Marie & Shimotsuki Haruka - Hane no Naki Chou · forum

KanbeKotori

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KanbeKotori 2011-08-26T16:27:29+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年10月26日 at 0:34:11

Artist: Marie & Shimotsuki Haruka
Title: Hane no Naki Chou
Source: Hane no Naki Chou
Tags: arcane753
BPM: 143
Filesize: 7279kb
Play Time: 03:55
Difficulties Available:

Easy (2.39 stars, 235 notes)
Hard (4.69 stars, 512 notes)
Insane (5 stars, 727 notes)
Normal (3.78 stars, 296 notes)

Download: Marie & Shimotsuki Haruka - Hane no Naki Chou
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Thx quintitem's lyric SB \\\\\0.0/////

Map for Birthday \:D/.

羽ノ亡キ蝶（vocal: 真理絵·霜月はるか）

(C80) arcane753 - 羽ノ亡キ蝶

Easy: 100%
Normal: 100%
Hard: 100%
Insane: 100%

Last edited by KanbeKotori 2011-10-25T16:34:26+00:00, edited 21 times in total.

DeadAlready

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DeadAlready 2011-09-05T10:06:30+00:00

35666 Marie & Shimotsuki Haruka - Hane no Naki Chou.rar
.__.你老妹的系統一個最大只能傳512kb :<

Download: 35666 Marie & Shimotsuki Haruka - Hane no Naki Chou.part1.rar
Download: 35666 Marie & Shimotsuki Haruka - Hane no Naki Chou.part2.rar

:\兩個都放進去你map資料夾解壓縮就好.

edit: 我說你會不會發現得太快了點... D:

Last edited by DeadAlready 2011-09-05T10:08:18+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

KanbeKotori

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KanbeKotori 2011-09-05T10:07:12+00:00

quintitem wrote:
35666 Marie & Shimotsuki Haruka - Hane no Naki Chou.rar
.__.你老妹的一個最大只能傳512kb :<

[attachment=1:6d023]35666 Marie & Shimotsuki Haruka - Hane no Naki Chou.part1.rar[/attachment:6d023]
[attachment=0:6d023]35666 Marie & Shimotsuki Haruka - Hane no Naki Chou.part2.rar[/attachment:6d023]

:\兩個都放進去你map資料夾解壓縮就好.

辛苦学姐了 \:D/

rui

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Joined February 2009

rui 2011-09-14T07:05:58+00:00

from twitter \: D/
In my mod. You can ignore me

[Easy]

00:10:787 (5) - add new combo
00:13:725 - add note and add clap
01:22:955 (4) - add finish
01:24:634 (1) - Consecutive spiner is too difficult in easy, you should change long slider
03:52:326 (1) - ^
02:43:515 (4) - add finish
03:00:298 (5,6) - two note overlapping. please delete (5)
03:23:794 (4) - add finish
03:50:648 (4) - ^

[Normal]

00:10:787 (1) - add whistle
└00:11:207 - add note 00:11:207
└00:11:417 - (2) you should move note 00:11:627 (this note is not match the rhythm)
01:21:277 (1) add finish
01:22:955 (3) - ^
02:41:836 (1) - ^
02:43:515 (5) - ^
03:22:116 (1) - ^
03:22:955 (2) - Distances are different
03:23:794 (3) - add finish
03:48:969 (1) - ^
03:50:648 (5) - ^

[Hard]

00:46:032 - this break time is too short, you should delete break time
02:06:592 - ^
01:21:906 - How about something like this, http://puu.sh/5Bsl
01:23:585 - ^ http://puu.sh/5Bsy
02:43:725 (1) sliders start add whistle
03:23:585 (4) add whistle
03:24:424 (2) sliders end add whistle
03:25:263 (4) add whistle
03:24:843 (2) add revers, become slider end 03:55:263

[Insane]

02:08:270 (1,2) - remove whistle and add finish
02:11:627 (1,2) - ^
02:47:291 - How about something like this, http://puu.sh/5BvM
03:24:843 (2) add revers, become slider end 03:55:263

This song is very nice, your map is very very nice

yeahyeahyeahhh

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yeahyeahyeahhh 2011-09-15T03:47:04+00:00

hi o.o/

General:
- 6 MS offset? I think a bit better >~<

Insane:
01:06:906 (7,8) - I think this kinda plays bad.. imo x.x maybe just like this:

SPOILER

01:15:822 (2) - Maybe not overlap? Kinda hard to see
01:20:333 (7,8) - Same thing like what I said earlier
02:27:046 (6,7) - ^
03:34:179 (6,7) - ^
03:47:606 (6,7) - ^

Hard:
AR+1 ?
00:46:242 - Remove this break? Looks like this in play:

SPOILER

02:06:801 - ^

Rest fine, nice!

