1. Flight (5.28 stars, 899 notes)

ESKIN wrote:

This is rather subtle, and I'm not sure if it's relevant considering a previous mod, but I think that it might add a nice touch to the map if short kiai were added during the middle section.

Places where you could do this might include breaks and bass kicks (really any part of the song that shortly spikes up in intensity).
For example: 01:49:792 (1)- 01:52:535 (1)- 01:54:935 (6)- 02:00:935 (1)- 02:05:906 (7)- 02:11:735 (1)- and so on.

I'd like to give an actual mod, but I can't seem to find anything that stands out to me in your otherwise magnificent map.

Aro wrote:

Hey! Quick NM. My English isn't fluent so excuse any language mistakes I make during the mod.

Flight

00:50:135 (4,5) - It really lacks emphasis and also flows oddlyfixed, thanks
01:01:106 (5,6) - ^fixed as well
-> The problem about these is that the previous pattering assumes much larger spacing and the aiming movement gets kind of forced for this small gap

01:05:906 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - It's really cluttered, try to use more space of the editor for this spaced this out a little more

01:16:192 (4,5,6,7,1) - This a bit off, cause the 4 doesn't have a vocal (maybe something like this: http://i.imgur.com/0DEnurI.png would make much more sense in my opinion) Revised this to fit vocals better

01:38:820 (1,2,3,4,5) - I don't really know what kind of emphasis you follow here because the 01:39:163 (2) - is widely spaced because of its strong sound, but 01:39:506 (4) - is much less spaced although it has the same sound Is there anything you'd recommend here? I sort of don;t get what you mean but i'll try to improve it

02:09:849 (7) - lacks emphasis (maybe something like http://i.imgur.com/pISZLDj.png) I don't hear an emphatic sound here, and the design would sort of contradict the next stream

02:32:992 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - This stream isn't quite understandable because 02:33:334 (5) - is much stronger than the rest and 02:33:420 (6) - is the weakest sound (maybe something like this: http://i.imgur.com/HRNgJ0W.png)
The previous space decreasing streams are really good! Tried a new pattern with space in between streams,, hopefully it plays well!

02:44:992 (3,7,3) - This sound doesn't get enough emphasis and its spacing is random throughout the whole section until the second Kia starts I try to keep the whole section generally same spacing just like the beginning .-.

03:39:506 (1) - I don't know why this one has these sharp angles because there is literally no sound or whats so ever that's because this is a plane... lol

Good luck with your map o/

FinL wrote:

New to modding so please forgive me for not making sense Dx

Flight

01:19:449 (5) - Move to x:348, y:364. It puts more emphasis on the deep note at that point. You'll know what I'm talking about when you see it. done
02:04:878 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Rearrange all these circles like this and this. It puts more emphasis on the halt in the song after the 7th note. made a slight variation of what you suggested but good point!
02:33:334 (5) - nc. It makes it easier to read. done

Great map and song! Looking forward for it to be ranked.