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~ Taiko Mod #5 ~

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18:14 teaMblack19: Привет. Ну я начинаю тогда :)
18:14 ASPIRIN: го
18:17 teaMblack19: 00:03:640 (8,9) - если прислушаться, тут много где можно услышать триплеты. Если их маппнуть, было бы интереснее начало играть.
18:19 teaMblack19: 00:05:445 (16,17) - 00:07:249 (24,25) - 00:09:054 (32,33) - 00:10:858 (40,41) - 00:12:663 (48,49) - 00:14:467 (56,57) - 00:16:272 (64,65) - 00:18:076 (72,73) -
18:19 teaMblack19: Перед каждым белым тиком, короче.
18:19 teaMblack19: *Большим белым тиком.
18:20 ASPIRIN: угу, понял
18:22 teaMblack19: 00:41:084 (139) - тут тоже триплет можно сделать, как ты это делал раньше 00:37:475 (129,130,131) - например.
18:25 teaMblack19: 00:41:881 (1) - спиннер, думаю, можно назад на белый тик сдвинуть. Мне кажется, в этом сличаи это допустимо будет.
18:25 teaMblack19: Тем более оверлапов при игре никаких нет.
18:26 teaMblack19: И при 1/3 ритме небольшой BPM получается. Так что, думаю, можно.
18:29 teaMblack19: 00:57:271 (52,55) - финишеры, про которые я говорил.
18:30 ASPIRIN: напомни, что с ними сделать?
18:30 teaMblack19: Либо убирай финишеры, либо меняй предыдущую ноту в стриме на синюю, если не хочешь убирать. Иначе анранк.
18:31 ASPIRIN: Скрин с дискорде
18:31 teaMblack19: Но если честно, триплеты с финишерами в конце - это странно. )
18:35 teaMblack19: Хм, я думаю часть, которая начинается отсюда 00:54:154 (29) - можно было бы по другому замапать...
18:35 ASPIRIN: инвентирова?
18:36 teaMblack19: Там если прислушаться, можно услышать такие четкие звуки на 1/4 битах
18:36 teaMblack19: И по ним уже тройки и пятерки разставлять
18:36 ASPIRIN: я ремапну
18:36 teaMblack19: Окей
18:37 teaMblack19: 01:08:570 (122) - d звучит хорошо. И по вокалу подходит
18:41 teaMblack19: Так, до 01:25:323 (218) - всё супер
18:43 teaMblack19: Дальше немного спорное положение троек и пятерок..
18:44 ASPIRIN: Конкретнее, я тупой же
18:44 teaMblack19: Хотя, сойдёт. Могу разве что посоветовать использовать разные пятерки
18:44 teaMblack19: Щас пример
18:45 ASPIRIN: дискорд скнины
18:45 ASPIRIN: тебе потом эти картинки в мод впихивать
18:46 teaMblack19: 01:27:076 (228,229,230,231,232) - тут у тебя kdddk, а сюда 01:32:141 (262,263,264,265,266) - уже можно сделать kkddk для вариативности.
18:47 teaMblack19: И насчёт таких троек 01:26:687 (225,226,227) -
18:48 teaMblack19: Я против них ничего не имею, но kkd намного удобнее играть. Можешь оставить как есть, но это немного сложнее играется (совсем немного, но сложнее).
18:49 teaMblack19: Ну или идеально чередовать kdd и kkd для разнообразия. Но желательно не рандомно, конечно.
18:52 teaMblack19: 01:38:862 (304,305,306,307,308,309) - начинать стрим с синего тика очень не хорошо. Фу фу фу :D
18:53 teaMblack19: Можешь добавить красную ноту в начало. Будет типа на вокал.
18:55 teaMblack19: 01:41:979 (329,330,331,332,333,334) - то же
18:58 teaMblack19: 01:40:225 (316) - можешь перенести на красный тик справа, но это субъективно. Пока даже не знаю, как тут лучше поступить.
18:59 teaMblack19: 01:47:044 (367) - там звук слышно. Можно мапнуть
19:00 ASPIRIN: финишер?!
19:01 teaMblack19: Не, не, не то
19:01 teaMblack19: Там триплет
19:01 teaMblack19: До синей ноты
19:02 ASPIRIN: услышал
19:03 teaMblack19: 01:48:797 (378) - лучше перенести сюда 01:48:602 (377) -
19:03 teaMblack19: типа влево
19:04 teaMblack19: Получится две тройки, как раньше, а дальше стрим.
19:04 teaMblack19: 01:53:180 (411,412) - Тут тоже триплет
19:05 teaMblack19: Если перенес ноту в прошлый раз ^, то эту тоже надо 01:55:031 (422) -
19:06 teaMblack19: 02:02:141 (466) - k (?)
19:10 teaMblack19: Припев по сути хорошо замапан. Могу разве что как раньше посоветовать чередовать kdd/kkd и kdddk/kkddk для разнообразия.
19:10 ASPIRIN: окке
19:16 teaMblack19: 02:31:751 (652) - можно удалить (по желанию)
19:17 teaMblack19: Типа чтобы подчеркнуть там всё и вся >_<
19:18 teaMblack19: 02:38:959 (699) - синим можно сделать
19:19 teaMblack19: 02:58:829 (809) - у тебя тут звук уменшается до 60%, хотя по сути не должен
19:23 teaMblack19: 03:13:245 (4) - красный как раньше
19:24 teaMblack19: 03:14:803 (7,8) - поставь ноту между ними, как ты это сделал тут 01:10:518 (126) -
19:28 teaMblack19: 03:42:466 (62) - начиная от сюда та же ситуация со стримами, которые начинаются на синих тиках. По твоему желанию.
19:30 teaMblack19: 03:48:699 (115) - отсюда опять тоже самое. Пропустил пару троек.
19:31 teaMblack19: Второй припев норм
19:33 teaMblack19: 04:32:336 (394) - "красный - синий - красный - синий - ... "
19:34 teaMblack19: Можно убрать эти ноты 04:33:310 (399,409) - или ещё что-то придумать
19:43 teaMblack19: Ещё начиная отсюда 04:57:466 (573) - ты мапаешь стримами, а начиная отсюда 05:00:388 (593) - какими-то странным ритмом. Думаю, надо выбрать что-то одно.
19:46 teaMblack19: По третьему припеву всё тоже самое, что и по первому. Просто можно больше вариативности.
19:48 teaMblack19: 05:48:894 (71) - тут можно убрать финишер.
19:48 teaMblack19: Конец.
19:49 ASPIRIN: ПАРУ СЛОВ ПРО СБ
19:51 teaMblack19: СБ АГОНЬ! Я так не умею ;)
19:51 teaMblack19: Мне очень нравится )

