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posted
i want to go to the festival

festival is not here
00:08:753 - make it kk, bcuz mostly u use that doublet for vocal
00:09:655 - to dk, same reason^
00:09:956 - kk ^
00:19:580 (90,91,92,93) - to kdkk ? it fit with drum flow, dkdk isnt good enough
00:41:234 - why not add k there ? i can hear sound there, also if you add k, add don 00:41:385 - for the flow
01:12:271 - how about ? k for snare don for tom/bass
01:18:505 - same as above^
01:25:031 (221,222,223,224) - its kkkd tho, :3 bcuz its have differ pitch
01:38:180 (305,306,307,308,309) - same like above, try kkkkd
01:40:128 - this one is don, and del this 01:40:225 -

overall your map is good but isnt good enough, why i can said that, bcuz some part need more consistency, sometime you use d for snare and use k for bass drum, some of your stream need to be fixed ? oh not fixed hmmm need more impruvment, but its already good tho like 01:48:505 - i like that part

sorry i do a shortmod, bcuz i cant pass this map xD that stream is demn
posted

PoPoii wrote:

i want to go to the festival

General


This is not successful SB remake, maybe a bit later i'll use it
festival is not here
00:08:753 - make it kk, bcuz mostly u use that doublet for vocal oks before it a bit too
00:09:655 - to dk, same reason^ Ok!
[/color]00:09:956 - kk ^ Edited!
00:19:580 (90,91,92,93) - to kdkk ? it fit with drum flow, dkdk isnt good enough Ok
00:41:234 - why not add k there ? i can hear sound there, also if you add k, add don 00:41:385 - for the flow Oops, i forget note here :o
01:12:271 - how about ? k for snare don for tom/bass Looks better!
01:18:505 - same as above^ Edited!
01:25:031 (221,222,223,224) - its kkkd tho, :3 bcuz its have differ pitch Edited!
01:38:180 (305,306,307,308,309) - same like above, try kkkkd Looks cooll!
01:40:128 - this one is don, and del this 01:40:225 - Oops, my mistake, edited!

overall your map is good but isnt good enough, why i can said that, bcuz some part need more consistency, sometime you use d for snare and use k for bass drum, some of your stream need to be fixed ? oh not fixed hmmm need more impruvment, but its already good tho like 01:48:505 - i like that part Good reason to remap it again, haha :D

sorry i do a shortmod, bcuz i cant pass this map xD that stream is demn

Thanks for mod!
posted
Hello ASPIRIN, from my queue:
Thank you for M4M

[General]
OD/HP : 6/5

[Festival is far from over]
00:04:994: kk for high pitch

00:55:907: k to fit the pitch

00:58:635: dkd, you may use 50% speed to listen for the music pitch

01:23:277: Delete to emphasize at 01:23:375

01:33:894 to 01:35:842: Don't you see this part is boring

01:47:920 and 01:51:037: Change to k for consistency in 01:54:154 - 01:52:596

01:55:907: Change to d to emphasize the next k

05:24:154: How about kkd?

Good luck
posted

davidminh0111 wrote:

Hello ASPIRIN, from my queue:
Thank you for M4M

[General]
OD/HP : 6/5 ok!

[Festival is far from over]
00:04:994: kk for high pitch No, dk better here i think, it emphasize pitch before it

00:55:907: k to fit the pitch ok!

00:58:635: dkd, you may use 50% speed to listen for the music pitch ok!

01:23:277: Delete to emphasize at 01:23:375 Good tip

01:33:894 to 01:35:842: Don't you see this part is boring ok, this part is remaped

01:47:920 and 01:51:037: Change to k for consistency in 01:54:154 - 01:52:596 hmm, somebody once told me "note between finisher with same color - unranked", so, i'll not edit momentz like this

01:55:907: Change to d to emphasize the next k ok!

05:24:154: How about kkd? Maybe you mean 05:25:518 (878,879,880) ? So, kkd here sounds better!

Good luck
Thank you very much!
posted
Hi, here for NM from my modding queue.
[Festival is far from over]
from here 01:37:790 - to 01:42:661 - there is quite a mess, 01:38:180 (308,309,310,311,312) - this sound is mapped differently from 01:38:959 (314,315,316,317,318) - and you placed some notes that to me are not so much "player friendly" like 01:38:862 - 01:40:420 - 01:41:979 -
In order to make hem more playable I would suggest you to move all of them of a 1/4 before but here is actually a sound so idk, check somehow
04:43:245 (588,589,590,591,592,593,594,595,596,597) - Here I hear something like dkddk twice
04:44:511 - this note is definitively a higher pitch than this one 04:44:414 - so I would place a k
04:51:232 - I hear this stream a bit different, ignore me if you don't agree:
04:51:719 - d , 04:52:109 (662,663) - control+g , 04:52:206 (663,664,665,666,667) - all the opposite, so dddkd
04:53:472 - maybe here is a d sound, not sure
same thing here 05:44:511 -
Nice consistency
Hope it was helpful! Good luck for ranking!
posted

Kith190 wrote:

