Feint - Vagrant (feat. Veela)

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Epicsteve2
Ok so I was told to remap some things in the beginning so I did that. Not too sure if it's good or not :/
osu file format v14

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Title:Vagrant (feat. Veela)
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Tags:dnb liquicity alchemy drum and bass cut version epicsteve2 pika [[pika]] epicsteve yamicchi
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Oh and here's a chatlog if it does any help
2017-07-25 21:27 Epicsteve2: hey
2017-07-25 21:27 Epicsteve2: you wanted to talk about my map?
2017-07-25 21:27 Yamicchi: oh
2017-07-25 21:27 Yamicchi: yea
2017-07-25 21:27 Yamicchi: you have times?
2017-07-25 21:29 Epicsteve2: kinda
2017-07-25 21:29 Epicsteve2: you can just get to the point
2017-07-25 21:29 Epicsteve2: if you think i need to remap, i'll just scrap the entire diff
2017-07-25 21:31 Yamicchi: k lemme look through it
2017-07-25 21:33 Yamicchi: forgive me if I'm being a bit nitpicky
2017-07-25 21:34 Yamicchi: 00:23:459 (1,2) - flow of these should be smoother, since the vocal doesnt support any kind of harsh flow, but 00:24:145 (2,3) - instead
2017-07-25 21:34 Yamicchi: while you have 2-3 flow too smooth, which does not represent the clap on 3 well
2017-07-25 21:34 Yamicchi: *drum
2017-07-25 21:35 Yamicchi: 00:28:259 (5) - imo rearrange this to stack the slider start with 00:26:202 (2) - sliderend looks cleaner
2017-07-25 21:36 Yamicchi: 00:28:945 (1,2,3) - yea this flow is not bad
2017-07-25 21:39 Yamicchi: this might be okay if you dont like, but http://puu.sh/wTbIr/6f73cd17b4.jpg is a better example of pattern for 00:31:688 (2,3,4,5) - don't you think?
2017-07-25 21:39 Yamicchi: 00:34:431 (2,3,4) - yes this flow is what I want to say earlier
2017-07-25 21:40 Epicsteve2: idk
2017-07-25 21:40 Epicsteve2: i don't think the stack would even be visible
2017-07-25 21:40 Yamicchi: 00:37:174 (1,2) - why not a reverse slider anymore? And besides you have been making these slider shape the same recently, so why not here
2017-07-25 21:40 Yamicchi: don't worry the stack won't be seen
2017-07-25 21:40 Yamicchi: it would just make the pattern look cleaner, that's all
2017-07-25 21:41 Epicsteve2: ah
2017-07-25 21:41 Yamicchi: 00:39:917 (2,3,4) - bad pattern again
2017-07-25 21:44 Yamicchi: 01:06:659 (3,4) - this could be a slider, to emphasize 01:07:002 (5,6) - more
2017-07-25 21:45 Yamicchi: and if you fix this, might wanna change the whole pattern of 01:05:974 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - a bit because to me, they seem a bit messy
2017-07-25 21:46 Yamicchi: the idea of slider overlapping 2 circles is great, but because the slider is not long enough, so you cannot do much, http://puu.sh/wTc0p/5d5feee014.jpg see why I'm saying it's bad?
2017-07-25 21:48 Yamicchi: something like this might be better http://puu.sh/wTc5E/76be9f18e3.jpg
2017-07-25 21:48 Epicsteve2: oh yeah
2017-07-25 21:50 Yamicchi: ok send me the file after you fixed those, so I know which way are you going, then we can continue
2017-07-25 21:50 Epicsteve2: wait you're pushing my map to rank?
2017-07-25 21:50 Yamicchi: im helping pushing your map to rank
2017-07-25 21:54 Yamicchi: oh just take your time fixing it properly, I can wait
2017-07-25 21:55 Epicsteve2: I didn't plan on mapping today ;w;
2017-07-25 21:55 Yamicchi: ;w;
2017-07-25 22:59 Epicsteve2: i probably won't add changes becuase i have like no motivation to map rn rip
2017-07-25 22:59 Epicsteve2: add changes today*
2017-07-25 23:00 Epicsteve2: thanks for check tho
2017-07-25 23:00 Yamicchi: kk that's fine
2017-07-25 23:00 Yamicchi: but save the chatlog for later tho
2017-07-25 23:00 Epicsteve2: yeah i got it

