Anshi wrote:

01:54:110 note1 2移后一格？
往右？
fixed

Anshi wrote:

02:08:868 note应该更密一些？后面有个大串...
是指时间上还是位置上？

Anshi wrote:

02:12:708 whistle好像有点突然。。。？
02:27:106 whistle还是要调整一下吗？
删

Anshi wrote:

02:23:026 slider延长2格？
延长两格的话似乎跳得有些远了，这里我选择了把slider弯曲，圆心位置追加一个hitcircle的方式填补空拍

Anshi wrote:

02:29:506 这里试着弄一串大连到slider?
我觉得这段跟着BGM的气氛减缓节奏会比较美



非常感谢您的MOD
写了这么多相当认真呢
可以加个好友吗（拍飞
Sun Rainbow
1,382 posts
Joined January 2011
Sun Rainbow
能给我做个难度吗？谢谢了~

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Subject: 都是浮云~
Sun Rainbow
1,382 posts
Joined January 2011
Sun Rainbow
This is my diff.....

:)

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Download: Ai Nonaka & Eri Kitamura - and I'm home ([DNA]HMSDevonshire) [Rainbow].osu
Anshi_old
103 posts
Joined July 2011
Anshi_old
又做了一个难度吗。。。 然后好高兴啊..这么细心的回复modding啥的。。。
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
4,298 posts
Joined July 2011
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
"Don't use the black combo colour, people who delete BG cannot see the approach circles clearly"

=.=我是来mod的lol

[general?]
首字母不是应该大写么.......
Don't use the black combo colour

[hard]
AR9
01:56:630 (1,1) - ?
02:23:506 (6,7,8) - combo
02:30:226 (2) - do not whistle
00:08:882 (1,2,1,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,1,2,1,1) - 这一段像marisa那样叠起?
00:22:081 (4,5,1,1,1,1,2,3) - ??????

00:23:281 (1,2,3) - whistle
00:27:840 (3,4) -
00:31:681 (5,6,7,8) -
00:34:559 (1,2) -
00:38:158 (1,2,3) -
00:39:838 (7) -
00:41:759 (5) -
00:43:918 (4,1,1) -
00:50:157 (5) -
00:50:636 (1 head) -
00:55:916 (4) -
00:56:397 (1 head) -
01:52:550 (2 end) -
01:53:510 (1) -
02:20:387 (6) -
02:23:506 (6,7,8) -
02:34:545 (1,1,2) -
02:36:225 (4,1,1) -

00:36:719 (1) - clap on end
00:54:477 (1) - ^

00:42:478 (1) - clap
[DNA]HMSDevonshire
20 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
[DNA]HMSDevonshire

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

"Don't use the black combo colour, people who delete BG cannot see the approach circles clearly"

=.=我是来mod的lol

[general?]
首字母不是应该大写么....... 原曲名就是这样的了..
Don't use the black combo colour mostly detele,a few left

[hard]
AR9
01:56:630 (1,1) - ? it jumps,and color requires
02:23:506 (6,7,8) - combo I dont think so
02:30:226 (2) - do not whistle fixed
00:08:882 (1,2,1,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,1,2,1,1) - 这一段像marisa那样叠起? 叠的话hid难读
00:22:081 (4,5,1,1,1,1,2,3) - ?????? color requires

------↓------
00:23:281 (1,2,3) - whistle
00:27:840 (3,4) -
00:31:681 (5,6,7,8) -
00:34:559 (1,2) -
00:38:158 (1,2,3) -
00:39:838 (7) -
00:41:759 (5) -
00:43:918 (4,1,1) -
00:50:157 (5) - chage in another way
00:50:636 (1 head) - ^
00:55:916 (4) -
00:56:397 (1 head) -
01:52:550 (2 end) -
01:53:510 (1) -
02:20:387 (6) -
02:23:506 (6,7,8) -
02:34:545 (1,1,2) -
02:36:225 (4,1,1) -

00:36:719 (1) - clap on end
00:54:477 (1) - ^

00:42:478 (1) - clap
------↑------
done
thanks for mod
and sorry for late m(_ _)m
Sun Rainbow
1,382 posts
Joined January 2011
Sun Rainbow
本人觉得自己那个难度不好……重做了。。。
还有，我给你找了个BG（你不是要做SB LYC吗，那我建议你最好换一个BG，不然那个BG超难显示SB）
看下方！！！

Sun Rainbow
1,382 posts
Joined January 2011
Sun Rainbow
呼，
修改的内容
1.把一些小细节改了一下
2.重做了最后一个高潮部分
3.添加了一些音效~