Hi, here for NM from my modding queue.
[Festival is far from over]
from here 01:37:790 - to 01:42:661 - there is quite a mess, 01:38:180 (308,309,310,311,312) - this sound is mapped differently from 01:38:959 (314,315,316,317,318) - and you placed some notes that to me are not so much "player friendly" like 01:38:862 - 01:40:420 - 01:41:979 - i'll rework this moments, cuz it need reword
In order to make hem more playable I would suggest you to move all of them of a 1/4 before but here is actually a sound so idk, check somehow
04:43:245 (588,589,590,591,592,593,594,595,596,597) - Here I hear something like dkddk twice Ok
04:44:511 - this note is definitively a higher pitch than this one 04:44:414 - so I would place a k Ok, i made it like dkdkk
04:51:232 - I hear this stream a bit different, ignore me if you don't agree:
04:51:719 - d , 04:52:109 (662,663) - control+g , 04:52:206 (663,664,665,666,667) - all the opposite, so dddkd Now it sounds better!
04:53:472 - maybe here is a d sound, not sure Ok
same thing here 05:44:511 -Ok, i did it in same places after it
Nice consistency
Hope it was helpful! Good luck for ranking! Thank you very much! <3
posted
Hi! ^w^

Request from Gemu's Taiko & Mania Queue (NM, M4M & GD)



d
k
D (Big d)
K (Big k)






  • HP: 6


  1. 00:05:144 (16) - Change to k, the voice have a hight tone, also sounds very good with this structure 00:01:986 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - for the low voices and notes 00:02:287 (2,3) - to increases here 00:04:091 (11,12,13,14,15,16) -
  2. 00:09:655 (39,40,41,42) - Change to d, and then change to k 00:11:911 (50,52) - to keep consistency with 00:01:986 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) -
  3. 00:53:570 (24) - Change to d flow much better the stream 00:53:472 (23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30) -
  4. 00:57:953 (57,60) - Make Ctrl G flows much better the pitch.
  5. 01:22:693 (203) - Change to k sounds much better.
  6. 01:49:868 (398) - You forgot change to k to keep the sequence you have with the kats 01:48:699 (386,387,390,391,394,395) -
  7. 02:14:316 (563) - Change to k to variate bevause you have some kdd so a variation is much better for much fun.
  8. 02:18:310 (589,590,591,592,593,594,595,596,597,598,599,600) - This is a bit repetitive, add notes how you make here 02:15:388 (572,573,574,575,576,577,578,579,580,581,582,583,584,585,586,587) - I suggest you add a d 02:18:797 - and add a k 02:19:381 -
  9. 03:00:388 (863,864,865) - , 03:01:167 (868,869,870) - , 03:01:946 (873,874,875) - This is a bit repetitive do not you think? I recommend move 03:02:044 (874) - to 03:01:849 -
  10. 03:03:602 (886) - Change to k to variate a bit.
  11. 03:31:751 (110,111,112,113,114,115) - This would sound much better if you move this note 03:31:849 (111) - here 03:32:044 -
  12. 03:37:985 (153,154,155,156,157,158) - This part too for a similar consitency with the previous suggestion, move 03:37:693 (151) - to 03:37:888 -
  13. 03:40:712 (172,173,174,175,176,177,178) - Change to ddkkdddd sounds much better with the instrumental.
  14. 04:22:985 (457,458,459,460,461,462,463,464,465,466,467,468) - You remember this part, right? is this same part 02:18:310 (589,590,591,592,593,594,595,596,597,598,599,600) - so to keep consistency in both parts please add a d 04:23:472 - and add a k 04:24:057 -
  15. 04:26:979 - , 04:27:174 - Add a k for variation and make much fun the map, because this is a bit repetitive 04:26:102 (477,478,479,480,481,482,483,484,485) -
  16. 04:28:921 - Add a d and add a k here 04:29:122 - for a similar reason and density with the previous suggestion.
  17. 04:42:758 - You forgot add a note, similar to 04:40:323 (566,567,568) - so please add a d and change to k to flow much better 04:42:709 (585) -
  18. 04:50:014 (642,643) - Same ^ (Just move 04:50:014 (642,643) - to 04:49:966 - and add a d 04:50:112 - )
  19. 05:20:648 (859,860,861,862,863,864,865,866,867,868,869,870) - You know what to do here right?
  20. 05:42:368 - Add a k and add a d 05:42:953 - sounds very nice and to increase the density a bit.



Amazing map! I hope my mod has been helpful :33, Good Luck!
posted
Hi~ :3 NM from here