Rin Desu wrote:

Hard
00:38:202 (3,4) - this basedrum sound should be clickable like the times before instead of a sliderend I don't like having individual doubles here and I'd like to keep consistency with my 1/2 sliders
00:43:345 (2,3) - same here I think it's fine currently
01:35:802 (4,1) - blanket Moved a bit
- Frontier -
07:42 Einja: nice mutual xd
07:42 - Frontier -: xd
07:42 Einja: i need help with smth
07:43 - Frontier -: what's that?
07:43 Einja: can you do aquick check of a map of mine
07:43 - Frontier -: sure
07:43 *Einja is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1364457 Feint - Vagrant (feat. Veela)]
07:43 - Frontier -: lol
07:43 Einja: check whatever you want
07:44 - Frontier -: I think I checked before
07:44 - Frontier -: :V
07:44 Einja: no you didn't
07:44 Einja: <>C
07:44 Einja: >:C
07:44 - Frontier -: no i mean
07:44 - Frontier -: i founded it
07:44 - Frontier -: somewhere
07:44 Einja: "founded"
07:44 Einja: engrish
07:44 - Frontier -: :V
07:44 - Frontier -: im bad at english
07:44 Einja: same
07:44 - Frontier -: xP
07:45 - Frontier -: "stop peaking through the beatmap files.jpg"
07:45 - Frontier -: ;(
07:45 Einja: bad thing to do
07:45 Einja: xd
07:45 - Frontier -: xd
07:46 - Frontier -: inconsistent patterns lol
07:47 - Frontier -: how to explain
07:47 Einja: wait what diff
07:47 - Frontier -: easy
07:48 - Frontier -: look at this 01:08:717 (2,3,4) -
07:48 Einja: ah
07:48 Einja: 3rd time this has been mentioned alreaedy
07:48 - Frontier -: :V
07:48 Einja: if i used a slider it would lead in badly
07:49 Einja: but after people complaining, i think sacrificing consistency for flow isn't so good
07:49 - Frontier -: but i think you could make a curve slider here
07:49 Einja: i did
07:49 Einja: just now
07:49 - Frontier -: nice ;V
07:50 - Frontier -: 01:24:831 (2,3,4) - :|
07:51 Einja: shapr angle because buildup right after
07:51 - Frontier -: yeah
07:51 Einja: :]
07:52 - Frontier -: there are more inconsistent patterns
07:53 Einja: example
07:53 - Frontier -: 01:30:317 (2,3,4) -, 01:35:802 (2,3,4) -, 01:41:288 (2,3,4) -
07:53 - Frontier -: the rhythm is totally the same xp
07:55 - Frontier -: i will mention more if i mod this
07:56 - Frontier -: btw is [https://puu.sh/wVOeb/ff47b8c158.jpg this] credit?
07:56 Einja: fixed the other 2
07:56 Einja: 01:41:288 (2,3,4) - this is the way it is because build up is right after
07:56 Einja: also sharp angle represents
07:56 Einja: and yeah that's credit
07:56 Einja: no one's gonna notice it though :P
07:56 - Frontier -: V:
07:56 - Frontier -: im the one who noticed it ;(
07:57 Einja: you are different
07:57 Einja: wait where on earth did you see it
07:57 - Frontier -: xp
07:58 Einja: yay i think i fixed all consistencies
07:58 - Frontier -: 01:46:088 (1) - did you follow the vocal here?
07:58 Einja: ye
07:59 Einja: if i put the spinner at 01:46:431 - it's anti climatic ;/
07:59 - Frontier -: i agree
08:00 - Frontier -: the spread isn't linear ;w;
08:00 Einja: diff spread?
08:00 - Frontier -: whole mapset one
08:01 Einja: rip spread
08:01 Einja: it's not that big of a deal tho
08:01 Einja: unless there's a 4* diff and a 5.8*
08:01 - Frontier -: yeah
08:02 - Frontier -: _(:3JL)_
08:03 Einja: what is that
08:03 Einja: xd
08:03 - Frontier -: lazy to check more
08:03 Einja: oh
08:03 Einja: thank you for checking
08:03 - Frontier -: never mind
08:03 Einja: it was very helpful with the consistent patterns
08:03 Einja: :)
08:04 - Frontier -: they could be mentioned by bn
08:04 Einja: yup
- Frontier -
no kd this time :3

