BTS - Just One Day

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Lilyanna
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Tuesday, August 15, 2017 at 4:07:33 PM

Artist: BTS
Title: Just One Day
Tags: BigHit Entertainment 로엔 엔터테인먼트 LOEN Skool Luv Affair 2nd mini 랩몬스터 Rap Monster 진 Jin 슈가 Suga 제이홉 J-Hope 지민 Jimin 뷔 V 정국 Jungkook K-pop Kpop Beyond The Scene
BPM: 95
Filesize: 27564kb
Play Time: 03:55
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.08 stars, 137 notes)
  2. Normal (1.73 stars, 276 notes)
  3. One Day (2.82 stars, 587 notes)


Download: BTS - Just One Day
Download: BTS - Just One Day (no video)
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I made this mv above i hope armys like it owo #LOVE_YOURSELF



Can you please stay with me?

Easy by me
Normal by me
One Day by me
Hitsounds by me
Video by ezek

If only I had just one day
I want to peacefully fall asleep intoxicated with your sweet scent
If there’s a chance in my busy schedule
I want to put my body in your warm and deep eyes
I like that, your long, straight hair
Your breathtaking neck when you put it up and the strands that fall out
Wherever we go, my handbag is your waist
Yo ma honey, whenever I see you, I run out of breath
Like the streets of Myungdong, our BGM is the sound of breathing
Your voice when you say my name
I wanna be locked in you and swim in you, I want to know you more
An explorer venturing through your deep forest of mystery
I appreciate the masterpiece that is you because your existence alone is art
I imagine this all night every day because it’s a meaningless dream anyway

Just one day, if I can be with you
Just one day, if I can hold your hands
Just one day, if I can be with you
Just one day (just one day)

If only we can be together
(Do It Do It Do It)
I hope I can be with you for just one day
(Do It Do It Do It)

Having a party party with only you
(Do It Do It Do It)
I hope I can be with you for just one day
(Do It Do It Do It)

A party party with only you
If only I could do that, how nice would it be
If only we could go anywhere to eat and watch a movie comfortably
I would do anything girl
I’m sorry, maybe I’m too rational
But still, if you see me some day, smile
Maybe you resent me a little or no, a lot
I know, I couldn’t look at you more because of my dream
Then just give me one day, even if it’s in my dream, just one day
Out of all those words I had to swallow because of the excuse of reality
I’ll pick one and tell it to you for sure
Let’s meet when the lilies bloom and say goodbye when they wither
I didn’t think I’d get over you easily but
Is it selfish of me to hope you are the same?
I’m still lying, saying that it’s all for you
You are standing in the center of my life

Just one day, if I can be with you
Just one day, if I can hold your hands
Just one day, if I can be with you
Just one day (just one day)

If you are and I are together, let’s go time
24 hours, if I could only be with you
I’d kiss you starting from the morning
Can’t forget to grab some brunch
I’d hold your hand and soak up the sun
It’s not over yet, in the middle of a beautiful night
I’ll confess to you, with the moon as our light
All of these things tell me

“If I have just one day, it’s possible”

Just one day, if I can be with you
Just one day, if I can hold your hands
Just one day, if I can be with you
Just one day (just one day)

If only we can be together
(Do It Do It Do It)
I hope I can be with you for just one day
(Do It Do It Do It)

Having a party party with only you
(Do It Do It Do It)
I hope I can be with you for just one day
(Do It Do It Do It)

If only we can be together
(Do It Do It Do It)
I hope I can be with you for just one day
(Do It Do It Do It)

If only we can be together

Can you please stay with me?
[Nemesis]
M4M

Easy

00:12:897 (3,1) - I think the red anchors there should be in the middle of the sliders, just looks a bit better since they're copypasted
00:17:949 (3) - I think u can bend it a lil more, this shape doesn't really look too distinguishable
00:24:897 (4) - move it in the place of (1) and move (1) a bit further for better flow
00:43:213 (3,4) - no more copypaste? feels weird compared to what you've established before imo
00:53:318 (3) - same as before
00:58:370 (3) - this song is way too soft for such a wild shape, soften it out accordingly to previous sliders (btw what's that second to last white anchor doing there)
01:31:213 (3) - quieter section deserves lower SV
02:31:843 - cringy-ass korean engrish strikes again

