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subarasikibuta
加油~
SPOILER
补丁补丁补丁补丁补丁补丁补丁补丁补丁补丁补丁补丁补丁补丁补丁补丁补丁补丁补丁补丁补丁补丁补丁补丁补丁补丁
wmfchris
[Taiko]
-我覺得沒必要加減速 拿掉吧
SPOILER
intro的部分 3/4就免了吧 將x--x--x改成x---x-x也ok
00:11:311 - 音樂明明是d k d
00:18:234 - d d k
00:19:677 - 後面有放前奏1/4 這裡也放做ddd
00:29:484 - k d/k k
00:38:327 - ddkkd
00:39:907 - 不要一句聽3次
00:48:602 - kk---kd---dd d ...
01:06:863 - kk d
01:21:972 - 這段的3/4用x xxx x過的話重音左3連中間很怪 改一改吧
01:27:407 - 音樂向下跑 kkddd
01:35:450 - 沒spinner只好用大圓
01:49:146 - kdd k ddk
02:03:494 - start spinner here spinner跟上一個note只差1/4會把notes蓋住 所以不要用短spinner
02:08:927 - kkd
02:32:623 - kkddk
02:33:275 - 大圓大圓大圓!!!!!!!!
02:34:797 - k k d
03:16:536 - kkddd
03:30:232 - 有誤導性(kkddkD)啊 用長spinner吧
03:37:297 - D
03:41:101 - d
03:42:840 - k D

7/10

- 好多xx / xxxx 還不如多用3連
- 有了每句前面的dk聽上去還好
- 02:25:558 這段砍一下 又不是kiai
- 不要老是一句打幾遍 > : D

oooops 12點 有機會再看看其他diff >_</~
spboxer3

wmfchris wrote:

[Taiko]
-我覺得沒必要加減速 拿掉吧
SPOILER
intro的部分 3/4就免了吧 將x--x--x改成x---x-x也ok :(
00:11:311 - 音樂明明是d k d
00:18:234 - d d k
00:19:677 - 後面有放前奏1/4 這裡也放做ddd
00:29:484 - k d/k k
00:38:327 - ddkkd
00:39:907 - 不要一句聽3次
00:48:602 - kk---kd---dd d ...
01:06:863 - kk d
01:21:972 - 這段的3/4用x xxx x過的話重音左3連中間很怪 改一改吧
01:27:407 - 音樂向下跑 kkddd kkddk
01:35:450 - 沒spinner只好用大圓
01:49:146 - kdd k ddk
02:03:494 - start spinner here spinner跟上一個note只差1/4會把notes蓋住 所以不要用短spinner
02:08:927 - kkd
02:32:623 - kkddk 不想的說 我認為kkkdk也很合音樂
02:33:275 - 大圓大圓大圓!!!!!!!!
02:34:797 - k k d
03:16:536 - kkddd kkddk
03:30:232 - 有誤導性(kkddkD)啊 用長spinner吧
03:37:297 - D
03:41:101 - d
03:42:840 - k D

7/10

- 好多xx / xxxx 還不如多用3連
- 有了每句前面的dk聽上去還好
- 02:25:558 這段砍一下 又不是kiai
- 不要老是一句打幾遍 > : D

oooops 12點 有機會再看看其他diff >_</~
沒有標明的代表改了!!!

Download: fripSide - Heaven is a Place on Earth (kioukiou) [Sp3's Taiko].osu
Topic Starter
kioukiou
Updated,thanks for wmfchris's mod. :)
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Kawayi Rika
来送小星星了~

永远支持QQ姐~加油~~ :)

            
Aleks719
#modreqs

General
Map starts from 00:02:658. I guess you don't need in audio lead-in 2sec in all diffs.
This bpm point is not necessary :
138,000 bpm
125667 offset
You diffs are snapped without it.