Удачи в продвижении карты! :)
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sorry for late! im only available on Friday T_T
im only suggesting things here, so you don't have to accept all of it

[Festival]
  1. I'm not hating the difficulty name, but somehow it's really long and thus it's no longer a diff name but summary of the song lol just saying
  2. Do you have a grudge against 1.40? lol 154 with 1.60 is too fast imo probably lower them? Not to mention that this is a marathon, keeping up with that fast pace is kinda hard, also with some of the streams, it's already hard enough.
  3. Also, HP is too high with those streams and the length. Try 5, and also OD to 5.
  4. 00:04:994 (15,16) - can be changed to k, to suits the vocal and the bell
  5. 00:08:603 (33) - ^
  6. 00:11:760 (49,50,51,52) - ddkk for same reason as above. just to make a variation too, so it wont be a boring dd dk dd dk etc
  7. 00:24:542 (104,105,107) - i feel comfortable with them as K when i play it, because the sound of something click there makes it feel lighter than the heavy D. I feel all the click there (on the triplets also) can be changed to k because it's really really weird to have a heavy tone on the music here :( don't be afraid with the repetitions, because the song is similar there so i hope you change this orz
  8. 00:40:783 (147) - change to K? 00:41:234 (148,149,150,151) - weird pattern. my suggestion is delete them, then make dddk d k on 00:40:933 and delete the SV change. it overlaps and looks ugly u,u
  9. No comment on the stream because i dont know :D
  10. 02:05:258 (508,509,510,511,512) - flows better as kkddk
  11. 02:19:089 (602) - delete, maybe? for breaks. 2/1 all over is kinda boring
  12. 02:20:648 (610,611,612,613,614,615,616,617,618) - dkkdkdkkd flows better with the music :> and 02:21:816 (619,620,621,622) - change to k k d d for following the vocal. and 02:23:180 (623) - can be deleted for also following the vocal. just a suggestion but it flows better like this~
  13. 02:24:544 (629,630) - k for instrumentals
  14. 02:26:881 (638,639,640,641,642,643,644,645,646) - kkkkddddk? it also flows better with the drum
  15. 02:28:829 (653,654,655,656,657) - kddkk for following the strings too
  16. 02:29:609 (659,660,661,662,663) - dkdkk for the same reason as above
  17. 02:30:972 (668) - also can be deleted for break and the echo of the strings from the note before
  18. 02:42:466 (734,735,736,737,738) - 02:44:803 (745,746,747,748,749) - just k d k 3/2 is enough here, no need for stream
  19. 02:45:680 (751,752) - just 1/1 k here is enough

Yeah i dont know if i have to list all of them but there are many unnecessary notes on calm parts, i hope you remove some, especially the stream parts. Need a lot improvements also, on the hitsounds. I have my reasons why i don't mod till the end, because if i have to say, i will say many things, that may completely replace your mapping style u_u

And btw, nice SB, though i doubt taiko players pay enough attention to the SB.

Gluck!
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Senritsu wrote:

sorry for late! im only available on Friday T_T
im only suggesting things here, so you don't have to accept all of it

[Festival]
  1. I'm not hating the difficulty name, but somehow it's really long and thus it's no longer a diff name but summary of the song lol just saying This diff name has MEANING! Im really don't want to change it, but if this will be reason why i can't rank this map, i'll change it...
  2. Do you have a grudge against 1.40? lol 154 with 1.60 is too fast imo probably lower them? Not to mention that this is a marathon, keeping up with that fast pace is kinda hard, also with some of the streams, it's already hard enough. True, edited
  3. Also, HP is too high with those streams and the length. Try 5, and also OD to 5. Ok
  4. 00:04:994 (15,16) - can be changed to k, to suits the vocal and the bell Good tip
  5. 00:08:603 (33) - ^ +
  6. 00:11:760 (49,50,51,52) - ddkk for same reason as above. just to make a variation too, so it wont be a boring dd dk dd dk etc You know more than me
  7. 00:24:542 (104,105,107) - i feel comfortable with them as K when i play it, because the sound of something click there makes it feel lighter than the heavy D. I feel all the click there (on the triplets also) can be changed to k because it's really really weird to have a heavy tone on the music here :( don't be afraid with the repetitions, because the song is similar there so i hope you change this orz Yeah, edited
  8. 00:40:783 (147) - change to K? 00:41:234 (148,149,150,151) - weird pattern. my suggestion is delete them, then make dddk d k on 00:40:933 and delete the SV change. it overlaps and looks ugly u,u I again listened to the rhythm in this moment, you are right
  9. No comment on the stream because i dont know :D Dragon-touhou-force :D
  10. 02:05:258 (508,509,510,511,512) - flows better as kkddk Ok
  11. 02:19:089 (602) - delete, maybe? for breaks. 2/1 all over is kinda boring I dont unrestand, you mean delete all noted in this momen to make Break Time or what?
  12. 02:20:648 (610,611,612,613,614,615,616,617,618) - dkkdkdkkd flows better with the music :> and 02:21:816 (619,620,621,622) - change to k k d d for following the vocal. and 02:23:180 (623) - can be deleted for also following the vocal. just a suggestion but it flows better like this~ Ok
  13. 02:24:544 (629,630) - k for instrumentals *Made a note sticker on the wall*
  14. 02:26:881 (638,639,640,641,642,643,644,645,646) - kkkkddddk? it also flows better with the drum Ok
  15. 02:28:829 (653,654,655,656,657) - kddkk for following the strings too ok
  16. 02:29:609 (659,660,661,662,663) - dkdkk for the same reason as above Ok
  17. 02:30:972 (668) - also can be deleted for break and the echo of the strings from the note before Maybe my map a bit boring in some moments, but i'm basically don't want make a break time in my map
  18. 02:42:466 (734,735,736,737,738) - 02:44:803 (745,746,747,748,749) - just k d k 3/2 is enough here, no need for stream i'll work on it
  19. 02:45:680 (751,752) - just 1/1 k here is enough ok

