qqqant wrote:

crumpet, shione has a VERY good point about the offset. does it really make sense for all of the strong beats and kiai-starts and ends to be on "beat 2" of every measure? the first beat is clearly a pickup beat (which is what "auftakt" means as shione was saying). just because a BN says its okay doesnt mean its fine to immediately disregard this point; the feel of the beat wouldnt make sense for barline-skin players.

if you seriously dont think the timing is a problem i sincerely encourage you to talk to other BNs and QATs instead of entrusting it to merely yours and tofu's judgement.

Rivals_7 wrote:

The timing is legit wrong. the downbeat of the song falls on - 00:00:852 - but your metronome downbeat (the big white tick) isn't. this is musically incorrect.

Arzenvald wrote:

protip : always check aimod if unsure :^)
will take a look in case some other stuff slips away before nomination
mmm yes

[General]
> the folder size is inflated by 4 different image with unnecessarily big file size (because even its full hd, most people will dim 100% the playfield anyway)
so its strongly recommended to optimize the file size of the image background without reducing the image resolution, simply by converting the .png format into .jpg

Lanturn wrote:

Greetings CrumpetFiddler! If this gets DQ'd for any other means (Or you wish to personally DQ this yourself to address this), there is slightly more accurate metadata you can use, though the current is fine. Your set currently matches the first option while the second option is more accurate and recommended.


- Unicode Title: Yeah!Break!Care!Break!
- or: Yeah! Break! Care! Break!
- Unicode Artist: 谷本貴義
- Romanised Artist: Tanimoto Takayoshi
or
- Unicode Title: Yeah! Break! Care! Break! (TVサイズ)
- Romanised Title: Yeah! Break! Care! Break! (TV Size)
- Unicode Artist: 谷本貴義(Dragon Soul)
- Romanised Artist: Tanimoto Takayoshi (Dragon Soul)
- Source: ドラゴンボール改

- References:
+ http://columbia.jp/prod-info/COCC-16283/
+ http://columbia.jp/prod-info/COCX-35922/
+ https://web.archive.org/web/20100619181 ... ai/topics/
+ https://lanturn.s-ul.eu/X4iSmH7O

谷本貴義(Dragon Soul) is more commonly found on the soundtracks / publisher website though standalone 谷本貴義 is found in the old website. TV Size is also found on the OST soundtrack/publisher website.

Let me know if you wish to change this. If this set does get DQ'd though from other means, please swap over to the second option.

Regardless, congrats!

DoNotMess wrote:

beep boop , tried to play this, map is quite good owo but... something that i catch real quick when i was playing and then decided to go a bit of in-depth

Insaiyan

00:39:609 - Why is this part not mapped as hand? as i see here the layering is supposed to be hand because of the crash sound.
first kiai
second kiai
as far as i noticed , there is no significant difference with the music itself between mentioned part so it is supposed to be consistently mapped

a better question is, why would that matter at all? what your suggesting is absolutely absurd, how it is mapped as of current represents the music fine

00:41:100 - there is no crash here, i think 2 notes is enough to represent the kick

i dont think so, its also to keep consistancy throughout the entirety of the song


00:55:820 - u can actually do the same as what u did here 00:54:330 - given the sound is strong enough to be mapped as 3 notes and also 00:56:566 - u do mapped it as 3 notes

i think i understand what your saying here but i disagree

(lul sorry for the mod order)
00:05:883 - 3 notes crash sound as well

contemplated, but i feel how it is now flows better

00:06:628 (6628|1) - this sounds like a ghost note, if u mapped vocal then 00:06:255 - should be mapped as well, the actual percussion sound is 00:06:721 - if u hear with 25%

there is a faint sound that can be heard if you listen to it, the vocal isnt something thats mapped (here)

Hard

00:36:069 - this part is fine imo but i think the sound here is already mapped as hand in insaiyan diff, i suggest to change the marked one with only 2 notes to represent increase in volume of the music, besides, it's only clap sound there and patterns can be distinct between diffs

its fine how it is, theres plenty in the diff already to differentiate it with Insaiyan