Normal

00:25:528 (1,2) - bend them a little more, it's unnoticable in gameplay as it is rn
01:29:318 (2,3,4) - same shapes there, since the song doesn't change at all. also equal spacing
02:13:528 (4,1) - feels weird, use the same angle for a clearer space between them
03:18:896 (3,4) - blanket is off

One day

00:26:792 (6,7,8) - looks ugly, I know they're spaced equally but three shapes with the same angle would feel smoother, right now 00:26:792 (6,7) - these two seem to be standing out too much
00:45:265 (7,8,9) - put these on 00:45:739 (1) - for consistency w/ your previous patterns
01:00:265 (7) - ugly shape
01:21:107 (1) - ^, besides it's copypasted
01:51:422 - didn't you forget to map something here? :v
02:11:002 (7,1) - make these blanket
02:39:422 (1,2,3,4) - they're not equally spaced, even though they should be
03:19:212 (7,1) - don't overlap them, this just looks plain ugly
03:35:001 - since it's the last diff I think u can map this too

gl
[A L P H A]
m4m!

[Easy]
  1. 02:07:844 (4) - maybe move this forward for better flow
  2. 02:43:212 (2) - make those red points straight like this
  3. 02:50:001 - remove this bookmark


yea, so thats all

sry for short mod, dont give kudos if you want

i didnt saw anything in normal and hard so i didnt show up anything
PandaHero
M4m from your queue.

[One gday]
Will be cool, if you make some spacing changes, it's low bpm hard diff, so it can be mapped without ds.

00:13:528 (3,4,5,6) - eeeh, too close, make a distance between 3 and 4 similar to distance between 2 and 3 sliders.
00:26:792 (6) - I would like to make it as a two notes because of strong vocal on the blue tick.
00:47:792 (7,1) - fix blanket kd pls
01:45:106 (5,6,7,8) - 4 same sliders and different vocal, try smth like this.
02:39:422 (1,2,3,4) - same problem here.
01:50:159 (5) - ctrl+g? This movement will cool with this vocal.
01:50:791 (8) - hm, maybe will be better to keep following vocal in this part? This sider feels so strange after fast sliders section.
01:51:422 - 02:09:423 - aaaaa, this break is soooo long, why you didn't map it? :c

Hitsounds:
00:13:844 (4) - you forgot to add whistle here.
00:23:633 (3) - add clap on slider's head?
00:26:476 (5) - whistle
00:34:055 (4) - ^
00:35:476 (8) - ^
00:39:423 (5) - whistle on the slider's end?
00:40:371 (8) - ^
00:43:844 (3) - ^
00:45:581 (9) - whistle
00:46:686 (4) - whislte on slider's head
01:39:739 (4) - ^
01:49:843 (4) - ^
02:42:896 (4) -^
02:21:107 (7) - clap on slider's head
03:24:264 (7) - ^

[Normal]
00:16:686 (3) - it will looks better, if you rotate this slider 15 degrees anti-clockwise.
02:48:264 (3) - feels strange because of vocal on red tick, I recommend to make it as a 1/2 slider.
03:33:738 (3) - ^

Hitsounds:
00:13:528 (2) - whistle on the slider's end.
00:26:160 (2) - ^
01:39:423 (2) - ^
00:23:633 - add clap here.
00:34:055 (2) - whistle
00:44:160 (2) - ^
00:49:213 (2) - ^
01:48:897 (1) - add clap on the slider's end.
01:49:844 (2) - whistle
01:51:423 - 02:07:844 - looks like you forgot to hitsound this part o.o
02:10:055 (2) - whistle
02:21:107 (4) - clap on the slider's head.
03:24:264 (4) - ^
02:42:580 (2) - whistle on the slider's end.

[Easy]
01:31:213 (3) - put nc?
02:11:634 (3) - ^

Hitsounds:
00:29:318 (4) - clap on the slider's end.
01:16:686 (4) - ^
01:48:897 (1) - ^
02:43:213 (2) - ^
02:44:476 (3) - ^
02:50:792 (4) - ^
03:15:423 (2) - ^
03:17:318 (3) - ^
03:20:476 (2) - ^
03:22:371 (3,4) - ^
03:30:581 (2) - ^
03:32:476 (3) - ^
01:51:423 (3) - clap on the reverse arrow.
01:53:949 (1) - ^
01:53:318 (4) - clap
01:53:949 (1) - whistle on the slider's head.
01:55:844 (2) - clap
(looks like you forgot to hitsound this part again)
02:21:107 (2) - clap

Good luck with this set.
Affirmation
Q

[one day]
00:13:843 (4,5,6) - this stack makes weird visual with 00:13:528 (3) - ,looks little bit overlapped when I see ingame.
00:45:581 (9,1) - DS?
01:51:106 - adding a beat can be better imo.

