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HI !NM here~

[Expert]

please check your aimod when you complete your map

please check your timming section such as 00:00:100 - 00:10:810 -
they will make your map high quality

00:20:999 (4,1,2,3) - i think stagger more better

00:38:594 (8,1) - Can be connected

00:46:459 (1,3,4,5) - maybe too far?

00:52:459 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - maybe you think it is a good idea but i think this will split the DT, FL and HD caused problems

00:54:486 (1,1,2,3) - connect too tight you can put a slider instead of 00:54:486 (1) -

01:01:702 (2) - end on 01:02:027 -

01:02:756 - miss a note

[Insane]

i think cs 4 better than 4.5

00:30:729 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - not enought good

00:45:648 (2,3,4,5) - ^ maybe you can stagger then

00:57:162 (3,4,5) - ^ jump better

01:02:513 (6,1,2) - ^

i think Insane Slider speed too fast ， you can try too reduce the speed

[others]
because i seldom play easy, normal and hard ,i never mod your other difficult

That`s all GL

Gracias, por todo ya lo corregi los problemas
Pero al leer lo que me decias de la dificultad insane, como esta en ingles se me hiso complicado de entender, si lo pudieras explicar mejor, te lo agradeceria.


Thank you, for everything I have corrected the problems
But reading what you told me of the insane difficulty, as it is in English I found it difficult to understand, if you could explain it better, I would thank you.


I invite you to try the map again 7u7

HI~Here

[Insane]

OK , your map insane looks so easy(3.85*)
i think may be is stream is too little

for example(maybe isn`t a good idea):
00:01:721 - 00:01:802 - 00:01:883 - you can put three note for there
00:04:316 - 00:04:397 - 00:04:478 - ^

You can need not so much as expert .


00:06:586 - miss a note.i think add it better

00:07:721 - ^

00:10:964 - your note and slider start to Hit the rhythm of the women voices until 00:16:154 -
but Start from here,your note and slider start to hit the accompaniment.
You can consider the rhythm to beat where at first

00:51:018 (4,1,1) - the Stress has changed

00:54:991 - put note better
01:00:181 - ^

01:26:045 - the note Move there . and the spinner move 01:26:127 - there

my English not enought good . Sorry

Ok, Listo Ya le modifique algunas cosas, la dificultad aumento a *4.01, Pero aun asi no se si lo hice bien pues no entendi otra ves.

Prueba el Mapa otra ves! 7u7

Gracias por toda tu ayudaaaaaa!



Ok, Done I already modified some things, the difficulty increased to * 4.01, But still I do not know if I did it well because I did not understand some things again.

Try the Map again! 7u7

Thanks for all your help!

You should probably make a normal difficulty. Your difficulty spread has to be linear, skipping a difficulty usually isn't okay, but I'm unsure of what the ranking criteria means by skipping easy or normal
Remove the countdown, there isn't enough time for it.
Your background is too large, its resolution is 2135x1199 while the maximum allowed resolution is 1920x1200. Consider finding a smaller background or cropping your current image.
The artist should be 乃木坂46
The title should be 月の大きさ
You don't need your own name in the tags. Consider including other tags to help user search for your map such as Anime, Shounen, Japanese, and the genre of music.
You should probably make combo color 2 and 4 more different from each other, they are too similar.
Don't forget to change the volume of hitsounds to reflect the map in the timing panel under the audio tab. 100% hitsound volume constantly is too loud for your map.
The OD and HP of the easy difficulty are too high. Consider increasing the OD and HP of the harder difficulty, to differ more from the hard difficulty.
The OD and HP of the insane difficulty are way too low. Same with the expert.
Easy:
00:10:316 - move the start of the next slider away from the end of this slider, they are too far away on the timeline to be so close on the screen
Use a simpler slider shape at 00:12:099 - complex slider shapes aren't for easy difficulties
00:28:478 - Consider remapping this with something else. Sliders shouldn't reverse 7 times in an easy difficulty.
00:51:748 - make this all one spinner or add more time in between the two spinners, there is less than 2 beats in between the two spinners to recover.
00:54:424 - Consider adding more time at the end of this spinner to recover
00:58:316 - Move this away from the start of the next slider, they aren't very close together on the timeline.

