Magicphoenix wrote:

Nishino Kana !!! <3

General

*^* Cute background!

[Collab]
*00:13:837 (5) - New Combo
*00:24:182 (5) - Can you move it so 7,8,9,10 stacks on the next combo's 3 ?

SPOILER

*00:41:424 (7) - The reverse here is unrankable since you cant see it ! Maybe replace with a circle here?

SPOILER

Plays very good with the flow
*01:08:665 (1) - Remove New Combo
*01:09:527 (3) - Add NC here if you followed above
*(NAZI)01:11:596 (4) - Move 1 Lv4 grid up & right to stack with (5) from previous combo
*01:18:148 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Whoever tells you to change this pattern, tell me who it is. I will kill him personally
*01:32:803 (5) - New Combo
*02:10:561 (2) - Make this in 0.75x Slider Velocity and extend it to the red line
*02:27:027 (2,3,4,5) - Stack these doubles, because they come very unexpected, since the rest of the whole map doesn't use doubles and you can mistake it for this spacing : 00:30:906 (1,2,3)

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[Hard]

*00:45:389 (2) - Keep this anti-jump ! If modder point it out don't change !
*00:55:734 (2) - Move 1 Lv4 grid left
*01:09:527 (5) - New Combo
*01:15:044 (6) - ^
*02:29:441 (1) - Stack on (2)
*02:52:458 (6) - New Combo
*03:59:182 (5) - Move this note here ? :

SPOILER

*04:04:182 (6) - New Combo
*04:25:389 (3) - Silence sliderslide?

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[Normal]

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OK ! Good luck on rank ! Love everything !! Deserves many stars

General

1. Love <3

Normal

1. Slider Tick Rate -1 ?
   
2. 00:59:872 (4) - New Combo
3. 01:21:424 (6) - ^
4. 01:36:079 (1,2,3,4) - OMG , Too hard for Normal
5. 02:28:148 (4) - New Combo
6. 02:51:596 (7) - ^
7. 04:04:355 (1) - Love <3

Hard

1. 00:05:562 (2) - Stack this note ?
2. 00:08:320 (2) - This ^
3. 01:04:699 (x) - Add note ?
4. 01:34:182 (5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Love !!! <3
5. 03:35:734 (5) - New Combo
6. 04:28:148 (x) - Add Spinner ?

Collab

1. 00:24:699 (7) - New Combo
2. 01:34:355 (1) - <3
3. 02:28:751 (3,4) - Stack ?
4. 02:29:441 (1,2) - ^

net45291 wrote:

Nishino Kana ~! <3

General

1. Love <3

Normal

1. Slider Tick Rate -1 ?
   
2. 00:59:872 (4) - New Combo
3. 01:21:424 (6) - ^
4. 01:36:079 (1,2,3,4) - OMG , Too hard for Normal
5. 02:28:148 (4) - New Combo
6. 02:51:596 (7) - ^
7. 04:04:355 (1) - Love <3

Hard

1. 00:05:562 (2) - Stack this note ?
2. 00:08:320 (2) - This ^
3. 01:04:699 (x) - Add note ?
4. 01:34:182 (5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Love !!! <3
5. 03:35:734 (5) - New Combo
6. 04:28:148 (x) - Add Spinner ?

Collab

1. 00:24:699 (7) - New Combo
2. 01:34:355 (1) - <3
3. 02:28:751 (3,4) - Stack ?
4. 02:29:441 (1,2) - ^

Go Go Ranked ! , Double Stars !

y u c a wrote:

oh so many diff D:

Easy

why dont you use custom hitsound this diff?


Normal

00:48:493 (2) - remove whistle all of slider
01:01:251 (1) - add finish
01:12:286 (1) - ^
01:48:148 (1) - ^
01:59:182 (1) - ^
02:21:251 (1) - ^
02:24:010 (5) - new combo
02:32:286 (1) - add finish
02:37:803 (5) - new combo
02:40:562 (9) - ^
02:42:630 (1) - remove new combo
02:46:079 (5) - new combo
02:47:458 (1) - remove new combo
02:48:837 (3) - new combo
03:44:010 (1) - add finish




Hard

00:14:355 (1) - add finish
00:25:044 (3,4) - remove clap and add soft-whistle(not custom)
00:27:113 (4,5) - remove clap
00:39:182 (1) - add finish
01:12:286 (1) - ^
01:23:320 (5) - ^
01:48:148 (1) - ^
01:59:182 (1) - ^
02:21:251 (1) - ^
02:32:286 (1) - ^
03:44:010 (1) - ^

MPX

00:03:330 (4) - new combo
00:06:079 (3) - ^
00:08:837 (3) - ^
00:36:079 (1,2) - remove finish
00:47:113 (1) - ^
01:13:665 (3,4) - remove whistle all of slide so noisy Orz(other slider too)
so many 連続finish are noisy for me Orz





Collab

00:31:941 - try this?

SPOILER

00:39:182 (1) - add finish
00:50:217 (1) - ^
00:51:596 (4) - touch hp bar大丈夫?
01:01:251 (5) - add finish
01:23:320 (1) - ^
01:26:079 (1) - ^
01:28:837 (1) - ^
01:34:268 (1) - use SC1? because sliderside is noisy here imo
01:48:148 (1) - add finish
01:59:182 (1) - ^
02:10:217 (1) - add normal finish
02:10:562 (2~) - try this

SPOILER

02:20:562 (4) - add soft finish
02:21:251 (1) - add finish
02:43:320 (3) - ^
02:43:665 (4) - new combo
03:21:984 (T) - useless green line?
04:17:113 (1) - add finish

S h i a wrote:

hi~

偶遇看了眼hard.