SPOILER
d = small don
k = small kat
D =big don
K = big kat
^ = again
Festival is far from over
  • change 00:41:535 (153) - to k
    delete 00:41:687 (154) -
    move 00:41:881 (1) - to 00:41:687 and end it in 00:44:803
    change 00:53:375 (22) - to d
    change 00:54:057 (29) - to k
    change 00:54:154 (30) - to D
    change 00:54:349 (31,32) - to k
    01:01:167 (80,81,82,83,84,85,86) - here you can change 01:01:557 (84,85) - to d and 01:01:751 (86) - to k or just change 01:01:751 (86) - to k
    00:53:570 (24,25) - ctrl + g
    change 01:02:725 (93) - to d
    change 01:02:920 (94) - to k, 01:03:018 (95,96) - to d and 01:03:407 (99) - to d
    change 01:03:797 (102) - to k
    01:04:089 (104,106) - ctrl + g
    01:04:381 (107,108) - ^
    change 01:04:674 (110) - to d
    01:04:771 (111) - ^
    change 01:05:453 (118) - to k
    change 01:05:842 (122) - to d
    make 01:18:505 (168,169,170,171,172,173,174) - a kkdkkkd
    01:20:355 (184,187) - ctrl + g
    01:22:693 (203,206) - ^
    change 01:22:888 (205) - to k
    change 01:23:764 (212) - to d
    01:25:323 (226) - ^
    change 01:44:609 (359) - to d
    change 01:44:803 (360) - to K
    01:44:998 (361,364) - ctrl + g
    change 01:46:167 (369) - to d
    change 01:46:362 (370) - to K
    01:46:557 (371,372) - ctrl + g
    change 01:46:946 (374) - to k
    01:47:531 (378,379) - ctrl + g
    02:52:596 (808,809,810,811) - ^
    02:53:375 (813,814) - ^
    02:53:667 add d
    02:53:764 (816,818) - ctrl + g
    move 02:54:251 (820) - to 02:54:446
    02:54:544 (822,823) - ctrl + g
    move 02:54:836 (824) - to 02:55:420
    02:55:323 (829,830) - ctrl + g
    02:55:712 (831,832,833,834) - ^
    02:56:492 (836,837,839,840) - ^
    02:57:271 (841,843) - ^
    change 02:57:855 (846) - to k
    change 02:58:440 (849) - to D
    make 02:59:024 (852,853,854) - a kkd
    02:59:414 (855,857,859,861) - ctrl + g
    02:59:414 (855,857,859,861,863,864) - ^
    03:00:583 (866,867,868,869,871,872,873,874) - ^
    change 03:02:141 (876) - to k
    03:02:920 (882,884) - ctrl + g
    03:02:920 (882,884,885,886) - ^
    03:03:699 (888,889) - ^
    change 03:04:089 (890) - to k
    move 04:50:014 (642) - to 04:49:998 (1/6)
    change 05:04:089 (745) - to K
    delete 05:53:375 (1) -
    move 05:53:764 (1) - to 05:53:375 and make it end on 05:57:271


All of this are just suggestions, what you accept or reject is up to you. Good luck with ranking :D
posted

game rock wrote:

Hi! ^w^

Request from Gemu's Taiko & Mania Queue (NM, M4M & GD)



d
k
D (Big d)
K (Big k)






  • HP: 6


  1. 00:05:144 (16) - Change to k, the voice have a hight tone, also sounds very good with this structure 00:01:986 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - for the low voices and notes 00:02:287 (2,3) - to increases here 00:04:091 (11,12,13,14,15,16) - Ok
  2. 00:09:655 (39,40,41,42) - Change to d, and then change to k 00:11:911 (50,52) - to keep consistency with 00:01:986 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) -
  3. 00:53:570 (24) - Change to d flow much better the stream 00:53:472 (23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30) - Ok, but i think 00:10:106 (41) - is need to be k, cuz here other sound
  4. 00:57:953 (57,60) - Make Ctrl G flows much better the pitch. Ok
  5. 01:22:693 (203) - Change to k sounds much better. Ok
  6. 01:49:868 (398) - You forgot change to k to keep the sequence you have with the kats 01:48:699 (386,387,390,391,394,395) -Ok
  7. 02:14:316 (563) - Change to k to variate bevause you have some kdd so a variation is much better for much fun. Ok
  8. 02:18:310 (589,590,591,592,593,594,595,596,597,598,599,600) - This is a bit repetitive, add notes how you make here 02:15:388 (572,573,574,575,576,577,578,579,580,581,582,583,584,585,586,587) - I suggest you add a d 02:18:797 - and add a k 02:19:381 - Added
  9. 03:00:388 (863,864,865) - , 03:01:167 (868,869,870) - , 03:01:946 (873,874,875) - This is a bit repetitive do not you think? I recommend move 03:02:044 (874) - to 03:01:849 - Edited
  10. 03:03:602 (886) - Change to k to variate a bit. Ok
  11. 03:31:751 (110,111,112,113,114,115) - This would sound much better if you move this note 03:31:849 (111) - here 03:32:044 - Ok
  12. 03:37:985 (153,154,155,156,157,158) - This part too for a similar consitency with the previous suggestion, move 03:37:693 (151) - to 03:37:888 -Ok
  13. 03:40:712 (172,173,174,175,176,177,178) - Change to ddkkdddd sounds much better with the instrumental. Ok
  14. 04:22:985 (457,458,459,460,461,462,463,464,465,466,467,468) - You remember this part, right? is this same part 02:18:310 (589,590,591,592,593,594,595,596,597,598,599,600) - so to keep consistency in both parts please add a d 04:23:472 - and add a k 04:24:057 - Ok
  15. 04:26:979 - , 04:27:174 - Add a k for variation and make much fun the map, because this is a bit repetitive 04:26:102 (477,478,479,480,481,482,483,484,485) - Ok
  16. 04:28:921 - Add a d and add a k here 04:29:122 - for a similar reason and density with the previous suggestion. Ok
  17. 04:42:758 - You forgot add a note, similar to 04:40:323 (566,567,568) - so please add a d and change to k to flow much better 04:42:709 (585) - Ok. But I thought that in this moment 2 1/8 notes!
  18. 04:50:014 (642,643) - Same ^ (Just move 04:50:014 (642,643) - to 04:49:966 - and add a d 04:50:112 - )Ok
  19. 05:20:648 (859,860,861,862,863,864,865,866,867,868,869,870) - You know what to do here right? Ok
  20. 05:42:368 - Add a k and add a d 05:42:953 - sounds very nice and to increase the density a bit.Ok



