1. Academy (4,75 stars, 483 notes)
2. Cappu's Normal (2,15 stars, 205 notes)
3. Easy (1,4 stars, 71 notes)
4. Ez - 4Key (1,49 stars, 349 notes)
5. Hard (3,5 stars, 313 notes)
6. Light Insane (4,17 stars, 387 notes)
7. OneRing's HD - 4Key (3,09 stars, 776 notes)
8. OneRing's NM - 4Key (2,08 stars, 554 notes)

gottagof4ast wrote:

Random passing by mod as you helped me when I just started

Academy
00:01:326 (2,3) - It makes no sense to put these close together as 00:01:511 (3) - is quite loud and needs spacing emphasis to show this

00:02:067 (5,6,1) - This should not be spaced this much as you gave an intenser part of the song less sapcing for the same kind of pattern at 00:10:955 (8,9,1) - and 00:11:696 (3,4,1) -

00:03:548 (4,5) - lower spacing cause timing gap also halved

00:05:400 (1,2) - The spacing used here in the slow part for the sliders is way too high and should be lowered quite a bit as this isn't nearly as intense as the other parts of the map

00:07:807 (6) - Why does the spacing increase start here, it should start at 00:07:993 (7) - as the guitar kicks in on this beat

00:07:993 (7,8,9,1,2) - up sapcing here, these sounds are all pretty loud

00:08:733 (3,4) - flipping the positions of these 2 and using ctrl+g on them would make for some nicer linear flow and not this semi zigzag pattern that started at 00:07:993 (7) -

00:13:918 (5,1) - Why lower spacing the reverse is super loud and different from the rest

00:16:141 (3) - the flow from hereon out is weird, I can't see it wanting to be consistent for more than like 2 seconds, it just goes wherever

00:26:141 (1,2,3) - patterns liek this aren't necessarily bad but play bad

00:30:955 (2) - special slider is not needed, you are making it look important but it's actually just the same as all the other sounds

00:40:770 (2,3) - transition from a really slow 1/1 slider to a stream is unexpected so maybe place some reverses or 1/4 sliders so players now that a 1/4 rhythm is coming

00:45:400 (1,2,3,1) - doesn't flow that well, you have to stop for the stack but the angle is also really wide

00:47:993 (7,8) - Don't increase the sapcing towards these 2, they are really similar to 00:46:881 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -

00:48:178 (8,1) - triple?, I hear a sound on the blue tick

00:48:455 (2,4) - these 2 blue ticks don't need to be mapped, I can't hear them, and if they are there than theyu are so quiet you don't need to map them

00:54:844 (3,4) - No need for a speed increase here, the song is consistent in it's intesity and there are definetly no weird 1/4 sounds that warrant patterns this fast

01:00:215 (1,1,1,1) - looks cool but beacause of the heavily lowered object density it doesn't really work perfectly

01:04:659 (1,3,4,5,6,7) - Make these blanket eachother more nicely

01:06:973 (5) - don't hear anyhting on this one

01:14:381 (4) - ^

01:17:252 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1) - why is there a steam here on a part with prominent vocals, just map those as I don't hear a 1/4 drum or anything like that

01:26:141 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - You make streams on places without 1/4 -_-

01:26:881 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this is a bit too much compared to the other parts of your map so nerf the spacing here or buff the rest

Closing thoughts: The map has some really weird streams and wasn't sure about some of them havcing 1/4 sounds or not but check those to see if there maybe are any other which are also overmapped.
But the biggest problem is the flow and spacing consistency, I can't see either used in the map, especially flow which this maps lacks.
You don't need the map to be super predictable with circular flow everywhere but it doesn't hurt to take a look at it as it also makes your map play like 10x better

Gl with the map

1. i would prefer this 00:29:474 (2,3,4) - have a same pattern with 00:25:030 (2,3,4) -
2. bad flow imo 00:54:659 (2,3) -
3. 01:16:696 (3,4) - different flow with 01:19:474 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) -

1. 00:43:178 - add 1 more note for consistent with 00:40:215 - ?

