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You may want to add some tags, such as anime, op, opening, japanese, and maybe the genre of the music in order to help the user search for you map.
I'm not really sure if a pink combo color is fitting for this song. Consider adding custom combo colors, remember that you need at least two custom combo colors in order to have custom combo colors enabled.
You should probably disabled the countdown, there isn't enough time for one.
Overall I think you should try to stop using combos that last for 10-11 hit objects unless they are fast paced streams.
For example, 00:01:863 - could be the start of a new combo.
Don't forget you'll need a full difficulty spread including one difficulty under 2.00* if you want to get this ranked.
00:03:577 (2,3,4,5) - The pattern here is really awkward. Theres a small gap between the end of the second slider and the 3rd circle, then a larger gap between the 3rd circle and the 4th circle, and then an even larger gap backwards between the 4th and 5th circle, yet they are all the same distance apart from each other on the timeline. You may want to move these hit objects around to make a more intuitive pattern.
There wasn't very much of the map done for me to mod, so sorry for the short mod.
I'm not really sure if a pink combo color is fitting for this song. Consider adding custom combo colors, remember that you need at least two custom combo colors in order to have custom combo colors enabled.
You should probably disabled the countdown, there isn't enough time for one.
Overall I think you should try to stop using combos that last for 10-11 hit objects unless they are fast paced streams.
For example, 00:01:863 - could be the start of a new combo.
Don't forget you'll need a full difficulty spread including one difficulty under 2.00* if you want to get this ranked.
00:03:577 (2,3,4,5) - The pattern here is really awkward. Theres a small gap between the end of the second slider and the 3rd circle, then a larger gap between the 3rd circle and the 4th circle, and then an even larger gap backwards between the 4th and 5th circle, yet they are all the same distance apart from each other on the timeline. You may want to move these hit objects around to make a more intuitive pattern.
There wasn't very much of the map done for me to mod, so sorry for the short mod.
Expert Diff
My first mod. Hopefully you find it helpful
Are you looking someone to make an insane diff? owo
- 00:01:520 (5) - nc. The clap sounds out of place, maybe change it or remove it?
- 00:01:691 (1) - I suggest you to continue the combo
- 00:04:091 (4) - Change this note to a slider that ends in 00:04:263
- 00:04:434 - Slider to white tick
- 00:04:777 - Add a note
- Change this timing point 00:04:263 to 00:04:949 and don't forget to fix slider of 00:04:434
- 00:04:949 - Make a slider (6 ticks) like this
- Just my opinion, but you can remove this slider 00:15:920 (4) and use previous one 00:15:920 (3) - here 00:16:177 and here 00:16:434 something like this
My first mod. Hopefully you find it helpful
Are you looking someone to make an insane diff? owo
Topic Starter
Thanks,i like your modTP618 wrote:
Expert DiffAnd like tatatat said, add the tags anime, op, opening, japanese and search for a new combo color to replace the pink
- 00:01:520 (5) - nc. The clap sounds out of place, maybe change it or remove it?
- 00:01:691 (1) - I suggest you to continue the combo
- 00:04:091 (4) - Change this note to a slider that ends in 00:04:263
- 00:04:434 - Slider to white tick
- 00:04:777 - Add a note
- Change this timing point 00:04:263 to 00:04:949 and don't forget to fix slider of 00:04:434
- 00:04:949 - Make a slider (6 ticks) like this
- Just my opinion, but you can remove this slider 00:15:920 (4) and use previous one 00:15:920 (3) - here 00:16:177 and here 00:16:434 something like this
My first mod. Hopefully you find it helpful
Are you looking someone to make an insane diff? owo
Expert:
00:01:520 (5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6) - You start out the map with slider heads on white ticks and slider ends on red ticks but here you reverse that, this doesn't emphasise the music properly so you should add a second circle after this one: (00:01:520 (5) ) and then place slider heads on the white ticks
00:10:434 (5) - Try not to use complicated slider designs like this while you're relatively new to mapping, it doesn't work out well
00:11:120 (3) - I suggest making this a slider that extends to the next red tick
00:16:434 (5) - To make this look neater move this up and to the left a bit so the 3 short sliders are equally spaced in a triangle
00:21:063 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - try and keep the map consistent, so far you've had a decent flow and this completely breaks that
00:25:777 (2) - the spacing on this is hard to read, you could move it so its touching the previous slider's end
00:25:863 (3) - this isn't a good rhythm choice try getting rid of the slider and placing a circle on the red tick that this slider ends at
00:26:206 (1,2,3,4,5) - same consistency problem, song doesn't call for a stream here, copy paste the previous pattern (00:25:520 (1,2,3) ) or something
00:28:777 (5,1,2,3) - same as my first point, strong sounds appear on white ticks so slider heads should also start on white ticks
00:31:863 (1) - same ^^
00:35:977 (4,5,6,7) - same ^^ (this happens throughout the map so im not going to point out all places)
00:38:549 (1,2,3,4) - this rhythm here isnt entirely correct, try changing (00:38:891 (2) ) to two notes on the white and red tick instead
not a bad map so far, good luck with moving this forward!