00:44:081 - im pretty sure you are layering the melody as ln here as intended like in insaiyan diff, but this one is missing 1 ln here, it could honestly be added and not damaging any structure of the pattern there

true, but the main and clearly heard synth kicks in when the first ln i have is mapped, it'd be right either way

00:45:386 - the kick here could be mapped as well since it's significant enough in H diff

no, it would end up causing a weird jack

00:47:994 - same with before

same answer

Hitsounds

00:41:100 (41100|2) - there is no crash here as i mentioned before,remove Finish

00:45:199 (45199|0) - i dont understand why is there Whistle here, there is clearly no kick sound here but instead 00:45:386 (45386|1) - there is clear kick sound here which should be mapped as Whistle, or there might be a reason? hm

00:57:171 (57171|1,57218|0,57265|3,57311|2,57358|1,57404|0) - i quite believe that the sound u are mapping there are actually snare sound but it's hitsounded as Whistle, when i played it , it did sound weird for me, i strongly recommend to change it into Clap for consistency with the clap sound from before

00:57:218 (57218|3) - beep boop some inconsistency of hitsounding here between Insaiyan and Hard diff :'(


I can obviously agree to this

the rest is looking pretty good to me, im looking forward to ur respond on mentioned parts

i havent checked all the hitsounds as of current, im a bit foreign to the topic ( ill come back to the mod )

goodluck!!

CrumpetFiddler wrote:

DoNotMess wrote:

beep boop , tried to play this, map is quite good owo but... something that i catch real quick when i was playing and then decided to go a bit of in-depth

Insaiyan

00:39:609 - Why is this part not mapped as hand? as i see here the layering is supposed to be hand because of the crash sound.
first kiai
second kiai
as far as i noticed , there is no significant difference with the music itself between mentioned part so it is supposed to be consistently mapped

a better question is, why would that matter at all? what your suggesting is absolutely absurd, how it is mapped as of current represents the music fine

1. it's pretty funny because u asked "why would that matter" and then your respond to the 2nd mod is "it's also to keep consistency throughout the entirety of the song", im pretty sure now you know the answer to that question while you keep mapping all of the crash sound in 3 notes throughout the entire diff except that particular part
2. if my suggestion is absurd, my points wouldn't have been clarified as valid from the other mappers
3. "how it is mapped as of current represents the music fine" back to the point 1

00:41:100 - there is no crash here, i think 2 notes is enough to represent the kick

i dont think so, its also to keep consistancy throughout the entirety of the song


consistency is layering the same sound section with same structure of notes, people can map camellia maps with all jumpstreams and call it "consistent" with ur definition in osu mania context hue

00:55:820 - u can actually do the same as what u did here 00:54:330 - given the sound is strong enough to be mapped as 3 notes and also 00:56:566 - u do mapped it as 3 notes

i think i understand what your saying here but i disagree

with what reasons? "not gather opinions shut them down and do absolutely nothing"

(lul sorry for the mod order)
00:05:883 - 3 notes crash sound as well

contemplated, but i feel how it is now flows better

understandable :3

00:06:628 (6628|1) - this sounds like a ghost note, if u mapped vocal then 00:06:255 - should be mapped as well, the actual percussion sound is 00:06:721 - if u hear with 25%

there is a faint sound that can be heard if you listen to it, the vocal isnt something thats mapped (here)

pretty sure u want to only map audible sounds throughout the map and then suddenly u map a weak faint sound over there that is contrast with the actual (also kinda low) percussion sound in the blue line. but i guess it's not rly big of a problem if it has been qualified several times

Hard

00:36:069 - this part is fine imo but i think the sound here is already mapped as hand in insaiyan diff, i suggest to change the marked one with only 2 notes to represent increase in volume of the music, besides, it's only clap sound there and patterns can be distinct between diffs

its fine how it is, theres plenty in the diff already to differentiate it with Insaiyan

hm.