Toumoko wrote:

[OneRing's Hard]

1. 00:43:178 - add 1 more note for consistent with 00:40:215 - ?

Fixed

greats map ! good luck with the set ya

TheNewBungping wrote:

OneRing's Hard

It's a pretty boring map, nothing much to say, just hoping to have more variety in it (maybe play more LN on guitar)

00:14:289 unneccessary triple, double is enough
00:40:215 ^

00:14:659 should be double

00:15:307 there's a sound here, recommend to play it

Toumoko wrote:

hi , audio quality is too high , raise it down to 192kbps should be fine . video have a sound . change it to avi or anything to make it silent . no need sound for that . combo colour plz
[Academy]

1. i would prefer this 00:29:474 (2,3,4) - have a same pattern with 00:25:030 (2,3,4) - fixed
2. bad flow imo 00:54:659 (2,3) - fixed
3. 01:16:696 (3,4) - different flow with 01:19:474 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - not the same parts in the song so no

Pok0555 wrote:

mod

Hi, I'm from my Std NM thread, I'm not an experienced modder, but I've done a lot of research to mod, if you find anything wrong with my mod, tell me
And I"m also not very good at English, so... sorry
Anyway, I hope you don't have to use google translate
Okay, let's begin
00:01:326 (2,3) - I would place these at the bottom instead to help with the flow
00:02:344 (6) - This isn't a strong beat, I don't recommend using jump here
00:02:668 (2) - You missed a beat here, change the beat snap divisor to 1/8 and place one here, I would reccomend stacking this with 00:02:807 (3), and place these 2 in the bottom isntead to help with the flow
00:02:807 (3,4,5) - Are very close together, make the distance between then larger
00:03:826 (7,1) - I think you should switch these 2 beats, sliders shouldn't end on a loud vocal beat, also make a jumo at 00:03:826 (7,1) after changing it if you want to
00:04:567 (4,1) - Also switch these 2
00:06:881 (1) - This is a strong beat, I would make a jump here
00:06:511 (1,2,3,4,1) - I suggest making this stream go down instead of going up, your map was going clockwise at first, don't make it anti-clockwise so quickly
00:11:326 (1) - This is a loud beat, I think you should make a jump here
00:15:400 (4,5,6,7,1) - I don't like this stream since 00:15:585 (6) is a vocal, you should consider spacing 00:15:585 (6,7,1) from 00:15:400 (4,5) and change the combo color of 00:15:585 (6) so that it remains the same combo color as00:15:770 (1)
00:16:141 (3) - Don't end it with a vocal if you start with a sound
00:16:881 (7) - Same ^
00:18:178 (6,7) - This flow isn't good in my opinion, try spacing 00:18:363 (7) and 00:17:992 (5)
00:18:363 (7) - I would make this slider into circles
00:19:289 (4) - - You switched clock rotation again, try not to do this until you reach kiai mode or a slower section of the song or something along the line basically a special section like at 00:12:437 (3) where you switched into clockwise from counter-clockwise for example which I personally think is a good part to switch clock rotation since it switched from a vocal and sound section to a full sound section
00:19:474 (5,6) - I prefer these 2 to be combined as a slider, it would match both the vocal and the sounds
00:19:844 (7) - Turn these into circles, or you could turn 00:19:474 (5,6) into a reverse slider which will covers this beat 00:19:844 (7), then make 00:20:030 (8) a new combo (which will remain the same color as 00:20:215 (1)) and make it a jump if possible, it's a strong sound
00:21:604 (8) - Make a new combo, remain the same color as 00:21:696 (1)
00:22:807 (6) - Don't end it with a vocal if you start with a sound
00:25:030 (2) - Same ^
00:28:733 (7) - Same ^
00:30:955 (2) - Same ^
00:31:696 (6) - Same ^
00:42:067 (3) - I would jump here
00:43:548 (1) - Don't put a circle in the end of a slider if the circle comes first, it's very hard to see
00:48:178 (8,9,1) - This stack is very awkward, don't stack these circles
00:52:251 (7) - Make a new combo here, I would also like a jump if possible
00:53:548 (6,7,8) - try putting some space with 00:53:363 (4,5) since it's a vocal and 00:53:363 (4,5) isn't also change the combo color of 00:53:548 (6)
00:55:214 (7) - Change the combo color and make a jump
00:58:177 (7) - Same ^
01:04:103 (7) - Same ^
00:58:548 (9) - I would make this a jump, it's a strong sound and I would recommend changing the combo color, make sure it's the same as 00:58:733 (1)
01:00:215 (1,1,1,1,1) - Um... don't make sliders so close to each other, it's hard to see
01:02:437 (1,2,3,4) - Try putting some distances between these, it's very awkward to change from two different streams with different offset
01:11:326 (1,2,3,4) - Same ^
01:05:400 (5,6,7) - Make a new combo at 01:05:400 (5) and put some distances between 01:05:215 (3,4) it switched from sound to vocal
01:10:029 (7) - make a jump and a new combo
01:16:881 (4,5) - Switch these 2 places, the flow is not good here, don't make back and forth jumps
01:22:252 (9) - New combo here
01:26:141 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I'm not sure how to explain this but the flow isn't good, make it like this instead
I think that's is as much as a noob like me could cover
Remember, tell me if there's anything wrong!
Good luck
And plz give me kudosu I'm suffering from crippling depression...