Amazing map! I hope my mod has been helpful :33, Good Luck!
Amazing mod! :D Thank you very much for help!
posted

Thousand wrote:

Hi~ :3 NM from here

SPOILER
d = small don
k = small kat
D =big don
K = big kat
^ = again
Festival is far from over
  • change 00:41:535 (153) - to k Ok
    delete 00:41:687 (154) - Ok
    move 00:41:881 (1) - to 00:41:687 and end it in 00:44:803 Ok
    change 00:53:375 (22) - to d No, cuz here is stream flow
    change 00:54:057 (29) - to k ^
    change 00:54:154 (30) - to D ^
    change 00:54:349 (31,32) - to k Ok
    01:01:167 (80,81,82,83,84,85,86) - here you can change 01:01:557 (84,85) - to d and 01:01:751 (86) - to k or just change 01:01:751 (86) - to k Ok
    00:53:570 (24,25) - ctrl + g previous mod - here is kk
    change 01:02:725 (93) - to d Ok
    change 01:02:920 (94) - to k, 01:03:018 (95,96) - to d and 01:03:407 (99) - to d Ok
    change 01:03:797 (102) - to k Ok
    01:04:089 (104,106) - ctrl + g Ok
    01:04:381 (107,108) - ^ Ok
    change 01:04:674 (110) - to d Ok
    01:04:771 (111) - ^ Ok
    change 01:05:453 (118) - to k Ok
    change 01:05:842 (122) - to d Ok. Now this stream sounds really cool!
    make 01:18:505 (168,169,170,171,172,173,174) - a kkdkkkd Ok
    01:20:355 (184,187) - ctrl + g Ok
    01:22:693 (203,206) - ^ - here is kk
    change 01:22:888 (205) - to k Ok
    change 01:23:764 (212) - to d Ok
    01:25:323 (226) - ^ Ok
    change 01:44:609 (359) - to d not really, here is d k d D#BFFF00]d[/color] k d D
    change 01:44:803 (360) - to K В becouse sound is clunk
    01:44:998 (361,364) - ctrl + g No. First triple is up for high pitch, second for pitch down
    change 01:46:167 (369) - to d not really, here is d k d D#BFFF00]d[/color] k d D
    change 01:46:362 (370) - to KВ becouse sound is clunk
    01:46:557 (371,372) - ctrl + g Ok, just for variate
    change 01:46:946 (374) - to k Ok
    01:47:531 (378,379) - ctrl + g Ok
    02:52:596 (808,809,810,811) - ^ Ok
    02:53:375 (813,814) - ^ Ok
    02:53:667 add d Ok
    02:53:764 (816,818) - ctrl + g Ok
    move 02:54:251 (820) - to 02:54:446 Ok
    02:54:544 (822,823) - ctrl + g Ok
    move 02:54:836 (824) - to 02:55:420 Ok
    02:55:323 (829,830) - ctrl + g Ok
    02:55:712 (831,832,833,834) - ^ Ok
    02:56:492 (836,837,839,840) - ^ Ok
    02:57:271 (841,843) - ^ Ok
    change 02:57:855 (846) - to k Ok
    change 02:58:440 (849) - to D unranked
    make 02:59:024 (852,853,854) - a kkd
    02:59:414 (855,857,859,861) - ctrl + g Ok
    02:59:414 (855,857,859,861,863,864) - ^ Ok
    03:00:583 (866,867,868,869,871,872,873,874) - ^ Ok
    change 03:02:141 (876) - to k Ok
    03:02:920 (882,884) - ctrl + g Ok
    03:02:920 (882,884,885,886) - ^ Ok
    03:03:699 (888,889) - ^ Ok
    change 03:04:089 (890) - to k Ok
    move 04:50:014 (642) - to 04:49:998 (1/6) Ok
    change 05:04:089 (745) - to K no, here is 2 clunk sounds
    delete 05:53:375 (1) - Ok
    move 05:53:764 (1) - to 05:53:375 and make it end on 05:57:271 Ok


All of this are just suggestions, what you accept or reject is up to you. Good luck with ranking :D
Thank you very much! <3
posted
WOW, Your SBs are AWESOME!
Take two stars, you deserve it :3
posted
Hello from my modding queue!