maybe wait until the maps completed before asking for mods
00:01:520 (5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6) - You start out the map with slider heads on white ticks and slider ends on red ticks but here you reverse that, this doesn't emphasise the music properly so you should add a second circle after this one: (00:01:520 (5) ) and then place slider heads on the white ticks
00:10:434 (5) - Try not to use complicated slider designs like this while you're relatively new to mapping, it doesn't work out well
00:11:120 (3) - I suggest making this a slider that extends to the next red tick
00:16:434 (5) - To make this look neater move this up and to the left a bit so the 3 short sliders are equally spaced in a triangle
00:21:063 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - try and keep the map consistent, so far you've had a decent flow and this completely breaks that
00:25:777 (2) - the spacing on this is hard to read, you could move it so its touching the previous slider's end
00:25:863 (3) - this isn't a good rhythm choice try getting rid of the slider and placing a circle on the red tick that this slider ends at
00:26:206 (1,2,3,4,5) - same consistency problem, song doesn't call for a stream here, copy paste the previous pattern (00:25:520 (1,2,3) ) or something
00:28:777 (5,1,2,3) - same as my first point, strong sounds appear on white ticks so slider heads should also start on white ticks
00:31:863 (1) - same ^^
00:35:977 (4,5,6,7) - same ^^ (this happens throughout the map so im not going to point out all places)
00:38:549 (1,2,3,4) - this rhythm here isnt entirely correct, try changing (00:38:891 (2) ) to two notes on the white and red tick instead
not a bad map so far, good luck with moving this forward!
maybe wait until the maps completed before asking for mods
Topic Starter
Thanks for the mod, I know that I'm still bad in the mapping, I'm studying and learning, can you do GD Insane or Normal?DeviousPanda wrote:
Expert:
00:01:520 (5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6) - You start out the map with slider heads on white ticks and slider ends on red ticks but here you reverse that, this doesn't emphasise the music properly so you should add a second circle after this one: (00:01:520 (5) ) and then place slider heads on the white ticks
00:10:434 (5) - Try not to use complicated slider designs like this while you're relatively new to mapping, it doesn't work out well
00:11:120 (3) - I suggest making this a slider that extends to the next red tick
00:16:434 (5) - To make this look neater move this up and to the left a bit so the 3 short sliders are equally spaced in a triangle
00:21:063 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - try and keep the map consistent, so far you've had a decent flow and this completely breaks that
00:25:777 (2) - the spacing on this is hard to read, you could move it so its touching the previous slider's end
00:25:863 (3) - this isn't a good rhythm choice try getting rid of the slider and placing a circle on the red tick that this slider ends at
00:26:206 (1,2,3,4,5) - same consistency problem, song doesn't call for a stream here, copy paste the previous pattern (00:25:520 (1,2,3) ) or something
00:28:777 (5,1,2,3) - same as my first point, strong sounds appear on white ticks so slider heads should also start on white ticks
00:31:863 (1) - same ^^
00:35:977 (4,5,6,7) - same ^^ (this happens throughout the map so im not going to point out all places)
00:38:549 (1,2,3,4) - this rhythm here isnt entirely correct, try changing (00:38:891 (2) ) to two notes on the white and red tick instead
not a bad map so far, good luck with moving this forward!
maybe wait until the maps completed before asking for mods
Yeah sure, I'll work on an insane
Here's the insane
http://puu.sh/wsXos/4a038b4033.osu
if this isn't downloadable ill find another way to get it to you
http://puu.sh/wsXos/4a038b4033.osu
if this isn't downloadable ill find another way to get it to you
Topic Starter
Thanks!DeviousPanda wrote:
Here's the insane
http://puu.sh/wsXos/4a038b4033.osu
if this isn't downloadable ill find another way to get it to you
is the difficulty ok?