Good map. GL
Topic Starter
Lilyanna

[Nemesis] wrote:

M4M

Easy

00:12:897 (3,1) - I think the red anchors there should be in the middle of the sliders, just looks a bit better since they're copypasted not big problem but fixed little
00:17:949 (3) - I think u can bend it a lil more, this shape doesn't really look too distinguishable its just slightly smooth slider
00:24:897 (4) - move it in the place of (1) and move (1) a bit further for better flow fixed
00:43:213 (3,4) - no more copypaste? feels weird compared to what you've established before imo i dont see where that got repearted lo
00:53:318 (3) - same as before
00:58:370 (3) - this song is way too soft for such a wild shape, soften it out accordingly to previous sliders (btw what's that second to last white anchor doing there) its not wild it goes slow tho
01:31:213 (3) - quieter section deserves lower SV this is an easy i dont want sv changes that confuse the new players
02:31:843 - cringy-ass korean engrish strikes again

Normal

00:25:528 (1,2) - bend them a little more, it's unnoticable in gameplay as it is rn they are fine i dont get
01:29:318 (2,3,4) - same shapes there, since the song doesn't change at all. also equal spacing so what this is a normal i just like to simplify shapes same and i dont think the music didnt change since that part still in the chorus
02:13:528 (4,1) - feels weird, use the same angle for a clearer space between them its intentional i like them
03:18:896 (3,4) - blanket is off fixed

One day

00:26:792 (6,7,8) - looks ugly, I know they're spaced equally but three shapes with the same angle would feel smoother, right now 00:26:792 (6,7) - these two seem to be standing out too much fix
00:45:265 (7,8,9) - put these on 00:45:739 (1) - for consistency w/ your previous patterns i never used triples on head of slider so ye
01:00:265 (7) - ugly shape thank you thats really nice
01:21:107 (1) - ^, besides it's copypasted they are not same and copy past is not wrong it keeps the structure holding on
01:51:422 - didn't you forget to map something here? :v no i want break
02:11:002 (7,1) - make these blanket i dont want
02:39:422 (1,2,3,4) - they're not equally spaced, even though they should be not a big difference
03:19:212 (7,1) - don't overlap them, this just looks plain ugly thats clean slider body overlap
03:35:001 - since it's the last diff I think u can map this too

gl

[A L P H A] wrote:

m4m!

[Easy]
  1. 02:07:844 (4) - maybe move this forward for better flow fix
  2. 02:43:212 (2) - make those red points straight like this fix
  3. 02:50:001 - remove this bookmark not really big deal lo


yea, so thats all

sry for short mod, dont give kudos if you want

i didnt saw anything in normal and hard so i didnt show up anything

PandaHero wrote:

M4m from your queue.

[One gday]
Will be cool, if you make some spacing changes, it's low bpm hard diff, so it can be mapped without ds. yeahh but it will change sr i like keep it balanced

00:13:528 (3,4,5,6) - eeeh, too close, make a distance between 3 and 4 similar to distance between 2 and 3 sliders. fixed
00:26:792 (6) - I would like to make it as a two notes because of strong vocal on the blue tick. yes but the pattern that comes after has more intesity so i made that emphasize there
00:47:792 (7,1) - fix blanket kd pls fixed
01:45:106 (5,6,7,8) - 4 same sliders and different vocal, try smth like this. i like how it is rn :c
02:39:422 (1,2,3,4) - same problem here.
01:50:159 (5) - ctrl+g? This movement will cool with this vocal. fixed
01:50:791 (8) - hm, maybe will be better to keep following vocal in this part? This sider feels so strange after fast sliders section. okay
01:51:422 - 02:09:423 - aaaaa, this break is soooo long, why you didn't map it? :c :w:w::w::w:w!w!!w:w:

Hitsounds:
00:13:844 (4) - you forgot to add whistle here.
00:23:633 (3) - add clap on slider's head?
00:26:476 (5) - whistle
00:34:055 (4) - ^
00:35:476 (8) - ^
00:39:423 (5) - whistle on the slider's end?
00:40:371 (8) - ^
00:43:844 (3) - ^
00:45:581 (9) - whistle
00:46:686 (4) - whislte on slider's head
01:39:739 (4) - ^
01:49:843 (4) - ^
02:42:896 (4) -^
02:21:107 (7) - clap on slider's head
03:24:264 (7) - ^

fixed alll hs

[Normal]
00:16:686 (3) - it will looks better, if you rotate this slider 15 degrees anti-clockwise.
02:48:264 (3) - feels strange because of vocal on red tick, I recommend to make it as a 1/2 slider.
03:33:738 (3) - ^
fixed all
Hitsounds:
00:13:528 (2) - whistle on the slider's end.
00:26:160 (2) - ^
01:39:423 (2) - ^
00:23:633 - add clap here.
00:34:055 (2) - whistle
00:44:160 (2) - ^
00:49:213 (2) - ^
01:48:897 (1) - add clap on the slider's end.
01:49:844 (2) - whistle
01:51:423 - 02:07:844 - looks like you forgot to hitsound this part o.o
02:10:055 (2) - whistle
02:21:107 (4) - clap on the slider's head.
03:24:264 (4) - ^
02:42:580 (2) - whistle on the slider's end.

fixed

[Easy]
01:31:213 (3) - put nc?
02:11:634 (3) - ^ but i nc after every 2 downbeats

Hitsounds:
00:29:318 (4) - clap on the slider's end.
01:16:686 (4) - ^
01:48:897 (1) - ^
02:43:213 (2) - ^
02:44:476 (3) - ^
02:50:792 (4) - ^
03:15:423 (2) - ^
03:17:318 (3) - ^
03:20:476 (2) - ^
03:22:371 (3,4) - ^
03:30:581 (2) - ^
03:32:476 (3) - ^
01:51:423 (3) - clap on the reverse arrow.
01:53:949 (1) - ^
01:53:318 (4) - clap
01:53:949 (1) - whistle on the slider's head.
01:55:844 (2) - clap
(looks like you forgot to hitsound this part again)
02:21:107 (2) - clap

yes i forgot LOL thx fixed

Good luck with this set.

Neoskylove wrote:

Q

[one day]
00:13:843 (4,5,6) - this stack makes weird visual with 00:13:528 (3) - ,looks little bit overlapped when I see ingame. fixed
00:45:581 (9,1) - DS? fixed
01:51:106 - adding a beat can be better imo. fixed

Good map. GL
thank you all for mod x)
AnimeStyle
FROM MY QUEUE


[General]

I suggest mapping the last 10% - if not I would cut the rest and letting the song fade out after the map is finished.
The BG scares me. For real xD

[Easy]

00:23:001 (3) - add clap
00:29:318 (4) - add clap
00:43:213 (3,4) - you should try to keep the 0,80 distance at every part of the slider #NITPICKING
00:50:792 (1,2) - that extra slider point makes the sliders go ew - would just make them curvy
00:58:370 (3) - looks nicer with the second sliderpoint being put a bit to the left
01:02:159 (2,3) - keeping the same distance between them improves the looks - so I've heard
01:38:791 (1,3) - put the beginning of (3) perfectly under (1)
02:21:107 (2) - add clap
02:23:002 (4,1) - spacing issues again
02:31:843 - I don't think that pause is neccesary but artistic freedom - if you're fine with it so be it ( I know it's bc of lengh)
02:43:212 (2) - add clap
02:44:476 (3) - add clap
02:50:792 (4) - add clap
03:16:685 (2) - add clap
03:17:948 (2) - add clap
03:21:738 (2) - add clap
03:22:371 (3) - ^
03:23:264 (4) - ^
03:31:843 (2) - ^
03:33:106 (3) - ^
03:35:001 (1) - relocate this to x 100 y 84

Nice and relaxing diff overall c:

[Normal]

00:53:948 (2,3,4) - looks better when they are all the same distance apart
01:58:370 (4,2) - create a perfect overlap
02:47:633 (2,4) - use the same slider for (4) as (2)

