Hi, I'm from my Std NM thread, I'm not an experienced modder, but I've done a lot of research to mod, if you find anything wrong with my mod, tell me
And I"m also not very good at English, so... sorry
Anyway, I hope you don't have to use google translate
Okay, let's begin
00:01:326 (2,3) - I would place these at the bottom instead to help with the flow
00:02:344 (6) - This isn't a strong beat, I don't recommend using jump here
00:02:668 (2) - You missed a beat here, change the beat snap divisor to 1/8 and place one here, I would reccomend stacking this with 00:02:807 (3), and place these 2 in the bottom isntead to help with the flow
00:02:807 (3,4,5) - Are very close together, make the distance between then larger
00:03:826 (7,1) - I think you should switch these 2 beats, sliders shouldn't end on a loud vocal beat, also make a jumo at 00:03:826 (7,1) after changing it if you want to
00:04:567 (4,1) - Also switch these 2
00:06:881 (1) - This is a strong beat, I would make a jump here
00:06:511 (1,2,3,4,1) - I suggest making this stream go down instead of going up, your map was going clockwise at first, don't make it anti-clockwise so quickly
00:11:326 (1) - This is a loud beat, I think you should make a jump here
00:15:400 (4,5,6,7,1) - I don't like this stream since 00:15:585 (6) is a vocal, you should consider spacing 00:15:585 (6,7,1) from 00:15:400 (4,5) and change the combo color of 00:15:585 (6) so that it remains the same combo color as00:15:770 (1)
00:16:141 (3) - Don't end it with a vocal if you start with a sound
00:16:881 (7) - Same ^
00:18:178 (6,7) - This flow isn't good in my opinion, try spacing 00:18:363 (7) and 00:17:992 (5)
00:18:363 (7) - I would make this slider into circles
00:19:289 (4) - - You switched clock rotation again, try not to do this until you reach kiai mode or a slower section of the song or something along the line basically a special section like at 00:12:437 (3) where you switched into clockwise from counter-clockwise for example which I personally think is a good part to switch clock rotation since it switched from a vocal and sound section to a full sound section
00:19:474 (5,6) - I prefer these 2 to be combined as a slider, it would match both the vocal and the sounds
00:19:844 (7) - Turn these into circles, or you could turn 00:19:474 (5,6) into a reverse slider which will covers this beat 00:19:844 (7), then make 00:20:030 (8) a new combo (which will remain the same color as 00:20:215 (1)) and make it a jump if possible, it's a strong sound
00:21:604 (8) - Make a new combo, remain the same color as 00:21:696 (1)
00:22:807 (6) - Don't end it with a vocal if you start with a sound
00:25:030 (2) - Same ^
00:28:733 (7) - Same ^
00:30:955 (2) - Same ^
00:31:696 (6) - Same ^
00:42:067 (3) - I would jump here
00:43:548 (1) - Don't put a circle in the end of a slider if the circle comes first, it's very hard to see
00:48:178 (8,9,1) - This stack is very awkward, don't stack these circles
00:52:251 (7) - Make a new combo here, I would also like a jump if possible
00:53:548 (6,7,8) - try putting some space with 00:53:363 (4,5) since it's a vocal and 00:53:363 (4,5) isn't also change the combo color of 00:53:548 (6)
00:55:214 (7) - Change the combo color and make a jump
00:58:177 (7) - Same ^
01:04:103 (7) - Same ^
00:58:548 (9) - I would make this a jump, it's a strong sound and I would recommend changing the combo color, make sure it's the same as 00:58:733 (1)
01:00:215 (1,1,1,1,1) - Um... don't make sliders so close to each other, it's hard to see
01:02:437 (1,2,3,4) - Try putting some distances between these, it's very awkward to change from two different streams with different offset
01:11:326 (1,2,3,4) - Same ^
01:05:400 (5,6,7) - Make a new combo at 01:05:400 (5) and put some distances between 01:05:215 (3,4) it switched from sound to vocal
01:10:029 (7) - make a jump and a new combo
01:16:881 (4,5) - Switch these 2 places, the flow is not good here, don't make back and forth jumps
01:22:252 (9) - New combo here
01:26:141 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I'm not sure how to explain this but the flow isn't good, make it like this instead
I think that's is as much as a noob like me could cover
Remember, tell me if there's anything wrong!