Yeah i dont know if i have to list all of them but there are many unnecessary notes on calm parts, i hope you remove some, especially the stream parts. Need a lot improvements also, on the hitsounds. I have my reasons why i don't mod till the end, because if i have to say, i will say many things, that may completely replace your mapping style u_u Interesting thing - In this time, while i was waiting your mod i was started playing taiko (Before that I just passed 1* maps 2 years ago) and my perception of taiko mapping changed radically, I can not look at my map without tears, i needs to be completely redone! Thanks for your advices (muzukashii dif is wip too)


And btw, nice SB, though i doubt taiko players pay enough attention to the SB. SB as how much i love this song :D

Gluck! Thanks!
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Hi, ASPIRIN~
Sorry for late, too ;;w;;

If my modding are affects to your mapping style, feel free to reject them! :3

[ Unrankable caution]

Ranking Criteria wrote:

Try to leave at least a 1/2 beat between a note and a spinner.
Nothing much, let's have a look of spinner on 05:50:258
A gap between note and spinner is not enough. Here I have 2 ways to suggest you.
  1. Delete 05:50:161 , to make a gap become larger. If follow this suggestion, please ignore 00:41:685 suggestion for the map's consistency.
  2. Add d on 05:50:258 , and moved a a start of spinner to 05:50:453


[ Difficulty name problem proof]

Ranking Criteria wrote:

A difficulty's name must indicate its level of difficulty, with the exception of the hardest level of difficulty in a set. The mapset's hardest difficulty may use an appropriate custom difficulty name, unrelated to a username. Mapsets may also use a complete set of custom difficulty names that clearly indicate their level of difficulty to the player. Marathon maps with a single difficulty may use free naming.
So about difficulty name , no problem , keep going on! :D

[ General]
To be honest, HP7 is seems too merciless somehow , considered by this map length is exceed 5 minutes.
Maybe decrease HP a little might be good! :3

[ Overall]
  1. Still shocked after see the stream patterns. Let me help you to delete some note. It's too long somehow ;;w;;
    **Please note that here is only my opinion**
    00:53:667 / 00:55:031 / 00:55:810 / 00:56:394 / 00:56:784 / 04:50:161 / 04:50:940 / 04:51:524 / 04:52:303
    And here is the part that it's calm, but have too many note, consider to delete it. Let the silence emphasize the music :3
    04:33:310 / 04:33:505

  2. Some parts are seems too boring to play because it's k d k d k d k d pattern. Maybe add a note for some variation.
    **Please note that here is only my opinion**
    01:34:381 / 01:34:576 / 02:18:992 / 03:41:979 / 04:24:057 / 04:29:511



[ Festival is far from over]
00:10:407 - Change to k , similar pitch to 00:10:106
00:12:212 (51,52) - Since the vocal here is high, how about k to emphasize these vocal?
00:41:535 moves to 00:41:685 - I think that to follow the vocal here might be better. I really don't understand the note on 00:41:535 that which pitch it's follow. At least in my opinion, there shouldn't have a note on 00:41:535
00:41:685 moves to 00:41:881 - In taiko , we can place a spinner after the pitch too if we have a note which it's follow that pitch.
00:56:102 (45,46) - Change to d , in order to emphasize the pitch like 00:56:297
00:56:881 - Change to d , the pitch here seems not high enough compare to 00:57:076 / 00:57:174
00:59:706 moves to 00:59:316 - Seems fitter and have more power to emphasize the finisher on 00:59:803
01:02:336 - Remove finisher here, even this pitch is dominate, but it isn't strong enough in my opinion.
01:05:063 - Here are only my opinion
01:06:427 - Don't have any pitch here , should delete. ;;w;;
01:07:401 / 01:08:180 / 01:08:959 - Change to d , let's have a look on 01:10:128 , it's similar pitch. Sure, I didn't talk about vocal. Change for the consistency of the pitch might be better in my opinion. uwu
01:12:758 - Delete , for the ease to emphasize 01:12:855
01:12:855 - Sure, same pitch as 01:10:128. (I guess it's drum pitch) Change to d for the consistency of the map :3
01:29:024 - Change to d
01:29:219 - Change to k , seems fitter in my opinion.
02:21:427 - Change to d , similar pitch to 02:21:816
02:23:570 - Change to k , the vocal here seems higher than 02:23:764
02:42:758 - Change to k , a special pitch appears here.
03:43:342 - Delete , for the consistency as you've decide to use 5-notes pattern so far. (Usually, 6-notes pattern are not common to use.)
03:43:537 moves to 03:43:440 - For the note's position consistency on 03:44:219
03:44:219 - Sure, change to d for the color consistency on 03:43:537
04:53:375 - High pitch, might change to k
05:23:764 - Change to d , same reason as 02:21:427