Hard
00:32:946 (10) - add whistle
00:34:965 (1) - ^ ?
00:58:711 (7) - add nc
01:33:276 (9) - ^
02:17:623 (9) - ^

-Gamu-'s Normal
HP -1
00:34:965 (1) - add whistle?
01:35:015 (2) - ^
02:33:275 (6,7) - add 2 whistles
03:05:666 (1) - add nc
03:12:406 (5) - ^

useless mod is so useless, star -___-
Gamu

Aleks719 wrote:

#modreqs

-Gamu-'s Normal
HP -1 no fixed
00:34:965 (1) - add whistle? no fixed
01:35:015 (2) - ^ fixed!
02:33:275 (6,7) - add 2 whistles fixed!
03:05:666 (1) - add nc fixed!
03:12:406 (5) - ^ fixed!

useless mod is so useless, star -___-
mod thank you~ :)

Download: fripSide - Heaven is a Place on Earth (kioukiou) [-Gamu-'s Normal].osu
Topic Starter
kioukiou
Removed lead-in.
About the offset - BPM : 138.00 / offset : 125667
I set it because of THIS,so I want to keep it.
I didn't change any hitsounds and new combo stuff.
Edit : after kanpakyin’s mod, I decided to add some new combo as Aleks719's post.
Thanks for modding.
murasamenosigure
good map~
ランクド頑張ってください
応援してます
(゜∀゜)。彡゜(゜∀゜)。彡゜(゜∀゜)。彡゜
kudosuくれたら投げ返しときます☆キラッ
RainForce
Great like always.
star.
~~~~~~~~~~~~
Topic Starter
kioukiou

murasamenosigure wrote:

good map~
ランクド頑張ってください
応援してます
(゜∀゜)。彡゜(゜∀゜)。彡゜(゜∀゜)。彡゜
kudosuくれたら投げ返しときます☆キラッ
応援ありがとう!

RainForce wrote:

Great like always.
star.
~~~~~~~~~~~~
Thanks for your star. :)
Hope you like it.
kanpakyin
Hi 萌QQ
可能有點nazi xD
[General]
  1. 真的不用加上short ver?
[-Gamu-'s Normal]
Issue/Unrankable stuff
(Something bad in gameplay or unrankable staff,you should take a look on it.)
  1. Not much going to say.
Beatmap design/suggestion
(These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
  1. 00:04:965 (3) - Some rhythm suggestion here:Probably reduce the slider to 00:05:831?Just going to fit the piano and 00:06:119 - here doesn't have any music/musical instrument to support it,so I think end the slider here is inappropriate.
  2. 00:08:138 (2) - ^Base on that,I think a note would more appropriate than a slider.
  3. 00:12:754 (2) - ^Same T_T
  4. 00:25:734 (6) - Yeah,add a new combo here to consistent you combo setting \:D/(The combo length is longer than others)
  5. 00:53:494 (1) - Probably add a whistle at the end of the slider?Yeah,follow something in your next 3/4 rhythm :3
  6. 02:46:101 (2) - I prefer remove clap here,just a little bit weird if you make a clap suddenly...
  7. 02:46:971 (3) - ^Same!
[Hard]
Issue/Unrankable stuff
(Something bad in gameplay or unrankable staff,you should take a look on it.)
  1. I found nothing .__.
Beatmap design/suggestion
(These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
  1. 00:58:711 (7) - 為了和其他combo的長度大致相等,建議在這裏new combo.
  2. 01:03:928 (1) - 其實我覺得這個跳沒啥必要,這種要跳不跳的間距,真的很奇怪,要不把(4)-拉上一點,要不把(4)-完全疊在(1)-上面好了.
  3. 01:20:667 (1,2,3,4) - 內眼上看這個正方形歪了,可以把(2)- 往下移一點點.
  4. 01:31:102 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18) - 這Combo長得有點離譜orz..我強烈建議加new combo.01:34:363 (13) - 要不在這裏加個?
  5. 01:50:885 (1) - 可以把slider的第2個折點拉好一點嗎?
  6. 03:21:101 (2) - 其實光聽音樂感覺就可以把這個弄成一個Jump.而且(1.2)-slider的中間疊起來也不太好看.
  7. 液,QQ姐的stream都縮短了DS >//< 太萌了
[S i R i R u's Diff]
Issue/Unrankable stuff
(Something bad in gameplay or unrankable staff,you should take a look on it.)
  1. 02:06:536 (2,3,4,5) - I don't know it should be 1/3 or 1/4,however it was really awkward during gameplay and 02:06:971 (3) - is obvious off with 1/3 snap(Playrate 25).It should be 1/4 snap after 02:06:971 (3) -
  2. 02:10:884 (1,2,3) - ^Same,something should snap in1/4.
Beatmap design/suggestion
(These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
  1. 00:55:233 (5) - I think this should be 3/4 T_T 3/4 is more appropriate than 1/2
  2. 01:06:972 (6) - Probably add a clap here? (S2) Than make it back to Normal hitsound from 01:07:189 -
  3. 02:05:015 (1) - I really don't recommend a spinner here,although it's rankable but it doesn't show really good effert during gameplay.I suggest use a x0.5 slider instead of it.
  4. 03:23:275 (x) - Probably add a note here?Make a triplet here :> you might need to adjust the spacing after adding.
[Sp3's Taiko]
Issue/Unrankable stuff
(Something bad in gameplay or unrankable staff,you should take a look on it.)
  1. 首先我覺得你必須先檢查一遍所有的3/4note,沒錯這個點子是不錯,但是過量就會有累聚感,就像是一個妹子你會咁興趣,但試太多相同的妹子你就覺得煩,這個是同一個道理,在音樂適合的地方上加沒問題,隨意的加一點也可以,大量的就不好了:/ (你可以去看看RL的圖,3/4note詭異感滿怖)
  2. 03:02:188 (x) - Taiko diff在那麼段時間內的Re-Kiai是不允許的,請Remove.
Pattern/Suggestion
(These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
  1. 00:39:635 - 從這裏開始可以加一點音量
  2. 00:46:102 (3,4) - 這2個都變don把.
  3. 00:46:537 (1) - 相反這個因為是高音還有重音所以可以變Finsih+clap
  4. 00:50:015 (1,1,1,2,1,1) - 這裏有濫用3/4的可能,這裏聽音樂可是正規的1/2+1/4 3連
  5. 01:09:146 (1) - 去掉kat加Finsih
  6. 01:09:580 (2) - 這個在鼓點上,建議加k
  7. 01:21:972 (x) - 留意這段變速內的3/4note大圓,大部分都和音樂不合,詭異感滿載
  8. 03:14:253 (x) - 加note
  9. 不列出來的3/4不代表沒問題,還有大量的xx xxxx組合與音樂不太合,新手Taiko mapper還是別用太多偶數連.
Pretty nice map at all,Star!
Gamu