Festival is far from over
  1. 00:52:985 (20) - Change to k? 00:52:596 (18,19,20,21) - The melody of this part is gradually increase. I think change that to k is look better.
  2. 00:54:057 (29) - Remove this note? When i intend to heard this. I unheard a melody here.
  3. 01:05:842 (122,123,124,125) - The melody on here is look similar all. I suggest change to d all.
  4. 01:13:635 (146,147,148,149,150) - How about change this to d k k k d? Look it's follow a melody better.
  5. 01:14:803 to 01:17:336 - I think your note on this is not follow a melody a bit. I suggest 01:15:583 (155,156) - change to k and 01:16:946 (162,163) - ctrl+g. Look it's better?
  6. 01:23:959 (213,214,215,216,217,218) - These notes the melody is similar like 01:23:570 (210,211,212) - . I suggest change 01:23:959 (213,214,215) - to kkd. and change 01:24:349 (216,217,218) - to kkd too.
  7. 01:29:803 (256,258) - Ctrl+g? Look it's follow a melody better.
  8. 01:56:394 (446) - Change to d? The sound is look similar like a before note.
  9. 02:24:154 (620) - Change to k? Look the vocal is high.
  10. 03:18:115 (20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27) - I suggest to change this to opposite color. It's similar like 01:13:635 (146,147,148,149,150) -
  11. 03:20:648 (30,31,32,33,34,35,36) - Same as above ^.
  12. 04:32:920 (524,525) - Ctrl+g? look (524) the sound is higher (525)
  13. 04:34:479 (533) - Change to k? The sound is look high.
  14. 04:38:959 (564,565) - Ctrl+g? look (564) the sound is higher (565)
  15. 04:39:738 (568) - Change to k? The sound is look high.
  16. 04:40:323 (572,573,574) - I think use 1/8 is look very sudden. Can you change to 1/6?
  17. 04:42:661 (590,591,592) - Same as above ^.

This is all from me. Good luck :) //Sorry look i mod this not as good as it should be because i'm so sleepy. T^T
posted

rew0825 wrote:

Hello from my modding queue!

This is not extra Festival is far from over
  1. 00:52:985 (20) - Change to k? 00:52:596 (18,19,20,21) - The melody of this part is gradually increase. I think change that to k is look better.Not really, 18 and 20 are equal, but 21 is higher than 19 ... So d k d k is best pattern here
  2. 00:54:057 (29) - Remove this note? When i intend to heard this. I unheard a melody here. Yeap, you are right
  3. 01:05:842 (122,123,124,125) - The melody on here is look similar all. I suggest change to d all. Edited, but like ddkD, cuz finishers need note with other color before
  4. 01:13:635 (146,147,148,149,150) - How about change this to d k k k d? Look it's follow a melody better. Ok
  5. 01:14:803 to 01:17:336 - I think your note on this is not follow a melody a bit. I suggest 01:15:583 (155,156) - change to k and 01:16:946 (162,163) - ctrl+g. Look it's better? definitely better
  6. 01:23:959 (213,214,215,216,217,218) - These notes the melody is similar like 01:23:570 (210,211,212) - . I suggest change 01:23:959 (213,214,215) - to kkd. and change 01:24:349 (216,217,218) - to kkd too. ok
  7. 01:29:803 (256,258) - Ctrl+g? Look it's follow a melody better. Here is selected 2 katu notes... I changet it for ddkdk k (it was dddkk k)
  8. 01:56:394 (446) - Change to d? The sound is look similar like a before note. ok
  9. 02:24:154 (620) - Change to k? Look the vocal is high. ok
  10. 03:18:115 (20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27) - I suggest to change this to opposite color. It's similar like 01:13:635 (146,147,148,149,150) -
    ok
  11. 03:20:648 (30,31,32,33,34,35,36) - Same as above ^. ok
  12. 04:32:920 (524,525) - Ctrl+g? look (524) the sound is higher (525) ok
  13. 04:34:479 (533) - Change to k? The sound is look high. ok
  14. 04:38:959 (564,565) - Ctrl+g? look (564) the sound is higher (565)
  15. 04:39:738 (568) - Change to k? The sound is look high.
  16. 04:40:323 (572,573,574) - I think use 1/8 is look very sudden. Can you change to 1/6? wow, it looks better!
  17. 04:42:661 (590,591,592) - Same as above ^. ok changed, but i need to think about this moment, because here is not 4 1\3 notes...

This is all from me. Good luck :) //Sorry look i mod this not as good as it should be because i'm so sleepy. T^T
Thank you very much!
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heya, mod from my queue.

festival
  1. 00:40:933 (148) - deleting this would flow better as ddkk is more common for 1/6 snappings.
  2. 00:41:687 - move slider beginning to here? The vocals are stronger here than on where it is right now.
  3. Also, new inherited timing point here is skipping 2ms, is that intentional? If not then fix it to be on 00:41:685. If it is then put a new inherited timing point here 00:41:629 - ommiting first bar line to avoid the double bars.
  4. 01:06:135 (132,133) - invert those colours as the finisher has a snare sound, more suitable for kat.
  5. 01:06:427 - don here would help the flow in the transition with 1/4 notes > 1/2 notes > 2/1 notes. The way it is right now (1/4 > 1/1 > 2/1) doesn't play so well. Also there's a nice drum sound there :p
  6. I think deleting 01:14:024 (155) - would be better here as it feels less over mapped and dk kd on calm parts usually fits very nice.
  7. 01:15:388 (161) - could remove too, this section feels too overmapped for the intensity of the song.
  8. 01:15:777 (163) - ^
  9. 01:16:557 (167) - ^. Consider checking the last 4 suggestions together before accepting or declining.
  10. 01:17:531 (172,173,174) - these should be dons as they are the same sound on 01:17:141 (170) - and on previous notes.
  11. 02:21:427 (621,622,623,624) - good place for finishers to go with the intensity on vocals.
  12. 02:27:661 (649) - finisher here doesn't fit well as the sound here is not too strong and there's a note of the same colour on the stream very close to it, making it hard to play.
  13. 02:36:362 (707) - this note is 1/4, not 1/6. Idk about the previous one though, seems like it is between 1/4 and 1/6 but 1/4 plays much better than 1/6 here, I'd go for that for consistency on the map. This one 02:36:946 (713,714) - is better as there's a break after it so the player can recover later, but 1/4 would still be better here.
  14. 02:52:596 (827) - again, weird place for finisher, end of stream with a note of the same colour near it. also it has no increased intensity compared to the other drum sounds on the white lines. 02:52:206 (823) - this would fit much better for a finisher if you removed the following note.
  15. 03:02:271 (897) - no reason for this 1/6 note as you didn't map any of the 1/6 drum sounds before it like 03:01:881 - or 03:02:076 - , this just breaks consistency and flow.
  16. 03:04:381 - don here before the finisher as you already have used many ddK or kkD over the map?
  17. 04:47:920 - the 1/6 used on this section makes much more sense imo as it gives emphasis on the guitar solo that's happening, however it's still ugly for the eyes to see :v
  18. I think the sv on this note 05:03:407 (770) - was supposed to be x0,66?
  19. 05:23:764 (914,915,916,917) - again, good place for finishers using the vocals intensity.
  20. Last thing, I think it's important to warn players somewhere (If it's not already) that the SB (finishers effect to be more precise) works only on 4:3 resoltion.