eveless

2,080 posts

Joined April 2009

eveless 2011-09-19T11:56:49+00:00

[Insane]
00:48:550 (2) - 尾巴加whistle 其实如果再加个clap会更好当然加不加随便你如果这个clap加了那么后面00:50:648 (6) - 也补个clap
00:50:648 (6) - ^
00:53:165 (5) - 开头clap
01:04:913 (1) - 这个形状不好看...
01:10:368 (3,4) - 前后spacing不一样不是故意的就改了吧
01:12:676 (3) - 23之间比12之间距离稍小
02:03:235 (1,2,3,4) - 不觉得4的位置怪吗..感觉他和123整体上不协调或者说觉得1234和1整体上看起来是歪的
02:24:739 (7,9) - 删clap?至少7肯定删
02:44:144 (2,3) - 要不这边new combo对应前面要不前面的new combo取消对应这边
02:48:550 (1) - 尾部+whistle
02:49:179 (3) - whistle
02:50:018 (3) - ^
02:50:333 (2,3,4) - 3取消whistle 24补上
02:51:067 (7) - 头尾whistle都加
02:51:487 (8) - 尾whistle
02:51:906 (1) - 头finish 尾补一个whistle clap保留
02:52:746 (3) - 头whistle
02:53:165 (4) - 头尾whistle或者尾whistle都行
02:53:899 (3,5) - whistle 6的whistle删了
02:55:263 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 1尾 2头 4 57 whistle 8的whistle删了
02:56:941 (1) - finish
02:57:151 (2,4) - whistle
02:57:780 (1,2,3,4) - 1头 4 加whistle
03:00:927 (1) - 开头whistle?
03:01:976 (3) - finish?

[Hard]
00:08:899 (7) - 间距
00:13:305 (3) - ^
01:50:857 (4) - ^
02:15:613 (2) - ^
03:16:662 (2) - ^
03:39:739 (4) - 往右上一点离5头部稍微近一点现在看上去和3比较靠近

[Normal]
03:23:794 (3) - 最好new combo 或者你解决掉spacing问题

KanbeKotori

315 posts

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Topic Starter

KanbeKotori 2011-10-14T14:32:28+00:00

All most all fixed. Thx for modding.

Sure

4,219 posts

Joined February 2009

Sure 2011-10-14T15:46:01+00:00

Hi Kanbe

Mod for my favorite mapper.

[Insane]
02:14:144 (1) - Remove new combo to be consistent with 00:53:585 (6)
02:14:564 (4) - Then new combo
02:45:193 (1) - Add finish
03:22:746 (2) - Hard to see return arrow

[Hard]
I suggest OD 5
00:44:354 (1) - Add clap? / Add a timing point at end of spinner as Normal/Easy
02:04:913 (1) - ^
02:14:144 (1) - Remove new combo
02:14:564 (4) - New combo to be consistent with 00:54:004 (1)
02:45:193 (1) - Add finish
03:20:228 (3,4,5) - They seems not so good in play due to stacks. Try position x:224/y:160

[Normal]
00:32:291 - Insert break. Bcuz you used break in Hard and Easy
00:44:354 (1) - Add clap?
01:53:270 - Insert break
02:04:913 (1) - Add clap? / Add a timing point to be consistent with 00:44:354 (1)
02:26:312 (2) - Add clap
02:45:193 (1) - Add finish
03:33:445 (2) - Add clap

[Easy]
00:44:354 (1) - Add clap?
01:52:536 - Insert break
02:01:557 (1) - Add finish to start of slider
02:04:914 (1) - Add clap? / Add a timing point to be consistent with 00:44:354 (1)
02:45:194 (1) - Add finish
03:22:116 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - one grid down

Nice map as usual.

Colin Hou

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Colin Hou 2011-10-19T14:48:51+00:00

[General]:

display storyboard in front of combo fire

[Insane]:

03:22:746 (2) - 挡了个正着虽然说很明显是折返但是稳妥点还是稍微移动下03:22:326 (1,2,3)整体
其他没了好沙包的图 -w-

[Hard]:

AR+1 OD+2 (差点写成APAD)
00:32:606, 01:53:165 (T) - 这种break就不要了吧
03:42:885 (6,1,2,3,1) - 这里spacing一致下?

然后除了歌词老是在logo附近出现消失影响视线以外木了

Breeze

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Breeze 2011-10-20T12:28:38+00:00

SB

歌词SB在左边注意力完全被logo抢去了, 为什么不把歌词SB放在背景图右边空旷的地方?

Hard

02:00:088 (5) - 这个没太预料到是2回转, 建议用一个1回转的slider然后再stack一个note会更好认些
02:37:431 (5) - 有可能只是我个人感觉, 这个stack的短slider容易误读成note

Insane

00:27:571 (1) - 不加finish?
00:34:284 (1) - 貌似这个没必要new combo吧
01:20:333 (7) - 这个spacing远了点, 容易误读成1/2拍间距
03:34:179 (6), 03:47:606 (6) - ^, 这两个要好些, 其实完全可以把这个note放在两个slider中间, 这样又美观又好认

nice map
star

xierbaliti

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xierbaliti 2011-10-20T12:30:11+00:00

哇

KanbeKotori

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Topic Starter

KanbeKotori 2011-10-23T13:02:03+00:00

All most all fixed. Thx for modding

xierbaliti

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xierbaliti 2011-10-23T15:18:28+00:00

SPOILER

-Insane-
00:33:235 (3,4) - 这里听着略违和在(4)那+个clap如何?
01:53:480 (3,4,5) - ^

ok looks good now, bubbled!

Andrea

Beatmap Nominator

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Andrea 2011-10-25T16:30:43+00:00

[Insane]

01:43:934 (1,2,3) - This pattern has a different spacing compared to the rest of the map and it can be really confusing.

Other than that nothing else, fix and I'll be able to rank.

KanbeKotori

315 posts

Joined May 2009

Topic Starter

KanbeKotori 2011-10-25T16:35:13+00:00

osuplayer111 wrote:
[Insane]

01:43:934 (1,2,3) - This pattern has a different spacing compared to the rest of the map and it can be really confusing.

Other than that nothing else, fix and I'll be able to rank.

Fixed~