00:44:081 - im pretty sure you are layering the melody as ln here as intended like in insaiyan diff, but this one is missing 1 ln here, it could honestly be added and not damaging any structure of the pattern there

true, but the main and clearly heard synth kicks in when the first ln i have is mapped, it'd be right either way

ok

00:45:386 - the kick here could be mapped as well since it's significant enough in H diff

no, it would end up causing a weird jack

im not sure why u bring up "weird jack", i guess re-arranging something simple like this is not rocket science and wont take 10 seconds


00:47:994 - same with before

same answer

Hitsounds

00:41:100 (41100|2) - there is no crash here as i mentioned before,remove Finish

00:45:199 (45199|0) - i dont understand why is there Whistle here, there is clearly no kick sound here but instead 00:45:386 (45386|1) - there is clear kick sound here which should be mapped as Whistle, or there might be a reason? hm

00:57:171 (57171|1,57218|0,57265|3,57311|2,57358|1,57404|0) - i quite believe that the sound u are mapping there are actually snare sound but it's hitsounded as Whistle, when i played it , it did sound weird for me, i strongly recommend to change it into Clap for consistency with the clap sound from before

00:57:218 (57218|3) - beep boop some inconsistency of hitsounding here between Insaiyan and Hard diff :'(


I can obviously agree to this

the rest is looking pretty good to me, im looking forward to ur respond on mentioned parts

i havent checked all the hitsounds as of current, im a bit foreign to the topic ( ill come back to the mod )
i would suggest to ask the nominator for help with the current hitsound mod

goodluck!!

Feerum wrote:

Holla. Passing by because i got some reports here.
I would like to drop a Mod too because it really seems there is some stuff wrong.

[Easy]
00:00:852 (852|2) - I recommend you to move this note to 2. Newbies have a huge problem with finger independence. They could have a problem playing a note like this which is on the same hand like a LN release. Make it a bit easier for them and move it.

i can see your reasoning

00:19:112 (19112|3,19299|2,19485|1,19671|0,19858|2,20044|1) - While this is not a big problem at all, i would recommend to delete 00:19:299 (19299|2) - and follow only the kicks here. these are quiet many 1/2 notes following and you could nerf this a bit by removing this note.

I think how it is should be fine :3

For a bit of "Variety" to the normal stair notes you could CTRL+G 00:19:485 (19485|1,19671|0) - these here and then you CTRL+G 00:20:044 (20044|1,20603|0) - these too. Plays pretty cool maybe you like it.

Big fan of this

00:33:647 (33647|1) - Move this to 4. This column seems a little bit empty.

Yeah u rite

00:41:100 (41100|2) - This here has no cymbal. You should remove the Finish hitsound.

Alright

00:45:572 - I guess here's a note missing. You have here 00:33:647 - exactly the same case.. but differently mapped. That's an inconsistency which needs to get fixed

good catch

[Normal]
00:00:479 (479|0,572|1,665|2,758|3) - I'm really not a fan of such a start into a normal difficulty while Easy uses a single LN.. Mmh,..
My suggestion would be making it simple 1/2 notes or, what i personally like more, make two LNs out of it! Would look like this:

Screen

easier to play

00:34:206 (34206|1) - Why is this LN 1/1 long? The vocal is here only 1/2.. do you follow something different? I have to assume you follow the vocals because the following LNs do so.

nah u rite, my bad

00:37:187 (37187|1,37560|0) - same goes for these here.

(fixed in post below)

Let me suggest you something for this part. Screen is at 00:36:628 -

Screen

It's pretty much just LNs for the vocal but more accurate. It gives a better feeling while playing this part because your focus and emphasis here is def. on the vocals.

me likey

00:41:100 (41100|1) - Like in Easy, this here has no cymbal. Remove the finish hitsound.