Flow and patterns are really pleasing to see playing out like they do

[One day]

01:51:422 - This pause isn't needed - also it's inconsistent throughout the mapset
03:15:422 (3,4) - dunno why, but together, they don't really look appealing

Every 1/16 slider should be proud of you

So fond of your mapset, I dislike the song - but that doesn't keep your map from being A+

I hope I can help you ^^
Topic Starter
Lilyanna

AnimeStyle wrote:

FROM MY QUEUE


[General]

I suggest mapping the last 10% - if not I would cut the rest and letting the song fade out after the map is finished.maybe :eyes:
The BG scares me. For real xD XD

[Easy]

00:23:001 (3) - add clap
00:29:318 (4) - add clap
00:43:213 (3,4) - you should try to keep the 0,80 distance at every part of the slider #NITPICKING
00:50:792 (1,2) - that extra slider point makes the sliders go ew - would just make them curvy
00:58:370 (3) - looks nicer with the second sliderpoint being put a bit to the left
01:02:159 (2,3) - keeping the same distance between them improves the looks - so I've heard
01:38:791 (1,3) - put the beginning of (3) perfectly under (1)
02:21:107 (2) - add clap
02:23:002 (4,1) - spacing issues again no big deal xd
02:31:843 - I don't think that pause is neccesary but artistic freedom - if you're fine with it so be it ( I know it's bc of lengh) i think it should be fine
02:43:212 (2) - add clap
02:44:476 (3) - add clap
02:50:792 (4) - add clap
03:16:685 (2) - add clap
03:17:948 (2) - add clap
03:21:738 (2) - add clap
03:22:371 (3) - ^
03:23:264 (4) - ^
03:31:843 (2) - ^
03:33:106 (3) - ^
03:35:001 (1) - relocate this to x 100 y 84

Nice and relaxing diff overall c:

[Normal]

00:53:948 (2,3,4) - looks better when they are all the same distance apart
01:58:370 (4,2) - create a perfect overlap thats the perfect it can get
02:47:633 (2,4) - use the same slider for (4) as (2) i like the pattern like that


Flow and patterns are really pleasing to see playing out like they do

[One day]

01:51:422 - This pause isn't needed - also it's inconsistent throughout the mapset ill map it i need more opinionns
03:15:422 (3,4) - dunno why, but together, they don't really look appealing

Every 1/16 slider should be proud of you

So fond of your mapset, I dislike the song - but that doesn't keep your map from being A+

I hope I can help you ^^
no reply = fixed
thx for mod x)
CucumberCuc
Hi

[Normal]
00:53:948 (2,3,4) different range
01:48:896 (1,2,3) different range
03:33:738 (3,4) it's very are close, fix it

sorry if a little, but as for me, all diffs look good (good job)
Zero__wind
ok let's do it again, I guess I might have forgot points

General
clear
good that you already made the breaktime more consistent and reasonable

Easy
I think useing HP2 OD2 should fit such an easy better and better for diff spread
01:38:791 (5) - should NC here for consistency

Normal
00:21:739 (3) - flipping it like this would flow better I think?
00:35:634 (1) - add whistle at end for the bassdrum
00:50:792 (1) - ^ to be consistent with 00:55:844 (1) - and later similar sliders
00:51:423 (2) - referring to 01:06:581 (2) - , I think you also missed an important drum sound here, adding a whistle at its end is very necessary, also for 00:56:476 (2) - 01:01:528 (2) - and similar sliders like 02:12:265 (2) - in latter kiais. also, please fill up these hitsounds in Hard diff as well!
01:26:792 (2) - ^
00:51:423 (2,3) - blanket seems kinda off imo, you can make it better like this , similar for 00:56:476 (2,3) - and other symmetrical blankets in later parts

One Day
00:50:160 (1,1,2) - looks a bit messy, try to adjust their placements to make 2 exactly at the middle like this
01:32:002 (2) - the whistle is redundant, please remove it
02:08:475 (7,8,1,2) - what is this spacing??? seriously please stack 8 and 1 together this is the only case you threw triples like this and the spacing is pretty confusing
02:23:634 (7,8,1) - this pattern doesn't look so neat atm as 02:23:634 (7,1) - being too close to each other, try to make the spacing even between each other like this is should be much better!
02:45:106 (3,5) - kinda odd looking, try to make them align better like this ?
03:55:212 (1) - maybe remove the last spinner in order to make this diff end at the same time as Normal, such short spinner doesn't really make much sense imo

good

Bakari wrote:

The spread is my main issue, as I would get more opinions as well as reduce the density for non-kiais in Hard. Let's wait for zero, get a mod or two and get back to me.
I think the spread should be acceptable as Normal already have a light portion of blue tick rhythm being introduced, the Hard seems a bit hard with hard with seperated spaced 1/4 notes though, the BPM is pretty low and they are all triples between sliders which make them easier to play then three circles. so generally I think the spread should be fine.
riffy
henlo!

General
  1. Add Beyond The Scene to the tags, fairly sure we both know why.
  2. Is there a reason for each difficulty to have a different ending time? The difference is just 3-4 seconds, so it could be easily fixed to achieve more consistent rhythm. Is there really a point in mapping a part after the kiai? Isn't it identical to the one before the final kiai? If that's the vcase, wouldn't it be better to either map or ignore both?


Easy
  1. I would use Approach Rate 3 and Overall Difficulty / HP Drain 3 or lower to match the relaxed mood of the song.
    Note: a difficulty setting decrease would apply to Normal as well.
  2. 00:17:949 (3,4) - try to ctrl+g this to highlight the long vocals that start off at 00:18:580?
    Note: 00:28:055 (3,4) - 00:38:160 (3,4) - this would require a 2/1 slider as well to keep consistency.
  3. 00:34:370 - this seem to stand out from the general rapping line so much. Don't you feel like it needs a circle to be emphasized?
  4. 01:36:265 (3,1) - if you could alighn the slidertick and the curve of the sliders, it would match the vocals/drums a lot better. poorly made example
    Note: 02:24:265 (1) - same.

    Pretty neat.


Normal
  1. 01:37:843 - the vocals here are ignored, so I would probably Ctrl+G (2,3) to highlight the 1/2 thing better.
    Note: for a very similar reason, I'd rather use two circles instead of 01:41:318 (1) -01:46:370 (1) - 02:09:106 (1) - as the sliderbody does not seem to follow any sound.
  2. 02:31:844 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - I would use 1/1 or 1/2s instead, the part is a bit of a slow-down, so making it easier would make a lot more sense with the rhythmical context.

    Okay, it's good.


One day
  1. Shouldn't it be called One Day for consistency with the song's name?
  2. My main concern is how ap parts and kiais ar eof almost the same density, whereas in the easier difficulties there was still some contrast between these parts. I personally feel like nerfing the non-kiais would benefit both the spread and the difficulty itself, as this would add a bit more variety and help you represent the song better.

    I am really confused with the way you organize breaks, as they are different in every difficulty. Can you comment on that?


The spread is my main issue, as I would get more opinions as well as reduce the density for non-kiais in Hard. Let's wait for zero, get a mod or two and get back to me.

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Topic Starter
Lilyanna

Bakari wrote:

henlo!

General
  1. Add Beyond The Scene to the tags, fairly sure we both know why. fuk fixed
  2. Is there a reason for each difficulty to have a different ending time? The difference is just 3-4 seconds, so it could be easily fixed to achieve more consistent rhythm. Is there really a point in mapping a part after the kiai? Isn't it identical to the one before the final kiai? If that's the vcase, wouldn't it be better to either map or ignore both? so do i make the timing mapped the same for all difficulties? i dont think there is rules for that idk i dont get ur point here


Easy
  1. I would use Approach Rate 3 and Overall Difficulty / HP Drain 3 or lower to match the relaxed mood of the song.
    Note: a difficulty setting decrease would apply to Normal as well. fixed
  2. 00:17:949 (3,4) - try to ctrl+g this to highlight the long vocals that start off at 00:18:580? fixed
    Note: 00:28:055 (3,4) - 00:38:160 (3,4) - this would require a 2/1 slider as well to keep consistency. i know the part of music sound same but the vocal intensity doesnt sound same to me thats why i mapped different
  3. 00:34:370 - this seem to stand out from the general rapping line so much. Don't you feel like it needs a circle to be emphasized? i honestly dont think its needed to be circle i mean it could but its not a must
  4. 01:36:265 (3,1) - if you could alighn the slidertick and the curve of the sliders, it would match the vocals/drums a lot better. poorly made example
    Note: 02:24:265 (1) - same. fixed both !!