TheKingHenry wrote:

Hello mod from my queue~

Academy

1. Customize combo colors fixed
2. 00:09:474 (5) - with drastic curves like this (especially as it is positioned on downbeat) you should NC it fixed
3. 00:23:178 (1,3,4,5) - this overlapping pattern doesn't kinda line up with the practice you've used so far, would just get rid of it, same with 00:44:659 (2,4) -
   fixed
4. 00:45:307 (7,1) - I see you've done few of these, but this kinda looks like messed up normal one instead of what you are intending. Perhaps rearrange it a little? fixed
5. 00:57:252 (1,7) - stack these if that's what they are supposed to do fixed
6. 01:02:437 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - first of all what I said earlier about the change in the stream and NCing. But also this one has kinda questionable formating as the larger spacing begins from 4 to 5 instead of from 5 onwards where it is in the music. Perhaps change it? fixed
7. 01:06:696 (3,4) - Give 'em some space, these kickslider patterns were already spaced out like at 00:19:289 (4,5) - fixed
8. 01:11:326 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - similar to what I said earlier fixed

Good luck!

-AsrieLx- wrote:

I tried my best, and couldn't find anything wrong! Have kudos stars :3

1. 00:39:474 (1,2,1,2) - I suggest you to mute sounds on sliderends here - you have strongly hearable sampleset and there is no such strong sound on slidertails. Also you can extend them a bit from 1/8 to 1/6 like that http://puu.sh/wDAxR/63f5897d1e.jpg as player have not much time to click them on time
2. 00:42:437 (1,2,1,2) - Same here
3. 01:13:548 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - This is difficult to play because movement of the hand is unnatural + 01:13:178 (6,1,2,3) - this is a bit confusing to me

Blan_C wrote:

Hello, from my mod queue

This is well-mapped

1. 00:39:474 (1,2,1,2) - I suggest you to mute sounds on sliderends here - you have strongly hearable sampleset and there is no such strong sound on slidertails. Also you can extend them a bit from 1/8 to 1/6 like that http://puu.sh/wDAxR/63f5897d1e.jpg as player have not much time to click them on time
2. 00:42:437 (1,2,1,2) - Same here
3. 01:13:548 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - This is difficult to play because movement of the hand is unnatural + 01:13:178 (6,1,2,3) - this is a bit confusing to me

I liked this, Good luck!