Thank you for your help, already eh corrected almost everything. I invite you to prove my map other one you see 7v7

Hello, M4M request here, I'll be doing the "Normal" difficulty. (Voy a tratar traducir en espanol)
Normal

1. For a normal difficulty I think a circle size (cs) of 4 is too small. Go to Song Setup and make it at most 3.5, I recommend 3.2. El tamano de los circles es demasiado pequeno. Hace el tamano mas largo, como a 3.5 minimo, Recommiendo cs 3.2 (en el Song Setup menu).
   
2. In my opinion, making the grid level 4 (maximum precision) is unnecessary for a normal map, I'd use grid level 1, grid level 2 max. El precision del grid en tu editor es demasiado preciso. Debes reducir el precision al nivel 1, o 2 maximo. (Vaya a "View" en el izquierda arriba y click "Grid Level." Hagalo a nivel 1 o 2.
   
3. 00:00:586 (1) - and 00:01:883 (1) - should be Hit circles. The opening sound is more like 2 sharp spikes than one long continuous sound. (La primer y el tercer slider deben ser dos hitcircles, porque el sueno es dos altos suenos, y no un largo y suave sueno.
   
4. 00:04:478 (3) - This reverse slider is incorrect in terms of timing. Instead of using a 1/1 time interval division, for this slider, use the 1/6 interval division. This reverse slider should begin at 4.478, and end at 4.802. Este slider es incorrecto, porque el tiempo no es correcto. Debes cambiar el division del tiempo a 1/6 en el arriba a la derrecho. Quando haces eso, cambia el posicion del slider para que empieza a 4.478 y termina a 4.802.
   
5. 00:04:964 (4) - This slider is incorrect in terms of timing. It starts to early. Change the time interval divisor back to 1/4 and make the slider shorter so it starts on the white tick. Este slider es incorrecto en tiempo. Empieza temprano. Cambia el divisor del interval de tiempo a 1/4 y hace el slider mas corto. Mueva el slider para empieza correctamente en el blanco tic.
   
6. 00:06:586 (8,9,1,2,) - This is wrong. The time interval between 8 and 9 is half the length of the time interval between 1 and 2. However, you stacked 8 and 9, and 1 and 2. This makes it difficult for new people to read. You should separate 1 and 2 to indicate that there is a difference in time (a longer one). Esto es incorrecto. El tiempo entre 8 y 9 es medio del tiempo entre 1 y 2. Tu pusiste 8 encima de 9, y 1 encima de 2. Debes mover 1 lejos de 2 para indicar un mas largo interval de tiempo.
   
7. You shouldn't leave 8.370 to 9.910 empty. Put some notes in there, it's an awkward pause. No debes dejar 8.370 a 9.910 basio. Pon algunos objetos alli, porque es un pausa torpe. Considera esto? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8431295
   
8. 00:09:883 (1) - This is wrong like 00:04:478 (3). Change the interval divisor to 1/6 and adjust it to how it sounds. Esto es incorrect como el ejemplo anterior. Cambia lo con el interval 1/6 hasta que suena bueno.
   
9. 00:10:964 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - All of this has near 0 flow. Try to include curvy sliders and add intuitive movement. It's really jittery and unpredictable, and has a boring aesthetic. Todo esto no tiene nada de fluido. Incluye sliders que paracen como circulos, no todo derecho. Incluye movimientos que son intuitivo. Esto es muy dificil para leer y se ve un poco aburrido. Cambia lo para que se vea mejor y que sea mas facil de leer (Para hacer esto, mueve los objetos un distancio que significa cuanto tiempo has pasado.)
   