[ Storyboard]
My definition : I'll represent the circle like 01:44:803 as circle
Some strong pitch are not have circles , which I think that it'll be good to emphasize that pitch
Like 02:21:427 / 02:21:806 / 02:22:206 / 02:22:596 / 02:22:985 / 02:23:375 / 02:23:764 / 02:24:154 / 02:24:544 / 02:24:933 / 02:25:323 / 02:25:712 / 02:26:102 / 02:26:492 // 05:23:764 part

Wait, I'm not SB modder, lmao
It's been a long time that I haven't see a SB on taiko! Nice!!
So, take my star (/・ω・)/
Good luck for ranking~ :D
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yo

[Long diff name]
00:17:625 - change kat
00:22:888 - add note, the break feels akward, similiar pattern with 00:19:129 -
00:26:497 - ^
00:30:106 - ^
00:33:715 - ^
00:37:324 - ^
00:47:336 - ddk change kkk, sounds will more clear
00:59:706 - delete, there has finisher with SV forward that make a bit hard
01:16:167 (152,153) - invert, make drum sound consistent 01:15:193 -
01:16:557 (154,155) - change kat, high picth piano
02:08:959 - change D, consistency 02:02:725 -
02:32:920 - change kat, give a variety
03:42:076 - change kat
04:34:868 - make kkk ?? following 04:33:310 - have triplet here
04:59:414 - change don ?

maybe just that from me
good luck
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[R] wrote:

yo

[Long diff name]
00:17:625 - change kat Ok
00:22:888 - add note, the break feels akward, similiar pattern with 00:19:129 - Ok
00:26:497 - ^Ok
00:30:106 - ^Ok
00:33:715 - ^Ok
00:37:324 - ^Ok
00:47:336 - ddk change kkk, sounds will more clear Last note is K, this is rankable if it kkK
00:59:706 - delete, there has finisher with SV forward that make a bit hard Edited everywhere
01:16:167 (152,153) - invert, make drum sound consistent 01:15:193 - Ok
01:16:557 (154,155) - change kat, high picth piano Ok
02:08:959 - change D, consistency 02:02:725 - Ok
02:32:920 - change kat, give a variety Ok
03:42:076 - change kat Ok
04:34:868 - make kkk ?? following 04:33:310 - have triplet here Ok
04:59:414 - change don ? Ok

maybe just that from me
good luck Thank you very much!
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Still wait for your replies. uwu
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Tyistiana wrote:

Still wait for your replies. uwu
oops, i forgot about it, give me hour
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Tyistiana wrote:

Hi, ASPIRIN~
Sorry for late, too ;;w;;
I too was late, I'm sorry. I've been very busy since the beginning of September and I just forgot to answer you ... Better late than never!

If my modding are affects to your mapping style, feel free to reject them! :3

[ Unrankable caution]

Ranking Criteria wrote:

Try to leave at least a 1/2 beat between a note and a spinner.
Nothing much, let's have a look of spinner on 05:50:258
A gap between note and spinner is not enough. Here I have 2 ways to suggest you.
  1. Delete 05:50:161 , to make a gap become larger. If follow this suggestion, please ignore 00:41:685 suggestion for the map's consistency.Edited!
  2. Add d on 05:50:258 , and moved a a start of spinner to 05:50:453 Edited!


[ Difficulty name problem proof]

Ranking Criteria wrote:

A difficulty's name must indicate its level of difficulty, with the exception of the hardest level of difficulty in a set. The mapset's hardest difficulty may use an appropriate custom difficulty name, unrelated to a username. Mapsets may also use a complete set of custom difficulty names that clearly indicate their level of difficulty to the player. Marathon maps with a single difficulty may use free naming.
So about difficulty name , no problem , keep going on! :DYea! Cool! I really like this diff name!

[ General]
To be honest, HP7 is seems too merciless somehow , considered by this map length is exceed 5 minutes.
Maybe decrease HP a little might be good! :3 Edited!

[ Overall]
  1. Still shocked after see the stream patterns. Let me help you to delete some note. It's too long somehow ;;w;;
    **Please note that here is only my opinion**
    00:53:667 / 00:55:031 / 00:55:810 / 00:56:394 / 00:56:784 / 04:50:161 / 04:50:940 / 04:51:524 / 04:52:303
    And here is the part that it's calm, but have too many note, consider to delete it. Let the silence emphasize the music :3
    04:33:310 / 04:33:505

  2. Some parts are seems too boring to play because it's k d k d k d k d pattern. Maybe add a note for some variation. Edited everywhere
    **Please note that here is only my opinion**
    01:34:381 / 01:34:576 / 02:18:992 / 03:41:979 / 04:24:057 / 04:29:511 Edited everywhere too