1. 00:13:923 (1) - downbeat shoyuld be clickable, it's pretty important
2. 00:35:219 (4,5) - i think this works better as just an extended slider into 6
3. 00:38:923 (6,7,8,9,1) - you don't need to space this, i think that the fact that visually this goes in the opposite direction + it's a kickslider is emphasis enough
4. 00:39:849 (1,2) - make these parallel or sth
5. 00:40:404 (1,2) - underemphasized imo
6. //same deal with 00:42:256 (1,2,1,2,1,2) -
7. 00:55:219 (8,1) - uncomfy aaaaaa

Lince Cosmico wrote:

Academy

Metadata:
• The correct title would be "バトンロード" (then Romanized title is "Baton Road") according to the wiki page of the song, also your audio file has the same japanese title on it
General:
• It's just a 4,7* so i don't think that AR 9,2 fits really good here, I suggest you to reduce it to 9
Objects:
• 00:01:700 (4,5) - Reducing spacing here makes no sense, maybe you could add a bit between both notes (a similar spacing with this 00:01:886 (5,6) - wouldn't be bad)
• 00:02:256 (1,2,3,4) - We can emphasize this better, something like this wont be bad.
What i did is that i reduced spacing on the first three notes making a triangle with them and then i added almost the x2 of the spacing and broke the flow (changed the flow into the other side), so that would emphasize notes with the song in a good way
• 00:05:589 (2) - I think that making this a curvy slider instead of a straigh one would fit better
• 00:07:626 (6,7,1,2) - Why different spacing?
• 00:17:441 (2) - Moving this a bit to the right would be better imo, it would fit with the followpoint between this two 00:17:071 (1,2) -

--NOTE: Be careful about the spacing you use in your triples, i've seen that you used different spacing on different triples, and it would be better to be consistent wiith it. Examples: 00:23:552 (3,4,5) - and 00:26:515 (4,5,6) -

• 00:37:997 (2) - This would fit a lot better like this
• 00:38:923 (6,7,8,9) - This shape should be reversed so it flows correctly
• 00:39:200 (9,1) - Spacing tho
• 00:39:293 (1,2,1,2) - This is edgy, also not even snapped at all, i think that it would be better if these are circles and not sliders
• 00:42:256 (1,2,1,2) - Same here
• 00:45:126 (7,1) - huh

I would get repetitive if i mod the kiai, you actually have to check spacing issues through the whole map but care about flow issues on your kiai. I'd send you a guide to learn flow but i think you know perfectly what it is so ill trust in you on finding these issues (that are pretty clear **cough 00:57:441 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - cough**)

Thats all from me
I hope it helped you and again, sorry for being late

RevengeZ wrote:

DO NOT GIVE KUDOSU TO THIS POST

Lince Cosmico wrote:

Academy

Metadata:
• The correct title would be "バトンロード" (then Romanized title is "Baton Road") according to the wiki page of the song, also your audio file has the same japanese title on it
General:
• It's just a 4,7* so i don't think that AR 9,2 fits really good here, I suggest you to reduce it to 9
Objects:
• 00:01:700 (4,5) - Reducing spacing here makes no sense, maybe you could add a bit between both notes (a similar spacing with this 00:01:886 (5,6) - wouldn't be bad)
• 00:02:256 (1,2,3,4) - We can emphasize this better, something like this wont be bad.
What i did is that i reduced spacing on the first three notes making a triangle with them and then i added almost the x2 of the spacing and broke the flow (changed the flow into the other side), so that would emphasize notes with the song in a good way
• 00:05:589 (2) - I think that making this a curvy slider instead of a straigh one would fit better
• 00:07:626 (6,7,1,2) - Why different spacing?
• 00:17:441 (2) - Moving this a bit to the right would be better imo, it would fit with the followpoint between this two 00:17:071 (1,2) -

--NOTE: Be careful about the spacing you use in your triples, i've seen that you used different spacing on different triples, and it would be better to be consistent wiith it. Examples: 00:23:552 (3,4,5) - and 00:26:515 (4,5,6) -

• 00:37:997 (2) - This would fit a lot better like this
• 00:38:923 (6,7,8,9) - This shape should be reversed so it flows correctly
• 00:39:200 (9,1) - Spacing tho
• 00:39:293 (1,2,1,2) - This is edgy, also not even snapped at all, i think that it would be better if these are circles and not sliders
• 00:42:256 (1,2,1,2) - Same here
• 00:45:126 (7,1) - huh