10. 16.316 to 17.613 should have objects in it, since it's another awkward pause in my opinion. 16.316 a 17.613 debe tener objetos en el medio, porque es un pausa torpe. Considera esto? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8431384
    
11. 00:17:775 (1) - There is no audible sound at this instant. You shouldn't make this a reverse slider, rather a hit circle with a normal slider afterwards. No hay ningun sueno en este tiempo. Debes cambiar esto. No hace un reverse slider, hace un hitcircle con un slider. Como asi: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8431412
    
12. 00:20:370 (6) - This should be a down slider. It breaks the flow you almost built with the last 2 sliders, and it is not consistent with the pattern you were trying to build. It's just better if the slider pointed down. Este slider debe ir abajo. Rompe el dluido que to casi hiciste con los dos sliders anterior. Tambien se ve mejor si el slider va abajo. Como asi: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8431431
    
13. 00:30:748 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - This is all great. Nice job with the flow, it's well done. Esto es todo bueno. Buen trabajo con el fluido y movimiento.
    
14. 00:45:667 (4) - This is wrong, move it a tick before. Esto es incorrecto, mueve lo un tic anterior. El slider es temprano.
    
15. 00:58:640 (2,3,4) - I think this is the wrong way to represent the song. Idk, that slider seems awkward. I changed it to this. El slider 2 es estranyo en me opinion, y no sirve para representar el musico. Creo que debes cambiarlo asi: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8431468 Asi es meno torpe en mi opinion.
    
16. 01:05:775 (5) - I think this slider is too far away. Especially for a normal difficulty. I'd move it closer up. Este slider es demasiado lejo del anterior objeto, y no debe ser tan lejo por un dificulty normal. Debes moverlo mas arriba.
    
17. 01:11:613 (4,1,2) - This stack may be difficult to read, considering how just before you had a move for the same time interval. You should be consistent. Move slider 1 away from under the stack of circle 4. Cuando to pone objetos encima de mas objetos, se llama un stack. El stack aqui pueda ser dificil leer para nuevos jugadores, porque anterior de esto, tu no tenia un stack quando el mismo tiempo paso. Tienes que tener consistencia. Mueva slider 1 para que no sea debajo de circulo 4. Como asi: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8431523
    
18. 01:13:234 (1) - This seems too short, it ends on a weird note a little too early, I'd extend the spinner to 1:17.775. Este spinner suena que se termina un poco temprano. Debes cambiarlo para que se termina a 1:17.775.
    
19. 01:21:018 (1) - This reverse slider breaks flow that you could've made. And I think flow is especially important for newer players. Instead of putting that reverse slider in any random place, I'd put it so it's smooth to hit from the previous slider end. Este reverse slider rompe el fluido que tu podiste hacer. Yo creo que fluido es muy importante para lose jugadores nuevo. Debes poner el reverse slider en un posicion que es facil a lograr del anterior posicion que el anterior slider termina. (My spanish is trash). Considera esto? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8431567
    
20. 01:22:532 (2) - This slider is wrong. You might think it works with 1/4 time interval division, but if you listen at 25 % speed, you'll notice it starts early, and the timing is off. Switch to interval division 1/6 and adjust the slider so that it's timed correctly. Este slider es incorrecto. Quisas tu crees que es bien porque suena casi exacto, pero si tu lo oye en 25% velocidad (en el fondo del pantalla en el derrecho), puedes oir que commencia un poco pronto. Cambia su interval division a 1/6 y cambia el reverse slider para que sea correcto. Como asi: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8431570

This concludes my "Normal" mod. Ayayay, that's the longest mod I've written I think, since I translated too OwO
Good luck with your map, stay determined, continue to learn how to map and get comfy with the editor, you'll probably get to rank this someday!
Send me any messages if you have any questions too.

Harder

00:10:964 (1,2) - Unsnapped
00:27:667 (4,1) - Is not exactly stacked with 00:26:532 (2) -
00:55:072 (5,1) - Not blanked exactly
01:02:856 (1,2,3) - Too
01:20:208 (1) - Weird slider

Insane

00:05:775 (2,3,4) - Not blanked exactly
00:18:424 (6,7,1) - Why did you up the velocity ?
00:23:937 (1) - When you up the velocity , this slider break your combo

Hi, response to M4M request
Hard

00:08:370 (4) - I feel like this would work better if it was two separate sliders instead of one slider since it feels a bit awkward. I think it would feel more dynamic that way since you don't really do much except for holding the note.

00:09:829 (5) - This jump in slider velocity is quite harsh for the difficulty level.

