1. Inner Oni (6.11 stars, 2603 notes)

iloveyou4ever wrote:

欺凌絕對不行!

davidminh0111 wrote:

Hello ily4, from my queue:

[Inner Oni]
00:49:052 to 01:01:052: Put kiaia, strong part
emm I don't think so,it's the intro part and not really strong tho
01:13:052: Put a slider here till 01:13:802
I want to give a break here
01:49:052: I think you should use the 1/4 here because no reason to put 1/6 here
drum roll sound on 01:49:052 -,maybe you can hear that again!
01:58:802: Change to d to make unity in the previous triplets
I want to add variation to prevent the part become boring
02:10:802: Same, it will fit the pitch
^
02:26:552: No necessary to put kiai here
but the part is relatively stronger...still I will consider it later
02:29:739: You know, the stream is kinda boring, I hear d is at the high pitch and k is at the low pitch (some only), I'm thinking that if you change to k or d on your own idea it would be better for this stream (considering change to k or d some)
yes...but however the drum sound is like dkdkdkdkd sound so idk how to change it...I will ask other modders for this part
03:07:427: Add k here, I hear su~ni (the su is on the white tick)
following the drum sound but not the vocal,and no drum sound on this point
04:04:995: This is weird if you put k here, move it to 04:05:183 and remove Drum hitsound, then, 04:05:558 add Drum hitsounds
but actually the drum is on 04:04:995 - not 04:05:183 - .
Ok, I'm done, stream too much, I'm dizzy lul
GL on ranking

Starfy wrote:

iloveyou4ever wrote:

欺凌絕對不行!

iloveyou4ever wrote:

*Can you focus on pattern? Some patterns of the streams maybe bad...
Also please tell me if the slider velocity is good to you or not >_<

1. I'm disagree the kiai time on 02:26:552 part.
   The music in this part is not strong like 04:11:558 part, and as I've seen the AiMods error, I think that 02:26:552 part shouldn't be kiai time.
   
   
2. 05:34:058 kiai part should be end on 05:55:058 , I can't describe my feeling well, but I think that the reason it's like the last paet of BABYMETAL - Akatsuki << oh, your map. :3

1. I think that triplets on 1/6 isn't a good idea , quadruplets might be better. Like 00:41:427 (8,9,10). I think that to add k on 00:41:364 is the way better. And 00:44:427 part , how about add d on 00:44:364.
   This is only my opinion, if you're disagree with it, feel free to deny it. :3
2. But this one 01:46:489 , feel like it's breaking the consistency of the map since you have use 1/4 rhythm since 01:16:052 , maybe use 1/4 on this part will be better. tbh, I'm very confuse why have you use 1/6 on this part. I didn't feel that 01:46:489 triplets is different from 01:22:427 triplets that much. ;;w;;

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Tyistiana wrote:

Hi~ iloveyou4ever Hi,sorry for late reply >_<
From my modding queue as you've request NM on here =w=
Don't expect too much, I'm only an inexperienced modder. ;;w;;
Don't take this seriously, just think that it's friendly modding~ =w=
Didn't finished to mod yet, but I want your opinion before continue my modding.

[ Answer the question]

iloveyou4ever wrote:

*Can you focus on pattern? Some patterns of the streams maybe bad...
Also please tell me if the slider velocity is good to you or not >_<

SV for me is okay. :3

[ General]
Maybe change OD to 6 , due to the BPM is only 160 , like u's - LOVELESS WORLD
Ok! and also change hp to 4
[ Timing : Kiai Time]

1. I'm disagree the kiai time on 02:26:552 part.
   The music in this part is not strong like 04:11:558 part, and as I've seen the AiMods error, I think that 02:26:552 part shouldn't be kiai time.
   
   
2. 05:34:058 kiai part should be end on 05:55:058 , I can't describe my feeling well, but I think that the reason it's like the last paet of BABYMETAL - Akatsuki << oh, your map. :3

will consider about it,since some modders also talked about it...will ask more modders about this part

Okay, as you've request me to focus on the stream patterns, I'll split my modding in to 2 parts, for the ease while you're modding

[ Inner Oni : General]
Overall change suggestion :

1. I think that triplets on 1/6 isn't a good idea , quadruplets might be better. Like 00:41:427 (8,9,10). I think that to add k on 00:41:364 is the way better. And 00:44:427 part , how about add d on 00:44:364.
   This is only my opinion, if you're disagree with it, feel free to deny it. :3
   change to quadruplets,but fix the pattern in my own way.
2. But this one 01:46:489 , feel like it's breaking the consistency of the map since you have use 1/4 rhythm since 01:16:052 , maybe use 1/4 on this part will be better. tbh, I'm very confuse why have you use 1/6 on this part. I didn't feel that 01:46:489 triplets is different from 01:22:427 triplets that much. ;;w;;

idk why babymetal played the drum like that,but 1/4 doesn't fit here,it seems like drum roll and when I listened with 25%,1/6 suits more than 1/4...I will keep this part first

00:38:739 - Maybe change to D , due to match the 00:40:052 pitch.
but 00:38:552 (5,6) - these two are the same pitch.
01:34:052 - How about k , due to this pitch is different from 01:33:864 (424,425)
map to drum here,k doesn't fit the drum imo

[ Inner Oni : Streams pattern]
tbh, it's hard to explain them all.
Use this one to look what I've suggest to you.

Tyistiana's Modding

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01:38:927 - This part, I feel like follow the baby vocal it'll look better.
yeah all applied,thanks so much >_<
01:57:302 - How about emphasizing "dame dame dame dame" vocal? , let this part stuck on the everyone's head.
emm thinking about this part...needs your idea for that

Nyan wrote:

[Inner Oni]

01:14:052 (268,269,270,271,272) - (dddk)kd
01:20:989 (317,318,319) - (dddk)
both no drum sound there
03:31:239 (768,769,770,771,772,773,774) - (kddk)k kd
emm I think (kkdd)k can emphasize drum on 03:31:519 -
03:53:378 - add two kats before 03:53:566 (18) nice!
04:02:558 (17) - add Finish
04:05:558 (27) - add Finish
the beat is not strong enough to put finishers
05:01:683 (488,489,490) - (dddk)
same as first reason

It is fast a bit with hardrock but doesn't matter much