Sun Rainbow wrote:

本人觉得自己那个难度不好……重做了。。。
还有，我给你找了个BG（你不是要做SB LYC吗，那我建议你最好换一个BG，不然那个BG超难显示SB）
看下方！！！
我好蠢…………

Download: Ai Nonaka & Eri Kitamura - and I'm home ([DNA]HMSDevonshire) [Rainbow].osu
Sun Rainbow
1,382 posts
Joined January 2011
Sun Rainbow
又改了一些内容……
内容
1.做了开头
2.改了第一个高潮部分的后面

Download: Ai Nonaka & Eri Kitamura - and I'm home ([DNA]HMSDevonshire) [Rainbow].osu
Strawberry
osu! Alumni
1,536 posts
Joined October 2010
Strawberry
requested in game from sun rainbow
hi [DNA]HMSDevonshire :D

my mod

[General]
-combo color不要有黑色
-offset:722（然后检查一下有没有all snap
-preview point下在00:47:758 - 更好些？
-soft(默认)的clap感觉有点不合音乐

[Rainbow]
00:10:322 (5) - +nc
00:10:802 (1,2,3,4) - 有点突兀 音量先减小逐渐增大比较好
00:10:802 (1) - 去掉nc
00:11:762 (1) - ^
00:16:082 - +finish
00:17:041 - 去掉clap
00:18:001 - +nc
00:19:921 - +finish
00:22:081 (4) - - 去掉clap
00:22:321 - +clap
00:23:281 (3) - +clap
00:24:481 - 去掉clap
00:24:721 - +clap
00:28:560 - +clap/.\不nazi了……hitsound不需要多花哨 也不要时有时无
clap一般都是2,4下 下多了听着也乱 (副歌部分另当别论
铺面上有很多细节问题要注意 该对齐的地方对齐 不然整体感觉很乱 不美观
比如01:08:875 (1,3) - 这两个ctrl+j用下对称就好了
01:17:754 (1,2) - ^
01:11:755 (1) - 这个被前面的6挡住一些
01:15:594 (5,7) - 倾斜度最好一样的
01:32:392 (6,7,1) - 这里也建议用其他摆法
01:44:271 (7) - 拉多了一点
...
还是建议多堆点人参再来作图 不然做出来比较单调

[Hard]
[color=#FF0000]改成insane吧:P
建议remap nc 很乱 可以有灵活但是大多数还是要长白线下nc(offset要先改好
00:08:402 - +finish
00:33:359 (3,4) - 00:33:839 - +whistle
00:46:557 (2) - 这个slider的结尾可以消下音
00:58:317 (1,1) - 这里有点蛋痛>w<
01:01:915 (1) - 略丑
01:51:830 (1) - 拖长点吧？
01:56:630 (1)&01:57:109 (1)&02:18:947 (2) - 也比较丑
01:59:509 (2) - 有挡住后面02:00:229 (1) - 不太美观
02:16:547 (1)&02:17:027 (1) - 和02:15:587 (3,1) - 尾巴有点没叠上 按shift再小调整一下
02:30:226 (2) - 弧度再大点？
02:32:865 (1,3) - +whistle?
02:34:305 (3) - ^
02:34:676 - 去掉whistle
细节还要注意下 整体还不错lol

继续努力~加油！
Twice_old
Twice_old
同建议把hard改成insane
纯粹个人感想: [hard] 01:17:514 - 01:19:914 , 02:30:226 - 02:32:385 的那两段长滑条可以用转圈代替。- 。
如果觉得转圈用太多的话可以在那段自创些节奏。
表示很喜欢在延长音里做节奏的路过:3
[DNA]HMSDevonshire
20 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
[DNA]HMSDevonshire

Strawberry wrote:

requested in game from sun rainbow
hi [DNA]HMSDevonshire :D

my mod

[General]
-combo color不要有黑色
-offset:722（然后检查一下有没有all snap[/color] no,why
-preview point下在00:47:758 - 更好些？
-soft(默认)的clap感觉有点不合音乐[/color] 没有其他选了