kanpakyin wrote:

[-Gamu-'s Normal]
Issue/Unrankable stuff
(Something bad in gameplay or unrankable staff,you should take a look on it.)
  1. Not much going to say.
Beatmap design/suggestion
(These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
  1. 00:04:965 (3) - Some rhythm suggestion here:Probably reduce the slider to 00:05:831?Just going to fit the piano and 00:06:119 - here doesn't have any music/musical instrument to support it,so I think end the slider here is inappropriate. fixed!
  2. 00:08:138 (2) - ^Base on that,I think a note would more appropriate than a slider. fixed!
  3. 00:12:754 (2) - ^Same T_T fixed!
  4. 00:25:734 (6) - Yeah,add a new combo here to consistent you combo setting \:D/(The combo length is longer than others)fixed!
  5. 00:53:494 (1) - Probably add a whistle at the end of the slider?Yeah,follow something in your next 3/4 rhythm :3 no fixed
  6. 02:46:101 (2) - I prefer remove clap here,just a little bit weird if you make a clap suddenly... fixed!
  7. 02:46:971 (3) - ^Same! fixed!


Pretty nice map at all,Star!
Mod thank you~ :)

Download: fripSide - Heaven is a Place on Earth (kioukiou) [-Gamu-'s Normal].osu
Topic Starter
kioukiou

kanpakyin wrote:

Hi 萌QQ
可能有點nazi xD
[General]
  1. 真的不用加上short ver? - hmm,想了一下覺得不需要,雖然mp3經過剪輯修短,但還不至於需要加上這個附註
[Hard]
Issue/Unrankable stuff
(Something bad in gameplay or unrankable staff,you should take a look on it.)
  1. I found nothing .__.
Beatmap design/suggestion
(These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
  1. 00:58:711 (7) - 為了和其他combo的長度大致相等,建議在這裏new combo. - Fixed,因為也有其他人曾經建議過,考慮過後決定加上new combo.
  2. 01:03:928 (1) - 其實我覺得這個跳沒啥必要,這種要跳不跳的間距,真的很奇怪,要不把(4)-拉上一點,要不把(4)-完全疊在(1)-上面好了. - Fixed,已將(4)拉上一點
  3. 01:20:667 (1,2,3,4) - 內眼上看這個正方形歪了,可以把(2)- 往下移一點點. - Fixed,已把第二段方形擺法整個拉下來一點
  4. 01:31:102 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18) - 這Combo長得有點離譜orz..我強烈建議加new combo.01:34:363 (13) - 要不在這裏加個? - Fixed,也有其他人建議加上new combo,考慮過後決定加上,不過我是加在(9).
  5. 01:50:885 (1) - 可以把slider的第2個折點拉好一點嗎? - Sorry,did not change anything.
  6. 03:21:101 (2) - 其實光聽音樂感覺就可以把這個弄成一個Jump.而且(1.2)-slider的中間疊起來也不太好看. - Sorry,did not change anything.
  7. 液,QQ姐的stream都縮短了DS >//< 太萌了
Thanks for your mod.
Waiting for S i R i R u and spboxer3's respond.
spboxer3

kanpakyin wrote:

[Sp3's Taiko]
Issue/Unrankable stuff
(Something bad in gameplay or unrankable staff,you should take a look on it.)
  1. 首先我覺得你必須先檢查一遍所有的3/4note,沒錯這個點子是不錯,但是過量就會有累聚感,就像是一個妹子你會咁興趣,但試太多相同的妹子你就覺得煩,這個是同一個道理,在音樂適合的地方上加沒問題,隨意的加一點也可以,大量的就不好了:/ (你可以去看看RL的圖,3/4note詭異感滿怖)
    修改了一些3/4拍
  2. 03:02:188 (x) - Taiko diff在那麼段時間內的Re-Kiai是不允許的,請Remove.
OK

Pattern/Suggestion
(These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
  1. 00:39:635 - 從這裏開始可以加一點音量 fix
  2. 00:46:102 (3,4) - 這2個都變don把. fix
  3. 00:46:537 (1) - 相反這個因為是高音還有重音所以可以變Finsih+clap fix
  4. 00:50:015 (1,1,1,2,1,1) - 這裏有濫用3/4的可能,這裏聽音樂可是正規的1/2+1/4 3連 fix
  5. 01:09:146 (1) - 去掉kat加Finsih fix
  6. 01:09:580 (2) - 這個在鼓點上,建議加k fix
  7. 01:21:972 (x) - 留意這段變速內的3/4note大圓,大部分都和音樂不合,詭異感滿載 改了(不過我認為還好阿lol)
  8. 03:14:253 (x) - 加note fix
  9. 不列出來的3/4不代表沒問題,還有大量的xx xxxx組合與音樂不太合,新手Taiko mapper還是別用太多偶數連.
恩...
Download: fripSide - Heaven is a Place on Earth (kioukiou) [Sp3's Taiko].osu
taka1235
I really love kiou's map :oops:
                      
Takos
looks pretty nice
Your message is too short. Please do not post messages like "star", and make sure you are constructively adding to the thread in question.
Cyril Scarlet

kanpakyin wrote:

[S i R i R u's Diff]
Issue/Unrankable stuff
(Something bad in gameplay or unrankable staff,you should take a look on it.)
  1. 02:06:536 (2,3,4,5) - I don't know it should be 1/3 or 1/4,however it was really awkward during gameplay and 02:06:971 (3) - is obvious off with 1/3 snap(Playrate 25).It should be 1/4 snap after 02:06:971 (3) - fixed
  2. 02:10:884 (1,2,3) - ^Same,something should snap in1/4. fixed
Beatmap design/suggestion
(These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
  1. 00:55:233 (5) - I think this should be 3/4 T_T 3/4 is more appropriate than 1/2 fixed
  2. 01:06:972 (6) - Probably add a clap here? (S2) Than make it back to Normal hitsound from 01:07:189 - Remake
  3. 02:05:015 (1) - I really don't recommend a spinner here,although it's rankable but it doesn't show really good effert during gameplay.I suggest use a x0.5 slider instead of it.
  4. 03:23:275 (x) - Probably add a note here?Make a triplet here :> you might need to adjust the spacing after adding. fixed
謝謝 ʅ(◔౪◔`)ʃ