以下都是些建议，如果觉得不好直接可无视掉

00:05:044 (1) - 让slider在00:05:339结束 or 00:05:562 (2) 这里结束 ？
00:07:803 (1) - ^
00:10:562 (1) - 让slider在00:10:906结束？
00:19:872 (1) - better like this?

00:31:424 (3) - add note?
00:32:286 (6) - better like this?

00:54:699 (7) - add slider? 同00:54:355 (6)一样长度
01:23:320 (5) - ne.. 这样怎么样？

02:25:389 (3) -

02:29:441 (1) - oh.. 或许该换种方法？


if you need further modding. just let me know

nice song <3

• 
  Hard

1. 00:29:355(3) 这个还是不要叠着，因为是在红线处，不太好找节奏
2. 01:05:389(6) 后面加一个折返，后面那个(1)可以往右移
3. 01:22:803(4) 歪了
4. 01:36:251(1) 距离近了，往左移
5. 01:57:630(?) 感觉这里太空了，加个note，803再加一个
6. 04:28:148(1) 前面长白线结束
   
   Net's Taiko
   
   SPOILER

   
   Sry, my acc is so poor, but maybe SV 1.4 can help me gain a S
   anyway, nice map
   
   Normal
7. 03:00:389(x) 把break time去掉（把后面的东西往前挪一下，再放回去就好了），后面两个break也去掉
   这么多开始隐藏的slider对于新人来说是不是太难了？
   

   Hitcircles must never be hidden under slidertracks. Whether a hitcircle is partially or completely under a slidertrack, it is confusing for the player to read. Insane difficulties are the only exception to this rule.

   不过，超喜欢最后的心

y u c a wrote:

Excuse me, you cant resnap some green line?
like this


if you changed offset,need resnap green line too

cmn_891127 wrote:

• 
  Hard

1. 00:29:355(3) 这个还是不要叠着，因为是在红线处，不太好找节奏
2. 01:05:389(6) 后面加一个折返，后面那个(1)可以往右移
3. 01:22:803(4) 歪了
4. 01:36:251(1) 距离近了，往左移
5. 01:57:630(?) 感觉这里太空了，加个note，803再加一个
6. 04:28:148(1) 前面长白线结束
   
   Net's Taiko
   
   SPOILER

   [attachment=0:2a678]screenshot002.jpg[/attachment:2a678]
   Sry, my acc is so poor, but maybe SV 1.4 can help me gain a S
   anyway, nice map
   
   Normal
7. 03:00:389(x) 把break time去掉（把后面的东西往前挪一下，再放回去就好了），后面两个break也去掉
   这么多开始隐藏的slider对于新人来说是不是太难了？
   

   Hitcircles must never be hidden under slidertracks. Whether a hitcircle is partially or completely under a slidertrack, it is confusing for the player to read. Insane difficulties are the only exception to this rule.

   不过，超喜欢最后的心

DarkRingSystem wrote:

:)
[collab]
01:19:699 (8) - 这个挡着有点多

SPOILER

半透明 压力山大 orz

01:34:355 (1) - alt+h? 这样 好接一些
04:02:113 (1) - change another color nc (换另一个颜色的nc )

[MPX]
00:01:768 (1) - Chenge another color nc
01:01:596 (2) - Could you see the reversearrow? anyway I think it is fine..
03:43:493 (4) - Hard to see it orz

lovely sliders XD

[hard]
01:17:803 (1) - 看得见回转吗? 而且回转2次 接 2(近了点) 不太顺 建议在01:18:493 加个note
01:36:251 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这样是不是好些

SPOILER

个人建议 AR-1 送hr
AR7现在对于很多玩家来说是个很尴尬的ar
HR之后ar高了不好打 ar7读起来又很麻烦
就这个难度的风格而言 打准了 节奏很不错 但是一旦打歪了 后面一串悲剧 所以我觉得 ar数值还是值得再考究一下

[Normal]
就只觉得 交错的slider似乎很不厚道 XD

[Easy]
02:47:458 (3) - nc


好曲子!
Good luck~
star!

1. 00:15:562 (5) - add new combo
2. 00:17:975 (4) - ^
3. 00:20:734 (4) - ^
4. 00:28:493 (2) - ^
5. 00:31:768 (4) - ^
6. 00:36:424 (1,2) - I think that I should not repeat it
7. 00:41:079 (6) - add new combo
8. 00:42:803 (4) - ^
9. 00:51:941 (6) - ^
10. 01:13:320 (4) - ^
11. 01:50:217 (3) - ^
12. 01:52:975 (3) - ^
13. 01:55:217 (1,2) - It is suggestion
    SPOILER

    
14. 01:59:872 (3) - add new combo
15. 02:00:217 (x) - add note
16. 02:00:389 (1) - remove new combo
17. 02:36:079 (3) - add new combo
18. 03:19:182 (1) - add finish
19. 03:44:010 (1) - ^
20. 03:46:768 (1) - add slider head finish
21. 03:55:044 (1) - remove finish
22. 04:15:389 (4) - add new combo

Netsukawa wrote:

Oh you move it to pending/WIP again , and please change the name in the tags to Netsukawa please =v="

Sekai-nyan wrote:

Bless here ヾ(ｏ･ω･)ﾉ☆

-Baby Strawberry- wrote:

超好听:D