nice song and fun sb here, get some stars and be aware of the 1/6 consistency! Good luck o/
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Marm wrote:

heya, mod from my queue.

festival
  1. 00:40:933 (148) - deleting this would flow better as ddkk is more common for 1/6 snappings. ok
  2. 00:41:687 - move slider beginning to here? The vocals are stronger here than on where it is right now. This is unrankable, cuz overlap
  3. Also, new inherited timing point here is skipping 2ms, is that intentional? If not then fix it to be on 00:41:685. If it is then put a new inherited timing point here 00:41:629 - ommiting first bar line to avoid the double bars. That is intentional
  4. 01:06:135 (132,133) - invert those colours as the finisher has a snare sound, more suitable for kat. ok
  5. 01:06:427 - don here would help the flow in the transition with 1/4 notes > 1/2 notes > 2/1 notes. The way it is right now (1/4 > 1/1 > 2/1) doesn't play so well. Also there's a nice drum sound there :p ok
  6. I think deleting 01:14:024 (155) - would be better here as it feels less over mapped and dk kd on calm parts usually fits very nice.
  7. 01:15:388 (161) - could remove too, this section feels too overmapped for the intensity of the song.
  8. 01:15:777 (163) - ^
  9. 01:16:557 (167) - ^. Consider checking the last 4 suggestions together before accepting or declining. hmm, i'll think about this moment
  10. 01:17:531 (172,173,174) - these should be dons as they are the same sound on 01:17:141 (170) - and on previous notes. ok
  11. 02:21:427 (621,622,623,624) - good place for finishers to go with the intensity on vocals. ok
  12. 02:27:661 (649) - finisher here doesn't fit well as the sound here is not too strong and there's a note of the same colour on the stream very close to it, making it hard to play. ok. Just forgot to delete it
  13. 02:36:362 (707) - this note is 1/4, not 1/6. Idk about the previous one though, seems like it is between 1/4 and 1/6 but 1/4 plays much better than 1/6 here, I'd go for that for consistency on the map. This one 02:36:946 (713,714) - is better as there's a break after it so the player can recover later, but 1/4 would still be better here. ok
  14. 02:52:596 (827) - again, weird place for finisher, end of stream with a note of the same colour near it. also it has no increased intensity compared to the other drum sounds on the white lines. ok 02:52:206 (823) - this would fit much better for a finisher if you removed the following note. I hear stream here, so i cant
  15. 03:02:271 (897) - no reason for this 1/6 note as you didn't map any of the 1/6 drum sounds before it like 03:01:881 - or 03:02:076 - , this just breaks consistency and flow. ok
  16. 03:04:381 - don here before the finisher as you already have used many ddK or kkD over the map? ok
  17. 04:47:920 - the 1/6 used on this section makes much more sense imo as it gives emphasis on the guitar solo that's happening, however it's still ugly for the eyes to see :vok
  18. I think the sv on this note 05:03:407 (770) - was supposed to be x0,66?ok
  19. 05:23:764 (914,915,916,917) - again, good place for finishers using the vocals intensity. ok
  20. Last thing, I think it's important to warn players somewhere (If it's not already) that the SB (finishers effect to be more precise) works only on 4:3 resoltion. I want to rework this effect, so that it would look good on all types of monitors


nice song and fun sb here, get some stars and be aware of the 1/6 consistency! Good luck o/
Thank you very much! 1\6 was just test.
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From my Queue,
o/

[Storyboard]
⏩00:01:535 - Shouldn’t ‘さあ’ appear on this line instead of the next one?
⏩I think the light particles can be more at the upper section of the screen, close to the Japanese lyrics because I think the upper part seems kinda empty now.
⏩02:52:596 (828) - Remove the dark ring at the hit section because you don’t have a big note there now.
⏩05:23:764 (914,915,916,917) - 05:26:102 (923,924,925,926) - For tidiness I think you should add those black rings on these big notes.
⏩05:53:375 (125) - Just a suggestion, but you may let the sound spectrum at the below less sensitive to let the credit screen more static?