[General]
  1. The spread isn't linear. (As I told to you earlier.)
  2. Wave hitsound with possible delay > 5ms: normal-hitfinish.wav


[Epicsteve's Hard]
  1. HP 4 also used in Normal before. Try to make some variety!
  2. Remove Widescreen Support
  3. 00:44:888 (5) - This slider might be too complex for newbie players to understand. I think you could make the slider clearer and more visible.
  4. 00:44:888 (5,1) - I know what you trying to emphasize the cymbal sound. But isn't the jump too high? Keep in mind that it's a Hard diff and it still in the calm part. And also, this is the biggest jump in this diff since you didn't add any jump in kiai part.
  5. 00:57:745 (1) - Why this 1/2-beat reverse slider while these notes, 00:56:374 (1) - and 00:59:117 (1) -, are 1/1-beat slider since the rhythm are totally the same.
  6. 01:00:488 (1,2,1,2) - I understand what you trying to follow the vocal but why these notes keep following the vocal while the others don't? Try to compare with these notes, 00:56:374 (1,2,3,4) - , 00:57:745 (1,2,3,4) - , and 00:59:117 (1,2,3,4) - .
  7. 01:05:631 (4) - It touches the hp-bar. So consider moving it lower to avoid having difficulty in reading notes.
  8. 01:07:345 (1) - The slider has been overlapped by 01:07:002 (5,6) - so it looks bad. I think you should avoid it.
  9. 01:09:745 (4,5) - Compared to these 01:15:231 (4) -, 01:20:717 (4) -, 01:26:202 (4) - and etc. :thinking: And these are the only notes those do something like this.
  10. 01:45:060 (1) - Wait.. What?! Why do you add nc at this? Aren't you actually add it on 01:44:374 (5) - ?


[Pika's Insane]
  1. 00:22:774 (1,2) - The other diffs didn't map this part. Consider about this.
  2. 00:24:831 (1) - This is kinda breaks the flow. This note is forcing the players to move from the right side and back to the left side again (and go back again ;( ) which makes the map flows unnaturally. Try to reverse this note to make the flow better. As well as 00:30:317 (1) - and you might try doing on 00:41:288 (1) - too.
  3. 00:45:402 (1) - The issue is almost as same as the above. Why don't you try something like this for a better and clearer flow?
  4. 01:07:345 (1) - Do you have the reason to make the slider velocity higher than the others? I understand what you are emphasizing the notes that has stronger sound than the others. But I think you could make it 1/1-beat slider instead to make it contrast with the others (since most of the sliders here are 1/2-beat. might be boring to have 1/2 sliders continuously right?) As well as 01:12:831 (1) -, 01:18:317 (1) -, etc.
  5. 01:07:688 (1) - While this 01:13:174 (1,2) - has totally the same rhythm , but why they mapped differently? Almost all notes here (which has the same rhythm as 01:07:688 (1) -) use 2 circles, so why don't you applied with this note too?