Yep

00:49:112 (49112|1,49485|2) - These LNs should be 1/2 too.

got it

[Hard]
00:08:305 - to 00:19:299 - . I don't know how to say that but.. this part is boring.. like.. really :/
You have here constant 1/4 stream with some jumps for vocals
For example 00:13:895 - . Break the 1/4 here and make 3 jumps here. I would suggest [34][23][12].

good change of pace

But overall. You could do here way more with vocals for variety. Like.. from 00:08:305 - to 00:10:541 - try to map more the vocal.
From 00:10:541 - to 00:11:286 - fit the 1/4 excellent because the vocal make a break here and the 1/4 sound gets more emphasized.
Them from 00:11:286 - to 00:13:895 - again more vocals and then the jumps i suggested above. You can make way more out of this part than just simple 1/4 stream.

i disagree with vocal mapping here, i think the stream is far more important to emphasise

00:41:100 (41100|2) - Once again, remove the cymbal.

u rite

Overall the hard has a problem with variety. You used way too much simple 1/4 streams over the whole difficulty. I don't want to tell that you didn't put much effort into it.. but it simply seems the hard didn't got that much love from you like the other diffs xP

Try to make it a bit more exciting. Normal and Hard difficulties are usually the most played diff's in a ranked set.

[Insaiyan]
00:03:460 (3460|2) - So this LN start's like 1/1 beat too late. The "wooosh" sound begins at 00:03:088 - and ends at 00:03:740 - , this is actually the perfect place to map a shield. Maybe you are not a fan of it but i suggest it anyways because maybe you like it, since this diff is pretty jack heavy already:

Screen

im not a big fan of shields, but in this scenario with so little going on, it feels fine to play, so ill add this

00:16:876 - Okay, so far it's "okay" for an Insane. I am not a fan of the long jumpstream because again some potential get wasted.. but at this place i find you should put more emphasis on the vocal because it's very outstanding here.

Tried something and im a fan

00:42:591 (42591|1) - Again, no cymbal.

00:52:466 (52466|0,52653|0,52839|0,53025|0,53212|0,53398|0) - This hurt's my kokoro. Please arrange some notes here.

00:54:702 - This is weird.. like.. you have no 1/4 jacks before.. and nothing significant changes at this place, yet you mapped again jacks. It feels incredibly "forced" here. I think you shouldn't map the jacks here.

there are 1/4 jacks before, (every transition with the ln) im gunna keep it as it is for now, but ill still consider, and keep it in mind for its next check)

i take that back. error also suggested the same thing, repatterned

00:57:451 - Is it me or is here another 1/8 hit which got unmapped..?

i think you might be right

So, i don't have anything against the jacks. It's something different and why not trying something different? But uhhh.. yeah.. the long jumpstreams bug me a bit because it looks a bit lack of variety.

i can see why you would think that

Let me know what you think about this.

Lanturn wrote:

Greetings CrumpetFiddler! If this gets DQ'd for any other means (Or you wish to personally DQ this yourself to address this), there is slightly more accurate metadata you can use, though the current is fine. Your set currently matches the first option while the second option is more accurate and recommended.


- Unicode Title: Yeah!Break!Care!Break!
- or: Yeah! Break! Care! Break!
- Unicode Artist: 谷本貴義
- Romanised Artist: Tanimoto Takayoshi
or
- Unicode Title: Yeah! Break! Care! Break! (TVサイズ)
- Romanised Title: Yeah! Break! Care! Break! (TV Size)
- Unicode Artist: 谷本貴義(Dragon Soul)
- Romanised Artist: Tanimoto Takayoshi (Dragon Soul)
- Source: ドラゴンボール改

- References:
+ http://columbia.jp/prod-info/COCC-16283/
+ http://columbia.jp/prod-info/COCX-35922/
+ https://web.archive.org/web/20100619181 ... ai/topics/
+ https://lanturn.s-ul.eu/X4iSmH7O

谷本貴義(Dragon Soul) is more commonly found on the soundtracks / publisher website though standalone 谷本貴義 is found in the old website. TV Size is also found on the OST soundtrack/publisher website.

Let me know if you wish to change this. If this set does get DQ'd though from other means, please swap over to the second option.

Regardless, congrats!