[ Festival is far from over]
00:10:407 - Change to k , similar pitch to 00:10:106 Edited everywhere!
00:12:212 (51,52) - Since the vocal here is high, how about k to emphasize these vocal? Edited!
00:41:535 moves to 00:41:685 - I think that to follow the vocal here might be better. I really don't understand the note on 00:41:535 that which pitch it's follow. At least in my opinion, there shouldn't have a note on 00:41:535 Edited!
00:41:685 moves to 00:41:881 - In taiko , we can place a spinner after the pitch too if we have a note which it's follow that pitch. Edited!
00:56:102 (45,46) - Change to d , in order to emphasize the pitch like 00:56:297 Edited!
00:56:881 - Change to d , the pitch here seems not high enough compare to 00:57:076 / 00:57:174 Edited!
00:59:706 moves to 00:59:316 - Seems fitter and have more power to emphasize the finisher on 00:59:803
01:02:336 - Remove finisher here, even this pitch is dominate, but it isn't strong enough in my opinion. Finisher here was accidentally
01:05:063 - Here are only my opinion Looks really cool! Added!
01:06:427 - Don't have any pitch here , should delete. ;;w;; Edited!
01:07:401 / 01:08:180 / 01:08:959 - Change to d , let's have a look on 01:10:128 , it's similar pitch. Sure, I didn't talk about vocal. Change for the consistency of the pitch might be better in my opinion. uwu Edited!
01:12:758 - Delete , for the ease to emphasize 01:12:855 Here is important sounds, i think i don't need to delete it
01:12:855 - Sure, same pitch as 01:10:128. (I guess it's drum pitch) Change to d for the consistency of the map :3Edited!
01:29:024 - Change to d Edited!
01:29:219 - Change to k , seems fitter in my opinion. Edited!
02:21:427 - Change to d , similar pitch to 02:21:816 Edited!
02:23:570 - Change to k , the vocal here seems higher than 02:23:764 Edited!
02:42:758 - Change to k , a special pitch appears here. this part I completely remade, now there is no note on this place
03:43:342 - Delete , for the consistency as you've decide to use 5-notes pattern so far. (Usually, 6-notes pattern are not common to use.) Edited!
03:43:537 moves to 03:43:440 - For the note's position consistency on 03:44:219 Edited!
03:44:219 - Sure, change to d for the color consistency on 03:43:537 Edited!
04:53:375 - High pitch, might change to k Edited!
05:23:764 - Change to d , same reason as 02:21:427 Edited!

[ Storyboard]
My definition : I'll represent the circle like 01:44:803 as circle
Some strong pitch are not have circles , which I think that it'll be good to emphasize that pitch
Like 02:21:427 / 02:21:806 / 02:22:206 / 02:22:596 / 02:22:985 / 02:23:375 / 02:23:764 / 02:24:154 / 02:24:544 / 02:24:933 / 02:25:323 / 02:25:712 / 02:26:102 / 02:26:492 // 05:23:764 part this circles need to emphasize finishers, but at this moments i'll a other effects, but when i think up of something interesting

Wait, I'm not SB modder, lmao
It's been a long time that I haven't see a SB on taiko! Nice!!
So, take my star (/・ω・)/ Aww, thank you very much!
Good luck for ranking~ :DAfter your mod, i thoroughly revised my view on mapping and fully remade 02:46:362 - 02:52:596 and 04:57:466 - 05:05:063 parts and remade every pattern, now this looks better! Thanks!
posted
i want to go to the festival

festival is not here
00:08:753 - make it kk, bcuz mostly u use that doublet for vocal
00:09:655 - to dk, same reason^
00:09:956 - kk ^
00:19:580 (90,91,92,93) - to kdkk ? it fit with drum flow, dkdk isnt good enough
00:41:234 - why not add k there ? i can hear sound there, also if you add k, add don 00:41:385 - for the flow
01:12:271 - how about ? k for snare don for tom/bass
01:18:505 - same as above^
01:25:031 (221,222,223,224) - its kkkd tho, :3 bcuz its have differ pitch
01:38:180 (305,306,307,308,309) - same like above, try kkkkd
01:40:128 - this one is don, and del this 01:40:225 -

overall your map is good but isnt good enough, why i can said that, bcuz some part need more consistency, sometime you use d for snare and use k for bass drum, some of your stream need to be fixed ? oh not fixed hmmm need more impruvment, but its already good tho like 01:48:505 - i like that part

sorry i do a shortmod, bcuz i cant pass this map xD that stream is demn
posted

PoPoii wrote:

i want to go to the festival

General


This is not successful SB remake, maybe a bit later i'll use it
festival is not here
00:08:753 - make it kk, bcuz mostly u use that doublet for vocal oks before it a bit too
00:09:655 - to dk, same reason^ Ok!
[/color]00:09:956 - kk ^ Edited!
00:19:580 (90,91,92,93) - to kdkk ? it fit with drum flow, dkdk isnt good enough Ok
00:41:234 - why not add k there ? i can hear sound there, also if you add k, add don 00:41:385 - for the flow Oops, i forget note here :o
01:12:271 - how about ? k for snare don for tom/bass Looks better!
01:18:505 - same as above^ Edited!
01:25:031 (221,222,223,224) - its kkkd tho, :3 bcuz its have differ pitch Edited!
01:38:180 (305,306,307,308,309) - same like above, try kkkkd Looks cooll!
01:40:128 - this one is don, and del this 01:40:225 - Oops, my mistake, edited!

overall your map is good but isnt good enough, why i can said that, bcuz some part need more consistency, sometime you use d for snare and use k for bass drum, some of your stream need to be fixed ? oh not fixed hmmm need more impruvment, but its already good tho like 01:48:505 - i like that part Good reason to remap it again, haha :D

sorry i do a shortmod, bcuz i cant pass this map xD that stream is demn

Thanks for mod!
posted
Hello ASPIRIN, from my queue:
Thank you for M4M

[General]
OD/HP : 6/5

[Festival is far from over]
00:04:994: kk for high pitch

00:55:907: k to fit the pitch

00:58:635: dkd, you may use 50% speed to listen for the music pitch

01:23:277: Delete to emphasize at 01:23:375

01:33:894 to 01:35:842: Don't you see this part is boring

01:47:920 and 01:51:037: Change to k for consistency in 01:54:154 - 01:52:596

01:55:907: Change to d to emphasize the next k

05:24:154: How about kkd?

Good luck
posted

davidminh0111 wrote:

Hello ASPIRIN, from my queue:
Thank you for M4M

[General]
OD/HP : 6/5 ok!