[Hard]
[color=#FF0000]改成insane吧:P
建议remap nc 很乱 可以有灵活但是大多数还是要长白线下nc(offset要先改好[/color] fixed
00:08:402 - +finish
00:33:359 (3,4) - 00:33:839 - +whistle no
00:46:557 (2) - 这个slider的结尾可以消下音 fixed
00:58:317 (1,1) - 这里有点蛋痛>w< 是吗^ ^
01:01:915 (1) - 略丑 yes?
01:51:830 (1) - 拖长点吧？fixed
01:56:630 (1)&01:57:109 (1)&02:18:947 (2) - 也比较丑 故意拉成这样的，配合歌词
01:59:509 (2) - 有挡住后面 只挡住了第二个note的极小一部分，还是结尾段
02:00:229 (1) - 不太美观 yes?
02:16:547 (1)&02:17:027 (1) - 和02:15:587 (3,1) - 尾巴有点没叠上 按shift再小调整一下 fixed
02:30:226 (2) - 弧度再大点？ok
02:32:865 (1,3) - +whistle? no
02:34:305 (3) - ^ no
02:34:676 - 去掉whistle[/color] ok
细节还要注意下 整体还不错lol

继续努力~加油！
Thx for mod >.<
Sun Rainbow
1,382 posts
Joined January 2011
Sun Rainbow

Strawberry wrote:

requested in game from sun rainbow
hi [DNA]HMSDevonshire :D

my mod

[General]
-combo color不要有黑色
-offset:722（然后检查一下有没有all snap
-preview point下在00:47:758 - 更好些？
-soft(默认)的clap感觉有点不合音乐

[Rainbow]
00:10:322 (5) - +nc
00:10:802 (1,2,3,4) - 有点突兀 音量先减小逐渐增大比较好
00:10:802 (1) - 去掉nc
00:11:762 (1) - ^
00:16:082 - +finish
00:17:041 - 去掉clap
00:18:001 - +nc
00:19:921 - +finish
00:22:081 (4) - - 去掉clap
00:22:321 - +clap
00:23:281 (3) - +clap
00:24:481 - 去掉clap
00:24:721 - +clap
00:28:560 - +clap/.\不nazi了……hitsound不需要多花哨 也不要时有时无
clap一般都是2,4下 下多了听着也乱 (副歌部分另当别论
铺面上有很多细节问题要注意 该对齐的地方对齐 不然整体感觉很乱 不美观
比如01:08:875 (1,3) - 这两个ctrl+j用下对称就好了
01:17:754 (1,2) - ^
01:11:755 (1) - 这个被前面的6挡住一些
01:15:594 (5,7) - 倾斜度最好一样的
01:32:392 (6,7,1) - 这里也建议用其他摆法
01:44:271 (7) - 拉多了一点
...
还是建议多堆点人参再来作图 不然做出来比较单调

[Hard]
[color=#FF0000]改成insane吧:P
建议remap nc 很乱 可以有灵活但是大多数还是要长白线下nc(offset要先改好
00:08:402 - +finish
00:33:359 (3,4) - 00:33:839 - +whistle
00:46:557 (2) - 这个slider的结尾可以消下音
00:58:317 (1,1) - 这里有点蛋痛>w<
01:01:915 (1) - 略丑
01:51:830 (1) - 拖长点吧？
01:56:630 (1)&01:57:109 (1)&02:18:947 (2) - 也比较丑
01:59:509 (2) - 有挡住后面02:00:229 (1) - 不太美观
02:16:547 (1)&02:17:027 (1) - 和02:15:587 (3,1) - 尾巴有点没叠上 按shift再小调整一下
02:30:226 (2) - 弧度再大点？
02:32:865 (1,3) - +whistle?
02:34:305 (3) - ^
02:34:676 - 去掉whistle
细节还要注意下 整体还不错lol

继续努力~加油！
呜呜呜……看了灰心了……
先再做之前重做的……
Sun Rainbow
1,382 posts
Joined January 2011
Sun Rainbow
耶~我也来学MOD

1.在这之前
请在高潮部分加个黄线 :roll:
我的难度是在00:47:278~
你有开DS吗？？？
还有，不做EASY吗？
这样的话你还是等进墓地……没有一个难度小于3颗星的话是不能RANK的……

TAG加个wowaka.......

2.MOD难度~
有点少呢…… 是很少吧……

[insane]
这个难度的滑条我不敢看……不要太绕了比较好……

01:17:994 01:18:954 加个S:C2
01:19:914 加个鼓声

example

01:04:076(4) 加个S:C2的铃铃铃
01:04:556(5) 加NC
01:07:915(12) ^
01:53:150(2) 加铃铃铃的声音
02:43:424 转盘这里结束，加条绿线，声音成5%

[Rainbow]
你听说过自己mod自己的难度的吗？哈哈哈！


TwT第一次的mod~
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