Put every 3 white tick a hitsound clap exemple 00:13:177 (7) - 00:22:777 (3) -
00:31:520 (6,7,8) - Blanked ?
01:16:520 (1,2,3,4,5) - Ok but just don't try to put stream in hard diff :/
00:10:091 (5) - Try move this circle on the 00:09:234 (2) -
00:18:663 (3) - Try move this circle under this slider 00:17:977 (1) -
00:26:720 (4) - I think this circle should be more spaced with this circle because in the time line we can see a space beetween 3 and 4 00:26:549 (3) -
Good luck
And sorry for my bad english 
Topic Starter
Thanks! All Edit!Ward74 wrote:
Extra
00:10:091 (5) - Try move this circle on the 00:09:234 (2) -
00:18:663 (3) - Try move this circle under this slider 00:17:977 (1) -
00:26:720 (4) - I think this circle should be more spaced with this circle because in the time line we can see a space beetween 3 and 4 00:26:549 (3) -
Good luck
Topic Starter
AWESOME DIFF!DeviousPanda wrote:
is the difficulty ok?
Topic Starter
We just say Thanks! for @DeviousPandarickyrox3 wrote:
your slider mapping is exquisite :^) @DeviousPanda
nice memeWard74 wrote:
Hard
Put every 3 white tick a hitsound clap exemple 00:13:177 (7) - 00:22:777 (3) - there is
00:31:520 (6,7,8) - Blanked ?idk what you meant so I just fixed it up based on spacing patterns I thinkedit: I will not fix because it messes with my spacing emphasis
01:16:520 (1,2,3,4,5) - Ok but just don't try to put stream in hard diff :/ fixed, however my replacement plays weirdly even though there's slider leniency and that it's not complicated rhythm so I'll have to look into that
Good luck
ok @YashaPlay here is updated ver
Hard
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Wow thanks guys
Now the experts done ill give this a full mod now:
This map cant get ranked if you only have one difficulty made by yourself compared to the 3 GD's you have, i suggest making a normal or something
Easy:
Hard:
Insane:
Expert:
This map cant get ranked if you only have one difficulty made by yourself compared to the 3 GD's you have, i suggest making a normal or something
Easy:
Hard:
i really like these patterns (00:15:920 (1,1,1) - ) but (00:25:520 (1,1,1,1,1,1) -) might be a bit excessive especially with this pattern afterwards (00:26:891 (1,2,3,4) - ) its quite hard to hit
00:28:263 (3,4) - can you pit a note in between these two on the white tick, not having a note here breaks the flow
00:29:977 (8) - would make a lot more sense if it was two circles
00:34:777 (8) - this also breaks the flow, maybe change it to a slider
00:39:749 (5,6) - this gap here is completely fine
00:40:263 (7,8) - this gap here isn't fine
00:41:977 (5) - maybe extend this out to the next white tick
that's it for the hard, really interesting and fun to play
00:28:263 (3,4) - can you pit a note in between these two on the white tick, not having a note here breaks the flow
00:29:977 (8) - would make a lot more sense if it was two circles
00:34:777 (8) - this also breaks the flow, maybe change it to a slider
00:39:749 (5,6) - this gap here is completely fine
00:40:263 (7,8) - this gap here isn't fine
00:41:977 (5) - maybe extend this out to the next white tick
that's it for the hard, really interesting and fun to play
Insane:
Expert:
wow this map has gotten so much better
00:07:863 (1,2,3,4,5) - spacing here is a bit off, try something like this:
00:10:091 (5) - changing this to a slider helps the map flow better
this is quite hard to read, maybe space it like this? (Edit: Don't have access to a computer right now, the bit I'm talking about here is the 3 1/4 sliders that you overlapped)
00:16:777 (2) -dont NC here
00:19:349 (1) - this slider looks a bit weird, try using softer angles like:
00:20:720 (1) - with sliders like this use softer angles and put the red node in the middle of the slider to make it look nicer like this:
00:21:920 (5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - the problem here is the same as my first point, spacing makes it hard to read
00:23:463 (1) - 00:24:834 (1) - softer angles like this makes it look better:
00:25:691 (4,5,6) - no dont space the tripples like this its completely unreadable, maybe just stack 4 onto 5
00:27:577 (1,2) - softer angles like this works better:
00:32:377 (3) - make this two notes instead of a slider
00:32:720 (4,5,6) - get rid of the middle note here, triple doesn't work
00:37:177 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - the flow on this is a bit weird, idk what you can do but maybe make it circular flow
00:39:234 (3) - this has been blanketed wrong, it should look like this:
00:40:263 (2) - same blanketing problem
00:40:949 (4) - rotate this to make it look like this:
00:50:891 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - just circles here doesn't fit the song well, you should add a few sliders
01:03:234 (1,2) - space this out a bit more for emphasis
01:05:463 (1) - change this to two circles or something, as a slider its a bit anticlimactic
01:19:349 (6,7,8) - these are too spaced, lower the spacing a bit
01:26:548 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) -this stream looks a bit odd, maybe change it to something like this:
01:38:377 (2) - maybe change this to something like this:
01:37:520 (1) - don't NC here
NC here (01:38:377 (2) - ) and here (01:38:891 (4) - )
00:07:863 (1,2,3,4,5) - spacing here is a bit off, try something like this:
00:10:091 (5) - changing this to a slider helps the map flow better
this is quite hard to read, maybe space it like this? (Edit: Don't have access to a computer right now, the bit I'm talking about here is the 3 1/4 sliders that you overlapped)
00:16:777 (2) -dont NC here
00:19:349 (1) - this slider looks a bit weird, try using softer angles like:
00:20:720 (1) - with sliders like this use softer angles and put the red node in the middle of the slider to make it look nicer like this:
00:21:920 (5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - the problem here is the same as my first point, spacing makes it hard to read
00:23:463 (1) - 00:24:834 (1) - softer angles like this makes it look better:
00:25:691 (4,5,6) - no dont space the tripples like this its completely unreadable, maybe just stack 4 onto 5
00:27:577 (1,2) - softer angles like this works better:
00:32:377 (3) - make this two notes instead of a slider
00:32:720 (4,5,6) - get rid of the middle note here, triple doesn't work
00:37:177 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - the flow on this is a bit weird, idk what you can do but maybe make it circular flow
00:39:234 (3) - this has been blanketed wrong, it should look like this:
00:40:263 (2) - same blanketing problem
00:40:949 (4) - rotate this to make it look like this:
00:50:891 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - just circles here doesn't fit the song well, you should add a few sliders
01:03:234 (1,2) - space this out a bit more for emphasis
01:05:463 (1) - change this to two circles or something, as a slider its a bit anticlimactic
01:19:349 (6,7,8) - these are too spaced, lower the spacing a bit
01:26:548 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) -this stream looks a bit odd, maybe change it to something like this:
01:38:377 (2) - maybe change this to something like this:
01:37:520 (1) - don't NC here
NC here (01:38:377 (2) - ) and here (01:38:891 (4) - )
DeviousPanda wrote:
Now the experts done ill give this a full mod now:
This map cant get ranked if you only have one difficulty made by yourself compared to the 3 GD's you have, i suggest making a normal or something yeah he plans on making a Normal
Easy:
Hard:i really like these patterns (00:15:920 (1,1,1) - ) but (00:25:520 (1,1,1,1,1,1) -) might be a bit excessive especially with this pattern afterwards (00:26:891 (1,2,3,4) - ) its quite hard to hit I'm keeping the special rhythm since I already introduced it earlier but I nerfed the half-octagon pattern to something less difficult (referring to 00:15:920 (1,1,1) - )
00:28:263 (3,4) - can you pit a note in between these two on the white tick, not having a note here breaks the flow well I was necessarily focusing on mapping those small percussion sounds and it still goes in the same direction
00:29:977 (8) - would make a lot more sense if it was two circles well it would contradict areas such as 00:37:863 (6,7,8,9) - where I mapped double-stacks of circles based on percussion 01:28:263 (2,3,4,5) - this is a similar concept that I had but it maps the same instrument, nevertheless 01:02:549 (6,7,8,9) - oh yeah this is like based on the drums to lead into the guitar uh
00:34:777 (8) - this also breaks the flow, maybe change it to a slider it still follows the same clockwise flow, but setting playback to 25%
doesn't give me any sort of reason to do so
00:39:749 (5,6) - this gap here is completely fine meme
00:40:263 (7,8) - this gap here isn't fine aww not meme no sound on the beat that I skipped
00:41:977 (5) - maybe extend this out to the next white tick doing so would ruin my attempt in mapping the vocals while emphasizing almost all percussion