[Festival is far from over]
00:04:994: kk for high pitch No, dk better here i think, it emphasize pitch before it

00:55:907: k to fit the pitch ok!

00:58:635: dkd, you may use 50% speed to listen for the music pitch ok!

01:23:277: Delete to emphasize at 01:23:375 Good tip

01:33:894 to 01:35:842: Don't you see this part is boring ok, this part is remaped

01:47:920 and 01:51:037: Change to k for consistency in 01:54:154 - 01:52:596 hmm, somebody once told me "note between finisher with same color - unranked", so, i'll not edit momentz like this

01:55:907: Change to d to emphasize the next k ok!

05:24:154: How about kkd? Maybe you mean 05:25:518 (878,879,880) ? So, kkd here sounds better!

Good luck
Thank you very much!
posted
Hi, here for NM from my modding queue.
[Festival is far from over]
from here 01:37:790 - to 01:42:661 - there is quite a mess, 01:38:180 (308,309,310,311,312) - this sound is mapped differently from 01:38:959 (314,315,316,317,318) - and you placed some notes that to me are not so much "player friendly" like 01:38:862 - 01:40:420 - 01:41:979 -
In order to make hem more playable I would suggest you to move all of them of a 1/4 before but here is actually a sound so idk, check somehow
04:43:245 (588,589,590,591,592,593,594,595,596,597) - Here I hear something like dkddk twice
04:44:511 - this note is definitively a higher pitch than this one 04:44:414 - so I would place a k
04:51:232 - I hear this stream a bit different, ignore me if you don't agree:
04:51:719 - d , 04:52:109 (662,663) - control+g , 04:52:206 (663,664,665,666,667) - all the opposite, so dddkd
04:53:472 - maybe here is a d sound, not sure
same thing here 05:44:511 -
Nice consistency
Hope it was helpful! Good luck for ranking!
posted

Kith190 wrote:

Hi, here for NM from my modding queue.
[Festival is far from over]
from here 01:37:790 - to 01:42:661 - there is quite a mess, 01:38:180 (308,309,310,311,312) - this sound is mapped differently from 01:38:959 (314,315,316,317,318) - and you placed some notes that to me are not so much "player friendly" like 01:38:862 - 01:40:420 - 01:41:979 - i'll rework this moments, cuz it need reword
In order to make hem more playable I would suggest you to move all of them of a 1/4 before but here is actually a sound so idk, check somehow
04:43:245 (588,589,590,591,592,593,594,595,596,597) - Here I hear something like dkddk twice Ok
04:44:511 - this note is definitively a higher pitch than this one 04:44:414 - so I would place a k Ok, i made it like dkdkk
04:51:232 - I hear this stream a bit different, ignore me if you don't agree:
04:51:719 - d , 04:52:109 (662,663) - control+g , 04:52:206 (663,664,665,666,667) - all the opposite, so dddkd Now it sounds better!
04:53:472 - maybe here is a d sound, not sure Ok
same thing here 05:44:511 -Ok, i did it in same places after it
Nice consistency
Hope it was helpful! Good luck for ranking! Thank you very much! <3
posted
Hi! ^w^

Request from Gemu's Taiko & Mania Queue (NM, M4M & GD)



d
k
D (Big d)
K (Big k)


  • HP: 6


  1. 00:05:144 (16) - Change to k, the voice have a hight tone, also sounds very good with this structure 00:01:986 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - for the low voices and notes 00:02:287 (2,3) - to increases here 00:04:091 (11,12,13,14,15,16) -
  2. 00:09:655 (39,40,41,42) - Change to d, and then change to k 00:11:911 (50,52) - to keep consistency with 00:01:986 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) -
  3. 00:53:570 (24) - Change to d flow much better the stream 00:53:472 (23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30) -
  4. 00:57:953 (57,60) - Make Ctrl G flows much better the pitch.
  5. 01:22:693 (203) - Change to k sounds much better.
  6. 01:49:868 (398) - You forgot change to k to keep the sequence you have with the kats 01:48:699 (386,387,390,391,394,395) -
  7. 02:14:316 (563) - Change to k to variate bevause you have some kdd so a variation is much better for much fun.
  8. 02:18:310 (589,590,591,592,593,594,595,596,597,598,599,600) - This is a bit repetitive, add notes how you make here 02:15:388 (572,573,574,575,576,577,578,579,580,581,582,583,584,585,586,587) - I suggest you add a d 02:18:797 - and add a k 02:19:381 -
  9. 03:00:388 (863,864,865) - , 03:01:167 (868,869,870) - , 03:01:946 (873,874,875) - This is a bit repetitive do not you think? I recommend move 03:02:044 (874) - to 03:01:849 -
  10. 03:03:602 (886) - Change to k to variate a bit.
  11. 03:31:751 (110,111,112,113,114,115) - This would sound much better if you move this note 03:31:849 (111) - here 03:32:044 -
  12. 03:37:985 (153,154,155,156,157,158) - This part too for a similar consitency with the previous suggestion, move 03:37:693 (151) - to 03:37:888 -
  13. 03:40:712 (172,173,174,175,176,177,178) - Change to ddkkdddd sounds much better with the instrumental.
  14. 04:22:985 (457,458,459,460,461,462,463,464,465,466,467,468) - You remember this part, right? is this same part 02:18:310 (589,590,591,592,593,594,595,596,597,598,599,600) - so to keep consistency in both parts please add a d 04:23:472 - and add a k 04:24:057 -
  15. 04:26:979 - , 04:27:174 - Add a k for variation and make much fun the map, because this is a bit repetitive 04:26:102 (477,478,479,480,481,482,483,484,485) -
  16. 04:28:921 - Add a d and add a k here 04:29:122 - for a similar reason and density with the previous suggestion.
  17. 04:42:758 - You forgot add a note, similar to 04:40:323 (566,567,568) - so please add a d and change to k to flow much better 04:42:709 (585) -
  18. 04:50:014 (642,643) - Same ^ (Just move 04:50:014 (642,643) - to 04:49:966 - and add a d 04:50:112 - )
  19. 05:20:648 (859,860,861,862,863,864,865,866,867,868,869,870) - You know what to do here right?
  20. 05:42:368 - Add a k and add a d 05:42:953 - sounds very nice and to increase the density a bit.