I don't like how you make notes go like back and forth. Those make the diff kinda boring and not interesting. :|

[Yamicchi's Dreamless Wanderer]

  1. Lazy

Call me back! when i am a bn
Epicsteve2
I had to adjust a ton of things in the kiai section to remove the back and forths :/

- Frontier - wrote:

[Epicsteve's Hard]
  1. HP 4 also used in Normal before. Try to make some variety! Oops I was sure I changed this before
  2. Remove Widescreen Support Ye
  3. 00:44:888 (5) - This slider might be too complex for newbie players to understand. I think you could make the slider clearer and more visible. Not really. This is a hard diff at 3.4*
  4. 00:44:888 (5,1) - I know what you trying to emphasize the cymbal sound. But isn't the jump too high? Keep in mind that it's a Hard diff and it still in the calm part. And also, this is the biggest jump in this diff since you didn't add any jump in kiai part. Accident. Before it wasn't this big lol
  5. 00:57:745 (1) - Why this 1/2-beat reverse slider while these notes, 00:56:374 (1) - and 00:59:117 (1) -, are 1/1-beat slider since the rhythm are totally the same. Changed
  6. 01:00:488 (1,2,1,2) - I understand what you trying to follow the vocal but why these notes keep following the vocal while the others don't? Try to compare with these notes, 00:56:374 (1,2,3,4) - , 00:57:745 (1,2,3,4) - , and 00:59:117 (1,2,3,4) - . Uhh there aren't any vocals on the other parts at all. Also this slow part will give emphasis to the actual buildup
  7. 01:05:631 (4) - It touches the hp-bar. So consider moving it lower to avoid having difficulty in reading notes. nudged down
  8. 01:07:345 (1) - The slider has been overlapped by 01:07:002 (5,6) - so it looks bad. I think you should avoid it. I don't think it looks that bad. I checked with Einja as well and it was fine. However, other people are telling me to change this so I'm considering
  9. 01:09:745 (4,5) - Compared to these 01:15:231 (4) -, 01:20:717 (4) -, 01:26:202 (4) - and etc. :thinking: And these are the only notes those do something like this. Readjusted kiai section
  10. 01:45:060 (1) - Wait.. What?! Why do you add nc at this? Aren't you actually add it on 01:44:374 (5) - ? My b
Thanks for the mod!!
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[[Pika]]

- Frontier - wrote:

no kd this time :3

[General]
  1. The spread isn't linear. (As I told to you earlier.)
  2. Wave hitsound with possible delay > 5ms: normal-hitfinish.wav


[Pika's Insane]
  1. 00:22:774 (1,2) - The other diffs didn't map this part. Consider about this. nah the other diffs are just dumb Kappa
  2. 00:24:831 (1) - This is kinda breaks the flow. This note is forcing the players to move from the right side and back to the left side again (and go back again ;( ) which makes the map flows unnaturally. Try to reverse this note to make the flow better. As well as 00:30:317 (1) - and you might try doing on 00:41:288 (1) - too. do you know how slow this section is, no
  3. 00:45:402 (1) - The issue is almost as same as the above. Why don't you try something like this for a better and clearer flow? no
  4. 01:07:345 (1) - Do you have the reason to make the slider velocity higher than the others? I understand what you are emphasizing the notes that has stronger sound than the others. But I think you could make it 1/1-beat slider instead to make it contrast with the others (since most of the sliders here are 1/2-beat. might be boring to have 1/2 sliders continuously right?) As well as 01:12:831 (1) -, 01:18:317 (1) -, etc. nah 1/1 sliders are too anticlimatic
  5. 01:07:688 (1) - While this 01:13:174 (1,2) - has totally the same rhythm , but why they mapped differently? Almost all notes here (which has the same rhythm as 01:07:688 (1) -) use 2 circles, so why don't you applied with this note too? entrance of section

I don't like how you make notes go like back and forth. Those make the diff kinda boring and not interesting. :|blame song not me
  1. Lazy