Download: fripSide - Heaven is a Place on Earth (kioukiou) [S i R i R u's Diff].osu
Topic Starter
kioukiou
OK,updated .
Breeze
[-Gamu-'s Normal]
  1. 01:00:015 (4) - Remove finish here, add finish to 01:00:450 (1), noce you did so, remove whistle of 01:00:450 (1)
  2. 01:06:972 (3) - Remove clap, starts use clap when song climax start, I mean from 01:07:407 on
  3. 01:07:407 (1) - Add finish
  4. 01:13:494 (4) - Remove this clap, if you want a double clap, add to 01:13:711 sounds better
  5. 01:14:363 (1) - Use finish instead of whistle
  6. 01:17:841 (1), 01:18:711 (3), 01:19:580 (4) - Add finish
  7. 01:30:015 (3) - ^
  8. 01:31:754 (2) - ^
  9. 02:50:884 (4) - Why use finish here? maybe remove it
  10. 03:08:275 (4) - Remove clap, and I think double clap doesn't fit here
  11. 03:09:580 (1) - Use finish instead of clap seems better
[Qoneesama]
  1. 01:50:885 (1) - This ugly slider doesn't fit Qoneesama
  2. 03:16:101 (1), 03:16:536 (2), 03:16:753 (3) - Add finish, remove clap of 03:16:536 (2). That seems sounds better
[Bakaru]
The custom normal-hitfinish sounds like old Chinese gong 囧
  1. According to your custom normal-hitwhistle2 adding parteen of previous 2, shouldn't it be added at 00:09:581 (1), and next 3 add at 00:11:888 (1), 00:14:196 (1), 00:16:504 (1) - ? What you used just a bit odd compare to previous 2, but last 3 themselves sounds good enough, just...not the same partten
  2. 01:59:580 (1) - Add finish

    nice map
    star
Topic Starter
kioukiou

Breeze wrote:

[Qoneesama] WHY IS PINK? ( つд⊂)
  1. 01:50:885 (1) - This ugly slider doesn't fit Qoneesama - Changed it to other style slider.
  2. 03:16:101 (1), 03:16:536 (2), 03:16:753 (3) - Add finish, remove clap of 03:16:536 (2). That seems sounds better - Sounds good,changed!
Thanks for modding.
Gamu

Breeze wrote:

[-Gamu-'s Normal]
  1. 01:00:015 (4) - Remove finish here, add finish to 01:00:450 (1), noce you did so, remove whistle of 01:00:450 (1) fixed!
  2. 01:06:972 (3) - Remove clap, starts use clap when song climax start, I mean from 01:07:407 on fixed!
  3. 01:07:407 (1) - Add finish fixed!
  4. 01:13:494 (4) - Remove this clap, if you want a double clap, add to 01:13:711 sounds better 01:13:494 - clap remove, 01:13:711 - clap add
  5. 01:14:363 (1) - Use finish instead of whistle fixed!
  6. 01:17:841 (1), 01:18:711 (3), 01:19:580 (4) - Add finish fixed!
  7. 01:30:015 (3) - ^ fixed!
  8. 01:31:754 (2) - ^ fixed!
  9. 02:50:884 (4) - Why use finish here? maybe remove it fixed!
  10. 03:08:275 (4) - Remove clap, and I think double clap doesn't fit here fixed!
  11. 03:09:580 (1) - Use finish instead of clap seems better fixed!

nice map
star[/list]
Mod thank you~ :)

Download: fripSide - Heaven is a Place on Earth (kioukiou) [-Gamu-'s Normal].osu
Cyril Scarlet
謝謝 Bre :P

Repaired.

change pattern in 2nd hitsounds for same with 1st style

and added finish

Download: fripSide - Heaven is a Place on Earth (kioukiou) [S i R i R u's Diff].osu
Breeze
nothing much to say, nice map as usual
let's get this map bubbled
Snowy Dream
QQ姐神图 ;)
spboxer3
>_>泡了阿~好快
估計2天內就會Rank了吧lol
Your message is too short.
James2250
Looks good to me, has a nice flow as always

Ranked~
spboxer3
果然是兩天啊
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hoLysoup
^^
Patchouli
Congrats QQ姐様<3
Suzully
Congratz~! :)
Kawayi Rika
Congratz QQ姐 萌神MAPPER~ :)
Sure
Congratulations guys :D
wowmemory
第三了我靠 真特么不容易啊
Perfection
Love this map <3
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