Amazing map! I hope my mod has been helpful :33, Good Luck!
posted
Hi~ :3 NM from here

SPOILER
d = small don
k = small kat
D =big don
K = big kat
^ = again
Festival is far from over
  • change 00:41:535 (153) - to k
    delete 00:41:687 (154) -
    move 00:41:881 (1) - to 00:41:687 and end it in 00:44:803
    change 00:53:375 (22) - to d
    change 00:54:057 (29) - to k
    change 00:54:154 (30) - to D
    change 00:54:349 (31,32) - to k
    01:01:167 (80,81,82,83,84,85,86) - here you can change 01:01:557 (84,85) - to d and 01:01:751 (86) - to k or just change 01:01:751 (86) - to k
    00:53:570 (24,25) - ctrl + g
    change 01:02:725 (93) - to d
    change 01:02:920 (94) - to k, 01:03:018 (95,96) - to d and 01:03:407 (99) - to d
    change 01:03:797 (102) - to k
    01:04:089 (104,106) - ctrl + g
    01:04:381 (107,108) - ^
    change 01:04:674 (110) - to d
    01:04:771 (111) - ^
    change 01:05:453 (118) - to k
    change 01:05:842 (122) - to d
    make 01:18:505 (168,169,170,171,172,173,174) - a kkdkkkd
    01:20:355 (184,187) - ctrl + g
    01:22:693 (203,206) - ^
    change 01:22:888 (205) - to k
    change 01:23:764 (212) - to d
    01:25:323 (226) - ^
    change 01:44:609 (359) - to d
    change 01:44:803 (360) - to K
    01:44:998 (361,364) - ctrl + g
    change 01:46:167 (369) - to d
    change 01:46:362 (370) - to K
    01:46:557 (371,372) - ctrl + g
    change 01:46:946 (374) - to k
    01:47:531 (378,379) - ctrl + g
    02:52:596 (808,809,810,811) - ^
    02:53:375 (813,814) - ^
    02:53:667 add d
    02:53:764 (816,818) - ctrl + g
    move 02:54:251 (820) - to 02:54:446
    02:54:544 (822,823) - ctrl + g
    move 02:54:836 (824) - to 02:55:420
    02:55:323 (829,830) - ctrl + g
    02:55:712 (831,832,833,834) - ^
    02:56:492 (836,837,839,840) - ^
    02:57:271 (841,843) - ^
    change 02:57:855 (846) - to k
    change 02:58:440 (849) - to D
    make 02:59:024 (852,853,854) - a kkd
    02:59:414 (855,857,859,861) - ctrl + g
    02:59:414 (855,857,859,861,863,864) - ^
    03:00:583 (866,867,868,869,871,872,873,874) - ^
    change 03:02:141 (876) - to k
    03:02:920 (882,884) - ctrl + g
    03:02:920 (882,884,885,886) - ^
    03:03:699 (888,889) - ^
    change 03:04:089 (890) - to k
    move 04:50:014 (642) - to 04:49:998 (1/6)
    change 05:04:089 (745) - to K
    delete 05:53:375 (1) -
    move 05:53:764 (1) - to 05:53:375 and make it end on 05:57:271


All of this are just suggestions, what you accept or reject is up to you. Good luck with ranking :D
posted

game rock wrote:

Hi! ^w^

Request from Gemu's Taiko & Mania Queue (NM, M4M & GD)



d
k
D (Big d)
K (Big k)


  • HP: 6


  1. 00:05:144 (16) - Change to k, the voice have a hight tone, also sounds very good with this structure 00:01:986 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - for the low voices and notes 00:02:287 (2,3) - to increases here 00:04:091 (11,12,13,14,15,16) - Ok
  2. 00:09:655 (39,40,41,42) - Change to d, and then change to k 00:11:911 (50,52) - to keep consistency with 00:01:986 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) -
  3. 00:53:570 (24) - Change to d flow much better the stream 00:53:472 (23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30) - Ok, but i think 00:10:106 (41) - is need to be k, cuz here other sound
  4. 00:57:953 (57,60) - Make Ctrl G flows much better the pitch. Ok
  5. 01:22:693 (203) - Change to k sounds much better. Ok
  6. 01:49:868 (398) - You forgot change to k to keep the sequence you have with the kats 01:48:699 (386,387,390,391,394,395) -Ok
  7. 02:14:316 (563) - Change to k to variate bevause you have some kdd so a variation is much better for much fun. Ok
  8. 02:18:310 (589,590,591,592,593,594,595,596,597,598,599,600) - This is a bit repetitive, add notes how you make here 02:15:388 (572,573,574,575,576,577,578,579,580,581,582,583,584,585,586,587) - I suggest you add a d 02:18:797 - and add a k 02:19:381 - Added
  9. 03:00:388 (863,864,865) - , 03:01:167 (868,869,870) - , 03:01:946 (873,874,875) - This is a bit repetitive do not you think? I recommend move 03:02:044 (874) - to 03:01:849 - Edited
  10. 03:03:602 (886) - Change to k to variate a bit. Ok
  11. 03:31:751 (110,111,112,113,114,115) - This would sound much better if you move this note 03:31:849 (111) - here 03:32:044 - Ok
  12. 03:37:985 (153,154,155,156,157,158) - This part too for a similar consitency with the previous suggestion, move 03:37:693 (151) - to 03:37:888 -Ok
  13. 03:40:712 (172,173,174,175,176,177,178) - Change to ddkkdddd sounds much better with the instrumental. Ok
  14. 04:22:985 (457,458,459,460,461,462,463,464,465,466,467,468) - You remember this part, right? is this same part 02:18:310 (589,590,591,592,593,594,595,596,597,598,599,600) - so to keep consistency in both parts please add a d 04:23:472 - and add a k 04:24:057 - Ok
  15. 04:26:979 - , 04:27:174 - Add a k for variation and make much fun the map, because this is a bit repetitive 04:26:102 (477,478,479,480,481,482,483,484,485) - Ok
  16. 04:28:921 - Add a d and add a k here 04:29:122 - for a similar reason and density with the previous suggestion. Ok
  17. 04:42:758 - You forgot add a note, similar to 04:40:323 (566,567,568) - so please add a d and change to k to flow much better 04:42:709 (585) - Ok. But I thought that in this moment 2 1/8 notes!
  18. 04:50:014 (642,643) - Same ^ (Just move 04:50:014 (642,643) - to 04:49:966 - and add a d 04:50:112 - )Ok
  19. 05:20:648 (859,860,861,862,863,864,865,866,867,868,869,870) - You know what to do here right? Ok
  20. 05:42:368 - Add a k and add a d 05:42:953 - sounds very nice and to increase the density a bit.Ok



