-00:00:042 (1,2,3) - this is a 1/6th stream
-00:03:191 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - you could have turned this one so 9 is under the 3 way sliderend, also, the spacing on this is not the same as in 00:11:147 (4,5,6,7,8,9) -
-00:04:185 (1) - and 00:05:180 (3) - are different shaped from the 1/1 repeat sliders, also they look ugly with their imperfect slider curve shape
-00:05:926 (1,2,3) - is this a 1/6th stream with the background sound? unsure about this one
-00:20:760 (5,6) - these are not perfectly aligned
-00:30:042 (1,2,3,4,5) - is 1/6th
-00:31:036 (1) - so is this?
-00:34:517 (2,3,4) - why is 3 not perfectly stacked with, when its done here 00:38:495 (2,3,4) - ?
-00:43:633 (8) - shouldnt have the same angle as 00:42:970 (6) - , rotate by 15°
-00:47:114 (2,3,4,5,6) - why is spacing so low suddenly in these, when 00:45:953 (1,2,3,4) - are the same sounds but building up towards the main jump in this pattern? use declining DS here ( 01:52:086 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - here its made better )
-00:49:600 (1,2,3,4) - 1/6th stream
-00:55:567 (3) - you should make this a slider, on protracted vowels you use sliders in this pattern before, you should do this on this one aswell, would give more strength to her voice aswell, therefore emphasizing better with the singer
-00:57:556 (5) - NC because 02:03:191 (1)
-00:59:545 (6) - ^
-01:09:489 (1,2) - these are off, i would copy paste 01:08:826 (1,2) - and place them so 2 is under 01:09:158 (1) -
-01:13:467 (1,2) - i would place 2 further apart because its an increase in sound so you should use an increase in DS aswell, place 2 around x=326 y=58
-01:16:782 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - muuuch less spacing in this pattern compared to 01:08:826 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - and even if you keep it this small, use decreasing DS from 1-2 to 1-2 to 1-2 or same spacing, but not use spacing like this ( once increasing, once decreasing, even tho the sound is decreasing on every new combo ) i would do it as 01:08:826 (1,2,1,2,1,2) -
-01:19:434 (3,4,5,6) - this is 1/6th aswell? im getting more and more unsure about my 1/6th complaints qq, but also, it flows weird, either make it more straght making it work together with 01:19:268 (2) - or rotate it more ( around 15° )
-01:22:417 (3,1) - is this the part where a new mapper began? because earlier you used perfectly stacks for such short slider and now you dont
-01:23:743 (1,2,3) - ^
-01:28:716 (2) - no sound change (except that its longer), so you shouldnt change the direction the aim movement is onto the slider ( going upwards instead of downwards as in the 2 previous movements )
-01:32:031 (2,3,1) - see 01:22:417 (3,1) -
-01:35:677 (1,2,3,4) - in the previous part ( 00:30:042 (1,2,3,4,5) - ) you focused on a different part of the map, would change for consistency sake
-01:36:672 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
-01:36:340 (5,1,2) - if you keep it, overlap of the slider
-01:55:235 (2,3,4,5) - 1/6th stream
-02:08:495 (1,2,3) - why such a huge gap in DS between 1 and 2 compared to 2 and 3
-02:09:324 (4) - is not perfectly centered with the slider before
-02:11:312 (1,2,1) - 1/6th burst
-02:14:462 (1,2,3) - this looks rather ugly compared to the rest of the map
-02:18:771 (3,4,5) - why is DS on 3 to 4 compared to 4 to 5 smaller? its the same sound. And if you argue with the whistle in the BG, then you have to do the whole pattern decreasing
-02:19:103 (5) - you could make this a slider
-02:22:417 (1,2,3) - same as 02:14:462 (1,2,3) -
-02:23:909 (2,3,4) - this is weird flow wise, place 2 on 3 , 3 on 4 and 4 on 02:24:904 (4) - and adjust 3 so you have a perfect triangle https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8541660, you might wanna adjust the next circle so its not a linear movement
-02:39:324 (1,2,3) - 1 and 3 are not perfectly aligned
-02:50:926 (2) - we found the mapper who did it right! I bet its Deramok?
-02:54:738 (2,3,4) - why is this differently spaced compared to 02:46:782 (2,3,4) - ?
-02:58:882 (2,3,4,5) - 1/6th stream
-03:06:837 (5) - NC because 02:03:191 (1)
-03:09:821 (3) - make it a slider? :c
-03:15:042 (3) - i would decide if you wanna keep it like this or change it to something like 01:05:843 (1) - or 02:11:312 (1,2,1) -
-03:18:440 (3) - NC
-03:18:771 (5) - NC
-03:18:440 (3,4) - spacing on this is too high since its a decreasing sound ( i explained it here -01:16:782 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - ), different problem, but please do the same execution
-03:20:843 (4,5,6) - 1/6th stream
-03:23:080 (7) - please redo the mp3 because of this, you should fade out on this specific sound and not later, sounds like you havent finished the map
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