I would get repetitive if i mod the kiai, you actually have to check spacing issues through the whole map but care about flow issues on your kiai. I'd send you a guide to learn flow but i think you know perfectly what it is so ill trust in you on finding these issues (that are pretty clear **cough 00:57:441 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - cough**)

Thats all from me
I hope it helped you and again, sorry for being late

Antlia- wrote:

nm for one diff from my queue

Academy
00:08:552 (3,4) make these kicks apart of the stream
00:10:219 (4,5,6) stack these (and every other triplet spaced like this)
00:39:293 (1,2) make these circles (and every jump with kicks like this)
01:00:34 (1,1,1,1,1) This isn't a wub map so this many slider velocity's isn't necessary
01:19:293 (1,2,3) reduce the spacing bc this is a diff spike



GL on rank <3

CrumpetFiddler wrote:

OneRing's Hard

00:00:589 - beats start here

00:00:960 (960|0,1330|1,1700|0) - ghost notes?

00:02:441 (2441|1,2812|3,3182|3,3923|2,4293|0,4663|1,5404|1,5774|1,6886|2) - more ghost notes

00:09:849 (9849|1,10034|3) - these are louder than 00:10:404 (10404|1,10404|0) - so why is that a double?

00:10:960 (10960|0) - ghost note

00:12:441 (12441|3) - ghost

00:14:663 (14663|2) - ghost

00:16:886 (16886|3) - ghost

00:19:108 (19108|3) - ghost

00:20:589 (20589|2,20682|1) - move one col to the left

00:33:923 (33923|0,34015|1) - move one col to the right OR delete this ln 00:34:108 (34108|0) -

00:34:108 (34108|0) - missed a beat

00:39:663 - missed a beat

00:40:404 (40404|3) - why is this only a single note

00:40:774 - missed a beat

00:42:626 - missed a beat

00:43:737 - again

00:45:404 (45404|1,45774|2) - delete these 2

00:46:700 (46700|0,46700|3,46700|1) - delete one of these

00:51:700 (51700|3,53182|3,53182|3,54663|0,55404|3,56145|2,56330|1,56330|0) - ghost notes

00:56:978 - missed a beat

00:57:626 (57626|3,58367|0,59108|0,60589|1,61330|0) - ghost notes

01:01:886 (61886|2) - move to col 2

01:04:386 - missed a beat

01:03:552 (63552|0,65034|3) - ghosts

01:05:034 (65034|3,65126|2,65219|0,65219|1,65404|2) - this part is way out of time

01:05:867 - missed a beat

01:06:515 (66515|0) - ghost

01:07:349 - missed a beat

01:06:886 (66886|1,67071|0,67071|2,67256|1,67441|2,67441|0,67626|1) - very repetitive pattern

01:08:089 - ghost note

01:08:737 (68737|2,69478|0,72441|0,73182|3,73923|3,74663|2) - ghost notes

01:14:108 - col 1 is very empty, move the notes around to utilize the column

01:15:404 (75404|0,75589|2,75589|3) - try to avoid copy pasting notes, thats how simple errors like this occur

01:16:145 (76145|1,77626|0,78367|3,79108|2) - ghost notes

01:18:552 - col 1 and 4 are pretty empty, move the notes around again

01:19:108 (79108|2,79849|3,80589|0,81330|0,84293|0,85034|3,87997|1) - ghost notes

Alot of work is needed but theres no reason this couldnt be a great map!

Good luck in the future buddy <3

newton- wrote:

from q

[ insane]

1. 00:13:923 (1) - downbeat shoyuld be clickable, it's pretty important
2. 00:35:219 (4,5) - i think this works better as just an extended slider into 6
3. 00:38:923 (6,7,8,9,1) - you don't need to space this, i think that the fact that visually this goes in the opposite direction + it's a kickslider is emphasis enough
4. 00:39:849 (1,2) - make these parallel or sth
5. 00:40:404 (1,2) - underemphasized imo
6. //same deal with 00:42:256 (1,2,1,2,1,2) -
7. 00:55:219 (8,1) - uncomfy aaaaaa

good luck!