    Pretty neat.


Normal
  1. 01:37:843 - the vocals here are ignored, so I would probably Ctrl+G (2,3) to highlight the 1/2 thing better. i rly think the way it is now is better since litteraly there is no offbeat sliders in the whole map
    Note: for a very similar reason, I'd rather use two circles instead of 01:41:318 (1) -01:46:370 (1) - 02:09:106 (1) - as the sliderbody does not seem to follow any sound. well it basically holds on to the vocals between the drum and the clap thats whats the slody body meant for if i just put circles it will feel cut or empty also its normal i want rhythm be as clear as that
  2. 02:31:844 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - I would use 1/1 or 1/2s instead, the part is a bit of a slow-down, so making it easier would make a lot more sense with the rhythmical context. iwanted to follow that clock sound and then felt right to me like for the second 4. 1. 2 object to do same and then i did the 1/1s i really dont think is big deal is choice of rhythm here since both can work fine imo

    Okay, it's good.


One day
  1. Shouldn't it be called One Day for consistency with the song's name? true that
  2. My main concern is how ap parts and kiais ar eof almost the same density, whereas in the easier difficulties there was still some contrast between these parts. I personally feel like nerfing the non-kiais would benefit both the spread and the difficulty itself, as this would add a bit more variety and help you represent the song better. well, its kinda clear that the chorus sound less denser than the other parts since the other parts are rap and the rapping has more tensity and more dense i tried to make the kiai seem more dens by making the sv 1.20 if u notice and kinda has bigger ds i cant force it to be more dense since thats the song is tbh

    I am really confused with the way you organize breaks, as they are different in every difficulty. Can you comment on that? yes u right i think ill map the big break in hard diff ! its just rap monster .. rap so hard XD


The spread is my main issue, as I would get more opinions as well as reduce the density for non-kiais in Hard. Let's wait for zero, get a mod or two and get back to me.

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elena2705
Hello~
From my queue

One Day

00:48:264 (1,1) - i reccomend you do stack the head of the first one and the tail of the second one, 00:50:792 (1,2) - don't forget to move these two objects
01:14:949 (5,6,7,8) - i think this diff very very good, but...it's too ordinary, especially this pattern.... You use it during all song. And it's boring. 01:47:634 (5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - this part..umm, you really can't come up with more beautiful, more extraordinary pattern? You can use red followpoint
02:09:106 (1,2,3,4) - where did you lose DS???
02:11:002 (8,1,2) - what do you think about this: http://imgur.com/8dD38yX 02:11:634 (1) - this slider should have blanket i think
03:16:686 (6,7) - these two change to one slider, it more fits to the music. And head of sliders you shouldn't use on blue ticks. So i recommend you check all places, in which you use it.
00:44:318 (4,5) - ^ use ctrl+g
00:47:792 (7,8) - ^
00:51:897 (4,5) - ^
00:56:949 (4,5) - ^
01:02:002 (4,5) - ^
01:10:528 (6) - this is good and etc.
03:35:001 (1,2) - this... i have no reason to say that it's bad, but when i playd this place, it was a bit confusing, so i advise you do like this: http://imgur.com/kNFPf9o and then the head of next object 03:37:527 (1) - move on previous circle 03:35:948 (2) - And do it with all this part. I think it's more logical, and more understandable
That's all :)
I know, that do beatmap of BTS songs is too hard, i know it... But this map is cool!
Good luck
Topic Starter
Lilyanna

Zero__wind wrote:

ok let's do it again, I guess I might have forgot points fdsfddf hi ♥3

General
clear
good that you already made the breaktime more consistent and reasonable yes yes

Easy
I think useing HP2 OD2 should fit such an easy better and better for diff spread fixed
01:38:791 (5) - should NC here for consistency fixed

Normal
00:21:739 (3) - flipping it like this would flow better I think? yes true fixed
00:35:634 (1) - add whistle at end for the bassdrum fixed and i fixed other rest of spread checked all
00:50:792 (1) - ^ to be consistent with 00:55:844 (1) - and later similar sliders
00:51:423 (2) - referring to 01:06:581 (2) - , I think you also missed an important drum sound here, adding a whistle at its end is very necessary, also for 00:56:476 (2) - 01:01:528 (2) - and similar sliders like 02:12:265 (2) - in latter kiais. also, please fill up these hitsounds in Hard diff as well!
01:26:792 (2) - ^fixed all
00:51:423 (2,3) - blanket seems kinda off imo, you can make it better like this , similar for 00:56:476 (2,3) - and other symmetrical blankets in later parts

