[Nemesis] wrote:
M4M
Easy
00:12:897 (3,1) - I think the red anchors there should be in the middle of the sliders, just looks a bit better since they're copypasted not big problem but fixed little
00:17:949 (3) - I think u can bend it a lil more, this shape doesn't really look too distinguishable its just slightly smooth slider
00:24:897 (4) - move it in the place of (1) and move (1) a bit further for better flow fixed
00:43:213 (3,4) - no more copypaste? feels weird compared to what you've established before imo i dont see where that got repearted lo
00:53:318 (3) - same as before
00:58:370 (3) - this song is way too soft for such a wild shape, soften it out accordingly to previous sliders (btw what's that second to last white anchor doing there) its not wild it goes slow tho
01:31:213 (3) - quieter section deserves lower SV this is an easy i dont want sv changes that confuse the new players
02:31:843 - cringy-ass korean engrish strikes again
Normal
00:25:528 (1,2) - bend them a little more, it's unnoticable in gameplay as it is rn they are fine i dont get
01:29:318 (2,3,4) - same shapes there, since the song doesn't change at all. also equal spacing so what this is a normal i just like to simplify shapes same and i dont think the music didnt change since that part still in the chorus
02:13:528 (4,1) - feels weird, use the same angle for a clearer space between them its intentional i like them
03:18:896 (3,4) - blanket is off fixed
One day
00:26:792 (6,7,8) - looks ugly, I know they're spaced equally but three shapes with the same angle would feel smoother, right now 00:26:792 (6,7) - these two seem to be standing out too much fix
00:45:265 (7,8,9) - put these on 00:45:739 (1) - for consistency w/ your previous patterns i never used triples on head of slider so ye
01:00:265 (7) - ugly shape thank you thats really nice
01:21:107 (1) - ^, besides it's copypasted they are not same and copy past is not wrong it keeps the structure holding on
01:51:422 - didn't you forget to map something here? :v no i want break
02:11:002 (7,1) - make these blanket i dont want
02:39:422 (1,2,3,4) - they're not equally spaced, even though they should be not a big difference
03:19:212 (7,1) - don't overlap them, this just looks plain ugly thats clean slider body overlap
03:35:001 - since it's the last diff I think u can map this too
gl
[A L P H A] wrote:
m4m!
[Easy]yea, so thats all
- 02:07:844 (4) - maybe move this forward for better flow fix
- 02:43:212 (2) - make those red points straight like this fix
- 02:50:001 - remove this bookmark not really big deal lo
sry for short mod, dont give kudos if you want
i didnt saw anything in normal and hard so i didnt show up anything
PandaHero wrote:
M4m from your queue.
[Onegday]
Will be cool, if you make some spacing changes, it's low bpm hard diff, so it can be mapped without ds. yeahh but it will change sr i like keep it balanced
00:13:528 (3,4,5,6) - eeeh, too close, make a distance between 3 and 4 similar to distance between 2 and 3 sliders. fixed
00:26:792 (6) - I would like to make it as a two notes because of strong vocal on the blue tick. yes but the pattern that comes after has more intesity so i made that emphasize there
00:47:792 (7,1) - fix blanket kd pls fixed
01:45:106 (5,6,7,8) - 4 same sliders and different vocal, try smth like this. i like how it is rn :c
02:39:422 (1,2,3,4) - same problem here.
01:50:159 (5) - ctrl+g? This movement will cool with this vocal. fixed
01:50:791 (8) - hm, maybe will be better to keep following vocal in this part? This sider feels so strange after fast sliders section. okay
01:51:422 - 02:09:423 - aaaaa, this break is soooo long, why you didn't map it? :c :w:w::w::w:w!w!!w:w:
Hitsounds:
00:13:844 (4) - you forgot to add whistle here.
00:23:633 (3) - add clap on slider's head?
00:26:476 (5) - whistle
00:34:055 (4) - ^
00:35:476 (8) - ^
00:39:423 (5) - whistle on the slider's end?
00:40:371 (8) - ^
00:43:844 (3) - ^
00:45:581 (9) - whistle
00:46:686 (4) - whislte on slider's head
01:39:739 (4) - ^
01:49:843 (4) - ^
02:42:896 (4) -^
02:21:107 (7) - clap on slider's head
03:24:264 (7) - ^
fixed alll hs
[Normal]
00:16:686 (3) - it will looks better, if you rotate this slider 15 degrees anti-clockwise.
02:48:264 (3) - feels strange because of vocal on red tick, I recommend to make it as a 1/2 slider.
03:33:738 (3) - ^
fixed all
Hitsounds:
00:13:528 (2) - whistle on the slider's end.
00:26:160 (2) - ^
01:39:423 (2) - ^
00:23:633 - add clap here.
00:34:055 (2) - whistle
00:44:160 (2) - ^
00:49:213 (2) - ^
01:48:897 (1) - add clap on the slider's end.
01:49:844 (2) - whistle
01:51:423 - 02:07:844 - looks like you forgot to hitsound this part o.o
02:10:055 (2) - whistle
02:21:107 (4) - clap on the slider's head.
03:24:264 (4) - ^
02:42:580 (2) - whistle on the slider's end.
fixed
[Easy]
01:31:213 (3) - put nc?
02:11:634 (3) - ^ but i nc after every 2 downbeats
Hitsounds:
00:29:318 (4) - clap on the slider's end.
01:16:686 (4) - ^
01:48:897 (1) - ^
02:43:213 (2) - ^
02:44:476 (3) - ^
02:50:792 (4) - ^
03:15:423 (2) - ^
03:17:318 (3) - ^
03:20:476 (2) - ^
03:22:371 (3,4) - ^
03:30:581 (2) - ^
03:32:476 (3) - ^
01:51:423 (3) - clap on the reverse arrow.
01:53:949 (1) - ^
01:53:318 (4) - clap
01:53:949 (1) - whistle on the slider's head.
01:55:844 (2) - clap
(looks like you forgot to hitsound this part again)
02:21:107 (2) - clap
yes i forgot LOL thx fixed
Good luck with this set.
thank you all for mod x)Neoskylove wrote:
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[one day]
00:13:843 (4,5,6) - this stack makes weird visual with 00:13:528 (3) - ,looks little bit overlapped when I see ingame. fixed
00:45:581 (9,1) - DS? fixed
01:51:106 - adding a beat can be better imo. fixed
Good map. GL