From my queue doing m4m
Add Epicsteve to the tags.
You don't need 'pika' in the tags as their username is already in there.
00:28:431 (4) - The finish is obnoxious lol. Turn the volume down on it a bit. i didn't do ihitsound
00:33:745 (1) - You don't need the nc here as it's part of the same section as the previous color and it doesn't appear quick enough for the player to miss-read it. clarifying different rhythms no
00:33:917 (2) -00:44:889 (4) - Turn the volume down a bit i didn't do hitsounding
00:56:717 (2,3,4,5) - Aesthetically this would look better if the triangle formed by 2-4 was perfect. 00:56:717 (2,4,5) - but line
00:58:774 (5,6) - This is a new idea so the player will miss-read this. A partial overlap would still work, just not that hidden under the slider. I'd say rule of thumb would be half way for anti jumps like this. it's 4.5* lol the people that are gonna be successfully playing this will almost certainly be able to read half-overlaps
01:29:288 (1) - The red nodes are slightly off-center. How I create slider shapes like these is I enable the grid snapping and set it to the smallest setting. I create my slider on there then I rotate accordingly. That might help for creating these in the future. tweaked
01:49:517 (1,2) - In order to support your idea this needs to expand with the pattern. Since this is a separate section to the first kiai you can use a variation of the first pattern, which were expanding jumps like this. You can maybe make the patterns dip instead of expand for variation or you can keep the same idea. Both ways would work here. did some copy pasting