[General]
⏩Maybe capitalise the diffname from [Festival is far from over] to [Festival Is Far From Over]?
⏩Remove tags Diao ye zong 凋叶棕 since they already showed up at the metadata.
⏩Add tags めらみぽっぷ for the Japanese of meramipop,
Team Shanghai Alice Shanhai Arisu Gengakudan for both the official english name and the romanised form,
Touhou for relation to the source’s game’s theme,
めらみぽっぷ for the singer’s name that sings this song.

Here are the problems with SV I think you should definitely check them out:
⏩04:19:868 (444) - At least a gradual SV of 04:19:479 (440,441,442,443,444) - . Right now it is very unsatisfying visually and I would notice the (444) as not a ¼ following the previous 4 ¼ notes and combo-broke when testplaying. OR Make the SV line a ½ tick later just like 02:15:193 (580,581) - so that that confusion will not happen again ;)
⏩Starting from 05:00:583 (749,750,751,752,753,754,755,756,757,758,759,760,761,762,763,764,765,766,767,768,769,770,771) - I think the SV change is way too large that it makes it a sight-read of notes, and this kills many HD players as well :(

Here are the suggestions with SV that I think it may make the map more clean in SV
⏩04:06:622 (348,349,350,351,352,353,354,355,356) - Maybe a grudual increase in SV.


[Festival is far from over]
Generally I don’t really get why you usually use a Big note after streams or ¼ -ples. That would be a style, but I don’t think would be a good one.
⏩00:41:881 (1) - Why starting this spinner here? I believe there aren’t sounds at 00:41:881 - but instead you can follow the vocal at 00:41:687 - .
⏩01:05:842 (129,130,131,132) - For the k, there is the same sound with (130,131,132) so kddd here maybe questionable.
⏩01:08:570 (138) - This section which there’s k covering the drum sounds aren’t the best spots to put the ks I think.
⏩02:08:180 (530,531,532) - ddK K K feels uncomfortable when playing. I think d K K K would work better.
03:15:193 (8,9) - Ctrl+g this? again kdkd at least can make it sounds better.
⏩03:48:699 (235) - Remove this finisher? I think it would balance more since you don’t have finisher at 03:51:816 (254) - 03:53:375 (264) - 03:54:933 (279) - 03:56:492 (289) - ..
Be sure to change that storyboard settings as well ;)
⏩04:35:745 (552) - Remove this note? There isn’t piano sounds and I think it can let the player rest a bit to prepare for the next stream.
04:42:855 (606) - Remove this? The sound impart of that trill ends at 04:42:790 (605) - I think you can certainly have a dkd here instead of dkdk.


Really satisfying map to play and watch! Good luck on approval!! :)
posted
;)

Faputa wrote:

From my Queue,
o/

[Storyboard]
⏩00:01:535 - Shouldn’t ‘さあ’ appear on this line instead of the next one? Ok, i'll edit this moment
⏩I think the light particles can be more at the upper section of the screen, close to the Japanese lyrics because I think the upper part seems kinda empty now. Ok, i'll fix it.
⏩02:52:596 (828) - Remove the dark ring at the hit section because you don’t have a big note there now. When i updating the SB, these rings are automatically added or deleted. By the way, i have problems with displaying this effects on 4:3 monitors, so, i'll change it by other effect soon (I guess that these will be particles flying in all directions every finisher note, although you can suggest an idea for the better).
⏩05:23:764 (914,915,916,917) - 05:26:102 (923,924,925,926) - For tidiness I think you should add those black rings on these big notes.^

⏩05:53:375 (125) - Just a suggestion, but you may let the sound spectrum at the below less sensitive to let the credit screen more static?
Ok, i'll edit this moment

[General]
⏩Maybe capitalise the diffname from [Festival is far from over] to [Festival Is Far From Over]? On my opinion, first is looking better. Most likely because I'm just used to the old name.
⏩Remove tags Diao ye zong 凋叶棕 since they already showed up at the metadata.
⏩Add tags めらみぽっぷ for the Japanese of meramipop,
Team Shanghai Alice Shanhai Arisu Gengakudan for both the official english name and the romanised form,
Touhou for relation to the source’s game’s theme,
めらみぽっぷ for the singer’s name that sings this song.
if you are reading this now, please contact me in any way and tell me - did I put it right, because I did not fully understand where to put any points .... :?

Here are the problems with SV I think you should definitely check them out:
⏩04:19:868 (444) - At least a gradual SV of 04:19:479 (440,441,442,443,444) - . Right now it is very unsatisfying visually and I would notice the (444) as not a ¼ following the previous 4 ¼ notes and combo-broke when testplaying. OR Make the SV line a ½ tick later just like 02:15:193 (580,581) - so that that confusion will not happen again ;)Fixed, I forgot to fix this moment before
⏩Starting from 05:00:583 (749,750,751,752,753,754,755,756,757,758,759,760,761,762,763,764,765,766,767,768,769,770,771) - I think the SV change is way too large that it makes it a sight-read of notes, and this kills many HD players as well :(One way - i'll delete it
By the way, what's about 05:50:355 (94) - and next SVs?


