1. Easy (1.39 stars, 67 notes)
2. Hard (2.45 stars, 150 notes)
3. Normal (1.58 stars, 94 notes)

Civil oath wrote:

하앍하앍 슥-고이한 포켓몬 노래잖아!!
모딩 ㄱ다.

1. There's something I'm confused about.. did you use 0.9x DS or 1.0x? When I first checked it, it was 0.9x, I also tried 1.0x, and it seemed like you were using 1.0x instead of 0.9x.
2. 00:02:554 (1,2) - These two have the same sound, yet they have different shapes. Not really a big issue, but I would make these two identical so beginners could know that sliders with this shapes mainly follow this violin sound. Besides, the music doesn't really change here, so making these two identical would fit and would look visually better IMO. How about you try this?
3. 00:09:812 (2,3) - Why I asked you about the snap you were using is because these two seemed too close for a 1.0x snap. But again, when I was checking the snap you were using, it turned out to be 0.9x instead of 1.0x even the DS between all the objects here uses 1.0x. Change your snapping to 1.0x and fix the DS here since they're a bit close.
4. 00:19:973 (2,3) - Here too, a slight DS issue.
5. 00:25:296 (3,4) - ^
6. 00:50:941 (1) - This could be a bit unpredictable for beginners. Remember when you used a used a curvey slider at the beginning? I think a curvey slider here woukd fit much better than a straight line, since the violin sound here is high>a bit low>high. Maybe try this?
7. 00:54:812 (1) - ^
8. 00:59:651 (1,2,3) - (1) and (2) have different shapes but same sound, (1) and (3) have the same shape but different sounds. Like I said, would be better to emphasise two similar sounds with the same slider shape so it could be easy for beginners to recognize. Consider making (1) and (2) with the same slider shape and (3) with a different slider shape.
9. 01:06:969 - There's a strong finish sound at 1/8 snapping, and I guess I know why you didn't add a circle here even though the sound is pretty strong. You could add a red line here around this timing to emphasise the strong finish sound.

1. 00:04:489 (1,2) - Blanket between the two could be improved.

1. 00:21:183 (3,4,5) - (5) is a bit too close with (4).

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1. 00:03:542 (2) - 슬라이더가 딱딱한 느낌이 드네요 둥글게 해주면 좋겠어요
   
2. 00:08:380 (1) - 슬라이더를 10 º 회전하면 예쁠거(?) 같네요
   
   Like this

   
3. 00:39:349 (1) - 슬라이더를 둥글게 해주면 좋겠어요
   
4. 00:50:961 (1) - ^
   
5. 00:54:832 (1) - 슬라이더를 -100 º 회전하면 노트 배치가 자연스러울거 같네요
   
   Like this

   
   
   위에 쓴 타이밍 코드를 넣으시고
   
6. 01:07:488 (4) - 슬라이더를 알맞게 배치해주세요
   
7. 01:08:699 (1) - 스핀을 01:08:669 부터 01:13:032 까지 해주세요
   
   70800,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0 -> 71032,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
   71768,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0 -> 71699,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
   72594,-100,4,2,1,20,0,0 -> 72365,-100,4,2,1,20,0,0
   
   위와 같이 왼쪽 그린 바 코드를 오른쪽 그린 바 코드로 변경 해 주세요

1. 00:03:542 (3) - 슬라이더를 둥글게 해주세요
   
2. 00:11:284 (6) - ^
   
3. 00:15:155 (5) - ^
   
4. 00:42:251 (6) - ^
   
   위에 쓴 타이밍 코드를 넣으시고
   
5. 01:06:966 (1,2,3) - 이 노트들을 알맞게 배치해주세요
   
6. 01:09:032 (1) - 스핀을 처음부분은 01:09:032에 배치하시면 되고, 끝 부분은 Easy 난이도 처럼 해주시면 됩니다
   
   그린 바도 마찬가지로 Easy 난이도 처럼 해주시면 됩니다

• CS를 3.5로 바꾸는게 어떠신가요?
  
  위에 쓴 타이밍 코드를 넣으시고

1. 01:06:966 (1,2,3,4) - 이 노트들을 알맞게 배치해주세요
   
2. 01:08:865 (1) - 스핀 처음부분은 01:08:865에 배치하시면 되고, 끝 부분은 Easy, Normal 난이도 처럼 해주시면 됩니다
   
   그린 바도 마찬가지로 Easy, Normal 난이도 처럼 해주시면 됩니다