00:18:586 (3) - There are some large gaps here where the rhythm of the instruments plays, probably because the notes follow the rhythm from the instrumental before, and then switch to the rhythm of the vocals. Then, at 00:20:370 (3), it follows the rhythm of the instrumental again.

00:51:829 (1,2) - I don't think these notes should be stacked here, also perhaps a slider would work better here?

01:10:559 (3) - I think you may have made a mistake here, these sliders don't seem to match either of the rhythms from the song. For this difficulty you shouldn't need to use the 1/4 divisor, as this is what I guess caused this mistake. I adjusted it to keep the sliders, space them apart and put a circle in the middle and it seems to work better with the music.

01:12:181 (1) - This note is also unsnapped for the same reason as above

01:13:316 (1) - Ditto, should start at 01:13:397. Also, is a spinner the best option here? I hear other notes in the instrumental that would fit in here instead.

01:23:532 (1) - Some more notes would work better here instead of a spinner in my opinion, considering there is another spinner 3 seconds later. Try to limit your use of spinners to things that emphasize things like the beginning of the song, the buildup before a chorus or the end of a song (they're also exhausting to the player if they last too long!)

Hope my modding helped you
P.S. Don't know why this didn't post earlier, sorry D:

Excellente beatmap
Good luck

No paro de jugar

Thank you very much for your help, my friend. If you helped me enough. Your invite to try the map again

Hi from # modreqs

if you want M4M --->Daisuke - Natsumeku Sakamichi

The song offset is 593 , and BPM 185. Try to test it!

Easy

please open distance snap make sure your distance consistent
00:00:586 (1,2) - level of difficulty Easy not to do so quickly and cannot do so that the slider or circle overlap each other... my suggestions ,separate the overlap on Easy , Behind every overlap suggested amendments
00:04:316 - to 00:10:478 - has to much empty beat , add some note on it
00:27:667 (5,6) - this one is too hard for Beginner
00:28:478 (7) - don't make too much silder back , too hard for Beginner
00:49:883 (1) - spinner end to 00:51:667 -
00:52:316 (1) - this spinner and next one make sure enough reaction time . least 2 1/1
01:00:910 (2,3) - too hard for Beginner

Overall, open DS on Easy



Normal

AR is too fast , the rule Normal AR must be under 5
The same, open DS on Normal

00:27:667 (1) - this spinner is too suddenly...
01:13:235 (1) - make sure enough reaction time ...


Hard

OD up to 6 ,HP up to 5~6

00:14:370 (3,4) - stack it
00:18:586 (3,1) - too close
00:19:072 (1,2,3) - if you want to this rhythm , please make some distance
00:33:181 - has a voice on here
00:38:532 (3) - this one i don't here any note on it... It is 00:38:208 (2) - has long voice need to Emphasize
00:57:667 (6) - NC 00:58:316 (1) - remove NC
01:09:829 (2,3,4) - too hard... bcz the DS too high
01:26:208 (1) - spinner too short


Harder


00:06:262 - has heavy note on here... use silder
00:16:640 (3,4,5) - too close and 00:17:775 (1,2,3,4) - too far . Visual effect not good
00:20:856 (6,7) - too far
00:40:478 (3,4,5) - angle not good
00:41:127 (6) - NC
01:02:856 (1,2) - too close


Insane


00:21:181 (7,1) - Fix blanket
00:38:532 (3,4) - ^
00:40:154 (1) - spinner too short
00:52:478 (8) - has too much silder back cause read map so hard
00:56:046 (4,1) - angle not good
01:00:100 (4,5) - Will be misjudged this..
01:03:829 (3,1) - Fix blanket
01:11:613 (5,6) - not good


Good Luck~

00:08:370 (4) - I feel like this would work better if it was two separate sliders instead of one slider since it feels a bit awkward. I think it would feel more dynamic that way since you don't really do much except for holding the note.

00:09:829 (5) - This jump in slider velocity is quite harsh for the difficulty level.

00:18:586 (3) - There are some large gaps here where the rhythm of the instruments plays, probably because the notes follow the rhythm from the instrumental before, and then switch to the rhythm of the vocals. Then, at 00:20:370 (3), it follows the rhythm of the instrumental again.

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