that's it for the hard, really interesting and fun to play
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Topic Starter
Thanks!DeviousPanda wrote:
Now the experts done ill give this a full mod now:
This map cant get ranked if you only have one difficulty made by yourself compared to the 3 GD's you have, i suggest making a normal or something
Expert:wow this map has gotten so much better
00:07:863 (1,2,3,4,5) - spacing here is a bit off, try something like this:
00:10:091 (5) - changing this to a slider helps the map flow better
this is quite hard to read, maybe space it like this? (Edit: Don't have access to a computer right now, the bit I'm talking about here is the 3 1/4 sliders that you overlapped)
00:16:777 (2) -dont NC here
00:19:349 (1) - this slider looks a bit weird, try using softer angles like:
00:20:720 (1) - with sliders like this use softer angles and put the red node in the middle of the slider to make it look nicer like this:
00:21:920 (5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - the problem here is the same as my first point, spacing makes it hard to read
00:23:463 (1) - 00:24:834 (1) - softer angles like this makes it look better:
00:25:691 (4,5,6) - no dont space the tripples like this its completely unreadable, maybe just stack 4 onto 5
00:27:577 (1,2) - softer angles like this works better:
00:32:377 (3) - make this two notes instead of a slider
00:32:720 (4,5,6) - get rid of the middle note here, triple doesn't work
00:37:177 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - the flow on this is a bit weird, idk what you can do but maybe make it circular flow
00:39:234 (3) - this has been blanketed wrong, it should look like this:
00:40:263 (2) - same blanketing problem
00:40:949 (4) - rotate this to make it look like this:
00:50:891 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - just circles here doesn't fit the song well, you should add a few sliders
01:03:234 (1,2) - space this out a bit more for emphasis
01:05:463 (1) - change this to two circles or something, as a slider its a bit anticlimactic
01:19:349 (6,7,8) - these are too spaced, lower the spacing a bit
01:26:548 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) -this stream looks a bit odd, maybe change it to something like this:
01:38:377 (2) - maybe change this to something like this:
01:37:520 (1) - don't NC here
NC here (01:38:377 (2) - ) and here (01:38:891 (4) - )
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/587733
Easy
-Let me start off with how some rhythms are inconsistent. Being the easiest diff, having a variety of rhythms would not help the players feel the music as how they are forced to only click the circles from the mapper's perspective. Without proper visual presentation and a clever, consistent choice of rhythm, this diff might need a few tweaks, or probably lots of tweak, but let's get onto modding
- 00:11:120 (1) - Add a finish hitsound here.
- 00:13:863 (4) - ^
- 00:15:920 (1) - This rhythm is somehow not recommended. The sound on 00:16:177 - is somehow ignored by making this slider's end a passive, which is close to the offbeat I mentioned before ( 00:16:177 -). I recommend making this slider a circle again, probably one or two circles (two would be better to emphasize the snare even though the sound is hitting not on 1/1 rhythm
- 00:17:977 (2,3,4) - Not sure about this flow. It looked kind of forced, and visually not good.
- 00:31:691 (4,5) - This as well. But this is visually good. Just the flow is kind of cranky as to how sharp it is.
- 00:38:549 (1) - Add a finisher here
- 00:41:291 (3,4,5) - One of the flow that I before mentioned as sharp. I guess this could be a bit for newbies to follow, given the fact that it's almost 90 degrees in flow. The part is calm and I don't see the reason to make the flow as harsh as that
- 00:48:149 (4) - By making this extended slider, you are missing out the important sound on 00:48:834 - and 00:49:177 - . I cannot allow something like this pass by because strong beats are priority to be clicked, and ignoring it might make the map worse.
- 01:07:006 (2,3) - Stacking on Easy is not recommended, unless reason stated by the mapper itself
- 01:08:377 - missed a snare here
- 01:12:492 (2,3) - Also one of the stacks i mentioned in easy
- 01:25:177 (1,1) - This looks too repetitive (its slider reverse after all xd). It would be better if you remake this section and not use reverse slider, as the kiai reach the peak of the music.