Good luck
And plz give me kudosu I'm suffering from crippling depression...
And I"m also not very good at English, so... sorry
Anyway, I hope you don't have to use google translate
Okay, let's begin
00:01:326 (2,3) - I would place these at the bottom instead to help with the flow
00:02:344 (6) - This isn't a strong beat, I don't recommend using jump here
00:02:668 (2) - You missed a beat here, change the beat snap divisor to 1/8 and place one here, I would reccomend stacking this with 00:02:807 (3), and place these 2 in the bottom isntead to help with the flow
00:02:807 (3,4,5) - Are very close together, make the distance between then larger
00:03:826 (7,1) - I think you should switch these 2 beats, sliders shouldn't end on a loud vocal beat, also make a jumo at 00:03:826 (7,1) after changing it if you want to
00:04:567 (4,1) - Also switch these 2
00:06:881 (1) - This is a strong beat, I would make a jump here
00:06:511 (1,2,3,4,1) - I suggest making this stream go down instead of going up, your map was going clockwise at first, don't make it anti-clockwise so quickly
00:11:326 (1) - This is a loud beat, I think you should make a jump here
00:15:400 (4,5,6,7,1) - I don't like this stream since 00:15:585 (6) is a vocal, you should consider spacing 00:15:585 (6,7,1) from 00:15:400 (4,5) and change the combo color of 00:15:585 (6) so that it remains the same combo color as00:15:770 (1)
00:16:141 (3) - Don't end it with a vocal if you start with a sound
00:16:881 (7) - Same ^
00:18:178 (6,7) - This flow isn't good in my opinion, try spacing 00:18:363 (7) and 00:17:992 (5)
00:18:363 (7) - I would make this slider into circles
00:19:289 (4) - - You switched clock rotation again, try not to do this until you reach kiai mode or a slower section of the song or something along the line basically a special section like at 00:12:437 (3) where you switched into clockwise from counter-clockwise for example which I personally think is a good part to switch clock rotation since it switched from a vocal and sound section to a full sound section
00:19:474 (5,6) - I prefer these 2 to be combined as a slider, it would match both the vocal and the sounds
00:19:844 (7) - Turn these into circles, or you could turn 00:19:474 (5,6) into a reverse slider which will covers this beat 00:19:844 (7), then make 00:20:030 (8) a new combo (which will remain the same color as 00:20:215 (1)) and make it a jump if possible, it's a strong sound
00:21:604 (8) - Make a new combo, remain the same color as 00:21:696 (1)
00:22:807 (6) - Don't end it with a vocal if you start with a sound
00:25:030 (2) - Same ^
00:28:733 (7) - Same ^
00:30:955 (2) - Same ^
00:31:696 (6) - Same ^
00:42:067 (3) - I would jump here
00:43:548 (1) - Don't put a circle in the end of a slider if the circle comes first, it's very hard to see
00:48:178 (8,9,1) - This stack is very awkward, don't stack these circles
00:52:251 (7) - Make a new combo here, I would also like a jump if possible
00:53:548 (6,7,8) - try putting some space with 00:53:363 (4,5) since it's a vocal and 00:53:363 (4,5) isn't also change the combo color of 00:53:548 (6)
00:55:214 (7) - Change the combo color and make a jump
00:58:177 (7) - Same ^
01:04:103 (7) - Same ^
00:58:548 (9) - I would make this a jump, it's a strong sound and I would recommend changing the combo color, make sure it's the same as 00:58:733 (1)
01:00:215 (1,1,1,1,1) - Um... don't make sliders so close to each other, it's hard to see
01:02:437 (1,2,3,4) - Try putting some distances between these, it's very awkward to change from two different streams with different offset
01:11:326 (1,2,3,4) - Same ^
01:05:400 (5,6,7) - Make a new combo at 01:05:400 (5) and put some distances between 01:05:215 (3,4) it switched from sound to vocal
01:10:029 (7) - make a jump and a new combo
01:16:881 (4,5) - Switch these 2 places, the flow is not good here, don't make back and forth jumps
01:22:252 (9) - New combo here
01:26:141 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I'm not sure how to explain this but the flow isn't good, make it like this instead
I think that's is as much as a noob like me could cover
Remember, tell me if there's anything wrong!
Good luck
And plz give me kudosu I'm suffering from crippling depression...