Call me back! when i am a bn
ReFaller
M4M from my queue
Easy and Normal looks good.
[Epicsteve's Hard]
just put some suggestions for this.
When 01:12:145 (3,4,5) has rhythm made by 1/2 slider and two notes on 1/4 beat snap, you could remake rhythm a little in 01:16:945 (1,2,3,4,5) to get this result
01:38:888 (1,2,3,4,5) - same could be appled here
[Pika's Insane]
00:33:402 - sure, skipping vocal line where you followed earlier whole time
00:45:402 (1) - if move this note to around x:216 y:160 to express finish sound? I would to play it how it will looks - but do not try remake 00:44:889 (4) to have nicer flow, i picked this place especially to make an uncomfortable flow.
00:55:345 (3) - better if you will use 2 circles instead of it, hard difficulty have same rhythm, show that your difficulty is harder
01:05:288 (1,2) - switch NCs to separate sliders from this stream
01:08:717 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - so...you probably watched fort's Highscore too often, try to use other patterns like squares, maybe apply it for 01:14:202 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) to show some variety, or at least change angles of current because i looked on them and they have it very similar
01:50:888 (6,7) - use two circles instead, no sound on blue ticks, guest mapper in Extra difficulty recognized this

so, good luck

your turn, Einja
[[Pika]]

ReFaller wrote:

M4M from my queue

[Pika's Insane]
00:33:402 - sure, skipping vocal line where you followed earlier whole time fixed
00:45:402 (1) - if move this note to around x:216 y:160 to express finish sound? I would play it how it will looks - but do not try remake 00:44:889 (4) to have nicer flow, i picked this place especially to make an uncomfortable flow.i suppose, stacked with 00:44:031 (1,2) - instead
00:55:345 (3) - better if you will use 2 circles instead of it, hard difficulty have same rhythm, show that your difficulty is harder the objects in that pattern have very similar distances, making the slider two circles would emphasize too many things and make the thing a generic filler pattern. instead, i switched the places of 00:55:002 (1,2) -
01:05:288 (1,2) - switch NCs to separate sliders from this stream ye
01:08:717 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - so...you probably watched fort's Highscore too often, try to use other patterns like squares, maybe apply it for 01:14:202 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) to show some variety, or at least change angles of current because i looked on them and they have it very similar i changed the angles a little on the pairs before the vocals kick in
01:50:888 (6,7) - use two circles instead, no sound on blue ticks, guest mapper in Extra difficulty recognized this i suppose i recognize it too

so, good luck

your turn, Einja
https://puu.sh/x0YLJ/a70d1f5045.osu
Kroytz
w

00:26:202 (1,2) - keep this as two sliders to be consistent with 00:23:459 (1,2) - rhythm. sounds fine to me with two sliders
00:31:688 (1,2) - I'd say the same with this. It really doesn't need to deviate with rhythm choice but seeing as how you do it this way I'll assume it was intentional

01:20:374 (3) - slider-body has unwanted hitsounded

01:33:402 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1) - I honestly really don't like the way you mapped this to be so close together. The space usage is incredibly limited and there's a TON of room on the editor to go around. A quick ctrl-a on the map and it looks like a lot of space is unused (not that it needs to be but something to keep in mind). I would really reconsider remapping this section to fit more space around.
00:25:517 (4) - these are a bit weird imo. maybe you can try to stack a circle on top of 00:24:831 (3) - so it isolates itself more to the drum beat? with the way the NC works and the weird looking overlap because of the 1/4, it all seems a bit strange to look visually.
00:31:002 (4) - ^

00:38:717 (4) - this seems a bit forced especially when you already used something like this 00:35:802 (3,4,5) - better to keep consistency with the circles

01:29:974 (3) - make this linear because the other sliders are linear around it probably

01:32:545 (2) - could be curved here
00:33:745 (5) - I don't believe this capture much of the aesthetic you were aiming for here because the slider overlaps with the slider to the left more than the right for the sake of capturing a small blanket

00:44:717 (4,5,1) - i dunno this shape stands out a bit too much from the rest. I also don't like how it overlaps with 00:42:659 (1) - and they don't share a relationship. might be okay to put this slider to the top-left section instead? gets a bit more space usage

