artist:朝日 温子
romanized artist: Atsuko Asahi
source: Mario Kart 8
use a background image that's actually related to the song please
change the bpm of the timeline at 217 to 70,55 and resnapneeds a lot of work on your hitsounds, currently looking very random with unnecessary sample changes and no consistency at all.
i don't like the normal whistles for piano, they are too loud imo. also you should hitsound the beats, try to use soft sample and a custom hitsound clap (like the default normal-hitnormal sound).
normal00:13:829 (4) - add new combo here as it's the start of the piano sequence. remove new combo at 00:14:940 -
00:18:551 (1) - remove new combo because the next part starts a piano sequence, add new combo at 00:20:217 - just like you did at 00:48:551 (4,1) -
00:22:717 (5,1) - i don't like the gab between this notes, why follow only the main piano in this part? you follow the back piano at 00:18:551 (1) - so why not follow it here too?
00:26:051 (3) - please remove this repeat and add a circle at 00:27:716 - with new combo
00:27:995 (4) - new combo
00:57:717 (5) - new combo or this section will be too long compared to the others
01:02:717 (1) - i really don't like this ending, it looks very random and this spinner is way too long. it would be way more fitting if you start this spinner at 01:00:216 - end it at 01:02:717 -
hardi think you need to work on where you put jumps, some of your jumps transictions are not respecting the song at all.
for exemple 00:11:050 (3,4) - this should be jumps instead of 00:11:884 (1,2,3) -
00:02:717 (1) - why is the slider end in the red tick? the most relevant sound to map is in the next tick. it's a mistake right?
00:07:717 (1) - same as above, this part is similar to 00:04:383 (3,4,5) -
00:22:717 (4) - this note calls for a jump based on the way you mapped the previous notes. also, add new combo.
00:27:716 (1,2,3) - this part should use higher distance snap than 00:26:884 (3,4) - but smaller than the next part ofc.
00:28:551 (1,2,3) - use the same distance snap between them, just like 00:27:716 (1,2,3) -
00:52:716 (4) - new combo
00:58:550 (1,2,3) - use the same distance snap between them, just like 00:57:716 (1,2,3) -
01:00:216 (1,1,1,1) - bad ending just like normal. please just use a spinner starting at 00:59:661 - until 01:02:716 -
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