01:12:704 - these chordjacks are a little awkward to hit
try this for easier time hitting it while retaining your pitch idea:
01:14:340 - the outward chordjack transitioning is a bit tricky to nail in my opinion. Here is my suggestion.
Notice the small change in LN pattern. Also included pitch in the last three chords:
the second set of chordjacks is fine.
04:02:613 (242613|0,242749|1,242886|0,243022|1,243295|1,243431|1,243568|0,243704|1,243840|0,243977|1,244113|0,244249|1,244522|0) -
consider changing this, since it's outer-trill heavy and may cause a lot of trip-ups.
a possible solution:
04:05:204 (245204|5) - moving to 5? to break the column 6 anchor
04:07:113 (247113|6,247249|4) - ctrl+H for pleasing aesthetics?
04:20:068 (260068|4) - it possibly goes against your jacking layering (starting on white ticks) but moving this to 4 avoids triple jack on 5 while holding a 6 - makes it more playable.
Optionally, just switch the pattern so that the jack happens on the left hand.
04:25:386 (265386|6,265522|0) - ctrl+H for more even jack distribution?
04:50:068 - the outward jack you did is a little awkward and can be replaced with an inward jack, which is more natural to hit:
the note on 3 can go to 4 if you wish.