Here are the suggestions with SV that I think it may make the map more clean in SV
⏩04:06:622 (348,349,350,351,352,353,354,355,356) - Maybe a grudual increase in SV. Cool idea!


[Festival is far from over]
Generally I don’t really get why you usually use a Big note after streams or ¼ -ples. That would be a style, but I don’t think would be a good one. Im trying to make finishers and next note is not same color, for comfortable playable
⏩00:41:881 (1) - Why starting this spinner here? I believe there aren’t sounds at 00:41:881 - but instead you can follow the vocal at 00:41:687 - . ok
⏩01:05:842 (129,130,131,132) - For the k, there is the same sound with (130,131,132) so kddd here maybe questionable. Hm, i hear it like kdkk
⏩01:08:570 (138) - This section which there’s k covering the drum sounds aren’t the best spots to put the ks I think. I mapped this part with vocal, cuz frum sounds is boring here
⏩02:08:180 (530,531,532) - ddK K K feels uncomfortable when playing. I think d K K K would work better. Ok, changed it and same
03:15:193 (8,9) - Ctrl+g this? again kdkd at least can make it sounds better. ok
⏩03:48:699 (235) - Remove this finisher? I think it would balance more since you don’t have finisher at 03:51:816 (254) - 03:53:375 (264) - 03:54:933 (279) - 03:56:492 (289) - .. ok
Be sure to change that storyboard settings as well ;)Sure 8-)
⏩04:35:745 (552) - Remove this note? There isn’t piano sounds and I think it can let the player rest a bit to prepare for the next stream. ok
⏩04:42:855 (606) - Remove this? The sound impart of that trill ends at 04:42:790 (605) - I think you can certainly have a dkd here instead of dkdk. ok


Really satisfying map to play and watch! Good luck on approval!! :)

Thank you very much! <3
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[Festival is far from over]
добавь слово "project" в теги
если сделать "Festival is Far from Over" или сделать заглавную букву маленькой, то будет эстетичнее, наверное
  1. 01:21:622 - эта пауза кажется такой неестественной
  2. 01:31:167 (274) - d будет лучше, потому что 01:31:037 (272) - здесь я не слышу ничего особенного для выделения
  3. 01:44:803 (370) - не знаю конечно, но раз ты поставил k 01:46:362 (380) - 01:47:920 (390) - тут и на других идентичных ударах, то лучше это сделать и там
  4. 02:08:959 (534) - финиш бы подошёл к таким штукам, в этом и других киаях тоже + 02:02:725 (492) - здесь же ты его ставишь
  5. 02:32:725 (682,684) - лучше k поставить, звук же одинаковый. 02:33:894 (688) - а тут k и с финишем можно
  6. 03:54:933 (279) - может d поставить? как тут 03:48:699 (235) - , если это сильно ничего ломать не будет конечно


тайко модинг такой трудный
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tokiko wrote:

[Festival is far from over]
добавь слово "project" в теги
если сделать "Festival is Far from Over" или сделать заглавную букву маленькой, то будет эстетичнее, наверное
  1. 01:21:622 - эта пауза кажется такой неестественной всё хорошо, там просто звуков нет, так что нечего туда пихать считаю я
  2. 01:31:167 (274) - d будет лучше, потому что 01:31:037 (272) - здесь я не слышу ничего особенного для выделения О, вот и фолоу!
  3. 01:44:803 (370) - не знаю конечно, но раз ты поставил k 01:46:362 (380) - 01:47:920 (390) - тут и на других идентичных ударах, то лучше это сделать и там Оп, ты на 200% прав, я просто забыл там поставить кату
  4. 02:08:959 (534) - финиш бы подошёл к таким штукам, в этом и других киаях тоже + 02:02:725 (492) - здесь же ты его ставишь Тут скорее с второго надо убирать финишер, ибо ну не такой сильный звук как те K K K паттерны
  5. 02:32:725 (682,684) - лучше k поставить, звук же одинаковый. 02:33:894 (688) - а тут k и с финишем можно Чисто флоу, не могу ничего тут сделать
  6. 03:54:933 (279) - может d поставить? как тут 03:48:699 (235) - , если это сильно ничего ломать не будет конечно Первоё чёткий звук тарелок, второе звук что-то более басового, так что нет. Кстати, я убрал там финишеh, так что отчасти этот пункт был полезен :)


тайко модинг такой трудный
От души! Спасибо!
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From my modding queue~

[Festival is far from over]
00:19:881 (92) - d? It helps emphasize the finisher at 00:20:031 (93).

00:41:009 (148,149,150) - Delete. If you listen at 50% playback, the drums are 1/6, not 1/4. Replace with:
00:41:084 and 00:41:159 - Add d.

01:19:868 (188) - Change to d.
01:28:050 (251,252,253,254) - kdk d for consistency? You mapped 01:34:674 (298) with d.
01:43:829 (364,365,366) - ddK? You used K for every finisher in this section [excluding 01:44:024 and 01:44:803]
01:44:803 (370) - K? Same reason as above.
01:50:161 (411,412) - dK?

01:55:128 - This whole stream is a bit awkward to play imo. I'd suggest:
01:55:420 (447) - Change to k.
01:55:615 (449) - Change to d.
01:55:810 (451) - ^
01:55:907 (452) - Change to k.

Good luck with ranking this! :)
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