01:08:717 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - something about this is also kind of... not very good because of how many times the objects continuously overlap with each other. by moving 01:09:402 (3) - to the right side, you can get more space to place objects around better than having everything come back inside over again
^ I think it happens quite a bit of times but I can't point each of them out really. I'd recommend trying to look back at what you placed and see if you're getting the most of the editor with your structures or if everything is constantly getting overlapped for.... some reason

01:47:117 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - it's kind of like, why is this always coming back to each other? it might be okay to use 01:49:517 (6) - and follow the direction of (5) so that you can use the left side a bit more and end off more dramatically.
Topic Starter
Einja

Kroytz wrote:

w

00:26:202 (1,2) - keep this as two sliders to be consistent with 00:23:459 (1,2) - rhythm. sounds fine to me with two sliders
00:31:688 (1,2) - I'd say the same with this. It really doesn't need to deviate with rhythm choice but seeing as how you do it this way I'll assume it was intentional yah i'm alternating between 2 patterns, since if i only used 1 pattern it would be kinda boring.

01:20:374 (3) - slider-body has unwanted hitsounded AAAAAA

01:33:402 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1) - I honestly really don't like the way you mapped this to be so close together. The space usage is incredibly limited and there's a TON of room on the editor to go around. A quick ctrl-a on the map and it looks like a lot of space is unused (not that it needs to be but something to keep in mind). I would really reconsider remapping this section to fit more space around. oh man, yeah i made stuff a little less clustered towards the end ;w;
00:25:517 (4) - these are a bit weird imo. maybe you can try to stack a circle on top of 00:24:831 (3) - so it isolates itself more to the drum beat? with the way the NC works and the weird looking overlap because of the 1/4, it all seems a bit strange to look visually.
00:31:002 (4) - ^ gonna assume you mean 1/2, but stacking that extended slider would play really badly especially in a normal, where the only things i stacked were double circles. also the aesthetics look okay to me imo

00:38:717 (4) - this seems a bit forced especially when you already used something like this 00:35:802 (3,4,5) - better to keep consistency with the circles yah

01:29:974 (3) - make this linear because the other sliders are linear around it probably i think it's okay right now

01:32:545 (2) - could be curved here looks ugly
this mod was very helpful! thank you!
Yamicchi
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- Frontier -
Epicsteve2

ReFaller wrote:

[Epicsteve's Hard]
just put some suggestions for this.
When 01:12:145 (3,4,5) has rhythm made by 1/2 slider and two notes on 1/4 beat snap, you could remake rhythm a little in 01:16:945 (1,2,3,4,5) to get this result
01:38:888 (1,2,3,4,5) - same could be appled here

Kroytz wrote:

00:33:745 (5) - I don't believe this capture much of the aesthetic you were aiming for here because the slider overlaps with the slider to the left more than the right for the sake of capturing a small blanket

00:44:717 (4,5,1) - i dunno this shape stands out a bit too much from the rest. I also don't like how it overlaps with 00:42:659 (1) - and they don't share a relationship. might be okay to put this slider to the top-left section instead? gets a bit more space usage

01:08:717 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - something about this is also kind of... not very good because of how many times the objects continuously overlap with each other. by moving 01:09:402 (3) - to the right side, you can get more space to place objects around better than having everything come back inside over again
^ I think it happens quite a bit of times but I can't point each of them out really. I'd recommend trying to look back at what you placed and see if you're getting the most of the editor with your structures or if everything is constantly getting overlapped for.... some reason

01:47:117 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - it's kind of like, why is this always coming back to each other? it might be okay to use 01:49:517 (6) - and follow the direction of (5) so that you can use the left side a bit more and end off more dramatically.
Fixed (I think) everything after rearranging pretty much everything in the kiai time. sorry for late ;-;
osu file format v14

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Version:Epicsteve's Hard
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Yamicchi
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Nikakis
Epicsteve2
I stole backgrounds thanks :^)
Yamicchi
@Nikakis I like cute anime girls but ye I'll consider one of them if it really is a problem
Uta

- Frontier - wrote:

lol congrats on bubbled :>
Fursum

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Epicsteve2
LOL
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Einja
oh gratz frontier
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