good luck :d
Winter Story wrote:
what a coincidence we're making the same song xd
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/587733Easy-Let me start off with how some rhythms are inconsistent. Being the easiest diff, having a variety of rhythms would not help the players feel the music as how they are forced to only click the circles from the mapper's perspective. Without proper visual presentation and a clever, consistent choice of rhythm, this diff might need a few tweaks, or probably lots of tweak, but let's get onto modding cheese
- 00:11:120 (1) - Add a finish hitsound here. the hitsound for soft-hitfinish right now is the default and it's pretty loud compared to what the song has, so I might just find a custom hitsound and tell mapper to add it in
- 00:13:863 (4) - ^
- 00:15:920 (1) - This rhythm is somehow not recommended. The sound on 00:16:177 - is somehow ignored by making this slider's end a passive, which is close to the offbeat I mentioned before ( 00:16:177 -). I recommend making this slider a circle again, probably one or two circles (two would be better to emphasize the snare even though the sound is hitting not on 1/1 rhythm yeah I understand it's passive but I'm conflicted because using a single circle to convey this filler rhythm shit is kinda eh and using two could confuse players since it doesn't align with what the song presents
- 00:17:977 (2,3,4) - Not sure about this flow. It looked kind of forced, and visually not good. I adjust it
- 00:31:691 (4,5) - This as well. But this is visually good. Just the flow is kind of cranky as to how sharp it is.I also adjust it ever so slightly
- 00:38:549 (1) - Add a finisher here o
- 00:41:291 (3,4,5) - One of the flow that I before mentioned as sharp. I guess this could be a bit for newbies to follow, given the fact that it's almost 90 degrees in flow. The part is calm and I don't see the reason to make the flow as harsh as that it follows the slider tail in a straight line and goes back at a relatively sharp angle?
- 00:48:149 (4) - By making this extended slider, you are missing out the important sound on 00:48:834 - and 00:49:177 - . I cannot allow something like this pass by because strong beats are priority to be clicked, and ignoring it might make the map worse.
- 01:07:006 (2,3) - Stacking on Easy is not recommended, unless reason stated by the mapper itself if I could get like a source that explicitly states that easy diffs do not include stacks, then ok. I've seen something that relates to stacking in the same way throughout the whole song, so like no rhythm differences in stacking, but for me, I use this like 4 times and only 4 times during kiai (I... think) but anyways yeah the song doesn't have any strong beats on the second slider of the set so I decided to make it so the player doesn't have to move, although there are prominent sounds on like the slider ticks but eh
- 01:08:377 - missed a snare here wait but there's nothing here xd
- 01:12:492 (2,3) - Also one of the stacks i mentioned in easy
- 01:25:177 (1,1) - This looks too repetitive (its slider reverse after all xd). It would be better if you remake this section and not use reverse slider, as the kiai reach the peak of the music. idk I used a set of slider shapes to represent the different groupings of percussion and kept it like simple as fuc and this diff doesn't really allow me to use rhythms denser than 1/1 'cause that's like the only way I can remap imo
good luck :d
I'm so pissed off the color coding is such a pain in the ass agh you'll get it@YashaPlay here's my update for Easyosu file format v14
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Topic Starter
Thanks! GOOD LUCK TO YOU TOO!Winter Story wrote:
what a coincidence we're making the same song xd
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/587733Easy-Let me start off with how some rhythms are inconsistent. Being the easiest diff, having a variety of rhythms would not help the players feel the music as how they are forced to only click the circles from the mapper's perspective. Without proper visual presentation and a clever, consistent choice of rhythm, this diff might need a few tweaks, or probably lots of tweak, but let's get onto modding
- 00:11:120 (1) - Add a finish hitsound here.
- 00:13:863 (4) - ^
- 00:15:920 (1) - This rhythm is somehow not recommended. The sound on 00:16:177 - is somehow ignored by making this slider's end a passive, which is close to the offbeat I mentioned before ( 00:16:177 -). I recommend making this slider a circle again, probably one or two circles (two would be better to emphasize the snare even though the sound is hitting not on 1/1 rhythm
- 00:17:977 (2,3,4) - Not sure about this flow. It looked kind of forced, and visually not good.
- 00:31:691 (4,5) - This as well. But this is visually good. Just the flow is kind of cranky as to how sharp it is.
- 00:38:549 (1) - Add a finisher here
- 00:41:291 (3,4,5) - One of the flow that I before mentioned as sharp. I guess this could be a bit for newbies to follow, given the fact that it's almost 90 degrees in flow. The part is calm and I don't see the reason to make the flow as harsh as that
- 00:48:149 (4) - By making this extended slider, you are missing out the important sound on 00:48:834 - and 00:49:177 - . I cannot allow something like this pass by because strong beats are priority to be clicked, and ignoring it might make the map worse.
- 01:07:006 (2,3) - Stacking on Easy is not recommended, unless reason stated by the mapper itself
- 01:08:377 - missed a snare here
- 01:12:492 (2,3) - Also one of the stacks i mentioned in easy
- 01:25:177 (1,1) - This looks too repetitive (its slider reverse after all xd). It would be better if you remake this section and not use reverse slider, as the kiai reach the peak of the music.
good luck :d