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Equilibrium - Stein Meiner Ahnen

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TheLeviathan
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Wednesday, January 17, 2018 at 6:21:01 PM

Artist: Equilibrium
Title: Stein Meiner Ahnen
BPM: 210
Filesize: 10527kb
Play Time: 05:37
Difficulties Available:
  1. Strafvollstreckung (6.3 stars, 1725 notes)
Download: Equilibrium - Stein Meiner Ahnen
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ok, ACTUALLY going to rank this
Flowziee
hihi m4m mod from my queue (my m4m map is below the queue rules)
First Look

IMO this map was very interesting with the sharp angled streams. The mapping was very straightforward (which I like) and reflects the song nicely. The jumps were mesmerizing as well :D
Mod
00:04:066 (3,4,5) - IMO (3) should be curved to (4) and (4) should curve back to (3). Place (5) a bit higher. Why I suggested this? It's because in there is so much potential for aesthetics within these three objects. This is just my thought; your mapping works well too.
00:29:494 (8) - Feel like this should be where (6) is at. IMO this looks cleaner, but you don't have to do this.
01:08:637 (1) - Should be connected at the end of the stream since it is also 1/3, meaning the space between the end of the stream and slider should be the same as the hitcircles in the stream.
02:45:494 (5) - Should be a slider the same length as (4) because the vocals drag the same way.
05:28:494 (4) - Should be going the other way around for better flow to the triple stack.
There were some errors I didn't think it would be worth mentioning because they were acceptable.
Some parts were a tiny bit undermapped but that's fine.
So far this map is almost flawless and I would like to see it get ranked :D
Elirac
M4M from your queue

00:09:208 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this stream and the others angled streams in the intro seems out of place because you use curved streams in the rest of the map and the music doesn't seems to justify it. this stream in particular 00:25:208 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - seems really out of place.

00:11:780 (3) - the stream change dirrection on the strong note instead of before the strong note like the rest of the map

00:20:637 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - in all other simillar stream befor, the stream doesn't change dirrection on this note 00:21:137 (8) - wich make it look different when there is no change in music

small esthetic sugestion,move 00:32:780 (4) - to 223,92 and 00:32:923 (5) - to 143,301

01:18:923 (8,3) - this overlap doesn't look good, either stack them or make a better looking overlap

01:30:351 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - this stream doesn't look good, maybe try a wider curve on the second part

01:52:066 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - this stream look messy, you should redo it

01:56:637 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - same

03:13:208 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - same

04:48:637 (1,2) - , 04:50:923 (1,2) - , 04:53:208 (1,2) - , 04:55:494 (1,2) - , 04:57:780 (1,2) - those note are the same musicaly, but but the first two are dtacked and the others spaced. I think it would be better if you were consistent.

Nice map, good luck for rank.
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