Amazing map! I hope my mod has been helpful :33, Good Luck!
Amazing mod! :D Thank you very much for help!
posted

Thousand wrote:

Hi~ :3 NM from here

SPOILER
d = small don
k = small kat
D =big don
K = big kat
^ = again
Festival is far from over
  • change 00:41:535 (153) - to k Ok
    delete 00:41:687 (154) - Ok
    move 00:41:881 (1) - to 00:41:687 and end it in 00:44:803 Ok
    change 00:53:375 (22) - to d No, cuz here is stream flow
    change 00:54:057 (29) - to k ^
    change 00:54:154 (30) - to D ^
    change 00:54:349 (31,32) - to k Ok
    01:01:167 (80,81,82,83,84,85,86) - here you can change 01:01:557 (84,85) - to d and 01:01:751 (86) - to k or just change 01:01:751 (86) - to k Ok
    00:53:570 (24,25) - ctrl + g previous mod - here is kk
    change 01:02:725 (93) - to d Ok
    change 01:02:920 (94) - to k, 01:03:018 (95,96) - to d and 01:03:407 (99) - to d Ok
    change 01:03:797 (102) - to k Ok
    01:04:089 (104,106) - ctrl + g Ok
    01:04:381 (107,108) - ^ Ok
    change 01:04:674 (110) - to d Ok
    01:04:771 (111) - ^ Ok
    change 01:05:453 (118) - to k Ok
    change 01:05:842 (122) - to d Ok. Now this stream sounds really cool!
    make 01:18:505 (168,169,170,171,172,173,174) - a kkdkkkd Ok
    01:20:355 (184,187) - ctrl + g Ok
    01:22:693 (203,206) - ^ - here is kk
    change 01:22:888 (205) - to k Ok
    change 01:23:764 (212) - to d Ok
    01:25:323 (226) - ^ Ok
    change 01:44:609 (359) - to d not really, here is d k d D#BFFF00]d[/color] k d D
    change 01:44:803 (360) - to K В becouse sound is clunk
    01:44:998 (361,364) - ctrl + g No. First triple is up for high pitch, second for pitch down
    change 01:46:167 (369) - to d not really, here is d k d D#BFFF00]d[/color] k d D
    change 01:46:362 (370) - to KВ becouse sound is clunk
    01:46:557 (371,372) - ctrl + g Ok, just for variate
    change 01:46:946 (374) - to k Ok
    01:47:531 (378,379) - ctrl + g Ok
    02:52:596 (808,809,810,811) - ^ Ok
    02:53:375 (813,814) - ^ Ok
    02:53:667 add d Ok
    02:53:764 (816,818) - ctrl + g Ok
    move 02:54:251 (820) - to 02:54:446 Ok
    02:54:544 (822,823) - ctrl + g Ok
    move 02:54:836 (824) - to 02:55:420 Ok
    02:55:323 (829,830) - ctrl + g Ok
    02:55:712 (831,832,833,834) - ^ Ok
    02:56:492 (836,837,839,840) - ^ Ok
    02:57:271 (841,843) - ^ Ok
    change 02:57:855 (846) - to k Ok
    change 02:58:440 (849) - to D unranked
    make 02:59:024 (852,853,854) - a kkd
    02:59:414 (855,857,859,861) - ctrl + g Ok
    02:59:414 (855,857,859,861,863,864) - ^ Ok
    03:00:583 (866,867,868,869,871,872,873,874) - ^ Ok
    change 03:02:141 (876) - to k Ok
    03:02:920 (882,884) - ctrl + g Ok
    03:02:920 (882,884,885,886) - ^ Ok
    03:03:699 (888,889) - ^ Ok
    change 03:04:089 (890) - to k Ok
    move 04:50:014 (642) - to 04:49:998 (1/6) Ok
    change 05:04:089 (745) - to K no, here is 2 clunk sounds
    delete 05:53:375 (1) - Ok
    move 05:53:764 (1) - to 05:53:375 and make it end on 05:57:271 Ok


All of this are just suggestions, what you accept or reject is up to you. Good luck with ranking :D
Thank you very much! <3
posted
WOW, Your SBs are AWESOME!
Take two stars, you deserve it :3
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