One Day
00:50:160 (1,1,2) - looks a bit messy, try to adjust their placements to make 2 exactly at the middle like this fixed
01:32:002 (2) - the whistle is redundant, please remove it oups true fixed
02:08:475 (7,8,1,2) - what is this spacing??? seriously please stack 8 and 1 together this is the only case you threw triples like this and the spacing is pretty confusing omg fixed it was there was break so when i mapped it i tried to connect the patterns that are already mapped i didnt pay attentio ;w;
02:23:634 (7,8,1) - this pattern doesn't look so neat atm as 02:23:634 (7,1) - being too close to each other, try to make the spacing even between each other like this is should be much better! yes fixed
02:45:106 (3,5) - kinda odd looking, try to make them align better like this ? tried fixed
03:55:212 (1) - maybe remove the last spinner in order to make this diff end at the same time as Normal, such short spinner doesn't really make much sense imo true fixed

good

Bakari wrote:

The spread is my main issue, as I would get more opinions as well as reduce the density for non-kiais in Hard. Let's wait for zero, get a mod or two and get back to me.
I think the spread should be acceptable as Normal already have a light portion of blue tick rhythm being introduced, the Hard seems a bit hard with hard with seperated spaced 1/4 notes though, the BPM is pretty low and they are all triples between sliders which make them easier to play then three circles. so generally I think the spread should be fine.
thank you alot so helpful as always !!!

elena2705 wrote:

Hello~ hii
From my queue

One Day

00:48:264 (1,1) - i reccomend you do stack the head of the first one and the tail of the second one, 00:50:792 (1,2) - since the first objects completly vanished its no need don't forget to move these two objects fixed the other objects

01:14:949 (5,6,7,8) - i think this diff very very good, but...it's too ordinary, especially this pattern.... You use it during all song. And it's boring. 01:47:634 (5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - this part..umm, you really can't come up with more beautiful, more extraordinary pattern? You can use red followpoint i cant do anything about it its just how i felt the map should be
02:09:106 (1,2,3,4) - where did you lose DS??? fixed
02:11:002 (8,1,2) - what do you think about this: http://imgur.com/8dD38yX 02:11:634 (1) - this slider should have blanket i think i like this flow more
03:16:686 (6,7) - these two change to one slider, it more fits to the music. And head of sliders you shouldn't use on blue ticks. So i recommend you check all places, in which you use it. i want hl the vocal
00:44:318 (4,5) - ^ use ctrl+g i want make the drum clickable if i contr g it wont be anymore
00:47:792 (7,8) - ^
00:51:897 (4,5) - ^
00:56:949 (4,5) - ^
01:02:002 (4,5) - ^
01:10:528 (6) - this is good and etc.
03:35:001 (1,2) - this... i have no reason to say that it's bad, but when i playd this place, it was a bit confusing, so i advise you do like this: http://imgur.com/kNFPf9o and then the head of next object 03:37:527 (1) - move on previous circle 03:35:948 (2) - And do it with all this part. I think it's more logical, and more understandable yes i like it fixed
That's all :)
I know, that do beatmap of BTS songs is too hard, i know it... But this map is cool!
Good luck
thank u for mods!!

edit: i totaly didt see this mod !!

CucumberCuc wrote:

Hi

[Normal]
00:53:948 (2,3,4) different range
01:48:896 (1,2,3) different range
03:33:738 (3,4) it's very are close, fix it

sorry if a little, but as for me, all diffs look good (good job)
thx for mod fixed ds!!!
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Lilyanna

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Waiting for bakari ^^
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Something-something, rhythm in easy, something less 1/1 like. Something something.

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Lilyanna
thank you something, bakari ♥ ! this is my first solo beatmap something, something and im so excited for it somethingssss i really love this song !! *insert something famous mappers say*
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Lilyanna

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WOA IM SO HAPPY FOR YOU MY BBY I FEEL SO PROUD OF YOU
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